/Co/Co/'s Bizarre Adventure: Nobody re-made the thread Edition

So it is now apparent that these threads just CANNOT survive in /co/'s new fast-paced life style.
A pity, yes, I also noticed while having to make this thread that there is no link to the plus4chan thread in the OP.

Rather than update the OP, like some kind of mad man, I'm posting it here in MY second post in this thread:

http://boards.plus4chan.net/coc/t52034.html

So this thread is serving more of an announcement of sorts that if the thread dies again in the night, like we know it all will, go to plus4chan. I know almost none of you can be arsed to do this, but if we want to actually get this project done, we do need to coordinate better.

The thread died past 2am last night 4chan server time and not-a-one of you bothered to remake the damn thing. I checked, I checked many times to make sure I wasn't making a duplicate, that maybe someone else would make the thread, but no, I found nothing every time.

So here we are, greentext inbound, incoming, will be posted shortly, thread death set for 4am tonight unless my expectations are overthrown.

Now that THAT is out of the way, let me begin by clearifying to all the bot posters who ask in every single last thread without fail, exception, or substitution, that this thread is for a HUGE fanfic that we are all determined to write for unexplainable reasons that transcend better judgment.

Now where was I? >>85409007

>Just as Wong looks like he’s beaten, a golden apple appears in the middle of the battlefield
>Dora, RoboDale, and Bobby all turn to watch it fall, as it lands it’s as if they are being pulled to it by siren songs promising their greatest desires
>Wong looks around and sees Eris, another member of his entourage/gang, smiling her gappy smile, eyes filled with lust over the anticipation of what’s going to happen next
>Wong takes this opportunity to disengage them and make for the bus which Dan is still affixed to
>He finally manages to grab Dan while he was still ogling the Frizz and pulls him off the windshield; he’s got a firm grip on him now
>Wong: “Tell me where it grows!”
>Dan: “I’ll never talk!”
>Dan managed to get his gun raised and blew a hole clean through Wong forcing the two of them apart
>Dan makes like he’s going to run again, but his joints have locked up
>Wong: “You may have powers unknown to me, but now you are at the mercy of my Xuéwèi Mode. Now all your vital junctions will turn against you on my command.”
Dan: “Izza’t a fact?” as he says this his body begins to elongate as if it’s being stretched between two points until it snaps back, sending Dan to a location further away from Wong. He has just smeared himself away.
>Wong grits his teeth and continues after Dan, knowing that if he gets too far away the hole in his chest will become permanent and cause him to begin bleeding out

Probably something about whatever Dora’s group is doing here. Can't say since Beagle Boys.

cont.

>>85440992
>As the chase continues, Dan’s condition worsens; he finally notices that something (chi) is flowing from his revolver into his body, accelerating the damage done to it by Wong’s mode
>Dan collapses on the ground, no longer able to move as Wong approaches; he begins absorbing Dan’s Cels like Kuzco did with the other pillarmen.

>Eris is shown dropping to the floor hog tied with his own golden apple shoved in her mouth; the Beagle Boys are also tied up around her
>Dora’s group is triumphant, (Suzie and Wall-E are also with her now) they don’t have any time to waste though since they can hear Wong laughing somewhere behind them, then they can see Wong beginning to float in the air with a whirlwind around him as he discards the husk that was Dinosaur Dan
>The whirlwind gets strong enough to toss the bus into the air, as well as Bobby, then RoboDale as he goes to catch him
>Dora, Suzie, and Wall-E have managed to stand ground thanks to [Slug Bait] turning to the ground into muscles that clamped around their feet and tracks
>Wong smears his way over to them, ready to attack
>a spotlight from the panopticon blinds Dora and Suzie
>strange sound effects indicating they’re warping in the background
>the light fades and they find themselves standing in a vast, desert-like area of nothing but flat ground
>Suddenly Wong is assaulted from all sides by giant monster hands, tentacles, claws, gaping maws of teeth, buzz saws, drills, flamethrowers, suction cups, and stomped on repeatedly by a large foot before falling into a crumpled mess on the floor and disappearing through a trap door

Congratulations, we've made it to [Pure Imagination], the part I assume anyone who gives a damn about part 6 has been sitting on their hands waiting for.

Now I'm going to watch the thread die and not make another one if it does since that can be someone else's problem.

Input is welcome.

What we really need is a direction for the story to do from here on out. Now that we've reached the goal of PI, what's next?

>>85441172
I already have plans. I just have to write them all down in a way that resembles a story since the cliff notes are all there for the intro to Superjail!

Really, it's the Interpol Intermission that has me worried. No one seems to want to focus on that even though that's where most of the actual moving the plot forward is going to be happening where Dora and co are dicking around in PI.

>>85440905
seriously, is there any eurofag around to keep the thread alive during those dead hours?

>>85441228
we had some discussion related to the interpol arc (mostly about the Dethklok concert) in the previous thread

>>85441340
Yes, again, all me or all started by me.

Lately I've noticed I seem to be the only one coming up with ideas or pushing them forward around here. A pattern I am dreadfully familiar with while part 5 was happening.

So here's what I need everyone to do: look at the notes on the doc, bring up things from them you like, and, this is the most important part, expand on them. Not just expand, but expaaaaaaaaaaaaaand on them.

Make shit up, push for crazy crap, suggest a role for the character or suggest a new character and what they are actually doing in this part.

Specifics, we need specifics. Not just vague notions of story outlines, but plot points, things that are going to happen and how and when and why they happen.

Even though I don't even like the idea of the Daffy's other kids thing, I've already figured out and suggested, and gotten very little push back about how it could fit into the part.

I don't really know where to put Spike in. Maybe he's one of the opposing guards? Although since we are now in [PURE IMAGINATION]... There are guards in there, right?

(On the other hand, I finally read part 6. Where were we? Also, sorry for not being able to bump the thread.)

(To the raging anon, I do not imagine myself as Taffy the gray mouse. That's fucking sick. It is more of a namefagging that I really can't bother about.)

Alright, how about something for Dora and friends first day and night in the Stand prison? Just showing all the crazy shit that comes with Stand users being kept in on place. Maybe an older prisoner saves Dora from a surprise attack and keeps then safe for a bit whil describing what it's like in stand jail. Then go into Dethlok's introduction.

>>85442056
Currently I say we're in PI, but really there are gaps.

There's a big gap right at the beginning of part 6 with whatever flashbacks Dora is supposed to have involving her time with the cartel and Swiper setting her up to get caught.

There's another big gap with what's going on under the jail.
-The maze is still not converted from notes to story.
-The frogman prison is still not converted to story
-The caveman fight is still not finished
-Meeting Dan is still not written out
-The Mirage fight in Dan's chamber after he's free is still not written out

I skipped a head of all of that expecting someone else to do those parts since I had ideas I had been sitting on for days concerning Wong VS Dan.

And there are gaps even in that since there should be a cut back to Dora fighting Eris with Suzie and Wall-E joining in mid fight, but I can't do that fight because no one bothered to come up with more members for Wong's gang. So I skipped that too.

Where is that other anon who was actually doing shit in this part?

>>85442159
First thing they do in PI is make for the tower the Warden stepped to in a single bound.

Scenery changes, tower remains the same distance away.

Enter Joy, her power lets her worm her way int the group. She just wants to watch them all die because that's what gives her pleasure. So Joy keeps trying to get them killed via the various death traps, monsters, and other shit inside PI. Other inmates they meet probably laugh at them for being with Joy since they know how she operates.

>>85441461
Honestly, I don't know either what to do exactly with Daffy's other kids. They are supposed to be locked down inside PI in hopes that one of them manifests a La Cucaracha-tier Stand and further fuels Pure Imagination. At least Woody is pitched to be an antagonist (a deranged one, if we are keeping his backstory)

>>85442309
>Start heading for the central watch towers, the scenery changes, but the tower never gets any closer
>Meet Joy, she tries to get them all killed, kill Joy, Joy comes back and they learn about the respwan
>Begin looking for Inch High, find Pericles in his own kind of hell, save Pericles, Wall-E's cockroach's stand begins helping his mind heal after the ordeal, they have eyes in the sky now

>Interpol Stuff

>Dethklok gets dropped into the Superjail, they start... doing shit? I have no idea. Snatch begins chasing them
>Find Inch High, he's in a giant pinball machine with other inmates being played by someone, that someone is Gaz's stand, gotta fight it to free Inch High
>Gaz starts watching them because she recognizes Wall-E as her dad's hobby project
>Inch High is finally able to send that picture of the map to Penny before blacking out from the trauma of repeated deaths

>Interpol Stuff

>Come across Snatcher chasing Dethklok, beat the shit out of him, second hostage, Warden gives no fucks, find out from him there's an area of Superjail even more locked up, he tricks them into thinking a "key" is in there for getting out (he's lying)
>Fight Giffany, beat Giffany, Daffy's other kids are released from supermax into the rest of Superjail
>You dun fucked up
>Dethklok decide to put on a concert? Is this a distraction so Dora's group can do something?
>Vicky comes into play as she begins hunting for fresh meat?

That's the current "plan" I'm following until someone gives me something better.

>>85440739
Morrison's Doom Patrol is the most JoJo thing without being JoJo ever.

>>85442391
>Dethklok gets dropped into the Superjail, they start... doing shit? I have no idea.
Of course they protest their unfair imprisonment in the best way they can do, wrecking the place with the power of metal.

>Daffy's other kids are released from supermax into the rest of Superjail
>You dun fucked up
So, Daffy's other sons become late-game bosses like the 9 egyptian gods in part 3?

>>85442562
Yes, we have the vocaroo of their dissatisfaction with the situation.

And stop saying Daffy's others sons, we have at least one girl character stuck as one of his kids.

And they're all YOUNGER than Plucky, who is probably about 20 years old by this point in the story. So we can make them all be angsty teens or some shit.

>>85442652
Alright, Daffy's other sons and daughter.
Now we need a set list of antagonists in PI, so far:
-Gaz
-Giffany (joins the group)
-Snatcher
-Vicky
-Daffy's offspring (what's their definitive number? Is each one a Stand user?)
-El Oso
-The Warden

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The more I read what PI's world is supposed to be, the more I imagine it as a nod to the pocket dimension created by Death 13. Also, the whole concept of a hellish dimension where nobody dies but they suffer horribly and brutally reminds me of the movie Event Horizon, but this being The Warden I figure PI is hell reinvented by Terry Gilliam with his deranged animated sketches.

>>85443211
> I imagine it as a nod to the pocket dimension created by Death 13.
And the canon Superjail, Warden's endgame is expand Pure Imagination into the whole world

>>85442920
I don't think the number is set yet.

