/Co/Co/'s Bizarre Adventure: I.M. Edition

>>84574760
Someone really should just make a pastebin of past threads with an account so it can be updated instead of remaking it every time as a guest.

Anyway, thread discussion points:

-Dora talking with Bobby in his office, what do they say, how does that go?
-Actually converting all of the psych ward cliff notes into story

That will probably take the majority of the thread even if we do somehow manage to focus on that, which we won't.

>>84574855
Alright, from the previous thread:
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>>84573006
And that's what we have about Bobby's part

>>84574911
Before that we need to have Bobby and Dora walking up from solitary to his office with Bobby explaining the levels of the jail and how more civil/special needs inmates are kept on higher levels for treatment.

The "Welcome to jail" tour being under written is actually to our advantage here since we never established just how much of the jail was open to Dora as a base level (as in ground floor) inmate.

>>84575035
The first half of the underground section is already excavated, right? what remains unexplored are just the pillarmen levels?

>>84575111
I'd like to actually get to that before talking about that.

Sure, why not, the pillarman levels have proven to be stubborn to excavate because somehow the traps keep resetting and randomizing, so getting further down than that is proving difficult and the Warden's solution of throwing more bodies at it isn't really working.

>>84575186
Well, from what I remember, the other areas of the prison are the bus depot, evidence locker, armory and the infirmary. From those, only the infirmary should be accessible to the inmates.
There was also a reference to a labor camp (where the prisoners make licence plates) and computer room in the older stuff

>>84575585
The prison is layered is what I'm saying.

The bottom most floors are where all the prisoners are dumped, there you have floors of cells, the cafeteria, gym, other recreational stuff, all on the ground floor.
Going up from there, there's the places where they are made to work, above that is the processing facilities where new inmates are searched/entered into the system/bus depot/evidence locker/whatever.

Then above that we have the psych ward level, and above that I guess are the general staff offices.

The whole place is like the inside of half an egg with layers built into it that can all be observed from a central tower in the middle.

>>84575698
Oh, I see. I don't recall having a set diagram for the panopticon, besides solitary being underground, the top of the tower being Warden's residence, and the whole stack of ancient prisons that reaches Dinosaur Dan's cell.

>>84574760
Swiggity swag, whats in the bag?

>>84578435
[SPOON]!

>>84578435
It's an old artwork, Ed's Stand name was changed twice if i'm not wrong

>>84578520
I think we settled on [Spoon], but without checking the docs I can't be sure.

>>84578563
yeah, is Spoon

Man, we really need our drawfags back.

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>>84574855

We already have a pretty good layout for the Psych Ward but what else needs to be filled in?

Can I get a recap of everything that ever occurred in these threads?

>>84580196

>Jojo is not /co/!
>But what if we made it so?

Also, past threads pastebin.

>>84580317
Yeah, but what is this thread for? Rewriting JoJo, but with /co/ characters instead?

>>84580359
It's more about creating our own story that takes influence from JoJo but we have our own spin on things...and the storylines for each part we've come up with only bear the remotest similarities to the part in question.

>>84580359

It's more like we used JJBA as an inspiration for our own universe based off of /co/ properties as a whole.

>>84580419
>>84580425
Does it follow only one set of characters for all parts or does it do it the way JJBA did and have different groups each time?

What else do I need to know about this?

>>84580569

New ensemble for each part with usually one or two chars from an older section in the plot somewhere.

>>84579907
Draw / VA fag here.

This project seems intresting, but the Google Docs stories are fucked up. Anywhere I can actually read them?

>>84580784

Aw crap, they're doing that again. Part 5's back up and I'll have the rest reverted shortly.

>>84580977
Maybe we should lock Part 5 now that we are no longer working on it?

I just don't get why they would do something like that, Imean, they don't gain anything from it in the long run, so why do it?

>>84580977
They've also managed to do it to the ones before part 5 as well.

>>84581210

Either asshurt waifufags or /a/ trolls starting shit again. It's an easy fix regardless.

>>84581235

Yeah, I've gotten to those. Getting back on topic, who do we have set for the excavation arc?

>>84581270
Yeah this one guy is still deleting everything, you might see him as an "Anonymous Llama."

>>84581270
>>84581320
Why not put it on a pastebin or lock it?

Dude won't stop anytime soon.

>>84579954
We need to actually write the ward out.

>>84581352
Well first we need to keep the page reverted fro more than five seconds.

>>84581352
Well I have his name, this is all being done by some moron called "Redwood", he stated his name on the doc for Part 4.

>>84581452
Oh and great news, I found out from /a/ that he was a moderator here at one point.

We are completely fucked.

>>84581531

It's not that bad. Reviewfag is also Docfag so if necessary he can just lock it down. That and I think Taffy's got mirrors if I remember correctly.

>>84581394

All right, give me a few minutes and I'll start working out the Bobby and Dora scene.

>Bobby leads Dora into his office, a nicely furnished little room with a few beanbag chairs on the floor and a desk with a number of framed old photos, most notably a family photo with a much younger Hill
>Dora takes a seat, bit awkwardly due to the chairs, and Bobby hands her a tall glass of iced tea
>The two of them just take a few minutes to jaw, mostly just shooting the shit about their experiences in the prison
>"Doc, I hope I don't sound like a dick for saying this but you seem a little too...human to be working here."
>"I get that every now and again, Consuela. I know this is a correctional facility and all but my dad taught me that people are a lot like propane: they get more dangerous if you just keep ignoring 'em. So you've done some less than moral stuff; doesn't mean you're any less of a person, right?"

>>84582210
Probably could use more Spanish in Dora's line.

>>84582210

>"That chode in the helmet certainly thinks so."
>"Ah, you met Dredd then. Would explain how you got strapped with three weeks in solitary. How's the room been treating you?"
>"Desdichado at best. All kinds of smells and secreciónes coming out of the walls. No light. Barely even a bedframe and if you're on the floor you get some very disturbing ambient noise."
>"Hmm, you know what I think, Consuela? I think you're just a girl who's had a rough life and made some bad choices. Treating you like the salt of the earth isn't going to fix that. I'm gonna pull some strings and have your internment commuted to the Psych Ward."
>"Puto, are you calling me crazy?!"
>"Not like that. The folks in there are rarely too far gone. It's more of a rehab center if anything, helping people quiet the storms of their minds. I want to give you somewhere that's both a little more comfortable and that can help you sort yourself and your future out. I'd say some talks with the resident psychiatrists and some of the patients there could give you a sort of new context on how you could adapt and better yourself here. There's a book I've been reading lately called 『Being Other People』 and one of the biggest tenets of its philosophy is that only by understanding the struggles of those around us can we properly contextualize our own. Solitary's the last place that'll happen."
>"Well, I'll admit anything's better than 3 weeks in that caja."
>"It's decided then. I'll put in a few phone calls and get you transferred by day's end. I get the feeling this'll be a constructive experience for you."
>[Internally] "Why do I feel like I'm about to get my head shrunk?"

Damn cripples

>>84581270
>who do we have set for the excavation arc?
-Dora
-Suzie
-Me-Mow
-Di-Lung
-Gameboy
-Professor Bruttenholm
Did I miss anyone?

>>84581565
Protip: Anyone can download a copy of the doc

>>84583322
>Anyone can download a copy of the doc
Smeg, but can we make it so only the person who created the document can edit it?

>>84583427
I think only the one that created the doc can edit the permits

>>84583322
Well he's stopped now, so maybe, take all the stuff we have, convert it into read-only pdfs and then make a google drive out of it?

>>84583480
Here's a crazy idea.

Make a new Google doc with the story and remove permissions to edit it.

Rocket science, right?

>>84583322

All right. We have the jaguar statue for the Pillarman levels but what for below?

>>84584215
The caveman/sheriff. I don't know if we are adding something else

>>84584401
Wait...where's the caveman?

>>84584401

Well, all the talk of cavemen and prehistory had me thinking of using Lucy and 『THE EARTH』 as a level hazard on the way to Dinosaur Dan.

https://desuarchive.org/co/thread/83255874/#q83307885

Essentially, her body died eons ago but due to the effect of her Stand, it has essentially made her into a moebius strip, the life echoes of her skeleton/fossil keeping her Stand active and vice versa. It'd control every instance of bones and a rather sizeable crude oil deposit in order to keep the excavators from reaching the deepest levels.

>>84585155
He is frozen in there
(I'm not sure if he is in the last pillarman level or next to Dinosaur Dan's prison)

Have we fixed the docs now that Redwood has cleared off.

>>84585996

I'll take a look in a bit.

>>84585996
Pretty sure they're fixed. Took the time to change the name of part 6's doc as well.

