/Co/Co/'s Bizarre Adventure: Because I Have To Edition

Last thread reached 400 hundred posts before falling. If Reviewfag is here, could he possibly look through last thread for stands?

Oh good, I don't have to make the thread.

Yeah, I didn't add much of the new stands from last thread to the doc since they went un-reviewed.

>>87349123
>thread reached 400 hundred posts before falling
Dammit.
Ok, let's see. We have to figure what powerup receives Dan Backslide's Stand after sealing the deal with Loki. After that, what transpires in the route between San Fransokyo and Aberdale.

>>87349123
We might have to get used to the possibility of dying at 400 posts from now on. I blame /co/ for being too fast these days.

>>87349185
Yea, I thought I was going to be the only one that makes threads here. Nice job OP.

>>87349329
On the way to Aberdale, Sam and Max should encounter Loki again while Yellowjacket is off getting water to pour into the DeSoto.

Hex should fight Shocker again.

I think Loki should do something to the desert to make it... trippy?

>>87349442
Well I was finally done with everything else I had to do today and was about to make it when I noticed this thread.

>>87349442
The board was going relatively slow until the early morning, that's when the last thread was archived.

>>87349578
Loki is fought at the circus, but that's afterwards, right?

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I decided to skip Trevor for now, so here's Dredd. After him comes the Warden, I think.

>>87349762
Aye, between Nowhere and CN City.

>>87349762
Yeah, first encounter with Loki is at San Fransokyo where he's being the leader in a parade or something.

Then he's encountered again on the way to Aberdale.

Then he's finally banished back to hell at the circus on the way to CN City.

We should use him to set up whatever the political atmosphere is since he was the loser in the bid for the presidency. Maybe establish just how popular President Mr. Nobody is.

I noticed there's a table of classifications for the first checkpoint now, What other racers could fill the remaining places?

>>87351377
Yeah, I figured might as well make it a table since we have points and placements now.

Last thread we saw mentions of Turbo Teen and also a transformer, but which transformer was left undecided.

>>87351377
How many will be listed in the lassification table? Maybe we should do it just like canon SBR did.

Also, it would be cool if we let a classification list with the prizes listed too at the end of every race we write. It will probably help the writing too.

Crap, sorry guys. Will go back and get last thread's stands after work.

>>87352502
Well I was going to go with the first 40, but then it just seemed kind of silly for racers to be getting points in the single digits, so it stopped at 31 when it got down to 10 points.

See, I think some of the racers are in the race, but they're not going to worry about points until later since a person who did score points who gets eliminated takes those points with them.

So there are probably groups of racers who will be out trying to eliminate the leaders so they will go up in the rankings, which is legal as long as everyone involved hasn't crossed the checkpoint finish line yet.

>>87352740
Maybe we should only list the racers that won the prizes, then we would start with only 50. I think that would make more sense.

Also, is there a way to steal points or win additional points in the race? Maybe by being entertaining.

>>87352877
No, there is no way to steal points.

Points are awarded solely to those who finish first or close enough to first and are non-transferable.
If a racer who had been awarded points, for whatever reason, drops out of the race then any points they won become null.

Prizes awarded at checkpoints are independent from the points awarded.

Even if a racer had 0 points at the final leg of the race, they could still claim the Wishing Star if they got to it first (which would also net them 1,000 points).

Is there a stand named after a Judas Priest song yet?

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>>87352502
Here's the classification table for the first stage of SBR again. It lists up to the 23th place.

>>87354080
If a racer preforms particularly well but still fails to qualify for points or the checkpoint prize, then the individual sponsors may choose to award them some kind of prize, but that is entirely up to them.

There could be a popularity prize, but it would have no effect on the racer's placement in the race.

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I think I remember at one point we were going to have Skeletor as a background racer who's vehicle keeps getting destroyed only for him to keep coming back in an even more ridiculous toy line vehicle.

All he wants to do is race, he has no other objective and never gets that involved in the plot.

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>>87354928
And a /co/ version of Stan Lee was also suggested as a minor character that absorbs the lifeforce of someone that pisses him off.

who is the guardian in Voya Nui?

>>87356926
I think it's the bionicale characters. Or a bionicle character, possibly an automation that was activated because it sensed evil on the island.

And also Gerald the sea lion since the eye falls in his bucket and he begins messing with everyone after it.

>>87352513
Good. Maybe we should also lower the post limit for the Review time too. At least, for the time being.

I'll go sleep now so I can actually bump the thread tomorrow.

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>>87357075
Well, that's a shitload of characters to pick from.

>>87358658
And that's why we're still in the planning stages of this part, mostly.

Whoever was pushing for bionicle to be in this really should voice some suggestions since I know almost nothing about the cartoon they had.

I remember getting the original 6 bionicle lego sets that all came with those CDs with little shorts on them you could play in a computer.
That was one hell of a novelty back in 2000 I think it was.

>>87358391
Hopefully the thread will around to bump in the morning.

Current time from last post to bottom of page 10 appears to be about 2 hours.

So, someone will need to bump the thread before then if this is to have any chance to not dying in the night like the last one did.

Because I'm too tired to stay up any later.

>>87352513
Okay, going fast so let me know if I miss something.
>>87231351
I like it.
>>87235449
>Brian
Eh, seems a little too specific to actually be effective. Might work in part 8, depending on where we go with it, but I'd say no for part 7.
>Megatron
The other world thing was already done by both Daffy and the Warden and the description is vague. Not a fan.
>>87284098
Clarence's could be cool. Sumo's main power is neat, but I'm not sure on the secondary ability because it doesn't seem related to the other power. Jeff's is alright, I guess, but I get it's supposed to be boring.
>>87358391
Yeah, I might just review whenever I have time from now on to be safe.

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>>87358760
They only had a series recently on netflix (and was about gen 2), there was a comic that covered most of the storyline and four movies.

>>87362197
Ok, I'm gonna update the doc in a few moments.

>>87361193
Got ya. Now we just need to know if british Anon is still around to give his bumps.

>>87354080
>>87354253
Maybe we could add in popularity prizes a la Hunger Games. We should probably try to use some more references of /co/'s Hunger Games quirks too, it seems fitting for this part.

>>87363600
We could use designs from the movies, too.

>>87363723
Aside from Tulio using stuff taken from /co/'s Hungry Games when hunting the racers, I think the racers themselves will do a good enough job making things difficult for each other.

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>>87366244
Three of the movies used a more stylized art style, while the fourth one was more faithful to the toy designs.

>>87366347
>Instead of using wild animals, Tulio unleashes a horde of flaites (chilean equivalent of chavs) against the racers

>>87363600
>>87367058
So, ancient mechanical warriors that arise to fight evil whenever it sets foot on their island?

Or the spirits of an ancient race possessing armor to ward off evil as it enters one of their old sacred grounds?

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>>87367504
well, they are half organic in their setting, though there is also several automata that appear in the story like pic related.

>>87367717
What part of them is meant to be organic?

>>87368043
I dunno, the inhabitants of the Matoran universe are described as being biomechanical, though you can't notice that in the comics or toys.

>>87368116
So maybe they have plant like organic aspects rather than animal like organics aspects?

They just grow from the ground and do photosynthesis, then wrap around metal to form a skeleton so they can move around.

>>87369567
there is already a plant guardian in The Beast and his spawn, feels repetitive.
Doing some googling, it seems they are composed of a substance called protodermis: http://biosector01.com/wiki/index.php/Protodermis#Organic_Protodermis
http://biosector01.com/wiki/index.php/Matoran#Abilities_and_Traits

>>87370540
Oh, so they have no real organic bits, just bits the mimic organic life.

We'll have have them be in hibernation when the racers land on the island then.

>>87370768
In the previous thread it was suggested that they went into hibernation when the pillarmen started conquering stuff and awakened recently.

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Reposting my Stand for Deedee from the last thread.

[BUTTON TO BUTTON] (Reference is to "The Hardest Button to Button" by White Stripes)

Appearance: A small, version of the Deedee's spider-kaiju form from that one episode of Dexter (can't remember the name), that rides on her back.

Ability: [BUTTON TO BUTTON] launches colorful buttons that look similar to those found on arcade machines from it's spinerettes. When these buttons hit an object, they become stuck to it with glob of strong adhesive resembling spider silk.

[ICKY THUMP] While a button is attached to a surface, if it becomes pressed the stand's secondary ability [ICKY THUMP] activates, causing whatever object it is attached to malfunction. For more complex objects with several working parts, such as living beings, machines and structures [ICKY THUMP] can only disable parts within a small radius of the button.

The most common uses would be things like
>incapacitating foes by striking near a joint
>disabling electronic parts
>causing a container to leak
>reducing structural integrity
>wiping information from a written text

Power: E
Speed: D
Durability: D
Range: B
Precision: A
Learning Potential: B or A

>>87370927
That might've been my suggestion.

I'm looking for someone else to suggest things.

>>87372128
It was already reviewed and I added it to the Stand doc.

>>87372404
Cool, I was checking the Part 7 doc, my mistake.

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Stand: [WAR PIGS]
User: Homer Simpson
Appearance: the stand always manifest as a historical figure, completely random
Ability: Gives Homer incredible advice in a given scenario. This advice may seem silly at times or go over Homer’s head, but in the greater scheme of things turns out for the best. For example, the historical figure may suggest Homer go get a donut, which seems harmless enough- but will save Homer in the long run (he could dodge a sniper’s bullet or a variety of other things), or the Stand may suggest something more flat out.

Power: E
Speed: E
Durability: E
Range: D
Precision: A
Learning Potential: A

>>87373038
How would we even use him in the story?

