The Second Seconds Thread:The Sloppy Seconds Storytime Edition

>>83957826
Thanks OP.
Art is fine, most secondary characters are ok/cute but the MC is an unsufferable cunt.

thanks for posting OP, enjoying it so far

>What do you think of the story, art and characters, so far

Art is comfy

Katie isn't completely awful, I can respect her as a MC, but she done goofed way too much.

Hazel a qt. A QT!

This has all been so amazing. I started reading this out of nowhere! Seriously, OP, I can't thank you enough for posting this. It's been just what I needed.

Lis needs more porn

>>83959323
Seconded.

>>83958865
Yeah, thank you so much OP. We really appreciate you doing this. I've always wanted to read this but never got a chance to.

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>>83957847
Hey, glad you guys enjoyed it!
Tbh, I am in the same boat. I only today got to read the book so I saw the thread, got reminded of having the book on my laptop and went "Fuck it!" and here we are.
Thanks for reading so far! Two chapters left so, bare with me, if this gets slow, tho. Is getting late here.

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>>83959705

So what ethnicity is Hazel supposed to be?

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>>83959738

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>>83959765
She is definitely of CUTE origins.

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>>83959831

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>>83959844
Grim Fandango?

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>>83957826
OP from the last thread here. Thanks for tge great work!

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>>83959907

>>83959897
AAAWWWW SHIT.
This part is so silly.

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>>83959961
>>83959959
Agreed. Thanks, original OP, for making the first thread and finally making me read this book!

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>>83960200
She killed the black guy!

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>>83960323
I want to go to a restaurant where the waiters dress like skeletons and there's a skeleton band and there's axes and shit on the walls.

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>>83960430
oh oh

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>>83960464
>>83960432
If you have a toilet themed restaurant in Japan, I am sure you can find one with skeletons and axes.

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>>83960874

bumping the thread
you da man OP

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>>83960894
Beautiful page~

End of Ch.6, guys. Last chapter.
I'll brb and I think I'll be able to post the rest of the book in time.

Meanwhile, how is everyone?

>>83960964
managing to get by
i want to throttle katie because of the blantant time fuckery with the shrooms to stay with her twotiming shoulda stayed her ex-boyfriend aand how manipulative she is with the minor characters to make her perfect world.
i became confused with all the do over stuff, but the art and the outcome of her actions kept me rooted for more

>>83960964

crawling out of a dump, life's been kinda rough. I can't complain too much, it'sn othing particularly serious, but some days I think I might develop anxiety.

Also, y'know. Thinking about her. So that's fun.

Either way, that second spirit had been trapped in the damn fireplace for god knows how long, now I wonder if it became an eldritch abomination BECAUSE of its imprisonment or if it was trapped because of what it was

>>83959883
AHHHHHHHHHH
S P O O K Y

>>83959592
I love you anon, thanks for this

>>83960379
Ha that monster hunter reference

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>>83960964
>>83961206
Sorry to hear that, anon. We all have our off days. You just hang in there!

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>>83961280
You're very welcome, anon!

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>>83961834

We boss fight now

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>>83961974
Nega Katie!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EDr_krEQNrU

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>>83962101

>>83962086
>>83962101

That is one cute dark spirit

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>>83962086
>>83962101
Nightmare Katie a QT

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>>83962361
>>83962380
>mfw I just now realized Lis made it so Hazel and Katie were still friends because Hazel was nice to her

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>>83962487
Holy kek I made such an embarrassing laughing noise.

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>>83962464
>>83962487
Wow, you're right!

>everyone gets a sappy happy ending yeah.
i enjoyed it

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>>83962515

>>83962541
yo am i crazy or is katie dressed like crono

IS SHE DRESSED LIKE CRONO BECAUSE OF ALL THE TIME TRAVEL

>>83962515
>she still ended with max
i gues she never learns or either she really really loves him

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>>83962576

....

FUCK

Very nice. It wasn't anything groundbreaking, but it was very comfy. I enjoyed it, thanks OP

>>83962576
Well considering this is by the guy who made Scott Pilgrim, would a video game reference like that be much of a suprise?