>>84574760
Why is there a Jojo thread in /co/? I thought you people hated Jojo.

>>84586989
Nah, /jojo/ just hates us.

Also we're using /co/ related characters.

Did you ask /tg/ the same question when they had their Super Stand Sunday threads?

>>84585996
I'm checking the docs right now and part 1 has some empty spaces in the plot points section that I don't remember seeing the last time. It also has that weird blank space at the top of each page.
The rest of the docs seems fine.

>>84587466

It's been like that for a while; it might be a formatting error.

>>84587466

Is something wrong? Did someone hijack the docs again?

>>84588279
Yes it was Inspector Redwood

>>84588306

Damnit! Why do people have to antagonize this project?!

>>84588428
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EFRpFkZFrOU

>>84588428
They are still mad that we banned the Janis Joplin show from the project? Or they have too much free time (even more than us)

>>84589002
Probably the latter.

>>84580784

Perchance, are you still here? The doc situation has been resolved for the time being.

Ok, let's recapitulate. Is something missing in the psych ward arc that needs immediate attention?

>>84590960

Mostly dialogue and mapping out Suzie's visit to the ward and her subsequent breaking of Von Drake.

>>84590960
We should figure ou how Dora's first encounter with Psycho and Muzzle go.

I figure they'll mess with her using their stands while Dora's overhearing Sticks telling Von Drake how she's not crazy.

>>84591389

Could make for a nice body horror moment for her to find two Stands trying to seize control of her body at once. Seeing as Muzzle and Psycho are the doc's failures, would their Stands be trying to get her help or trying in vain to find new hosts?

>>84592186
The original idea was that their Stands became berserker after the treatment, so they are gonna lash out against anyone in their range

>>84590106
Sorry, heavy drinking today. It's pretty entertaining. I'll probably doodle something tomorrow when I've sobered up.

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>>84592354
Have fun with your drinking. Looking forward to the art.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gpyTgH2RifY

>>84592326

Should we have Boots attempt to manifest or have Membrane come in with the save?

>>84594369
[Boots] is about to manifest when Von Drake comes out and swats at them both with a newspaper for being too rowdy. The sight of Von Drake terrifies both Psycho and Muzzle as they have been traumatized by him.

It makes them both back off.

>>84594369
In that moment Membrane is busy with Robo-Dale, and Dora doesn't manifests Boots until the encounter with Von Drake. Probably Ludwig interrupts the scene with some restraining device to make the users (and by extension, their Stands) fall in line.

>>84594457
Or just a newspaper...

>>84594457
>>84594561

>"What have I told you two about imparting yourselves upon the staff?! Must I reintroduce you to the Sunday edition!?"
>The two Stands disperse almost immediately upon sight of the duck, their owners huddled and gibbering in a far corner.
>"At least I managed to get SOMETHING through those thick skulls of yours. Ah, my apologies for their less than civil behavior. I am Ludwig Von Drake, head psychiatrist and mental researcher for the prison. You must be the new intake Robert called about earlier. Pleasure to meet you."
>"What was wrong with those monstruos? I thought straight jackets and muzzles were only in las películas."
>"Oh, if only, Miss Consualez. Some of the cases we get here are a bit more advanced than your garden variety paranoid. That garb of theirs is as much for their safety as it is ours during their treatments. In time, my methods will make them civilized again. Or trained, at the very least."

>>84592354

Awesome. Glad to have you.

>>84595403
Nice.

We should think about how they were attacking Dora before that scene.

>>84574855
>>84574911
>Guard taking Dora to the office
>jokes about him meeting "Dr. Robert"
>Dora's heard the name mentioned by someone earlier in the story as the "weirdo doctor"
>when they get to his office, Bobby's sticking something up his nose
>Dora thinks "This guy ain't right"

>>84597943
Clashes a little with what we had last thread where Bobby comes down to get Dora out of solitary personally.

Suppose we'll need to pick which set up and jokes we like better.

>>84597011
Muzzle's Stand manifests as a series of veins and bulbs in the users body, probably in its altered state it turned into a bunch of tentacles that reaches for Dora, resembling her first encounter with Suzie.

>>84598760
We can probably be more creative than tentacles.

>>84600043
have we ever seen an agressive growth of ear wax? Maybe agressive lymphatic systems?

>>84600456
That's a step up.

But we have two messed up, malformed stands in this bit, so we also need to account for them fighting each other trying to get to Dora first.

>>84583322
so how is Bruttenholm going to act?

Try to look at it as I might, most of his character development occured during the more "sane" days of the BPRD. He may have known about what would happen later on, decades after he died, but it still doesnt change the fact that he wasn't there for Hell on Earth.

How would he have acted during that event? How would he act now? When things go to "Hell"?

I'd imagine he'd be willing to go to great lengths to use his power to save others.

But when he fights Dora. He should be at first difficult to reach to some extent. He still sees Dora as a convict, a killer even, potentially. He has no reason to trust her, but eventually does grow to respect her.

I do still think he should have a lieutenant or protege. Maybe Bobby worked with him in his youth?

Bruttenholm was the father figure that let Bobby's caring nature flourish, and ultimately was what led him to be a psychiatrist?

It's not a malicious thing though. Bobby and Hank were on good terms. Even when Hank died. But on some level, Bobby and Bruttenholm seemed to be kindred spirits to some extent. And when Bobby starts using Propane Nightmare to fight alongside Bruttenholm, to some extent, it could be him reconcliing with both of his "dads".

He picks up the Propane teachings his father gives, and feels that he's honoring Hank. But fighting alongside Bruttenholm, he also honors the man who mentored him, as Bruttenholm had always insisted Bobby should have gotten into Field Work sooner.

>>84600975
I don't think Dora fights him.

It's more he has a low opinion of any convicts assigned to help with the excavation work and might just leave them to fight the giant stone jaguar on their own while he blazes ahead.

>>84601119
they're either some badass convicts, or he just left them for dead.

Maybe he just booped it on the nose with his Stand and kept walking?

>>84601310
Maybe he's had to fight that stupid stone jaguar so many times already that if the convicts can't beat it on their own they're better off not being on this team.

The traps on the pillarman levels keep resetting and re-configuring further down.

>>84601310
>>84601119
>>84600975

Fuck, maybe we make the lower levels some Hyperborean shit?

Downright lovecraft-style monsters. Shit like that.

The kind of stuff that would be in a Mignola comic. Maybe some Frogmen that the Pillarmen fought in their early days, which is the reason why a race as OP as them even has a warrior mentality in the first place.

Bruttenholm needs strong convicts like
>>84601395

Because he suspects that whatever spooked the Pillarmen enough to build on top of the Hyperborean prison in an attempt to store what was further down would be some INTERESTING shit.

Of course, by this time WE know it's Dino Dan.

>>84601469
Check doc 2 for the history of our pillarmen, we can probably pull from that.

We can't make things on the way to Dan too crazy or it will lessen [Pure Imagination] when they get sucked into it later.

>>84601558
dude I helped write that.

From what I remember, we don't go too in depth on why they're so militarized. We do menton HOW they function as a militaristic society. But not WHY

>>84601712
will check the doc again though.

Huh. Wait youre right

>>84601310
Well, in his opinion, they are a bunch of cutthroats and scoundrels, so he doesn't have any attachment to criminals that are forced to work with him

>>84601712
If memory serves, Kuzco's empire was described as being aggressively expansionist, which led to conquering Atlantis and El Dorado

>>84601558
>>84601558
still, having the opportunity to use some Hyperborean stuff is almost too good to pass up.

Maybe just have it be some earlier Pillarmen stuff. Maybe some Atlanttean defenses?

>>84601811
Well yes. That's why he's not going to sacrifive himself to save them. But it doesnt mean hes just going to throw away potentially valuable team members.

Although to be fair. The death rate in the BPRD is obscenely high. So he might just do that.

>>84601811
With any empire, there will always be prisons.

Before the empire with fully formed, there were sects of proto-pillarmen who broke off from the main group early enough to become something else.

They found something living among or studying the humans, something different from CELs.

I'm of course referring to rotoscope-ing since what we have here is a Scopeman.

Somehow these pillarmen managed to become something else, Wong wants to know how they did this since he believes there is a way to re-create the prefect frame potion from this method. However, Scopemen are very elusive and he has been unable to locate one for possibly hundreds or even thousands of years.
But then there's Dan, someone who committed more crimes than the number of stars you can see in the clear night sky. His location is known to all pillarmen, but the humans have gone and placed a new prison on top of him, a prison full of stand users.

>>84601889
Oh, we should totally use the mechanical leviathan.

Maybe one floor is flooded all the time and they've never been able to drain it because of that thing.

