/co/co/'s Bizarre Adventure - Warner Bros Tower Edition

So. Where should we have Max's new powers explicitly discussed as being unusual? In the lobby scene? In the fight with Darla? In the remaining Celebrity fight on the list?
Maybe after Darla's defeat, they could discuss how Max defeated her.

4am EST range is the deadest time of day on /co/. No wonder last thread died when it did.

>>83872124
Probably after the fight with Darla.

I'm still trying to decide if Max should manifest them to keep Tanya from becoming a murderer or to save someone.

>>83872255
Well, i'm glad it's not because the threads themselves are dying. Even after a good portion of people left, we're still kicking thankfully.

I'd say powers should start manifesting to keep Tanya from becoming a murderer.

>>83872124
>>83866436
>>83866639
>>83866776
>At the end of the fight, Max manages to use his line-throwing ability to land on top of Darla and her Stand, increasing hugely in weight because he's being courageous by attacking her
>Darla laughs it off, pointing out to Max that she's immune to the gravity increase from her own Stand, but Max replies that the catwalk isn't; she crashes through it to the floor and is knocked out. Max avoids falling by grappling the ceiling
>Wakko: "Nice work, Max! I didn't know your Stand could do that!"
>Max: "It couldn't before. It only started doing that after I had to fight Mortos."
>Yakko: "That... shouldn't be possible."
>Max: "What?"
>Dot pops up next to him with a large sheet of paper labelled "Standard Warner Bros Fame And Fortune Stand Contract". "Yep, it's all in here: any Stands obtained as a result of a contracted identity will not be able to develop or change as a normal Stand is capable of. I don't know how you're doing it."
>Max: "...How do you have that?"
>Dot shrugs and tosses it away.

>>83872255
>>83872325
We've already got him using them to kill Mortos, so we have to decide on an alternative way for him to do that if he manifests them to stop Tanya. Is it fine if he just ORAs Mortos to death/banishment?

>>83871770
OP should have put the comic of the project on the links:

>/Co/Co/ Comic
http://imgur.com/a/Un5xq

>>83873350
this is some top notch stuff.

Is it possible to love a drawfag?

>>83873350
I probably would've remembered two if the thread hadn't unexpectedly dropped off the catalog.

>>83873009
Maybe, though Max's Stand isn't exactly a punchghost.

>>83874903
It could be the first, more subtle sign that Castaway's emerging, I guess.

>>83873009
The only way to kill Mortos is by decapitation.

>>83872503
What kind of room has a catwalk in the WB tower?

>>83875012
The stairs, then? I dunno, man.

>>83875012
the floor that makes up the cathedral of snacks.

Here acolytes work tirelessly to create the perfect porkrinds to appease the Red One.

Their hands are crispy and delicious from crafting such delicious food.

Another company would just call this the Employee Rest Area. Or someting retarded like that. In WB, the only reprieve employees get in the Break Room is creating delicious snacks for the Red One.

There are catwalks atop the cathedral that makes up this floor.

>>83875084
I thought it was so when they died they went to the snack factory in hell.

>>83875109
well yeah.
But then it becomes a full time job.
Here's it's just the break room. The preparation.

When they go to helll it's straight to work. Since they're suppposed to be prepped.

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>he allows anime on a comics board
>for free

>>83875214
I bet you prep the bull every night.

>>83875214
It has /co/ characters in it you dumb fuck, so it belongs on /co/, regardless of the content. So long as it is /co/ related and it is. You wouldn't make these threads on /a/, you know?

Go complain in the Toonami general.

>>83875012
Since Mortos Stand needs reflective surfaces to work outside his punchghost form, Max could use a large shard of glass/mirror to cut Mortos head.

>>83875796
I guess that's an option, but then it feels like a drawn out chore to get his head off rather than one swift motion.

>>83876081
Mirror breaks in the fight, Max grabs it with his Stand and slices the head off?

>>83876468
I don't think a glass shard of that size with that amount of force applied would be able to sever bone.

That's my main hang up about it.

>>83875012
>What kind of room has a catwalk in the WB tower?
I was thinking there would be two fights with Darla, the first is her against Max and Tanya where they exploit the studio catwalk she is using.

The second (and slightly more frazzled) time we see here is in the WB tower where it is Rolf who defeats her, he tries to exploit the floor being weaker, but then Darla tells him it is re-enforced...only for Taffy to turn the re-enforcing stuff into cheese, making it much more fragile. then as Rolf sends his feet through doors above his head and pulls off his shoes along with taking a third one from his pocket we get this line:
>"Let me ask you little blown-gasket-actress-girl, have you ever experience the almighty THREE SHOE BEATING!"