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>>83962613
man there was nothing wrong with max in relation to katie

max is just a normal guy with his own problems he just wants to be real but he can't let himself be real

and katie fed into that because she was never really real with him not once or ever

and in the end she was finally real with him and max is like shit i'm tired of not being real either let's be real together

it's all about being real man

>>83962682
i felt like he didn´t have a real personality but i guess that´s the point since he was faking all the time, i still don´t like him much

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>>83962667

Thanks for the storytime.

This was a good fucking story. Just all around solid.

I might actually buy it if I see it on a shelf.

You know, we never DID find out exactly what was the first problem with Katie eating the mushrooms. It was set up as breaking a household rule, but then the main problem became the witch.

I'm assuming it had something to do with the dimension-hopping but that still doesn't answer it all

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>>83962783
And, that was Seconds!

>>83962812
thanks anon, i loved it, personally i liked it more than scott pilgrim, mostly because it has many elements of the last half of SP wich really surprised me back when i read it

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>>83962812
And to thank you guys for reading and sticking around with me while I storytimed this, here's a quick and cute Hazel before bed drawn by me.
Thank you and good night!

>>83962863
>OP can also draw
You're just everything, aren't you

>>83962863
super cute anon, sleep thight. this was a fun ride and hazel is best girl

>>83962783
>She never saw a house spirit ever again
That could mean two thibgs
Either Nega-Katie/Dark Spirit Katie is good at hide and seek and being unseen by Katie
Or Katie doesn't own Lucky's

>>83962941
or maybe nega katie is at peace now

>>83962941
Or you're not supposed to mess with a house spirit in the first place. Be respectful and keep your distance and all that.

Lis only revealed herself to Katie in the first place because she fucked up so bad with those shrooms.

>>83962863
thanks for the ride anon, live well and sleep easily

>>83962982

Well, no, it was because Katie saved Hazel which was the only person that was cool to the spirits

Kind of a reward gone wrong

>>83962960
You know, this just made me realize something
O'Malley really likes Negative-X

>>83962863
OP from last tgread. Great work, and great art!

>>83962812

thanks m8

>>83962802
I think the implication is that Lis actually uses the mushrooms all the time to make the house "how she likes it"

When Katie uses them however the hell she wants, there's nothing WRONG with it per se, as in there are no cosmic repercussions or anything, but it fucks with your life in ways you won't expect because "be careful what you wish for". The "rules" are probably just Lis' way of looking out for Katie.

Also, at some point you start to go against the house spirit's desire for how the house should be; I imagine if Katie had kept going, even without the witch, Lis would have made her life hell until she quit using them

>>83959620
>>83959663
c u t e

>>83960379
Hey look, Ramona.

>>83961730
>this is your fault!
Classic.

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>>83962812
That was amazing. Yay! Thanks OP!!

>>83962812
Great effort in doing all this. Thank you!

>>83962863
Thanks for storytiming, anon. Good read.

>>83957826
Thanks OP. Wanted to re-iterate, /co/ doesn't hate Seconds. I am not sure it hates Scott Pilgrim either, other than hating hipster comics.... because they are popular... which is an irony of hating indie things because they are popular with hipsters, while ourselves feeling justified in having taste by not hating it because it is, as stated, popular.

Personally I like his book Seconds more. I should reread that again.

>>83960323
>Stephen Stills and Joseph in the back
>Stacey Pilgrim in the front drooling over the menu
There's a shitton of cameos if you know where to look. It's not just limited to Scott Pilgrim too, but indie comic artists and the likes too. Dude with bun/shaved sides is the drawing assistant for this book. Somewhere in the first few chapters you can see the people behind Johnny Wander in the restaurant too.

>>83963178
Thanks for starting the thread, anone. Because, if it weren't for you we wouldn't have...

>>83962812
this anon right here! Thanks for storytiming it, mate. It was an excellent read. Cheers!

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>>83962863
Thank you for storytiming anon! Been wanting to read this for a long time.

Here's a Lis I just doodled, she's cute.

>>83967527
so good bruh

>>83967527
Nice! You got a website?

>>83962337
wooo, acid trip

Thanks Op.

I really enjoy your storytime.

Thanks for sharing.

>>83968678
Thanks! jasbutts.tumblr.com

>>83960964
When I first saw the threat I assumed it was a sequel to Seconds, but re-reading it is still fun while I get ready to go to bed.

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>>83967527
This is why tumblr is based. Swim past the sjw shit, and you find gold like this. Great work anon!