They blow it up, it opens up a hole in the ground leading deeper down than they've ever gotten before.

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>>84601889
>Maybe some Atlantean defenses
We can't use the Leviathan since it was Milo's Stand (and isn't underwater), so that leave us with the colossi from the climax of the movie, or something like Rourke after being stabbed with the crystal shard.

>>84602155
Well that takes the wind out of my sails a little.

Oh well, I guess it would've been too similar to the jaguar anyway.

So what then, fireflies?

>>84602155
So a moat of the goop that tuns whatever touches it into explosive unstable crystal?

I like it.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LTg1uJgQC10

>>84602155
>>84603443

Similar enough to the Hellboy Hell on Earth frog people. But still has the /co/co/ touch.

Fund this

>>84603443
>Bruttenholm rambles that someone in the previous team stole his notes about the perfect frame potion
>The poor idiot misinterpreted the notes and believed the moat contained the perfect frame potion

>>84604507
>Dora asks him what happened (this is during the excavation, right?)
>"Well first he complained of a mild heartburn and tightness on his chest, before crystallizing entirely from the mouth outwards...then he fell over and exploded."

>>84597011

I would say that PSYCHO KILLER is starting to meld itself into Dora's legs and when she panics, the unexpected pain causes her to drop to the floor. From her position, she sees Psycho off in the corner, foaming at the mouth and eyes going off in different directions and Muzzle approaching her from the front. She tries to struggle with him but Psycho's Stand is still wreaking havoc on her legs and when Muzzle touches her, his stand activates, the bulbs bursting into stomach lining and encroaching upon her. There's a brief moment of [BOOTS] trying to manifest, mostly a shaped shadow with eyes, before Von Drake intervenes.

>>84601988

Huh, that's actually a real good explanation for the Scope Men.

>>84605970

Also, should we have Sticks overhear the incident? It could be part of the impetus for her trusting this instance of Dora?

>>84604507
I don't think he'd have anything on the perfect frame potion unless he once met Hank who told him about the events of part 2.

>>84605970
That works.

>>84607454
That also works, but she's not convinced and still doesn't join in on the plot until she is convinced she's in a time line where it looks like Von Drake is going to lobotomize her.

>>84606541
I might need to change how long Wong has been looking for Dan though since if he had been looking for Scopemen for hundreds of years, it probably would've checked the prison sooner than this.

Or maybe not since Wong knew Scopemen had powers unknown to the pillarmen.

So maybe Wong only recently managed to obtain a stand and that's what finally gave him the confidence to act on getting to Dan since now he has the same mysterious power these Scopemen have.

I've been away for a few days, what's going on in this thread

>>84607746

We're hammering out the excavation section and building up the Psych Ward currently.

>>84600975

Personally, I would add that he is feeling very embittered as a result of seeing terrible things happening during his lifetime and career. I suggest among one of those things would be Hellboy dying during a mission (as a nod to The Storm & Fury and Hellboy in Hell arcs), seeing ancient wonders being used for evil purposes and seeing friends and collagues dying in horrible ways during ill-fated missions. That would push him to have the mentality that "people will die anyway while horrible things still happen in our world"; also, I think it would help in making Trevor see the prisoners as expendable would be portraying most of them as assholes with little to no reedeming qualities. That, of course, would change when Dora steps in line to save his life when his Stand is unable to protect him.

>>84607694

I could see that happening. He's feeling much more emboldened for having surpassed the other Pillar Men.

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Do you know who I am?

>>84608682
a lucky nigga?

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>>84608710
I'm a guy who makes Jojo pixelart I can dump some if you guys want.

>>84608755
I can see this going well for you...as you are violating one of the Global Rules of the site by doing this...goodbye.

>>84608710
No he's a shitposter from /a/, just report him for posting stuff that shouldn't be on /co/, it's what we did when teruposter and lobotomykun showed up.

>>84607952
So we confirm he had Hellboy as a son.
But his Stand still looks like him...

Are we going with the Bruford being Star Platinum theory? Personally I liked it, because it helped explain why it was so strong. It had Buford's spirit aiding Jotaro's.
Anyways.

Yeah. Making him embittered for the most part might work. I'd imagine the BPRD would be almost completely unable to combat the new dangers to the world on the level that the Daffy incident alone would decimate them and cause funding to be pulled ASAP.

But yeah. The prisoners should be assholes. How about the Blue Sisters from Proud family? nothing redeeming about them. And having Trevor at least try to keep them alive at first but after they ignore him the first time he stops trying to help them. Only for them to die horribly.

Having him change his deameanor when Dora saves him is important.

>>84609705
well he hasn't done anything wrong.

>>84609990
Embittered over the loss of his son, Bobby is the one who helped him move forward with his life again.

The grief was enough for him to manifest a stand that looked like his son.

I think this has become the most autism you can feasibly fit in one thread. Holy shit, I'm kind of impressed. Let me know when you have a product together.

>>84611100
We will, /a/non, we will.

>>84611100
binary trip-dub combo of faith.

Now this project is confirmed to finish someday.

Although yes. Taking a step back, this thread is almost incomprehensible to newcomers.

>>84611297
>"/co/ can't finish a project" -Anon
Several threads later and we are already in part 6, I'm surprised we got this far

>>84580359
Rewriting Jojo with jokes stolen from the shows represented in this along with memes.

Here's an idea: what if there was a chapter (or a few) from the Warden's/staff's point of view. Like a guard seeing an event from a different perspective, or the Warden having to convince some government guests that everything's all right.

>>84613238
are we still using the "Warden has infiltrated Interpol" idea?

>>84613238
That could work, I second this idea.

>>84613238

Could be neat seeing all of the bullshit one of the guards has to put up with on a regular day.

Alright, I need to ask this question: first time Dora meets Bobby, are we going with him going down to her cell to get her out
>>84572001

Or Dora being brought to his office?
>>84597943

>>84614758
If Bobby goes to her cell, on the way back to his office he can discuss how the prison works

>>84614830
That's probably worth sacrificing the sticking something up his nose gag for.

But he could just as easily explain that to her if he escorts her from his office to the ward.

>>84614964
Maybe he appears in Dora's cell with something already sticking out of his nose

>>84617082

>Please excuse the beans; that game got something fierce!

>>84617082
>>84617288
I like it.

He shoots the bean out of his nose before breathing in the solitary cell air.

>>84617853

>Plastic frijoles? In his nose?

>>84619878
>This must be the crazy-ass doctor they keep talking about! Estoy jodida!

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>>84613301
I remember a suggestion for LalaVava as being a spy for the Warden working inside Interpol. She attempted to assassinate Penny for him. Mainly to complete the running gag of Mandark continually showing up in some for since part 4. Now it's his sister trying to kill them.

Not sure if she could still fit into the plot though. She had a stand suggestion, but I don't think it took off too well. I'll help come up with something else if the thread likes the idea of her showing up.

>>84620013

I don't know, we need a good dirty cop kind of character.

>>84621101
Chief Wiggum was suggested earlier. We gave his part to Dai Lung but that doesn't mean we can't still use him. He'd need a different stand though.

Also, that reminds me, when Penny gets inside the prison, does she still keep receiving messages from the Warden disguised as Commissioner Gordon urging her to do horrible things?

>>84621184
>Commissioner Gordon urging her to do horrible things?
Well, Mr. Bubbles from Thomas and friends was among the suggestions for Waifu Ocean, if you catch my drift.

>>84620004
When would she have heard of Bobby before meeting him?

>>84623565
Maybe she overheard some guards on her way to solitary, however, they were talking about Von Drake

>>84624049
We'd have to add in that line somewhere.

Also, during Wong's escape attempt after Dan is dead, when RoboDale starts fighting him, should Bobby also join in, surprising Wong that there's a [style] user in the prison?

I also think that Wong won't end up inside PI, instead Trevor will be the one making his life miserable from there on since Wong is a living relic, a pillarman with ages of history inside his head, and Trevor will very much enjoy taking his time to extract everything he can from Wong believing him to be the one who killed the prisoners who actually had some sense of honor and dignity in this hell hole.

The Warden allows this because it amuses him.

>>84624429
does bobby even use Style?

He's pretty ordinary except for the robo-"Stand".

>>84624429
I think Wong is supposed to be killed during the escape attempt to showcase how the Warden is the actual big bad.

>>84624869
He has one listed in the doc, not sure if it was reviewed

>>84624914
Wong getting smashed easily, yeah, but it might be more interesting if he survives and gets the Trevor Treatment for however many days he thinks Wong killed Dora and crew.

>>84624914
What was it?