At least one of them should be plotting to escape and that leads to him/her having a run in with Dora's group.

Also, bu the time they fight Giffany the Warden should be dumping disposable stand jawbreaker powered robots into PI en mass. So she could take over one of those and project a hologram over it for her appearance. She'd still look flat though.

>>85443211
Yep.

I imagine the sky is off color too with birds flying backwards.

>>85443291
He does this by first super charging it with STAR energy, then he hooks it to the vortex to let that pull the world of [Pure Imagination] into the real world where it begins merging and continues to expand.

>>85443399
>I don't think the number is set yet.
From what was suggested before reaching part 6 we have:
-Shirley McLoon (already has a Stand)
-Woody (already has a Stand)
-Gandy Goose
-Alan-a-Dale
-Heckle and Jeckle
-Condorito
Unless they are fought separately, I feel we should not go overboard with the amount of siblings or it will be like the group battles in part 5

>birds flying backwards
>Pericles is chained and getting tortured 24/7
Damn, that's sick.

>>85442920
I'd me cool to see Skarr, though I'm not sure we're he'd fit. Probably in an attempted break out.
Speaking of wish, is that guy who keeps breaking out still in this?

>>85443706
I think Skarr is stationed in the real world prison.
>is that guy who keeps breaking out still in this?
you mean jackknife?

>>85443706
I think Skarr is going to be someone the Strickland people will have to fight in the end game to get to the armory so they can defend themselves against the monster pouring out of PI.

I don't think Jackknife is still in this, no.

>>85443683

I thought Gogo the Dodo was on there as well. I've been brewing up a Stand for him.

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anyone has an idea for Nemesis Stand or should I take a look into the archive?

>>85444241
His role as the macguffin that Warden is looking for was taken by the vortex of STAR energy, not sure if he was completely removed, though.

>>85442172

>And there are gaps even in that since there should be a cut back to Dora fighting Eris with Suzie and Wall-E joining in mid fight, but I can't do that fight because no one bothered to come up with more members for Wong's gang. So I skipped that too.

You mean, more suggestions to gang members?

>>85444886
Did I not phrase it clear enough?

Specifically the Beagle Boys were suggested, but no stands were suggested for them.

There are never any stand suggestions for characters that we actually need for filling in roles that NEED to be filled.

>>85444474
Check the archive, see if anything was suggested.

I'm pretty sure the vortex has completely removed the need for Jackknife to play the role of plot device.

>>85445497
Are we still using the Dover boys in a later part? I'm asking because they have a shared Stand in the doc that could be used by the Beagle boys

>>85445643
I know nothing about using them in any part. I recall Dan Backslide was slated for part 7, but have no knowledge of the Dover Boys making an appearance.

What sort of stand are you proposing we give to the Beagle Boys?

>>85445895
the Dover boys were suggested for part 5, here's their Stand:

>Dover Boys of Pimento University
>Choir Boys/ Caught in a Mosh/ Jersey Boys / New Kids on the Block (I really don’t have anything set in stone as of yet)
>Appearance: 3 similar humanoid stands copied between the three boys. They each have a large P on the torso.
>Ability: Harmony. The stands, while separate beings can attack and defend simultaneously. The Boys can even be separate for each other from some distance, an enemy could be fighting them and not even know that the others exist. The stands are powered by these simultaneous movements, and allow each boy to know exactly what the other is doing and going to do. When Tom’s stand punches with a left hand, Dick and Larry’s stand act the same way, etc. This triples each attack’s power. On the contrary, taking damage effects all of the boys. If all three boys are attacked in the same way, they take triple the damage. Throwing the stand’s attack’s and movements off from its brothers is key to lowering each stand’s power. The most effective way of defeating the stand is having each stand attack each other (like how they all hit each other at the end of the short- triple the attack power x taking triple the damage)

>>85446024
That would work for the Beagle Boys.

So, we are having two vaults getting raided on-screen, right?

>>85446854
At least.

We can do more if we need to establish more of the Warden's forces.

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>"Greetings, mammalian prisoner! What brings you to my humble abode!"
>"You...live here?"
>"Of course, where else would I live?"
>"Uh, yeah, anyway, so, my arm kinda got, you know, cut off in mix up with some fucker messes up your body. And it's my main hand, so I haven't been able to eat right or jack off this week..."
>"Say no more, I have the pefect solution! *grabs a saw* but I've only got pairs, and I paid a full 12 dollars for them, so we'll just have to replace both your arms so it matches!"
>"W-what?! Can't I see one of them hot nurses instead?"
>"Ugh, no one ever wants to talk to Zoidberg..."

>>85447149
Ok, I can start working in some scenes before the whole hunt begins when I get back to home. Are we gonna have the cameo of someone from Acme Acres during the investigation?

>>85447268
The Warden would get Zoidberg as a doctor.

>>85447290
Possibly.

I was going to work on the intro to Superjail later so all those notes get turned into dialogue before the Warden grabs the map and dumps Dora's group somewhere in PI.

>>85447607
>they have relatively decent doctors in the real world prison
>Warden put Zoidberg in PI to hasten the death of anyone foolish enough to seek his medical aid
>Since the inmates just respawn, Zoidberg believes his patients actually survived

>>85440905
Things are getting better. Summer of Steven is over, so the /sug/ spam is winding down, and most of the hot button /co/ topics are starting to die down as well.

>>85447903
I haven't paid attention to the time it takes to fall a page right now, gonna keep an eye on it.

>>85447799
I guess Dr. Hutchinson and Hello Nurse are in the regular prison?

>>85448161
well, they are listened among the old stuff.

>>85448196
*listed.

>>85447799
I like it.
Not sure where to work it in though.

Eh, I'm sure it'll come up eventually.

>>85447903
>>85447996
From time of last bump to the bottom of page 10 is still only 2 hours or less.
It hasn't changed from yesterday or the day before or the week before.

I'm not happy with the dialogue, someone make it better.
>>85441031
>Dora: "Where are we?"
>Susie: "I 'ave 'eard stories zat troublemakers get sent somewhere strange, where no one ever hears from zem ever again. ...or perhaps we are just dead and we are finally in Hell." *smiles awkwardly
>Dora: "It doesn't answer the question, though. Where are-?"
>an illusory double of The Warden poofs into existence in front of them, all smiles and enthusiasm
>"HELLOOO AND WELCOME TO SUPER-"
>The Warden is immediately kicked in the face by 「BOOTS」, caving in his face like it's made of rubber
>The Warden’s clone pauses, unmoved by the kick, still in his jovial pose... then continues with 「BOOTS」's foot still buried in its face like it’s not even there
>"...to SUPERJAIL! Or as I like to call it... a world of 「PURE IMAGINATION」!"
>As he says this, the void trembles and flashes with a whirl of colors and sounds, some jovial, some in agony
>The Warden morphs around [Boots] as if he’s made of smoke, twirling his cane as his face becomes enormous swallows them all
>Dora, Suzie and Wall-E now find themselves floating on a cloud above the Panopticon, or so it appears to be the Panopticon
>The Warden continues as they begin a slow decent
>”I built this place out of dreams, happy thoughts, gut feelings, and STAR light. So very much STAR light; a whole vortex of it actually.”
>Dora and Suzie exchange looks
>"I sent so many wayward souls down there to root out that one little kink in the flow, and now that that old fossil is extinct all this wonderful power is all mine to control, and I owe it in part to you!"
>The Warden is now between Dora and Suzie pulling them close so their faces are touching

>>85449917
>”Now you’re probably both wondering why I brought you here, hmm? Weelllll, call it a happy accident. I had to stomp out that old which-doctor before he caused any real damage. And seeing how I need him in the jail to take the fall for this mess, you three will just have to take his place here! Ah haha, isn’t that super?”
>The cloud is now within the Panopticon, nothing in it looks the same
>While the Warden turns his back to the three of them he continues “Think of it as an upgrade to your prison experience! Lots of fresh air, plenty of sunshine, and it’s all so much more exciting than that boring old jail you’ve been staying in up till now!”
>Dora has pulled out [Glory Road] to see where they really are, before she can get a good look at anything the Warden seemingly teleports over to them and snatches the map right out of Dora’s hands with a "Ohhhhh, what's this?"
>As the Warden unrolls the piece of paper and his eyes go over it they shoot out of his head like spikes and almost go right through it
>From the Warden’s point of view the map is showing him the location of all the stand jawbreaker caches the WB set up around the world.
>”This is fantastic!” as he spins around, floats in the air, and hugs the map
>Dora and Suzie are helpless to get it back from him, Inch High appears on the Warden's shoulder and takes a picture of it, how he got there no one knows
>The Warden’s demeanor changes in an instant from happy to furious as he swats him like a bug for his troubles in a gore-y fashion, then back to happy as he drops his three latest additions off in a field next to a wall before he extends a leg super long and with a single step is on top of the watch tower, which also has a giant golden Warden head on top of it. He then disappears
>Dora, Suzie, and Wall-E are dumbfounded over what just happened, they finally take a moment to look around
>They’re inside the Panopticon, but everything is bigger, or they’ve become smaller

>>85449943
>the ground floor is covered in grass, there are trees growing inside, the sky is a bright pink and there are birds flying backwards in it
>the wall behind them is actually part of the Panopticon
>Looking up it they see many cells lining the walls, some glowing ominously, others they can faintly hear screaming or crying coming from
>the central watch tower is now adorned with a massive golden replica of the Warden’s smiling head and is spinning light a lighthouse
>Dora is the first to snap out of the daze they’re all in, she looks at the watch tower with a determined face and begins walking forward.

Really not happy with the Warden's lines in this, but it's what I got.

>>85449943
>he extends a leg super long and with a single step is on top of the watch tower, which also has a giant golden Warden head on top of it.

>Well, this change everything. I'm sorry that our little introduction was so short, but I gotta go!
Then as he stretch his foot to the top of the tower
>Check this out, it looks like I'm eating myself. I bet I'm delicious...oh, what I'm saying, Of course I'm delicious!

>>85450255
Oh good, that's already better.

>>85447290
Alright, before I start writing that part I need some pointers: Dredd and Gameboy join this attacks? Who else is part of the raids besides Frizzle?

>>85451754
I think Dredd's staying at the prison. Gameboy and Frizzle are off collecting the vaults.

If we need to establish any other stand users working for the Warden, we can do a montage kind of thing with them raiding vaults.

>>85450013
So, would Joy be introduced next, or would there be some other introductory fight first?

>>85452923
Next I think is stuff outside of PI, there's Trevor in the infirmary and establishing Wassonasong as a mutual pain for both Trevor and Bobby.

Then there's some Interpol stuff with them getting reports of increased "terrorism" caused by the vault raiding.

