/Co/Co/'s Bizarre Adventure: Brand New Autistic /Co/llection

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Just finished the Warden and his Pure Imagination. Unfortunately, the collection thing didn't work like I expected it to do and that was the least autistic rendition that I could think off.

Also, things were going pretty well in the last thread. Keep going guys, things will get better soon. And to whoever the Anon that updated the docs, good job.

alright, I'm gonna update the Stand doc.
What was the last topic we were discussing?

Bumping for Safety

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The Church of Gaming is already active during this part, right? Maybe they could be foreshadowed in a checkpoint when one of the characters encounters a preacher inviting him to join, only to be dismissed by said character or being arrested by the local authorities.

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>>87627471

Here's a collection of some recent suggestions from last thread

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>>87629921
Preacher could be Dib since we kinda wanted to have him in this part to keep the trend of relatives of past characters appearing in later parts.

Only thing is that the preacher has to be a paranoid, nerdy or lunatic young character. It probably depends on where we'll fit that gag in.

>>87626930
Shiiiiiiieeet. How did I miss that image? It's hype as fuck.
Are you just posting it with the thread, OP? or was it made a bunch of threads ago?

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>>87630095
With the thread. Was waiting to post it at a good enough time, and decided the time was now. Good to know some people liked it at least, I really aprecciate it. I mean, that took me weeks to finish.

Don't know if people got used to my things. But I'm happy at least (you) liked it Anon.

>Dan is finished off when he runs afoul of a local eccentric billionaire who drains the life out of him with his vampiric powers (it’s Stan Lee, the version of him who appeared in Big Hero Six)
Heh, this could be worked into his dialogue: https://desuarchive.org/co/thread/83805385/#q83806705

>>87630271
I like it too.

I'll probably come up with more things for part 7 later tonight.

>>87630271
>But I'm happy at least (you) liked it Anon.
I know what you're trying to do.
You're trying to make me fall in love with you.

>>87624695
Probably his battle van.

>>87626930
I dropped out of this halfway through part 6, but fuck me, that's gorgeous.

>>87626930
Well fuck, no matter what I do, there's always some more errors in the pics I post here.

I'll just post a fixed version in the booru then.

Also, thanks for the feedback guys. I'll try to keep contributing stuff for you guys as much as I can.

Did you guys ever do anything with Mojo Jojo?

>>87632223
Got a suggestion? We were trying to figure out what to do with him last thread.

>>87632247
It seems like a waste not to have him be a JoJo but he doesn't really fit any of them in personality. I guess I can see why he hasn't found a place yet.

>>87632339
He was going to be the brojo in the early draft, now he is an antagonist being hunted by Hex.

>>87632408
That sounds good to me. How much like the source material are these, anyway? Is it basically as accurate as a Muppet parody of a classic story where /co/ characters just replace appropriate JoJo characters, or has it gone off the rails as its own thing in the spirit of JoJo?

>>87632485
The latter. The only thing we directly 'take' from Jojo are the very basic premises. Everything else is an original rewriting, but in the spirit of Jojo. We also try to put in references sometimes, but that's it.

>>87632485
Gone off the rails.

The plots of the Jojo parts are just loose guidelines at this point.

So while I was updating the doc I began thinking: would it be better if Scud and DAVE made their entrance before or after the Wizard is exploring Daffy's old ancestral home?

>>87633819
I think before, otherwise they would have less time to be developed

>>87634149
So the Spain/France leg goes like this then
>Start
>Scud and DAVE crash into the race and kill Rorschach
>Pym and Hex have to dodge the killer robots and lose their positions in the race
>The Wizard has his adventure in the ruined manor
>Rex, Navis, and the other leaders of this leg duke it out for first
>Later Hex, Pym, and the Wizard all cross the finish line way behind the leaders, but still in time to stay in the race

>>87634549
yep, that's what we have right now, don't know what else could go there

>>87634650
I was just trying to sort out what to title each section since the stuff with the conclusion of this leg of the race feels like it would be a different "chapter" than the stuff with the Wizard exploring the old manor.

It's easier to jump around the doc when there are better defined sections (makes for easier editing) since our thread discussions are all over the damn place.

So Shocker, Mojo Jojo, the Chameleon, and possibly that one guy from Judge Dredd whose name I forgot again are all marks Hex is going after in the race.

Should there be more marks entered in the race?

>>87635759
There is also the frontmen group. I suppose that number is fine, Hex' focus shifts from bounty hunting to retrieving the Corpse parts during the european stage. Mean Angel (the criminal from Judge Dredd) is a late game antagonist.

>>87635934
The Frontmen group under Snake Eyes aren't racers though.

There can be location bounties Hex claims while they're waiting at checkpoints and start points who aren't racers.

We still need to make Mean Angel's entry into the race known, so maybe Hex looks at a list of racers still in the race at the first checkpoint and notes Mean Angel as another mark he'll go after if the situation presents itself.

We could probably have Mean Angel be the one to kill Hex in Rio while he's going after the other corpse parts.

>>87636284
Well, there is plenty of characters in the part 7 section of the Stand doc right now.

>>87636510
Yes, but not many of them have bounties on their heads.

And we will need to start planning on where to bow out which characters or less the end will be a total cluster-cuss.

At some point I wanted to include The Fantastic Mr. Fox, but I can't remember at all what idea I had for him, so that's scrapped before it gets started.
Might've had something to do with being a land lord in part 8.

Yeah, here's a bump before bed.

Late Morning Bump

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>>87629941
So Tulio's part is now divided between two arcs?

>>87636635
Well, we can always place one on them. I recall this guy being mentioned for this part along with the Grinch.

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Since things are slow, I'll just post some new stuff I could come up for the logo of MSBR.

I'll try to make Part 7 pics more minimalist and stylish than the other parts so things don't get too boring over time.

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>>87641662
What was the original role of Big Skeleton though? What does his Stand do?

>>87641745
An antagonist, but no details were given

Big Skeleton (Funnybones)
「ENJOY YOURSELF」
APPEARANCE: A humanoid figure with what appears to be a gray crescent moon for a head, with human facial features. It wears a black suit, and a pair of black sunglasses.
ABILITIES: 「ENJOY YOURSELF」 can cause nearby individuals to become completely obsessed with themselves, through the usage of 「t h e m u s i c」.
The psychological change caused by 「t h e m u s i c」 is gradual.
The change caused by 「t h e m u s i c」 can only be reversed once the user is killed
Those affected by 「t h e m u s i c」 become completely self-absorbed, and shun any form of contact with any individual who is not them, to the point of maiming or killing anyone nearby.

>>87641662
Yes? Handsome Man's World is them entering the country and setting up Tulio as something to run away from.

This Perfect World will Spin is them still dodging Tulio in the ruins of the pillarman empire until he's finally killed.

>>87642635
After landing north of Santiago, are the racers greeted and chased in situ, or they are escorted to the capital before starting the "spectacle"?

>>87644081
I'm thinking Tulio mobilizes his army, complete with a special broadcasting tank/vehicle, and goes out to "greet" the racers who have dropped into his country.

He does this over a huge speaker system affixed to his special car which broadcasts it all over the nation, then begins his chase.
Some of the racers should be ensnared by TRTN when he does this and make for easy first victims.

"Handsome Man's World" should focus mainly on Tulio's side of things and Dick's flashback to when Tulio used to work for Mr. Nobody.
"This Perfect World Will Spin" should focus on the racers evading and fighting Tulio's forces. He could do with some special forces. Odds are Tulio will want to personally kill the racers himself, so that would give us an opportunity for these special forces to capture racers and still have an out for them to escape if we need them for something later.

My main hangup with the Tulio part is that it's late in the story, so I don't know who has already been eliminated from the race before they're dropped into his country.

Oh, just had a thought.

The Wizard gets a corpse part on Fantastic Island, that's our explanation to how he's able to make a "ghost" of Daffy's [Carolina in the Morning] ability to explore the "memory" of his family home.

And I mean he overlaps the "memory" of the manor with the ruins of the manor to recreate how it was so he can absorb more bits of Daffy's identity from it.

>>87644302
>special broadcasting tank/vehicle
I think it was supposed to be an airship, at least that was discussed in the previous thread. He could have some prisoners onboard (like TOM), which ultimately leads to his demise.

>Dick's flashback to when Tulio used to work for Mr. Nobody.
Then we expand upon what we already have. What was the original location of the skull?

>Odds are Tulio will want to personally kill the racers himself
At one point he would get bored of the inefficacy of his troops to deal with the Stand users among the racers and he leaps from the airship to take the matter in his own hands

>>87645484
So, a sort of psychometry?

>>87645575
>psychometry
Sort of.
It's that combined with illusions I guess.

As for Tulio, yes, he has the Jaba's Pleasure Barge thing, only it has huge speakers and a huge TV affixed to the outside of it as well as projection equipment to further augment the effects of TRTN.