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>>83876581
Well, whatever it is, Mortos' severed head probably says something stupid as his final words:

>"Mortos only regret is dying away from...rubber pants"
>Mortos rubber pants spontaneously combust, causing Mortos to crumble into dust.

Traductor

By the way, since we are looking for a replacement for Tobias Whale in legal, I was thinking that the bad guy from biker mice from mars could fit the bill.

>>83876745
But the three shoe beating only comes in when Rolf remasters his Stand.

>>83876922
While his Stand may need to be Remastered to use the Three Shoe Beating, he does not have any such problems. plus I was on'y planning for him to use so he could break away the chunk of the floor he had pinned Darla to and ride it down through three floors of the tower to RETIRE her.

>>83877063
That doesn't really feel necessary. Pulling that out earlier would devalue the humor/"oh yes" feeling of the Remastering.
Plus, we don't really need two fights against Darla, let alone two both in the tower.

>>83877086
>let alone two both in the tower.
The first is in the studio

>>83877162
No, it isn't. We're done with the studio, and we don't need any fights there. She's being fought by Max and Tanya at the tower.

>>83876872
What if he was wearing his rubber pants when his head gets cut off and it's his head being away from his rubber pants that are still on his body that causes him to say that.

Mortos does not have an item in Patrick's office, and it's very important that it stays that way.

>>83877396
Why's it so important? I'm fine with that, but what's the reasoning?

>>83877162
Darla wasn't fought in the Studios

>>83877396
yeah anon, he is supposed to wear his pants, I don't see why he would go butt naked collecting souls

>>83878221
To be fair, this is a company run by the Red Guy.

>>83877461
Mortos is the only one who knew of Max going against the WB, the information of Max being a rebel to the WB does not leak until after the UR are already in the middle of fighting Mok or shortly before then.

We've been over this at least 50 times now since that's the reason why Max was able to sneak the UR into the studios, the WB didn't know he had turned against them yet at that time.

We are even beyond the point of that plot element still being relevant to current discussion since that part of the story has already been taken care of.

Ok, I'm going to add the missing characters/Stands to the doc, anyone has the revised Stand of Telephone avatar?

>>83879190
I don't think we ever got around to revising it.

>>83879214
There was something about allowing it to spy on its targets. In the meantime, I'm putting the one in the Stand doc.

>>83879294
It could implant a mental image of itself in a person's head and when they come up with the perfect mental picture of TA, he's able to take physical form.

Or something like that.

Question, what's our timeline again? I was wanting to know for a few future parts.

>>83881826
From part 1-->2 is like 5 years at least. At least.

Part 2-->3 is around 20 years.

Part 3-->4 is 1 year.

Part 4-->5 is at most 3 years. (Plucky is 14 during the events of the part he appears in).

Not sure after that.

>>83882255
>>83881826

Part 1 - 2 is at least 10 years.
Max 20

>>83882255
From 5 to 6 It depends of how long it took for the Warden to turn those ruins into a semi-functional jail.
between 6 to 7 is probably a small amount of time, since at the end of part 6 there is an announcement about the start of the race.
No idea about 7->8

>>83882755
Our only frame of reference would be if we were including Chernabog's daughters, who are now teenagers. That and if we were to include Wednesday and Pugsley, who would be in their 30s I suppose?

Samurai Jack was suggested to appear too, but I don't know if we're doing that. We have Punished Fred appearing, so that might be a bit redundant. And I doubt anyone would like to see Jack killed off for a gag. Unless Fred killed Jack in his time in the Scope Men, but deeply regretted it and decided to change his ways.

Part of me wanted to suggest that Bling-Bling Boy from Johnny Test would show up in Ethan's cult in a similar way to Porky in Mother 3 too. Dunno about that idea though.

>>83882755
>between 6 to 7 is probably a small amount of time, since at the end of part 6 there is an announcement about the start of the race.
That's stupid and we should cut it, since the Superjail fiasco is meant to be what gets Nobody elected.

>>83882730
OK, so 1-->2 is 10 years.

>>83882755
Could the ruins still be located in Florida? I feel there's a number of Disney World jokes to be made there.

>>83883501
The new season of Samurai Jack coming out later this year is set 50 years after the end of the previous season, so old Jack showing up wouldn't be out of the question.