When we get back to PI I guess Dora's group have been walking towards the tower for a while now and it's not getting any closer. They could've had fights between then and the last time we saw them, but Joy is slated to be their next encounter I think.

>>85449943
>The Warden’s demeanor changes in an instant from happy to furious as he swats him like a bug for his troubles in a gore-y fashion

>The Warden continues spinning and jumping in excitement until he notices that something has climbed into his shoulder, the sound of a snapshot ringing in his ear
>Warden's head spins like an owl's and stares at a minuscule human dressed like a detective perched atop his shoulder, his merry facade quickly turns into anger.
>Warden: What. Is. This? I explicitly wished for THREE (one, two, three!) prisoners to be teleported here!
>In the blink of an eye, Warden’s arm twists and catches Inch High, placing him in front of his eyes.
>Warden: I bet you are the little snitch that has been telling our sponsors all those lies, ain’t ya?
>Dora: Leave him alone, puto! If you wanna fight, fight me! I’m the mole you are looking for.
>The Warden doesn’t pay attention to Dora, He is fixated on the agent “You made me look bad in front of those uptight jerks, and now you think you can get into MY world without invitation!? Guess what I do with pests”.
>He furiously tosses Inch High to the ground and steps on him. Dora’s face contorted in horror as Warden continues to stomp the Interpol agent in a frenzied state, going up and down like a jackhammer.
>Once the Warden was sure the little intruder was nothing but a stain on his shoes, he regains his composure and jolly demeanor.
>Warden: Woohwee, It looks like we have a little ant infestation in our prison, someone remind me to do something about it.
>“I will” says a tiny cloud in the shape of the Warden’s head that quickly passes next to the group
>Dora snaps out of the shock and gives a murderous glare to the Warden: “Tú…Maricón hijo de perra!” She glows with Stand power, ready to pummel the Warden.
>Warden: Oh, sorry. Me no speak...whatever that weird language is. Oh look, we reached destination.
Then he drops the trio.

>>85453832
Nice, nice.

Hopefully we'll still be able to go back and finish the beneath the jail stuff.
I really hope it doesn't turn into another "Stan breaks into Fosters" that went unfinished until we were almost done with part 4.

>>85454505
None of the groups fight the frogmen, right? Trevor sends the robots to deal with them

>>85456802
Yeah. There's some brief scuffle before the fresher frogpeople show up. We never decided who those would be. Only suggestion was battletoads from the cartoon pilot.

>>85456931
Maybe Mr. Toad from Wind in the Willows?

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>>85456931
Well, the original frogpeople are based on the ones from Hellboy, I suppose the ones that were once humans are other humanoid frogs

>>85456960
>>85456994
We could just go with the monster frogpeople and have them have bits of clothing on from back when they were human as the only distinguishable traits.

>>85442440
In Mr. Nobody's own words "the universe is a drooling idiot with no fashion sense."

When was the last time someone important wasn't wearing something stupid?

Could someone draw Me-Mow and Suzie stuck together, maybe with some banter?

>>85457483
We haven't had drawfags for a long time; you could try your luck in the drawthread

So is my 4am prediction going to come true or is the thread still going to be here during the daylight hours?

>>85458084
I'm still lucid, so I can keep the thread alive

Oh neat, it lived.

>>85457483

We've been out of drawfags save the one guy drawing out Part 1.

Should we reveal who is the mole in Strickland shortly after Dora and co are dumped into PI or after the Interpol arc is underway?

>>85461603
We begin hinting that it's Wassonasong when Trevor and Bobby are talking in the infirmary.

We hint more heavily during the Interpol arc and it's all but confirmed when he shows up at the prison later when the Warden is about to begin his master plan.

>>85462785
something like this? haven't finished the part where Warden briefs his troops before the raiding, but this comes later:

>Warden: “Dredd! Bring me my telephone immediately! I need to communicate the good news”
>Dredd: “Sir, yes sir!” As Dredd gets away from the Warden, he mutters to himself “I’m a Judge, not your errand boy”
>Cut to a dark lit room, there's person seen from behind sitting in front of a desk. He is talking on the telephone.
>???: “ah yes, that’s good to hear. Hopefully, this will hasten the return of our company’s investment and show to each one of those old-timers that my vision is the one that the Foundation needs.
>As he hangs the telephone, the camera pans to a dossier in the desk with the logo of the Strickland Foundation.

>>85463263
Yes, that's good. It sets up the corruption nicely without giving too much away at first.

The question becomes now, how many days pass before we check back in with Dora's group?

>>85463915
I don't know about days, but maybe it goes back and forth between each group: once Warden's forces are dispatched to raid the vaults, we see what is doing Dora's group, once they deal with their first problem, the reports of "terrorist attacks" start eaching Interpol.

>>85464399
So it goes the phone call, Bobby and Trevor in the infirmary, back to Dora's group with the Joy encounter?

>>85464953
sounds fine, Bobby tells Trevor that the group is likely dead and then we see what's going on inside PI

>>85465011
So currently, with the moving forward parts, we'd be here

>Trevor is recovering in the infirmary, he’s telling Bobby about how it went under the jail this time. Bobby tells him how all that could been prevented if they used propane lanterns.
>Trevor asks about what happened to those prisoners who defended him/saved him and Bobby tells him they have been reported as having died in the chaos.
>A story neither of them believes for a second, but Wassonasong is taking a more active role in Strickland's dealings with the prison now, so they can't even confront the Warden directly about it.

>He will be the one making Wong’s life miserable from there on since Wong is a living relic, a pillarman with ages of history inside his head, and Trevor will very much enjoy taking his time to extract everything he can from Wong believing him to be the one who killed the prisoners who actually had some sense of honor and dignity in this hell hole.

>The Warden allows this because it amuses him.

>Trevor also notices that Dan waited until he was out of his own chamber before making a hole in the ceiling and wants to know more about this “vortex” he mentioned, but he doesn’t reveal this to the Warden.

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Well, this is what I have so far for the scene after the Warden gets 「Glory Road」:

>A shot of the Warden’s office, Dredd is guarding the place when a flash of light appears in the middle of the room and the Warden materializes out of thin air.
>Warden: “Dredd, Report here immediately! Dreeedd!”
>Dredd: “Reporting for duty, sir!”
>Warden: “oh, there you are. Listen, there has been a change of plans, this little thing right here is gonna be the solution to all our crime fighting troubles in the world”.
>The Warden shoves 「Glory Road」 in Dredd’s face, he is unfazed
>Dredd: “Sir, I don't see how this blank piece of paper could help us solve the criminal issues across the globe”
>Warden: “What you talking about? No, it’s not a…there has to be something wrong with your helmet (from the Warden’s perspective the map still indicates the location of the Jawbreaker vaults). It’s the location of the, hmm, major criminal hideouts, yes. One of the inmates was carrying this and now it will lead us directly to his partners in crime, isn't it wonderful?”
>Dredd: “I still see a common piece of paper, sir, but if it was in possession of an inmate, protocol states that it must be stored inside the evidence room immediately”.
>Warden: “Wait, no! Of course protocol and all that is important, but this is a game changer, so why don’t we make a small exception to the rule for once?”
>Dredd: “Sir, the protocol is there for a reason, it must be complied…”
>Warden: “Ha! I knew you would understand, Dreddy. Now gather up the guards, I have important announcements to make”.
>Dredd: “Sir (pauses) yes sir” There is a noticeably disgust in the Judge’s face for Warden's attitude.

I don't like the dialogue of the following part (Warden's speech to the guards) so I'm reworking it.

>>85467962
Seems pretty solid so far. We still need to work in >>85463263 the Warden's conversation with the head of Strickland.

>>85468122
that part is after the speech, but I'm still not convinced with the dialogue there (not very Warden-y)

>>85467962
So do you need to be touching [Glory Road] to see what's on it? Because earlier Dora and Sticks were both able to see what was on the paper.

And Inch High took a picture of the map which is going to come into play later.

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>>85444474
I'd suggest just using Deadlock of the ABC Warriors. As a crazy magic robot he already looks the part, and because of a lot of astral khaos magic bullshit is also Nemesis himself. You don't have to name him as such, just use the design. You could call him "Electric Eye Hellion" after the Judas Priest Song, the lyrics of which apply quite nicely to his background.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b1B_pZC8aWU

If Deadlock himself is ever needed as a character, use Nemesis as his stand. It's Khaos, I ain't gotta explain shit.

>>85468430
that's a good question, I just assumed Dredd didn't wished for anything, so 「Glory Road」 didn't show anything. Or it really was Dredd's Helmet what obscured the sketching in the map.

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>>85468480
Probably the best collection of references here
http://comicvine.gamespot.com/deadlock/4005-50584/images/

Very few of them in colour, unfortunately, but he's usually coloured golden yellow or sometimes very dark blue/black. The stories Khronicles of Khaos and Hellbringer would be best for those.

>>85468579
Let's just say justice is blind and play it off of that.

>>85471016
kek, that's good for me

So what kind of environmental hazards do we have in PI?

>>85471431
The whole place can change according to the Warden's whims; he can even create hellish creatures inside his mental realm. And then, of course, there are the other inmates and the guards.

>>85471562
What fixed things do we have? Specifics anon, specifics. Dora, Suzie, and Wall-E have been walking towards that tower for the better part of a day and have not gotten any closer. It's like the staircase in Super Mario 64, it just keeps going.

The wall behind them is still there and it's not getting any farther away either. It's like being on a treadmill almost, only it's more like a pop-up picture book, you never know what new thing is going to appear in your way that wasn't there a step before.

>>85471941
I don't think we have something set yet, I imagine that it will be like Vietnam and the canon Superjail mixed together: at any moment, a trap will spring and cause the most graphic death possible.

>>85472142
Because I'm thinking after walking through various fields, tundras, deserts, and whatever else without getting anywhere, there should've been some traps along that or something in the distance visible that wasn't in the same direction as the tower.

They don't start getting into the really nasty traps until Joy finds them and starts leading them off the straight going-nowhere path they've been on.

>>85471941
>the party has been walking for hours
>the background loops just like The Flintstones or something similar
>the second someone comments on it, the background changes slightly during the next loop- a Warden statue looks offended, a tree has a hat, etc.