Some questions:
When is Mojo Jojo fought?
Are we still using Robotman? because he is listed among the racers

>>87376046
Well, the race goes through Springfield, that is where Loki is defeated.

>>87376741
I left Robotman in the racer list because he had a stand and a motive, seemed like it'd be dumb to just move him to the bottom of the doc even though he's no longer the main character.

Maybe Mojo Jojo first encounters Hex face-to-face in CN City and spends a good deal of time trying to avoid him after that. Could be fought on the way to Spain.

>>87373038
The Stand is ok and I like the potential it has for comedy and as a plot device.

Maybe some racers got their vehicles stolen by the people of Springfield during the Springfield Hit N Run leg and Homer ends up taking the place of one of the racers.

>>87377488
Racers can't be swapped out mid-race.

You gotta enter the race before it starts to actually be a racer, not just some racer's tag-a-long.

>>87377351
I assumed Mojo would have a bigger role, being the guy who Hex is hunting.

I thought he'd wind up killing Hex towards the end, if not in space, then immediately before, and Pym takes him out in revenge.

>>87378122
Hex has multiple marks

>>87378375
Then who do you suggest kills him?

>>87379004
One of the very first things even mentioned in these threads was about [Paint it Black] taking out the Gyro of the part. I think it's an appropriate end and could work well in the given circumstances.

>>87379076
I guess so.

But when, where, and why would Nobody do that? I'm not saying it's not a good idea, I just want to know where it should occur.

>>87379004
I'm not sure if Hex is killed, Pym already is slated to receive a fistful of 「Paint it Black」.
In an unrelated note, should one of the background racers be like Norisuke I? a minor character that becomes relevant in part 8

>>87379244
We'd need to decide on who owns the apartment buiolding first I guess?

I know the Addams were suggested. Would Morticia and Gomez be driving around in the Creepy Coup unaware that they're in a race at all and they're just going on vacation?

>>87379356
Kind of hard to be in a race and not know it when you have to sign up to register to be in it.

>>87379631
Maybe they just think it's a race to their vacation spot or something and the winner gets some kind of prize? Gomez doesn't seem like the type to really read things over thoroughly.

They probably make it to the end before they realize it's not where they're supposed to be. Of course, it's right beside of the end point.

>>87379736
I doubt they have an asteroid holiday getaway in orbit.

>>87379815
It's right beside the launch site is what I meant.

Probably some radioactive swamp or whatever.

They drop out before the reach the end.

>>87379356
>>87379631
who from the current characters in part 8 has a vehicle or a mount?

>>87380804
We have no one scheduled for part 8 completely.

>>87380844
Read the doc.

Although, no one has any vehicles or experience with vehicles anyway to my knowledge.

Except Fred, but you'd be revealing the Scope Men too early.

>>87379869
Where is the launch site?

Cape Suzette?

>>87380925
I looked at the current list of characters, Yang has a bike in her show.

>>87373038
>Homer actually designs a car for the race
>[WAR PIGS] literally tells him it's a dumb idea to enter the race because some shit is going down
>Homer tries to ignore [WAR PIGS] and builds his Homermobile straight from the show
>[WAR PIGS] reminds Homer about the joy of TV
>Homer just stays home and watches TV instead, eventually something happens in Springfield and Homer unknowingly plays a minor role.

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Not really for Part 7, but I've been fixing up the part 8 doc a bit and wanted to resubmit a stand I had for it.

>Stella (Where's My Shoe)
>[GOING THE DISTANCE]
>A clown-like figure with a green airplane for a head and a 7 on it's chest. If the user has touched a person, they can activate the stand's abilities simply by informing them about the stand's abilities.
>The stand, once active, will cling to the opponent and distort their field of vision to the extent that the opponent cannot rely on their sight at all. The stand will also try to annoy the victim by insulting them or others around them. The stand tries to "steer" opponents into hazards by manipulating their vision.
>The person affected will be given 49 minutes to locate the user. If they fail to find the user within the time limit, the stand will melt them into sludge. As the time gets lower, the opponent will feel hotter and hotter. The stand informs the opponent of how much time they have left every 7 minutes.
>The stand can be removed if the opponent truthfully answers any question the user has asked.
>The stand also has them passive ability to let the user see out the victim's eyes for 7 seconds at a time.
>If it attaches to a stand user and melts them, it will leave a jawbreaker behind.
>The stand has a far greater range of abilities and powers that the user could care less about.

Stella is a hitman with nothing better to do. She rarely shows any emotion, but for some reason most people seem to believe she's constantly emotional. She probably wears Shocker's mask for her appearance.

The idea is a fight similar to Born This Way, but reversed.

>>87384274
I think, that's the last checkpoint listed in the doc.

>>87384749
Well we're still pressed for where they're going after Rio.

The outline on the doc is still incomplete (I know this better than anyone since I'm the one who got things organized), there's room for more still after Rio and before going to space, but no one has responded every time I bring that up.

bump with discussion

which part would you honestly say is the most enjoyable part written in /co/co/= no the one you worked the most one, which one actually has heart and works as a good story??

>>87385042
I can't think of any relevant location between Rio and Cape Suzette (and I'm still trying to figure where is located)

>>87386195
I'll say part 2 and 3

>>87386457
Cape Suzette's location is left to ambiguity in TaleSpin, but here I'd say it's somewhere on the coast of the Caribbean or on the Pacific coast of northern South America.

>>87386590
In part 3, Tom and the group took a cruiser to Agrabah from Cape Suzette, so it must be located in the east coast. And in TaleSpin it was said that it never snows in Cape Suzette.

>>87387606
So, Caribbean it is.

Maybe some of the racers are complaining about how it seems like the race is heading back to the USA right before Mr. Nobody tells them they're going to the Moon.

Well here's my last bump before bed.

Morning Bump

When Hex start encountering the members of the Dada Party? in CN City?

>>87390468
Probably.

They could encounter them sooner, but they wouldn't be acting as enemies until they're made aware of Hex and Pym knowing too much.

Well this feels like it's going to be a slow day and I have shit to do, so bump for luck.

>>87387765
Ok, Cape Suzette was located in Usland which was based on the United States, so it's probably located in one of the States next to the Gulf of Mexico.
I'm trying to map the latin american stage. Where did the Iron Vulture crash landed? Chile is a long ass strip of land.

>>87393935
The Iron Vulture didn't crash, it just got damaged badly enough that the racers had to abandon ship.

Don Karnage and his crew stayed and then somehow managed to fix it, then got enough armor and weapons from somewhere to go back and fuck up some of Tulio's army in revenge during the climax if that arc.

Let's not have Cape Suzette located in the USA, let's have it be located either on the South American continent or on one of the Caribbean Islands.

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Submitting a Stand here.

Stand: [GRAND FUNK RAILROAD]
User: The Fat Controller (TTTE & Friends)
Appearance: Takes the form of an Araki-stylized Thomas the Tank Engine
Ability: A mighty Stand that hits with the force and speed an actual train. [GRAND FUNK RAILROAD]'s ability allows it to lay down translucent railroad tracks in front of itself. These tracks can lead anywhere and don't have to be attached to a solid surface, so long as they lead on from [GRAND FUNK RAILROAD]'s current location. [GRAND FUNK RAILROAD] can do this while charging forward along the tracks it makes at great speeds, making it one the most mobile stands around. As [GRAND FUNK RAILROAD] passes over tracks, they disappear shortly after. (Probably incorporate this in his defeat, have heroes realize he can only have certain amounts of track out at a time.)

Power: A
Speed: A
Durability: A
Range: E
Precision: C (Can't make unrealistic turns)
Learning Potential: C

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Something I noticed, both Mr. Nobody and Scud have had to deal with horsemen of the Apocalypse in the comics they're from.

Should have have some sort of Apocalyptic foreshadowing in the part?

Oh shit nigga, it's your first day at school.
What three oversized badges do you put on your school uniform?

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>>87395548
>Fighting a train
We Final Fantasy now

>>87395551
Isn't Stardust supposed to be sealed inside the corpse? One of the encounters with the corpse guardians could foreshadow that there is a part of the Hero's story that Nobody is unaware of.
or you want to add a belgian sitcom?

>>87396998
Which guardian would be aware of that?

Frollo?

>>87397265
Maybe, though the doc says "Whether he ascended or truly died, Frollo still doesn't know". Perhaps one of the parts grants his holder a brief vision of the Hero fighting a shadowed figure (Stardust).

>trains captcha
dammit

>>87397399
Well they grant some kind of visions.

And we do have a train battle in the plans for the trip from Paris to the Old Country.
A bullet train.

what was supposed to be the mean of transport for Nobody and his entourage?

>>87399643
A bus, but also a blimp so they can watch the race from a good vantage point neat the finish lines.

These threads are cool and all but when does the story end?

>>87399733
When we get done with part 8.

Which by my guess will be sometime around February or March. Sooner if we have more people contributing to the story proper.

>>87399733
when all is LOSS

>>87399702
A bus that transforms into a blimp?

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>>87400223
Sure, why not.

>>87397825
One of the arcs could begin like the Tusk arc in SBR, telling a portion of the Hero's story.

>>87401219
Will the main characters hear this story though?

And if they do, what impact will it have on them?

>>87401524
I dunno, the characters learn about the Hero as the story progresses, particularly in Notre Dame when they encounter Frollo. That bit of story at the beginning of the chapter is for the reader.

>>87401809
So it's to inform the reader of something all the characters already know about so that when Frollo talks about the Hero, the readers will be up to speed as the characters listening are?

>>87402004
Well, it depends of how much info about the Hero's life and death is disclosed at that point. Could also serve to explain how his corpse was disseminated across the globe.