>>84626044
Here it is:
Style: 「JOKE'S ON YOU」
Ability: An offensive Style that requires a prop of some kind to work, such as a whoopee cushion. After building up energy through posing, the prop must be "presented" towards the target (e.g. squeezing the whoopee cushion with the opening directed towards the target); this will strike the target with great rotational force, flipping them over and knocking them backwards dramatically.

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Stand User: Sylvester James Pussycat
User Appearance: A scowling, grouchy cat in a brown, leather trench coat smoking a pipe with a brown Breton cap.
Stand: 「BIG STAR」
Stand Appearance: A golden, clockwork bird sealed inside of a cage slung around Sylvester’s back.
Stand Ability: When the mechanical bird is released from its cage, it will land wherever the user directs it too. Once it lands, the spot where it sits is now a「CIRCLE TRAP」that, when stepped on or gets in contact with any person, will sink rapidly down into the earth and will stop when the user commands it too. The bird does not have to be on the spot per se, but the land will sink much quicker if the bird is on the 「CIRCLE TRAP」.

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Is there a way we can fit this guy into the story. Its such an interesting design bot to use.

>>84627047
The evolved from of Cartman's stand after Loki stole it.

Loki ran for president and lost to Nobody, he's bitter about that, so a subplot in part 7 is Loki trying to kill Nobody. Heroes have to stop him even though they don't want to.

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Semi related, I just realized the first three Jojo ops are on Spotify.

>>84627047
*thumb and pointer finger closed together, other three fingers raised up emoji"

>>84626317
So Wong gets blown up by Dale, kicked in the face a lot by Dora and whoever is following her red footprints, styled on by Bobby, and he still doesn't go down until the Warden steps in.

>>84628450
Well, he absorbed the blood of a scopeman and got a massive power boost from it

>>84627047
/pol/ please go.

>>84631779
At least provide SOME content when you bump the thread.

So are we going with Wong getting killed/Pure Imaginationed/written out during Dan's escape or not? It's pretty important to establish that, because it's going to heavily effect the dynamic for the latter half of the real prison arc.
If Wong sticks around, Dora and Suzie have to deal with Wong directing his gang to make life hell for them; if he dies, then... I guess they have to deal with the gang while it's going through a leadership war?
I'd rather have him stay, for more of a feel of escalation and threat.

>>84624429
Do we want to have Bobby reveal his mad skills so early? I think it'd be better to build him up as the mild mannered therapist first, to give it a bit more impact when he does reveal that he's actually a Style-using, gunfighting, robot-controlling badass.

>>84632841
Being an escape attempt, it should be quelled by the guards, Bobby is just the therapist of the prison.

Bampu

>>84632841
It's the only opportunity for Bobby having a style to be relevant since Wong is the only pillarman in the part.

>>84635561
I just love the fact that his Style weaponizes the Beware The Silly Ones trope.

>>84635561
Maybe we can have Wong get out of Pure Imagination when the boundary starts blurring?
Or we can just not use the Style. It's not a big deal.

>>84636049
I didn't think Wong was getting PI'd.

I thought he, because he's a pillarman, manages to survive the Warden stomping him and then gets interrogated by Trevor for archeological purposes.

>>84636414
It wouldn't be impossible for him to come back in the last act to fight Bobby in that case, right?

>>84636558
That's a good point, we should do that.

>>84637185
>Wong uses his Stand to force prisoners into fighting for him
>Bobby counters with a robot army
>Bobby eventually wins by pulling out his Style which Wong didn't know about (we should foreshadow it by a mention of "mandatory Style training")
>Before he can go anywhere, though, the Warden shows up and does his whole "I thought you were boring but where was this guy while you were working here" bit

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>>84613238
>"Damn it, Archer, I think we already passed it."
>"Look, just, shut up okay, I know what I'm doing. I think I'd know if we'd passed a giant ass creepy prison complex."
>"It's not just creepy. From what I've read, it has some amazing architecture. And hopefully we'll meet some excellent prison guard babes."
>"Yeah, but first we need to investigate I. M. Pufndick and make sure he isn't keeping any secret Stand bullshit in his prison. Which need I remind you, is giant and also creepy!"
>"Yeah, but we're stilling going to pick up prison babes, right?"
>"Oh, definitely."

Could someone tell me if stardust crusaders gets better? Right now I have
>Japan
>Shit MC
>No roundabout
>Faggy pokemon stands

Why is this so shit?

>>84638573
Also shit theme song. Only good thing right now is the villain, who I don't want to spoil.

>>84638620
Yes, it does get better at the end, with the best theme of the first three parts. The Stands get more interesting as the series goes on, but there are a few interesting ones for the later villains.

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>>84627047
That guy at the bottom looks like the boys of silence from Bioshock Infinite

>>84639658
Hooray, a new Stand design for the Psyche Ward!
>"Hello darkness my old friend...I'v come to talk with you again..."


Also this:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jS0fsoyrFg4

Just a heads up, here are the previous threads for the pastebin:
http://desuarchive.org/co/thread/84170468/
http://desuarchive.org/co/thread/84252968/
http://desuarchive.org/co/thread/84397426/

And getting back on topic, what do we have planned for Dora and co. after being sucked into PI?

>>84627303
so he hires The Punisher with the Crank Stand?

I like it.

now that the Punisher was dared to do it. He HAD to do it. Because not doing so would be chickening out of a dare. Which would not be EXTREME enough

>>84636049
lets drop the style shit.

We only had it in because an anon got buttmad by Hamon's existence.

>>84641009
That anon hasn't been around for a while.

And this line of discussion evolved naturally.

Alright, so Bobby goes down to the solitary cell Dora is in, shoots a bean out of his nose to smell the air there, takes Dora out of solitary and explains the layers of the person, talks to her in his office, and she's assigned to the psych ward. Those events are already written, they just needs to be collected and organized.

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Just a random thought: Should we have some major disasters happening during the race in part 7 that end up shaping the setting of part 8? Something similar to what happened in the Old Country and to mirror the earthquake in JoJolion

>>84643062
Eh. I'd prefer that if anything happened it just happened on its own. Loss is bullshit, but Ethan would use an unrelated disaster as a sign of its power.

>>84644820
No, I mean that something happening during the race like, I dunno, a tsunami, and one of the characters in part 8 was affected by it in some way.

So what is Dora's preliminary examination conducted by Von Drake like?

>>84646632
Maybe check if she has a Stand, since she still hasn't manifested Boots properly, it allows her to pass under the doctor's radar for now.

>>84646771
Yes, but how? Is that what Membrane is for?

Is there a big torture machine that would be a CAT scan?

In the ward, this check up is currently where the details stop now that it's organized.

>>84646970
Von Drake also has a latent Stand, that is how he is able to catch glimpses of their patients Stands once in a while. I had this idea that the machines used by Von Drake are pretty much torture devices, and any result he gets from them is actually thanks to his Stand's power briefly manifesting

>>84647115
But he dismisses any of those glimpses.

We also need to introduce Wall-E about now.

>>84644934
Probably. That's very much a "when we get there" thing, though.

>>84646632
Maybe he could pull some Sherlock psychoanalysis bullshit where he guesses a lot of Dora's past due to
The point where he decides she's insane (after hearing her talking about Stands?) comes a little later; after that, he straps her into a memory extractor which forces her to relieve memories.

>>84647304
>due to looking at her and her body language. He lets her go to perform basic ward duties after that.
fixd

>>84647304
>>84647344
Well someone will need to come up with whatever his psychobabble is.

I guess he took her to the lab since Membrane would be able to tell right away if she had a stand and met their criteria for super crazy.

After Dora gets her stand, she should make Von Drake walk around in circles for a while and ask him why he's running in circles.

>>84649651
I feel like, if we did that, there'd need some reference to it in part 8 with Fred because of this.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S0-coASIjkQ

But I'm not sure what it'd be.

>>84649761
Having a Scopeman with [Circles] and the ability to make an environment loop around would be pretty great actually.

>>84649761
What Dora does after part 6 is anyone's guess.

>>84649761
Didn't something similar happened with Scruffy's Stand in the WB Tower?

>>84649761
a bit unnecessary.

Dora sets up the Scopemen incident with Dan, but after the events of PI, she does not want to be involved with Stand users or world saving incidents afterwards.

>Mr.Nobody is at his endgame, and Crazy Jane is teaming up with Lucky Luke to jump on the steaming choo-choo locomotive.

>It's on T.V., crazy bastards trying to kill the president.

again. (Crank-Punisher incident)

>Cut to Dora saying she's pretty sure "Esos pobres pendejos" can handle it.

>>84647304
>>84647344
This works. After all, Von Drake was supposed to be like Hugo Strange in this setting.

OK, so lets brainstorm this I guess.

Von Drake brings Dora into the lab, has her stand in front of him big machine while he powers it up, says it'll give him an image map of her brain or something.