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still not fully satisfied with the dialogue, but anyway. This goes between >>85467962 and >>85463263

>A couple of minutes later, a big crowd of guards and officials are gathered in the central courtyard of the Panopticon.
>Warden: “Is everyone here?”
>Dredd: “Affirmative, all the requested personal have arrived. Additional Mechanismos has been deployed to replace the guards during the speech, and a new batch will arrive from Strickland to supplement the workforce once the expedition is underway”.
>Warden: “Super! Now, let’s rock the stage”
>The Warden appears from a balcony in the Panopticon and taps on a microphone, there is some buzzing since the microphone is defective.
>Warden: Attention everyone! *Bzzz* Damn, this crap is broken, stupid Strickland*bzzz* Hello? Is this thing on? Oh it’s on. *Ahem* Attention everyone, I have a big announcement today: As you all know, we are fully committed to the fulfillment of the law and all what embodies, and on this day the scales has tipped in our favor on the never-ending fight against crime.
>The crowd looks uninterested with the exception of some more idealistic/ruthless guards and Gameboy, who is smiling at the possibility of hunting even more people.
>Warden: “From now on, we will take the initiative and strike at these criminals in their hidings and bring them to our prison. We will free the world of evildoers, Yay!”
>A random guard raises his hand among the crowd “are we gonna get extra pay for this?”
>Warden: “No. Now everyone get ready and report to the bus depot at 1600 hours, you will receive further briefing by your squad leader. That’s it for now, shoo”

1/2

>>85473337
>The Warden goes back to his inner chambers escorted by Dredd.
>Warden: “Alright, How it was? I'm a professional motivator or what?”
>Dredd: “Terrific, sir. The meeting with the high-ranking officers will follow just as you ordered”
>Warden: “It’s always terrific when the Warden is in the house”
>Dredd: “As much as I disagreed with holding onto that piece of evidence, this operation looks promising, but there is a small problem, sir: We aren’t an official law enforcing agency, this could lead to trouble with the authorities”.
>Warden: “Oh, don’t worry Dredd, our pals at the Interpol already gave us the clear sign for our little operation. This will be all neat and by the book”
>Dredd: “I hope so, sir. But I insist in that you allow me to participate in the crackdown”
>Warden: “Oh don’t be silly, Dreddy. I need more than ever my right hand, understand?”
>Dredd: “Understood”

2/2

Then goes the phonecall to Strickland

>>85473337
It'd be useful if we had someone who's really familiar with all things Dredd.

My main concern is he's being too under spoken or polite, but there's been so many different ways that Dredd has been written over the years that I can't really tell.

What do Bobby and Trevor make of all this? I take it the Strickland employees are left half-way out of the loop.

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>>85473655
Speaking as the Deadllock/Nemesis anon from earlier, you're right that it does depend a bit on who's writing him, but here he's a bit... flippant, I guess. One of Dredd's core attributes is that he's stoic and doesn't suffer fools gladly. Psi Judge Anderson annoys the crap out of him (at a particularly low point he said she had a "defective personality"), but she's one of his best friends and he highly values her courage, judgement and, on some level, her basic compassion. The Warden, on the other hand, has exactly the kind of personality that would drive Dredd to contemplate murder. he's not an unthinking goon, and while he has been trained from birth to serve The Law and is very harsh in is application, he also has a finely tuned sense of justice. He also is perfectly capable of judging when his bosses have gone over the line and has worked both openly and covertly to undermine them when they went too far (Judge Cal when he went insane and started executing citizens, McGruder when she introduced the Mechanismo program - he HATES robo-Judges).

I'll try and find some pages of Dredd talking to different people so you can get some idea of what he's like.

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>>85472845
>>85472567

Also, I think the enviromnent should have a small resemblence to scenarios of the real world, but everything looks so demented and distorted, like a Salvador Dali painting or as >>85443211 suggested, a sort of hell with a Terry Gilliam touch.

Pic related.

>>85474815

I think Dredd dislikes robot in general too? I remember reading a few comics where he treated his robotic servant Walter like crap. Could be a good element of interaction with characters like Wall-E and RoboDale, as he feels disdain towards them but doesn't antagonize them much because they aren't doing anything wrong.

>>85474957
Well, He got angry when he bumped into Wall-E during the retrieval of the map. I don't remember if he has interacted with RoboDale

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>>85474957
Generally speaking Dredd's actually pretty unprejudiced, in that absolutely everyone is potentially a criminal and should be judged accordingly. Humans, aliens, robots, aliens, vampires, ghosts inter-dimensional travellers, mythological beings - they're all potential perps to be watched closely.

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>>85475134
Walter is a special case, however, because Walter can be IMMENSELY irritating and for various reasons Dredd could not escape him. From a legal perspective he also basically harmless, so Dredd could do very little to stop him.

He actually does have some affection for the little drokker, but he hides it very well

>>85474815
Yes, I think we're lacking in his characteristic overly serious nature with our lines for him in this.

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I'll stop now. I can try and dig out some stories later if people want to read some in context rather than just panels.

>>85474815
Then he will get pretty angry once most of the guards are dispatched to the raids (and probably their deaths) and be replaced with Mechanismos, and Gameboy.

>>85475459
>Prince was a Judge

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>>85468480
Maybe it could be like The Captain/Azazel in part 5: Nemesis inhabits Deadlock's body to remain incognito in the mortal world after Red Guy's fall, he could also exploit the resilience of the robotic body in combat.

>>85478287
Would he still have a stand?

If he's a demon possessing a body then it eliminates the need for him to have a stand to see and interact with other stand since we've already established that demons can do that on their own.

>>85480226
I remember that Azazel had a Stand (and it seems that The Captain still had a Stand after centuries of being nothing but a corpse), perhaps only one of them, either Deadlock or Nemesis, has a Stand.

>>85480563
So Nemesis is possessing Deadlock who has a stand which Nemesis uses or Nemesis is posing as his stand much in the same way Wuya posed as Jack Spicer's stand.

And this is all so he can be the manager of Dethklok.

>>85480785
yep, a manager that is actually a robot, who is actually a demon.

I have an idea for the ending I wanna pitch before I forget it again.

The Warden is using the momentum of the STAR energy vortex to pull his [Pure Imagination] world into the real world from his jailbot looking stand, yeah?

This puts a strain on the vortex that the Warden counters by letting his stand spin with it.

Dora has to make the Warden spin AGAINST the swirl of the vortex so it'll put more strain on the thing., causing it to begin to collapse/deteriorate. She has the perfect ability to make that happen since all she needs to do is get the warden to step on the red footprints and make him go in circles, then he'll start going in circles faster and faster until the vortex is negated and PI collapses in on itself resulting in a huge explosion of STAR energy, totally destroying in the prison and leaving a crater in the ground all the way down to and destroying the chamber Dan was sealed in.

Would that work?

>>85481075
And is the demon posing as the robot's stand?

When Nemesis shows up at the jail during the crazy ending looking for his band, what is he going to do?
Fight Dredd with the robot body before ditching it to grab his "bread and butter" and bailing on the scene when he has them back?

>>85481122
I like it. The Warden, king of random insanity, is undone by something that probably shouldn't work but does. Pottery.

>>85481122
There was an idea about Dora learning how to tap into the Vortex to match the Warden's power, but beyond that We haven't defined that part, so it could work (I like the idea of turning the Vortex against the Warden)

>>85481292
I don't know, maybe he could fight using the robot body until it receives critical damage (a really good beating, since he's meant to withstand nuclear weapons), then he reveals himself to resume the fighting. He can't get Dethklok back unless they escape Pure Imagination.

>>85481447
>>85481497
Dora harnesses the power of the vortex to beef up her stand's abilities in some way to make it work.

Maybe Nemesis jumps into PI before the counter spinning happens and he grabs Dethklock while in there.

Dora might be able to survive the explosion despite being at ground zero by jumping inside PI, then when that world collapses she's flung somewhere else in the world by it with all the arcing STAR energy.

>>85481697
Why would Dora jump back into Pure Imagination? Will she know about the scattering effect after the explosion or she just goes there to finish off the Warden?

>>85483237
Maybe before the spin plan is enacted Sticks warns her that the whole place will blow up if it works? So Dora knows the place will go nuclear and she'll have no time to get away, but PI isn't actually the physical jail, it's physically something else located somewhere else, so it's her best chance at not dying.

Well hopefully the thread won't die in the night again.

If it does, it's on someone else to make another one this time.

>>85485666
still alive, satan

>>85468480
Maybe Electric Eye Hellion absorbs entropy? It's prolly bound to Deadlocks bloody massive sword and the entropy absorption both fuels his Chaos Magick and causes the breakdown of whatever he happens to be stabbing at the time.

In a word:
>"NOURISHMENT!"

>>85473337

>>85489339

>>85489369
woops, didn't mean to quote

So I had an idea for how we could make the Daffy Spawn subplot a mite more cohesive to the overall plot. Given all of the natural 20s those kids rolled when it came to their Stands, the Warden is either banking on them evolving their abilities to Remastered levels and possibly beyond or for them to die and supercharge PI from their gargantuan levels of STAR.

My idea is that the Warden would create a sort of gambit for those trapped inside of his world, an old-timey wanted poster proclaiming that anyone who can subdue or kill any of the pictured inmates gets a free ride out of there. The desperate essentially run to their deaths, the kids are gaining more and more experience, and either way the Warden's coffers are getting filled. Plus, it could make for some interesting fights against them since they'd have extensive knowledge of PI's architecture and layout by this point.

>>85481122

That would be a somewhat fitting end to him and a good callback to Made in Heaven.

>>85489708
sounds good, though Daffy's offspring is initially on supermax and they are released by Dora's group.
At that point should all the guards be defeated or we keep one as the final boss before Warden?

Who have we got picked for Daffy's kids, anyway? I've been away for a bit, but I remember, like... the other Tiny Toons birds and Woody?

>>85491387

Woody and Shirley seem to be locked in; we're just deciding on the third.

>>85489708
Did all of his kids really roll 20s when it came to stands? I feel like most of them would be average or mediocre with Plucky being the only one who inherited Daffy's developmental potential.

With the vortex still in play even in PI, maybe the Warden is banking on that to tip the odds of one of them becoming super powerful.

We still need to work in that the Warden has read Daffy's book.

>>85491534

You've gotta remember the generational buff children of Stand Users naturally receive. It's part of why Tom and Plucky ended up being such BAMFs. Maybe the Loonatics as well but I'm not sure if cloning would be counted towards that.

>>85491387
This is the list that was made before working on this part >>85443683 as the other anon said, Shirley and Woody are pretty much set.

>>85491534

Perhaps we could have a scene where he's pestering Dredd to lighten up a bit more and offers him a copy, claiming how much it helped him.

>>85492588
I don't think it actually helped him, it just gave him the idea that to succeed he had to become as self-absorbed as possible.

>>85493066
Or he also did some research and discovered who was M.E. Leterally and what he did, the Warden trying to make his own "reshape the world in my image" plan.

>>85491857
Hrm, okay.
Are we keeping the original idea for Woody to be recruited as an ally who eventually ends up turning on the heroes?

