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/Co/Co/'s Bizarre Adventure

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MAIN TOPIC: Focus on phase 1 of Part 7

Stand Suggestions are OPEN!

>What's this?
Collab /co/ project of JJBA-based stories made out of /co/ stuff.

READ THESE LINKS BEFORE CONTRIBUTING YOUR AUTISM
(ALSO, try not to suggest 1:1 copies of stuff in JJBA)

>Canon Stand Info
http://jojo.wikia.com/wiki/Stand
http://jojo.wikia.com/wiki/List_of_Stands

>Stands Doc
https://docs.google.com/document/d/14_R9UFLN28p0gcpJWiXHztmrhdSswFbsi9H8uhnFrIs/edit

>Every part, in order
1 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IdBYK9zXpJrDc4vAIHnRLmZpPiKyxiIkj25oOTaaeF0
2 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KA0-Y_HnU_m6V5pwZ7fEtqGMnwm43NrshzANTcCxr34
3 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hDbP7BA0XBP3_3GW0uphroYjQdcW1EW5b37w-r_lsaI
4 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zn-D4aD-cBBfpBtfTLmVM_D9C1cGPYgDYRl_CCGbnsw
5 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UNm7KLXgWF0LMxCCq3VZ3O_VJ8vEqj7d22RjnDqVIEg
6 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1l9034tpMm4EdF1NGzisA2bCXBDvUbx_vTR69hXjp_iY
7 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SDhmnLrv5dtVAZx2ewx1JKTsZVoXkE8LRw-8rK2gyhQ
8 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/10wx78PDHPNMygoTbFvihjTjPF-DwP1Ced8XKT3YNzUQ
>Sidestories
CC - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1JKNelCoRNbFcSjF8vwha4zaIimnTpMBDTq-gj_GP930
HM - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xNRsbONv9Vs-w9VF0yIhhMPwM6vFMoZN90qMaNI-2dc
MS - https://docs.google.com/document/d/16C58D-OHgdjjtuX_Bhyv_TSv0mGcASsbyTwcclPaK8A

>Phantom Scare: Chapter 1
http://pastebin.com/bsmui6f7

>/Co/Co/ Comic
https://cobizarrecomic.wordpress.com/

>Images
http://ccbabooru.booru.org

>Fighting Game
https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/0B-Td-mSKpaCvUjdWM0MxUEU2QTQ

>Voice Impressions (some expired)
http://pastebin.com/DcZUTVx1

>/Co/Co/ playlist:「THE SHOW MUST GO ON」
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLLWEiXuZ9FOaYfU_0hIoo6qadB1yEO_Km

>Plus4chan thread
http://boards.plus4chan.net/coc/t52034.html
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Stands for review from the previous thread
>>87910551
>>87770279
>>87726357
>>87676505
>>87676412
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Here are some useful stuff posted in the last thread at its last bits.
>>87919077
>>87919427
>>87919643

Also, I wanted to know, what's the series the guy from pic related is from?
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>>87922272
Mother Up, I think it's called.

I'm trying to get the part 7 doc updated. Discussion being all over the place on every section of the part makes that difficult.
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>>87922008
I agree with the suggestions people made about [ONE LAST TIME]. Instead of stealing memories, he should copy them, and D.A.V.E doesn't have any way of manipulating them. His sturdy, mechanical body and keen artificial mind should be his primary strengths. Even if he can't get his hands on one of the Protags, he could still be very dangerous if he gets his hands on someone they've fought, and learns from their memories how to counter or workaround the Protags abilities.
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>>87921848
I have some Stand/Stand user ideas:

>User: Brian Griffin (Family Guy)
>Name: [D-O-DOUBLE-G] or [D-O-G-G]
>Appearance: A large humanoid with tree bark-like skin, horns, and claws
>Effect: [D-O-DOUBLE-G] creates toxin-secreting vines that attack anyone who's been exposed to marijuana smoke within the last 6 hours (people who smoked pot 7 hours ago or 6 hours and 1 second ago are unaffected); the toxins kill the targets over a 24 minute period (if Brian/[D-O-G-G] is defeated, the toxins disappear). Interestingly, [D-O-G-G] appears to be actively hostile (but not enough to kill him) towards Brian and basically does what it wants. While [D-O-G-G] is active, Brian is in a vulnerable, unresponsive "stoned" state. [D-O-G-G]'s goal is to control Brian completely, a reference to his own self-loathing over being a failed writer.
>Stats:
>Destructive Power: A
>Speed: D
>Range: B
>Durability: B
>Precision: A
>Development Potential: E

The idea of the [STAND] is to turn what seems like a joke character into a genuine threat. Brian also carries around pot and a lighter at all times so his [STAND] can actually be effective.

>User: Megatron (Beast Wars)
>Name: [ANTICHRIST SUPERSTAR]
>Appearance: A white, malnourished-looking, nine-headed reptilian humanoid
>Effect: Traps the target in an "anti-world" where everything is opposite (up is down, left is right, etc.); [ANTICHRIST SUPERSTAR] appears in the anti-world every 6 minutes to attack the target. The anti-world can only contain one target at a time.
>Stats:
>Destructive Power: B
>Speed: A
>Range: C
>Durability: E
>Precision: A
>Development Potential: D
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>>87922428
I'm not sure about the abilities, but I liked one of the old ideas where One Last Time was able to talk using lines from songs of The Megas.
http://desuarchive.org/co/thread/80409505/#q80423507
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>>87922371
I wasn't able to add in any of that banana man stuff since I didn't know where in the story he was supposed to appear at.
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Since we are focusing on the first part, this is what needs to be defined before the start of the race:
-The meeting in Nobody's office
-The interviews before the race (who else is interviewed?)
-Nobody's welcome and explanation of the prize
-TOM explaining the race's rules in detail
-Serenity's introduction
-The initial clash in the starting line

And some other stuff related to the character's list:
-The name of Navis' Stand
-The appearance of Goofy and Tulio's Stands
-Voya Nui's corpse guardian
-Chameleon Stand
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>>87925094
Alright, so the meeting in Mr. Nobody's office.

Should they be playing a game of mini-golf?
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>>87925148
>He is playing alone, no one else seems interested to partake in the game since there is more pressing matters
>However, Nobody forced one of them to dress up and be his caddie
>As Nobody talks, everyone is following the balls with their eyes until Nobody calls their attention
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>>87925327
You'd think a couple of them would be into it. Watching with baited breath as the ball approaches the makeshift glass cup hole.

Killinger is probably instructing Mr. Nobody on form and posture.
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>>87921848
Here's a suggestion:

> User: Mr. Peabody (Mr. Peabody and Sherman)
> Name: [Time Waits for No One]
> Appearance: A slender humanoid with dog-like features and a monochrome color scheme
> Effect: [TWFNO] can teleport those in its range to different time periods, usually he sends them if he senses danger around them (it'll usually be attackers) [TWFNO] can also create rips in time to pull out historic figures for assistance, like advice, supplies, or defense. It can send the figure back to its era if Mr. Peabody no longer needs their assistance, he/she tries to kill the user, or the user itself dies.
> Stats:
> Destructive Power: E
> Speed: B
> Range: B
> Durability: C
> Precision: B
> Development Potential: A
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>>87925470
Which of the members are visible in that scene? Killinger is already at Nobody's side and Mélusine is identified during the meeting, but who remains blacked out?
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>>87927014
Easier to say who isn't blacked out.

I have limited knowledge of Mirror Master (limited to the JLU cartoon), but I'd say he's established from the get-go. I could see him getting engrossed in the game.

If someone was being a stick in the mud about the office mini-golf, I'd say it'd be Dr. Destiny. So he's the caddie.

Killinger should golf clap when Mr. Nobody nails it.
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Threads made by me have a track record of not surviving the night, so here's a bump before bed.
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morning bump
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what a cancer general
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I really want to suggest something, but it's hard getting back into the groove of everything being discussed at the moment. Have this bump.
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>>87931351
Not like we don't have time.
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>>87931351
Just read the doc, it's relatively small right now, so you can catch up in less than an hour.
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>>87932499
I don't. I'll be able to help with more stuff in some weeks more or less. Now, I can only pitch some small ideias, rate some others and deliver bumps.
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>>87927136
Speaking of Doctor Destiny, where else he could play a role? He is the less freshed out of the brotherhood along with The Fog stand-in (if we are using it)
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>>87933548
Well I suggested last thread that he could be the face guy for the Dada Party, as in the guy who does anything too boring for Mr. Nobody to do himself.
Or does anything that actually needs to be done that Mr. Nobody would turn into a game.

Mr. Nobody doesn't actually care if something is boring or not, he only cares if something boring can be made strange. He differs from The Warden in that respect since The Warden hated anything boring.
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>>87933770
so he's the no nonsense guy in the cabinet?
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>>87933807
As no-nonsense as the nonsense party can allow.

He's still a weirdo.
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>>87925094
The interviews are a good time to also introduce Rex, Navis, Aunt May, and anyone else who we need to introduce.
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>>87936073
Should we introduce Aunt May there or keep her incognito?
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>>87936468
We introduce her as a racer there, but don't reveal she's working for Mr. Nobody until later.
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>>87937213
Maybe Crazy Jane kills her in Rio in retaliation for what she did to Cliff.
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>>87938001
Before or after siding with Nobody?
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>>87936468
She doesn't do much in the US leg, so yes, we should feature her in there.

Also, we were going to pair Goofy and Backslide in the interview, which Goofy is shy about (probably becaus of his true intentions?) and Backslide is mostly ignored (possibly because of his Stand's power of reversing other people's attention towards him). Who could we pair Aunt May with?
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>>87939520
Could be Dick, Rex or Navis
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>>87939520
We're not so much pairing them in the interviews as they are happening one after the other.

Goofy could just be plain old regular camera shy.
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>>87939819
he also has a sudden mood shift when asked about his reason for entering the race
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>>87939859
Yeah, that's in the doc.

So what are the stock questions racers are getting asked?
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>>87940018
>Why they entered the race?
>Do they have a sponsor?
>Some info about their car or mount

Dunno what else
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>>87940076
I think they'd start with their names.

Goofy is barely able to get his name out, but then sobers up fast when asked why he's entered in the race.
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The interviews would probably be a "meet the racers" type of deal. They wouldn't spend too much time on any given racer since many of them probably won't make it to the first checkpoint.