So this big horrible thing fires on (parts of it are actually on fire, but he assures her that's normal as he puts it out) and it begins rave strobing Dora in the face until she nearly blacks out and sees another mental picture of a big red hat.

Von Drake looks at the read out (which is like looking at a seismograph), he notes the beginnings of some potential mental disorders and says it's a good thing they're catching this so early, might explain some of her aggressive outbursts. He wants to keep an eye on her to see if it develops or just goes away naturally as this condition sometimes does.

Then he looks at the scheduling and says he can find some work for her in the ward to justify on the books her staying in the ward for the time being.

Then he gives her the chore list, the stack of papers (Sticks' drawings) to change out a cage with, and sends her out of the lab with RoboDale as an escort/guard/supervisor.

So do Sticks and RoboDale get along?

Does RoboDale sympathize with Sticks for being one of the few people who see the truth?

>>84657517
Perhaps, but at this point Dale is going through recalibration due to his constant ramblings

>>84657759
How badly does re-calibration mess with his original personality?

Would calibrating him to his original settings be how they keep him from ratting them out over how they took care of Von Drake?

>>84659092
It probably makes him act like a regular robotic guard, suppressing his more outlandish quirks but keeping his ability to think independently

>>84659234
Dale would hate that.

Anything that even presumably messes with his mind sends him into a crazed panicked state.

And threads are sinking super fast right now for some reason.

>>84659542
>And threads are sinking super fast right now for some reason.
What if Redwood made it so these threads autosage for the lulz.

>>84659542
And that's why Membrane needs help from Von Drake's machines to keep Dale in check. Think of those memory wipes done to the droids in the Star Wars universe.

>>84659657
Good lord! But this does setup a pretty awesome scene, provided the other anons are okay with the idea of WALL-E trying to stop Dale from getting his memory scrubbed near the end of the pysch ward arc. Basically WALL-E tries to stop the machine because RoboDale is his friend, Either Membrane or Von Drake kicks him into one of the other tables in the room and proceeds to give him some "Discipline", Dale just happens to look over at this and due to...something...caused by the machine, he sees his son Joseph in place of WALL-E...his son whose being tortured by whatever he sees the doctor in question as.

Dale reacts predictably.

>>84660864
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fu0scA8kqHQ
Jump to 0:28

>>84656799

This should work as a good skeleton for the events.

>>84660864

I would say Von Drake should do that. Membrane was suggested to "adopt" Wall-E after he survived the robot destruction tests, so I can't see him treating the little robot like he was trash or something, wouldn't match well. Von Drake, on the other hand, so far has been portrayed as someone sligthly ruthless and showing little care to his patients.

>>84664511

I could see that. He's already fed up with Pericles and soon enough Sticks giving him the business so he'd lash out at Wall-E the moment it starts giving him grief.

>>84660864
Where do we fit that in at? Is it part of the breaking of Von Drake?

Also, Wall-E's proper intro needs to be written.
Is that happening during Dora's preliminary examination?

>>84656799

>"All right Miss Consualez, please step into the test area. We have a couple of brain scans to do."
>"Wait, I thought shrinks were supposed to lie you down on that weird looking sofá and ask uncomfortable questions."
>"Oh come now, that's just the realm of trope and cliche. REAL psychoanalysis exists on the very bleeding edge of technology! And such is why we designed this masterstroke of the mind: Holographic Analytical Reciprocating DigitAl Computer or HARDAC, for short!"
>"Dios above, what is that thing?!"
>"A supercomputer designed by both me and my colleague, Professor Membrane. It was created to map the ebb and flow of the mind and predict the course it will take if patterns hold. Now I wouldn't suggest moving; this thing's still a work in progress!"
>The machine whirrs to life, the red eye in its center glowing like a wounded sun before multiple pops and small explosions escape it, flames leaping out from cracks in the frame
>"Eh, doc?..."
>"No need to worry! Just a couple of transitional hiccups is all!"
>As Von Drake extinguishes the flames, the eye begins to flash frantically, the light peering into Dora's mental landscape, sculpting a digital pastiche of her brain. As the gathering occurs, the world around her seems to go dark save for the flashes of memory rushing past her, most notably a crimson hat above ebony hair.
>"Aaand we're done! To think, what took months of inference and guesswork solved in seconds by technology!"
>"Am I supposed to feel like I just dropped acid?"
>"...Yes. Please try not to vomit on the floor; the grout is already hard enough to deal with."

>>84666303

>A long printout begins to snake out from a port in the side of the machine, the print upon it near undecipherable
>"Hmm, fascinating. Apart from some slightly higher aggression levels than normal, you seemed like a perfectly average girl up until just recently. There's some troubling spikes in your mental activity that are some early warning signs of mental illness. It would explain why you decided to smash that girl's face in."
>"Trust me pato, there were EXTREMELY good reasons to push Me-Mow's shit in."
>"Hmm, you may have a point. Dredd's report didn't exactly give much context for the action. Could just be a false positive, after all. For the time being, my recommendation is that you stay in the ward for now, for observation's sake. I could be wrong or we could use this time to properly neuter whatever complex is brewing in your grey matter."
>"Anything's better than solitario. So what's there to do in here?"
>"Well, considering that you don't (yet) met the criteria for full intake, we'll be having you as part of the prison worker program. Nothing too major, just a few chores here and there. You'll even be making a bit of money doing it."
>"I'm not changing bedpans, am I?"
>"Well, not exactly. For right now you'll just be changing out the liners in one of the patient's cages.That stack of doodles on the desk behind you should suffice for material. Just one thing though: the owner of that cage can be a bit...resourceful at times so I'll have Gribble escorting you to him just in case."

>>84666303
>>84666746
Alright, making progress. Good job.

The events right after this are already written out (Von Drake and Membrane talking about Sticks' drawings, then talking about Dib, and Dora meeting Pericles).

So that puts us on how Dora gets receptionist duty, unless we want to expand on her first meeting with Pericles.
Pericles could mess with Dale asking him what they've done to him mind this time to make him doubt himself.

>>84666746
Now, this is what comes next, anything we need to expand upon or re-do?
>Exit Dora and RoboDale, leading to Ludwig and Membrane's conversation

>Membrane asks about why Von Drake would just toss out Sticks’ therapy drawings like that
>"But Ludwig, how can you be sure that she's crazy, and doesn't have enhanced mental abilities like mine?"
>"Bah. Her ‘prophesies’ and ‘visions’ are meaningless nonsense." He shows Membrane some of the drawings made by Sticks during her therapy
>One of them is seven crude figures arranged in four panels
>Orbot
>Orbot and Comedy Chimp
>Orbot and Dave
>Orbot and a lying-down Cubot
>"I mean, what is this supposed to be? Ridiculous."
>"I suppose you're right..."
>"You know Dr. Von Drake, I wish I met you years ago so you could have helped my poor insane son. You would have been able to remove some of the unpleasant ideas in his huge head and put him in the right path before he got himself in trouble with the authorities over his obsession with paranormal mumbo-jumbo."

>Dora is being supervised by RoboDale as she does her tasks
>Her first tasks is cleaning Pericles' room, this is when they first meet and he begins trying to make Dora into an ally of his

>”Ah, the foretold kinder arrives! Welcome to our bedlam.”
>”You were expecting me, búho?”
>”The badger's ravings give me an ample supply of eyes to things both here and not, sometimes at once. They also make for decent toiletries.”

>>84667197

We still need to try to find a good place to introduce Wall-E.

>>84667814
Perhaps Membrane is in the middle of building/reassembling him when having that conversation with Von Drake?

>>84667835
Sounds good. to me

>>84667835

>"Doctor please. We are men of SCIENCE! after all. Look at this robot for example. Where he was once nothing more than a mere compactor unit, my hands have turned him into...into..."
>"A secretary? A floor vacuum?"
>"NO. A helper robot capable of taking care of any task at ankle level! Surely if I can find purpose in this robot, you can go deeper with your patients."

>>84668791
So what line does this get inserted after?

It'd have to be before the drawing I think.

Okay, I was out for some time. How are things? Part 6, Fighting game, /co/rge /co/star?

>>84667197
>Orbot
>Orbot and Comedy Chimp
>Orbot and Dave
>Orbot and a lying-down Cubot

Wait...

I II II I_

...Loss.jpg?

Part 8 foreshadowing confirmed?

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>>84669088
The fighting game is a little delayed because of some events, but it will get much better after the first character ans the first boss gets done. Because then, we'll start using it as a template to the others.