>>83883524
There is not an actual indication of how many time passed between the ending of part 6 and that scene on the epilogue

>>83883557
The only background info of the Panopticon is that it was built by an ancient civilization, I'm not sure if it was explained where it was.

>>83883501
>>83883557
>>83883588
>>83883668


Make there be 20 years between Part 1 and 2
20 between 2 and 3
Then 2 between 3 and 4
and 8 between 4 and 5.
6 is 2 years after 5.

If we do this, we can have Jack develop an Anubis-like Stand.

The Old Prison that superjail was built upon can be a sinister place that Jack wants to purge. Make him be the one hero in the group.

>>83883919
If his stand is Anubis-like though, wouldn't that make him a villain?

>>83884022
I think he means "bound to a sword" Stand

>>83884022
only in abilities.

Make something that plays to his strengths as a fighter by maybe letting him throw his sword or something.

It has to have fun limitation that means it cant go puncghost.

Fuck I just recommended giving Jack Hermit Purple.

>>83883919
No, I don't want to mess with the time line anymore than what we have up to part 5.
It's making things overly complicated where they don't need to be.

If you need to tack on years, do it after part 5. Time is needed to build the jail, time is needed for the elections to pan out, time is needed for that whatever bullshit cult to get set up.

So, what's next on the tower?

>>83886077
We've done Mortos and Darla fights, haven't we? Or are we still working on them?

We still need a stairway fight unless that's been scrapped.

We also need to do Dogbert's betrayal to the WB I think? And how he helps them.

Rolf beats Patrick, embedding the experiences of the UR and the Old Country with the all-powerful remastered three shoe beating onto him. Where are the others during this? Where is Donald?

Also, Max's death, how is that done? Him destroys the Tower. Everyone gets out safely except Max. Donald mourns his death and dives into Hell, and saves Goofy's soul. In part 7 it was suggested that the corpse parts would give Goofy an out of context vision of Max's death, making it look like Donald had killed him, which causes Goofy to become more antagonistic. So there's that to remember too.

>>83886251
Mortos is done, and he's not in the tower. That was some stuff we need to go back and finish from earlier in the part.

Next is >>83861660 >>83866214 and >>83872503

And I don't get why anons want Darla to be defeated in that specific way. It's really limiting my options.

>>83886333
Write her defeat like how you want too.

Crushing the floor under her gravity is the most obvious option. Do you have an alternative?

>>83886251
Dogbert and Scruffy "help" the WB by laying traps on the UR path and delaying them, but they are mostly nuisances and they are fired for incompetence. After that, maybe Scruffy's Stand helps the UR by dropping them right next to the room outside Patrick's office.

>>83886393
That sounds good. Saves them the trouble of climbing the rest o the way there. At this point, the whole Tower just makes me think of Persona 3's Tartarus.

>>83887227
I'm thinking that Scruffy is also the one that send the UR to the Big Guys Porn studio in an attempt to deal with them. But we still need a fourth Stand and a fourth Big Guy.

>>83886393
No, the UR must suffer through the gift shop before reaching Patrick, it is the final hurdle before reaching his office.

>>83887970
that's exactly what I said, the room in front of Patrick's office (I forgot the name of it). What's in the gift shop anyway?

>>83888052
Whatever unspeakable horrors that we've failed to find a place for in part 5 so far.

Or it's just an ordinary gift shop... that takes your soul as payment.

I don't know yet.

>Back at the base of the tower, Rex is coordinating his rag-tag group of misfits
>The Warner Siblings have gotten over the intercom and have been buzzing every floor to send down more guys causing chaos in the WB's system and leading to a mounting pile of bodies in the lobby (as well as decreased security on the upper stories as per the plan)
>Max, Morocco Mole, and Tanya have been leading the charge
>Fifi has broken off from the rest of the group with a small army of WB guards under her pheromone control to begin moving the bodies out of the tower and also hold their gained ground
>Max, Tanya, and Morocco have gotten up to the 8th story so far
>Tanya is having trouble controlling [Black Magic], she either uses too little or too much blood and the fact that it's her blood is making her hesitate when she fires it or detonates it, even though it all comes back to her afterwards
>They enter a large room filled with vats of boiling oil and the stench of poorly refrigerated meat
>This room takes up the entire width of the floor and at least two stories tall with scaffolding above
>There's someone up above with a megaphone shouting at the people hurriedly preparing porkrinds
>"Keep it moving! You don't want the Boss finding out you've been slacking off on your breaks!"
>The sign says "employee lounge"
>They barely get a look at the place before the person up above notices them, it's Darla Dimple (Cats Don't Dance)
>"Well well, what do you have here? A bunch of traitors! I told them at the studios they shouldn't let dirty animals be stars!"
>Max, Tanya, and Morocco ready their stands
>"A cowardly dog and a cheap imitation rat have no chance against me!"
>Max leads the charge, but suddenly his body become heavy, as if gravity has increased
>Tanya is still being shy about cutting lose and fires a halfhearted blast at Darla, gravity increases on her as well
>Morocco had wandered off before Darla had gotten a good look at him
Cont. in a bit.