Rex should trip all of the "not going to make it" flags by being boastful, hogging the camera, and being generally arrogant. Yet he still manages to place well for a while since he actually is as good as he brags to be.
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>>87941582
If Hex is interviewed, he just responds "none of your business" and move away from the camera as he tries to spot Shocker's place in the starting line
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>>87941697
When Jack gets the camera put in his face he should say "Oh, I'm... Jack." then glances over to Pym who is being show-off-y in front of another camera and narrows his eyes a little "Just Jack."
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When Aunt May gets interviewed she should come off as some unassuming old lady. I keep thinking she'd be like Granny from Looney Toons where she seems sweet, but then she gets behind the wheel and becomes a speed demon.
He car would have those exhaust pipes that look like fins coming up from behind it and they'd shoot fire.
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During Stan Lee's monologue before devouring Backslide's soul, V should start spazzing out wherever he is hiding due to all those alliterations

>>87943460
Her vehicle is a van according to the doc
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>>87943594
I left a note saying we do need to modify it for it to work for the context. If nothing else, it'll serve for inspiration. I didn't know if we were using Stan Lee as a background guy anywhere else in this part, so I didn't add that into the doc.

And I've been picturing Aunt May's ride as something with big western spoked wheels and some kind of drop down top.
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>>87943669
In the previous thread it was suggested that there is a bunch of Stan Lees running around in San Fransokyo performing different jobs, like those little guys in Steel Ball Run
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>>87943460
So it's just like that time Aunt May was Spiderman? We should probably reference this somehow.
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>>87943966
No, it was suggested that he'd be EVERYWHERE all over the world.

I didn't know if we were actually doing that or not.

Personally I think the joke gets old as soon as he sucks the life out of Dan. If he shows up again after that then readers would expect him to do something.

>>87944241
Maybe Aunt May is with the Dada Party because Peter is either dead, critically injured, or just never comes to see her anymore. Now she's out to erase the concept of heroes thinking that'll do something.
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Seething complainsome strumpet, up with you.

How much of a womanizer are we gonna have Rex be?
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>giant autistic crossover at the end where all the CoCos team up
>Courage and Pym get along strangely well and team up during fights
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>>87948382
Is that part of the plot of the final side story or the end of part 8 where the fictional setting is coming apart and the narrative constructs that make a story become moot points?

Anyway, last bump from me before bed.
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>>87950433
There was an idea that after all the parts, all the heroes come together for one final story called "Eyes of Autism".
Which reminds me how awesome custom team up dialogue in the fighting game would be.

>>87947525
Probably have him think he's a better womanizer then he actually is.
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>>87950433
I think it was the side story

>>87950843
He flirts with Melusine as she bombards him with lightning?
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And in related news, Stan Lee devoured Fidel Castro's soul
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>>87952125
>>87950843
So who is he flirting with at the starting line?
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>>87955548
>inb4 all of them even Aunt May
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>>87955601
Aunt May has been hot in a lot of her incarnations.

Which version are we using here?
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>>87945004
Yes, let's have her wanting to erase the concept of heroism so heroes stop risking their life so much or something.
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>>87957005
So she wants to keep people safe?
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>>87954311
I don't think he got much out of that.
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>>87956871
I dunno, I always assumed we are using her typical white-haired granny appearance.

>>87958065
yeah, blowing up any racer that interferes with Nobody's plan
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>>87959356
Aunt May has always been kind of ruthless, hasn't she?

Didn't she once poison someone who was impersonating Peter?
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>>87960489
She's can be a real fucking monster.
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>>87961829
Yes, this is the Aunt May we should be using. Polite, curt, and utterly ruthless.

Do the Chameleon and Shocker know each other in part 7? Would Chameleon offer Shocker a job with the promise of getting that bounty hunter off his back only for Shocker to decline?
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>>87962219
Chameleon first appear in CN City, though in previous parts characters from the same series knew each other (like the Eds and Kevin).
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>>87962338
Chameleon is supposed to be in the race, so we should introduce him sooner than CN City.

Introduce him at the interviews then have a scene in Aberdale where he makes an offer to Shocker who rejects it.
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>>87962371
Right, I forgot. Car and Stand aren't listed in the doc.
What should be his disguise during the race?
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>>87962588
If the car and stand aren't listed on the doc then that means he doesn't have either yet.

That means we need to come up with something for him. Maybe the scene in Mr. Nobody's office ends with him penetrating some guy they brought in with the super D and that guy is Chameleon.
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>>87962708
There is one in the Stand doc:
>User: Dmitri Smerdyakov (Marvel’s Chameleon)
>Stand:「ELEANOR RIGBY」
>Vehicle: 「Revolver」
>Appearance: A long, slender figure draped in a patchwork cloak. While mostly black, the cloak has various colors shapes on it that resemble a stained glass window. The Stand's "face" is completely blank.
>Ability: Steals a person’s face and store it in a jar that it seems to hide underneath it's cloak. The faces shrink into tiny pieces of paper shaped like the face will inside the jar. When the user wears one of these faces, they take on the exact physical properties of the face’s original owner. This includes height, weight, smell, and voice. The person from whom the face was stolen now has a blank area where their face was, and are essential brain dead. The user is also able to place faces on these blank people, essentially transferring their consciousness from one body to another. As a last resort, Smerdyakov can have 「ELEANOR RIGBY」place his own face on another body, allowing him to live another day.
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>>87962869
That's a rather grim ability.
There needs to be more conditions for stealing a face or else it's too OP.
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>>87963036
exhausting the target to a certain point?
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>>87963295
I was thinking he'd have to trick the target into believing they're looking at a mirror when it's the Chameleon just wearing a disguise.

If he can fool someone into thinking he's their reflection, then he can take their face.
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For writing Pym
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kZyu5Kjhv0U
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What should the Chameleon's default look be?
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>>87965872
You mean without a disguise? the one from the comics
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>>87966336
He and Hex need to trad jabs at each other over having fucked up faces.
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What are the encounters in CN City?

>>87966580
>"at least there is some symmetry here, cowboy"
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>>87967073
The one nerdy kid with the robot from Batman Beyond, Chameleon, and Punisher.

The rough outline for it is on the doc.
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Page 10 bump, because someone has to do it.
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So, Aunt May is in the race as an old lady or as Spider Ma'am?
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>>87970999
She's supposed to be unassuming, so old lady version.
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>Not a single mention of Jay Sherman anywhere
>Even in his suit

You people DISGUST ME.

「NOTHINGS GONNA STOP ME NOW」
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I new toonami comic went up tonight.

It makes me realize we need to give TOM more cool moments in part 7.
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Last bump from me before bed.
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>>87976253
He plays an important role in Tulio's arc and probably during Stardust's rampage
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Morning Bump
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>Someone asks TOM how old his girlfriend, Serenity, is, and is told to shut up
How old is she again?
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>>87981419
Old enough to date robots.
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>>87982091
Scud should comment on that.
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>>87973954
There's still potential for him to be in part 8 though. Part 8 is supposed to be about asshole artists anyway.
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Did we agreed on the powerup that Dan Backslide received from Loki?

>>87984028
The robot priest from futurama is also in the refugee town, he should react upon hearing it
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>>87985535
No, we have not.

What should it be? What is Loki capable of usually?
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>>87985772
it was suggested to be an upgrade to his Stand's power. I don't know if any of the ideas tossed were approved
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>>87987101
How about we give him a new different power instead of expanding on the one he currently has?
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Maybe Dan gains a power that causes riots to break out around him where, as long as he's already taken damage, anyone who tries to fight him will end up beating up someone else.
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So Dan Backslide, after meeting Loki, is still probably drunk and goes around instigating fights with the racers or just random people in the streets.

It spreads into the parade, which Loki has hijacked to lead to where Dan is.

This new levels of chaos is what attracts Sam and Max to the street brawl.
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Threads are just dropping down the page listing like a stone.

Need more than one person to bounce ideas around.
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Wow, this is really dead today.
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>>87993286
Yeah, it's a slow day
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>>87993286
things will get better
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Before the start of the race, TOM says that he will do "a little snooping around" and at one point in the european stage he learns about Nobody's plan and struck a deal with him, does that means that he is doing his own investigation during the race?
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>>87993734
He wants to know what Mr. Nobody is really up to, but for no other greater purpose other than his own suspicions.

So, being the race commentator, he's in a position to ask around. Serenity is in a position to do some spying as well.
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So should it be TOM or Serenity who gets caught snooping around eventually?
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>>87995818
If TOM's deal with Nobody involves Serenity's wellbeing, she's probably the one that was caught spying. However, she was probably doing it on her own account, I don't think TOM would order her to do that.
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>>87995972
She probably saw TOM doing some snooping and decided to do some of her own in a more direct, less discrete manner.
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Where was TOM supposed to be during the race? In the same transport than Nobody's group or in his own ride?
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>>87997953
I think in a blimp flying over the racers (a smaller blimp than the Iron Vulture). The Clydes fly in and out of it with their cameras to get all the action and Mélusine also uses it as a rest stop and where she stays between legs of the race.

Mr. Nobody and the other Dada Party members could pop in and out whenever they want somehow.
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>>87926808
He's a villain right?

Also just sending the victim to a different time period is pretty random. Why not be in specific places in time?
Make it a fight that gets located in one place. A one-off fight.
Maybe a historical site? A civil war battleground?

>>87941582
You guys aren't going to introduce everyone's stands so fast right? You're gonna leave an air of mystery as to what their abilities are?
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>>87998862
Of course we are.

Why would we introduce a character's stand at the starting line when there's a camera in their face? Only an idiot would reveal their abilities for all the world to see, and on top of that, surrounded by people who very shortly can and will be trying to kill you.
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>>87999054
You know, I wasn't trying to be sarcastic, but I feel it'll come off as that since I mistyped the "aren't".

I doubt we'll learn what Rex's stand even is until Fantastic Island since he won't be too much in focus until phase 2 of the race.

During the first leg of the race, the only stand powers we're seeing at Dan Backslide, Spongebob, possibly Shocker, and Goofy's, and none of their abilities are going to be explicitly stated to be the cause of a stand. Stand's don't even get an in-universe explanation in this part until the first checkpoint.
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>>87998862
Well they get send off randomly, he doesn't know where they go exactly, though they'll mostly end up in dangerous moments in history, like natural disasters or wars, one example is that one can be teleported to the 1940's and end up in Japan (forgot to mention that the effects of [TWFNO] also teleports the victim to different locations in time) where the bombing of Hiroshima occurs.
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Last bump from me before bed.

>>88000318
That's some "Do you know what killed the dinosaurs?" tier shit.
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First bump after bed.

Good thing some useful discussion happened yesterday. Keep it up.

>>88000318
We should use it to take them back to a 1960's or Cold War cartoon then (something like the "Booby Trap" cartoon maybe) or maybe just back to an important moment from the other /Co/Co/ parts.
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>>87987153
Seems good since he probably actually would want to change his Stand. Maybe Loki offers him to either upgrate his Stand or change it completely and Dan decides he can't take any more of the attention reversion ability. There was another suggestion for his Stand in one of the past threads, but depending on what we need, we could just create a new power ourselves, like >>87988529 suggested.

>>87990390
Looks good enough to me.