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>>87646288
>he has the Jaba's Pleasure Barge thing
So the airship its filled to the brim with his troops and dignitaries feasting while it chases the racers.

>only it has huge speakers and a huge TV affixed to the outside of it
like pic related?

>>87646896
Well that's not what I was imagining, but I guess it'd be like that.

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So anyway, at the first checkpoint in San Fransokyo I'm thinking Ghost Rider would be up on one of those floating turbine things watching the fight with Dan Backslide. When he finally spots Loki the turbine he's on should burst into flames and spin super fast (it doesn't crash) before he jumps off of it, maybe causing a power surge in the city.

Loki abandons Dan Backslide when he sees Ghost Rider coming, by then he should've already pissed off Stan Lee.

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>>87648115
Should Stan Lee be another sponsor of the race? During their rest after reaching the checkpoint, the racers could hear the rumours about a soul-eating creature roaming through the city and they confuse the empowered Dan Backslide with said creature.

>>87648621
Maybe he's the sponsor for their stay in the city?

Maybe there's two tiers of sponsors: locational sponsors and race sponsors. The locational ones provide the accommodations for the racers and the race sponsors provide the prizes?

what's gonna be Backslide's power up anyway? Is an upgrade to his current Stand or a replacement of it?

>>87649591
Either a power up or an epiphany of how to use it more dangerously.

Dan Backslide's ability is to conceal whatever he is doing by loudly shouting whatever it is he is doing, right?

Any ideas of what changes once Loki makes his deal with him?

>>87651127
Maybe after acting in an overly exaggerated way, the Stand makes him almost undetectable (perhaps invisible) for a period of time, during said time Dan also becomes completely silent. Alternatively, Loki could remove the need for acting loudly.

>>87651825
What's Dan's plan then?

Is he just trying to kill off the other racers in a daze induced by Loki?
Does Dan have an endgame in mind for himself?

>>87652871
>Does Dan have an endgame in mind for himself?
Besides winning the race? i don't think so. He struck the deal with Loki while being drunk as fuck and after getting eliminated from the race, so he's probably doing this out of spite.

>>87653397
Yeah, but is there someone in particular he wants to unleash that spite upon? Maybe Spongebob since he's who knocked Dan out of the race?

Dan tries to get revenge on Spongebob, Sam and Max get in the way, fighting happens, Loki turns Sam and Max into dames because he's a trickster, fighting ends when Ghost Rider crashes the scene, Loki absconds leaving Dan to his fate.

Hex and Pym are... doing what during all this?

>>87653752
what happens with Ghost Rider after that section? does he keep chasing Loki across the states or is he retired in San Fransokyo?

>>87654816
He keeps chasing Loki until he's banished back to hell, then he retires from the race himself since his mission is accomplished.

We could use Ghost Rider to set up the Loki phase 1 plot so Sam and Max get whatever exposition the readers need for this to make sense. You know Sam and Max don't need exposition, but they know that the readers need it.

So looking through the old threads, I found some of the discussion on Wander being in the race, and of him being the Pocoloco who wins the race. While I'm not to sure about that since Jack/Yellowjacket winning seems to be the idea now, I do like the idea of having him around, and a suggestion for his Stand was pretty good.

>Wander's Stand: Electric Light Orchestra or 「All You Need Is Love」
>takes the form a thin, almost skeletal humanoid stand with headlight eyes formed out of painted bits of PVC pipe
>It has the power to see areas of unluckyness through it's eyes, seeing them as red spots on surfaces
>bad things just happen to people in these spots naturally , they were always there. The Stand only allows Wander to see them.
>Not only does this allow Wander to avoid areas of bad luck as long as he pays attention to his surroundings, but he can also push others into such spots to slow them down

>>87655645
Wander pushing something intentionally into a spot like that is against his character unless he feels it's in the service of trying to help someone else.

Right now I think we're leaning towards Wander not even having a stand and has built up a massive wall of good karma.

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>>87655645
At this point I'm not sure who is gonna be the winner of the race, and there is also the fact that there are two prizes in it: the Wishing Star and the grand cash prize. There was also some discussion in a previous thread about a character from part 8 being a background racer in part 7, paralleling Norisuke I.
About the Stand, it feels similar to Stone Ocean's Dragon's Dream

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>>87655923
That's just what the original anon had said. I'd say it'd be more in character of him to push people out of bad luck spots. But the karma idea might work better. Maybe he carries similar energy as the Corpse? I kind of wish we had a Spin equivalent to work with.

Anyway, looking through old threads is something else. It's crazy to think of how far we've come. Some of the ideas back then were...odd.

>>87656718
>I kind of wish we had a Spin equivalent to work with
We had, I have been trying to reincorporate elements of both Stretch and Space into the story

>>87656718
We're constantly throwing shit at the wall and reworking it as we get to that part of the story.

It's all part of the charm I guess.

But yes, we've been messing with the idea of karma in this part. Mr. Nobody is kept informed of karma by Dr. Henry Killinger, who has a scale that balances his karma against someone else's karma.
If Mr. Nobody has better karma than his target, he can get away with more. We've also been having it so most of Mr. Nobody's more questionable actions actually have a net positive for more people.

We really should start thinking of more places and scenes to work in Dr. Henry Killinger and the other members of the Dada Party.

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>>87648621
>Stan Lee is one of the race sponsor
>and a bartender
>and a guy who takes care of injured horses
>and a farmer
>and a banker
Basically Stan Lee keeps showing up everywhere, filling minor roles.

I really want a scene somewhere in California where he's in a coffee shop, like in Heroman. Maybe the one in San Fransokyo.

>>87657813
So Dan makes him spill his coffee and that's what marks Dan for death.

Oh crap, page 10 bump.

Bumping before bed.

Hello, /co/co/nuts! Sorry for my absence, illness got me beyond any measures. I'll update the archive once away. What's been going on?

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>>87657813
Like these guys?

>>87662801
We are filling the layout of part 7 in no particular order

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Bump

>>87664117
Maybe Stan Lee shows up in the background at one point riding on of those Clyde drones.

>>87656912
Near the climax, the scale should finally tip against Nobody, signaling that he's finished.
Killinger could play a significant role when discussing the Hero's Corpse or the Wishing Star, have we figured what's the actual connection between him and the star?

>>87666124
No, we've been focused on everything else.

Right now there is an idea floating around that he could've been hired by the WB years ago to get someone elected president, but when they went under he was left to pick who that someone should be since they never told him who it was, and so he picked Nobody.
He probably picked Nobody because being the president sucks ass and is so stressful that Nobody should have to do it.

There was also the idea of Killinger being a herald for the Wishing Star.

That would need much more thought put into it for it to work.

Like Mr. Nobody is star gazing one night and notices the Wishing Star far, FAR, in the depths of space as it makes its years long approach to Earth and the next day Killinger appears before him.

But I don't like that since I want Killinger to have been with Mr. Nobody's party since before he was elected and he was running for the oval office before the events that attracted the Wishing Star to Earth happened.

So this race is probably happening during his second or third year as president.

>>87667238
He probably appeared long before the Wishing Star approached Earth (around the end of part 6). Right now, Killinger is supposed to have the power to do miraculous things, though that isn't further explained. He may have wandered the Earth for an unknown period of time doing stuff in anticipation of the arrival of the Star.

>>87667969
The only reason why the star is coming to Earth is because of the beam of STAR energy that was shot out into space at the end of part 6.

STAR energy attracts STAR energy and all that.

When does Loki hire the Punisher? At the first checkpoint?

Maybe the Punisher gets into a fight with Pym and Hex while on the way to checkpoint 2 and he's the reason why Hex fails to capture Shocker then.

>>87669681
Is he just a hitman hired by Loki or also a racer?

>>87669768
Just hired by Loki I think.

Odds are he'll try to take out criminal racers both on an off the race legs until he's finally killed in CN City.

So mirror master's stand "eats the time" so is it somewhat like King Crimson? Do events still happen in the time?

>>87669892
>Odds are he'll try to take out criminal racers both on an off the race legs until he's finally killed in CN City.
So a clash between him and Hex is possible

>>87669931
I thought he just has his jump out of mirrors powers.

That's what I've been thinking anyway.

Or maybe he can store things in reflective surfaces.

>>87669948
More than possible, 100% happening in CN City and now possibly also on the way to Aberdale.
The Punisher is the first to hint at there being much more going on with the race than Hex and Pym are aware of or even suspect, even with them being somewhat aware of the corpse parts by this point.

We need to work on how much the Punisher actually knows about, how much what he knows is valid, and how much was Loki fucking with him.
He does outlast Loki in this part.

I don't think Hex and Pym ever actually come into contact with Loki.

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>>87669931
>It has the power to "eat the time" of whatever is in its reflection, much like in Doom Patrol
That refers to Alias the Blur's power which "ate" the time of the people that looked into its reflections, making them age rapidly and empowering Alias.