It seems someone has noted on the doc that they have a shitty ISP that has blocked 4chan.

Should we have a plus4chan backup thread for this project?

That really should be catwalks, not scaffolding.
>>83888358
>Max causes a huge flash of light, Darla calls him a coward for this and suddenly gravity around his body returns to normal
>Tanya is still stuck in place from the gravity
>Max has already made his way up onto the catwalk when Darla's sight returns
>They are on parallel catwalks
>She summons [Big and Loud]'s huge humanoid form (it looks like her butler, Max, from the movie)
>Meanwhile, Morocco looks like he's walking on air in the background
>[Big and Loud] leaps at Max, but Max and the catwalk he's on are illusions that explode as soon as it makes contact with them, Max was actually with Morocco on the real catwalk which he made invisible
>[Big and Loud] should no damage from this though and comes at them again
>Back down below, Tanya is being nudged by [Black Magic] which is making motions and pantomiming that she should sing
>Tanya begins to sing, at first it's one of the songs she was taught during her one day crash course as Jan, but [Black Magic] stops her
>Tanya begins again, but this time it's one of her songs, not one of Jan's, and since she's singing something Jan never did, she's no longer acting like an imitation
>[Black Magic] then pulls her into the pocket world
>Back up on the catwalks, Max and Morocco can't even get close to Darla
>Jan reappears behind Darla and blast a hole clean through her (non lethal though)
>Darla is now pissed and [Big and Loud] is pouncing at Tanya, who then disappears again
>Tanya reappears above Darla singing one of the Jan songs and doing her best Jan impersonation causing gravity to increase on her again, making her fall faster
>Darla scoffs at this "As if my own power could be turned against me."
>Tanya, still doing a Jan impression "Now you might be able to be able to withstand the power of your stand, but I can't say the same for this catwalk." as she lands on top of Darla causing the catwalk to give out under them
cont.

>>83888934
>They are directly above one of the vats of boiling oil
>[Black Magic] allows Tanya to disappear, but she still has to travel the distance in that pocket dimension and gravity still works there, so she's stuck falling with Darla
>Tanya is banking on her stand being able to heal her after hitting the oil
>Max makes a "no no no" panic motion and begins glowing, he begins posing too, strange new poses (the perfect cast)
>Suddenly a wire appears and grabs Tanya, pulling her out of the air and away from the oil just as Darla falls into it
>Max's stand has changed a little more now
>It now has a fishing rod of some kind

>>83872503
If we cut the first two lines of this, we can splice that onto the end of this bit.

Also need to figure out who tips the oil vat over so we can see Darla rapidly ageing away.

all I can say is while reading the doc, the Jan and Max sections of the story are pretty fucking badass

bump.

Thankfully interest will no doubt skyrocket when we reach part 6. That has next to nothing in it now and can be full of suggestions. It's always that when we hit the end of a part, interest always seems to go down hill.

Just a little longer, then we'll be done and ready for part 6, which will hopefully be better than regular Jojo part 6.

Speaking of Stone Ocean, I feel we're now obligated to include SOMEONE from Superjail in our part 8 now. Doesn't have to be from the actual show though. Just someone in or implied to be in the part. We aren't doing a universe switch.

>>83891555
Indeed, there is a disturbingly low amount of posters in this thread compared to previous threads. And yes, it will be interesting to have a character that was a former inmate of Superjail, besides any aberration caught by Ethan's cult.

>>83891555
The middle is always a bit of a slog, and part 5 seems a bit bloated in some places, to be honest.

>>83891750
I think since I took some of the reins and have been writing most of part 5, anons are just waiting for me and the few others still hammering away at the greentext to finish it.

It's still going to be at least a few more days before part 5 will be done enough to get into part 6.

It's still easier to keep pumping out text for this when I have material to start with and sting together, so the slow down is slowing down my process as well.

>>83891906
That's also true, on previous parts there were a lot more people writing, and that number have been dwindling. Anyway, here is a scene to showcase Scruffy's Stand at least once and set the Big Guys fight.