>>88001143
Thinking about it now, maybe we should just make the Stand be able to go back to dangerous moments that happened on a specific place. Like, he would need to stand in a concentration camp to emulate what happened there. He would fit best as a villain in the Europe leg, though I don't know which place he would choose in the race. Maybe a nazi bomb factory like the one that appears on that one Donald Duck cartoon?

>>87996508
That's good. But what Nobody does to people he finds snooping around? She has a good chance of being painted black if she actually gets caught.
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>Stand user: Vic Sage/The Question
>Stand name: [GOODBYE MR A] (Hoosiers song)
>Appearance: Mr. A (Steve Ditko character)
>Ability: [GOODBYE MR A] will determine whether a person or object is [GOOD] or [EVIL]. If something is determined to be [GOOD], its positive traits will be strongly exaggerated as long as the Stand is active; if it is [EVIL], its negative traits will be likewise exaggerated. For example, a person determined to be [GOOD] will become incredibly strong, handsome and intelligent, while an [EVIL] person would become weaker and uglier.
>While [GOODBYE MR A] will mostly obey Sage's commands, it is technically an independent Stand; it has a much stricter outlook and may act on its own.
>Role: Who fucking knows. Probably an antagonist.
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>>88002193
No, taking things back to other past parts is too much. Time travel is no good in a story if characters get sent back to earlier parts of the established story without them having already been there when that past part was he present.

This is why I hate time travel in most mediums, it's just thrown in at the last moment when if it was going to be a thing, then it should've always been a thing.

>>88002396
Replying to no one but me there.

In regards to Mr. Peabody, maybe his stand sends a person back in time at their current location to a time where their current location will kill them.
If they can survive whatever thing happened at that location, then they get a shot of coming back to the present and kicking the dog.

As for Serenity, maybe she doesn't get caught until she starts to tell TOM about what she found out and that's when Mr. Nobody overhears them or one of the Dada Party members hears her telling TOM something they shouldn't know. Enter Mr. Nobody and TOM having to make a deal with him. Preferably Serenity shouldn't know that they got caught.
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>>88002396
I found this one in the last thread >>87651825
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>>88005739
If she eavesdrop Nobody, She could also catch a glimpse of one of his alt versions before running away.
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>>88006152
There we go. The alternate Mr. Nobody-s. I think that'll happen in Paris, so we could do with a few scenes of her snooping around during phase 1 and only seeing Mr. Nobody doing weird things for reasons only known to him.
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I designed this stand from the new steven universe character. Flash of the blade is a stand that can increase the light reflection on any object turning simple as a flash light into a blinding ray of light. Mostly I see him using it with his airplane in dog fights to beat his opponents. Working on a stand for reaper as well from overwatch.

If interested in more or just ideas let the rune lord know.
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>>88007230
It's not bad, but SU characters have been banned from this project.
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>>88007230
Looks good enough. Thanks for the artwork by the way.

>>88008932
Well, we did say in some past threads that obscure SU characters could be used as long as they weren't 'tumblr' or 'waifu' related and kept minor. Also, Andy is something /co/ seems to approve even though it comes from SU.

Plus that he has the same voice actor as Carl from ATHF, so we might think something clever with that.

I could see him either replacing Melusine if she ever gets retired in part 7 or just as an ally against the Church of Gaming in part 8.
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>>88009541
I'm not willing to open the floodgates on this after seeing what I've seen in these threads over the past seven months.
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>>88009541
Thanks for the kind words but if su characters are not allowed I will follow the rules. I guess I could try some artwork for the others.

Rune Lord
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>The current /co/llab is based off a japanese anime
>The OCs are literally sonic recolor tier
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>>88011646
>Current
No, this is six months ago's /co/llab that a few people are struggling to finish.
Also, what OCs?
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>>88011646
There are no OC's whatsoever. Nothing but /co/ characters with crazy looking ghost summons.
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>>88005739
Well I don't think victims of [TWFNO] would be teleported to previous parts, but instead be transported to the most dangerous locations in time like a concentration camp or a Vietnam War battlefield.
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>>88013137
I think it should be more limited. It can only send someone to Naziland if the target is already standing somewhere that used to be Naziland.

It picks the most dangerous time of the target's location and sends them there. It should have a limited range so there's actually a chance for the target to escape the falling meteorite, or the great flood, or the volcano exploding, or the atomic bomb going off.
If they get far enough away from the location they were at when they were sent back in time then they end up back in the present.
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>>88010314
Yes please. We're kinda needing some more artwork for this project lately.
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>>88010314
Art is always appreciated.
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>>88013908
We'll I am open to ideas I mostly do paper and pencil but I am trying to get more digital.

Rune lord
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>>88015285
Digital is what most anons prefer, but paper is fine too.
Could you do one of the characters from part 7? It is the one we are currently writing. You can find a list of the characters we have in the part 7 doc in the OP, if you want.

Also, if you want to use a name, you can put it in the Name box when you make a post.
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>>88013806
That could work, and if Mr. Peabody sees that [TWFNO]'s victim has survived, he can summon a historic warrior, like Genghis Khan, to take care of the problem.
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So, how does the racers end up in the backs of the kaiju?
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>>88019274
I'm pretty sure it's in the doc that they arrive via the water entrance right when the kaiju get off work and are heading into the bar. So while whoever is on the water is going to the water entrance, the kaiju rise up from under them and they end up on top of them.

Anyone who got across the bridge and took the land entrance would still need to either scale the 5 story bar counter or hitch a ride up on a kaiju to get to the finish line.
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>>88019274
They said the kaiju segment had something to do with a old /co/ thread about kaiju stuff, I think. I don't have it now, but I can say it should probably be based on that.

How is the kaiju segment going to work anyway?

>>88016707
So [Time Waits No One] can kind of recreate a past historical moment in a specific area of maybe 50m of range or something, maybe also bringing up historical figures if the user demands it. So it's more like a recreation of a historical moment than actual time travel, right?

Also, are the opponents trapped in the Stand or are they capable of escaping from the affected area by simply walking out of it? It sounds like something Nobody would want to put in so things keep being entertaining.
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>>88020010
Right now is just "something happens". The racers ride the backs of the kaiju to reach the first checkpoint, which is in the bar's counter.
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>>88020010
I have it.
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>>88020878
And the kaiju part works like how I already said.

Just imagine racing into a huge bar, then up the tail of a monster some 10 - 20 stories tall. You go up its back and around the shoulder, down the arm, and you're on the kaiju sized bar counter, then it's a straight shot to the finish line.

"The Big One Bar".
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>>88020010
Well [Time Waits for No One] can make the historic figure think that their victim is an enemy back from their times, for example if Mr. Peabody brings a famous WWII soldier to the present he can use [TWFNO] to make him think he's gonna fight a high-ranked nazi soldier.
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>>88020921
the doc says that there could be a small bit of history about the bar and how King Kong sr. died, was his decease recent or an old event?
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>>88023154
It should be something that happened at least a few years ago. Something that just adds to the history of the place, far enough back in memory that it isn't a sore thing to talk about openly.
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Last bump before bed.
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First bump after bed
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>>88023253
>Loki: ah, mister Kong. If He was so great why he died from an overdose?
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Who's the guy that got his Stand through the Super D?
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>>88027069
Loki probably would say something like that to incite a bar fight.

>>88027978
The one we see it happen to I think is the Chameleon.
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Maybe the monsters in the bar talk about their life stories with Jack before he ends up interviewing Sam and Max.
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>>88028339
I was thinking that he could say that when introducing himself to Backslide while he is getting hammered in the bar, but it could also serve to start a fight between kaiju while the racers are on top of them
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>>88029457
I like it better if we introduce Loki after the first checkpoint is cleared.
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>>88029969
What goes first, the parade or the meeting between Loki and Dan?
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>>88031013
The parade can be going on before that, Loki then hijacks the parade after his deal with Dan.
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>>88031106
so there is another ringmaster that Loki replaces?
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>>88031193
Yes.

Don't know who that is yet.
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I think what I'm almost remembering is that bit from near the end of Animal House where one of them hijacks the parade and the parade just mindlessly follows that guy.

Only instead of leading them down a dead end, Loki leads them into the middle of a stand battle.
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I think we should keep the focus on Pym and Hex once inside the bar. Aside from the first to cross the finish line which we already have worked out anyway.

By keeping it from there perspective, we can at least start to set them up as the actual main primary protagonists despite the focus being all over the place, bouncing between groups, until we get to Fantastic Island.
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>>88031410
How many batman characters do we have already? It could be Music Meister
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>>88035356
That'd work.

Though let's not give him a stand. Not every remotely prominent character needs one.
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>>88032885
what are they doing after crossing the line, besides checking the other bounties that entered the race?

>>88035745
Maybe Loki possesses the ringmaster and uses demonic powers through him.
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>>88037291
I'd imagine Pym begins modifying his car since he wanted to place better while Hex looks at the bounties on some of the racers who placed ahead of him.

They both have a need to go faster to accomplish their goals.
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I think the bulk of the focus will go to Sam and Max during their stay at the first checkpoint.

Do they ever drop out of the race, or are they in it to the end?
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>>88038971
they want the Wishing Star to get their genders back. I don't think they would drop so easily, unless we want to work with that genderswapping Stand in part 8.
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>>88039202
I'm just trying to work out where they are in the story later.

They have a role in the race as the Paris checkpoint is coming up, assuming they're still in it after that then they'll be out of focus.
Tulio's arc is where everything gets thrown on its head.
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Will there be a climactic final showdown at a New Jersey beach at high tide with the water being split like Moses did with the Red Sea at the end of Man of Steel Ball Run?
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>>88041131
No.

The ending is a high stakes race from a spaceship orbiting the Earth as racers dart back down through the atmosphere like falling stars, each trying to reach the Wishing Star first as it begins its fall to Earth.

The heroes are preoccupied at this time as they face off against the mighty Stardust, the Super Wizard.
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>>88041432
does that thing ever lands on Earth or it returns to its original orbit once someone reach it?

>they face off against the mighty Stardust, the Super Wizard
>"...The most remarkable man that ever lived...ALL KNEEL BEFORE THE ETERNAL CRUSADER!"
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>>88042484
Once the Wishing Star is caught and wished upon, it vanishes.
Or denigrates upon entering the atmosphere.

It's not around after it grants the one wish.
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>>88046358
Yeah, that.
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Bumping before bed.
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morning bump
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>>88037367
So, after that goes the parade? do they join the fight with the ringmaster?
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Bump
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>>88053086
Not sure if they get involved with that or not.

Should Pym and Hex be involved with the Loki side-plot during phase 1?
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>>88055697
Well, they are kinda involved since they clash with the Punisher after leaving the first checkpoint. Right now, only Sam, Max and Ghost rider are involved in the side-plot.
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>>88056815
I don't think they need to know about Loki for that though.