>>84669088
The psych ward arc is being written, and the excavation arc is being planned. No updates in the game or the AU

>>84669855
>Ethan: You shall recognize my mark when you see it. B^U!
>Crowd: B^U!
(Don't ask me how to pronounce "B^U")

>>84669088

It's not as quick as Part 5 but it goes. I think we're going for a more character driven story with Part 6 given the focus on dialogue.

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>>84670014

This had better be their salute.

>>84670014
"B to the U"?

>>84670757

| |
\O/
|

"B^U"

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>>84670757
Remember me to visit the drawthread someday

>>84670797
>>84670014

Be Above You. The concept of Loss is so all encompassing that it can be considered the next logical layer of existence.

>>84671021
This is literally perfect

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>>84670926
>The raised arms is an actual symbol from ancient egypt
Oh, shit

>>84669855
Yes, that's the point.

Sticks looked way into the future and in one of those futures she saw the cult rising.

So she saw it before the meme magic bullshit is even being implemented.

But can we please get back to part 6 now? I know none of you will be this excited for part 8 when we actually get to part 8, but we won't get there unless we focus at the task at hand.

>>84671696
Well, the latter parts are much more blank slates than this one (specially part 7) but yeah, let's get back to the issue at hand.

>>84671696

Yeah, sorry bout that. Just a mite burned out from all of the dialogue writing so it's nice to spread out the thoughts a bit. I'll get started on the scene between Pericles, Robo-Dale and Dora.

>>84671811
Part 6 is pretty much a blank slate for most of it as well.

We have the events more-or-less mapped up to when Dora gets sucked into PI, but everything after that is just a jumbled mish-mash of new and old ideas with no structure to write the story from.

At least we have the current arc at hand plotted out, now we need to fill it in.

>>84668791
>>84667197
So we need to combine these.

>"Doctor, doesn't it seem a bit callous to throw out Sticks' drawings like that? She has shown some significant improvement in her focus ever since Dr. Robert suggested the treatment."
>"Hump, I'm still not convinced Robert is a doctor at all, not like us. We are men of SCIENCE! Just take that robot you've been working on for example. Where it was once nothing more than a mere compactor unit, your hands have turned it into something with greater purpose."
>Von Drake pauses
>"Yes, it could make a fine floor vacuum or perhaps even a secretary I imagine."
>"NO. A helper robot capable of taking care of any task at ankle level! Surely if I can find purpose in this robot, you can go deeper with your patients. How can you be sure Sticks is crazy instead of having enhanced mental abilities not unlike my own?"
>At this, Membrane's stand manifests behind him and starts moving things around
>It looks like telekinesis from Von Drake's perspective, but with a shadowy aura behind Membrane which Von Drakes rubs his eyes and dismisses as retinal trauma from using the machine just now

Then

>"Bah. Her ‘prophesies’ and ‘visions’ are meaningless nonsense." He shows Membrane some of the drawings made by Sticks during her therapy
and the rest.

>>84671838
I know how that feels. It's the way I was getting when the bulk of part 5 was all on me to write out.

Part 6 is a bit more complicated and twisty than part 5 though, a lot less action-y things to elaborate on, so I've been taking more of an organizational/suggestion role this time around.

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What about that shadow from "The Shadow of Courage"?

Also, what's Dale's current outlook on things right now? Depressed, jaded, resigned, etc.

>>84672923
How about he made peace with his life before being turned into a metal man?

Now his goal in life is to try to keep what Hank was trying to do (helping people) going. He doesn't care for how Strickland is run these days, he was against the prison, he got assigned there to make sure they didn't lobotomize Bobby, but the Warden took some measures to keep the two from meeting.

Now he's doing his best just trying to keep his head together since these two quacks keep trying to take the man out of the machine.

>>84673090
>metal man
Was he specifically made by Will Magnus or?

>>84673289
I don't know. It's never been talked about who put Dale and Gadget together.

There's a pic of roboDale somewhere that spawned the whole idea of even using him.

>>84673289

Magnus seems believable enough, sure.

So what are Dora's follow up examinations like?

Just played the latest build of the game and there are loads of problems
>No walls,so once the sandbag is gone you have to restart
>Courage feels weightless, has the slippery Luigi effact on max
>No actual quarter/half/full circles/z-motions/pretzels
>Infinite airdashes
>No normals/neutrals
Just a few things I noticed.
On the other hand, is Giffany getting shafted from part 6? Her proposed moveset is the most interesting out of the entire cast.

>>84673090

>"Huh, what'd a kid as young as you do to get in here?"
>"..."
>"It's the enhancements, isn't it?"
>"Well, that and I get basically everyone asking that question."
>"Can't argue with that. Name's Dale Gribble."
>"Consuela. So who're all of these papers for anyway?"
>"Professor Pericles, former member of Mystery Incorporated and general psychopath. The doc's been trying to rehabilitate him for months now. To be honest, I think the duck's out of his depth on this one."
>Dale opens an imposing solid steel door revealing a padded cell, one third of which has been barred off, containing the prisoner.
>”Ah, the foretold kinder arrives! Welcome to our bedlam.”
>”You were expecting me, búho?”
>”The badger's ravings give me an ample supply of eyes to things both here and not, sometimes at once. They also make for decent toiletries.”
>"The tejón?" [internally] That girl did seem to recognize me...
>"Indeed, our resident oracle despite herr Doktor's insistence to the contrary. But let's not speak of absent parties. From what I've seen, you're a much more interesting topic, Dora."
>There's a brief pang of panic in her before settling back to normal.
>Dale: "Come on Pericles, do you have to give EVERY new person here the business?"
>"Did you have to trust the man with the mask?"
>There's a look of deep consternation etched into Dale's face as a tense aura fills the space between them. "I've...made my peace with that already. Consuela, if you look towards the bottom of the bars, you'll see a handle. You pull that and it opens the drawer. Line it with the new sheets, toss the old, and head out."
>Dale then leaves them, still reeling.
>"Ah, the so few things our machines cannot solve. A warning to you, dear kinder. Don't trust your supposed superiors. From what I've seen, they belong here for more reasons than you'd think."
>[While changing the drawings]"I'll keep that in mind."

>>84675734
Can RoboDale even emote with his current face? It'd be like he's looking down a little while his face is darkened with shadows.

>>84676056
Gadget was able to do it, Dale is an older version so he probably has a more rigid material on his face

>>84676821
I just remember the picture of RoboDale and he had a metal plate for a face.

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>>84677276

>>84677794

>Alamo Launcher

That's bullshit but brilliant.

>>84675576
Giffany is in flux. I have a feeling she'll probably stay in, but I don't think she'll be a brojo.

>>84675734
Our next set of cliff notes:
I suppose we'll need a trnasition of some kind to her at receptionist duty.
>Another of Dora’s tasks is being a receptionist
>While on desk duty, Suzie comes in to get her meds and is shocked/surprised/overjoyed/angry to see Dora and explains that most people don't come back from solitary, she’s also surprised Dora has still not manifested a stand
>(according to the official paperwork records, most of the prisoners in solitary kill themselves pretty quickly. The higher ups want to look into why, but when they see the types of psychos that go in there they brush it under the rug.)

>"Hmm. Usually, it does not take zis long for a Stand to manifest. I wonder if your Stand power is simply to see ze Stands of others."
>"...And Stands can have crazy powers like stopping time and rewriting people's minds, right?"
>"Oui."
>"Oh, mierda."

>Dora’s “treatments” are awful and traumatic, giving her flashbacks of her life before all this jawbreaker business

>While cleaning Pericles’ cell again, he shows Dora what she'll become if things continue like this
>he gestures to a drawing of a drooling idiot Dora on a piece of paper, which unnerves Dora a little

>Begin conspiring to make Von Drake snap since he’s making things worse for everyone in the ward

Lot's of things to fill in, so anyone have any suggestions?

>>84679935

How much of a timeframe is there between events? She's going to be there for three weeks after all.

>>84681278
Hmm... where is Dora sleeping at during this time?

Does she still have a cell on the lower floors to go back to or did they relocate her to one of the ward cells?

I guess the meeting with Suzie should be the same day she starts working there.

Then maybe Von Drake probes her brain once every three days?

>>84681500

They more than likely moved her into the ward for observational purposes.

>>84681543
Makes sense.

So is Suzie only allowed to visit the ward when going to take her pills? I feel the Warden would play a hand in letting Suzie have more range in the ward than she should since he sees potential in her becoming interesting the longer she stays around Dora.

>>84681860

I'd always imagined Belle Reve having the sort of open system that Green Dolphin Street had seeing as most everyone in there is at least a low-level Stand user. The staff's job is more to mainly prevent escapes, avoid deaths and document possible PI candidates.

>>84682344
OK, so most prisoners just avoid the ward on their own because crazy people work there who are contagious with their madness.