>>87670066
Loki should reveal to Punisher that Nobody employs several criminals for his plans, like the Frontmen, D.A.V.E. and (formerly) Tulio.

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I'll try to give a minimalist poster style to the part 7 pics (mostly because it's much more fun than doing part 6 pics), here's one of the first.

Spongebob's vehicle is actually unnamed in his docs profile. Did we ever think up something for him?

>>87671988
nope, it's just a rock. It was suggested that he had the pattymobile before the start of the race, but it was stolen by jughead

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Are we even using "Bad Guy" Wander in the race like we did to Spongebob alias? Maybe we could use that as a gag later.

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Maybe it would've been funnier if I just entittled it "[a rock]" then.

I know we barely know where Jane's role is going to be, but here's a pic of her anyway.

I had no ideia of how her car should look like, so I just did a taxi car, seems like something a doom patrol character would drive.

>>87672306
meant as a reply for
>>87672124

>>87672306
>we barely know where Jane's role is going to be
That's something we should work on so it won't look like she came out of the blue. So far she becomes the first host of the corpse, but before that there is nothing clear.

>>87672522
We should establish a group of background racers who are prominent, but are never really in the spotlight for more than an arc at a time.

At first we have Sam and Max's revenge subplot going on against Loki.

Then... something to do with Wander, Sylvia, and the Beetles in Smallville?

The Wizard gets a large subplot in France.

Cybersix takes on a larger role for their stay in the robot refugee town.

As long as we make a point to mention and show these characters early on and every so often to make sure everyone knows they're still in it, then it shouldn't come too far out of the blue when one steps up to prominence.

Yowza, it's been what, a year since I came to these threads, and they are still chugging along?

>>87672787
we also need to figure out when each character is retired, both racers and the members of the Dada party

>>87673698
uh, the project started this year

>>87673747
Did it? I could have sworn it was much longer than that. Maybe I've just been gone for so long it feels longer.

>>87673767
it was around march that the first threads appeared

>>87672787
Crazy Jane (maybe when she's Driver 8) should be actively trying to find the corpse parts to keep them safe from Nobody, so she should be around whenever a new corpse part is nearby.

She'd probably meet Bugs and Scud at some point. Maybe she's the one that explains the corpse part business to Pym and Hex.

Also, she could be the one that Monica gives her corpse part during the racers' staying in Rio. I mean, Monica wanted to give the corpse part to someone she felt trustworthy, right?

>>87673698
Things are a little slow these days, but we're still going. I just hope it gets better towards the end of the year.

>>87626930
Great job anon.
You are really a talented person.
Keep going.

>>87673747
Dan Backslide is taken out at checkpoint 1.

Who do we have not make it to checkpoint 2?

Shocker and Spongebob both don't make it to checkpoint 3. There are probably others.

Do we lose anyone on the water leg to checkpoint 4?

Rorschach dies on the way to checkpoint 5.

I kind of want to take out Rex before checkpoint 6 when he gets into a fight with Mélusine for violating the race's no flying rules.

We need to decide Tulio's victims.

I'm pretty sure Hex gets killed in Rio.

We should probably take it one leg at a time with who and when is getting eliminated.

>>87673961
Old Jack is already the one who tells Hex and Pym about he corpse. Who Old Jack heard it from though is a mystery.

>>87674262
Wow, this is really going to be a bloodbath isn't it? Also, when did we talk about Rex and Hex dying? I think I missed it.

>Old Jack is already the one who tells Hex and Pym about he corpse
Maybe Jane knows Jack, at least. There should be a party of people that are trying to protect the corpse parts from Nobody even though they're not guardians. For now, I'm only sure that Jane (or maybe just her Driver 8 personality) would want to keep them hidden, at least during the race, which she probably knows (or realises at some point) that targets the parts' locations.

Also, we could make the personalities she manifests from the corpse parts be other characters of some sort. Maybe the personalities are the different versions of Superman (Cinematic, 60's cartoon, Justice League, Silver Age, etc) or maybe they're just random characters that represent heroism. Maybe one of the personalities she meets even foreshadows Stardust.

>>87674668
Last thread was when the idea of Hex dying in Rio started.

We had him slated to die before the ending, this is the first we're actually acting on placing it.

Rex has been said to get into a fight with the race's rules enforcer for a while now, I'm just suggesting a placement for it.

I don't think Old Jack and Jane ever meet. Jane probably knows about it because she overheard it being talked about by someone, then began looking into it herself.
I don't think she should have any prior knowledge of the corpse prior to the race.

Navis would have some prior knowledge of it, being an Interpol plant, but we need to establish how limited it is.
I think Navis will last far longer in the race than what we'd expect from a narrative standpoint because of her desire to win it. This makes her less of a target by the Dada Party, something she may or may not have known all along as part of her plan.

>>87674262
The atlantic stage is pretty much a blank slate after the racers' stay in Fantastic Island. We don't even have decided on the Corpse guardian(s) that are protecting the eye(s)
Tempo was supposed to retire from the race by her own volition at some point, don't remember when.
I don't remember when Mojo Jojo is captured, but he first clashes with Hex and Pym in CN City

>>87674668
>this is really going to be a bloodbath isn't it?
Yeah, rather than have a cast that grows bigger as the plot advances, it starts with a big pool of characters that is trimmed down along the road

>when did we talk about Hex dying?
Last thread, though I have some qualms about Hex dying in that stage, there was some previous discussion about his Stand developing an ability that allows him to take down one of the final bosses.

>>87675168
The Atlantic stage has Gerald the sea lion being a pain in the racers' asses as well as whatever bionicle stuff we're using.

No clue as to who should win that leg of the race or what the placings should be.

If Hex doesn't die in Rio, then he should die before they go to space. Mr. Nobody could announce they're going to space and Hex opts out saying he's been there and done that before (he was a space cowboy at some point where he was flung into the future. Hex and Old Jack could probably bond over that.) to Pym's astonishment as Hex gets another use out of his "I've lead an interesting life" line.
However, Hex still has an eye, so he becomes an immediate target when it's discovered he plans to leave there and then.
Pym could try to save him and lose the ribs in the process.

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Just got this drawed up. Anyone wanna do anything with the actual JoJo?

>>87675948
We do have JoJo's circus slated to appear when the race passes through Springfield, though not much else has been discussed.

>>87676039
Eventually we will have to start picking places to focus on and flesh out.

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>>87664117
>Like these guys?
Precisely

Anyway, I might as well throw out some suggestions.

>User: Janet Van Dyne (either Marvel Fairy Tale of Disk Wars)
>Vehicle: "Here, There, and Everywhere" (working title) (A classy 60s sports car)
>Stand: 「BROWN SUGAR」
>Appearance: Araki-fied version of the mutate Wasp from the one EMH episode
>Ability: When「BROWN SUGAR」shoots one of it's barbs on to something, the area around where the barb hit will start to curve in on itself. The point of impact becomes attractive, and objects and plants around it will begin to grow towards it. If it hits the ground, the dirt will begin to curve upward and move towards it, and plants will grow towards it, with trees growing sideways. If it hits a person, their flesh, blood, bones, and organs curve into a ball in an attempt to meet the point.
>Role: A key character in Pym's backstory, if she ends up showing up in the main story, she could accidentally gain a Stand while trying to help Pym.

Destructive Power: D
Speed: A
Range: A
Durability: C
Precision: B
Developmental Potential: E

There'd also be a running joke that her outfit changes each chapter.

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>>87676412
Another, based on a Stand suggestion from an old thread.


>User: Either George from Paperman or Bras de Olivias Dominguez (main character of the comic Daytripper)
>Vehicle: "Paperback Rider"
>Stand: [TRIPPIN ON A HOLE IN A PAPER HEART]- shortened to [PAPER HEART]
>Appearance: A Humanoid stand with slender arms- it’s body is adorned with tiny print that is nonsensical gibberish when seen up close. There are also random black and white pictures of people’s faces. The stand is wearing a backwards newsboy’s cap.
>Ability: Activates whenever the stand comes into direct contact with. The surface of anything touched by the stand becomes paper like in structure, becoming wrinkled and easy to tear open. The objects also retain their mass and weight, but the surface becomes visibly wrinkled in appearance and can be damaged by outside water sources. The can apply to organic surfaces as well, although the effect takes longer to apply fully to these sources.

Destructive Power: E
Speed: C
Range: B
Durability: D
Precision: A
Developmental Potential: C

>>87676412
What is Pym's backstory in this?

Page 10 bump again.

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Who's Mr. Nobody, again? Is it pic related? I can't tell, for the life of me.

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>>87679179

>>87679265
I was a mile off.

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>>87679324
I posted a bunch of pages of him back when we just finished up part 6 to get everyone acquainted with him and his personality.

