/co/co/'s Bizarre Adventure: Gameboy Edition

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Do your stuff, anons. I believe in you.

What is currently going on in Part 6? Maybe I can help.

>>84397463
Did we finished the psych ward section?

>>84397565
We're still plotting that out.

So far I think the psych ward goes something like:
>Dora meets with Bobby, has a chat about how he got her out of solitary and wants to help her with her aggression problems
>Gets sent to Von Drake in the ward who sets up the tests?
>Dora meets the padded cell inmates, notices many of them have stands
>Von Drake believes stands are a mental illness and is trying to treat these hallucinations
>Membrane is also in the ward doing maintenance on RoboDale, meet Wall-E here?
>While Dora is being tested and assessed, she gets chores to do (meet Pericles here?)
>Suzie comes in to get her meds (I assume she has meds for depression), goes through several emotions about seeing Dora alive again, explains most who are sent to solitary don't come back alive
>That bit about Suzie speculating that Dora's stand power is just the power to see stands can probably go here after Dora reveals she still hasn't manifested one
>Suzie gets roped into helping Dora gain access to a computer (possibly a device Penny gave her to create a backdoor?), needs to create a distraction while Von Drake is hooking Dora up to some big laser cat scan Frankenstein bed thing
>Dora gets the flashbacks of whatever happened to her before she started messing with jawbreaker trafficking here until someone does something to kill the machine
>???
>Dora manifests [Boots] finally, tricks Von Drake into talking with it in-depth about something before he realizes it's a stand and locks himself in a padded room
>Pericles gets freed from his cage, Pericles gets shot out of the sky by Dredd and vanishes (into PI he went), Dora thinks he's dead
>???
Still being worked on, so subject to much revision/addition.

Then we're in the excavation bit.

>>84398351

I think Sticks also shows up here, or she will show up in PI?

>>84398440
Depends on how dangerous she is.

The really dangerous ones get sent to PI sooner rather than later.

But like I said, psych ward is still very much a work in progress and that's just whatever I gathered that we discussed about it.

>>84398495
Sticks doesn't seem dangerous enough to be in PI, just off. She's probably just a way to establish that Ludwig's treatments don't actually work that great and a way to foreshadow later events thanks to her seeing bad futures or what have you.

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>>84396930
>>84396988
Does anyone have a good ideia to make the restaurant have /co/co/ related stuff? Here's what I have for now.

>>84397004
>>84397111
Could you guys be more specific? I didn't really like the heads resembling the characters desu.

>>84398884
Another thing to bring up is Ludwig has to have a stand to be able to see stands.

We can bullshit that RoboDale can see them because of electromagnetic waves or some other science-y sounding stock words, but Ludwig von Drake will need to have one.
It could be the get him to commit himself by forcing him to summon it, then damage it with another stand.

He comes to the conclusion that he is inflecting self-harm to himself before these stands cannot possibly be real.

>>84399065
It's a bit difficult since we're limited to part 1 for references on the restaurant.

Or do you mean just /co/ stuff in general?

>>84398884
>Von Drake takes a break from his current patient and shows Membrane some of the drawings made by Sticks during her therapy
>One of them is seven crude figures arranged in four panels

>>84399065
I think they referred to that episode where Jean Bon was making busts of his patrons with meat (and Courage believed Jean turned the patrons into ground beaf)

>>84399121
He has a Stand suggestion in the previous thread and, just like the rest of the Stands, he believes is a delusion

>>84399195
/co/ stuff that couldn't get in is priority in my opinion.

>>84399219
>One of them is seven crude figures arranged in four panels
Damn, that would be amazing.

>>84399438
It should be made up of badly drawn Sonic Boom characters.
>Orbot
>Orbot and Comedy Chimp
>Orbot and Dave
>Orbot and a lying-down Cubot
>>84398351
I thought we were going with "Suzie gets assigned to work on the psych ward because the Warden thinks Dora makes her more interesting", but having her show up initially to get meds makes sense.
We still need more patients, really. I was thinking that the Tart Toter from Adventure Time might work, but since we're already using Me-Mow as a fairly prominent antagonist, that might be overdoing it.

>>84400173
I think Me-Mow is so far the only Adventure Time character we're using in this.

PB was original slated for part 6, but that's since been scrapped with most of part 6's first take.

Maybe Ace Ventura can be in one of the padded rooms. He gets zapped hard enough when the place is falling apart in the endgame that it makes him sane enough to re-enter society in whatever later part I think he's in.

>>84400268
Good point. I'm just wary about it because it's got a borderline-NEVER EVER-type fanbase.

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>>84399230
Maybe show an add for colonisation of Old Country or something? Like, "Learn and live the history of the Old Country!"

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I think the watch tower in PI should have giant tube-like robot arms coming out of it, giant yellow eyes at the top of it that the Warden can see through, and a giant purple top hat to complete the look.
It should look like someone out of the credits of Superjail.

>>84400499
What about that one weasel from Who Framed Roger Rabbit? who was always in a straitjacket?

Or that one dog from Road Rovers who was always in a straitjacket?

Or Yogi Bear? (OK, I know this is from the came episode of Mystery Inc that Pericles was introduced in, but it could work)

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>>84400659
>that one weasel
Dude's name was Psycho, he'd be perfect for a mental ward.

>>84398351
Maybe Membrane, despite being a genius, doesn't realize that Robo-Dale is actually a cyborg and he requested help from Von Drake because the robot guard has been suffering of constant delusions of humanity since he was transfered to the prison.

>>84402101
Feels like a rather terrible oversight to make on Membrane's part since he'd made cyborgs before.

Penny knows who Dale is, I figure when she finds his exploded body and begins frantically repairing him, Membrane can be there and ask why only to get it shoved in his face that Dale was a real human being. That'd be enough of a shock to Membrane to cause him to take a step back and look at what he's been doing at the jail up until then (immediately before he was making robots who could consume stand jawbreakers for the Warden to leach STAR energy out of) and switch sides.

Does RoboDale still smoke?

Does Alamo beer help fuel his pillar propane power cells?

Should Wong catch on that Dale is powered by pillar propane or should we not make any connection there?
If we're going to reveal that Wong is a pillarman, that might be the best opportunity to do it.

>>84400268
I wasn't aware that Ace Ventura was gonna appear in a later part

>>84400499
Well, they still haven't done any shitty move worthy of the banhammer yet

>>84400659
Damn, if that Yogi doesn't appear in the prison, he should be a Scopeman in part 8, with mask and all.

>>84403458
Well Ace Ventura kept getting talked about with his stand which is The Mask.

What was it called? Cuban Pete?

I have no idea what part he was supposed to show up in, but I know he was supposed to show up somewhere.

There was this thing about The Mask not being the one from part 1, instead it was one Nobody grabbed from another AU.

>>84399065
why not make it look like the SF diner place? We have crowd in back as if this was a street fight.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LvxPI3Qqe70

>>84402262
I'd imagine that Penny still manages to keep his brain intact. As it was properly protected.

>>84403426
Yes he smokes. But doesnt feel anything from it. It's habit.

It puts it into overdrive.

We make the connection. Wong recognizes the smell. Dale says the smell's only there for safety reasons.Wong gets surprised that someone else is clued into this secret. Dale says he learned from the best.

>>84403510
Ace Ventura is a protector to the Mask like Shirley was. In his AU, he is Shirley's veterinarian and picked up the protector job when Shirley's insurance ran out and he found out how much cash she actually had. He decided protecting and selling ancient treasures made more money, so he switched to being protector of the mask/Pet Detective.

>>84403510
I don't remember that.
Pretty sure that the part 7 Mask was meant to be the original; that's why we seeded it with it appearing, partially repaired, in part 5. There was one guy who thought it was an AU Mask, but I thought we were going with it being the original.

>>84398884

>Doc, I keep telling you: I'M. NOT CRAZY!
>Sure, you aren't. And next you'll tell me perfectly sane people ascend bell towers and try to assassinate presidential candidates.
>Guhh... Ok, that LOOKS bad but trust me, the other Stickses have told me that that guy and his weird clipart head need to be stopped!
>And these other..."Stickses" as you called them, where are they exactly?
>In the other universes! We've been over this, you quack!
>Temper, young lady.
>[sighs] All right, look. You see that weird planetarium thing floating above me?
>I told you, I'm not going to enable your mania.
>Regardless, that lets me and the other mes talk and share whatever!
>And these "other universes" of yours. You seem so convinced that they sync up with the reality you refuse to grab hold of, no?
>It depends on how deep I look really. Some are either a few minutes ahead or behind and a few have these weird...I don't know, themes you could call 'em?
>...Such as?
>Well, there's this one universe that's nothing but black people.
>,,,I see. [under his breath] Note to self: latent racist.
>What?
>Nothing.

>>84403677
>Wong gets surprised that someone else is clued into this secret. Dale says he learned from the best.
10/10.

>>84403458
With the direction that they seem to be taking (Fred Flintstone, Dinosaur Dan, Captain Caveman, Slag Brothers) I'd more or less say that the Scopemen should have a caveman theme now, considering that's all we have set for them.