The Punisher is after Shocker. Hex is after Shocker.
This leads to a fight in the desert on the way to checkpoint 2 that lets Shocker slip away again.
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>>87971776
How long will her connection with Nobody remains hidden? She could disguise as Spider Ma'am when performing tasks for the brotherhood, like stealing the corpse part in the circus or blowing up Cliff

>>88056889
that's why I said kinda involved. Besides the parade, there is an encounter between Yellowjacket, Sam, Max and Loki in the desert, and then there is the final encounter in Springfield's circus.
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>>88057314
I think it remains hidden up to maybe CN City.

I want to have a scene where she's shown to be the Chameleon's superior or otherwise making him look like a bitch.
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>>88057862
Maybe when he is stabbed with the Super Rod
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>>88057949
I thought we'd be doing that between registration and the Hill Valley City parts.

During Mr. Nobody's mini-golf something-or-other in the Oval Office.
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>>88059049
I thought it was during Chameleon's introduction in CN City. He could be just a master of disguise before that, and gets his Stand as a complement to his abilities (kinda like how Oyecomova viewed his Stand)
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where does that scene with the preacher will take place?
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>>88060402
I'm pretty sure we're introducing him far sooner than CN City since he is a racer in the race.

We should have him called into Mr. Nobody's office where we see the back of his head as he enters the door and then cut to the next scene.

Then he gets interviewed before the race starts and says he entered as a favor to a friend.
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>>88060739
The Preacher Bot is in the refugee town built next to the pit the Looniversity sunk into.

That's in phase 2, the Europe phase.
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Crap, page 10 bump.
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You're all being very quiet today.
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>>88060776
not that preacher, the one that foreshadows the church of gaming and invites one of the characters to join its ranks

>>88060742
He is probably disguised in the starting line
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>>88064473
Springfield is where we're having that person be at.

That's what was decided last thread and is on the doc anyway.
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>>88062402
Oh, come on.
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>>88066086
the board is going pretty fast today, page 7 already.

Anyway, what's the prize for the first 30 racers that reach CN City?
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>>88066508
Last thread it was suggested they'd get portable holes from ACME, but it wasn't discussed in-depth.

Pym, being the first place taker for that leg, gets a bag of stand jawbreakers once they're out over international waters.
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>>87968096
>The one nerdy kid with the robot from Batman Beyond
Billy Watt. His Stand still needs an ability, only a name was suggested in the previous thread
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>>88067336
So is he going to be nerd form or post-juvie muscle form?
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>>88067357
I dunno, he only had the GOLEM robot during his first appearance.
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>>88067575
Nerd, or muscles.
Muscles, or nerd.

Hmm, muscles feels like he could pose better.
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>>88066879
do they work like the holes made by Plucky's Stand or like a bag of holding?
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>>88070343
They could be something ACME created by studying Plucky's stand, but they work like the portable holes from the cartoon they originate from.

I think they might only have a set number of uses though.
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Should we have old Jack flip someone off at some point?
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>>88070425
or being a single use item and the prize is a set of them
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>>88071780
How many in a set?

Should Wander's hat by a stand powered item like Dora's backpack?
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>>88074154
How many times the racers would use them? Could be between 5 and 10 holes, too few and the reward will feel lacking, too many and the racers will toss them around non-stop.
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>>88074300
The only real idea I've had is for one to get stuck on the inside of Wander's hat and cause problems for everyone near by with tidal waves of stuff.
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>>88064498
Is he still going to be Dib?
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>>88075078
Yes, in a heavily deranged state.
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what's the reward for reaching the cruiser in Gibraltar?

>>88075766
So, after trying to make someone (who?) join the cult, he is tackled by a bunch of cops and put in a crazy bucket?
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>>88077902
We haven't decided on the prizes for phase 2 yet. Right now we're kind of trying to focus on the phase 1 section.

I'm pretty sure Dib encounters Sam and Max and possibly also Aunt May.

There's something on the doc about it.
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The standard bump before bed.
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Merry Christmas
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>>88080408
Is Sonic included in this in any way? I'm suddenly forgetting.
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>>88081292
yeah, we already have a fair amount of characters from the series
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Morning bump.
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>>88078033
>Dib encounters Sam and Max
>In his ramblings, he claims the cult will give them new, customisable bodies
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>>88080408
>Sonic's Stand is [TRASH]
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>>88083747
They disregard him as someone who eats week old grease out of the fryers.
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>>88084678
He also has an incredibly huge head. Nothing good comes from those types.
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>>88086105
People with dis-proportionally big heads in this setting should run the risk of nightmares crawling out of their ears.
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>>88084678
their exchange probably ends like pic related before the cops gang up on him

>>88086105
>>88087077
Mandark, Mojo jojo, Dib, who else has a freakishly huge head in the story?
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>>88087364
Yeah, they'd point and laugh and Dib would make some feeble attempt to justify whatever before the crazy police show up.

This is something we will need to call back to in part 8 though.
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Any ideas for what happens in Springfield's circus?

>>88088811
He would appear on a list of martyrs of the Church of Gaming. Alternatively, he could be a founding member of that club/offshoot of the Church that was mentioned some time ago (and whoever is giving exposition would mention Dib's humongous head)
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>>88089593
I was thinking Loki was brainwashing the town with the shows and Aunt May breaks in for a stealth mission to retrieve the corpse part from the curiosities displace.

Jojo from the circus could be immune to the brainwashing and tries to get help.

Loki isn't exactly sure what he's looking for that Mr. Nobody would want there.
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Page 10 bump, again.

I'd post with an attempt at getting some conversation going, but no one has replied to the last dangling thread of thought I already posted.
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>>88091643
Besides the list posted earlier >>87925094
, what else is missing in the first stage?
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>>88092032
I'd rather anons start reading the doc themselves to find out since I feel we'd make better progress that way.

It's not so much "what is missing" as it is "where are the gaps" and where one person might see a gap, another might not.
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For instance, where are Pym and Hex during the Springfield bits since they are clearly taking a different route.
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>>88092444
looking at the first part, Hex fight with Shocker (where Hex loses his horse and Pym first notices Hex ability with the narrative) and what Wander does in the Hills needs elaboration

>>88093923
I don't know, they just delivered Shocker to the authorities. Should they start looking for another mark? Are they involved in what happens in Smallville?
Also, are the Smallville and Springfield arcs in order or are they concurrent? I'm asking because a pack of racers deviated from the route following Hex and Pym (who were following Shocker)
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>>88094233
Elaboration means there's something to build upon, I'm talking about the blanks between story beats that still need something in place there to build up from.

Smallville -> Nowhere -> Springfield.
In that order since that's the order they are in on the distance between Aberdale and CN City.
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I cannot actually think of a way to include Bizzarro in this, but with Loki being one presidential runner up, it makes me think if there were others.
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>Queen - Fat Bottomed Girls

was it done?
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>>88096148
It has not been done.

She's French, right?
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Page 10 again...

I kind of want for Mr. Nobody to have a record player, one of those old crank ones, and when it starts up the music in it is actually an alternate Mr. Nobody from a dimension of sound waves.

Can't do Velvet Vick since too many Courage characters.
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>>88096034
We should cameo Betty Boop as well if we are actually doing this. I think there was some other candidate suggestions, but I'm not remembering it now.

>>88096148
>>88097991
Maybe we could include her somewhere to fill something about the Leterally Mansion in the Europe leg, then? Maybe as someone responsible for guarding that place or something?
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>>88101101
I was just going to have her be someone in Paris or someone on the bullet train after Paris.

If we include her at all.
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>>88099987
Should be in an instance where he doesn't need the skills of another Nobody due to the one copy limitation.

>>88101101
We still need to decide who are the farmers that surround the manor, at least the one that tries to ambush the Wizard. Speaking of the manor, who's the phantom that is guarding it?
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>>88101919
I'm not sure I follow that statement.

And the phantom, I believe, is listed in the doc. But that's phase 2.
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>>88102102
Nowhere Man can only keep one alt-Nobody at a time, that's why he should summon the soundwave Nobody when no other alt-self is needed (like Big Guy Nobody).

>And the phantom, I believe, is listed in the doc
Nope, the doc mentions a "mysterious phantom" that is keeping the ghost of Melanie Duck and Figment hostage.
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>>88102432
Hmm, well the sound wave Nobody is just a thought I had since the very original Mr. Nobody who inspired the Betty Mr. Nobody who inspired the Doom Patrol Mr. Nobody was a singer.
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What was Frank doing is Springfield?

>>88104305
>was a singer
Then the main Nobody could have a vinyl in his office with songs made by his alt-self
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>>88104412
Is Frank in Springfield? Probably fighting some corrupt people.
Like the circus ringleader is actually a drug trafficker or something.

And the original Mr. Nobody is Bert Williams.
I'm not sure how we could work in a reference to him.
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Bumping before bed for luck.
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>>88104935
He drops a comment after Loki is banished, saying how he was next after he franks Nobody

>Bert
>Bart and Bort are right next to him in a list that Nobody compiled of his alt-versions
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morning bump
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>>88107376
Why would Bart and Bort be alt-versions of Mr. Nobody?
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>>88110897
not the ones from the simpsons, is just a reference to that scene
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>>88111032
Why would Mr. Nobody be keeping a list of alt-Mr. Nobody-s?
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>>88096034
If we are using the idea of Mr. Peabody's Stand, Bizarro could be part of one of the historical recreations.

>>88111966
to keep a register of each of them and their abilities?
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>>88113055
Mr. Peabody could use his stand on the site of a historic battle that took place between The Hero and an imitation of him.

He summons Bizzarro.

Where would that take place at?
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>>88113631
depends of the stage; if it takes place in the european stage, you have the Spain-France and France-Old Country sections. There is also the archipelago in the atlantic stage.
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>>88113771
Is Mr. Peabody a racer or a tour guide somewhere?
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>>88114621
How about a subordinate to Mr. Nobody who kills anyone who has a part of the Holy Corspe?
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>>88114758
We already have plenty of characters filling that role.

Aunt May, Goofy, Scud, DAVE, the front men (even though they're just supposed to find the corpse parts first, not engage the racers), Wizard Daffy, Chameleon.

Seriously, that position is filled.
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>>88114862
being independent, like Gatlocke, is a possibility
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>>88114998
Would being independent mean you're in a higher rank in Mr Nobody's group?
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>>88115427
I meant a third party getting involved in the race (either looking for the corpse parts by himself or having another agenda)
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>>88115503
Well maybe Mr. P is only here to obtain the corpse parts for scientific purposes.
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>>88115630
Or maybe he's just a tour guide for people traveling Europe.
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>>88115951
So if he's a tour guide would he just use [Time Waits for No One] to protect the tourists?
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>>88116003
Probably.

We could have him as a side plot from France to the old country since his tour group is taking a similar route as the racers.