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>>87679370
Threads are sinking fast right now, so unless someone is around to bump this thread, I don't know it'll still be up when I wake up.

Anyway, here's a bump before bed.

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Damn,you guys are still chugging along?
Haven't been round since months ago

Shame "ONE LAST TIME" got shafted though,dude's fun to design

>>87675948
Nice drawing. Though it would be better if it was sized properly. I'm gonna add it to the booru anyways.

>>87680947
Did you draw this now? If so, very well done Anon. I'll add it the to booru too.

Good to know there's still some drawfags watching over us.

>>87680947
>Shame "ONE LAST TIME" got shafted
He isn't though

>>87681177
Huh,then why is it filed under unused content on the booru?

>>87681199
i dunno, we are using him in this part. We still need to settle on its ability though

>>87681199
That was me. There was nothing on the docs about him. So I didn't know even what part he was going into on that time.

What is his role in part 7, then?

>>87681281
Well his user is D.A.V.E from the Batman animated series but I've forgotten how we're going to include him.

It's been months,after all

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>>87681281
>>87681297
An Assassin partnered with Scud

>>87681281
>>87681305
Together the two robots are given the task of retrieving corpse parts from the racers who have them.

DAVE is the more brutal and ruthless of the two.

Scud is reluctant and being forced to play this role since his original target is being held hostage (if they die, he dies).

Scud could probably do with a romantic interest among the racers.

>>87683310
wasn't his target supposed to be Nobody?

>>87683401
Eeyup, but he doesn't know that until he starts going rogue. Nobody tells him to heighten the drama and keep him in line.

>>87684035
As in, Mr. Nobody tells him. Damn technicalities.

If we have a complete enough path of where the race is going, it's probably about time to start writing in earnest. We left off with Shocker slinking off, I think?

>>87684035
So when Nobody dies onboard the Absolution, Scud just braces himself to explode?

>>87684056
The path gets murky at Rio and what happens there and from there to Cape Suzette.

Well, bump before I have to go do some work.

>>87684064
You know, if there are multiple Mr. Nobodys in play, he might not blow up.

>>87685688
If the main Nobody dies, won't the extra Nobody (his Stand can only maintain one alt-self) disappear too?

>>87685731
Alt Dio didn't vanish when Valentine was killed.

>>87685688
He's targeted to the "main" Nobody. As much as I love Scud, he isn't escaping this part alive.

>>87687496
Well, he'd better blow up right in Mr. Nobody's face then.

Or blow up when doing a suicide attack on Stardust.

>>87688202
>Or blow up when doing a suicide attack on Stardust
Heh, I had the same thought

>Nobody bites the dust, he gives a parting speech and tells Scud that he's next
>Scud prepares himself to blow up, but at the last moment he raises his view
>He rushes towards the Superwizard, which began his slow journey towards the Earth
>He leaps from the ship, probably having a flashback of his adventure as he grabs Stardust's leg
>The Super Wizard deems him a mere nuisance before he explodes, which catches him off guard
>Stardust is unscathed but Scud's sacrifice distracted him, giving the heroes enough time to defeat him

>>87688443
Enough time to catch up to him before he starts his crusade of "justice" on Earth.

Would Stardust go for the Wishing Star?

>>87689431
Would he need it? Does he know about its existence? If I remember right, the revived Stardust doesn't have the full array of his powers yet

>>87676412
What would be her backstory with Pym though?

>>87676505
Nice. I'd like to see how we would include someone from these kinds of comfy-looking comics.

So, which racers get offed when the Golden Gate Bridge blows up? any named character?

>>87690272
>What would be her backstory with Pym though?
*slap*

>>87689549
I don't remember him not being at full power once released from the corpse.

>>87690506
I don't know, just pick some who are listed as being in this part and I'll let you know if they already have plans in the works later.

I'm firmly against just adding more characters in for the sole purpose of upping the body count.

an idea I was thinking about

>Rex and Navis literally tie at Paris
>The race has no rules on this situation, nobody knows what to do
>Mr. Nobody is too busy to care, he's more focused on converting the Wizard to his side and sulking out the corpse part in Paris
>An other universe Nobody takes over the situation in the race, one of if not the first instant of AU Nobody's in affect
>reporters and the public can see its a different person, but something tells them that they just KNOW its Mr. Nobody
>this is the time when racers, outside of who ever Rorschach has told are beginning to wonder if there are ulterior motives

On top of that
>Rex and Navis begin to form some sort of rivalry turned friendship during the race
>One of them dies
>If Navis dies, Rex gets super pissed possibily during the Stardust fight
>He survives, Interpool takes note and asks him to join in the aftermath

I don't know

>>87690776
This was suggested as his Stand: https://desuarchive.org/co/thread/86028808/#86093000

>>87690795
Mr. Nobody doesn't start working on bringing the Wizard to his side until a number of hours after the Wizard has arrived in Paris, which is a while after Rex and Navis.

Rex I was thinking to retire from the race before they get to the Looniversity ruins.

I tie shouldn't be possible, there should be some hyper high speed cameras that can pick up whoever first reaches the finish line.

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Tulio needs more people in his group.

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>>87691987
Tulio's stand could've evolved into TRTN after getting the skull.

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>>87692011
Condorito could be a high ranking general in Tulio's army who wants to seize power for himself.

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>>87691987
Outside of the other characters from his show, there isn't many notorious /co/ characters from Chile, Condorito, Mampato maybe, but that's it the least we speak about the cartoons here the better

>>87692031
He was mentioned in the previous thread, he was first suggested for part 6, but wasn't used

>>87690506
>*slap*
Oh shit I get it

>>87692304
Well let's use him here.

He could be the general who offers sound tactical advice to Tulio and also gives him more brutal options than he would have otherwise.

>>87693460
There is that officer in the throne room scene that I left unnamed, he could take that place.

>>87694201
Would he be intimidated by Tulio's handsomeness?

Would they have a long history that extends back to before Tulio merged with the skull?

>>87695072
Well, Tulio was the leader of a mercenary group employed by Nobody to hunt the Corpse parts in latin america. We have to expand the story that Dick tells to the racers

>Would he be intimidated by Tulio's handsomeness?
Right now, the officer is taken aback when Tulio is next to him

>>87695245
Let's have the members of Tulio's old mercenary group be the current members of his cabinet.

As for Dick, I actually want to have him survive this part and have a scene in the epilogue of him going home to his wife and son (that's his motivation in Wacky Raceland, to see his wife and son again).
We won't bring up his family at any point in time during part 7 until the epilogue since I'd consider it a death flag otherwise and Dick is too professional to talk about his personal life while working.

>>87695507
>Let's have the members of Tulio's old mercenary group be the current members of his cabinet
yup, sounds like a chilean politician, except for the mercenary part sometimes

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>>87690272
>What would be her backstory with Pym though?
I had the idea Pym's backstory would focus on various failures in his life. He personally considers his failure with Janet to be the worst mistake he's ever made. He could have been working for Janet's dad and been engaged to her. Like Johnny, he would be on top and then experience a fall, probably due to his mental problems. Possibly involving the slap. Janet would continue to love Pym, but he'd push her aside and disappear.

Later she could show up in the story and have her own arc. But this is all just spitballing because I had the idea of including Janet, so we don't need to use any of it.

>>87690272
>include someone from these kinds of comfy-looking comics
"Welcome...to the True Writer's World..."

>>87697520
Are we still going to work in Pym having a robot son who he actually thinks of as a son?

>>87697615
quiptron?

>>87698132
No, quiptron was Stark's.

I remember there was this pic of Ultron with one of Hank's kids and he was saying to the toddler "I don't know why dad bothered to make you when I'm already perfect!" but he wasn't doing anything bad to his "sibling".
I'm pretty sure it was something that came out of the drawthreads, but I could be wrong and I can't find it anywhere right now.

I like the interpretation of Ultron just wanting his dad to be proud of him.

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Would Stardust's awakening look like this?: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iZMKeowYK8g

>>87698434
pic semi-related

>>87698617
That's not really what I meant.

I'd actually like it if he did think of Ultron as a son if we include him in this.

I supposed Stardust's emerging from the corpse could be something like that, but how do we have him not blow up the entire ship?

>>87698688
Well, the Absolution is pretty big and Stardust probably reforms himself outside the ship, is during the exchange between him and the people onboard that the Absolution gets thrashed (but remains mostly functional)

>>87698808
He probably blows off at least one of its engines.

That ship has lost all of its engines before and kept going.

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Should Sherman by a racer or is he better off in Cocolion?

>>87699918
I don't think there should be any underage racers.

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>>87699936
True, but he is accompanied by Mr. Peabody, who participated in the race and puts him as his partner, but Sherman is unaware of Peabody's stand, [WALKING ON TIME], which can send racers into different time periods.

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So in what way are we going to have Pym be a fuck up?