>>84403826
>Well, there's this one universe that's nothing but black people.
>,,,I see. [under his breath] Note to self: latent racist.
Fuck, my sides hurt.

>>84403677
She builds him a new, much more dangerous body out of all the busted robots all over the place.

When would Wong and Dale meet? During the escape attempt after Dan is dead?

>>84403807
I don't think it should be the one from part 1, not after the ending we had in part 5.

Unless the corpse part somehow repaired the mask in the sunken Looniversity.

>>84403826
Nice.

OK, Psych Ward inmates:

-Sticks (Sonic Boom)
-Professor Pericles (Mystery Inc.)
-Psycho (Who Framed Roger Rabbit?)
-Muzzle (Road Rovers)
-Yogi Bear (maybe)

Who else is getting the Von Drake treatment?

>>84404443

I'd say Yogi if we're going for the Hannibal Lecter look he had in Mystery Inc.

>>84404908
We already have Pericles though.

>>84405225

True but Yogi gives us a chance for someone who went postal.

>>84405960
He should be done differently than Pericles though. Something like this maybe?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=efFAxaD_z8s

>>84404319
>I don't think it should be the one from part 1, not after the ending we had in part 5.
I feel that if it's the same mask from part 1, all the shit Courage and co. went through would be meaningless if the damn thing will just regenerate everytime. And there is also the fact that at this point the Looniversity is still a sarlacc pit with the Hey Kids! Monster in the bottom, so I don't know how Nobody could retrieve the mask.

>>84406417
Yeah, if Ventura shows up anywhere in this with his yellow suited The Mask stand, it should be not the same as the one from part 1.

>>84405225
What role are our loonies playing?

Sticks at least has her prophet thing going, and Pericles has a role (still not a well defined role since we're working on it), but what do the other crazies do?

>>84406579
Pericles probably helps Dora against Von Drake. In the other threads there was the idea that the Stands of some of the patients went berserk thanks to Von Drake's therapies.

>>84406660
Alright, so we can have Psycho and Muzzle play that part rather easily. Do we need any others with unhinged stands?

>>84407042
I don't know, I don't want to fill the psych ward to the brim with Stand users

>>84407833
So should we keep it to just those four then? I'm fine with that.

Everyone else in the ward is just normal crazy since the ward is in normal jail.

>>84408003
Well, people aren't really hyped for more gauntlets/group fights after part 5, and take into acount that Dora isn't able to fully manifest her Stand until Von Drake's fight, so even against one enraged Stand, she is in a disadvantage (unless she team up with Pericles earlier)

>>84408205
Who said anything about fighting them?

Sticks is there for foreshadowing and being crazy.
Muzzle and Psycho are there for showing that on Drake's treatments should be avoided at all costs.
Pericles is there so there's a way to fuck up Von Drake's shit without anyone being the wiser to Dora's part in the breaking of his mind.

Dora doesn't actually fight any of the ward characters, she just teams up with some of them to ruse Von Drake into putting himself in a padded cell.

>>84408398
I agree with this. Maybe have Psycho or Muzzle show up in PI or in the riot at the end, but the Psych Ward should be pretty low key. Pericles should obviously show up later so Dora can piece together what the Warden's real plan is.

>>84408865
I don't think they'll be in PI until maybe near the end when the Warden starts sucking in all the sources of STAR energy he can find to sustain PI's expansion.

Psycho and Muzzle's role in the ward are just to hammer home that point that Dora shouldn't talk about stands with Von Drake.

Pericles probably has them both freed to create a diversion so Dora doesn't get fucked up by Von Drake's treatment.
While that's happening, Sticks begins to act on one of her future visions to do something plot relevant, either to make sure Dora meets Wall-E or to get some kind of code. I'm not too sure what to do with Sticks here since she feels more like someone who could be a brojo than anyone else so far, but she's apparently not supposed to have that role.

>>84409243
Maybe after Von Drake goes nuts and Bobby reclaims the psych ward He keeps documenting Sticks visions and warns Penny and Dora when one of them looks pertinent to their current situation (since they seem to be hard to interpretate), for example: She foresees an army of mechanismos led by Gameboy, or Warden releasing the poison gas inside the prison

>>84400499
We already have Gravity Falls characters, and they're in the same family.

Right now the NEVER EVER seems to be focused around series that got suggested to the point of exhaustion, and the regulars are still a bit put off towards their inclusion.

And of course the Sunday Funnies, which are excluded for obvious reasons.

>>84404025
The new leader is the Harvey Toons guy though.

Cavemen should be the old guard. Yogi Bear and similar Hannah Barbera characters, plus Felix the Cat, maybe the Minnie the Moocher dancing ghost thing, Gertie the Dinosaur, and that sailor from the first ever animation should all be Scope Men.

We NEED that sailor guy.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dU7a8a7ZKoE

>>84410335
>first anime ever

Maybe not. But the others might be ok.

>>84409243
Why not make her a BroJo?

I like her as a character but hate Sonic generally.

>>84410372
We have Knuckles and Tail as brojos already. Do we really need another one?

>>84410403
holy shit that's true.

Ok then. Side character it is.

>>84409928
More like being shoved without rhyme or reason, that and cancerous fanbases, so we don't have to deal with all the drama they bring.

>>84410335
Speaking of the Jack in the box, here's his Stand: https://desuarchive.org/co/thread/82003257/#q82022867

>>84409928
Why are they excluded again?

Can we not use Heathcliff?

>>84412456
Out of respect to Fist of the Borf Star

>>84406417
That's... a fair point, actually.
I don't think Ventura should have a Mask-based Stand, though, that just feels unnecessary.

>>84413759
I think the idea was that the Wizard (or an alt-universe character) dons the Mask and his Stand turned into Cuban Pete to Mirror alt-Diego and The World.

>>84413802
Yeah. Having Ventura with a Mask stand on top of that feels redundant, though I'm not opposed to him having a connection to the Mask in general.
On that note:

User: Wizard Daffy
Stand: [THE WIZARD] (Act 1)
>Appearance: Wizard Daffy's staff.
>Ability: [BEHOLD THE WIZARD]: The Stand can manipulate probability to cause events that aid him, such as causing traffic lights to remain red for his opponents longer than they do for him. These are always minor enough to be dismissed as coincidences.
>Power: D
>Speed: D
>Range: B
>Durability: D
>Precision: A
>Potential: A

Stand: [THE WIZARD] (Act 2)
>Appearance: A crystal humanoid wearing an outfit resembling LeTerally's, but in the colors and style of Wizard Daffy's robes.
>Ability: [BEWARE HIS POWER]: The Stand can transform unliving (and living, but non-sapient) material to resemble the fantasy world of his imagination; landscape and buildings will become fantasy landscape, while cars, animals and other "mobile" objects will become monsters under the Wizard's control. The effect will spread out steadily from the Wizard's position up to the maximum range of his Stand, and will revert when he moves away.
>Power: A
>Speed: B
>Range: C
>Durability: B
>Precision: A
>Potential: D

>>84410403

Eh, to be fair, Knux was four acts ago and Tails is still technically up in the air.

>>84414271
>and Tails is still technically up in the air.
Har.

>>84414271
That's still a lot of a property that originated as /v/. Plus Knuckles showed up again in Starduck Crusaders.

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[CASTAWAY]

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>>84414459

Sticks is a little of a weird case though. We first found out about her in the context of the cartoon, was only an NPC in the Wii U title, and barebones in the 3DS game. And yet Sega pushes her. But I digress. The meat of her lies in the Boom cartoon and I think that should stand to reason.

>>84414520
That cat is cute.

>>84406417
Maybe it doesn't regenerate naturally normally, and was only repaired through the WB's experiments, which are also why it has the ability to manifest [CUBAN PETE]?
After part 7, it's destroyed for good.

>>84403826
Do we make a reference to the universe where part 6 was filled entirely with waifus?

>>84409793
That's a good idea.

Maybe Sticks will trust Bobby since he's like a universal good wherein none of his alternates selves ever do anything heinous.

So Bobby is able to communicate with Dora through the same device Penny gave her to give her warnings?

>>84415495
>he's like a universal good wherein none of his alternates selves ever do anything heinous
I guess you could say that boy IS right.

>>84409793

So we'd be using her as Paisley Park essentially?

>>84416083
I think that will be damn useful to Dora's group when they have to navigate PI.

>>84412041
nice

>>84414271
>>84414520

Am fag who suggested Tails for Part 8 in the first place.

I really am considering the idea of dropping Tails if Sticks can hop aboard. She fills the lack of Brojos, and has an interesting Stand.

On the other hand. Not a lot of good battles are available to her, and having her would just make us more open to insults from other places. Also Im not sure who replaces Tails on Part 8, but Im sure we'll come up with something.

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Aw shit, here comes Pac-Man!