>>85493428
I don't have any recollection of him ever being an ally.

Also, I think he should completely flip his shit the moment he hears Dora say "la cucaracha" when referring tot he cockroach Wall-E has. Then he can have his flashback of his mother turning into his father and trying to kill him.

>>85442920
>a part 6 based on waifu's
>No Ramona or Kim pines
what in the fuck are you guys doing, those niggas should be lead players in this

>>85493890

We've generally moved away from waifus as a main theme though a few are still around.

>>85493917
aigth, i think i feel ya there, so what's this whole thing you got going with part 6
it's my favorite part, so i want to be able to help you niggas as much as i can

>>85493890
We are not focusing in that angle, anon.
>No Ramona
the one from Scott Pilgrim? I think she was suggested for part 8

>>85493954
Dora ends up in The Warden's prison, which is actually a cover for his plan to turn the whole world into a Superjail-esque realm and she must stop him. That's the plot in a nutshell.

>>85493954

How many of the previous parts have you read? There's a lot of lore coming into play with this one's elements.

>>85493999
nice trips
but real shit, been reading the docs and i wanted to know if you guys have started illustrating any of this stuff?

>>85494046
I've read through all of your part 1, but i haven't read the other part's just their plot outlines

Did we do anything for any of the main casts back stories? Like something from Susie's past?

>>85494311
So far, only Dora's backstory

>>85494311

Dora's has been set up, Sticks is in jail for trying to kill Nobody, and we haven't done much with Suzie.

>>85494311
I think Suzie is in jail for arson.

>>85494288

Then for ease of access I'd say get the cliff notes for 2,3, and 5.

>>85494311
There was an idea way back of having Dora access the prisoner records and see that she was in for multiple murders, and basically shrug and not tell anyone. Friendship trumps all.

>>85493724
There was at least the idea of him and Dora "bonding" over their shitty parents, though.
Thought: Woody's one of the few prisoners who sides with the Warden in the third act, because he's a nutcase who wants Dora and the gang dead no matter what thanks to some percieved betrayal. Shirley and whoever else we're using just try to escape/riot.
Dora manages to kill him, but it releases such a ridiculous amount of STAR that it can be visibly seen leaving his body. It's one of the Warden's third act power ups.

>>85495185
are we still using the "ended in Pure Imagination for trying to kill Plucky" part? maybe he is a late arrival to the prison, arriving along with the jawbreakers and Dethklok

>>85495291
Makes sense.

OK, I had another idea.

Sticks starts diving in the multiverse again after hearing about Dora, Suzie, and Wall-E's "deaths". The more she dives, the more futures she finds with them still alive from her current point. The futures are all kinds of different, but it clues her in on them still being alive since they wouldn't still be in any of those possible futures if they weren't currently alive in the present she is in.

One of the dives reveals Pericles with them. That should shock the hell out of her because she was so convinced he was dead.

Then Sticks seeks out Droopy, who still has Pericles marked and isn't in on the Warden's PI world. She convinces him that Pericles is still alive and escaped him. She grabs Droopy as he uses his stand to warp to where Pericles is and they both end up inside PI.

Sticks ends up rejoining the party and it gives them a tactical advantage over PI since the Warden isn't aware of their entry. They still lack a way out, but now Droopy is technically on their side because they are prisoners, they are outside of the jail Droopy knows of, and it is his job to return them to the prison proper.

>>85495185
I'm not totally sold on him teaming up with Dora yet. He's crazy and that's something Suzie can deal with, but he's the dangerous stronger-than-you crazy.

>>85495291
I suppose that could work.

Maybe there's still a section of superjail blocked off from the rest where the Warden dumps him, Dora's group sees him fall from the sky and tries to make their way to him only to encounter Giffany.

>>85495587
>I'm not totally sold on him teaming up with Dora yet. He's crazy and that's something Suzie can deal with, but he's the dangerous stronger-than-you crazy.
Yeah, I wasn't thinking that he'd join their team, but that they'd persuade him to not kill them in exchange for working towards a common goal of getting out of there.

>>85495587
>now Droopy is technically on their side because they are prisoners, they are outside of the jail Droopy knows of, and it is his job to return them to the prison proper.
Genius.

>>85496142
>>85495587


Given the nature of his Stand, I'm not sure he'd be up for cooperating. If anything, that feels like it'd be more Shirley's thing given her ability to vanish from reality outright but be unable to fight in such a state.

>>85496189
then that's another guard not on Warden's side during the finale.

>>85496142
>>85496189
Really, what I'm setting up here is Droopy VS Woody.

Getting Sticks back with the rest of the gang is just something I'd like to do as well.

>>85496554

True, it'd be nice to have her back but given the non-combat ability of her Stand, she'd basically be the group's Abacchio. We could make it so that she develops a sub-ability to defend herself.

>>85496240
Hrm. Good point.
Are we going to need to rework his Stand, then? I can't think how we could use him without killing him off in the first encounter, otherwise, and I think that'd be something of a waste.
Or... he keeps one of them with him, with drills planted on, as a hostage, but is later forced to send them to do something for him, allowing them to escape the range of his Stand?

>>85496617
Anon, no one can die in PI without the Warden's permission.

Even if they kill Woody, he'll just keep coming back.

>>85496600
What's her developmental potential? That's still getting a boost from the vortex even in PI, so she could develop something.

>>85496600
If is solely for defense, maybe Bobby's therapy allows her to make predictions on the fly to dodge attacks, like a spider-sense of sorts.

>>85496730
Wasn't the boost available only to those who know how to tap into the vortex?

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>>85496730

She wasn't graded but given the multiversal scope of her Stand, I'd be surprised if she didn't find more uses for it. It's basically a less bullshit version of D4C.

>>85496779
There's two boosts granted from the vortex.

The first is a passive boost that bumps up a stand's developmental potential by one letter grade.

The second is the buff, but you need to know how to access it to use it.

>>85496816
Maybe illusion doubles based on other Stickses?

>>85496963
what if sticks were able to materialize different things from other universes into a room/space she is in. for example, if there was a rifle on the floor in a cowboy universe, she could bring it into the universe shes in now

>>85497133

Huh, that could work. Like say if she finds a Sticks that met a bad end, her Stand could take the body and reformat it into something that could help Main Universe Sticks to avoid that fate.

>>85497410
that's what i'm saying senpai, on some Elizabeth bioshock infinite shit

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>>85496816
DALE YOU GIBLET HEAD

>>85497802

I think the rule should be that only one Sticks can exist in a universe at a time so in order to get around that STARK RAVING MAD takes a dead instance of her and using the context of her death, creates a [Tool] that can be used to prevent such but it's up to Main Sticks to figure out how or if it's even necessary in her plane.

>>85498613
Sounds fair enough to me.

>>85498613
>the rule should be that only one Sticks can exist in a universe at a time
If she explains it, it would be a nice foreshadowing to [Nowhere Man] and part 7. Should we have a character dying by meeting his alt-self in part 7?

>>85497838
It's kind of funny since Sticks and Dale are on OK terms.

Maybe RoboDale is who helps Sticks meet with Droopy while the jail is getting flooded with new robots.

>>85498613
That's pretty great.

>>85498613
How does that even work with PI though?

There's no permanent death there, so is she still able to pull things over to her?

>>85500383
My guess is PI is so batshit insane trying to use her powers to figure it out is ineffective, if not worthless.

>>85500383
Other Sticks may die permanently inside their universe's PI (by Warden's choice), or die somewhere else.

>>85500416
It could give them better insight as to how PI works though, assuming PI works the same way in the alternate universes she's able to observe of it.

It gives them some sense of its boundaries, how far reality can bend before breaking, and other generalizations of the place that could be useful.

I think it might actually be effective inside PI as long as the Warden doesn't realize Sticks is inside PI. He's all powerful there, but still not all knowing.

Even her cluing them in to that one tiny detail could turn things in their favor.

>>85500383

It'd probably have to be from a perma-dead Sticks.

>>85500432
>>85501366
Not a particularly useful sub ability then.

It might be better if she could project around her a scene from another universe to confuse enemies.

>>85499996
But who?
I'm still not really sure how Mr. Nobody's stand works.

One thing to note though is Mr. Nobody has something that distinguishes himself from our previous antagonists: he actually values his friends. He should have a core group of friends who he cares for dearly and are devoted to him in turn.

None of the other big bads of our parts had that. It's like having two groups of brojos in opposition to each other.

>>85502235

It's not meant to be entirely useful; just to keep her from being dead weight. Plus, with infinity+ universes to scry I'm sure she'll find Stickses that have died in bizarre ways to build tools from.

「U Can't Touch This」shortens to 「Can't Touch This」MC Hammer

Appearance: Figure slightly taller than user that starts off nearly invisible. As the user gains more self-confidence/fighting spirit it grows more opaque. It looks like a crash test dummy either without arms or somewhat restrained.

Abilities: 「Can't Touch This」is incorporeal and thus cannot be hit or touched physically. On command it instantly swaps place with user, and any matter occupying the same space will be forcefully replaced by the user. Depending on how opaque this stand is determines the force of replacement, from simply pushing the matter back to deleting it from existence.
「Hammer Time」When the user completely fills in the stand fully it becomes solid. It no longer can switch with the user, but the user feels no pain from attacks on it. It can now simply teleport where the user wants it and act as a barrier.
Power- C–A →E
Speed- A →A
Range- C →D
Durability- E →S
Precision- B →A
Development- A

Would belong to a very reluctant/cowardly character with some fighting ability to compensate for their base stand being awful. Would mostly use hit and run tactics. They could be a villain or hero, just needs to build up confidence over time.

>>85504531
Sorry probably should have nerfed the range a bit, also not sure about what I should have for precision or development

>>85503665
I mean it's not useful at all given the circumstances since she wouldn't be able to get anything from other universes inside of PI because none of the other Stickses would've died.

The circumstances make that sub ability completely useless and we're right back to trying to make her have an ability that isn't dead weight.

But why would she need another ability now that she's in an environment where she can make some weapons to use?

>>85496240
I don't think any of the other Daffy spawn should end up allied with Dora's group.

At best it's more of a point them in the direction you want them to wreck stuff at and hope they don't get bored, turn around, and trash your shit type of deal.

None of them are happy with their current predicament.

>>85503397
His Stand allows him to pull a version of himself from another universe, it was suggested that he could pull other objects and people if the other Nobody is holding them. The Stand's description also indicates that the rule of "one per universe" from SBR also works here.

>>85507925
Wouldn't pulling another Nobody into his universe cause him to implode since he'd actually need to physically grab and pull the other Nobody over?

>>85508051
[Nowhere Man] protects Nobody from that effect, but only the main universe Nobody, so he can pull only one additional Nobody

>>85508118
How are alternate Nobodys useful to him?