Well, as is customary at this point, bump before bed.

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This was a very well written fight. Congrats to whoever did it. Also, Ocean Man is a pretty catchy song, thanks to whoever suggested it.

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>>87701774
Neat.

Something's been nagging at my mind. When a character loses their corpse part in this, how does it de-merge with them?

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>>87704026
I don't know, in SBR they seem to come off without much trouble, Johnny's arm was in perfect state after the Corpse's arm came off twice in this chapter.

>>87704276
So it just needs to look really weird when they get removed.

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>>87704680
the same when they merge with someone

>>87704680
Probably something like messing with the character's outline or "riping" their paper-like body considering the corpse parts does mess with [space] and [stretch].

Also, "fusing" with a corpse part probably looks more like an absorption of the corpse part instead of just "putting" it below the skin.

I mean, imagine if Spongebob fused with the left leg. His leg would be still the same noodle-like thingie, right? Another ideia would be that Spongebob's legs would have a transformation similar to Tulio's, making him more handsome.

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>>87705137
I thought the handsomeness came only with the skull, like how the rib cage in SBR transformed chubby Valentine.

>>87700730
Probably by focusing on his struggle with what it means to be a hero. Over the course of the story he'd learn more about the true attributes of a hero. Maybe he learns from the Corpse guardians, sometimes The Hero actually talks to him to lead him to take an action. He also would learn a lot from Hex, whose someone who has come to terms with who he is.
I'd really like to see how we show the end result of his growth, like with Johnny being able to walk at the end of SBR.

>>87705219
Yeah, only the skull brings handsomeness.

Meaning the next guy who gets it also gets a facelift, the point there no one recognizes him.

>>87706036
But why does he want to be a hero in the first place?

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>>87708702
TOM has a nice ass.

>>87706987
What thing happened to him before the part of part 7 in our setting that makes him feel as if he has something to prove?

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>>87709032
One of the differences between him and Mr. Steel (the other being not turning into a washed-up drunkard)

>>87710284
I don't think we have decided on his backstory, but it was supposed to be based on pic related he also slapped Janet

Seems appropriate https://m.fanfiction.net/s/11734243/

>>87710774
Maybe he's in the race looking to prove to himself that he's a good person after having an "episode" where he went nuts and did some bad stuff?

So if Serenity gets a stand when the corpse merges with her, I think it should reflect on her inner rage.

>>87712410
I'm not sure if the complete corpse grants a Stand, right now it seems that it turns the host into a super (in this case, Supergirl). There was also a suggestion for Superman's Stand (a la Ticket to Ride): https://desuarchive.org/co/thread/85841647/#85856955

>>87701774
Well fuck, I forgot that the corpse part in that fight should be the left leg, not the right leg. I think I'll just go post a fixed version of that in the booru.

Final Bump before bed

I just hope this thread lives through the night now

So how should we show the time skip that happens between registration and the race starting?

It's a time skip an a location change.

>>87716440
Maybe after the registration, Hex returns to wherever he is staying and is last seen packing stuff for the race. After that there could be a scene in Nobody's office where one of his aides informs him about the preparations of the race.

>>87716560
Might just cut from the Wizard registering to Mr. Nobody in his office.

>>87717370
that part would be a good place to introduce the members of the Dada party, especially Killinger once we figured out what's his actual role in the group

>>87717690
His role is... chief of staff? He's Mr. Nobody's right hand man isn't he? Or does that make him more of an aide?

Does he ever fight anyone? I think he'd actually offer sound advice to anyone he meets regardless of affiliation.

>>87717758
Killinger is "something", is never confirmed if he has a Stand or he has another kind of power. He seems to be the member of Nobody's cabinet that knows more about the Corpse and the Wishing Star (being connected in some way to the latter)

>>87718051
He could be a high ranking demon, but I don't think we're going to reveal what he is in the story.

He should have some kind of role after Mr. Nobody dies, like being the one to encourage the heroes to keep trying even if the fight against Stardust seems hopeless.

In the epilogue he could be the one to get that other unrelated Nobody and put him in the Oval Office to take Mr. Nobody's place.

Since the theme of this part is identity, is there a way to work in more obscure shows?
>>87716490

>>87719178
Probably. Though it gets harder to work in more stuff as we get a complete outline.

A suggested specific role for a specific character is far more likely to get worked in than just "hey, add this character" with no other details or ideas provided.

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>>87690506
His pants were dry clean only, and so he is forced to retire from the race.

During the part of the race with the bullet train, Dick should tie someone to the tracks and watch ecstatically as the train approaches. Right when it looks like the person tied to the tracks is about to get run over, the train harmlessly speeds by over them (it's not real work accurate, if it were they'd be electrocuted to death).

Now, Dick can either look dismayed, or he can drive up to them and point and laugh yelling "Psych!" at whoever he had tied up before speeding off on his way.

>>87715315
Same here now.

I can only hope someone else keeps the thread up.

Morning Bump

>>87720216
what I wanna know is if they fight on a train or against a train, because I've seen both scenarios mentioned in the previous threads

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Bump before I get to work.
In the meantime, try to come up with an ability for DAVE's Stand.

>>87722990
Why not both? Part of it is fighting against the train, but for part of the fight our heroes get distracted and have to fight on it.

>>87723755
Is DAVE retaining his vast intelligence and above-average physical capabilities from The Batman?

>>87722990
>>87724466
Yes, both.

They get on the bullet train, then have to fight another (stand) train that's chasing it, then have to fight Scud who jumped from the stand train on top of the bullet train.

>>87725301
Sure, why not? There was an idea during part 6 that in this setting he was built from the remains of Von Drake's HARDAC machine.

By the way, here's some older ideas from when he was first suggested: http://desuarchive.org/co/thread/80409505/#80421651
And a more recent discussion: https://desuarchive.org/co/thread/85145244/#85228486

>>87725447
>There was an idea during part 6 that in this setting he was built from the remains of Von Drake's HARDAC machine.

This seems like a pretty cool idea. Maybe instead of a personality derived from Batman's Rogues Gallery and Dr. Strange, this version of DAVE derives his intelligence and personality based on the brain scans of the various inmates of Belle Reve, with a facsimile of Von Drake's personality taking center stage? Canonically, DAVE was obsessed not just with being the perfect criminal, but with unmasking the Batman, a drive he received due to a scan Dr. Strange, uploaded by Dr. Strange himself. The information on Von Drake in the Part 6 is kind of all over the place. What is he supposed to be like in /Co/Co/'s?

>>87725829
A psychologist that wanted to prove that his new methods (using machines like HARDAC) were superior to the traditional ways embodied by Bobby.

>>87725876
In that case, how about this:

[ONE LAST TIME] possesses the ability to rip out peoples memories in the form of floppy disks (similarly to Whitesnake). Visually, DAVE himself has to physically strike at his foe to rip out their memories, his hand seemingly phasing through and disappearing into their body. The longer his hand remains in somebodies body, the more memories he tears away, starting with short-term and slowly taking away long-term. When he pulls his hand out, the memories come out as a floppy disk, which he then hands over to [ONE LAST TIME]. OLT, in turn, inserts the floppy disk somewhere into its body. OLT can only play one disk at a time, but playing a disk gives DAVE free access to all of the memories that OLT has managed to steal, allowing him to review it all in seconds due to his enhanced robot brain.

DAVE is participating as one of Mr. Nobody's assassins, but he is more focused on stealing peoples memories and analyzing them, hence his disregard for collateral damage. He doesn't actually realize that he is a mere computer program, and believes that amnesia is preventing him from recalling his origins. If pressed about it, he would insist that he is working for Mr. Nobody because he enjoys figuring out how people tick, and that the race offers a very diverse group of subjects for him to examine. In reality, while he doesn't show it, and might not even realize it himself, he is desperate to figure out who he really is, and why he has so much difficulty remembering who he was before he awakened in the remains of the HARDAC.

>>87726357
So how do the victims get the memories back then?

Or does it just make a copy on disc?

Seems like it wouldn't be able to remove memories from someone if they're being saved onto a floppy disc since data doesn't auto-delete like that when copied.

And Scud has a disc drive in his hand that is used to upload information on his target and what his contempt level should be set at.
What was it? "1 to get the job done, 10 to never see them again"
One time it got set to 15 and he wrapped barbed wire around his head, painted a smile on his mouthless face in blood, and pretend to be Jesus as he slaughtered everyone around him.

Scud was a fun read.

>>87726617
The floppy disk is more like a physical representation of the memories. He doesn't create a disk and then copy memories into it; OLT separates them from the victims brain and "congeals" them, into a shape like a floppy disk.

I'm currently thinking the only way to get back the Memories would be to steal whatever floppies DAVE is carrying himself, and to get back whatever OLT is reading, you would have to kill DAVE, and after his death OLT would appear briefly behind him and then disintegrate, leaving only the the floppy it was reading in it's place. Gaining your memories back is as simple as pressing a floppy of your memories into your head. People can't read each others memories, only their own (unless you think otherwise would be more interesting for the story).