But that's phase 2 and we really need to start knuckling down and focus on phase 1.
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>>88116576
That could work, we would talk more about it, but since we're focusing on phase 1, we'll discuss parts of phase 2 once we get there, though I want to know if there's anyone that is affiliated with Mr. Nobody that's in the tour group?
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>>88116947
Tour group is a totally new idea, there's no one in it yet.

Fat bottomed girl could be the tour group.
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>>88117930
Would it be wrong if Mr. Peabody developed a relationship with FBG?
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>>88118793
I don't know his character well enough to make a call on that.
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>>88118988
>A dog having a relationship with a woman
What do you think, plus I was thinking that this relationship would be a reverse YukakoxKoichi.
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>>87921848

Got a question I didn't see answered in the docs, why are the main characters names that can't be abbreviated to CoCo? I think besides Courage, none of the characters are able to say that about themselves.
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>>88119395
After part 2 of JoJo the main characters stopped being called JoJo with maybe only one time near the beginning of each part where someone would call them JoJo or say that someone calls them JoJo without it ever being brought up again.

>>88119167
Seems unprofessional.
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>>88119541
Well how else should this secret relationship would play out?
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>>88119395
Johnny called himself "Colossally Cool"
Tom's girlfriend called him Cocoa.
In part 4, the main characters formed a group called Conman Coalition.
The upper echelons of the Warner Brothers adressed Plucky as a "Cosmic Coincidence"
Dora used the fake name Consuela Consualez when she was a smuggler.
I don't know about the last two.
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>>88119541

Huh, guess that makes sense I didn't know that, only seen the first two parts of JoJo.
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>>88119718
I don't know anything about either character, the dog or the fat bottomed girl /co/ is fapping over this week.
So I really can't say.

>>88119775
For part 7 Mr. Nobody is calling the racers his "Commandos of Confusion".
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>>88119943
Guess we'll figure that out when we do phase 2 of part 7.
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>>88119999
We really are having a lack of progress here.

I don't want to just take over again like I did with part 5 and then later had to do with part 6 when it ground to a halt.
The problem seems to get just getting the writing going at this point. If we don't do the beginning at the beginning then we can't do the middle or the ending because we won't know what characters are still in the story for those parts.

But most anons who bother to do writing are only interested in certain arcs of part 7, so that's leaving us a little stuck at the starting line.
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>>88120279
>leaving us a little stuck at the starting line
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>>88120279
>The problem seems to get just getting the writing going at this point
Seems so, the outline of the first stage looks near complete right now. The different events that happen along the route are what need to be expanded upon
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Case in point, I'm now actively imagining Mr. Nobody singing Queen's Bicycle Race during one part of this part.

It helps that some of the lyrics are

>I don't believe in Peter Pan
>Frankenstein or Superman
>All I wanna do is

>Bicycle bicycle bicycle
>I want to ride my bicycle bicycle bicycle

So he could shirk duties at one point to ride a bike for a while.

>>88120892
Most of the time the "filling in" is left up to the writer, or at least that was my experience where it was just a handful of plot points and it was my job to get the story from one point to the next with whatever weird shit I wanted along the way.
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Oh fucking hell, page 10 already?
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>>88121104
I guess we'll be at the mercy of the writers for now. The writefags should write things they actually feel like writing instead of being stuck with old suggestions and not writing anything at all.

I just don't want us to be stuck because of old stuff again. Also it might be interesting to have many writers writing the direction of the story, maybe kinda like Pym's messy characterization.
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>>88122842
With part 7 there is very little old stuff. It's not like part 6 where there was a big mess to clean up by the time we got to it.

I can write it, I just don't think I should since I don't think anons really care for the way I write the parts after the last two parts, and part 7 has been pretty hyped since fucking March.
I guess I'm just sitting around, waiting for those anons to show up now that we're on part 7.

Like going to the ice cream parlor, only the ride there is so long and tiring that the kids don't even care anymore by the time we get there until they go in and see all 39,085,029 flavors.
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>>88123125
Your style is good to me and keeps the story going, wouldn't that be enough? Also, you could try to give a different tone in your writing on part 7 if you want, just an ideia that might help.

Now, considering the part 7 hype. I guess we could wait and keep doing suggestions a little more for now. It's almost the end of the year and more people might come to join in eventually.

>Like going to the ice cream parlor, only the ride there is so long and tiring that the kids don't even care anymore by the time we get there until they go in and see all 39,085,029 flavors
Wow. I could never achieve something like this even if I tried writing it in my own language.
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>>88123485
I can't tell if the last line of that is sarcasm or not.

The very beginning stuff on the part 7 doc's rough draft about Vince/Yellowjacket up to before where the Wizard is introduced is all me.
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Maybe Mr. Nobody begins his bicycle obsession in France and that's why he summons an alt-Nobody to fill in for him.
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>>88121104
>I don't believe in Superman
>His plan is erasing the Hero's corpse
damn, I like it. Depending on when it takes place it would give a hint about the Hero's identity or help confirm it.
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>>88125084
>I don't wanna be the President of America
>You say smile I say cheese
>Cartier I say please
>Income tax I say Jesus
>I don't want to be a candidate for
>Vietnam or Watergate
>'Cause all I wanna do is

>Bicycle (yeah) bicycle (eh) bicycle
>I want to ride my bicycle bicycle (c'mon) bicycle

If this isn't in the playlist for this project, then someone isn't doing their job.
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>>88125562
he could sing that at the end of the third stage as he drives toward the checkpoint to unveil the Absolution
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>>88127067
Maybe, but I'm still thinking he'd be singing while in Paris.

I think he would sing more than once since it suits him.

Also, another page 10 bump.
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And the final post from me before bed.
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>>88128761
yeah, he could sing it from time to time or when a specific part of his plan is fulfilled.
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>>88123637
it's not
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>>88132689
How many songs should we have in his library?
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Besides Haddock, who are the racers that end up in The Beast's lair?
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>>88135374
I feel like I'm the only one who ever answers any of these general questions about the story in the threads.

We haven't decided yet. If it's not in the doc then it's a blank area ripe for you to insert your own ideas.

Who do you think should be in the Monster House?
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>>88136860
Wander is suggested in a side note in the doc, don't know who else could appear there or how many should fight the horde of plant monsters. Where are Hex and Pym? should they get involved?
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>>88134900
wasn't Mister Blue Sky mentioned in relation to superman in one of these threads? It could be part of his library
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>>88137697
Hex and Pym I think would be staying at the place provided by Strickland and would be a part of the group defending the town.

They're not supposed to be aware of any of the corpse part stuff until Nowhere when old Jack tells them.

>>88139117
I think that's when anons were trying to come up with a stand for Superman, but I think it was decided he didn't have a stand.

Since his body was powered by sunlight and the sun is a star and stands in this setting are connected to STAR energy which is star light, well, by that logic it makes sense his body could grant stands.
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>>88139905
Since Strickland is involved in the second checkpoint, Navis should play a role in that part, but her affiliation with interpol remains hidden until after the fight between Goofy and Spongebob. And speaking of Strickland, do they know about the Corpse?
Pym is tinkering with the capsule he received in San Fransokyo, right? what is doing Hex in the meantime?
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>>88140394
Navis is, officially, sponsored in the race by Strickland.
She'll probably be involved with burning away the plant zombies.

I think Strickland would be aware that there is some strange material other than stand jawbreakers that can grant stands. They'd have been looking into it since the WB fell, but haven't been able to act on it until recent years with Bobby routing all the corruption out of the foundation after the Belle Reve incident. The corpse parts are probably something they're working to lean about and recover to prevent an influx of more criminal stand users.

Navis' job in the race is probably to gather information on the corpse since I don't think Strickland even knows it's a corpse.

Hex could be shooting zombies or trying to find a way to make a profit, or trying to get Pym to dress as someone less embarrassing to be seen with.
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>>88140693
>trying to get Pym to dress as someone less embarrassing to be seen with

>what are you talking about, crazy eye? Janet love this
>who's that Janet you talkin bout?
>Eh...why don't you go stalk your pal Shocker or something?
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>>88141450
After collecting the bounty on Shocker Hex should tell Pym he's not sharing it with him, but still give him some money to go buy some proper clothes with.

Like what he said to Batman in The Brave and the Bold.
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Who should be the one that pick the remaining organs from the Beast's mausoleum? a member of the Dada party or one from Snake eyes' group?
And about the Beast, was he tasked to guard the corpse parts or is just a creature that came into posession of them?
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>>88144288
It was already decided that the Front Men (in this case Snake Eyes' men) collect the remaining organs after The Beast is defeated and burned.

I think The Beast was drawn to the corpse parts and then compelled by them to keep people away.
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After Aberdale and before he surrender the liver, Haddock should showcase his Stand's ability.

>>88094705
huh, Nowhere appears first in the doc, then Smallville and Springfield.

>>88144376
that part wasn't updated then
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>>88145091
Hmm, I need to look at the map.

Yes, Nowhere is farther West than Smallville and that's why is happens first. I had the locations all mixed up.

There's too many things to keep track of when discussion has been all over the map.
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>"Almost as much fun as walking through plate glass"

Maybe we could have a gag where it looks like someone is about to smash through plate glass only to get pulled into the reflective surface by Mirror Master.
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would music affect the Blue Meanie like a symbiote reacts to sonic attacks or like Mikitaka when hearing a siren?
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>>88147430
I'd say the latter.

It needs to be a fast acting, extremely visible reaction.
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Did Cartman's Stand retained its power after being stolen by Loki or it got a different ability?
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>>88151312
I think Loki forcefully evolved it, or at least warped and twisted it to the point where it's powers are totally different.

He's had at least 12 years to tinker with it since we bumped the space between parts 5 and 6 up to 10 years.
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Wow, this is really still a thing? How pathetic can you be?
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any racers (background or otherwise) that should be retired when in the raid of the Monster house?
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>>88152586
I'm thinking for publicity reasons any racers who die during the first phase of the race wouldn't have their deaths broadcasted.

There should probably be a few who "dropped out" after the stay in Aberdale though, but we haven't picked any out yet.
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>>88152770
Could the Blue Meanie use his Stand to make any deaths during the race come as no surprise?
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>>88152830
That'd be a good role for him, that way public opinion won't turn against Mr. Nobody during the race.

Though he'll have to start being careful after The Blue Meanie gets the Wander treatment in Paris.
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Page 10 bump.
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>>88155940
And again.

Keeping the thread alive will now need to fall to someone else since I'm going to bed.
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>>88152983
what will happen with the blue meanie after getting the meanie part of his name removed?
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>>88147800
>the Beatles use their Stand to generate instruments for the surrounding crowd so they can play music too
>The Blue Meanie runs away in his flying hand while twisting, swelling and screaming
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>>88161796
He stops being mean and probably turns into a hippy.