About the Dada Party:
Are we gonna use the Big Blue Meanie as the Agent "!"?
Who is gonna be the Quiz equivalent?
Melusine is supposed to represent Frenzy or the Toy?

>>87402388
I think Superman would be a pretty well know legendary historical figure in the setting.

We'd just need to have something that establishes that.

>>87404375
I don't think we should be likening the members of the Dada Party to the original Brotherhood of Dada like that.

Let's just go with whoever we need rather than tacking on characters and then struggling to find a place for them in the story later.

>>87392930
It will be a slow week for me too, I think. Hopefully things will get much better later. Here's another bump anyway.

>>87404445
Some threads ago I said that the antagonists should be taken down along the road, so the climax doesn't get cluttered with players, same goes to whoever ally/minor character we planned to get killed.
By the way, looking at the doc, Medusa's Path doesn't have a user.

>>87405767
Yes, this is one of the issues I'm trying to illuminate.

By trying to "fill positions" we're ending up with stands that lack users and risk having characters in the part who are only there because we went in with the notion that there should be a predetermined number of Dada Party members rather than coming up with members that would be relevant to the plot.

And on that note, we have The Beetles as racers for some reason, so we might as well have them face off against The Blue Meanie in Smallville. We could have The Blue Meanie as a member of the Dada Party who interprets Mr. Nobody's goal of "erasing the concept of heroism" as removing positive energy from the world, energy which is often used to make music which is physically harmful to him.

Or The Blue Meanie could be someone who keeps coming into conflict with Wander and he is ultimately defeated when Wander befriends him, causing his existence to cease as the "mean" part of his [identity] disappears.

Wait, is having both Wander and the Beatles in this part redundant?

Someone needs to do something to explain the role the Beatles have in this part. Only one member of the band is actually entered in the race and the rest are just along for the ride.

>>87406097
For some reason I see the Big Blue Meanie as one of Nobody's bodyguards (like Mike O.), his Stand description hints that it helped Nobody get elected.

>>87406196
I think the Beatles were first suggested as being in possession of a Corpse part or being connected to one (like Killinger in the current draft). Tucson, Arizona was also suggested (dunno what was the reference behind it).

>>87406428
That seems to be a problem we keep running into.

We have characters who were suggested with reasons behind them that we don't remember anymore since the anons who suggested them seem to have bugged off during the long, LONG, wait to get to part 7 and haven't come back to remind us of what plot significance they were supposed to have.

The Blue Meanie I can find all kinds of uses for in the story even without looking at what his stand is since there are characters and locations the character can more than fittingly be used against.
Right now though I'm starting to feel the Beatles are being made redundant by Wander now being in the part as a source of overwhelming positive energy.

This is literally what happened to part 6 and part 5

people wanted to change the entire premise and get rid of characters and it made it a fucking mess.

back off- write something relevant to the plot with what we have instead of trying to change everything AGAIN. We need PLENTY of things written for right now.

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>>87406851
It happened more in part 6 (since it got a complete revision), in part 5 some proposed elements weren't mentioned when the story was actually written and were discarded in the end (like Mr. Clipboard's role).
In part 7 there wasn't much stuff to work with at the beginning, besides the main premise and some of the characters (even part 8 had a basic plot outline at that point).

Oh, and we can still use some racers names to fill up the classification charts and as minor encounters along the road (like urmd and fritz in SBR).

trains captcha again

>>87406851
Look, unless someone is around to champion for a character in a part, then we won't know what the fuck to do with them.

I'm trying to come up with shit for what we have, but I'm running into questions that I'd rather talk about now while shit is still malleable before getting locked in with something that very well could become unreasonable later.

I had enough of that shit during part 5 where I had a gorillain characters to work with and practically NO ONE was suggesting what to do with them.

why is stan lee's stand so over powered holy shit

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>>87407349
Better question: why isn't he a vampire?

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>>87407421
Though really, if Stan Lee is going to cameo, it should probably be at the first checkpoint.

>>87407349
Oh, right. Stan Lee was also suggested for this part. We should really start checking the character list like we did for part 6 and see who are we gonna use.

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>>87407444

>>87407474
San Fransokyo is an easy way to fit Stan Lee into this. He did came in Big Hero 6 at the end of it as some old rich guy with a secret superhero life.

>>87407669
Grant Morrison too.
Didn't he make himself canon in Animal Man?

>>87407792
He shows up to recap parts of the race.

He always gets run over while monologuing.

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>>87407919
>The Wizard's Stand can control spherical objects
>He uses Morrison's shining dome as a weapon

Well here's a bump before bed.

It's on whoever keeps the thread from dying in the night now.

Morning Bump

what else needs to be developed in the first leg of the race?

>>87414229
I think we just need to know how are they going to be presented at the very start of the race. Maybe we'll just mirror it with how it happened in Jojo if we need to.

>>87414855
Appearing in the entry line or being mentioned in the press conference?

>>87415187
Yes, maybe something like in Redline.

We need to think up something pretty exciting that'll make us eager to write stuff.

>>87415187
At the start line we should have some racers introduced via interview, then Mr. Nobody comes on, says some weird cryptic crazy sounding stuff about the Wishing Star, then he's followed by TOM who reiterates the rules of the race before the starting shot is fired.

>>87349103
Cool

Ah crap, page 10 bump.

>Pym walks out of the building and hears gunshots, right down the street an honest to god cowboy is fighting what might be a ninja
>Pym is amused by this spectacle and tries to get a better view
>Shocker dodges bullets and brings out his elector gauntlet
>Shocker: "What're you trying to pull, old man? Other than your back."
>Hex: "Quite the bounty you've managed to gain despite looking like you stole that get up from a whore house. You're wanted in all 50 states, and then some and I'm lookin' to cash in."
>Shocker begins charging his electro gauntlet
>the smart part of Pym realizes this is bad and steps between them
>Pym: “No hold on, the shock wave from that will blow out all the windows in town and that won't be good for anyone but the window fitters.”
>Pym turns to address Hex “Now I know this is your business, but I feel obliged to inform you that this man, a criminal he may be, is entered in the Wacky Races.”
>Hex: “Makes no difference to me, I don’t care what sporting event he’s in.”
Pym: “Now this is the part that does make a difference to you, all entries in the races have been granted clemency by President Mr. Nobody. I’d hate for you to end up behind bars due to a lack of information.”
>Hex spares a glance to the sidelines and cops are nodding that this is true, he holsters his gun and Shocker starts laughing while putting away his electro gauntlet
>Shocker: “You hear that cowboy? I’m untouchable! So why don’t you get back on the horse you rode into town on and scram!” Shocker walks off, leaving Hex fuming
>Pym approaches Hex once again who lashes out at him “Now hold on, now I’m going to tell you about a loophole. If you enter in the race that clemency will also extend to you, so as long as you can catch him during the race, you can still claim the bounty.”
>Hex: “Is that a fact?”
>Hex goes in to register and Wander holds to the door open for him on the way in

>>87422073
I was 33 characters over.

Anyway, I forgot to post that to the threads since there was no thread up when I wrote it while doing the post-thread doc update.

Thoughts?

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>>87416625
>followed by TOM who reiterates the rules of the race
Is someone going to ask about TOM's girlfriend?

>>87422073
>you stole that get up from a whore house
heh, I like it

>>87422550
So, wait, is TOM going to be Jane's caretaker for part of the race?

Was he close to Cliff?

>>87422624
No, Jane isn't TOM's girlfriend, check the doc. weird ship, I know

>>87422624
>>87422665
I figured It would be a reference to how in part 3, Tom's girlfriend lost her identity to LeTerally. Meanwhile Jane is slowly losing her identity to the corpse parts. Depending on if we make the Wizard the underdog final boss ala World!Diego, Jane will definitely be the one to kill him. Maybe she finds a copy of LeTerally's book and bashes his brains in with it?

I still want to work Jane into the plot somehow. She's been in it since the start, and I still want a Lucy character.

>>87422847
Even if we can't fit her in here, there's still part 8. She could replace Tails.

>>87422550
Someone probably should.
How old is Serenity again?

>>87422624
You know, if we still have Robotman in this part, maybe Jane is still racing with him and they're both aiming for the Wishing Star for the same purpose of restoring Robotman's body.

At some point during the race one or both of them will have to fail to qualify for the next leg of the race if they are to be used in this way.

But I'm still against that since having Robotman, Crazy Jane, and Mr. Nobody all in the same scene together really feels like a disservice to the part as a whole when those two aren't the main characters.

How would Crazy Jane even come into possession of all of the corpse parts?

>>87423669
Just save them for part 8 >>87423262

>>87423669
>>87423801
If we do shelve or move Jane and Robotman though, does that mean we aren't getting a Lucy or will the role be taken up by TOM's girlfriend?

I'm more in favor of moving Jane myself, but there's still the person who has to take on the corpse parts and be used as a weapon by Nobody. Additionally, Goofy's redemption plot from the archive would probably be shelved as well. So he'll die as our Blackmore I guess? No one has really suggested anything else for him.

>>87423801
What would we even do with them in part 8?
Why push them into part 8?

I'm having trouble coming up with something for them to do in part 7, the part they were planned to be in, there's no sense in pushing them to part 8, a part that has a focus on webcomics and old cartoons and whatever else last I checked. They don't fit that part at all.

I may not agree with whatever role they have in the story right now, but I'm not going to just cast them off as a problem for later without some legitimate discussion first.

>>87423918
Serenity in her comic had the whole "Jesus" allegory thing happening around or planned for her, so it's not like she's a poor fit for taking in the corpse parts of Superman.