>>87726896
That's... pretty much Heaven's Door then with ripping pages from a person's history.

I think it'd be better if it copied memories instead of outright removing them.

>>87727155
The copying fits with the "multiple villain personalities" angle I vaguely recall him having in the cartoon, so I vote that.

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>>87727958
There was an idea in the archive about being like Taskmaster, and another one where it latches onto its target while active, could be a mix between all these ideas.
Also, I've been reading the bonkle wiki for potential corpse guardians, and this could be another example for OLT ability: http://biosector01.com/wiki/index.php/Mask_of_Emulation (if anyone is wondering, half of those mask powers are already present, either in canon Jojo or this project)

>>87719630
The Funky Cops would be easy to work in. Just show them as security during the San Fransokyo part of the race.

Calamity Jane could be like Georgie Porgie or Nellyville: a top racer who's not really relevant to the story.

I have no idea about Dave the Barbarian. I wish I did, that show was great.

And some point Channel Umptee 3 could be shown covering one part of the race.

Duckman would be great but there's not really a place for him.

>>87729530
>top racer who's not really relevant to the story
We have some of those already.

Calamity Jane seems more like another Hex-type bounty hunter.

So which racers do we need to introduce right as the race is about to start?

>>87729575
There were minor racers that appeared only once (like Stroheim or Baron Roocatugo), while other were only mentioned in the classification tables (like Georgie Porgie or Nellyville).

>>87730610
Dan Backslide is the first that comes to mind, maybe Goofy.

>>87732511
How do they react with a camera in their faces?

Maybe Goofy would be camera shy and Dan Backslide would be so loud they'd ignore him.

>>87733877
>When they ask him why he entered the race, Goofy pretends that he didn't hear it and drives to the starting line, his face straightening as he distances himself from the reporter

>>87734237
I like it.

He goes from a hand over his face and twirling his ear to stone faced and solemn.

I think we'll also need to introduce the eyes in the sky Clydes and the race's rules overseer Mélusine.

Maybe after the Wizard registers for the race we cut to Mr. Nobody talking to his Dada Party members, some of them are blacked out so we don't know which ones are in the race, but Mélusine is called front and center as he gives her the task that needs doing.

>>87736251
And after Nobody or TOM finishes reading the rules, he mentions that these will be enforced at all time then Mélusine is shown watching the racers from the sky.

What is TOM in the story? A promoter? part of the show business? the Clydes could be his property and, as they are deployed, he flaunts that they are the latest technology in the entertainment industry.

>>87736918
TOM is the announcer, so yes, a promoter/show runner/hype man.

He gives the play-by-play of the race as it is happening.

I'm just waiting for someone else to pitch some idea or write something.

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Do Willie Watt and his [METAL CRUSHER]name pending have a place somewhere in /Co/Co/'s? And what should it's ability be?

>>87741113
Well in part 7 I'd place him in CN City. He wouldn't be a racer.

Maybe... hmm.

So they arrive at CN City, Pym gets first place.
He goes out to celebrate, gets drunk, starts blabbing about the corpse to Tom from part 3 since he's in his favorite bar.
Rorschach drags him into a closet and yells at him about discussing such things.
Pym was already overheard and the Chameleon, who is working for the Dada Party, is now out to eliminate Pym.
Meanwhile, the Punisher also arrives in CN City and he's still wound up because of his crank stand. He gets into a fight with Hex when he tries to kill some political officials, they duel in the streets and Hex is able to drive up the tension enough for the Punisher to miss his shots and his crank stand to backfire on him, killing him. Before he dies he gives Hex a cryptic warning about how he'll have to choose which side he's on or something.
Pym and Hex meet back up later, both having had a strange encounter. They are then attacked by Willie Watt, an assassin sent to kill Pym. They fight him for a while until the person who hired him (Chameleon) makes himself known to sabotage Hex and Pym's upper hand in the fight.
They manage to repel both their attackers, Willie is jailed and the Chameleon stumbles into Tom's favorite bar where he says the thing already in the doc which makes Tom take him out. This retires Chameleon from the race.

We could do something here with Willie to foreshadow DAVE depending on what kind of ability [One Last Time] ends up with.

>>87741241
Meanwhile, Jack and Old Jack are walking the streets and Old Jack is telling Jack about the time he met this guy with a huge blonde pompadour while doing laundry at a laundromat.

Bump before bed. It's on someone else now to keep the thread up.

>>87737480
I noticed that is our Mr Steel the one that saves our Lucy from a shitty former life and not the opposite.

>>87741241
He could be an agent of Nobody that tries to switch side and is dispatched for that reason

>>87729530
>>87729575
There are still some places that are blank in The City That Knows How arc. We could use some of these to cameo some characters.

Also, why does Wander and Sylvia are considered diffferent racers in there?

>>87743672
no idea, she's supposed to be registered as Wander's vehicle

/co/co/casual/ here. Does the race go through Molly's Gamble at any point, and would it be worth including Casey Brinke there given that Danny was such a big part of part 4?

>>87744276
I don't know, we never pinned the location of Molly's Gamble (though it seems it became a wandering city thanks to Danny). At least Scrooge appears as a background character, being a sponsor of the race

What other characters from the doc could be used for the race?
is there any champion candidates among the roster besides Dick Dastardly?

>>87743672
>>87744254
They both registered for the race as racers.

Sylvia probably registered to double their odds of winning. That seems like something she'd do.

>>87746545
like the boom boom family?

>>87746563
They're not after bounties.

Wander registered and then Sylvia also registered since she was there and figured "why not?"
She does have a reputation in the racing circuits as being a time bomb though. Without Wander around she goes nuts and becomes self-destructively aggressive when in a race.

I wonder where we could actually show that time bomb thing at.

>>87747619
Wander takes prominence during the Smallville section, right? It could be shown there.
Where else he becomes relevant?

>>87747727
Wander also have a role set up for when the racers are in Paris.

He's helping the children find their missing cats as a background plot.

Wander might be the ultimate weapon against Tulio since he's dealt with that kind of person many times before.

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>>87749364
Right now, TOM's Stand, Space Oddity, messes with the ability of Tulio's TRTN, helping an uprising in the country in which V also participates. And there is also the repaired Iron Vulture gunning down Tulio's ground forces and probably engaging his airship in combat.

>>87749657
Wander can be the wild card in all of this.

He's easily able to slip through any defenses to get right to the man in charge.

He'd probably annoy Tulio something fierce and no matter what Tulio does, he just can't seem to kill the orange fuzzball.

Wander probably ends up saving a few captured racers by doing this.

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Are we gonna include kryptonite in the story? There was an idea that the people merged with a Corpse part become vulnerable to it, and Hex killed Superman once with kryptonite bullets.

Maybe Condorito should be the one who is is actively pursuing the racers for most of the Tulio arc with Tulio himself only coming in when he gets bored or after someone else screws up. He's mainly kept busy by TOM, Wander, Sylvia, and V (who I hope takes over his bloated boisterous barge).

It might be interesting when Tulio gets killed in the people's revolt and Condorito is still alive, fighting Hex and Pym. He assumes he'll take control of the country only for Hex or Pym to kill him.

>>87752374
I don't think it's necessary.

>>87752451
>As he dies, Condorito sees Tulio's airship in the distance, engulfed in flames and plummeting to the ground
Wait, does Condorito know that Tulio is already dead at the moment of his own death?

Also, I keep seeing the comparison between the airship and Jabba's sand barge, does that include a slave killing Tulio?

>>87753001
I think he'd know when Tulio dies and becomes ecstatic thinking he's now the "president" before getting killed.

And the comparison to Jaba's Pleasure Barge is just to get an idea of what it's function is.
Tulio doesn't keep slaves in chains and metal bikinis, his ability makes everyone a slave to him already, and the "people" who he enslaved do kill him.

>>87753001
V could be hidden on on board the barge as a "sexy slave"

>>87753154
It'd be hard to look sexy with Handsome Tulio around.
He just makes everyone else look dull by comparison.

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>>87754466
>When a character first encounters Tulio, his reaction is like Avdol's when he first meet Dio in Egypt

>>87755420
Only there's no window to jump out of.

So where should we first introduce the Punisher into the story?

Who should he be fighting?

>>87757320
I think during the second half of the US stage, so anywhere between Nowhere and CN City

>>87757579
Would we really want to introduce him at the circus where Loki gets banished/killed/removed from the story?

We could introduce him sooner as maybe a background guy we see someone daring to do something and he's forced to do it in the most extreme way possible.

>>87758746
When Loki is removed, if Frank was watching, he could say that his death saved him time, hinting that he became aware of Loki's own dirty laundry and that he would deal with him after Nobody.

