I don't care about this backstory shit, I care that you can see an outline of Beatrix's butt.
Oh shit, he actually updated. So, who/what are these monk guys?
>>88019644
Oh, so that wasn't a flashback to a time something creepy had rampaged through the countryside, it's something that's happening right now. Neat.
>>88020356
Wait, do we know that? I thought the entire point of this comic was to prove the opposite. The dragon we see isn't attacking the town that Beatriz is in. Some weird cyber monks are there instead.
>>88020387
Looks to me like the "ominous" sound they're talking about is the cry of the "dragon". I don't *think* the little mouse dude would have a problem identifying the sound of a door knock, but I admit he could just be startled by it. Hasn't Beatriz mentioned something about dragon attacks before, though?
Chochi? I know you're usually hanging around on /co/, you wanna clarify?
>>88020052
Techpriests?
>>88019644
>That scrunched up narration.
>Transparent "WOAH" that doesn't stand out.
>balloons that overlap sfx
>Every statement gets its own balloon and conjunct balloons just don't exist for some reason.
His art's nice, but holy fuck Chochi is terrible at lettering his comic.
>>88019644
Can I see the outline of your butt, OP?
>>88019644
>"Oh, the male strippers just arrived!"
>"The WHAT, lady Beatriz"
>>88020972
>>88021242
>not "duties INTENSIFY"
>>88021455
I'm pretty sure that was made by Chochi originally, so bad English is expected.
>>88019644
*And at that moment an other cute mouse girl died off panel horribly because Froggy was too busy teasing a mouse boy*
>>88021653
That's exactly what made us all like the comic in the first place, so hopefully that's true.
>>88019644
fucking hell, another "I'd fuck that ___"
does it ever end
>>88021774
It's Chochi. So, no.
>>88020776
Comic design just isn't taught anymore ever since everyone started lifting from manga translations that had no choice but to break those rules.
Shit like MSPA and other panel-by-panel comics also contribute negatively.
>>88022058
You'd think the popularity of Jojo and Dragon Ball, two series where the lettering and SFX are extremely important to the visual design of the pages, would stop people from ignoring the importance of good lettering.
>>88020776
>>88022058
>>88022690
Wasn't this brought up before? How did Chochi take it, it it was?
>>88019644
Oh fuck, it's the AdMech! Stash the xenotech!
>>88021690
I can't believe she got a knife to the neck. What really got me that she was clinging on to it, in pain. She was too pure.
How the fuck do you read a comic on tumblr from the beginning? Am I missing an easy way to just scroll through images?
>>88026480
You start here and keep clicking "next":
http://beatrizoverseer.tumblr.com/page/37
>>88019644
Is the little rat missing some teeth?
>>88020776
It's the writing itself that's doing nothing for me.