I'd like to keep Goofy around until the space part where he finally realizes this isn't the way to get his son back. He should play a role in saving Serenity from what emerges from the corpse parts at the cost of his own life or worse if this is Stardust we're dealing with.
I'm not sure how or who Mr. Nobody is defeated, but he might end up dying trying to stop Stardust.

The Wizard at that point becomes the primary enemy since if he reaches the Wishing Star first a whole lot of bad things are probably going to happen.
This means a group has to stay behind and fight Mr. Nobody and another group has to keep going in the race to get to the Wishing Star first.

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>>87349329
WHO THE FUCK LET THIS TUMBLR MEME INTO THIS

RRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

DAN BACKSLIDE GET OUT

>>87423938
I was just suggesting an alternative for our Yasuho role, mainly because Tails has a bit of a lukewarm reception and Jane could fill the part as well. Part 8's heroes aren't really set yet.

Besides that, Part 7 originally focused majorly on comic book characters and comics, yet that's been muddied a bit. Tails is already suggested for 8 yet isn't a web comic, and neither is Lilo and Stitch, Johnny 13, Lady X, and XANA. We're allowed a couple of deviants.

>>87424063
That would work I suppose though I partly wanted Goofy to die as a hero-turned-villain, contrasting his son's villain-turned-hero death. But anyway, I think that's good. Especially Serenity becoming Stardust.

I still think The Wizard's death should have something to do with M.E. LeTerally and be suitably ironic.

>>87424209
Well maybe the Wizard loses the Wishing Star, then looks to summon another one using the corpse, but gets killed in the process.

Serenity should be there and have something she got from either Mr. Nobody or Dr. Henry Killinger and whatever this thing is, it really messes up the Wizard.
Like maybe someone had something that sent the Wizard into [Carolina in the Morning], only with no way out and it being a book not written by Daffy.

>>87422073
Shocker wouldn't be quite as cocky if he was gloating. He knows better than to rile up a badass cowboy bounty hunter.

>>87424362
And this is why I'm asking for input.

I don't know much about Shocker's character.

>>87362197
Clarence, Sumo, and Jeff's stand ideas were based on the Eds' stand abilities but mixed together. I tried merging Eddy/Edd's stands for Sumo, but had some difficulty with it, hence why the sub-ability doesn't really match the main power.

Also, I know that Jeff's stand has had some "meh" reception, though this was kinda the point, I had two other ideas for it, though they might be too powerful.

>The stand resembles a small cube with lights on all sides of it. The lights can be activated and controlled, though only one may be manipulated at a time. A single light can manipulate the attention of one nearby person at a time.
> It has two modes and two operations. In attack mode, the cube grows in size and creates a "tail" from one of the lights, allowing the user to use it as a mace, however it switches to auto as well, meaning the user's emotions directly influence the stand's light. The more intense the user is, the stronger the light is, even allowing the user to "cleave" through objects the light shines on. It can create up to four small mines from being stamped on the ground which detonate if someone gets too close. The explosion's power is also based on the user's emotions.
>Standby mode; The user can control the light's intensity, but not effectively weaponize it. The user can generate holograms however, and can create an x-ray light, allowing them to see through another person's skin without harming them.

>A form of stand armor that covers the user's torso and head. It has lights on the fingers and goggles. The user has full control over the lights and their intensity, and can fire lasers from the fingertips. It can create mines, holograms, and x-rays as well. It has another ability which allows the user to create a square forcefield by forming their fingers in a square. Anything within will be flattened into a small cube. The user can only make one cube at a time and must release the contents of the prior one to make another.

Any info of the anon working on the fighting game?

>>87422847
Crazy Jane is a racer right now, and pro-Nobody. Maybe something happens during the race which leaves her out of it, and Nobody approaches her with the offer of the Wishing Star in exchange to become the host of the completed Corpse.

>>87424063
So the Wizard's endgame is resurrect LeTerally through himself?

>>87424209
>Serenity becoming Stardust
If she merges with the Corpse, won't she became Supergirl/Power Girl?
Now I realised that merging with the Corpse means merging with the super rod kinky

>>87427332
What was alternate alternate Dio's endgame?

>>87427332
I feel like Jane working with Nobody would be weird though. I know she liked him, but they were enemies in the comic. Plus, we already have enough Doom Patrol characters anyway. I think it'd be ok to just scrap her.

Though I could still see Nobody having someone else to merge with the corpse. I'm not sure who though. Madame Hydra? Lois Lane? Twisted Sister? Shotgun Mary?
Sister Clair? I know comic strips aren't allowed, but Lucy van Pelt?

I do like Serenity becoming Super/Star Girl too.

>>87427599
I think just to kill everyone and win?

>>87427759
If we're having Serenity be TOM's girlfriend and our Lucy equivalent, then the role of being merged with the corpse seems like it would go to her.

What weird ass power up does Mr. Nobody get using whatever power Serenity gets from the corpse?

Maybe Mr. Nobody makes a deal with the Wizard where the Wizard brings him all of the corpse parts, and he'll erase anything in the Wizard's identity that isn't Daffy.

>>87424906
I'm mostly going off his Superior Foes characterization. It's only 17 issues, I'd recommend it, even if you just skip to the Shocker bits. He's a professional, through and through. Gets mistaken for a coward, but when you back him into a corner he can be legitimately cunning and dangerous.

>>87428438
So what would you suggest the lines deemed too cocky should be changed to?

Also, if Wizard ends up joining Mr. Nobody, he should get partnered with Goofy as the corpse part hunters.

Scud and DAVE are eliminators, different jobs with some crossover.

>>87428061
He only wants the complete Corpse to use 「Nowhere Man」's ability, Paint it Black, on it and delete the concept of heroism (what does that means is open to interpretation). We could say that to achieve this He needs to Paint it Black the actual Superman (painting the Corpse does nothing), but since He has been dead for a long time, Nobody needs to create a new Supes (Superman, Supergirl, Superwoman, etc) and then use his Stand's ability. In the process of assembling the complete Corpse, Nobody accidentally releases Stardust.

>>87430234
How does he pick who will merge with the corpse parts?

Mr. Nobody should also have a deal/promise with TOM that no harm will come to Serenity like the deal Valentine made with Steel not to kill Lucy.

>>87430548
In Doom Patrol, Nobody sees the members of the Brotherhood of Dada as comrades and friends, I assume the same applies here, so he won't be willing to erase one of his brothers in arms, that's why he is looking for a suitable host for the Corpse outside his party (what could be the specifics necessary for this new supes, I don't know)

>Mr. Nobody should also have a deal/promise with TOM that no harm will come to Serenity
Agree. If we are using Jane, maybe she is the original host picked by Nobody, then something happens during the climax and Nobody turns to Serenity, breaking the deal with TOM.

>>87430747
One of the other things kicked around is Mr. Nobody needs to charge the corpse with unfiltered sunlight, so he does that in space.

I think [Paint it Black] should work more selectively than the broad strokes we seem to be thinking of it with. I've been thinking it lets him break the 4th wall a little and alter narrative boxes for a character's description by blacking out words.

>>87430805
Well, its description says that is the shot in the head what erases the whole identity. Hitting someone (or something) somewhere else could erase a particular trait.

Interestingly, one Supergirl (Linda Danvers) was created when she merged with the previous Supergirl.

>>87431095
What I'm saying is, this use of the ability isn't shooting ink at people, it's using the ink to re-write their characters by crossing out words used to describe them.

If he did this to Pym for example, we'd see the narration box with "Future Mad Scientist" in it, then Mr. Nobody could cross out "mad" erasing the the part of Pym's character that makes him prone to mental instability.

Or he could cross out "future" and have Pym's instability rise to the surface immediately.

Or he could cross out "scientist" and make him just an average guy who needs meds.

Third time today I've had to bump this from page 10.

>>87431666
There is already in the story a scene where Nobody uses his ink to selectively delete parts of a character's identity (Klimer in Hill Valley). I would like to keep the idea of the concentrated ink headshot erasing the whole identity as Nobody's intended way to paint the Hero's Corpse (or the host of the Corpse, if we use that idea).

>>87433395
It was a slow day and having a ip ban at work didn't help

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>>87431666
We might as well have Mr. Nobody unmasked to be Tom Sawyer at the end then.

>He could turn gravity into gravy!

>He can turn the planets into plants!

>He could turn Uranus into...

The idea that the president turns out to be a hick boy from Missouri who just conned everyone into voting for him after he was released with [Carolina In The Morning] is pretty comical actually. I don't guess it'd make sense though, given their contrasting(?) characters. Maybe Tom is an AU Nobody brought up or something?

>>87433638
It all depends on how Mr. Nobody uses the ink.

He can shoot it like a squirt gun all over someone like a joke pen, or he can use the pen like an actual pen.

So the real end bosses are going to be The Wizard with some kind of power boost and Stardust? Nobody will be a goner before this endgame?

>>87434277
Just like SBR. Unless you have any alternative suggestions?

>>87434292
Nah, I really liking that scenario.
Some threads ago I suggested reincorporating 「Space」 and 「Stretch」 in some ways, like in the abilities of some Stands. Those ultimate abilities described at the end of each power could be used to take down each of the antagonists.

>>87434395
Could work.

That reminds me though, we don't have a counterpart of 「Spin」, do we?

>>87434428
Nope, Space and Stretch were meant to be the counterparts of the Spin, but they were dropped along with the universe reset.

>>87434428
MELODY is out Ripple counterpart, and since we didn't do a universe reset, MELODY remains in place of spin, I think.

There is talk about characters knowing how the laws of the narrative work and using those to their advantage, which could be something new, or a sub-skill of MELODY.