>As the Urban Rangers keep climbing the tower, an unknown individual is watching them through a monitor.
>???: “Intruders have breached our defenses and are swarming our hideout! They shall be punished!”
>The person speaking is actually Scruffy who is reading the dialogue of a porno novel, not paying attention to the monitors.
> A scrawny figure emerges from the wall behind him; 「DREAM THEATER」, Scruffy’s Stand, who proceeds to hit Scruffy on the back of the head.
>Scruffy: “Whoa. What’s the matter, boy?”
>「DREAM THEATER」 points to the screens showing the Urban Rangers
>Scruffy: “Hey, look at that, we have intruders. Damn, Those boys seem really dangerous. Only a Stand user can stop their advance, and I know exactly who”
>「DREAM THEATER」 smirks malevolently at the thought of engaging the intruders, but Scruffy points at another screen.
>Scruffy: “Those Big Guys on the lawyer buffet right there, they can take care of this small problem. DT, that’s your signal”.
>「DREAM THEATER」 rolls its eyes before submerging back into the wall.
>The UR reaches another elevator, looks safe so decide to enter. Rolf presses the button with the highest floor number on it (something around the 500th floor)
>Right after the door closes; the elevator shakes violently and begins to rise quickly.
>Cartman: “Oh, what a fucking surprise, it was a trap”
>「AMERIKA」 punches through the roof and the Ur spot 「DREAM THEATER」 pulling frantically the wires of the elevator.
>Before they can even attack, the elevator comes to a stop and 「DREAM THEATER」 sinks into the roof. A light flashes in the door (indicating that Scruffy’s Stand changed the room at the other side of the door).
The elevator then opens directly to the Porn Studio.

>>83884646
there's no reason time has to be so tight until Part 5.

I helped write most all the parts before that point. Not letting the time flow does not make sense. At best its nonsensical when it can be to our convenience.

>>83886333
then come up with something better.

Usually getting the ending first and working towards it works best.

>>83888492
having 4chan be "le boogeyman" gets fucking annoying in wifi hotspots. No idea why they all make a point of proudly blocking this site.

>>83889696
It was the result of two writefags cranking out different stories that were both serviceable in their own right, but pottery when put together.

>>83891555
nice trips.

But yeah. We're finally hitting nice ideas for Part 6.

I like the idea of bringing back Samurai Jack for another round. This time with a Stand that accentuates his swordplay.

>>83892494
cue the music

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=izGwDsrQ1eQ

>>83893695
My main beef with it is the placing of when Plucky was born and how much time passed for Daffy to set his plan in motion. If you increase the time between parts 4 and 5 then you decrease the amount of time Daffy spent setting up his empire and amassing his forces.

By having Plucky be 10 years old during the events of part 3, that gives Daffy ample time for have set up all of this shit he has going for him since he'd have had more than 10 years to do it.

The reason I want Plucky to be 14 during part 5 is because I like the age of Plucky to be closer to GioGio's since we've been making the CoCos older and older.

It's also bother me if it takes them fucking 8 years to track the jawbreakers to the old country. That's just incompetence. Having the time frame be shorter makes more sense with someone like Scrooge backing them.

>>83893765
I already finished the Darla encounter. Scroll up.

Now we're dealing with gay bara layer porn.

Speaking of gay bara lawyer porn, /d/ once made porn of taxes in fic form. I might need to find that cap and incorporate some of it into the script they're reading.

>>83893864
well that's reasonable.

How about this?

We keep Part 1 -2 -3 be 20 years each.

Have a shorter span between 4 and 5. But elongate as much as is feasable between 5 and 6.

I'd think 45 years is enough for us to be able to have "old Jack"

>>83893949
That's also reasonable. I have nothing against that.

That would make Hank in his mid to late 70s by the time we see him in the epilogue of part 2?

>>83894151
bingo.

Having him drop out of fighting even with the aid of Propane breathing to slow his aging is important. That's why he doesn't fight much if at all until he gets his "stand".

He's more Speedweed than Joseph Joestar.

>>83893864
>it takes them fucking 8 years to track the jawbreakers to the old country. That's just incompetence
That's actually a good point, 8 years seems too much, specially with Scrooge's resources.

>>83893923
>Tax porn
Now I heard everything

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>>83894747
So do we want to use a little of this for whatever scene the UR walk in on the 4 big guys shooting?

Hopefully the thread won't just die in the wee hours of the morning again.