>>88163021
Is that what their stand does? How many of them have stands?
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>>88164226
Is a shared Stand:
>John, Paul, George, and Ringo (The Beatles Yellow Submarine)
>Vehicle: "All Together Now" (a flying yellow submarine with innumerable gadgets)
>Stand: 「THE WORD」 (from the same album as "Nowhere Man")
>Appearance: None. Like Mikitaka, it's not clear if it's actually a Stand or just the 'power of music".
>Ability: A shared Stand. Allows each Beatle to transform any words they sing into solid objects. The objects resemble each word spoken, and they float out of their mouths. The more of them that sing the same word, the stronger it will be. These solidified words can be used as projectiles, stacked on top of each other, or held.
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>>88164251
Hmm, a bit similar to Tom's musical notes. Just a bit.

So what happens when they sing about abstract things?
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>>88164880
they may form a related object to said term.
What's the name of those drawings made with words? Calligrams? The objects made by the Stand could look like those.
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>>88165004
That's going into Echos territory with the words.

Keep it to objects, like love becomes hearts or something.
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Or maybe abstract things take the form of melodies that invoke those emotions.
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Any ideas for Billy Watt's Stand, or is there a Stand in the archive that could fit him?
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>>88168337
There are currently no suggestions for the name of his stand, just that it's that robot.

I mean, we could have it so that he doesn't actually have a stand and it's one of those [Propane Nightmares] from Strickland's failed electric era.

Hex and Pym don't have stands of their own yet when they fight him, so them winning against a big robot is more feasible then against a big robot stand they can't see or touch.
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>>88168571
Someone suggested 「METAL CRUSHER」 in the previous thread https://desuarchive.org/co/thread/87626930/#87741113
I like the idea of being one of the electric nightmares, could be a different Mk. III model that was never deployed by Chane
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>>88169073
Yeah, let's go with that.

Maybe Hex and Pym beat it by detonating the pillar propane they got from the Aberdale checkpoint.
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Superman had a vault of weapons.

I bet the WB wanted that vault.

I bet robo-Jimmy is still active long after the real Jimmy died.
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>>88165491
yeah, that's what I meant. The objects would have their name arranged on them

>>88169751
Maybe the electric nightmares that weren't disposed of ended in the black market, like several of the WB's stuff after it fell. Gatlocke could use some of them in his ranks, and Stark could have some spare parts (with his company's logo added) among the pieces he gives to the racers to modify their cars

>>88169845
that's Larfleeze
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>>88171041
Must've been an experimental heavy duty model that was still being tested and then was further modified after it changed owners.

The electric assets were either sold off or disposed of, and odds are some of the stuff slated for scrapping got stolen.
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>>88171114
Maybe Watt was a Strickland employee on Chane's side. When Bobby regained control of the foundation, everything that was made under Chane's tenure was slated for scrapping and Watt tried to retrieve as much as possible before running away, the giant robot being the only thing he managed to hide from Strickland.
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>>88171890
Like one of the tech boys?

I'd think a lot of that stuff could have gone to Membrane to make sure there was nothing super sinister happening by someone with another hidden agenda.
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>>88171947
or an assistant of Chane, both would explain how he knew about an experimental model before Strickland could get his hands on it.
I just noticed the relation between Billy's last name and Chane's fully electricity policy
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>>88172151
Little connections like that are fun.

I wonder if he'd complain about how the first thing Membrane did was "build a robo waifu".
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>>88173309
you mean giffany's body?
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>>88173365
Yes, Watt probably sees work like that as "what the fuck are you doing?"

Chane took Strickland in a weaker, no-nonsense direction which lacked the flexibility to rapidly adapt to new bizarre threats.
Hank knew that there was a lot of bullshit out there, so he was able to tolerate a certain level of silliness in Strickland as long as it got results. With Bobby manning the foundation now, that sense of silliness is back and the norm.
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>In a pinch, both Sam & Max can simply smack people with their stands
That should be how they ultimately defeat Loki; after trying to fight off his giant Stand with their own abilities, they just beat the living crap outta him until he stops moving (and then a bit more just to be sure)
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>>88173854
He could make an off-hand comment about not getting his own robot waifu or that Membrane beat him to the punch.
Speaking of Giffany, what became of her after the end of part 6?
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>>88174057
And then they bludgeon Loki so hard he fall back to hell.

Then they become disappointed that his witchcraft did not become undone with his banishment.

>>88174492
Yeah, I think Watt would be more disappointed about not being able to make a waifubot first (even though it was a different person from Terry's high school who got a killer waifubot).

I think Giffany either started working for the Strickland foundation or began touring the world in her new body. We never clearly established what she did after that.
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Do you guys think we could fit the suicide shop somewhere?

Maybe as one of the organizations distributing items for the first racers in the Europe Leg or maybe just have them mentioned as a organization that is distributing weapons to the seemingly bad guys?
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>>88174910
Could be a base of operations for DAVE in Paris where he resupplies on poisons, weapons, and gets information.
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>>88174694
>Watt: “Here comes that weenie Billy Wat, such a wimp” “Wok’s so pathetic he is gonna build a robot wife” oh, but when Membrane built his own robot chick everyone was “that’s brilliant! Hey Wup, why didn't you came up with that first?” Fuckers can't even get my name right!
>Pym: What you talkin bout, guac?
>Hex: Don't enrage him, Pym!

>or began touring the world in her new body
that gives me an idea for part 8, but that's for another day
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>>88174962
Seems good enough. We just need to have some of the characters cameo'd properly.

Also, they could say that they can get away with guarding ridiculously dangerous weapons legally only because of their inner policy that all weapons are meant to be used for self-harm (which is obviously not what always happens, but they don't really care about how people use the weapons outside the shop).
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>>88175475
Pym's going to enrage him whether he's trying to or not.
He'll point out flaws in the METAL CRUSHER and says it's shoddy workmanship.

>>88175585
Isn't their daughter a fat bottomed girl?

We seem to be collecting those for Paris along with bicycles.
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>>88175714
Yea, Merilyn had her moments.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9mzbg4Uracw

What are we using fat bottomed girls for agian?
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>>88175859
I don't know what we're using them for, they just keep coming up when we talk about the Paris part now.

Probably because of their association with bicycles and bicycles being the mode of transport in the Tour de France.
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>>88175585
Nobody also seems to extend the clemency given to the racers to people that cooperates with the race (like Karnage, who is a sky pirate)
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>>88176403
I think the term privateer applies to him in this story.
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Safety Bump Before Bed
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>>88176797
He would still be wanted in some countries due to his actions. Maybe when the Iron Vulture is first introduced, it sets off the alarms and Nobody must intervene to explain that he got a pardon from the Oval Office.
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>>88178839
So when he first arrives over CN City it sends some local authorities in a frenzy until he produces some document?
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>>88179077
yeah, the Iron Vulture would appear in the horizon and slowly approach to its landing point where a whole unit of the national guard is at the ready, then Nobody order them to lower their weapons.
The fact that Nobody hired a privateer for the race would remind Hex and Pym of what Punisher and Rorschach said to them.
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>>88179365
Don Karnage and Mr. Nobody should kiss cheeks to greet, just to further cause mood whiplash.

Mr. Nobody treats him like a cherished friend when he introduces him to the racers and whatever other audience there is.
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Last bump from me for tonight.

We should decide which racers are being introduced at the starting line who weren't introduced beforehand.

We don't need to introduce everyone there, just whoever will be more prominent sooner than later.

There could also be another round of interviews on Fantastic Island.
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>>88180699
So, he has hired Karnage before?

>>88183804
One of them could be a disguised Chameleon, and some time after his interview the scene changes to a faceless racer lying in an alley
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>>88185741
This
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>>88174694
>>88174492
>>88175475

The epilogue of Part 6 implied that she moved to live with the Membranes and Wall-E. It is likely that she also goes touring around the world whenever she feels like, based in that convo she had with Membrane.
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>>88186012
He probably has a whole story about how they met.

I get the feeling the Chameleon would enter with a pre-prepared disguise rather than take one of the racers out and replace them. He is working for Mr. Nobody and taking out a racer before they get a chance to show off would probably make him mad.
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>>88170828
wasn't Jimmy mentioned in an early version of the doc?
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>>88188205
Hmm, makes me speculate on what that other anon's plans for part 8 involving her are.

I'm thinking the Chameleon won't be able to go after racers even if he wanted their faces since Aunt May is his direct superior.
I really want to have something that enforces that he's been cowed by her to establish that his mysterious overseer is much more dangerous than he is.
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>>88190160
just as a cameo in the flashback of one of the antagonists, that cyborg from Aaron Diaz comic who was suggested some time ago. She encountered Giffany at one point and her robotic body gave her the idea to mess with her own body and turn other people into machines
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>>88191188
We seem to enjoy exponentially exploiting seemingly inconsequential encounters.

It's not a bad thing.
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I assume that the one that sabotages the racers at the starting line is Dick Dastardly, but when did he manage to get his hands on the vehicles?

>>88192337
V, is that you?
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>>88170828
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>>88193195
Well if he's ever going to be in a part, it'd be part 7.

Question is, where in the part?
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What makes Jojo different from all other japanese media to warrant threads on /co/?
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>>88194299
meme status
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>>88194418
Jojo being bastardized into a meme makes me sad.
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>>87921848
Why is this a thing?
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>>88194418
>>88194455
>>88195497
There have been JoJo memes since before 4chan.

"meme magic" happened and went beyond us, now here we are.
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>>87921848

If part 8 is internet focused characters, why is Pico (from Newgrounds) not on the roster? The guy even has 'co' in his name.
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>>88197504
because we haven't reached that part yet and the cast is prone to change

>The guy even has 'co' in his name
dammit, why didn't anyone else came up with that before?
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>>88197673
Because we haven't been thinking about part 8.

I haven't even done much writing for part 7 because I don't know much about the main characters in it.
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how does Punisher's Stand work exactly? How it backfires on him?
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>>88200760
We keep calling it the Crank stand because it forces him to do things in a more and more extreme fashion.
The more extreme it gets the more convoluted things become around him to get the end result he wants. To the point where a shaken up soda can will explode like a bomb going off with all the Hollywood fire.

By throwing off the tension, it messes up the extreme his stand generates and it all backfires onto him.
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>>88201803
>a shaken up soda can will explode like a bomb going off

So, when it backfires, what does kill him?
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>>88202612
Good question.

Probably the most extreme thing possible made mundane. Like he'll try to extreme his way out of something and "reality" will ensue.