There is an idea that Pym wants to learn this from Hex, who is able to "see things coming" even if it's something no one should be able to predict.

It's still an idea that needs work if we actually go through with it, but we're already having shades of it with Mr. Nobody weighing karma before committing to some questionable actions.

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>>87428748
Hmm... maybe change Shocker's lines to something like the following. Also, his powers are vibration based, not electric.
>Shocker dodges bullets and flicks on his gauntlets
>Shocker: "D-Don't make me use these. You'll regret it."
>Hex's line is the same
>Shocker begins to get his gauntlets ready
>Pym steps in, "Hold on, now. Don't want you shaking the building apart, wouldn't be good for anyone except the construction crews."
Same thing as the original happens until Hex notices the police.
>Shocker sighs and turns off his gauntlets
>Shocker: "Uh, yeah. Nothing personal."
>Shocker heads out quickly, head down, maybe slipping on a trench coat and a hat like pic related. The rest is the same

We could still use your thuggish Shocker if pragmatic Shocker isn't what people want, but I think pragmatic Shocker is more interesting. Also, the guy was scared of the Punisher and Scourge, it makes sense he'd want to avoid a confrontation with a similar hero that isn't averse to pumping villains full of lead.

>>87435042
Well, they're not inside a building, they're in the middle of a street.

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>>87427277
I don't even know if I'll be able to pull it out considering I'm more directed toward platforming games and MUGEN isn't easy to use at all. Maybe I'll do it some time after the story itself is finished. This is mostly because I'm going to be busy with important stuff.

>>87423801
I think some characters intended for part 7 wouldn't fit in part 8, considering 8 and 7 contrast so much in story, medium and tone. It's better if we find a good way to make them relevant to this story. We still have plenty of unfinished stuff for part 7 after all.

>>87422073
Pretty good Anon, please keep em coming

>>87433395
It will get better later

>>87431666
Yes, that would make the theme that Corpse Parts grant comic-themed 4th wall breaking powers more explicit in Nobody's Stand.

>>87434169
Yes, he'd probably work as an Nobody AU counterpart too.

I think we already have enough Mr Nobodies to make an Nobody-only Brotherhood of Dada now.

>Pym walks out of the building and hears gunshots, right down the street an honest to god cowboy is fighting what might be a ninja
>Pym is amused by this spectacle and tries to get a better view
>Shocker dodges bullets and flicks on his gauntlets
>Shocker: "What're you trying to pull, old man? Other than your back."
>Hex: "Quite the bounty you've managed to gain despite looking like you stole that get up from a whore house. You're wanted in all 50 states, and then some and I'm lookin' to cash in."
>Shocker raises his gauntlets "D-Don't make me use these. You'll regret it."
>the smart part of Pym realizes this is bad and steps between them
>Pym: “No hold on, the vibrations from those will blow out all the windows in town and that won't be good for anyone but the window fitters.”
>Pym turns to address Hex “Now I know this is your business, but I feel obliged to inform you that this man, a criminal he may be, is entered in the Wacky Races.”
>Hex: “Makes no difference to me, I don’t care what sporting event he’s in.”
>Pym: “Now this is the part that does make a difference to you, all entries in the races have been granted clemency by President Mr. Nobody. I’d hate for you to end up behind bars due to a lack of information.”
>Hex spares a glance to the sidelines and cops are nodding that this is true, he holsters his gun>Shocker sighs and turns off his gauntlets
>Shocker: "Uh, yeah. Nothing personal."
>Shocker heads out quickly, head down, slipping on a trench coat and a hat, leaving Hex fuming
>Pym approaches Hex once again who lashes out at him “Now hold on, now I’m going to tell you about a loophole. If you enter in the race that clemency will also extend to you, so as long as you can catch him during the race, you can still claim the bounty.”
>Hex: “Is that a fact?”
>Hex goes in to register and Wander holds to the door open for him on the way in

>>87435898
Character limit prevents me from being able to link back to the posts

>>87435042
>>87422073
So how's the revision looking now?

I think Shocker should get cockier as the race goes on and he continues to evade capture, right up until he actually goes get hog tied or whatever Hex does to bind him.

>>87435736
I'll do stuff here and there for part 7, but I'm really hoping someone else will do the bulk of the writing this time.

Anyway, time for it to fall on someone else to keep the thread alive.

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>>87436386
Morning Bumpy

>>87435934
Shocker can be more thuggish around people he fully believes that he can boss around

>>87438980
Who might he believe those characters to be?

>>87437722
Yeah, bump before I have to go do stuff.

>>87439786
Background racers, the people of Aberdale, maybe Wander before karma backfires on him and something hits Shocker in the head.

>>87440608
Wander is like a karma magnifier, any interaction with him somehow causes a butterfly effect.

>>87441448
Since he's our Pocoloco, rather than having good luck, helping everyone on sight has earned him a massive positive karma that shields him from bad deeds.

>>87441521
Something like that could probably easily be mistaken for a stand.

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Is this from Man of Steel Ball Run?

>>87442857
I'm sure that image is older than the project, though an older Samurai Jack does appear in this part.

>>87442857
Use it anyways

>>87443011
Johnny died in part 3 though.

Would at any point there be a fancy party thrown for the racers in a swanky mansion where they all had to dress up?

>>87444101
Not gonna lie, that sounds like an awesome idea.

ome characters get into a fight, then it just completely escalates into Stand free-for-all.

>>87444185
Where would that happen at?

Fantastic Island with Stark as the host?

Cape Suzette with TailSpin Shere Khan as the host?

Rio with that one mafia guy suggested last thread or the thread before as the host?

Maybe it's a late game event to celebrate whoever is left and let the media ask them stuff while the true goal of it is to steal all the remaining corpse parts.

>>87444101
Counterpoint.

Alternate reality shenanigans and/or Timetravel. Jack gets jettisoned through portals enough he might have dragged someone with him.

>>87444437
Time travel always feels kind of cheap to me if it wasn't already an established element in a story from the start.

Time travel is one of those things where the only way to do it right it to have it planned since before the beginning so that if it wasn't something made apparent right from the start, there's enough stuff that had happened to make it not seem like a copout or that the author hits a wall.

Now, a flashback of young Jack meeting Johnny as he's telling stories of his adventures to Yellowjacket, that's something I could get behind.

And we do have a means to start that since Jack and Johnny used the same laundromat back in the CN City bumpers.

I remembered that when the race goes through the Old Country, the racers would visit the landmarks left by the events of part 5, one of them being Patrick still stuck in the ground as an Angelo rock of sorts.

>>87444101
>>87444384
A reward from one of the checkpoints perhaps? There is also the cruiser in the Gibraltar Strait.

>>87444437
>>87444577
Nobody's stand has very poorly defined AU abilities like D4C which, apparently, allow him to drag in alternative versions of himself in different mediums (Tom Sawyer is him in a literary style for example.)

There are probably alt earth versions that he'll make references too. Could lead to some strange conversations.
>"Hmm, I could've sworn I saw Johnny Bravo down there. Did he die?"
>"He's been dead."
>"Oh, yes, that's right. I almost forgot, that was the universe where we made a wrong turn at Albuquerque."

Or something along those lines. Speaking of Albuquerque, that should be wherever Bugs is fought.

>>87444384
>>87444101
I'm curious whether or not Scooby and Shaggy should cameo at the party in the Mystery Machine. Or some other Mystery solver gang.

I'm also reminded that we don't have Speed Buggy in here either.

>>87445096
Bugs is already slated to be fought on Fantastic Island.

And we did have something like Mr. Nobody talking about other AUs, there was one bit of greentext where he was talking about the anime AU and how tasteless he found everyone's spiky hair there.

>>87445605
We still need an Albuquerque joke.

>>87445849
Actually, Albuquerque can be a place they go through while heading from Aberdale to CN City.

It just needs to be before Nowhere.

Who pick the remaining jars after The Beast is defeated?

>>87445096
He can summon a single Nobody at a time, the alt-Nobodies lack a Stand, instead, each one possess a different ability from their original dimensions. There was an idea that he could be able to pull other stuff from the alternate universe if the alt-Nobody was holding it.

>>87447867
The same guys who Bugs messes with in "Whispering Pretty Stories I Long to Hear Once More", who are currently Snake Eyes, Hammerhead, Neon Noodle, and possible those other gangsters from that Daffy cartoon.

I'm thinking they should be called "The Front Men" since that's what Mr. Somebody called the people he was using after he came back wrong.

Now if The Front Men consist of anyone working for Mr. Nobody who aren't members of the Dada Party, would that make Goofy, Scud, DAVE, and eventually the Wizard Front Men as well?

>>87449005
yes,unless is the name of just that group of criminals (the ones from the Daffy Duck short)

>>87449231
I don't think the criminals in "The Great Piggy Bank Robbery" were associated with each other outside of all of them being criminals.

Page 10 bump.

What is using the Wizard as a transport, a horse?

>>87449327
Nobody probably just killed/reformed them all to ensure his election.

>>87450767
I think the Wizard Daffy bit from The Loony Toons Show had him riding a motorcycle.

>>87451299
Either that or a Parade Float.

>>87451400
Parade float being pulled by motorcycles.

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>>87451474
With Figment the dragon as his co-pilot.

I mean, Figgy does appreciate imagination, which The Wizard certainly has a lot of if he's managed to start turning into LeTerally.

>>87451583
I think if he had a co-pilot it'd be another character from The Wizard segment.

He had hot babes fawning all over him in that short.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Oe7Q8OCm5I

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>>87452025
Maybe he initially rides with nameless bitches that he throws at the heroes as distractions during the race?