>>85509585
His strand is really just D4C but with the added effect of erasing things from existence and having a trickier time taking things out of dimensions.

How did Valentine utilize his copies? Nobody uses it the same way. Biggest difference is he may have to be in contact with something from the parallel world to pull it into another dimension. And erasing people from existence by spraying ink on them. .

>>85509585
>「NOWHERE MAN」is able to materialize an additional Mr. Nobody from an alternate universe. They do not possess a Stand and instead have powers consistent to their own worlds. Each one varies in temperament and appearance, even down to the art style in which they're drawn.

We haven't defined what abilities these alt-nobodies possess but so far we have a Big Guy Nobody from a universe full of Big Guys

>>85509804
I'd really like to work in some of his source material powers in some way. Not directly copying them, no, but something to reflect on what he was capable of in Doom Patrol.

Mr. Nobody accumulates things that belong to "nobody", they just naturally come to him, he has the power to drain the sanity from people, he always looks like you're seeing him out of the corner of your eye even when you're looking directly at him and he's said to look different to different people. I think he also had some form of invulnerability, but that was never made clear.

Some of that should be in play in some way.

>>85509825
Yes, Big Guy Nobody from universe 4U was my fault. I made the implication without actually saying it and now we have that idea in the mix.

Anyway, what are we working on next with part 6? We have gaps, but we're also moving forward?

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>>85509804
His ink doesn't erase people from existence:
>It also has a sub-ability, 「PAINT IT BLACK」, in which it concentrates and launches a large amount of ink. Anything that is hit by this projectile loses its 「IDENTITY」, rendering any traits it once held null and void. Those who are hit in the head by this blob become nameless shells unrecognizable even to their loved ones. Using this much ink makes Mr. Nobody unable to summon another self for some period of time.

>>85510209
>Big Guy Nobody from universe 4U was my fault
You say that like it's a bad thing.
Anyway, parts of the excavation arc still need to be written and we just reached the part where Dora and co. are sucked into PI.

And it's that time of the day again, make sure that the thread doesn't die during the night

>>85510670
I can't be up too late to bump this thread.

Right now I think we're waiting on some tweaks to the current Dredd lines to make them more serious. Then we go to Bobby visiting Trevor in the infirmary to see how he's doing and they begin wondering what the hell is really going on.

>>85510806
yep, two arcs start from here: Dora's group inside Pure Imagination, and the Interpol arc where they deal with the jawbreakers vaults, in-between we can put scenes of what's happening in the real prison while the guards are conducting the raids.

>>85510932
I think the problem we might end up having is that the main characters are away from the plot.

The plot impacts them since new things get dumped into PI, but they have no way to impact back, they can only react to the developments while trying to find a way out of PI.

>>85511010
the only major things that are dumped inside Pure Imagination after the raiding are Dethklok and, probably, Woody. The jawbreakers are used to make disposable robots for STAR energy harvesting.

>>85511115
Yes, the jawbreaker powered robots are dumped in and one of them is what Giffany nabs to get herself a body.

So we have Dethklok, Woody, and THOUSANDS of robots. Membrane had to make a lot of shitty robots based off of old designs salvaged from the WB (Wornstrom) to make a functional robot powered by STAR.

In the epilogue Membrane is seen somewhere in the world, after being blasted off to there when PI fucking exploded and took out the surrounding landscape, looking at some blueprints for a robot and holding a stand jawbreaker. The robot he wanted to build based off of the old research, but couldn't because they needed quantity over quality.

But back to the point, Dora's group can only REACT to the shit that's happening, they need a way to throw a wrench into the Warden's plans.

With the arrival of Sticks they get an idea of what's going on, and with Giffany on their side they have a way to keep the robots from blowing up, releasing STAR energy, and reassembling to do it all over again. That makes them all relevant to the plot again.

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>>85510670
>Heaven above the world

>The scene changes to Trevor in the infirmary sitting up in a bed, he has an I.V. drip hooked up to him and various other life sign monitoring devices. He's busily writing things down in a note book
>"Knock, knock." Bobby enters from behind the curtains, there wasn't a door to knock on
>Trevor: "Ah, Bobby, good to see you."
>Bobby: "You're supposed to say 'Who's there?' but I'll let it slide this time. You're looking better now anyway, years younger looking than when they put you on that bed."
>Trevor: "Yes, many unexpected things happened on this last expedition. They activated the burning fireflies again, the frog people were back, and we discovered a new layer even deeper than we previously knew of."
>Bobby: "I told you, if you'd just use propane lanterns those bugs would leave you be."
>Trevor: "Hmup, lot of commotion going on out there."
>Bobby: "Yeah, looks like the Warden is planning something big again. Not that'd he'd clue us Strickland folks in on it. We're supposed to be on the same side."
>Trevor: "This sort've thing would've never been allowed under the old guard."
>Bobby: "He's got a lot of asinine plans, but what worries me is the sudden interest from the top."
>Trevor: "What's that Wassanasong up to this time?"
>Bobby: "Nothing good, as usual, can't even question the Warden thanks to him."
>The two sit in mutual disgruntled silence for a minute, Trevor finally breaks it
>Trevor: "By the way, what happened to the two young ladies who brought me in? They showed some remarkable courage for the supposed salt of the Earth."
>Bobby: "Official report is they both died fighting Wong. Can you believe that?"
>There's a pause
Trevor: "No."
Bobby: "Me neither. Something stinks around here, and it's not the propane. It also turns out Wong was a pillarman all along."
>Trevor: "Well that settles it. I need to get back on my feet sooner rather than later. There's still secrets under this accursed place, and I plan to bleed that pillarman for everything he knows."

>>85511962
I'm still not happy with the dialogue. It just never comes out right for me.

From here I think we go back to Dora's group in PI and meeting Joy.

>>85512004
Dialogue can always be tweaked later on.

>>85512236
Yes, but the question is will it be tweaked?

Being able to tweak it and actually having it be tweaked are two different things. I keep trying to move forward only because I am not capable of shoring up the rear, which someone really needs to be doing otherwise a part ends up being only half "done" by the time we get to the end.

Now it's time to find out if any anons are actually going to keep the thread alive after I turn in. >>85485666 is still in play; if the thread dies, I'm not making the next one.

>>85512390
>will it be tweaked?
If not now, it will be tweaked later, part 1 and 2 got embellished after all

>>85511874
the what?

>>85505496
Except permadeath does happen in PI if the Warden allows it. She just needs to find Stickses who've annoyed him enough that he kills them off.

>>85512584

Well, you got your answer.

>>85506524

Hmm. Yeah, I'd call that fair.

>>85513563

That and she's not limited to versions of herself who've died in PI, just dead in general.

>>85513563
The problem I still have with this is it takes time to find a reality where that happens. She doesn't have the time to search for a reality like that while in the middle of a fight.

>>85516870

If that idea doesn't work, we can always have her weaponize the energy her Stand uses to connect her to the multiverse.

>>85516870
We can always have her dodge/let the others hold them off until she finds a suitable universe.

>>85511292

>In the epilogue Membrane is seen somewhere in the world, after being blasted off to there when PI fucking exploded and took out the surrounding landscape, looking at some blueprints for a robot and holding a stand jawbreaker. The robot he wanted to build based off of the old research, but couldn't because they needed quantity over quality.

I think that needs to be clarified a bit better since Membrane will stick with Bobby and Trevor by the end of this arc. I mean, if that happens to Membrane, does that also mean that Bobby and Trevor are blasted off to somewhere else when PI exploded as well?

And there is still the whole deal with Gaz and Wall-E. Will Gaz die so that scenario can happen or she will survive until the end and stick her dad? And Wall-E will be blasted off along with Dora or something else is in store for his eventual fate by the end of Part 6?

>>85517542
I was under he impression that everyone, EVERYONE who survived the end of part 6 would be blasted off in random directions, separated from everyone else.

I don't know what happens to Gaz, we haven't even gotten to her in the story yet. I don't know what happens to Wall-E, I wasn't talking about him. Dora gets blasted off somewhere and the ones who gather up the group again in the epilogue are Sticks and Bobby because Sticks has the ability and Bobby has the resources.

>>85517183
The problem is that still makes her the load and that the fighting might be over by the time she finds something useful.

>>85517115
A better use of weaponizing her stand is to send that energy into an enemy's head so they are forced to live out alternate universe versions of their current situation simultaneously. Sticks is the only one who has a filter for it and can deal with all the possibilities, for anyone else it'd give them a super migraine and disorient them long enough for Sticks to either flee or for someone else to attack them, or for Sticks to beat them herself with an improvised boomerang.

>>85512779
I wonder when the same will happen to the other parts.

>>85518722
Can't tell for sure, at least part 1 and 2 are complete now, and part 5 was pretty much finished on time.

>>85518079
So, she can make an opponent's mind to overlap with the minds of his alternate selves, disorienting him?.

>>85521004
It's like having dozens of thoughts forced into your mind causing you to have a hard time discerning what's real and at worst making you black out or go mad from sensory overload.

>>85521748
So say they encounter an enemy, Sticks can make that enemy see dozens of AUs all at the same time, they have no idea what's happening, no idea who is actually attacking them and who isn't, no idea which of the suddenly many versions of the people he/she was about to fight are real.

Like say Vicky tries to kill Sticks, suddenly [Stark Raving Mad] is over her head and she's seeing hundreds of Stickses all around her. Some of them are huge, some of them are metal, some of them are punk, goth, demonic, angelic, whatever. She has no idea what's happening, and then there's just as many versions of her appearing going after them. She can't tell what to go after, she's seeing dead enemies and dead AU versions of herself everywhere.

While she's stumbling around like a drunken clown, that gives Sticks ample time to get away from her or for someone else to attack.

>>85517971
>I was under he impression that everyone, EVERYONE who survived the end of part 6 would be blasted off in random directions, separated from everyone else.
Yep, strewn across the globe, but we haven't decided who is gonna kick the bucket for real inside PI or in the real world (outside of the Warden, who becomes the ground zero of the explosion).

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>>85522944

So, kinda like Mirror Master's ability of creating reflection golems of himself?

I think Nami from One Piece had a similar ability as that too.

>>85523946
Except it's all in her target's mind and she can only target one person at a time.

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>>85445497

>There are never any stand suggestions

That seems one major problem lately. There are suggestions for characters that could be filled as prisoners/Wong's gang members, but it looks like most of the anons who were responsible for elaborating Stands are gone.

There are still Stands without users mentioned in the doc, so that might fix the issue until new suggestions come up again.

>>85524273
There are a few suggestions for some in this thread.