That's exactly the kind of thing Suzie is into though.

>>84679935

>Day 2 of her stay in Psych Ward
>Dora's been assigned receptionist duties for the day since they need someone to keep track of the prescriptions going in and out and any new intakes
>The morning goes by like molasses as most of the inmates either don't require psychotropics with names too long to pronounce or just feel creeped out by the Psych Ward in general
>Despite her boredom, every now and then Dora will catch Sticks taking peeks at her from around corners before rushing out of sight, taking careful attention of what appears to be a solar system model floating above her head
>[Internally]Madre de Dios, she's been at this all day. Still, I can't shake the feeling that she recognizes me somehow...

>"Dora?"
>Hearing the voice, Dora looks up from the desk to see none other than her cellmate before her
>"They told me you had been moved to solitary. By that point, I had already assumed you'd be in a body bag. The loneliness had returned once more, my old friend."
>"Wait, they send people to Solitary to kill them?"
>"Perhaps but I am not sure. All I know is zat in all of my months within this crypt of the living, you're the literal first to come back out."
>"Eghhh, the less I think about that place the better. But yeah, a friend I didn't know I had got me commuted over here. Apart from the doctors and their methods, it's not that bad here."
>"Seeing as you're residing in this den of the mind, has your Stand managed to make itzelf known?"
>"As far as I can tell, no."
>"Hmm. Usually, it does not take zis long for a Stand to manifest. I wonder if your Stand power is simply to see ze Stands of others."
>"...And Stands can have crazy powers like stopping time and rewriting people's minds, right?"
>"Oui."
>"Oh, mierda."

>>84684264
Alright, so what kind of drugs do they put Suzie on?

Anti-depressants?

>>84685005

Anti-depressants and probably a lot of supplement cocktails.

>>84685386
Probably also something to prevent suicidal thoughts.

So before Dora's next treatment, I think Suzie should be the one who "makes peace" between Dora and Psycho/Muzzle. Suzie would probably find them both adorable and with her ability to turn their cells into walls of flesh, that'd give them an outlet to focus on for a few moments.
Suzie should also be aware of the danger Von Drake poses to her person and also warn Dora not to talk about stands around him.

>>84685592

All right, that'll be for tomorrow. Keep the thread alive until then.

>>84678710
and what seems like a pocket sand submachine gun, and a toaster.

>>84685701
OK.

I think we might want to get the flashbacks on the bus ride to the prison sorted before coming up with the flashbacks during Dora's next treatment session.

Breaking Von Drake

-Step 1: Turn his office into walls of flesh that yell at him and also try to engage in conversation with him
-Step 2: Enter the office while this is happening and ask who he is talking to, deny any knowledge of what just transpired
-Step 3: ??? Something to do with Pericles stand I assume.
-Step 4: Von Drake manifests his stand to defend himself, Dora manifests her stand to defend herself from Von Drake
-Step 5: Dora uses her red footprint power to keep Von Drake walking and then running in circles for a while, probably while in Pericles' cell so he can mock him
-Step 6: Inflict damage upon his stand so the damage will appear on Von Drake, he now has no logical explanation of how these injuries are appearing on his person and must conclude he has become a danger to himself

Or something along those lines. It should take several days, and they can probably use Wall-E to sabotage the mind image machine to keep Dora from becoming a drooling idiot.

It's open to change, but I figure it's a start.

>>84673289
>>84673394

Well Hank's japanese brother made the concept of Propane as a catalyst for robots and robot boies.

I believe Will may have added somethings here and there to help.

The point is, that it was a natural progression of tech.

First just a robot that could interface with a human mind.

Then Dale's robo body that was functional during part 3.

Then Gadget's combat ready body in part 4.

Then Dale's new combat ready and enhanced body in part 6.

>>84675576
>>84678789

Let's write her in to be a BroJo then.

When can we see her soonest? How does she feel being a sentient machine being made to interface with prisoners and keep them... sane? In PI?

Idk what her role is. A monitor AI for PI? A result similar to Wall-E from the experiments?

Are we going to make Giffany and Wall-E end up sharing a body that alternates between two forms depending on who "is in charge" which changes how each one of them fights?

Eventually they get a hologram projector of sorts and Gifany has her own "body", but Wall-E has to lug the small projector around and place it before she can even fight

>>84687466
The soonest we can get to her is PI.

And PI is uncharted right now.

I have some ideas for the early parts of PI, but nothing past that.

>The Warden is so giddy over the map he snatched from Dora he dumps her group somewhere in PI that isn't a killing floor
>First person they meet is Joy who seems friendly, but is constantly trying to get them killed
>Group learns this, Joy gets pushed into a death trap or something and dies suddenly and violently in front of the group
>Something something something involving the communicator Inch High had
>Joy is back, shocking Dora's group, who then learn from her that people can't die in this place, they just "respawn" elsewhere when they die. Joy also admits she gets a kick out of watching people die for the first time and that "respawning" is more painful than death.

I haven't put much thought into PI past that one sequence of events.

>>84687358
And then there is Gameboy, after that I'm not sure if we have anymore Strickland tech in the story.
I'm really liking all this worldbuilding.

>>84687466
Check the bottom part of the doc for the early draft, I think it has Giffany's role in it. Speaking of which, we should start reviewing that part and see what can be used.

>>84687792
Gameboy was custom made for teh prison.

But the earlier robots Strickland produced, and well. Their last "Pure" line. Were the Mechanismos.

That's why at the end, Bobby can take control of the Mechanismos but not the Gameboys.

>>84688083
I thought there was only one Gameboy, and the Mechanismos were actually old Propane Nightmares outfitted like judges

>>84688083
I think there's only one Gameboy, and it's the Warden's personal favorite murder machine.

We'll really need to give it more focus during the excevation.

If Giffany is still in this part, she could hijack Gameboy since Bobby can't override code it.

>>84687792
We have some repetition down on the lower part of the doc.

Guess I should remove from that area what's already listed up above it.

Hmm... well, this is somewhat relevant.
Looks like JoJo is coming to Toonami this October.

>>84688565
Yeah, should we put the Stands from that part for (re)reviewing?

>>84689819
We have at least two sections at the bottom of doc 6 dedicated to re-review and old stuff.

And I was finding much of the same content in both of them, so someone didn't look through all the old stuff before re-pasting it into a section of the doc further up.

[Digital Love]'s functionality feels similar to [Pure Imagination]'s.

I don't know why Mordecai, Rigby, and Mirage were added to part 6's doc since none of them currently even have a role.

In fact, M&R would be the hardest characters to place in any of this.

>>84692041
I noticed that too, reviewed Stands should be placed in the Stand doc unless they have a set role in a part (And I should probably update the thing).
I'm starting to sound like a broken record, but M&R were suggested as joke assassins in part 8.

>>84692169
The other big thing I know will cause some discussion is Deathclock's role in this part.

I figure they're part of the meat grinding process in PI. Somehow the Warden has them preforming a concert there forever and it causes endless death to all within range.
I can't think of any way for any of them to actually be brojos given the way part 6 is shaping up so far.

Right now I'm just going to think of them as a stage/environmental hazard in PI. They could even be located outside of Superjail, but still inside PI.

>>84692349
Dethklok's role in the original draft was one of the gangs in the prison, with Toki joining the group with a support Stand but like the rest of the original plot, that part was not elaborated

>>84692701
Yes, and I'm currently spitballing about what we can actually do with them since they were one of the inexplicably popular ideas of the part.

This is about what we can still salvage/reincorporate into the current part 6 since [Pure Imagination] is currently a void for the most part.
We know PI is bullshit nonsense wackyland, but we need bullshit events to plot out and then fill in the story.

We know there's a side story happening outside of PI and outside of the actual jail of Penny VS Frizzle, that's also something we need to figure out, but the only thing anons seem to be interested in is whatever happens inside of PI.
So, ideas, let's have 'em.

We have the Joy thing, the murder concert happening outside, some AI doing fuck all somewhere for some reason.

What makes shit relevant to getting the fuck out of PI? Joy is there to help explain how it works.
What are Death Clock and Giffany there for from a story telling perspective?

>>84692857
There is also Vicky and Gaz, who swapped their roles of guard/inmate, respectively. I don't remember well Giffany's role in the old story, she was related to the evidence locker if i'm not wrong.
I threw some suggestions for the Interpol arc in the previous thread.

>>84688224
If i'm not wrong, Gameboy is taken down by RoboDale with a kamikaze attack

>>84695435
Doesn't that destroy them both though?

>>84687329

What was Pericles' Stand again?

>>84698186
[Master Of Puppets] I believe it w a was a stand that used magnetic fields to form a body in the shape of a Kreigstaffen Robot around itself and Pericles.