I just thought of Figment because I figured he'd want a dragon. It'd probably be later in the race though. I had the idea he'd find Figment (who is looking for Dreamfinder's descendant, a guy called "The Warden") and keep him around because it'd turn out he can sniff out corpse parts. Figment goes along with it because he thinks it's just a game. He'd probably switch sides once he learns the Wizard's true goals or whatever.

There'd be a running gag where the Wizard would refer to him as his dragon familiar only for Figment to constantly correct him.

>>87452197
Would that dynamic be too similar to Von Drake and his Puff the magic dragon stand?

>>87452259
I don't guess so. The Wizard just wants Figment to play along with his "fantasy" schtick. Figment would too, but also tend to point out that, technically, he's just a figment (possibly a sentient stand or something). The Wizard would likely know this, but he's dedicated to the role. Meanwhile they'd get along better. Figment is more mellow and childish and The Wizard is more cynical and hammy. He puts up with Figment's antics when they suit him. Otherwise he has him "play" with the other racers. Figment couldn't do anything but cause vivid hallucinations (though they can hurt you if you believe they can) and locate corpse parts.

It's less like Ludwig thinking he's insane, and more like the Wizard is babysitting what he sees as a surefire way to get to the power Nobody promised him. If that makes sense?

>>87452780
I guess.

Where would the Wizard meet Figment?

>>87452197
I recall there was a Scary Monsters-like Stand with dragons in the archive that was mentioned some threads ago. I'll take a look.

>>87452780
Would he be interested in hunting the Corpse parts before allying with Nobody? Right now, his motive is hunting down the remnants of Daffy's identity.

>>87453367
We could have the Wizard obtain his "dragon familiar" during the European phase in one of those old castles.

Maybe Paris is where the Wizard becomes flustered over what he sees as inadequate performance and ability to live up to what he believes the real Daffy would be capable of and that's when Mr. Nobody approaches him since more and more corpse parts are falling into the hands of the racers and Mr. Nobody doesn't think Scud and DAVE (and Goofy) will be enough for the job.

>>87453293
Midway through. Fantastic Island possibly? He could save Figment from the Daffy-abomination. If that's too early, maybe somewhere in Spain-Paris? He's probably with the Wizard by the time he meets Danger.

>>87453437
That would work I'd say.

>>87453463
Mr. Nobody would also explain to the Wizard the nature of the "lucky person's foot" that merged with him while he was absorbing the Daffy's fragments out of the partially La Cucaracha'd Snake Eyes.

This could happen concurrently with the story of the Hero being told to other characters.

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>>87453437
>>87453463
Dreamfinder COULD have been someone who worked at the Looniversity when it first opened, or whatever institution it stood upon,. So that could be why Figment is around there. Maybe Figment was his stand who was somehow brought back with the corpse or something? Either that or he remained a long time after his death and began looking for his descendants once he realized that there were bound to be some.

>>87453437
>>87453438
The old story we had in Daffy's diary said that his ancestors were french aristocrats before the revolution. The Wizard could venture into a castle or manor that was owned by Daffy's family in his hunt for LeTerally's identity.

>>87453754
That'd work.

Would this happen before or after Paris?

>>87453557
He could've been a stand bound to the castle the Wizard finds him in, and by taking a piece of that castle or absorbing energy from it, the Wizard is now able to bind Figment to whatever he wishes.

>>87453858
You mean before or after reaching the checkpoint? I couldn't tell, depends of how much time it would take the Wizard to explore the castle/manor and get what he's looking for, and where is located of course.

>>87454519
Well where in France are old castles located? South of Paris or to the East of Paris?

If south,then before the checkpoint.
If east, then after the checkpoint.

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>>87454554
>Well where in France are old castles located? South of Paris or to the East of Paris?
Well, they are everywhere: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_castles_in_France

Though I might have found something interesting, see the title of the postcard (and translate it)

>>87455981
Cockroach castle.

Huh.

So, what would draw the Wizard to this castle?

Oh, and at Paris the Wizard should have not gotten first place for any of the legs of the race so far, leading to him being flustered over feeling he's not living up to the identity he wants to claim.

>>87456611
Perhaps at one point in his life Daffy returned to the home of his ancestors and even used it as a temporary base of operations. The Wizard may believe that there are belongings left behind by LeTerally that still carry part of his identity (or he is so obsessed with Daffy that he can't lose the opportunity to visit the chateau and learn more about him).

>>87457007
If we ever get around to continuing Over Feathers, maybe it could be mentioned in that.

I think the Wizard would seriously want Over Feathers. Was it destroyed when Belle Reve turned into a pillar of STAR energy like a volcano? Or were there copies?

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>>87457365
I was wondering the same. Last time it appeared, LeTerally's diary was in the Warden's office. I don't think there were copies of it, but there is the small chance that it survived the destruction of the prison.

In a semi-related note, that damn manor is hard to find.

>>87457632
Would you say it's a phantom manor?

It's possible the diary survived. The STAR energy eruption either destroyed the Warden and Dora's bodies because they possessed STAR energy and it ripped it right out of them, the heat from the removal incinerating their bodies as it blasted into space, or it simply shot them into space and scattered everything inside of the prison over the surrounding landscape.

Or an earlier draft exists, but that seems unlikely since Over Feathers is a dairy.

I think I'm too tired for this right now since I just got a fabulously convoluted idea.

If Over Feathers was destroyed, then the Wizard could create a "ghost" of the Carolina in the Morning ability and travel into Being Yourself.
Within the book world he could find Daffy's writing desk with Over Feathers intact and absorb a huge amount of Daffy's identity from it.

How he'd make a "ghost" of a stand's ability is something I have no idea how he could do, but he is supposed to have a weird copy of [La Cucaracha] developing inside of his staff that grows stronger with each bit of Daffy's identity he absorbs.

Maybe I'll think of something better when I'm better rested, or maybe someone will build off of this.
Or maybe I'll wonder what the hell was I thinking when I look at this again tomorrow.

Either way, this is my final bump to the thread before bed.

>>87457868
Well, the only pictures that exists of that manor are a couple of old postcards. From what I managed to piece together, it's (or was) located in the commune of Nueil-les-Aubiers in the Deux-Sèvres department, which means that is southwest of Paris.
If the diary survived the explosion, the Wizard could tell in one of the chapters the story of how he came into possession of the diary.

alright, what else should happen during the racers' stay in Fantastic Island and during the atlantic stage?

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>>87459852

>>87377488
>>87378024
that would be funny, a bunch of idiots knocking down some of the racers to steal their cars thinking they can join the race, only to be caught by the authorities along the road (and they keep insisting that they are official racers).

>>87460300
When they arrive they should be greeted by Stark and a pile of parts to help them get their vehicles sea worthy.

There should be some tourist attractions on the island that distract some of the racers, like a large hill that's always covered in flowers that are in bloom (Clifford's grave).

We need a reason for racers to go to where Bugs is so they fight the Daffy-Snake Eyes-abomination, we also need to work out how that fight is going down, but I guess specifics like that are for later. Right now we just have the ending to it where the Wizard unintentionally saves the day by draining the Daffy identity fragments out of Snake Eyes.
We still need a stand for Snake Eyes.

As for the water crossing leg of the race, we need to establish the archipelago. Most racers are going to be hopping across it on their way to shore.

We need time limits, not just for the Fantastic Island -> Spain leg, but for all of the legs of the race. The time limit will set the pace and how much goofing around we can accommodate.

>>87462577
I think they'd get struck by lightening by the witch who oversees the rule enforcement.

>>87458336
So he'd explore it while on his way to Paris then.

How run down is the manor? Is it just ruins at this point in the story?

>>87463386
Well, the island is pretty big, we should decide where Daffy's villa was located.
What islands are we going to use for the archipelago?

>>87464622
Daffy's ancestors were chased by french revolutionaries, maybe they wrecked the place or they "reclaimed it" and occupied it for some time, regardless of what happened to the manor, is unlikely to be in pristine condition.

>>87464771
His villa was a ways away from the port, I think it was inland , possibly somewhere elevated.

Aside from Voya Nui, we haven't even talked about the other islands.
I imagine Gerald gets on the racers' cases because they destroyed his rock.

How many days are they allotted to get to the next checkpoint from Fantastic island? If it's more than one then we can have them make camp on some of the islands.

>>87464966
Maybe the sound of music lures some characters to the villa.

Others end up there just having a look around the island, giving their vehicles test runs.

Only those looking for the corpse parts end up there intentionally.

I don't think Pym and Hex would end up there, they'd probably fight the other front men who already fled the villa.

>>87465740
Maybe there are bounties on those gangsters.

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>>87465740
So we are using the whole group? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9ly35NQfZw8
They could be like the eleven men or the boom boom family and have a shared Stand, the catch being that the less users it has, the stronger it gets. Or only Snake eyes has a Stand and is able to extend its abilities to the rest of the gang.

>>87466661
I think that at this point Hex and Pym are still unconvinced about the story of the Corpse (the first part they find is in Voya Nui), so Hex could be looking for another mark. Maybe they took down half of the group here and the survivors attempt to steal the corpse eye when Hex finds it.

>>87467765
A shared stand would work.

Maybe it's responsible for them being Dick Tracy parodies.

>>87467765
I don't know how many of them we're using, but I do think Hex would get to hunting them while on Fantastic Island. They're not racers, so Hex is free to hunt them at the checkpoints and starting locations.

Hex and Pym arrive at the villa because that's where the small fires said Snake Eyes is at, which leads to a fight.

I think only Snake Eyes should have a stand, I say this because all of his other guys got spooked away when Bugs revealed he was a stand user. So him having a stand that can be shared with others could work.