Ah, wait a minute.
Next up is actually Xavier

The tower climb so far goes like this:

-Rex and Max cause distraction in lobby
-UR + Donald inserted 100 floors up
-UR fight Wernstrom and Doctor Doctor
-Max, Tanya, and Morocco fight Darla
-UR fight customer service
-Max's group meets Xavier

That's where we're at right now.

It's after Max and his group meeting Xavier and stuff that we cut back to the UR getting into the elevator with Barron O'Beeftip, ditching it because of Scruffy, then ending up fighting the 4 big guys.

We also seem to be neglecting Donald going down the floors like a wrecking ball.

The thread will hopefully still be up by the time I wake up this time.

>>83895278
Donald should just go through many unexplained rooms and tear through non euclidian architecture like a demolition ball.

Whatever kooky spirituality Xavier uses to guide the guys on the bottom, Donald replaces with sheer rage.

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>>83895184
The film the Big Guys are making should be called:
Anal Brackets XV : Insertion Taxation, the Tax Return.

>>83896409
>Anal Brackets XV

What happened to Anal Brackets I-XIV?

>>83896485
You want me to get into the rest of their filmography?

The Appeal Court Rimjobs collection already featyres their greatest hits in both tax and legal based pornography

The Dick Abatement: Cum Allocation Edition

Amortization Masturbation 1- 69

Lizzy goes to Lawschool and Crashes the Sex Market (Time to go Mobile)

Fisting Dividends: The Uterus Auditing

Forfait Fraud Fuckery 1-4: The Anal Relapse edition.

Including behind the scenes footage of the studio's credit score.

>>83896841
I'm disturbed you wrote that all, but also very impressed.

>>83896841
Magnificent.

scans when ?

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Progress bump

>>83900001
Well I like it.

A lot.

>>83900001
Great work, man.

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>>83896841
>Lizzy goes to Lawschool and Crashes the Sex Market
My fucking sides

>>83900001
Looks good.

>>83896347
So they meet up with Donald and start going up, and all they see for several stories are destroyed floors?

In case we're still needing fights for the UR (we need someone to replace Darla, anyway): Neron, head of Acquisition? He's the superior of Mortos, Uppercrust, the Businessmen, Facilier, etc. Probably Squidward, too.
Might make a good fight for Squidward and a conclusion for his "regaining the UR's trust" arc. (Stand: [GENETIC REPO MAN]?)

>>83902316
Put them in the gift shop.

Also, we already did the Darla fight, we don't need to replace her since we already finished with the fight she was in.

>>83902492
Yes, I know, but we need to replace her as a fight for the Urban Rangers, since we moved her to be one of the Celebrity fights.

>>83902519
I feel if we add anything more to the UR's fights in the tower it's just going to feel bloated.

From where we are now in the writing process they still have to go through Scruffy, the 4 big guys, Varrick, Dogbert, and the gift shop before getting to Patrick.

>>83900001
This would be good if Courage had a moveset to back him up, but most people here don't play fighting games outside of Smash

>>83902858
Yeah, maybe you can give us some ideias for his atacks and the button combos. Also, is there any problem if it turns out a little smash-like?

>>83901916
Exactly. That saves them a few floors

>>83903420
There are a very many problems with that.

Play Heritage for the future on an emulator. It's not hard.

Or even fucking skullgirls.

>>83903420
Yes, because smash is primarily a 2 button platform brawler and we're trying to make a 5 button game

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This may be the stupidest thing I have ever drawn.

>>83902744
Scruffy and Dogbert aren't actually fights, though. They're joke encounters.
And I'm not sure anyone's actually come up with an explanation for what's going to happen in the gift shop or why it's there.

>>83905095
We still need to work out how Xavier is introduced to Max's group.

Which is funner:
-them arriving in a room he's already in
-him arriving on the floor they're currently on via elevator when they all took the stairs
-him crashing through a window in front of them

>>83905974
The second one, but the elevator should be somewhere there logically shouldn't be an elevator.
Like, a closet door opens to reveal the inside of an elevator.

>>83904139
>>83904477
Good to know, but can we still have things such as items, non-playable bosses or stages with platform hazards?

The only things I think that would be important to keep is the wider air area (in comparison to heritage) and non-playable bosses (some mega man like bosses).

>>83906017
I was just thinking it'd be a normal elevator, but OK.

I'm not very good with parts dealing with Xavier, so I'm not even sure how to incorporate the scenes with him that are already drafted.

>>83906120
I think trying to merge those elements into a more traditional fighting game is above our pay grade.