>User: Pac-Man
>Stand: [BLOODHOUND GANG]
>Appearance: the four pixel Pac-Man ghosts
>Ability: [I'M HIGH ON CRACK]: If someone makes contact with [BLOODHOUND GANG], they will immediately experience an intense high in which they hallucinate a black, neon-edged maze akin to the one from Pac-Man surrounding them, along with pounding electronic music. The maze is filled with floating pills, which victims of [BLOODHOUND GANG] will be driven to consume; doing so will extend the "trip".
>Pac-Man can control the walls of the "maze", voluntarily invoke "bad trips" on victims, causing them to suffer anxiety, paranoia, or dissociation. Additionally, the longer victims remain under the Stand's effects, the higher their heart rate will get; this can eventually cause their hearts to give out. (Though Pac-Man experiences the effects of his own Stand, his heart is not affected.)
Role: Stand user in [Pure Imagination], determined to make as many people as possible feel the effects of his Stand like he does.

>>84416544
Sticks works as a minor ally for the Penny's crew. We're going to struggle to find useful things for Penny and Giffany to do in fights as it is; no need to add another one with a "useless" Stand.

>>84416702

>snap future reading
>useless

Did you forget how broken Epitaph made King Crimson?

>>84416817
But that's not her power. She's got a vague future sense, yes, but there's a huge degree of variance because she's looking at alternate universes, and she needs to focus to actually be able to make sense of what she's picking up.
It wouldn't be snap prescience like Epitaph gave at all.

>>84416544
>>84416702
>>84416817
I have an idea.

Sticks doesn't join the brojo squad, but uses Wall-E to convey prophecies to them. That way Sticks is still "there" and we have a reason for Wall-E to be following them around now that the previous reason (Courage's Computer trying to get some help) has become tentative.

>>84417112
Huh.
I like that. That works pretty well.

>>84417160
And after Ludwig Von Drake is in a padded cell, the psych ward becomes much more peaceful with Bobby having to take control there.

The Warden should be brooding about this since he finds the new situation very boring.
The Warden finds Bobby very boring, which is an odd similarity between Bobby and Hank if you think about it.

When Bobby is commanding a propane nightmare and doing shit near the ending, the Warden asks "Where was THIS guy during his whole tenure here?" with a crazy excited smile.

>>84417300
>Just before the final fight, we get a Bobby vs Warden fight
>Warden's controlling a bunch of Superjail monsters and machines, while Bobby has an army of hijacked robots and Propane Nightmares
Maybe Bobby dies but manages to damage the Warden's plans somehow.

>>84416176

That's actually super useful. She could keep them out of the way of the super murderous ones or lead them to future allies.

>>84417354
I was actually thinking Bobby survives and is instrumental to reuniting/clearing the charges on the heroes of part 6.

The final episode of Superjail was called "The Superjail Six". It refers to the only 6 inmates who escaped Superjail during its first year of operation.

It might be neat if Dora and her crew become known as "the Superjail Six" after it's all done and over, but only if we end up with a party of 6.

>>84416544
I'd be ok with scrapping Tails too. I'm sure we can come up with someone else. We're dropping the references to Tails Gets Trolled anyway, aren't we?

>>84418279
I'd rather see Bobby survive too. I like that idea as well.

>>84419427
If we're dropping them anyway, there's literally no value in keeping Tails, so...

So we need to figure out Pericles role in the psych ward.

I think he should be like a rival to Von Drake. Someone he's been trying to analyze for years who has been able to resist him without fail no matter what method he takes. He should also mock/antagonize Von Drake at any chance he gets.

>>84419955
The only noteworthy thing I can think is having a background connection with Chris-chan, but yeah, he isn't irreplaceable.

>>84420500
Yeah, he is tough nut to crack, that's why he is kept in a cell like Magneto

>>84420500
He gets Dora to work against Von Drake mostly for the sake of pissing him off. He doesn't actually expect her to get rid of him.

>>84420542
Wait, does this mean Sticks ends up playing the mastermind role here where she sees a possible future (of Von Drake finally buzzing off) and tries her best to actualize it?

>>84420500

Right, he should be our Lecter, brilliant, deranged, and just a touch silly.

>>84421053
We need a motive then.
What is Pericles' objective?

Is he trying to escape, or is he sticking around for some reason? How much does he know? Has he tried to get Sticks to help him only for her to be able to see through all his plans?

Sticks seems to be playing to role of least hostile entity in this part, but how much interaction does she have with Dora? Does she see futures involving Dora that make her try to avoid her at first?

And another thought.

Sticks' power opens up how Dora gets her map back.

After the psych ward is over, Sticks realizes she's not in a timeline where Dora murders everyone or whatever.
So she helps Dora get her map back by taking control of Wall-E and using her power of foresight to guide the robot through all kinds of contrived security measures to get it into the evidence locker where it grabs Dora's map.

Wall-E is next assigned to go down with the excavation team, giving Dora yet another reason to join that excursion since she'll be able to get her map from Wall-E.

>>84421142
He's trying to escape, but doesn't seriously believe that Dora can help him. Mostly, he's just using her to get back at Von Drake.
He eventually changes his mind and tries to escape, but is caught and Superjailed by Dredd.

>>84414111

I'd like to see Wizard Daffy as a character, is he going to be used for /co/rge /co/star?

>>84420606
>She constantly had visions of Von Drake losing his shit
>He dismissed them as mere childish insults
>After Von Drake finally snaps, Bobby rummages through his notes and discover that the vision became true
>This makes him contact Penny and share the whole archive with her

>>84422428
part 7, Corge has Duck Dodgers as an alt-LeTerally

Is Plankton still going to be a fight in the part? He should go up against Giffany, seeing as they were both support to be FF references

>>84421347
Is Wall-E not autonomous? I thought he was a survivor from the initial "give a robot a stand" experiment, he should have sentience if that's the case.

>>84421142

He wants to escape but by this point Von Drake has been such a pain in his side that Pericles wants to give him some long awaited comeuppance.

>>84423512
>"I had strings but now I'm free, zere are...no strings on me..."

>>84423491
He's not smart enough to pull off getting the map on his own.

With Sticks' premonition guiding him, he could actually do it.
Think Paisley Park guidance.

>>84423512
I think if Pericles appears in the fighting game, his moveset will be based around the body created by [Master of Puppets], either straight up clobbering people with it, shooting them with magnetically manipulated guns or making the body explode into damaging shrapnel before reforming.

>>84423491
>he should have sentience if that's the case.
One thing I would like with Wall-E is something involving him being cute.

>>84423562

Nah, it'd be more of a:

>Well well, mein doctor, quite the puzzling situation you've found yourself in, no? Such is the fate of he who tries to tame the noble savage; he will always find his own savagery among them.
>I...I don't know what you're talking about.
>Heh heh, for a man as accredited as you, it's a shame to see you neglecting your own reality even as it crumbles about you like a child. But you were never one to see the elephant in the room. Or in your case, the dragon upon his mound.

>>84419427
we have dropped a lot of the "quality" angle argument we were going for in Part 8.

So it should go backto being more web-stuff. Preferably dickheads on the internet.

5 assholes team up to save the world from fruit, old cartoons, and video games.

>>84421142
she sees that most universes of Dora have her just be an unrepentant cartel member who kills and tortures without hesitation.

Then she sees Dora can also be a hero and stop Superjail.

>>84423814
>5 assholes team up to save the world from fruit, old cartoons, and video games
and meme magic, don't forget it

>>84423814
It should have more tumblr, webcomics, assholes/numales, comics, the /co/ quality declining crisis and /co/ memes in my opinion.

>>84423753
So what's the plan to get Ludwig Von Drake to snap?

So far, my impression of the psych ward is something like:

>Dora is released from solitary early, goes to see Bobby who wants to help her with her aggression problems and actually maintain that this is a correctional facility, not a meat grinder
>Dora is sent to the psych ward to get an evaluation, there she overhears >>84403826
and meets Psycho and Muzzle, and she notices their stands; this causes them to react in odd ways
>Von Drake hears the commotion and ends his session with Sticks to quell them
>He tells Dora not to engage in their delusions and begins to examine Dora
>Membrane is also in the larger lab doing maintenance on RoboDale and whatever that implies
>as Dora has yet to manifest her stand, she's just barely able to scrape under Von Drake's radar for the makes-you-bats-shit-insane treatment
>He wants to keep monitoring her, so he has her assigned to the ward to replace her current punishment of solitary. This is a boring chore, but better than fighting assholes on a lower floor or sitting alone in a dank room for 3 weeks
>Dora is being supervised by RoboDale as she does her tasks, one of which is service desk duty
>Another of her tasks is cleaning Pericles' room, this is when they first meet and he begins trying to make Dora into an ally of his
>While on desk duty, Suzie comes in to get her meds and is shocked/surprised/overjoyed/angry to see Dora and explains that most people don't come back from solitary
>That conversation between Dora and Suzie about Suzie speculating that Dora's stand power might be just to see other stands goes here
>Possible Sticks interaction here?

Lots of question marks past the point. I don't have a clear path from getting the group together in the psych ward to them rusing Von Drake into madness.