>>87467834
>>87467947
So, the Stand has the same ability among its users (like Tattoo you!) or it has a different ability depending on its current user (like Tomb of the Boom)?

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>>87457868
>Phantom Manor
If he meets the ghosts of LeTerally's ancestor Melanie Duck and some mysterious Phantom keeping her hostage it'd be a neat reference. And maybe have the Ghostly Trio from Casper cameo as Hitchhiking Ghosts?

Would be a nice little sub-plot so he and Figment would get to know each other better. Also provide some more exposition on Daffy's family and the Wizard.

>>87468034
Probably the same ability for all. They're pretty generic considering how numerous they are. Maybe it evolves after enough members die and gets new abilities?

>>87468034
Maybe his stand is able to merge objects with people and that's why the whole gang is as weird as they are.

>>87468096
Would the ghosts mistake the Wizard for Daffy? Would they become enraged when they figure out he's not Daffy?

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I'll just post this suggestion while things are slow.

(Very Fitting) Stand Name: [Linha de Frente] (Front Line) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6HXhflx-hl4 https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w8SUgFLvF0o
User: Smudge/Cascão
Appearance: His smudge-like tuft of hair maybe

Ability: Can smudge things with a weird dirt-like paint. It makes things useless, stuck-in-place and helpless, kinda like stickers in Paper Mario. The weakness is that the smudges are easily removable with normal cleaning methods, such as water. Not especically because of this, he has a fear of water and bathing. He also usually keeps himself full of dirt just so anything that touches him becomes infected with the dirt thing, making it lose its physical features.

Role: Is the counterpart of Wall-e (because he also has a affinity with trash and dirt) in the Dora party reference thing that may be used in the Rio leg of the race during or after Monica lost her corpse part.

And no, this is not too much like Nobody's Stand.

>>87468096
When he gets Figment? After searching through the chateau?

When looking for the manor, he could ask directions to the farmers of the area, which are descendants of the family's servants, one of them offers to lead the Wizard to the manor, where he plans to murder him and steal his stuff but the Wizard quickly dispatches him with his Stand (probably ripping a glass eye out of his face and pummeling him with it).

Unrelated, but I also entertained the idea that the Wizard has actual knowledge of occultism, and some of Daffy's ancestors were alchemists or something along that line.

>>87469216
We do need more things planned for Phase 3: South America.

Sounds like it'd be good, but who does he fight and how?

>>87469379
I like that. Maybe the recognize the Wizard as a descendant of the old family that used to lord over them. Maybe the mention his beak.

>>87470108
I'd imagine Monica either dies (which is more probable considering the tone of this part) or gets retired of her job as the corpse part guardian when someone working for Nobody steals the corpse part or something.

Since the corpse part is so ideologically important to their country, her gang (which is a mirror of Dora's gang) goes on to try to retrieve the part from Nobody, maybe Jimmy Five replaces her as the leader of the gang until then. That would act as some more background stuff for Nobody to deal with or as something we could pull off if we need to.

As for Smudge himself, he'd probably have a role similar to Wall-e. Like some kind of "the bait" or "the friender" roles.

>>87470397
So Smudge works with Monica?

Keep in mind that Monica in this setting has been a little girl for over 50 years because of the corpse part.

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>>87470660
Yeah, I saw that too. I've been thinking that maybe her gang just outgrew her and that she was already cursed with immortality when she met them for the first time. Though it feels lame to me to imply that they aren't her childhood friends, so I want to try to keep them that way.

I could say that she had many gangs in the past (maybe reference the other character 'gangs' of her comics while we're at it) and that she has just met Jimmy and Smudge now. Maggy could be an already deceased character from her very fist gang too.

Ugh, it still feels kinda wrong to split them like this. I'd be happy to just have her as the remaining character of her 60's kids gang.

>>87471305
If she has to have a gang then just say that they're her current gang and she hasn't told any of them about her non-ageing.

Maybe that could be used against her by something, if she doesn't surrender the corpse part they'll reveal to her friends that she's actually really old and she's afraid she'll lose them sooner rather than later if they know her secret.

>>87471402
I don't know if they are going to bother so much about this. It might work on her though since she might be naive enough to be afraid of this. Does the little guardian girl in Jojo have her innocence conserved with her? If so, this might work.

>>87472003
Sugar Mountain did play with dolls, so any child-like innocence Monica has in her source material can be easily kept here.

>>87472184
Good, that would probably still make the others her "childhood friends" considering she's always in her childhood. Would be cool to have her with dolls of other characters from gangs she befriended a long time ago, maybe to reference the human fruits in Sugar Mountain's Tree.

Is Monica going to be stuck with the corpse part like her Jojo counterpart? Also, I think having her just give away the corpse part without even a little fight a little lame. What would happen to her if she stopped guarding the part anyway, would she lose her powers and return to normal? The most I've suggested is that it would make the country lose something valuable, but that's it.

>>87472544
I think there should be something binding her to the corpse part, not physically, but she's cursed to keep watching over it.

If it gets taken away from her she just has a feeling "something really bad will happen", so she keeps protecting it despite wanting to be rid of it so she can grow up already.

It gives us room to have other forces in play during that part.

>>87472702
So she stops growing up? Her endgame should probably be finally growing up with her canon friends later then, hope that's not too happy-yappy to be on Part 7.

Also, her friends' Stands were originally given through her corpse part, which is why both Jimmy's and Smudge's Stands have something to do with 4th wall breaking abilities.

Maybe that infused feeling of heroism of hers makes them go after the corpse part later, which gives us back the possibility of using them to investigate Nobody.

>>87473208
Sugar Mountain got to live and go free after the corpse parts she was stuck guarding were taken.

I'm not saying it should be easy, but the Rio arc should have some twists.

>>87424112

Dan Backslide was suggested a while back, boyyo. Before even the meme. It just so happens that he got revamped and placed into Part 7.

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Reminder that we have to decide on One Last Time's ability and Backslide buffed Stand.

>>87464966
wasn't there an abandoned village and city before Daffy's villa?

>Aside from Voya Nui, we haven't even talked about the other islands
Are the other islands also from bionicle?

>>87475710
We're all kinds of out of order with the planning for this part.

There was the port, an abandoned village, a town, and then finally Daffy's villa.

That was over 10 years ago in-universe now and the island has been under new management since making it into a tourist destination, so the village has probably been rebuilt or torn down and the town and ports have probably been given a beautification treatment.

From my understanding, DAVE is programmed to predict the moves of his opponent?
What if [One Last Time] lets him ...

Turn the individual parts of his robot body into automatons that carry out specific tasks?

Spawn robotic copies of people? Make illusions of other people he can project onto objects?

Uhh... I'm coming up blank here since I really don't know anything about the character or the song or anything here.

Why not just pick a completely random power and give him that, then have him work it into his fighting style rather than try to build a power out of what he is already?
Stand powers have always been really fucking random.

>>87449327
Courage, Samurai Jack, Beetlejuce and Hank Hill weren't associated with each other but still saved the day. Its the essence of what a crossover is

>>87478006
I mean I don't think they were all part of the same gang in the short they all appeared in.

That's the context behind my post.

Giving this a bump before bed.

As always, hoping someone else keeps it bumped through the night.

>>87478006
I love these reflective moments because I realize just how freaking weird this project is.

So where are we starting to see gaps in the story? We have settings down, sure, but do we know what's happening in most of them? And is the final boss, so to speak, Stardust, Wizard Daffy, Nobody, or something else entirely?

>>87480310
Yeah, Stardust and Wizard Daffy are the final bosses, Nobody dies before that (we have to plan when and how)

>>87481260

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>>87480310
There was also that ideia about Superboy Prime being Superman painted black by Nobody's Stand. We could have the bosses be defeated in a order then, maybe by different parties or characters.

For now it goes like this, right?

>Nobody
>Wizard Daffy?
>Stardust? (Maybe we could use Crazy Jane's multiple identities with multiple Stands thing to somehow counter Stardust's Stand fusing thing)
>SuperBoy Prime?

>>87476068
Looking through the archive, one of the suggestions for his Stand was being able to take the memories of his target.

>>87482284
Wizard Daffy is probably the last one, since he's the equivalent of alt-Diego. Nobody could die onboard the Absolution during the commotion caused by Stardust's release.

>>87483185
How about it being able to turn organic things into robotic drones that he can program to do whatever?

>>87480310
The biggest gap I'd say is what happens between Rio and going to space.

There's something that happens between those two events, but no one has pitched anything yet.

So has anyone else noticed how most of the "arcs" in this part are being named based on lyrics from songs relating to the locations or characters featured in those arcs?

What would the Rio arc be called? The arc before it is "This Perfect World will Spin" which are lyrics taken from the opening song of the Emperor's New Groove since they're going through Kuzco's old kingdom for that arc.

>>87485027
What's the next checkpoint after Rio? Where is the Absolution docked?

>>87485849
That's the question I'm asking.

I assume Rio was meant to be the starting point for phase 3, but then the hijacking and Tulio's country happened. So, is Rio the 7th checkpoint, or the phase 3 starting line?

I've thought often about how close this would be a true race around the world if Africa and the middle east were checkpoints, it seems a lot but at the same time we had two corpse parts that weren't given locations (outside of we don't have an idea just give them to nobody before the race starts)

>>87486642
I think we'd get too long if we went over 9 checkpoints.

Right now it's
Phase 1 start: Hill Valley City, CA
1 - San Fransokyo, CA
2 - Aberdale, AZ
3 - CN City, NY?
Phase 2 start: Fantastic Island
4 - Cruise ship docked in the Strait of Gibraltar
5 - Paris, France
6 - Refugee town, Old Country
Phase 3 start or intermediate: Tulio's country
7 - Rio? Or is it phase 3 start?
8 - ???
9 - ??? or they go to space and the Wishing Star is the 9th and final checkpoint.