>>84695435
That seems pointless, seeing that Gameboy was supposed to be taken down by Giffany in the original script.

>>84695435
I'm pretty sure that was changed so that RoboDale takes down the central watch tower in a bid to take out the Warden, but Penny is able to repair him (his head survived and there are ample robots around) using her stand's ability saying this kind of thing doesn't need to happen twice, referring to how her uncle died.

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What if The Power from that episode of regular show was an independent Stand?
「FLY ME TO THE MOON」could send anyone to the moon if it was played and they heard it or something.

>>84698727
>[Master of Puppets]
>looks like a floating set of 14 lights in a roughly humanoid shape around Pericles
>these light can generate a magnetic field to form a body out of metal.

>>84702907
That's the one.

>>84702943
So how can we use it in the breaking of Von Drake?

>>84700904
id prefer this

>>84687329
And also incorporate Psycho and Muzzle into the plan since otherwise they'll feel like wasted characters.

>>84702205
President Nobody sends the racers to the moon.

>>84711006
>Part of the race takes place in the moon
wasn't there a Wacky Races clone in space?

>>84712506
There might've even been a wacky races throughout time via time travel.

It's something that can be applied to just about anything.

>>84712506
>>84711006

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y0SwlMohRng

>>84713135
Knowing Scrooge, he is probably still alive during part 7 and sponsoring a racer.

>>84715327
It was suggested that in the /co/rge universe he died and left his vast inheritance to Shaggy, Scooby, and his teenage grandnephews who would try and kill them, Huey, Dewey, and Louie.

>>84715327
Yes.

Scrooge, Varrick, ACME, Strickland, and some others are all sponsors in the race.

>>84715526
Yeah, but in the main universe Scrooge's fate after part 4 was never revealed, and in his own comics He drank from the Fountain of Youth once.

So what kind of things should the flashbacks on the bus ride to the jail be comprised of?

>>84719002
Let's see, if they start right after what happened in the epilogue of part 5, in no particular order:
-Dora joining the smuggling ring
-Her first incursion in one of the vaults
-Interacting with whoever ended backstabbing her (if we are still using that)
That's what I can think of right now.

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should we use quasimodo for the 7th and 8th parts?
his stand should be "Out There"

>>84719295
Just have a part of the race go through Notre Dame.

Him or Frollo could be corpse part guardians.

>>84671687

"IT IS A SIGN OF [LOSS]!"

>>84715526

/co/rge universe isn't canon.

>>84719249
So save the mother issues for after she's already in the jail?

So had some thoughts for the escalation of the Psych Ward:

-Day 2: Suzie's meeting with Dora
-Day 4: First round of Von Drake's tests
-Day 8: Group therapy day, first real meeting between Dora and Sticks, explaining the drawings and the parallel universes
-Day 11: Second round of tests, Suzie begins working with Muzzle and Psycho
-Day 14: The group begin their planning for the deconstruction of Von Drake
-Day 18: The break
-Day 20: The abyss has stared back into the doctor, Dora is released back into general population and Bobby helms the ward

I just need a good place to introduce [Boots'] first full manifest and where the evidence locker section can start being built.

>>84721131
Yeah, they are shown more prominently during Von Drake's exams

>>84719604

Could make for a neat Holy Grail moment where the party has to figure out which of them truly holds the holy part.

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Daily Reminder: [ADAGIO FOR STRINGS] exists.

>>84721315
We could move up breaking Von Drake and have the last few days of Dora being assigned to the ward dedicated to planning and retrieving the map, a.k.a. [GLORY ROAD].

The proper time for [Boots] to manifest should be when Von Drake is either about to break Dora using his machine and she discovers the blue footprints, destroying the thing, or when Von Drake manifests his [Schizophrenia] and she has to defend herself.

I'd prefer the former since then we can have Dora making Von Drake walk around in circles and he has no idea why he's doing it.

>>84724867

I'll save it for the third machine reading then, after Suzie and Sticks get a chance to see how much it's draining Dora.

>>84725926
When should Pericles show Dora the drawing of what is to become of her if things go on like this?

Another ting to consider is the amount of time it will take for Dora to regain her strength, so I think the breaking of Von Drake should be moved forward to day 16, assuming Dora has a "treatment" with the machine every 4 days.

Day 1 - Covered, first meetings and treatment
Day 4 - Second treatment, afterwards Pericles shows Dora the drawing
Day 8 - Third treatment, Dora destroys the machine with [Boots] after a lengthy flash back of her mother? Von Drake has no idea what happened, but begins to suspect something is not right with Dora after all based on the machine's final readings (he should read them much later)
Day 12 - Von Drake has repaired the machine and is determined to put Dora in it again, Operation Break Von Drake goes into effect, Dora does not receive another treatment.

>>84726229
Yep, showing her the drawings after the second treatment sounds like a good moment, it's the same moment when Sticks intervene?

So does Suzie just invite herself to group therapy?

>>84728352
I'd say so.

Sticks has looked into the future and saw that she's screwed if Von Drake breaks Dora since she'd be next.
So that's motivation enough to take a gamble that this isn't the timeline where Dora will go crazy with power and kill everyone around her as soon as her stand manifests since she'd be dead either way.

So who is at this group therapy thing?

Is Satan there? The Satan from whatever he was from who appeared in Wreck-it-Ralph?

So in the interest of bumping, we're going with something like this then?

>>84721315
>>84726229
Day 1 - Covered, first meetings and treatment
Day 2 - Suzie's meeting with Dora
Day 4 - Second treatment, afterwards Pericles shows Dora the drawing
Day 5 (could be also day 4) - Group therapy day, first real meeting between Dora and Sticks, explaining the drawings and the parallel universes
Day 6 (could be 5 or 4) - Suzie begins working with Muzzle and Psycho
Day 8 - Third treatment, Dora destroys the machine with [Boots] after a lengthy flash back of her mother? Von Drake has no idea what happened, but begins to suspect something is not right with Dora after all based on the machine's final readings (he should read them much later)
Day 12 - Von Drake has repaired the machine and is determined to put Dora in it again, Operation Break Von Drake goes into effect, Dora does not receive another treatment.
Day 14 - The group has been chipping away, deconstructing Von Drake for the past few days
Day 16? - The break. The abyss has stared back into the doctor.
Day 17 - Plans are made to get Dora's stuff back and acted upon
Day 20 - Dora is released back into general population and Bobby helms the ward

>>84730409
-Dora
-Suzie
-Sticks
-Psycho
-Muzzle
I dunno who else. And speaking of Wreck-it Ralph, Ralph was suggested as an inmate, he wrecked the WTC

>>84732010

The ward needs a nurse type character and maybe 1 more intake. I was thinking the City Wok owner from South Park.

>>84715327
Maybe Goldie could show up as his representative.
Obviously, she's trying to use her position to swing things to benefit herself.

>>84738152
Hello Nurse/Nurse Doom?
We had a Stand for her, so maybe she can show up later as one of the PI staff members who's convinced to turn on the warden.

>>84738285
>Nurse Doom?
For some reason I got the mental image of Doctor Doom in a nurses outfit and full armor out of that...halp.

>>84738285

So she's either too innocent or just jaded enough to not see the harm Von Drake is doing?

>>84738421
I was thinking that she just wouldn't particularly care, for which Nurse Doom would be a better fit.
She just turns against the Warden because the plan to imprison the world is worse than anything she signed up for.

>>84738421
I thought the ward and the infirmary would be in different locations, separated from each other.

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>>84738285
>>84738421
>>84738817

So which Nurse will be used then? Hello Nurse and Nurse Doom are different characters, but the first one was the character originally suggested with the Stand whereas N. Doom's villainous nature would fit better with Superjail's chaotic and malicious environment.

>>84740364
I think originally we were using Dr. Hutchison from Rocko's Modern Life with the stand [SISTER MORPHINE].

I don't know why Rocko is on the doc when he has no suggested role in this part.

>>84740701

He was put up as a janitor all the way back when we were still working on Part 4.

>>84741705
But he never had a defined role in part 6, not even in the old half-formed plot it had before.

Oh, and there's still the whole camera contact lenses thing happening.

So what does Dora take footage of while in the ward?

>>84742115

I'd say the overall use of Stand users as guinea pigs for the ward's experiments. It's not enough to implicate the warden but it starts building the case.

>>84720462
fuck /co/rge

>>84715666
Punished Baxter Stockman (TMNT 2003)

>>84722636
Trust Quasimodo's advice and go for the humblest cup? Or take Frollo's word for it that the best cup is the holiest?

Fuck. Is our Frollo going to be Frollo Show Frollo? Best Buds with Gaston, and constantly at odds with Hades?