>he's forced to do it in the most extreme way possible
what causes the explosion in Hill Valley's chemical plant? That could work

>>87759069
Could work, yeah. We'd need to set it up some more though.

Like establishing who Frank is after in that given instance.
Maybe the sheriff of Hill Valley City? He's pretty corrupt.

>>87759148
SWAT floods the valley after Nobody uses Paint it Black on Klimer, maybe the explosion happens right after the SWAT teams surround Frank, who has cornered the sheriff.

>>87749820
Ok, seems like a good ideia to use up some of Wander's traits.

I don't think he should be able to save captured racers at the same time though, it would feel like he's a mary sue. Are we actually bringing his mary-sueishness from the show though?

>>87759322
The explosion happens before that though. It's what finally tips the scales of karma enough for Mr. Nobody to be able to do what he wants to do without any story backlash that could possibly compromise his long term objective.

>>87759380
Some racers already get killed before Wander ends up in the same room as Tulio.
While Tulio is busy trying to kill Wander, Sylvia can do a rescue mission for anyone still alive and in cages.
This pisses Tulio off enough to descend into the chaos personally and then his barge turns on him (V possesses it), this allows TOM to hijack it and begin broadcasting, further compromising Tulio's power.

Or at least that's what I just thought up.

>>87759613
We need more interactions beetween characters. Would Sylvia go all on her own or will she end up helping someone else or getting aided by someone else along the way? Maybe one of the protagonists? Maybe someone from there?

That's just an ideia I just thought up.

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Are we going to include Mafalda as some kind of revolucionary leader that is planning to rebel against Tulio or something? Seems like something she would do, plus that rebellious movements are inevitable in this scenario.

Maybe she helps the captured racers. Maybe the protags get captured but are freed by the rebellious forces, which would force them to fight Tulio's forces and get involved in the mess in the first place.

>>87759798
Wander would go caution to the wind infuriating Tulio's ship and Sylvia would go in after him. She could probably meet someone more fight capable while trying to rescue Wander and from there they end up saving whoever Tulio captured but hasn't killed yet because Wander is distracting him.

It should be a rather grim room where there are already some bloody corpses. Maybe Tulio ripped them apart looking for the corpse parts.

>>87759910
Would she be a servant on Tulio's ship or some country person in hiding away from technology to avoid coming under Tulio's influence?

I know nothing about who this girl is.

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>>87760500
She's supposed to be a politically attuned girl from a argetine political cartoon. At the very least she should have some role as an important or well-known politician in there.

I doubt she'd hide away from her radio, which is a recurring object in her comics. That would make her completely and surely alienated with Tulio's manipulation, right? If so, then she could just be on Tulio's side and we could bring her up if we need someone to act as his secretary or something.

Maybe she could take Tulio's place after he loses his power in a epilogue or something. I just think she fits way too well in this scenario and it would be a waste to not even mention her.

>>87761372
She could be someone working for Tulio who was a political opponent before Tulio's broadcast finally came over her radio and brought her under his control.

I'd imagine V or TOM would break her out of TRTN's control and she'd become the leader of the revolution (which ends up very televised).

Since the arc takes place in Chile, someone on Tulio's side should make a reference to the free helicopter rides, or downright toss someone off the airship.

>>87760500
>Tulio: My urge to be complete is growing by the minute, where are they?
>Soldier: My high lord, none of those prisoners were in possession of the relics we are looking for.
>Tulio: I don't need you to point out what I already know and can see, conchetumadre!
>Soldier: Sorry, master. I will…
>Tulio: I need you to catch those gringos, put them down and bring me the parts of the corpse! In fact, since you are so ineffective, you only need to do the first thing: Bring them to me and I will rip them apart with these perfect hands of mine.
>Soldier: Yes, Exalted one.

>>87761063
>Chile being ruled by an argentinian
I choose death!

>>87762231
Maybe Scud gets tossed off of the ship? Does Scud still have the right arm at this point or was it collected by someone working for Mr. Nobody on the way to South America?

Scud would take offense to this and come back for revenge.

>>87762571
I have no idea. Besides the skull and the liver, we haven't discussed what happens with each corpse part between the moment they are acquired and when they are loaded into the Absolution.

>>87762750
There's a conversation between Scud and DAVE that's supposed to happen where Scud reveals his fleshy arm is one of the corpse parts they're tasked to retrieve and DAVE gets mad at him asking why he didn't say so before, and it's because Scud doesn't like DAVE.

That conversation could take place on the Iron Vulture on the way to South America and Scud is forced to hand over the right arm to Mirror Master or someone so that it still looks like Scud and DAVE are effective at their job.

Page 10 bump.

Because someone has to.

And another one before bed.

And that brings up a thought.
At each checkpoint the racers need somewhere to sleep and store their vehicles, yeah? The ones with the Varrick capsules don't need to worry about their vehicles getting sabotaged when they're not looking because they can shrink them down and keep them close.

But the ones without those capsules... they probably have to sleep in their vehicles to keep anyone from messing with them.

Anyway, it's on someone else now to keep the thread up.

>>87761494
I like it.

>>87765039
Looks like /sug/ is coming back to /co/, guys. Expect more page turns than usual.

>>87765667
that could be one of the reasons why some racers went missing in Aberdale: they tried to use the Monster House to pass the night

>>87762956
DAVE is still around after the european stage? when is he retired?

>is forced to hand over the right arm to Mirror Master or someone
There is also the alt-Nobody that is onboard the ship

>>87767897
I'm for DAVE gets killed when Scud blows because they were fighting at the time.

>>87769893
During the endgame then?

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Are Flash cartoons allowed?

User: "Dr." Tran
Stand Name: SECRET AGENT MAN

SECRET AGENT MAN is a disembodied voice that periodically makes itself heard in close proximity to its user, a small, kindergarten-aged Asian boy named Tran. It replicates the voice of a man in a trailer for an Action film, listing various violent and action-packed escapades that Tran supposedly has performed and/or lived through (such as the idea that he is a licensed Doctor or that he has murdered his own mother with a broken lawn chair), all of which he obviously never has.
Normally, these insinuations have no affect other than confusion for Tran and those around him. However, as Tran becomes more and more distressed and angry at SECRET AGENT MAN, reality begins to alter as though what the voice has said is the truth. This can manifest itself in ways as benign as Tran suddenly being dressed as a cowboy, all the way up to Tran suddenly being in a massively destructive robot suit that is completely out of control. Tran has very little to no control over these distortions, but the level of severity of them is directly proportional to his level of distress at SECRET AGENT MAN's insinuations.

>>87770279
the Stand's name was used in part 3

>>87770862
Well shit, then the stand list needs to be updated.

How about "DR. FEELGOOD"

>>87767762
We really need to establish who the racers are that get disappeared.

>>87767897
And how do you think the alt-Nobody got on the ship?
Mirror Master.

They hand off the arm and get told to stay out of this big guy's way as he does his job.

Later on Scud can tell Hex or Pym about this and they become aware that their trip into banana hell was intentionally caused by the Dada Party.

>>87766659
Bump then.

>>87770076
I think DAVE will be out of the picture by the time we get to Scud blowing up since he does so while clinging to Stardust.

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>Pym disappears for a portion of the story
>reappears in a bitchin' trench coat and pulls a chain saw out of his pocket to save someone
honestly potentially the best CoCo

>>87773873
Would that be something better suited for later in the story, or something he could do during Aberdale while fighting the zombie wood controlled by The Beast?

>>87774245
I'd say later, after some event makes Pym disillusioned.

>>87775522
So after Rorschach's death then.

But still, there's no better place in the story for him to go all Evil Dead then in Aberdale.

>>87776006
How does he shrink the chainsaw? did he tinkered with the prize handed in the first stage?

>>87777348
Yes he does.

I like to have it so the one Spongebob had ends up in someone else's hands after he dies.

Maybe Navis investigates Spongebob's body since she did witness the fight from a distance.

>>87771688
>We really need to establish who the racers are that get disappeared
are those going to be just background racers or important characters? Haddock is already playing a role in that part, but I don't know when he enters the graveyard

>>87779301
We don't know. I don't know. I'm not one to suggest characters getting killed off like that.
There's no point in killing characters just for the sake of killing characters.

We have a bridge that blows up on the way to checkpoint one, that's supposed to knock some racers out of the race, but I don't think it'd really kill all that many of them since then the race would not be allowed to progress.
There's a hoard of plant zombies that attack Aberdale for one night, who survives that?

The race is a big public spectacle, if racers start dying, that's a problem for the race runners since it's broadcast live.

In all honesty, phase 1 of the race would be a poor time for mass death in the ranks of the racers. Lots of them die for various reasons, but I don't think there should be a bunch who die all at once until Tulio.