That's already a lot with everything that happens in-between.

>>87486620
I thought the latin american stage started in the Andes mountains. After Rio, the only checkpoint mentioned is Cape Suzette whose location is to be decided

>>87486642
>we had two corpse parts that weren't given locations
The right eye and the other arm, correct? we could put both eyes in Voya Nui. The arm would still be missing though (unless it ended somehow buried in the moon).

>>87487080
They LAND there, as in bailed out of the onfire under attack Iron Vulture, as in that was not intended to be their destination by everyone aside from Mr. Nobody who arranged for the sabotage so they would be stuck in Tulio's country to retrieve the skull.

They were intended to land, by everyone else, in Rio, which then would've been the starting point for phase 3.

So my question still stands: Did Rio, from an in-universe perspective, become checkpoint 7 or is it still the starting point for phase 3?

>>87488077
And just for good measure, to make sure I am being absolutely clear, is the Tulio's country arc considered part of the official race or not?

Did Mr. Nobody, seeing that they crashed there, say "Well, that's as good a place as any to start, next checkpoint will be where you were meant to land at instead of where you did land at."

Because I really feel like no one is getting what I'm asking at this point.

>>87488077
but Kuzco's kingdom is north of Tulio's country, that would mean they will be already in a (relatively) secure area, when the Iron Vulture is forced to land.

>>87488306
They end up in Tulio's country, FLEE to the north as he chases them with his army, THEN they're in Kuzco's old empire AFTER Tulio is dead and they've escaped his country.
Then they get told to head to Rio.

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>>87488461
Ok, is just that saying Andes mountains could mean anything between Colombia and Chile.
Now we need to figure where the Iron Vulture landed and where is Kuzco's kingdom. Was there any mention of the latter's location in part 2?

>>87489056
In part 2 is was more south than north since Johnny's group tried to escape them by plane going north. So that places it somewhere in the middle to the west I think.

But the pillarman empire had ruins everywhere I think.

We never really talked about how they made it back to where the pillarmen woke up at after fleeing hundreds or even thousands of miles to the north.

>>87486833
Is there an actual race on the moon or is just the starting line of the final stage?

>>87489260
Depending on where the ruins were located, the race could pass through Kuzco's kingdom after Rio instead of before.

>>87491574
Rio is all the way on the other side of the continent though, and that'd feel like backtracking of they ended up passing through the Andes a second time.

And no, I don't think there's an actual race on the moon. The racers get transported there via the Absolution, given orbal juice, and then pointed in the direction of the Wishing Star for the final leg of the race.

>>87489056
Chile is really far from Rio.

We should have something like a hostage plot playing out for the duration of the hijacking.

>>87493547
TOM is supposed to screw up Tulio's 「TRTN」 with his 「Space Oddity」; maybe part of the Iron Vulture's crew was captured by Tulio's army and became their “guests” in the presidential palace.

>>87493902
The Iron Vulture never touches down though.

Don Karnage retakes control as the racers are forced to bail out (I suppose other personnel also bail out) and comes back later in a refitted Iron Vulture to take revenge upon Tulio's army.

I suppose the racers who are still alive have made it out of the country by then and are hiding out in the old ruins of the pillarman empire, then Don Karnage picks them up from there and takes them to the proper stating point for phase 3.

So Rio is phase 3's starting point.

What kind of slack should Mr. Nobody give the racers for that bullshit with Tulio?
What does he need to do to fix his karma deficit, or did it fix itself with the overall quality of living of Tulio's people improving?

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>>87494085
>The Iron Vulture never touches down though.
So the racers are dropped from the ship (or use a escape vessel of sorts)?

After hijacking the race, Tulio could follow the race in his own airship surrounded by his personal entourage (like Jabba the Hutt), mimicking Nobody's usage of the Iron Vulture/Absolution.

>>87495069
>>87494901
>>87494085
>>87493902
Remind me, who is Tulio and where is he from?

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>>87495551
A character from a chilean puppet show, 31 minutos. He became the champion of champions in /co/'s hunger games.

>>87495551
Tufillo Triviño Tulio from the Chilean series "31 Minutos".

He became better known around here after last years Hungry Games craze when his Handsome form won the champion of champions game.

>>87495842
No wonder I'm getting a dupe error from a post that isn't showing up in the thread. You beat me to it.

>>87495069
Yeah, they either take escape pods or jump out while they're over water with their vehicles.

>>87495842
>/co/ hunger games
I thought those were banned.

Anyway, I've never seen a single episode of it so I'll just have to take your word for him. He reminds me of Ronald McDonald crossed with a sock monkey though.

What kills him? Do we have a defeat for him laid out?

>>87495920
Gets his head cut off in a "people's revolt" and he changes back to his normal form, then his pilot form before dying.

Then some bad guy from the Judge Dredd series gets his skull, so I guess his death happens away from any of the main focal characters.

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>>87495920
I think they moved to /trash/, once in awhile a thread linking there slips here.

>He reminds me of Ronald McDonald crossed with a sock monkey though.
Well, he is a chimp as far as I know

>What kills him? Do we have a defeat for him laid out?
Right now it says that he is mysteriously decapitated during a revolt spearheaded by V and fueled by the effect of TOM's Stand.

>>87496262
So do you think it should be like an execution, or more like something going at high speeds clips his head off?

A while ago I suggested racing duos of Banana Man/Mighty Ray and Jughead/Wimpy, as well as the Yellow Submarine Beatles as racers for this part. Would they have any part or should most of the focus go towards planning the race itself.

>>87431666
That'd actually be pretty interesting if we play around with the idea of Mr. Nobody being like Valentine by technically having "nobler" goals then the protagonists. He could use it to make people into what they've always wanted to be, and at the end offer to cross out the box that says JONAH HEX: DECEASED in order to bribe Pym at the end.

>>87434169
I'd be down with it. At the very least there needs to be flashbacks slowly revealing more about Nobody's past.

>>87489056
At some point they should stop by Club Tropicana.

>>87499788
Oh wow, I hadn't even thought of that. What would even happen if Mr. Nobody did that?

Anyway, there are some plans for the Beetles making a stop in Smallville, Kansas because of all the love in the air there. Not sure what happens there yet, still hasn't been planned and no one seems to want to make suggestions right now.

It's also been modified so that only one of the Beetles is entered in the race with the rest just along for the ride, and we still need to to determine which one is the official entree.

So at what points in the story do we start retiring characters?

>>87499931
Ringo, who just puts down the name "Billy Shears". I figured they'd being strongly drawn to the corpse in some way, though I'm not really sure how big of a role they'd have since I mainly suggested them for meta reasons.

>What would even happen if Mr. Nobody did that?
I don't think it'd ever actually happen, since Pym, like Johnny, would end up refusing, but I imagine it would bring Hex back to life, but lacking a soul since it had already moved on, leaving only an empty husk.

>"I'll make a deal with you, Henry Pym."
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EhJUFcmQ7jM&ab_channel=Weeaboss

>>87501325
Maybe instead of strongly drawn to the corpse parts, they're strongly drawn to anything Clark felt strongly about. Like they pick up on the echos of his life's good vibes and note he must've been a powerful force of love in life if his good vibes are still pinging around the world.

>>87499788
We'll find positions for those teams I'm sure. I like Jughead/Wimpy a lot myself.

>>87499788
>the deceased part is struck out
>the person is still dead but everyone acts as if they are alive

>>87501865
How many racers drop out intentionally?

Jughead and Wimpy I could see dropping out when finding something better than racing, like a burger joint with unlimited burgers.

Seems like Dick Dastardly could trick them into not crossing a finish line on time.

So, who are Tulio's lieutenants?

Threads are sinking fast tonight.

It's on someone else now to keep the thread up.

Hopefully it will be bumped and I'll have something to reply to when I wake up.

Morning bump.

So are we planning to give Jack a Stand at any point, or does he just make do without one throughout?

>>87513831
He makes do without one. His sword might get some weird STAR based power to compensate.

Or if you mean Yellowjacket, old Jack starts pretending to be his stand and no one decides to push the issue because they don't want to get cut in half. I think he develops a style that lets him control bees.

Should old Jack's sword be magic?

Demons and ghosts are able to be seen by stand users in this as well as see stands even if they don't have one themselves.
I assume angles and divinities have the same deal.

So if Jack's sword is magic, he might be able to see stands while holding it.

>>87514784
I like the idea that he can't see stands, but holds his own anyway using sneak attacks and pragmatic fighting.

>>87514967
I think he's fought invisible enemies before, so this is nothing new to him.

How should be develop Yellowjacket's bee style?

What should be the name of this style?

How would it be made apparent that it is a style? Would the Strickland Foundation employees comment on it?

>>87517752
It's Hip to Fuck Bees?

He probably unconsciously develops it. Strickland should be confused how he's created his own style without training.

>>87519242
Johnny only needed a few days (or did they have weeks?) of posing instruction to develop a style.

It should be possible to accidentally create a style if the potential is there and the right poses are struck.

He's also hanging out with Sam and Max for a bit, and those two in this setting would be natural MELODY users, so he might pick up something just by watching them.
We did say styles were a refined form of MELODY for those who don't possess the raw talent and timing needed to use MELODY.

>>87504308
I imagined them stealing Spongebob's patty car (which is why he's riding a rock like a true pioneer) so they'd probably drop out early.

Mighty Ray and Banana Man could be somewhere around Rio.