>>84423939
meme magic, a secret power made by a bunch of gamers and outcasts that sounds fucking terrifying and makes the situation escalate, but stops working once questions are asked.

>>84424105
that was the original idea. We dropped it tho. I prefer the Scope Men and Ethan trying to use WB stuff to make himself stronger.

>>84424192
Ok, I just think we should include more /co/ stuff that isn't just from cartoons on part 8.

As a contrast to the other parts, I think we should use more elements from the internet/comic /co/, even if just subtly.

>>84424377
You aren't suggesting Homestuck are you?

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>>84397463
>>84400536
Ok, real talk.
What the fuck is wrong with you?
You are not only avatarfagging, which is against the rules, but you are avatarfagging as a fucking diapered mouse.
Do you realize that?
How did you get to this point?
Do you think you are that fucking mouse?
I am actually in disbelief that someone could be this autistic, even on fucking /co/.

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>>84400536
>>84397463
NIGGER WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU DOING

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>>84402262

Oh yeah, I have a suggestion for a dialogue between Membrane and Robo-Dale, mostly to add some flavor to the psych ward arc:

>As Membrane is the psycho ward to make a regular check-up on Dale, Dale starts his usual rambling about conspiracy theories. Membrane laughs and re-assures Dale that he shouldn't make his program to worry on such "feeble human delusions", otherwise he is going to have another short-circuit (implying that Dale occasionally freaks out due of his paranoia and thus causing problems in his system in general). He also tells Dale that his behavior reminds him of Dib, which causes Dale to say "Really, professor? Do you usually have talks with your son about his own feeble delusions and try to dissuade him just like you do to me?"

>This response results in an awkward silence in the room where they are, with Membrane looking away for a while before he says "Listen Dale... why don't we change of subject?" and resumes to do his check-up on Dale.

>>84424880

Dude, your post made me laugh IRL.

>>84424880
>>84424952
...Has anyone seen my fucks, I can't seem to find them, it's a shame because I was going to give them to this samefag, but ah well.

>>84424957

Fucking brutal. I approve.

>>84424105
Are you the same guy who thought part 6 needed gang fights?

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>>84425040
Are you for real?

>>84425321
Are you contributing anything?

>>84425321
Yes I'm fairly sure I am, you however could be a banana and we would never know.

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>>84425370
I just want the damn Taffy guy to reevaluate his life.
I don't know if you're him, but if so, please stop.
That's all i'll ask of you.
And here, now i've contributed.
Courtesy of a friend.

>>84424105
> assholes/numales
Ethan, CWC, Ronnie and Kim, match that description to a tee (except Kim since, you know, is a girl)

>>84424377
Refresh my memory, we haven't used any webshit in the previous parts, right?

>>84424880
>I am actually in disbelief that someone could be this autistic, even on fucking /co/.
I see you don't browse the other boards lucky you

>>84425615
I don't think we've used web cartoons earlier than 8.

Salad Fingers was discussed as being a corpse part guardian, but that's about it.

>>84424187

Maybe we should have a moment of animosity between Sticks and Dora where it becomes evident that our protag was the reason she had a jawbreaker shoved in her mouth and started the downward spiral for her and a lot of other people's lives.

>>84424957
Would that be what they're discussing right before Von Drake brings Dora into the lab for her preliminary evaluation?

>>84427044
Either before the examination starts or during a break from it.

>>84425764

I thought our guardians were going to all be legacy/iconic characters.

>>84428887

That idea was scrapped off IIRC.

The key to breaking Von Drake is Suzie.
Her ability is perfect for this since you don't need a stand to see what it does.

She turns all the walls to his office into flesh with mouths and eyes and begins whispering to him. Then talking calmly with him, then yelling from mouths from all over the room until he's on his knees covering his eyes with his eyes close, then Dora can come in and ask him what he's doing and when he opens his eyes everything is normal.

Rinse and repeat as many times as needed.

>>84428887
The ones I recall were decided are Bitters in a shadow form, a Bonkle guardian, and the one that uses the statue-like Stand

>>84430002
I didn't think we were still keeping Bitters. It's fine if we are though.

Bionicle with or without DSides, or D-Sides with someone else.

The Teddy Scares and Salad Fingers were discussed/suggested to be guardians.

There was a suggestion for a circus group of guardians.

The Backson and Ma Hatter and March Hare (DC Comics versions though) are listed on the doc. Might want to scrape Jervis and Whatsherface. They don't really seem to fit the part that well.

>>84430086
Oh, and Sabrina the Teenage Witch was also a suggestion, but I'm not really feeling her that well either.

>>84430086
Yes, we're keeping Bitters. She went down with the Looniversity and had some divine connections so she didn't die, instead she became Nightmare Bitters from that Halloween episode of Invader Zim.

>>84430086
I think that whoever uses D-Sides should have an army of mooks from his own canon

>>84430579
If she turned into the Bitters from the Halloween episode, her mortal coil probably reacted with all the nasty shit that the WB left inside R&D

So I've begun compiling all the psych ward stuff on the doc we've been mulling around with and it's actually starting to take form.

Pericles, Muzzle, and Psycho all need stands before it can really click together.

>>84431695
Pericles has a suggestion on the previous thread, and you can always take a peak at the userless Stand list in the doc if you need to give them Stands (I'm gonna check the archive for others that weren't added to the doc)

>>84431695
>>84431760
For the psych ward we just need the appearance of Psycho and Muzzle's stands, I think.

>>84431772
Their appearances should be a little Picasso-like to show how messed up their minds have gotten.

>>84433877
Or the drawings in Thot

>>84433877
Okay. For Psycho, I'm thinking a Picasso'd Judge Doom lookalike. Crazy eyes, a suit, and a hat with an ominous brim. It grins evilly but mostly just watches everyone. Maybe like what the Protomen did with Elec Man.
I don't know a lot about Muzzle, so maybe a messed up dog catcher? Something to symbolize how much Von Drake's treatments have caused him to hate his gift and want it gone.

>>84431772
A concept for Psycho's stand.

>[PSYCHO KILLER]
>The stand resembles a raincoat and a gasmask. When in punchghost form, it moves like a ghost or fish.
>When the stand touches a person, it fuses with them, becoming a sort of "second skin". While it is covering the person, being worn like armor, the user may command them.
>The stand uses stinging pain to manipulate people. If they attempt to resist, the stand will make them feel a sort of burning pain. The stand can use this to get them to move to the user's wishes. It can also make them speak too.
>A passive effect of the stand is that, when bound to someone, it can allow the user to read their mind or the minds of anyone within a certain radius.
>Removing the stand is difficult. The longer it has been on a person, the more painful being removed from them is. A few minutes and it's removed will cause the pain to feel like a band-aid being ripped off. If it has been on for longer than 8 hours, removal will cause a body to just burst into ribbons, killing whoever it was attached too.
>The stand's main offensive ability is it's power to turn [insects] into [weapons]. When a person possessed by the stand touches an insect, it will be transformed into a weapon based on the original insect and what the user desires at the time. For example, a grasshopper can be transformed into a scythe, a mosquito can become a rapier, a fly can be turned into a knife, etc. It cannot turn insects into guns however. Only bladed or blunt objects.
>The stand can be pulled off by another stand, or if the user simply looses interest in the current host.

>>84434214
I don't know if he'll actually get to use all of those abilities in the story.

>>84431772
>>84434214
Also, here's one for Muzzle

>[EAT IT]
>The stand appears covering the user, resembling varicose veins with large bulbs growing on them.
>When the user touches something, the stand will "grow" onto it, forming a sticky trap that prevents it from moving.
>As long as the user is in direct contact with a person, the stand will continue to grow over them and slowly begin to digest and absorb them into the user. However if contact is broken, the stand simply sticks the opponent to the spot and looses it's acidic abilities.
>The stand's slime can be removed by other stand abilities, but certain stands may get tangled up in it too.

>>84434455
Going for the body horror angle, huh?

So how does Ludwig explain away the physical evidence of their powers?

>>84435233
Good question, Von Drake is full of himself and sticks to his narrative that Stands are delusions, so he probably says the patients are unconsciously doing whatever the Stand is supposed to do

>>84436003
Unconsciously assimilating a person into their body/turning bugs into blades/causing someone else to feel a lot of pain?

The bugs into blades one can be explained away that Psycho somehow keeps managing to steal them from somewhere, but the other powers, not so much since they have a direct effect on other people.

>>84435233
Mass hallucination.

>>84435233

He could try to justify it away as cannibalism.

>>84435233
Von Drake considers his and Membrane's Stands to be abilities from their enhanced mental ability; maybe he could try and explain it away as a "quantum effect" or something?

>>84441100
I thought Von Drake wasn't supposed to have a stand.

>>84441617
Where does this keep coming from? He has a Stand. That's how they defeat him; they pressure him to involuntarily reveal it and make him think that he's as mad as his patients.

>>84404908
He could also have some drug issues like in Billy and Mandy

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Quick!