Or maybe Hex just shoots him.
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>>88197504
>>88197504
>>88199065
Even though we're not at part 8 yet, I'm curious of what Pico's stand would be, I imagine his stand would be similar to [Bohemian Rhapsody] but the characters that come alive are from webcomics and games from Newgrounds.
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Frank's Stand still needs a name and a description added. It could be like 20th Century Boy and be worn by its user.
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>>88205474
[Bohren and Der Club of Gore]
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>>88205474
Or it could be something that infects the surroundings of the use, infusing his mentality into it.
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>>88205587
>As a side effect of his Stand, objects in the surrounding area begin to manifest frankface
>An establishing shot shows that the Statue of Liberty has frankface
>Even Hex gets frankface while fighting him
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>>88206031
Frank fails to fully Frank Hex thanks to his facial peculiarities.
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>grapes
>remember
Nobody was way ahead of the curve.

I think there's a problem here. Yes, a problem. A phantasmal problem.

I can see it clearly now, the problem we've been having for so long now, yes, it must be that.

That being the problem I am thinking of in a semi-lucid like state that I get in when I've been awake for too long or want to go to bed. If I had to describe it, it's a bit like being drunk, or so I'm told; I've never been drunk before, well drunk with alcohol anyway. Never did like the taste of liquid alcohol.

But back to this problem. You see, in part 3 we had two character who had funny costumes and goofy poses. We didn't have to make either of those up, they cam pre-packaged with them. Saved us a lot of trouble, that did.

Now are you seeing it? The problem?

We need pics, crops, pages from comics of Hank Pym/Antman/Yellowjacket and all the other silly names he's gone by over the years wearing the most outlandish, outrageous, opticlearly offensive outfits he's ever worn and striking the most bizarre poses in comics.

We also need the same for Jonah Hex.

Mr. Nobody is always naked though, or at least in a state of lacking garments on his person, so that makes the silly outfit quota for him difficult to manage. The best he's ever done is a hat, or changing into modern art while tripping out in LSD, or Santa, but who hasn't dressed as Santa at least once?

This is where Pym and Hex have their chance to outshine him, they get to wear the clothes.

That's what I need you to do. Find silly Panels of Pym and of Hex.
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>>88206878
I'll try to find what I can. I know Pym has had some crazy outfits over the years, but most of them have been closer to the usual superhero style.
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>>88206144
>even nouns and verbs are affected by the Stand
>the script itself becomes Frank trying to Frank Frank with his Frank
>after punisher's death everything goes back to normal


>>88208301
at one point, Pym should dress up as Yellowjacket just to pester Jack
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>>88209118
This is frankly getting rather ridiculous.

>V cannot possess Frank as Franking a Franked Frank frankly can't be considered alliteration
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Since Jack starts developing a Style before arriving to Aberdale, and Strickland is involved in that checkpoint, they could give him some info about it and he would practice during his stay in the town.
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>>88208301
You'd think the Silver Age would be full of that.

>>88209118
It's like [La Cucaracha] Act 2, but with words.

>>88209429
Rorschach would need to calm him down during CN City since Frank is giving him a headache.

>>88210416
Maybe the Strickland people notice he seems to be developing one naturally and let him overhear some breathing exercises and posing techniques that improve blood flow to give him a nudge in the right direction.
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>>88203307
Maybe he uses a ridiculously extreme weapon that shouldn't work under any logic, and it malfunction once his Stand's effect wears off, mortally wounding him.

>>88211405
>Rorschach would need to calm him down during CN City since Frank is giving him a headache
poor V, first Stan Lee's speech in San Fransokyo and now Frank
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>>88211828
This weapon?

And how upset should V become when he loses his friend?
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>>88212131
not only the rocket motor would explode inside the launcher, the chain would also lash out at Punisher. However, when his Stand is in full force, the weapon works like clockwork.
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>>88212521
Would clocks become bombs when exposed to his stand?
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>>88205474
>>88206031
>>88209429 kek
>>88211828
>>88212835

Frank's ability sounds a lot like some form of Melody than that of a Stand to me. I think we already have too much Stands too and having a (Edge) Melody user at least one time would be a little refreshing.

It would be cool to have a non-Stand user badassily fighting Stand users too, even if he's using some form of Jawbreaker powered glasses to see them.
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>>88213212
I don't object to this.

I think during phase 1 of part 7, stands are mostly relegated to the side plots and side characters since Pym and Hex don't have stands, so those kind of situations would be lost on them.

The stand craziness that they can get involved with should kick in during phase 2 since that's when they both get stands.
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Hey guys, did you heard about Pixar's upcoming movie?
>>88210652

Unfortunately it looks like shit and I don't think we can use it anywhere important. Just wanted you guys to know.
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>>88213829
I don't know if this is another example of the weird "meme magic" circulating around this project or not.
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>>88214177
>weird "meme magic" circulating around this project or not.

>Since Coco’s announcement in 2012
> in 2012
>2012

Really, are ya dumb or something?
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>>88213829
oh for fuck's sake, that shit looks like diet Book of Life
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>>88215593
My bad. I accidentally put "upcoming" in that post.

Also, bump.
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>>88212835
I don't think so, it feels similar to Number Two's Stand in part 5. Frank's ability doesn't alter the function of objects.

>>88213504
It helps that they don't face any punchghost-type Stand before obtaining their own Stands
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>>88217544
That's happened mostly by coincidence up until now, but I think we should make that rule of phase 1 that Hex and Pym don't ever encounter any punchghost type stands. Not until phase 2 anyway.
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>>88217644
>>88217544
There was a suggestion that we should make Hex and Pym encounter a Stand user while they're Standless at least one time so we can see how non-Stand users perceive a Stand fight and how bizarre it is for them.

Also, it would be just too convenient for them to not encounter Stand users until they get Stands.
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>>88217999
I said they don't encounter any "punchghost" type stands, not that they didn't encounter any stands at all during phase 1.

Shocker has a stand, but they manage to overcome it after seeing what it does a couple times.
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>>88218740
They also fight Dan Backslide, who uses his stand's ability rather than using the punchghost for combat. I don't know if they get involved in the fight with Loki since they would be facing an oversized stand.
we didn't decide what would Shocker's hypothetical stand do.
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>>88219100
Do Hex and Pym fight Backslide?
I'm not sure if that's been established yet.

And what does Shocker's stand do?
What would it even look like?
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>>88219136
Right now it just says that Dan wants to kill the other racers.

>And what does Shocker's stand do?
I just said that we haven't decided that, i think there were a couple of stands in the archive/doc that were proposed for him
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>>88219242
I kind of want Shocker to have a stand that looks like a small dog that lets him swap places with anything that he's touched within a 50m radius.

But I get the feeling that power has been done before somewhere.
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Bump
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what are gonna be the placement results in the 2nd and 3rd checkpoints? Right now only the first place in CN City is decided.
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>>88222089
I think we need to actually write out the parts that come before those parts before we can decide on all the placings.

We're at the point where we have to start writing it out in earnest I think.
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Alright, let's fucking do this shit. Fanfiction 700.

This comes after the Wizard's narration box.

>Cut the oval office
>Inside we see several shadow covered individuals standing in a circle around the room
>In the center of the room is another shadow covered figure, he is holding a golf club
>Surrounding him are various presidential things and other USA paraphernalia on the office floor forming a makeshift mini-golf course
>The man in the center of the room lines up his shot
>The door to the office opens with an man running in urgently, but is stopped by another man holding a travel bag who puts a hand over his mouth to keep him from shouting
>The man in the center of the room putts the golf ball over the constitution paper ramp, through the carved out president handbook, onto the scales of justice causing it to lower to the ground, then falls off of them and continues into a glass cup that has been overturned on its side
>The man with the bag releases the other man’s face and begins to golf clap; the other shadows in the room begin to clap as well.
>The man with the bag steps forward, he is wearing a dark suit and a black skull mask with crimson cracks running through it’
>A narration box appears in front of him “Dr. Henry Killinger – Presidential aide”
>Killinger: “Well done my friend, your form has greatly improved over zhese past few months.”
>All seem content save for the man who just entered “Mr. President, the person you requested to see is here. I thought you’d want to know that.”
>The shadowed president pulls out a totally annihilated pocket watch and looks at it as if it had meaning, we still don’t see his face.
cont.
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>>88223673
>He walks over to his desk; behind it is not the American flag, but a conglomeration of colors and shapes resembling a painting that had been crafted by hand and not brush
>He opens the desk and pulls out a long case, removing its contents
>The president then steps out of the shadows revealing he is nothing but shadows, a living silhouette, a man who no matter how hard you look at him it’s as if you’re on just able to see him out of the corner of your eye
>A narration box appears in front of him “Mr. Nobody – President of the United States of America”
>Mr. President Nobody: “Groovy, see him in, John.”
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And there are some changes and additions I should make to the above like how the shadows figures aren't uniform and are big, small, and one is wearing a watch's hat.

Immediately after that scene it cuts to some days later at the starting line in Hill-Valley City. Some characters should comment on how much a shit hole the place is and why they're starting there until we see the rich Hill dwelling piece of shit stroll in like oil running down metal. That's when whoever thought to ask such a question remembers the super power of money.

TOM's intro thing is already taken care of, so that means I go right to the interviews. Who is doing that? Any suggestions?
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>>88223727
>>88223673
Very nice introductions, Writefag. You know pretty well how to handle Nobody's character too, hopefully. Good to know that we're finally going back to writing stuff.

Unfortunately I'm still kinda busy with things, so I'm going to be here a little less than when I was helping with part 6. Soon it'll be over though.
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>>88224400
Yeah, well, I've been sitting on my hands since I don't want to run another part.

But progress is at a stand still and shit needs to start happening, even if it's my bland ass style that has to lead the way.
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>>88224518
Maybe Anons that were interested in writing specific parts will join us later too.

The main problem was that we were just being blocked by those early parts.
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>>88217999
some antagonists could be like Mrs. Robinson, Fritz von Stroheim or Wekapipo and use something else to fight

>>88224216
April O'Neil? we have her in the list of unused characters
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>>88224845
I'll plug my way through them and stop at point to see if anyone else will join in.

>>88225159
Fantastic suggestion.
With April we can also capitalize on establishing Rex as a womanizer right at the start.
And also gives us some better context for why Goofy is making faces like when he walked in on that lady in the dressing room in A Goofy Movie.
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Hmm, neat. I popped over to the /tg/ archives since I remembered they had some game rules based on this setting.
Looks like that got updated since the last time we were made aware of it in here.

So anyway, if we're using April here as a reporter, will she be reappearing at the phase 1 checkpoints? Are the turtles involved in this part?
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>>88227419
yep, the corpse parts and the atomic super men were included, among other things
>/tg/ can catalogue and theorize the setting better than us
damn, how they do it?

>will she be reappearing at the phase 1 checkpoints?
I think so, I'm not sure if she would be in the other stages
>Are the turtles involved in this part?
I don't know, she was first suggested as a Stand user and the Stand was based on the turtles
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>>88228515
Well /tg/ has the benefit of looking at the setting and taking each part after they've been finished to carve out all the stats, perk, cons, and everything else.
It's nice.