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>>87770279
>>87770949

I like this idea for a one-shot fight. The battle gets worse and worse until they realize that Tran getting upset only makes the reality distortions worse, so they have to either calm down or knock out an innocent kindergartener.

>>87780504
Given who most of our racers are, they'd probably knock him out.

Or just leave him where he is an continue to the next checkpoint, citing him as not their problem.

>>87780504
we have wander as well. He can just... be a friend to him to calm his shit and depower his stand. assuming the voice doesn't try and override power of helpfulness.

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This is pretty interesting. Keep up the good work.

>>87784079
It's slow right now, but progress is still being made.

Well, bumping before bed.

at the end of the smallville arc when it details the Chief Blue Meanie demise, Does that takes place in the same arc or he dies later on?

>>87787052
I think he dies later.

We really should establish the Blue Meanie in the story before he dies after losing the mean part of his identity.

>>87789196
I recall that he was suggested to be the president's bodyguard, and in the doc his Stand is attributed to be part of how Nobody won the election (though that's old info).

>>87780659
>>87780504
Maybe some of them (Wander, Tempo, Goofy or Luigi as Mama Luigi) try to calm him down, but then someone just knocks him down (maybe Shocker, if he's still in the race at this point). We could also try using someone with a Stand capable of calming down people or knocking them down effortlessly.

>>87790811
Shocker is out of the picture after passing through Nowhere

>>87789699
How far into the story do we need the Blue Meanie to last?

How far into the story should the Beetles go? The whole reason they're in this is because of a joke or pun or something situational about a city in Arizona.
Do the Beetles still need to be in the race after Smallville? Do they stay there to protect the feeling of love there from other people like the Blue Meanie?
Would that put anything towards Wander's development in the story?

>>87792190
I don't know, one of the main complaints is that the story shouldn't reach the climax with too many characters around, on the other hand, killing a bunch in one swing would feel cheap.
If the reason of his undoing is being befriended by Wander, and he has a small sub-plot in France, then the Blue Meanie could be retired during the european stage.

>>87792549
So we retire the Blue Meanie in Paris. He's responsible for stealing cats for whatever reason, maybe to hold hem for ransomed or as hostages for leverage trying to get to Frollo.

I think we should retire The Beetles in Smallville, they decide to drop out of the race because they found their jam in this small town and don't want to lose it, and also because they want to protect that feeling of love in the air from people like the Blue Meanie if he should ever return.

Smallvillie is after Arizona, so whatever thing someone wanted to do with the Beetles can be taken care of by then.

>>87793526
So his first encounter with Wander messed him up and from then onwards he becomes more unstable and dangerous until Wander befriends him during his mission in France, and this erases a portion of his identity, which causes him to dissolve for some reason (that last part needs some elaboration).
The Chief Blue Meanie probably decides to held them hostages due to his deranged state, which is further worsened after hearing some local music, at that point he's no longer thinking rationally.

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>>87794165
Yeah, that sounds good. The part with him losing it and being deranged in Paris I mean.

Let's take a "Jeff" approach with the Blue Meanie.
Jeff, from Wander Over Yonder,
>"Yeah, it's crazy, man. It was like he wanted me to hate him at first. When he eventually wore me down and we became friends, I realized that if I learned to like this one thing I used to hate, then what was the point of hating all the other stuff I hated?"

When the Blue Meanie is finally befriended by Wander, he loses his meanie-ness and ceases to be the Blue Meanie. He then turns into someone or something else entirely.

When Mr. Nobody sees what became of him after his de-mean-ification he'd probably react something like
>"Feeding stray cats while on the job, huh? Good man."
Something like in this page, and after that he wouldn't bat an eye about one of his cabinet guys not showing up for work anymore.

>>87626930

Alright, besides fighting Loki monster-sized Stand, what else happens in Springfield? Who is in this circus?

>>87794596
I assumed that "causing his existence to cease" meant biting the dust

>>87797725
It's Jojo''s circus, so Jojo would be there. I don't know much about her or her show though.

There should be circus performers who are overrunning the town causing havoc. Maybe Loki is turning everyone into clowns for some reason.

>>87789196
There should be time to show of his Stand ｢Nue!」and maybe show him in the Presidents office in a flashback.

>>87793526
I'd be cool if the Beatles showed up again in the final (as a nod to "Ticket to Ride" playing a role in the final of SBR) and did something like take the surviving characters home in their flying submarine so they can "get back to where they once belonged". Though that's mostly me being a huge Beatles fan.

>>87798411
Maybe the harness the power of love in Smallville and contact the Hero's spirit to help save the racers from Stardust?

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>>87798411
Blue Meanie's Stand is based on Agent ! power, who was able to "come as no surprise", here's a good example of his power.

>>87798463
Is the Hero's spirit still around? I assumed the Corpse only contained the captive Stardust (and a shit-ton of powers)

Here's a thought. The official prize given out by ACME at CN City are the ACME Portable Holes.

>>87800185
They could summon him with the power of positive energy.

Now what could they use a portable hole for?

Would it be good for more than one use? Is it based off of Plucky's stand's original power?

I'm sure Wander could find all kinds of uses for a portable hole, but if he put it in his hat, there'd be no end to the trouble that would cause.

>>87668466
The beam attracted the Star near the Earth’s orbit or it made it fall towards the Earth?

On a related note, I read the canon story of the Heart of Atlantis, and it turns out it was the fragment of a comet. Maybe in this setting the Heart is a fragment of the Star that splintered off the first time the Star was close to Earth.

>>87798092
There is a Stand suggestion for her in the doc, though it was originally for part 5. The circus was first suggested as a group of Corpse guardians but I'm pretty sure we dropped that element

>>87803731
The beam attracted the Wishing Star to Earth, the Wishing Star wasn't on a course to Earth until after the beam shot past it.

And yeah, their role as corpse part guardians has been dropped unless there's a part we haven't placed yet that we need to work into the story.
At least then Loki would have a reason for messing with them.

>>87804225
>unless there's a part we haven't placed yet that we need to work into the story
The other arm was mentioned in the previous thread along with the left eye, though they could be part of the collection that Nobody and co obtained behind the scenes.
Speaking of the parts, are we gonna showcase the Super Rod's ability to grant Stands?

>>87805196
Which corpse part is in Rio? I've been told Mr. Nobody already had the heart.
The left eye could be in Rio and the left arm could be in the safe keeping of the circus on display as one of their curiosities.

As for the super rod, when would we have time to demonstrate that and who would be the demonstration?

>>87805385
I'm not sure if we agreed upon Nobody being in possession of the heart (I suggested that as a parallel to Valentine).

>when would we have time to demonstrate that and who would be the demonstration?
Could be in a flashback, being used on a member of his cabinet, or in the present with a henchman and arc villain.

>>87805554
A flashback might be more likely.

One of his Dada Party members is about to die and has a flashback to their life and how shitty it was until they met Mr. Nobody, then it was all smiles and fun times, which might allow them to die in peace.

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Does anyone have that page from a recent DC comic with some guy and Bizarro, and it looks like Bizarro is a stand?

Does TOM's [Space Oddity] still bare a resemblance to SARA? Because she just got a new form.

>>87672183
that'd be cool

Here's my bump before bed.

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>>87806085
Yeah, that would be better than Nobody running around and stabbing people with a mummified dick
>Everything was going downhill until the president gave me a dicking, he-hehe...
>He dies with a smile on his face

>>87808369
yes, one of her full body appearances

>>87806680
here's one

>>87778775
We could use that. The more things we connect together, the better. Also, we need to think up some more of the background plot stuff that happens during the race. Let me recall some of the stuff that will happen during the race.

>US Leg
Nobody goes to Hill Valley City to meet George and ends up painting him black.
While passing through Springfield, some racers are attacked by Springfield residents (maybe in a hunting season way) to try and steal their vehicles. People soon discover that stealing identities is prohibited in the race. (if I remember right, the Simpsons were suggested for this part on the docs, plus Homer got a new suggestion recently)

>Latin America Leg
Tulio attacks the race and captures some racers. Nobody's forces are involved in this because of the Skull corpse part.
In Rio, Monica is guarding the Heart corpse part, which brings up Nobody's minions or/and people concerned with the corpse parts.

>Europe Leg
Melusine takes care of the race and ends up battling Rex because he refuses to exit the race.
Wizard Daffy goes to Leterally's mansion to try to find remainings of his [identity].

>Moon Leg
The Wishing Star is finally revealed.
Nobody fuses all the corpse parts and frees Stardust.

That's what I could remember for now. Is this on point?

>>87803646
Yes, that should happen.

>>87813714
>>Everything was going downhill until the president gave me a dicking, he-hehe...
>>He dies with a smile on his face
This is great. We should have one of the Dada guys say that lone sentence before he dies.

>>87814162
Out of order, but yeah, all of that is happening still.

There's a bunch of other stuff to which is all either on the doc or new in this thread.

>>87813714
I'm all for that.