It's just getting harder and harder to actually work them into the parts since there are only very specific sections of any given part that the majority of people in these threads seem to give a crap about.

>>85524273
This guy would have a parasite hair stand that lets him infect others with his personality.

>>85526283
Too close to Daffy, sadly.

>>85527137
Daffy made people into LITERALLY him, first in mind and then in body. This power would just make people act like Snake while still being aware they are not Snake, but still being compelled to do what he does despite not wanting to.

It's not like we're going to use that idea anyway.

>>85524785
>There are a few suggestions for some in this thread
And in the other, more short-lived threads, which make it harder for review

>>85529365
Is anyone even maintaining the stand doc now? Last I looked at it there were duplicates all over the place.

And what is Rocko's stand anyway? There are two stands for him listed in the part 6 doc.

And how does the Frizz's stand work? There's the bus and also the lizard, but are they all part of her stand? Or is the lizard her stand and it transforms any vehicle she's in into one that has the rules people have to follow on the bus as well as the other powers the bus is listed as having?

>>85529517
I am waiting for reviewfag to tell if those Stands at the beginning of the doc are already reviewed so I can start moving stuff into its place and delete the old stuff.

>what is Rocko's stand anyway?
Is the one in the characters list, the Stand at the bottom of the doc is from the old draft.

>And how does the Frizz's stand work?
I think her Stand is bound to the bus and the lizard is an independent Stand that inhabits the bus

>>85529517
>>85529657
We amalgamate Rocko's stands into one, somehow. That was what was (kinda) done for Goofy's (I think?)

I guess that'd be a sortav sinking virus? When the user touches some, they are displaced into the ground ala [DON'T BRING ME DOWN]. Sinking only lasts as long as the user is in contact, however if the victim touches someone, the begin sinking too, for as long as contact is made.

The stand presumably spreads by attaching to the victim, then spreading onto the next person or thing to touch them. People will sink as long as the stand is attached.

What starts off as a simply person embedded in the floor quickly turns the entire area into a huge quicksand trap. The more people who are sinking touch each other, the more the stand spreads and begins sinking the next person.

>>85529657
So the lizard is going to be an independent stand?

>>85529855
What are we going to use Rocko for?

>>85530645
The lizard-Stand is supposed to be the lizard from magic school bus

>What are we going to use Rocko for?
He is a janitor if I'm not wrong

>>85530645

We had him written in as a janitor on the other end of Bobby's rant about the quality of Solitary.

>>85531354
I figured that lizard was Liz, now we're confirming that she's an independent stand who works with Frizzle's stand.

>>85531389
I mean what else are we doing with him? He's listed as having a stand, so we have to have something for him for that to be relevant.

>>85531575

Probably the eventual riot reaches the psych ward, and he ends up getting in a fight with someone?

>>85531615

Given the diving nature of his Stand, he might be the new guy in charge of evidence and contraband after Droopy's cock-up.

>>85532066
Maybe he's already doing that while Droopy is recovering.

The orders just hadn't gone through yet by the time Bobby was chewing him out in the solitary level.

So how are we handling Joy? Does she just show up and insert herself into the group before they finally catch on and kick her into a spike pit or something?

>>85533928
>spike pit
I was going to suggest that for a trap inside PI.
Maybe Dora and co. wandered a bit through Pure Imagination dodging hazards, then Joy appears offering herself as a guide of sorts

>>85534368
Then she uses her power to insert herself into the group as if she had always been there?

Would it be at all interesting or worth while to present Dora's group the next time we see them with Joy already there acting as if she had been with them from the beginning so the reveal that it's her stand's power is a reveal to both Dora's group and the reader at the same time?

I think Wall-E wouldn't be effected by it, but since he does have emotions, it wouldn't be too much of a stretch if he was.

>>85534524

Oh god, the potential for a Kira/Hayato moment is too good to pass up.

>>85534911
I don't think it would play out quite like that.

I'm not sure how this would play out since it's a new approach. Next we see Dora's group they're already with Joy as if she's always been their friends.

We still need to work in "the scenery changes, but tower never gets any closer" thing. I'm not sure how to still do that.

Unless we still do that the way we have it planned and the first time Joy appears is the first time the readers become aware of her and also the first time the characters become aware of her, but because of her stand they all act like she's always been there and are willing to listen to her suggestions of changing route.

>>85535436

Maybe she takes them on a route that they'd all been supposedly planning out since they got here but realistically is just taking them in circles, trying to attract attention to the fresh meat.

>>85534524
>chapter starts with Dora waking up with her cell mate, Joy, and going about her day as if nothing was out of the originally.

>>85535925
>>85536269
I have an idea.

>Scene changes to the inside of PI again, we see winged monsters fighting giant babies with flaming battle wheels in the distance or some of stupidity
>Focus goes an Dora from a distance, angle is from the front of her, she's still walking, the others are following her one after the other
>Panel of Dora's shoes in the sand, then a panel of Suzie's shoes in the sand, then a panel of Wall-E's treads in the sand, then a panel of someone else's feet
>Suzie: "We 'ave been walking for hours but ze tower 'as not gotten any closer."
>Dora: "The scenery keeps changing the more we walk though, something has to pop up eventually."
>Wall-E makes some buzzing noises like he's full of pep thanks to his solar array
>Dora: "At least one of us is enjoying this dessert."
>The sun above them have the Warden's smiling face on it while always wearing a pair of shades
>???: "We've already walked through a forest, a grassland, a looooong hallway, and now we're in a dessert. I don't want to be a buzzkill, but maybe we should try a different direction."
>Dora, Suzie, and Wall-E turn and see Joy (Inside-Out), there's a moments pause, like they're faces are darked out, but then their demeanor shifts suddenly
>Dora: "Alright, which way do want to go, Joy?"
>Suzie: "Yes, perhaps a chance of course will do us some good."
>Joy: "Just leave it all to me girls, I think I spy an oasis right over yonder!"
>Dora and Suzie begin following Joy in another direction that isn't towards the ever spilling watch tower
>Wall-E looks puzzled for a moment and hesitates to follow them, but then hurries after when he begins to fall behind

Bam, Joy intro. Any good?

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>>85536269
>Joy's Stand allows her to self-insert into your life
Dammit, that's scary for some reason

>>85536805
Nice

>>85537492
At least she can't replace the roles other people have had in your memories.

>>85537492
>Joy's Stand allows her to self-insert into your life
I expect a Total Rickall reference somewhere.

>>85538045
I suppose that is a better example of how it works than the one I was thinking of.

She's had long enough to get into all of their minds since she really has been following them for hours without them noticing. She may not have targeted Wall-E though assuming he's just a robot and not something she can worm her way into the life of.

So do we want Wall-E to play the role of the one who saves the day this time?

>>85442391
I think I might need to do some re-arranging for our order of events.

Dethklok might need to be on top of the the first vault raided and they arrive later that night.

OK, rearranging the notes and adding in what's new in this thread, part 6 is starting to come together.

There's still the issue of how Dora's group escapes PI, but it's all starting to click together.

>>85538146
That'd make sense, considering he's a robot and probably less susceptible to emotional manipulation.

>>85540118
OK, s what kind of death traps does she try to lead them into? An oasis in the desert is ripe for traps. Could have giant crocodiles in the water, a Mad Max style gang of inmates roaming about, palm tress that turn into buzz saws, or just a good old fashioned next of giant buzzard wasps.

Joy is trying to get them all killed in a way that she can watch. That's her objective. How is she going to try accomplishing that and how is Wall-E going to thwart her?

My nightly last bump before bed to remind >>85485666 that if the thread dies, someone else will have to make it.

>>85540228
>gang goes to an oasis
>Joy says drink the water because everyone looks thirsty
>Wall-E, being a robot, can't, but the others do
>the water turns into a watery version of the Warden that tries to drown the party by shoving itself down their throats
Assuming Wall-E is keeping his laser, he could probably use it to evaporate the water Warden in time to save everyone. Plus depending on how things go down we can keep Joy around longer with her claiming ignorance of water Warden, if we wanted.

>>85540032
>There's still the issue of how Dora's group escapes PI
Since that happen during the climax. maybe they don't escape per se, but the borders between PI and the real world become too thin

>>85538045
Wasn't Summer Smith suggested for this part?

>>85540719

That's more than fucked. Also, about how much time should pass before they find Pericles or are we saving that for when Sticks shows up again?

>>85543519
She was but she was part of a gang then and hasn't been re-suggested since. I think her stand involved hulking up herself and allies like in the R&M episode where she worked for the devil.

>>85544433
I think she'll give a good boost to the gang when they're going up against Vicky and the rest of the PI denizens.

>>85540719
I did think Joy should be around for multiple attempts. After each one we should allude to her power to get into others' heads before someone finally figures it out.

>>85543854
I was thinking Sticks and Droopy would show up while Woody is flipping his shit.

>>85544433
Yeah, if we use her (which I'd still kind of like to, it was a great design) we'll need to rethink her power to be less gang focused.

>>85547261
just in case:

>Summer Smith (Rick & Morty)
>Stand: 「X GON' GIVE IT TO YA」 (DMX song)
>Appearance: Hulking humanoid with a hairstyle similar to her grandad Rick, specifically his appearance in the episode "Something Ricked This Way Comes" with some JoJofication.
>Battlecry: When [X] buffs an ally/overbuffs a foe, it will yell "LET'S GET RIPPED!/RICKED!".
>Ability: Muscle boost - [X] can boost the musculature of another person's body part or their whole body, greatly increasing their physical power (which carries over to their stands). However, excessive boosting will cause the muscles to explode or tire out extremely fast due to the weight. Inanimate objects can also be boosted.
>Stats:
>Power: A
>Range: D
>Speed: C
>Durability: B
>Precision: C
>D. Potential: B

I like how the downside of the ability serves as a reference to Jafar's death

>>85543854
>that's more than fucked
Then I'm doing PI right, glad you approve.
>>85545126
I'm feeling that Joy would be around for multiple attempts as well, with Wall-E getting more suspicious each time. If Joy tries to mess with him he can literally rewind his memory a bit and watch how shit went down when she was around, basically resetting him.

>>85549133
Does Wall-E have a play back function, like a projector, where he can show past events he's seen?

Joy's attempts on them and what she does immediately thereafter could've all been recorded by him and then played back to Dora and Suzie while Joy is tied up in Hal (the cockroach)'s stand.

>>85549237
Eve was able to do it in the movie, and it makes sense considering where he is, so I'd say he could project his memories, yeah.

>>85550123
Should Giffany end up designating Wall-E as her "boyfriend" when they encounter her?

>>85540719
I'm not sure the rescue method here would work.