>>83906120
items would be insanely hard to balance. And even in smash you have to turn that shit off if you want to have any fun.

>>83906536
Probably a normal elevator, but it arrives there on a controlled hurricane that Xavier's meteorolgist full-on compadre created to help him get up there.

>>83905095
Maybe the gift shop is a trap itself instead of having a fight occurring there

>>83904139
The only emulator I found for Heritage is the arcade one

>>83908749
Part of me wants to say the Cyclops from Spongebob should be in the gift shop, but he's live action.

Maybe Biclops from Chalk Zone should be there instead?

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「TAKE OFF YOUR PANTS & JACKET」
Any good?

>>83910137
Neat.

I've read what that stand does, I've re-read it too, but I still can't remember what it does.

>>83910173
Chains hook into people's clothes and control them I think?

>>83910173
>>83910247
It can toss and drag people around with hooks lodged in the target's clothes, if said target removes his clothes, the Stand can make a copy of him.

>>83910247
>>83910384
I kind of feel like it needs something more. Red Guy's meant to be the biggest threat in /co/co/, hence the necessity of a broken-ass Remastered Stand and the intervention of the Dead Man's Party to defeat him, but tossing people about with hooks doesn't really feel that powerful. It's a GOOD power, to be sure, but...

>>83910437
He summons copies of the Dead Man's Party during the final fight, but I'm not sure if that's the work of his Stand or demon powers.

>>83910484
We can leave things ambiguous, you know?

We never found out if Yotsuyu pulling tape from his eyes was a stand ability or if it was part of his rock biology.

>>83910484
Maybe he should just have an expansive suite of demon powers that lets him kick Plucky's ass.
Like the ability to distract him with a FREE TRAILER

>>83910137
Pretty Great Anon, that style is just perfect. Also, can you please post an white-and-black version just so I can put it on the tittle screen of the fighting game?

>>83910957
Just lineart, or grayscale?

>>83908712
So you mean you're quite liberal about the game traditionality as long as it actually gets completed?

>>83908715
Ok then, there will be no items. Is there anything more you could ask for the game?

>>83911020
Both of them would work.

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>>83911122

>>83911090
I feel like you're going to have to make as many executive decisions as you can. There isn't really a cohesive vision for this game.

>>83911192
Thank you for your contribution, Anon. Don't forget to include it on the booru.

>>83910929
Perhaps, having the ability to make copies out of peoples clothes, he keeps a wardrobe to replicate the abilities of deceased characters.

OK, so this next part comes after Rolf has beaten customer services, I'm trying to edit what we already have in the doc as notes so that it works with what we have.

>Cut back further down the tower
>*flute plays*
>Xavier walks into an elevator while monologuing.
>"Quests (quests)"
>"Questocity (Questocity)"
>"The path of the Guardian angel is solitary. Like the card playing felon in jail, I too must watch my back, lest I get buttraped in the showers of righteousness (righteousness)."
>We then cut to Max's group who are busy clearing a floor
>They hear rumbling above them and think they'll be running into Donald sooner than later
>The elevator dings, causing everyone to stop looking up and turn quickly to face it
>Out walks Xavier who sees the Warner Siblings
>He gasps. "GASP!! It is you, the StaND slaves!! Have you broken free of your chains and risen against the Red man who shoved his candy down your throat after promising you sex in his white van?"
>The Warner siblings and Max at first react by attacking him.
>Max is first to act by blinding him, Tanya then makes ropes of blood and begins swinging him around the room before suspending him from the ceiling
>Xavier acts as if none of this is happening and continues
>"I felt a presence guiding me here, like pizzas with stuffed crusts made of pretzels guide thousands of scooter ladies to an early grave. My purpose as a spirit guru will come to an end here. I'll finally be able to finish what the blind girl couldn't."
>"It seems she was retarded too. She spoke of the unmentionable ass too soon and so was marked to die. But at least she tried. Like that train that didn't give up until getting a face".
>Max and the Warners realize he probably knows enough to be useful in the tower.
>They ask him if he’s going to help.

This is where I get spotty in this because I don't know how to write his lines, so there's stuff to fill in here.

>Xavier joins Max's group and they head up tot he next floor
cont.