Let's have April be at the checkpoints for phase 1 during the times each leg of the race is going to begin, but have a different correspondent for interviews in each phase of the race.
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And a bump before bed.

I'll try to do some more writing for his tomorrow.
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Sorry I'm late, holidays and school are eating my time. Anyway...
>>87922008
I went through these fast, but they all seemed okay. The jury'll cut the crappy ones anyway.
>>87922918
>Brian
Seems too specific to be effective. Maaaaaaaaaaaay work in part 8 but probably not.
>Megatron
Too vague. Up's down, great, but is life death? Is breathing killing you? Not a fan.
>>87926808
Time fuckery is always kind of a dangerous thing to play with, but if everyone else is hip I'm hip.
>>88002947
Based Question, and nice Mr. A reference. Good and Evil are morally questionable enough that this stand could get weird, but if we add the caveat that Question's more Ditko than O'Neil and he's calling what's good and evil, I'm hip.

Went fast so let me know if I missed something.
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>>88227419
Bless /tg/.
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>>88208301
Don't forget that one time he was the Forth Doctor. I'd love to see it as an alternative costume in the fighting game.
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>>88228691
I wonder who will be the reporter in the latin american stage

>>88232379
Alright, I'll update the Stand doc
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should Gatlocke have lieutenants or is just him and his horde of IG lancers?
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>>88235311
I was thinking José Carioca.

>>88236095
I think he just has the droids, we don't need to give him lieutenants since his location plot is direct and without anyone trying to back stab him.
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>>88236095
After some of the droids are destroyed someone from the robot side should bring up that they weren't thinking machines like they are.

Then they salvage the scrap and build a new body with it with a jawbreaker at the core to show what they mean about "having soul".
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At what point should Pym's ride get destroyed and he starts using the ant chariot?
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>>88239375
he gets his Stand after eating a jawbreaker onboard the Iron Vulture and after that there is the ocean route to Spain, so somewhere in the european stage, maybe before obtaining the corpse's ribcage.
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>>88239539
So Scud and DAVE blow up his ride and Pym is forced to innovate using his stand. They're in Spain at the time, so that's where he gets the chariot, and his stand makes the giant ants.
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>>88239872
the chariot could also be made of pieces salvaged from his previous car. Maybe Pym enlarges a bug so Hex can ride it.
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>>88241293
The idea is by the later stages of the race, Pym and Hex are riding giant bugs as their transportation.

Hex is still more in his element with this than Pym is.
>>
Would Pym be able to enlarge a Tardigrade and ride it like a cow/bull while in space?
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>>88242812
Does he need to see the insect to enlarge it? maybe he would do it after seeing the tardigrade with a microscope
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>>88243006
It might be an area effect where he selects some tiny spot on the ground/wall/air/water and whatever is in that area selected becomes huge, Huge, HUGE.
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>>88237157
>there was another reporter slated for the south american stage
>he either didn't survive the sabotage of the Iron Vulture or was among the prisoners in Tulio's airship
>Carioca opportunistically took his position after hearing the news
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>>88243846
The most recent thing I remember seeing him in is one of those new Micky Mouse shorts where Mickey was watching a football game in Brazil and Carioca was the energetic announcer.
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>>88238262
will the attack to the robot town be a mere raid or a full blown siege?
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>>88244881
Do you remember the name of the short in which he appears in?

It's been some time since I've last seen him and I just want to see him in the new style.
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>>88247768
Here it is
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DwY2OqEvhS8

And another one where he appears
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_2WMLV1UeuM
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>>88247702
I'm thinking a raid. We don't have time for a siege. He timed it to try robbing the racers and the entourage along with the stand jawbreakers from the robots.

There's a Seven Samurai homage we could make there with who stands against him, but I don't know how well that'd go over.

I do want him to retreat by saying "This venture. Is no longer. Profitable!"

>>88247768
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DwY2OqEvhS8
>>
Should Gatlocke's robot arms be something from Strickland or the WB?
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>>88249709
there aren't any other persons that deal in cyborg tech, is it? He probably got them in the black market or are connected to the robot town
>>
>>88243078
What did he mean by this?
>>
>>88249793
Or one of the subsidiary companies like Doofenshmirtz Evil Incorporated.
>>
So a mongol/hunnic horde-style attack. Will TOM take a trip to the robot town?

>>88251332
The robot arms could come from a legit source like Strickland, while someone less legitimate did the operation to attach the arms.
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>>88252265
I think at that point TOM will be under the special deal with Mr. Nobody and will probably be sticking to the airship for commentary.

How involved are TOM and Serenity during phase 1?
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>>88252591
during the first stage, TOM begins his own investigation on Nobody's plan, though not much has been discussed about it.
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>>88252710
Well we should probably talk about that then.

I'm not feeling too motivated right now to write the interviews, so what kinds of questions could TOM have slipped into the interview questions to try and determine which racers are stand users?

I figure TOM would start there and then see if anyone with a stand in the race is associated with Mr. Nobody.
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>>88253717
what kind of question would expose someone as a stand user? asking the racers if they have some kind of "ability"?
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>>88254571
Nah, that'd be asking the racers what kinds of tricks they have planned. None of them would blow a potential advantage like that.

Though he could ask something like that and make speculations based on the answers. Like "what's your specialty" and see what kind of vague answers the interviewers get.
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>>88248399
>Seven Samurai
does that mean that some of the defenders won't survive?
>>
Do any of the racers have cars that can turn into giant robots?

We talked about Coop being in the race and being disqualified, but I think that was dropped since he's just too big to be a minor character.
We talked about a transformer being in the race, but no word on which one.

And I'm probably remembering this wrong, but was Navis' vehicle able to transform into a mech?
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>>88257335
There might not even be seven people defending the town.

We have Pym and Hex, and then Scud also joins in because it's his home town.
Then no one else is slated for joining in until Cybersix arrives since it's also her home town.
I'm not sure if she arrives shortly after Pym and Hex or later.

If I think about this, the most sense would be made if Pym and Hex arrive in 3rd and 4th place.

1st might go to Cybersix since she knew where the checkpoint was from the start. Part of this leg of the race is just finding the checkpoint.

It'd also make more sense for Gatlocke to attack after all of the racers arrive if he's doing his road pirate thing. That makes for more loot to plunder.

Hex could be hired by either the town or the racing committee to deal with Gatlocke before he crashes the town and causes everyone problems.

This is actually the part of the part I'm most wanting to write myself, but it's still a ways off and there's so much that needs to be done before we get to it.
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Well, bumping before bed.
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morning bump
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/co/ . tell me why your crossover is better than this.
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>>88261243
>undertale
>tumblr
>art isn't done by a middle schooler
3 reasons that are apparent from just the image you posted.
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>>88261243
>made by tumblr
>no red noses
how?
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>>88257365
>Do any of the racers have cars that can turn into giant robots?
not that i'm aware of, there is a background racer that is riding a robot and is retired when the Golden Gate is blown up
A transformer could fit in the refugee town.
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>>88263024
Do you mean the "Where are my pants?" guy?
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>>88254865
I can foresee what will be Rex' answer

>>88263747
that guy, he is riding a pants-shaped robot that falls into the river and is dry clean only
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>>88264911
And what answer would Rex give?
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>>88265007
Rex's specialty is getting all the pussy, of course (he doesn't say it that way, but you catch the drift)
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>>88265301
The primary idea this puts in my mind is an assassin who is also a beautiful woman.
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>>88266714
well, he is removed from the race by a girl
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>>88266792
Yes, for violating one of the race's few enforced rules of no flying.

So since we have a handful of serious racers (ones aiming for first every time), who does Rex end up clashing with during phase 1? Is that worth getting into the details of?
Odds are Pym won't get an easy first place win at CN City.
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>>88267605
Right now, i don't what happens with Hex and Pym between Nowhere and CN City, there are no mention of them during the events of Smallville and Springfield, I don't even know if they passed through those places.

Since Rex is a stand user, he could clash with another stand user, be it a recurring character or an one-off opponent
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>>88268207
So all the stand users clashing with each other on the way to CN city creates an opening for Pym to slip into first.

Pym and Hex I don't think are involved with what happens in Smallville or Springfield.
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There's a huge distance between checkpoints 2 and 3. Racers would spread out and take different routes to avoid conflicts while the ones seeking first would be taking the most direct route possible and clashing all along the way.

Racers who have more than one person per vehicle have the advantage since they don't need to stop for sleep.
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>>88269666
From what i understand, there is at least one group that followed Hex and Pym to Nowhere, believing to be a better route.
Besides Pym and Jane, who else is carrying passengers?
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>>88271615
I think Sam and Max are the ones who followed them to Nowhere. With how it's been going, I'd say that's how Yellowjacket gets to Nowhere rather than Wander and Sylvia who are in Smallville for this own plot.

From there, Yellowjacket and Old Jack start traveling together on Jack's war bike.
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>>88271655
The doc says that "some other racers" followed them, though who they are and how many are is not specified. Yellowjacket, Wander, Sylvia, Goofy, Mojo Jojo, and Navis are already on the city of Nowhere when Hex arrives to turn over Shocker.

>Yellowjacket and Old Jack start traveling together on Jack's war bike
will he attach a sidecar to the bike or Yellowjacket will be forced to ride behind Jack?
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>>88272136
Wander and Sylvia I'd say aren't going to be in Nowhere. The only reason they are listed as being there is so Jack would be there, but that was before Jack was slated to start traveling with Sam and Max after the first checkpoint.
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I get the feeling that once again we will end up hitting bump limit in the middle of the night.
>>
The threads always being super dead right before bump limit also kind of bothers me.

I think Rex and Aunt May would clash pretty hard right before the third checkpoint, hard enough to cause a big enough obstruction while whatever Dick had set up takes effect.
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Dammit all, we are less than 10 posts away from bump limit and on page 10.
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>>88273535
>>88274735
yep, every fucking time.

So we are having a big brawl before reaching CN City? With the supposed number of participants ranging in the hundreds or thousands, I feel there will be several clashes in the background like that one.
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>>88277576
I think there could potentially be another large clash before Aberdale.

We need to think up some stuff for Dick to set up trap-wise.
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Fucking hell.

>>88276656
For a second time.

I'm not going to be able to bump whatever thread comes after this one tomorrow since I have shit to do.
>>
well, three posts before bump limit.
What else is missing in the first stage?
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>>88280853
I can't answer that.

You just have the read the doc and the thread, see what's there already, see any gaps you can notice, and then make suggestions.

Asking me "what's missing" won't get us anywhere since there aren't a set number of puzzle pieces for any given part.

I don't have any time to work on this tomorrow. It feels like I'm going to be the only one actually filling in the gaps in this part again once I get to writing out the notes into story form.
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DEAD
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PROJECT
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Well someone else can make the new thread because I'm not doing it at this hour.

Nor do I have the time to keep it from dying every hour tomorrow.
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