Maybe instead of water Wardens, we have something like fruits and Joy is telling them how to tell a good one from a bad one, but she's really tricking them into eating poisoned ones or ones that have insects in them that burrow into your flesh like the scarabs in The Mummy.

Another thought, after everyone is blasted off after PI explodes/implodes/self-destructs/whatever, Dora has [Glory Road] back and unfurls it, the map is shows he now is a map to finding where her friends landed.

>>85553025
>explodes/implodes/self-destructs/whatever
that's probably what it feels like from the inside, for anyone who is somehow outside the destruction, PI exists, but then as soon as it exists, it stops existing.

>>85553247
For anyone that didn't get this, it's a reference to based Terry Pratchett.

>>85552118
>poisoned fruit
Boring Jared, boring!
>scarabs that go Mummy on you and eat your insides
Much better! But wouldn't it be even harder for Wall-E to save them?

>>85552118
>the fruit is also shaped like the Warden's head

>>85553719
Well, depends on the fruit.

You'd think these bugs would be tiny, yeah?

But they're more like coconut crabs, only inside the coconut waiting for someone to crack it open.

Wall-E needs to observe this in action before finding a way to either dis-swayed or knock the things out of their hands before they bite into them.

>>85554334
I like it. Lets us use Joy later too, because everyone can chalk Wall-E knocking the fruit out of their hands to him being clumsy. Plus the bug would fuck off, leaving no proof.

>>85552118
>>85554320
>>85553719
>>85554334
>>85554641
Is this an SCP reference?

http://www.scp-wiki.net/scp-417

I hope so.

>>85554878
Most of PI feels like it's some fucked up area of the SCP foundation, so it could fit.

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>>85554878
I lack familiarity with SCP stuff, so I wasn't suggesting anything based off of anything else at the time when I was trying to come up with something Joy uses to try to kill them all.

I feel it's more like this.

So what's the current number of fights we're looking at in PI?

>>85554320
If it's shaped like the Warden's head it might as well try to bite back or vomit bugs into your mouth when you try to eat it.

>>85556171
Let's see... so far, confirmed:
"VS" Joy
VS Gaz's stand, round 1
VS Snatcher
VS Giffany
Droopy VS Woody Woodpecker
VS Vicky

what are the Beagle boys Stands?

>>85558641
I think we're going to give them >>85446024

>>85558717
ok, before adding it to the doc, what should be the name?

>>85558771
Of the suggested names, I lean towards [Jersey Boys].

Even though I set up Dora, Bobby, RoboDale, and Suzie VS Eris and the Beagle Boys, I just have no desire to write it right now.

>>85440739
What is that thing in the middle, and can it be fucked?

>>85559565
The black one? is Mr. Nobody from Doom Patrol

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>>85559565
You mean Mr. Nobody?
Check out Grant Morrison's Doom Patrol run.

He's a former member of the Brotherhood of Evil who no one remembers, then he went crazy and became a nowhere man forming the Brotherhood of Dada to poke fun at the absurdity of "good" and "evil" in the world.

He's our "bad guy" in part 7 and also President of the U.S.A. in it.

We're not to that part yet.

>>85558811
「JERSEY BOYS」 then? Reading the description I noticed that it mentions the names of the Dover boys, does the beagle boys have names? How many are they?

>>85560067
Originally the stand was for the Dover Boys, but we ended up not using them.

I think The Beagle Boys typically have anywhere from 3 to 6 members.

>>85560067

They don't have really names except their grandfather (who was named Blackheart Beagle by Don Rosa) and Ma Beagle who appeared in the Ducktales cartoons, and I don't think either of those two will appear in this story.

Carl Barks often identified them with a variant of the serial number 176-another 3 digit serial which only used the numbers 1, 7 and 6.

>>85560673
>>85560909
Then I'll just edit that part without names. So, they are three boys in this instance?

>>85561080
Three seems good.

Makes it a 4 on 4 fight since I count Wall-E as a non-combatant.

>>85559680

The DAT ASS face gets me every time.

>>85561394
I felt it was an appropriate page to respond to that post with.

Could Inch High's [Angry Inch] disrupt the Warden's ability to focus in on and watch Dora's group? Could it cause something like a "glitch" in the watch tower where it can't see them?

>>85562124
It depends if the PI watchtower's surveillance system is electronic

>>85562215
Who is to say Inch High hasn't found a way to evolve his stand after spending so much time in the vortex which increases a stand's developmental potential by one who letter grade?

>4 months til December
>CoCo threads still exist

>>85562452
Well, it takes us about 6 - 8 weeks per part, and we still have two more to go after this one.

Part 6 is nearly at the half way mark I think.

Part 6 might actually be a little more than half way. Hard to tell really since there's probably going to be more things added to it that haven't been thought up yet.

>>85563881
I'm pretty sure that we reached the half, Pure Imagination is still a nebulous part, same with the climax and, to a lesser extend, the Interpol arc (we need to update the plot outline).

>>85564043
I updated the doc yesterday with the rearranging, but I guess the outline needs to be updated as well.

I'm hoping a few other anons will jump in to work on this part because I really don't want to end up directing where everything is going.

>>85564299

So what's next to be done? I see the Joy bit is already kinda advanced and the Eris/Beagle Boys will be elaborated by another anon later.

By the way, does Wong need more gang members or the characters that were accepted are good enough already?

>>85564981
I think they are enough, unless the gang reappear while Dora is in PI and the guards are pillaging around the world.

>>85564981
I just feel no motivation at all to do that Beagle Boy fight right now. Plus there's also this Joy business, I don't really know where to go with that yet.
But once Joy is dead, the brojo squad will need something else to do until she came back, then they begin looking for Inch High after learning about the respawn thing and find Pericles. There's some kind of monster they have to fight or fend off there. It's probably some starving looking human with a fork and knife wearing a bib with the Warden's face on it.

A lot of the big work since the jaguar has been by me (minus the Dredd and Warden stuff, and with much appreciated help with the Superjail intro) since I don't know where the other guy doing detailed writing went.

>>85565282

>But once Joy is dead, the brojo squad will need something else to do until she came back, then they begin looking for Inch High after learning about the respawn thing and find Pericles

Is that thing with Gaz using Inch High in a pinball machine still scheduled? Maybe after they learn the respawn thing in PI, they decide to look for clues about Inch High's whereabouts until they meet one prisoner who mentions Inch became "the new plaything of Membrane's fucking daughter".

>There's some kind of monster they have to fight or fend off there.

El Oso and Vicky are scheduled to appear somewhere in this part too, right? Maybe one of them can fill that role, I guess.

>>85565458
Speaking of Gaz, I'm going to move some of the old stuff to the doc, this is still Gaz Stand, right?

>Gaz
>「DARK CASTLE」
>Appearance: A pale-coloured mechanical humanoid (Araki-style) wearing a dark cloak and wielding a sword.
>Abilities: When an object is broken by 「DARK CASTLE」's sword, it will create a [DROP], these [DROPS] can range from anything from local currency to whole legs of turkey. [DROPS] are mostly random with currency and food being the most common, physical tools and misc items being the next level and finally weapons being the rarest. [DARK CASTLE」 offers its user no control over what kind of drops are obtained.
>[SPIRITED MIGRATION]: 「DARK CASTLE」’s secondary ability which allows it to shoot a beam of energy from its sword after a brief charging time of 10s, it can create [DROPS] much like when the Stand uses a melee attack.

>>85565458
I keep forgetting about El Oso.

Let's have him be the thing they fight before Joy comes back.

Then they learn of the respawn and run the Hill away before El Oso comes back for round 2. They begin looking for Inch High and find Pericles.

Then we cut away to Interpol and then to Gameboy capturing Dethklock.

>>85565530
She remote controls the thing now using a Gameslave. She has a room somewhere in PI and has the job of "hunter" which means she plays a video game that really controls what her stand does and her purpose is to kill as many inmates as many times as possible.

When they find the pinball machines, her stand is the one playing it.

>>85565706
Someone give a run down on El Oso's personality in a way that will make me stop forgetting he exists until he's no longer relevant in the part.

>>85566845
He's a guy who was raised by bears but doesn't fit in at all. He just does evil for the fun of it, and to get money so he can return to the bear kingdom and engage in bestiality with the bear princess or some nonsense. I also think he steals to support his deadbeat bear brother too. But anyway, he's a pretty casual villain. You might want to watch a few episodes of El Tigre for him.

While he's a pretty typical villain, he does have a bit of a soft side, but can still be sadistic and cruel. Isn't typically taken as a threat, but is pretty dangerous if underestimated. Think someone like Fred Dukes but Hispanic. Calls everyone mang, and typically ends his sentences with the word mang, mang.

>>85566845
http://eltigre.wikia.com/wiki/El_Oso

Basically, he is a bank robber and a thug (and not a smart one)

>>85567148
Alright, what's his motivation for fighting Dora's group then?

Does he see them kill Joy and decides he wants a go at them too as a form of "rookie crushing"? Or was he friends with Joy or something?

>>85567331
maybe the first; he wants to show them what a "real" prisoner can do.

>>85567553
What does he get out of it other than showing his supremacy if he wins?

Where do PI inmates get food from? Just letting them slowly starve to death is too boring for the Warden, unless he expects them to die with such frequency that they never have time to actually become hungry, but that would also be in a way boring.

>>85567988
There's a guard who's literal only stand power is to make food.

He can make disgusting, inedible gruel, or painfully addictive food that kills you within seconds.

Dunno who it'd be though. Might make for a sorta filler fight.

>>85568087
Well if anyone's still hellbent on Plankton being in this part, here's your chance.

Because I'm not going to push for it, I want someone else to pitch some ideas.

>>85568087
>There's a guard who's literal only stand power is to make food
Which one?

>>85568316
I was just tossing out an idea since we need an explanation for how prisoners don't just starve in PI. I'm not sure who it could be, if we even use that idea.

>>85561394
Well he IS the Love Glove.

Well, time to see if this thread will make it through the night.

We still need to figure out a bunch of stuff, but I guess we should focus on what Joy tries to do to get them all killed and what Wall-E does to stop her.

>>85570661
Stop bumping this shit.

>>85570747
You can't stop it, even you bump it when you post things like that, don't you see?

>>85565282

I'm back, don't worry. Just been dealing with a sudden death in the family for the last two weeks.

You know what it would take to make this project be alive as it was in the early days? Drawfags.

Requests, commissions, I don't care how, but we need drawfags.

>>85571388
>but we need drawfags.
Pony up some money then

>>85571388

Just like in actual Jojo, people were here for Part 3 then promptly forgot the rest of it existed.

>>85543519
>>85547261
>>85548306
I'd love to see Summer and Vicky duke it out in a muscle-bound wrestling match.