You've just eaten one of Tonio's dishes right at this very moment just now!

What does it cure?

>>84441682
Well either way, this >>84429229 can still work to that purpose.

I'm trying to do less things that could be considered straight up fights in part 6 since they could be being watched at any point in time.

Maybe the Warden watches their "prank" and laughs about it because he enjoys seeing Von Drake break, and also because that creepy girl is finally doing something interesting.

>>84428887
I liked the idea of the original guardians being very iconic /co/ characters (so they can have a place in the story), while the current guardians are from a long line chosen successors. You can't just go by family, you gotta be "worthy".

>>84441736
my crippling depression, anxiety and loneliness. also my leg cramps.

>>84430142
Honestly, for that one I just suggested Sabrina because she was a character ones thinking of suggesting around the same time as I came up with the Stand. So the Stand could be given to someone deemed more appropriate, if need be.

>>84441617

He must have a Stand so he can see the other Stands. This is a major rule in Jojo in general.

>>84441794
Having it be "iconic" characters just doesn't work, though; if we wanted it to be the likes of Bugs and Mickey, they're involved in Daffy and Donald's backstories, so the timelines don't line up. And "retro" characters - who cover a lot of other iconic ones - are already covered by the Scope Men.

>>84443130
Plus, some of the guardians were really out there. Who in their right minds would give a corpse part to fucking Salad Fingers? Maybe at first the pieces were given to legendary capes, but as time went on and the capes disappeared they spread into weirder territory.

>>84443130
Then make it characters who personify different aspects of heroism.

>>84444460
wearing your underwear over your pants counts?

>>84442339
We could have it so he does not have a stand and still use the Suzie idea since her stand's effect causes physical, observable changes to non-living things.

I'm just saying, him having or not having a stand is sort of a moot point, so if we need to cut a stand in this part, we could just not have Von Drake be a stand user.

If someone comes up with a stand for him that actually adds something to the psych ward, then we'll go with that, but if not, it's not a loss for him simply not to have one.

>>84444606
I think there was one in a previous thread

>>84444606
I dunno, I think him being forced to accept that he's a Stand user just like the rest of them would have a bit more impact to it. Maybe the stress of Suzie's Stand transforming everything forces him to manifest it?
There's not really any reason to "cut Stands". Cutting fights for the sake of pacing, yeah, but we don't need to put an arbitrary limit on the number of Stands we're allowed to have.

>>84444444

>>84444881
Well that also works.

She he's been repressing his stand?

>>84445871
Von Drake? yeah, from his point of view, having a Stand is a mental condition, and a mental condition is bad for a psychiatrist's resume

>>84446093
OK, so we have the method for driving him crazy, now we need the build up.

Pericles needs to be involved with it since he has the most against Von Drake. Maybe he gets a hold of some of Sticks' drawings and figures out what chain of events needs to happen to get Von Drake into a padded cell.

>>84448108
>Maybe he gets a hold of some of Sticks' drawings
A former assistant inadvertently used some of the papers in Von Drake's archive to clean the floor of Pericles's cage? Maybe Pericles doesn't connect the drawings to Sticks predictions immediately, and presumes that Von Drake is documenting his own delusions

>>84448869
I think he'd note the drawings and then realize they're are prophetic when things in them start happening.

So maybe he tricks Dora into using more of Sticks' drawings when she has to change out of the papers. Like he uses his stand to hide the usual papers and then calls over to her where she can find more.

>>84448869

Hmm, a better framing for that would be that Von Drake in his obstinacy gathers her writings each day, claiming to read them but then uses them as cage liners since he can't be arsed to believe Sticks.

>>84449662
Wow, we're making Von Drake out to be a total asshole.

So when Dora comes in to change the papers, Pericles already recognizes her from the drawings.

>>84449714

To be fair, he kinda is in some of the shorts.

>>84435233
>>84441100
Well, it was suggested that he knows that the abnormal condition affects Melody, so he considers all the abilities of the Stands to be something like "repressed figures from the unconcious made from Melody". So, he kinda doesn't accept it as anything other than a dangerous corruption of the Mind/Melody.

>>84438350
This is a interesting ideia. Maybe he thinks that this disease is contagious and it affects all who are close to the ill person. While this makes he "explain" why he got ill, it kinda makes it less psychological and more biological, which is not what he thinks.

>>84441682
>>84442339
>>84444606
Yeah, making him interact and see the Stands makes him less misguided than if he didn't even see them. Plus, he can't classify them as a delusion anymore.
Still, [Schizophrenia] was suggested in the other thread and it was also explained how he would treat his Stand like an illness too.

>>84446093
Maybe this makes him desesperate in finding the cure of "Stands", so he tries to use more "psychological methods" on his patients, which always include repressing, trapping or damaging the Stand in some way.

I really think we should introduce him before he gained an Stand and then his downfall when he somehow adquires one.

>>84449662
kek, I like that

>>84449714
>As foretold by the shit-caked scrolls

>>84449739
Maybe we move up when Dora gets her stuff back.

If she gets her backpack back, then she can slip a stand jawbreaker in his coffee or something.

But I'm really not feeling Von Drake having a stand.

>>84449784

>Ah, the foretold kinder arrives! Welcome to our bedlam.
>You were expecting me, búho?
>The badger's ravings give me an ample supply of eyes to things both here and not, sometimes at once. They also make for decent toiletries.

>>84450623
It's funny to me how we're using more languages in part 6 than in any of the others before it.

>>84449739
>I really think we should introduce him before he gained an Stand and then his downfall when he somehow adquires one.
Ooh! He's on the brink of manifesting a Stand naturally thanks to his genius, but is subconsciously repressing it because he thinks they're a symptom of mental disorders.
He keeps getting brief glimpses and flashes of others' Stands; brief enough for him to dismiss, but enough to make him paranoid and fearful about his own mental health.
The stress of being exposed to the undeniable effects of Suzie's Stand causes [SCHIZOPHRENIA] to manifest to "defend" him.
Sound good?

>Dora manages to get Penny/Atom to fuck with the surveillance systems before dealing with Von Drake, so the Warden doesn't see it
>They manage to convince Von Drake to turn himself in
>Dora and Suzie leave Von Drake's office only to be confronted by Robo-Dale, who witnessed everything and now has to be talked down
Does Pericles' "death" come before or after Von Drake?

>>84450893
I can get behind this.

>>84451362
It'd come after since there are some choice words already written that Pericles says to Von Drake after he snaps.

>>84451362
I say after, so he can have more interaction with Dora

>>84450893

That sounds great, like she'd have Slug Bait turn the walls of his office into pulsating muscle until he eventually snaps.

>>84452290
Not to mention mouths on the walls to talk to him with and eyes on the walls to watch him with.

Suzie's stand is also pretty good for spying since she can see and talk out of any eyes or mouths her stand makes.

>>84449662
I'm thinking an expansion of this. He used to read them, but as he noticed more and more predictions coming true his stand started to manifest more, so he stopped reading and tossed them into Pericles' cage as soon as he got his hands on them. Pericles noticed how eager Von Drake was to get rid of them, read them, and began to plan accordingly.

>>84453496
He also started to dismiss them since more and more of them depicted Von Drake in a padded cell?

So why is Sticks drawing her predictions when they're not actually predictions, but based on conversations she's had with other timeline/universe versions of herself?

>>84453737
as part of her therapy, I think

>>84453737

As part of her therapy to help lessen the amount of stimuli constantly pumping into her head via her Stand by focusing on one single source and drawing it out. It's basically teaching her to sift through the chaos.

>>84454001
>>84453937
Something that effective was probably suggested by Bobby and not Von Drake.

>>84454341
and that's why he tosses the papers into Pericles cage once he is done with the chore

>>84454884
Damn, Von Drake is just a total petty jackass.

So he's got these big ass machines in his lab that he straps Dora to and starts blasting this laser thing in her face that forces her to relive old memories? How is this beneficial to treating anyone in the ward? It isn't! He just thinks that forcing people to remember their worst shit might "cure" them of having stands.

>>84454975
You can argue that in the end the patients are unable to summon their Stands. Granted, they are also unable to do anything else after screwing enough with their brains.

>>84455876
Anyway, so how are we doing Dora discovering [Boots]? Does she finally manifest the punchghost while strapped into the machine?

>>84456811
She manifesting her Stand is the last thing that makes Von Drake snap, so probably after going through a stream of forced flashbacks

>>84456915
So who comes up with the plan to stop Von Drake?

After the first "treatment" does Pericles show Dora what she'll become if things continue like this? (a drooling idiot Dora on a piece of paper)
Is that what sets the plan in motion?

>>84457045
Sounds good, Pericles warns Dora that if her therapy continues, Von Drake will end lobotomizing her (or some sci-fi equivalent)

>>84441736
my eyes explode and i get new ones.

>>84457378
How does Sticks avoid the "treatment"? Is that also Bobby's doing?

>>84457736
Perhaps, unlike the other Stands in the ward, hers isn't capable of doing any harm

>>84457797
So she's considered "non-violent" despite an attempted assassination plot on Candidate Nobody?

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>>84457916
Maybe even her assassination attempt was less "sniper" more "crazy person with a brick smashes through the ceiling and gets offered a job which she refuses".

So should the first "treatment" for Dora be her preliminary examination? A scene that takes place right after >>84424957 when Von Drake and Dora enter the lab?

>>84459454
I feel that the first treatment should be something tame to give a false sense of security, then comes the mind probing

>>84456811
Maybe she gets close to it multiple times, but it finally appears for real when the two of them have to fight a paranoia-wreaked Dale?
Or during the Ludwig fight; either's good, as long as it happens before the excavation of Dinosaur Dan.
>>84457378
>Pericles shows her multiple drawings, pointing out how they pertain to her situation and what they mean for her future, and then >>84400173
>"...Well, I have no idea what this one is about. Regardless."

>>84458306

How many drugs was Morrison on when he wrote that run?

>>84443387
What if a "legendary capes" group split the corpse up and hid the parts, rather than arranging "guardians" for them, and they just attracted guardians (and thieves) due to Stand magnetism over time?
Also, each of the capes should come from a different team with a Superman expy on, as part of the "yes, he's Superman, he's obviously Superman, but he's representative of EVERY paragon flying brick Cape". Batman, Doctor Spectrum, Winged Victory, Jenny Sparks, Mary Marvel...

>>84463119
The Samaritan, The Guy from Unredeemable, Captain Hero

>>84465598
No, the point is for the CORPSE to potentially be those guys, and for their teammates to be the ones that hid it. Samaritan's covered by Winged Victory, Captain Hero didn't have any teammates, and Plutonian... I guess this could be an AU where he potentially didn't go nuts? Sure.
That said, another member of the original guardians should be Val Hallen.

>>84462354
I think the "loss" drawing should be something Von Drake shows to Membrane as justification to not caring about her drawings and why he lets them get used as toiletries.

>>84466181
>"But Ludwig, how can you be sure that she's crazy, and doesn't have enhanced mental abilities like mine?"
>"Bah. Her "prophesies" and "visions" are meaningless nonsense." He holds up the Loss drawing. "I mean, what is this supposed to be? Ridiculous."
>"I suppose you're right..."

>>84466635
Yes, like that.

How aware is Sticks of how much of an ass Von Drake is?

>>84466990
He doesn't particularly try to hide it, but she's used to everyone being an asshole to her given how crazy she comes off.

>>84463119
I'd rather see Bruce Wayne briefly name dropped as one of the sponsers for the race, so it can be shown that Nobody keeps tabs on important figures who are also Stand users.
On a list of users under government surveillance, it shows Bruce Wayne and his Stand, 「MARTHA MY DEAR」

>>84467205
Kekked.
Other sponsors that we should definitely use: Garrison Blackrock and Baxter Stockman.

>>84467271
>Baxter Stockman.
How much of him is Baxter Stockman, and how much would be cybernetics? Are we talking Post-Insane in the Membrane levels of degredation here?

>>84467161
Does Sticks even try to improve her situation, or does she intentionally let things play out since she sees that her situation will improve if she does so?

>>84462927
I have no idea.

Though I do think Dr. Henry Killinger should be part of President Nobody's cabinet now.
His stand would be [A Spoonful of Sugar] and it would take visual cues from his magic murder bag.

>>84467359
I'd rather it never be directly stated that Killinger has a Stand, but rather that he just seems to be able to do miraculous things, which Nobobdy assumes is a Stand and names his "Spoonful of Sugar".
Though Killinger never confirms or denies it.

>>84467271
>Baxter Stockman.
[Insane In The Membrane]?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_w9tCBL86nQ

>>84467317
I just realized that we have a fair share of cyborgs in the story

>>84467359
It depends, her visions aren't like Thot which are 100% accurate, she may see an alternate reality too disconnected from the real one

>>84467317
I was mostly thinking IDW Baxter because I haven't actually watched or read any other Turtles apart from a bit of 2003 when I was a kid
So under that interpretation, he'd have a Flyborg as a Stand.

>>84467431
Well, I'll tuck that idea away for now since we're nowhere near it being relevant yet.

>>84467524
I'm trying to determine how involved Sticks will be in the ward arc.
Her drawings play a prominent role, but there should come a point where she finally steps in and points out which drawings they should discard since the events that would've lead to that outcome have already passed.

It should be something like a character moment for her where she's finally joining the current alliance against Von Drake.

>>84467642
Maybe she decides to join the group after receiving a vision where Von Drake finally gets bored of her and decides to scramble her brain, then on the following days, things begin to indicate that this future will come to pass unless she act.

>>84465990
I have an idea: The Stand of someone that holds a Corpse part takes on the appearance of one of Superman's expy, i.e. Hyperion's belt, Omni-man's moustache, etc.

>>84467783
OK, now we just need to organize the ward arc and piece it all together.

We still need to do that for solitary as well.

>>84467317
the design if he show it should be based on best 2003 series.

But yeah. To avoid degradation and those questions just make him have one missing limb.

>>84467359
I like the Killinger idea.

>>84469679
>just make him have one missing limb.
Hmm, Punished Stockman, I like it.

>>84469679
Okay, but make Garrison Blackrock the IDW version, just so we can make jokes about how they're both black, cybernetic science-businessmen.

>>84469797
then one missing limb, and an eyepatch.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RrkzIN2eP0U

>>84470165
>unlike Strickland's tech, Stockman's cybernetics are powered by a micro-fusion reactor
>At one point in the story, He goes nuclear

>>84469797
>>84470165
We also have Punished Fred for part 8.

>>84471510
In the epilogue, he uses his vast resources to get everyone who feels trampled under the heel of the world. Everyone who voted for Nobody, seeking solace in his honeyed words of madness and Korean Puppet Shows.

Stockman formed his own nation. People no longer get trampled, now THEY are the Foot.

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>>84469679
Then, no afro cyborg?

>>84471596
So much punishment, so little time

>>84472315
>People no longer get trampled, now THEY are the Foot.
And now for something completely different.

>>84472333
Frank for Part 7 racer. He wants to kill the president.

Not for any rational reason though. He just wants to lve life on the edge.

Age?: 36.... CALIBER
Home Address?: ON THE EDGE
What day is today?: PUNISHMENT DAY

He has a crank-like stand. He has to do ever more extreme/edgy shit to stay alive, and in return he gets more and more retarded luck.

Basically action movie syndrome. If he shoots a spray can or gas tank, it explodes and propels him as transportation. Eventuall even a soda can can do this.

If he aims his gun in the general direction of "the bad guys" it will be dangerously precise fire. It can still miss if it builds tension though.

This chapter is basically the protags defending Mr.Nobody from this batshit insane man for some reason or another, all the while Mr.Nobody makes the increasinly retarded odds and narrative of the Stand work to his favor. Stating that it'd be boring if he died while off panel, which makes a shot that the Punisher actually aimed point-blank at his head fucking miss.

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>>84472315
I was thinking "going nuclear" as in kaboom, but dammit, Baxter becoming the president of Manhattan Land sounds great

>>84472527
>which makes a shot that the Punisher actually aimed point-blank at his head fucking miss
It also helps that his head looks like a hook
>He doesn't need a jetpack

>>84467783

>There's a universe where Von Drake decided the kindest thing he could do was lobotomize her and call it a wash

Jesus.

>>84473884
That also means there's a universe where that universe's Sticks let it happen.

>>84473884
>Main universe Von Drake is supposed to be like Strange
>There is an alt-Von Drake that went full Mengele on his patients
Holy shit

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Name: Tank Girl
Vehicle: 「TANK! TANK! TANK!」
Stand: 「BACK OFF BOOGALOO」
>Appearance: Punchghost looking like an anthropomorphic kangaroo
>Ability: Can create a field of energy around itself, Tank Girl, her tank, or anything else in its range; this field acts as a rubbery, elastic layer of armor. It's night-indestructible and protects whatever it surrounds, but can cause what it surrounds to be extra vulnerable to knockback from enemy attacks and kickback from its own.
>Power: B
>Speed: B
>Range: B
>Durability: A
>Precision: E
>Potential: D
Role: Racer in part 7

>>84474485

We're going to have some fun writing in those drawings aren't we?

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>>84474485
What about a universe where he went full Lecter?

>>84474897
It adds to Sticks trusting no one until she starts getting visions of what's in store for her.

I can imagine a scene where Dora and Pericles are plotting only to be interrupted by Sticks who picks up the current drawings they're looking at and tells them these are out dated now, then hands them the new batch saying the situation has changed.
So now she's taking a gamble that this isn't a timeline where Dora's stand would kill them all when it manifests and starts helping them.

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>>84475001
>Dora's Stand manifests
>Sticks: "Oh, god, that's a relief. Usually if you're going to go on a murder rampage it looks like this."
>She holds up a picture of [THESE BOOTS], if it was a gorilla and covered in spikes, bandoliers and guns
>Pic semirelated

>>84475172
Monsieur Malla is also a good shot for that.

>>84475238

I don't know, I just can't take Mallah seriously anymore after how he went out in Doom Patrol.

>>84472527
>>84473542
That wouldn't be Frank, that'd be Jake.

>>84475172
I still feel like we're missing something important in the ward arc, or maybe it's just so jumbled I can't tell where we are with it.

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>>84475262

You needed to remind me of this.

>>84476552
The small Interpol agent we are using is Atomic Ant, right? that isn't clarified in the doc

>>84477092
"Guevara Grodd and Niggatron were so gay that they exploded. The end."

>>84477221
>>84477092

Gay Monkey saves Robot Brain's life using chewing gum and repressed libido.

>>84476552
Actually, now that I've done some organizing on the doc, there's a pretty clear path from the start of the ward to when Von Drake loses his shit.

After that it gets a bit dicey since then they need to use a combination of Sticks and Suzie's stands with Wall-E to get Dora's map out of the evidence locker.

Sticks to guide Wall-E, Suzie to be able to see where Wall-E is going and also relay to him what to do next since she can communicate through the effect of her stand (i.e. not the punch ghost part). Should Wall-E be introduced before or after they break Von Drake?

There's also how Pericles gets out of his cell.

>>84477221
Yes, I'm fairly sure we're using Atom Ant.

I don't think we decided his stand yet, or where he is during the ward arc, but I'll assume he's elsewhere during that time. Either he left with Penny or he's staying below the jail to keep out of the Warden's sight.

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>>84477262

I think Wall-E should be introduced in the scene where Membrane is checking Robo-Dale. He is there to help Membrane in whatever he needs.

A couple of suggestions for his first encounter with Dora and cia. should be like:

a) Dora enters in the room where Membrane, Wall-E and Robo-Dale by mistake while she was trying to find Pericles' cell. She apologizes and asks where Pericles can be found, Membrane tells her directions and she goes in her way, whereas Wall-E gets an interest for Dora and goes to follow her. She wouldn't notice his presence until someone else like Pericles, Sticks or Suzie points out something like that "Hey, isn't that Professor Membrane's robot assistant? What he is doing?"

This last bit would result in some comedic scene where Wall-E is spotted by the characters and tries to hide them at all costs, only to fail hilariously. (Kinda like pic related)

b)Their meeting happens when Von Drake finally snaps and as Von Drake is seen dragged by guards and laughing like a maniac, Membrane, Wall-E and Bobby watch him in shock. In this moment, Dora, Suzie and Sticks pass by and Wall-E takes a notice on them and starts following them.

In whatever scenario should be chosen, the final outcome would be Wall-E being spotted, trying to hide but fails and the girls approach him trying to understand what he was doing. This could be also the part where Sticks implants her memories on him to guide Dora.

>>84477725

I'd say scenario A works best.

>>84477725
I don't get the Sticks implanting memories thing.

Also, option A seems more viable, but there's still tweaking that needs to be done to the current notes on the doc or to that scenario since Dora is guided by Von Drake to the lab where Membrane is working on RoboDale since it's the same lab where the preliminary examination on Dora is conducted.

After that's done, Von Drake sens out Dora with the papers to change Pericles cell and RoboDale is sent to be her supervisor, then we get into the Von Drake and Membrane discussions about Sticks' drawings.

And if Wall-E is going to be following Dora around, the red footprints should be involved.

>>84478621

>I don't get the Sticks implanting memories thing.

I think I mixed the idea of Sticks using her powers in Wall-E so he can guide Dora when I was writing that. My bad.

So, after the psych ward we go directly to the excavation team?

>>84479922
After the psych ward we need to do a mini thing about getting Wall-E to get Dora's map, then we need to arrange for her and whoever to be on the excavation team and whatever leads up to that (Wong calling Dora over to his table to tell her what he expects and making her a deal, "bring me Dan and I'll let you escape with me" etc.), then we'll finally be at that part.

So I figure Gameboy will be their supervisor and they'll either be wearing bomb collars or something worse set to kill them if they stray too far away from Gameboy for too long.

>>84480111
>So I figure Gameboy will be their supervisor
Yeah, we are building him to be this soulless mechanical sonuvabitch that commands the mechanismos during the climax to crush the uprising.
This is kinda off topic but, it's me or are we sinking pretty fast in the catalog?

>>84480533
It's because we're not actively making progress right now for whatever reason. I think anons were interested in part 6, but they don't know what in part 6 they're interested in and cant's seem to find whatever thing there was in part 6 that had them wanting to work on this.

I keep trying to organize what we have currently, but there's just a lot of stuff that isn't there and no one has put any thought into things that are necessary to move forward.

The psych ward is actually almost totally done, but feels like we haven't even started on it because no one is reading the doc and sees the order all the misc pieces have been put in.

>>84480802
probably need to start off each thread with a to do list like back in part 4

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What if Jackie Chan had a stand?

Would it be a ladder? Or is he his own Stand?

>>84481442
Oh, right. The main topic in the Op hasn't been updated since part 6 started

>>84481501
He'd be one of the last great masters of an odd school of Melody.

>>84481442
>>84481522
I'd like to at least get this solitary business sorted this thread.

So here's what we need to do to make that happen:

-Atom Ant, what's his stand? Does he appear to Dora before her meeting with Penny, after the meeting, or both before and after the meeting? He needs to appear to her after the meeting to give her the communication device
-What's going on with the communication device? How is is concealed?
-Bobby's office, what's in it? What does his conversation with Dora entail? What's Dora's impression of Bobby?

>>84481567
Now that you mention it, if Jack (Skellington) was the master of horror Melody, who was the Master of comedy Melody?

>>84481673
his Stand suggestion was in the previous thread

>>84481716
>who was the master of the comedy melody

That's easy. The Joker of course.

>>84481716
Well it's being a bitch to find using ctrl+f.

I know it was called [Adam Ant], but I'm just not seeing anything about what it does.

>>84481754
Nah. Probably Homer Simpson, if anyone. Him or Goofy/Goofy's ancestor that looks like the generic dog person they used for a while.

>>84481894
I found it >>84335204

>>84481921
it was an entire Tribe of Melody.

They honed it by doing sports and living everyday life to the fullest. Doing so gave them unsurmountable power.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5a1z26twsoY


>>84480802
Sorry for not participating as much as before. But had a death in the family. Will post as soon as shit settles down.

>>84482285
This "Atomic Ant" thing is another mild example of Taffy/Fantasy Island since he's Atom Ant.

OK, so...

>Atom Ant
>Stand: [Adam Ant]

>Ability: Allows the user to interfere with how electrical devices operate. Useful for slipping past surveillance devices such as cameras, motion sensors, thermal readers, and anything else that operates using electricity. Has an extreme range, but little offensive ability.

I'd say it has good developmental potential since to make it useful you need to think creatively.

So Atom Ant sneaks into the prison on Penny's person when she visits. He can slip undetected anywhere he wants as long as he stays out of someone's actual line of sight. I assume there are cameras and audio recording devices in solitary, so this explains how he's able to talk to Dora without getting caught.

>>84482671
Alright. And what's his deal? What makes this ant tick?

Does he take his job seriously?

Does he prefer Metallica or AC/DC?

>>84482657
Don't feel bad for not being here when you have important real life stuff to do.

>>84482746
I think he styles himself as a super spy. He'd like to be charismatic and charming if he ever found himself in a situation where that would actually work. A situation he has yet to ever find himself in since he's very good as going undetected given his small size and ability.

I'm still not sure how the Warden should discover him.

I'm favoring Atom Ant appearing to Dora both before and after her meeting with Penny.

But it might be better if he only meets with her after the meeting.

During the meeting Penny uses [Technologic] to break the bugs in the phones and talk to Dora face-to-face with promises of getting her out of this prison if she cooperates and what have you. Everything is fixed and in place when security comes in to see what happened since the surveillance went down for a moment and Dora is taken back to solitary shortly thereafter.

In solitary Atom Ant appears and asks if she's going to accept this mission, accepting it gets her released from solitary the next morning and also this communication device we keep talking about.

Just what IS this device and how does it go undetected on Dora's person?

>>84483830
Well, if Atom Ant was carrying the device, it must be a very small thing, so probably she can hide it inside her mouth

Are you faggots STILL beating this horse? It was dead on arrival.

>>84485624
Hello /a/ or cripplechan /a/, how have you been?

>>84483830
>Just what IS this device and how does it go undetected on Dora's person?
Microphone that gets implanted under her skin?

>>84486696

I'd say an implant in a cavity could work better,

>>84487044
How would she use a cavity implant, though? I don't think she'd be happy having Interpol able to hear what she was saying 24/7.

>>84487129

It'd take a very specific pressure applied to a very small switch either by her tongue, a very specific bite or partial manifest of her Stand.

>>84487296
Ultimately, it comes down to whether we want a graphic shot of the Warden ripping her tooth out or a graphic shot of the Warden ripping a microphone out of her arm.

>>84487431
>"Let's see you contact your friends at interpol without THIS!"
>graphic shot of the Warden ripping her tooth out
>"Aaaahh! Pedazo de mierda! What did you do that for!?"
>"Awwww, I thought it was a tooth transmitter, ah well."

>>84487431

Tooth seems better for all of the sheer blood that'll be running out of her mouth for dramatic effect

>>84487527
>>84487661
I vote for an implant in her arm, and the Warden assuming it's in her tooth and ripping it out.

>>84488124

Yeah, let's go with that. I'd imagine the Warden binge watching spy movies the moment Interpol starts getting involved.

>>84486696
>>84487044
You are forgetting that she gets the device from Atom Ant in her less than sanitary solitary cell.

Atom can't implant anything in her, he's too small to be able to apply enough pressure for that.

>>84487527
And we have it in the cliff notes that Dora is still able to communicate with Penny even after the Warden has sucked Dora's group into PI.

>>84488957

That's why I brought up the molar cavity idea; the hole's already there so no surgery.

>>84479922

After the map retrieval, yeah. Are we still having Giffany in the evidence locker or saving her for later?

>>84489354
How does Atom Ant do dental work then? He's small and would have very small tools if any.

There are just too many problems with the "how does Atom Ant preform surgery when he has no tools and is in a disease ridden room" for the implant option to really work.

>>84490316
I think Giffany is set for PI.

>>84490368

his Stand could have an absurdly high precision stat to make up for its negligible power.

>>84490463
I thought its crazy range is what made up for its lack of power.

What does [Adam Ant] even look like? Then we can figure out what the best method of Dora getting this talkie device is.

>>84488957
>Atom can't implant anything in her, he's too small to be able to apply enough pressure for that.
I was thinking she'd basically just stab the device into herself and push it under her skin.
This is kind of a weird plot point to get hung up on. You can say it's unrealistic, but... this is JoJos.

>>84490556

I was thinking of basing it off of a flying ant with a number of delicate spindly legs for technical use.

>>84490754
It's because it's something that continues to be important throughout.

She's in a prison, there are contraband searches and other detection methods. It'd need to be made out of something that isn't metal to get past all that shit and also something small enough to go unnoticed.

If she stabs it into her self, what's she using to stab with? A rusty bed spring?

There's just problems with the whole implanting idea. We could change it so that she has to report her findings to Atom Ant and she gets his communication device from his body after the Warden kills him.

I assume he kills him in PI.

>>84492371
How people hide stuff in a prison anyway? Don't say Keister Stash

>>84492371
>If she stabs it into her self, what's she using to stab with? A rusty bed spring?
Have it be shaped like a needle.
Or just have her hide whatever it is in her shoe. Or maybe it can be a watch with invisibility tech built in. I don't know.

>>84492647
I'm just not for the implant idea. It's just not working.

Let's have Atom Ant by the guy to relay info to.

>>84493556
So, what, Atom hides on her person, and contacts Penny for her?

>>84481716
Popeye.

>>84494147
He hides somewhere nearby, but not on Dora's person.

I don't want him involved with the ward stuff since that would require some re-writes and I'm just not up to that.
Though he could play a role in breaking Von Drake by manipulating any cameras he tries to use to record the flesh walls, so when he tries to show his proof that he's not crazy it comes up as either static or everything's normal.

>>84494493
this

People, how did none of you think of Inch High Private Eye?

>>84496030
Because I've never heard of him.

And whoever Dora's Interpol mini-contact is should contact her instead of her trying to contact them.

So when does Dora discover the blue footprints?

When does she finally notice the red footprints and starts taking advantage of them?

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Seeing as the thread's wound down a bit, I'll just prop up the reworked idea for Rocko.

>Stand Master: Rocko Wallaby
>Stand: 「DOWN UNDER」
>Appearance: A roughly 2 foot long psuedo-mechanical echidna bearing oversized claws. It also "wears" the surface it is summoned from like a hooded robe
>Ability: 「DOWN UNDER」 is a Stand with the ability to alter the the 「molecular stability」 of whatever it passes through. On the first pass, the affected object or person will have their mass become 「malleable」, despite keeping normal range of movement. When the affected area comes into contact with another object, it will sink into their mass while still retaining its own molecular structure, akin to a gelatin mold. Any speed/gravity that was acting upon the object when it entered will still be in effect but be dampened until it eventually drops out but anything that tries to enter with enough speed to reach the other side of the object naturally will puncture as it normally would.

>If the Stand passes through the same target a second time however, their 「stability」 is restored but if any foreign objects are still present, their mass will essentially telefrag what was supposed to originally occupy that space.

Power: C
Range: C
Durability: B
Precision: B
Speed: B
Developmental Potential: C

>>84497635
Hmm. The next fight should be Blue.

Maybe a scuffle in the lower levels of the Panopticon gets her the red.

>>84497635
I think during the descent into Dinosaur Dan's pit, the explosive footprints are likely to appear in her first proper Stand fight

>>84497890
She's already been leaving red footprints without noticing them.

>>84497914
While in the underground, it'd be easy for Dora to take out Wong's gang by leaving red footprints that lead them away from Gameboy and then force them to stay far enough away from Gameboy until their bomb collars activate.

Another useful thing would be to leave red footprints, then kick a wall to leave a blue footprint on it that detonates right as anyone following the red ones passes it.

Another thing she could do with the red footprints it get a lock of people following her, then kick someone, leaving a red footprint on them, forcing everyone following her to also kick that person.

>>84494493
accurate, but a little boring if compared to the other suggestions

>>84496030

He appeared in an episode of Harvey Birdman, right? He is one of those Hanna-Barbera characters that completely fell into obscurity.

>>84497914

What fights do we have slated for the excavation site again?

>>84498700
Would it make any difference using Inch High or Atom Ant?

As long as the character is tiny, then the character works for this role.

>>84499441
Because Inch High is actually a detective, and thus more appropriate working for Interpol.

>>84499414

Frozen Caveman was suggested as a sentinel who attacks anyone who would try to free Dan.

>>84499521
To be honest, I like him more than Atom. The stand could just be renamed [ANGRY INCH] And it'd still fit.

If we're still doing the idea too, it would make a lot more sense for Dredd to start disagreeing with Warden after he kills an actual man rather than an insect. Warden mocks him by calling him a bug. Or alternatively he thinks he's an actual bug.

Could also be a call forward to his final confrontation with Dora when she calls him a "lowly worm".

>>84499643
We can't have too many Scopemen in the part. Even if the Caveman is the Sheriff, he might be better off in 8. Especially if we're making most of the Scopemen Neanderthals in addition to old cartoons.

>>84499716

Wasn't he originally suggested as an assassin in Part 5 though? I thought he was unused because there was nowhere to fit him in that part exactly.

>>84499716

Do we have any actual prison guards down there or should someone on the excavation team go mental?

>>84499414
I think it'd be better to just have a general "getting down to the bottom" part, followed by Dan getting out and having to be pursued back up to the prison.

>>84499949
Someone going crazy is a good bet. Is Psycho still active at that point? His stand does turn people into serial killers.

The Caveman would only be referenced as the guy who caught Dan. He probably isn't still around unless he shows up in 8. It'd make more sense there since he's both old and a meme.

I could see a guard dinosaur protecting Dan's cell. Preferably a reanimated dino skeleton.

>>84499521
He seems a bit similar to Gadget, if only that he has a niece who tags along with him.

>>84499716
Caveman doesn't need to be a scopeman. The only scopeman in the part is Dan.

>>84499949
Gameboy is the leader of the prisoner's group going down there.
The prisoners are there for labor in digging I presume. They are wearing kill collars.

There's probably an archeologist or construction person leading the excavation.

>>84500106
No, Psycho is confined to the psych ward for being dangerously unstable.

Prisoners going under the jail would include Dora, Suzie, Dai Lung, and some others in Wong's gang.
Dai is supposed to finger trap Suzie to someone for some reason or something.

>>84500106

>Preferably a reanimated dino skeleton.

A guard with a Stand that can control skeletons or bones would be interesting too. At first it would look like a reanimated dino skeleton is attacking the heroes, but after the heroes destroy it in a struggling fight the skeleton rebuilds itself and resumes attacking them, and they realize a Stand user is behind the assault.

>>84500519
You know, whatever is guarding Dan should be an independent stand since those don't need rest or sustenance and Dan has been down there a very long time.

>>84499643
The jaguar statue from Road to El Dorado was also suggested as an automated defense system in the pillarmen levels

>>84500519

There was that idea for Lucy from Kung Fu Dino Posse that didn't make into Part 5. Something about life echoes.

>>84500652

Kind of like Cheap Trick?

What if the ability of the Stand is to exclusively possess bones and make them act on its will? And when the bones are destroyed or broken it just has the repair them and the only way to make it stop from controlling bones is to separate them from the Stand's range until is unable to control anything?

>>84500968
What's the stand bonded to? The caveman's skull?