>>83914646
>They can't take the elevator because the one Xavier rode up on stops at the previous floor
>The next floor has no elevators or stairwells, only a door in the middle of the large room making up this floor leading into a small room (think square doughnut)
>They open the door and the small room is huge on the inside, far bigger than the room surrounding it
>the door evaporates like sand behind them
>There is a huge, black, radiant eye in the horizon illuminating the room while red torrents of blood stream down to the chessboard ground and get absorbed immediately. No sound is heard from the spurting blood. So it must be very far away.
>By them is a marble statue of a beautiful woman. It is torn in two to reveal a golden rod asclepius.
>There is a small badger that started burrowing the second they walked into the room.
>Anyways. Xavier walks in last and when he sees the confusion of the others he just laughs at their stupidity.
>"You've got to do THIS!"
>His head explodes and an elevator zooms in front of them.
>"This is the room of ciclicality. I had to END my life, to start this room anew! Now get in before we have to pull our hearts out to get seated in this joint."

I have no idea if "ciclicality" is intentional or if it's supposed to be "cyclicality".

Then we go to >>83892494 , but we still need to make some adjustments.

>>83908749
there's a nice Playstation one on Coolroms, you can get PSX from there too.

>>83910137
>>83910384
>>83910437
Well it's expressly said that he admits he doesnt NEED his stand to kill the UR. He's using it to give them a sporting chance since he thinks they earned it.

The consequence is that if he beats them at their game he gets their souls forever.

>>83910929
Plucky arriving means the deal is off and real fighting begins.

>>83911090
Well I want Stands. And for Stand and non-stand users to play differently.

Stand users should focus on needing their Stands to be active.

Even though Daffy slaughters at close range we need him to be hampered a lot when not actively using his Stand.

Gadget's got a neat regenerative Stand. But on the other side, the more HP he loses, the less attacks he can use.

Kuzco needs to feel like either Zero from MvC 3 or like Painwheel from Skullgirls. A monster up close. A fucking beast.

Kida would be similar, but be more tanky with less offensive options. A fast tank that does shit damage.

>>83914825
well there ARE swarms of Cicada roaming through the air.

It's up to you to decide if they represent anything.


But ok yeah. It was a typo.

>>83892494
OK, so editing and inserting from
>The UR reaches another elevator, looks safe so decide to enter. Rolf presses the button with the highest floor number on it (something around the 500th floor)

Expanding that into:

>The UR reach another elevator
>It dings and they are greeted by Barron O’Beeftip again
>After much deliberation, they finally get inside it
>Rolf presses the button with the highest floor number on it (something around the 500th floor)
>They ride the elevator up in uncomfortable silence broken only by the elevator music
>The elevator begins shaking violently and begins to rise quickly.
>Cartman: “Oh, what a fucking surprise, it was a trap”
>「AMERIKA」 punches through the roof and the UR spot 「DREAM THEATER」 pulling frantically on the elevator cables
>Before they can even attack, the elevator comes to a stop and 「DREAM THEATER」 sinks into the roof.
>A light flashes in the door (indicating that Scruffy’s Stand changed the room at the other side of the door).
>The floor they've stopped at is a film studio/the legal department
>There are 4 Big Guys in the middle of shooting a porno
>They are: Monstroso, Bane TBA TBA

Is Moto Moto still one of them? Who is the 4th big guy?

>>83908749
Get Fightcade and the roms, it emulates perfectly.

>>83915065
Moto Moto was the star of

Hebert Bigdick's Enron Adventure

When the time has come for auditing in one of the biggest firms i the world, only one dedicated accountant can get the auditor to look the other way to save his company...

Using his dick.

>>83915355
I don't feel like looking up what the dick of a hippopotamus looks like right now.

Hippos are fucking savage.

>>83915445
>Hippos are fucking savage.
Now imagine a Hippo porn star...with a Stand (Is the one that manipulate density, right?)

>>83915010
These are some great ideias, Anon. You should write some more of what you expect to the characters in the Roster. That would be really helpful to me.

Another idea I wanted to pitch for part 6 before I forget it.

What if the Rescue Rangers or Rescuers Society are like a spy branch of Interpol and they have agents in the jail hiding in the wall?
This is on top of having undercover agents are prisoners.

I really just want to set up a joke about there being two agent Gadgets in the jail: Penny Gadget and Gadget Hackwrench. But that can be scrapped if we don't want to have Gadget Hackwrench in part 6. I still think having agents in the walls as part of a support network for the undercover agents would be a good idea.

Penny wouldn't be under cover, she'd get trapped in the jail when it goes into lock down during a prison riot. She was visiting one of their undercover agents at the time.

But anyway, back to gay bara lawyer porn.

Cartman will probably react with disgust and try to not look at the spectacle. There probably should be a moment where the big guys keep filming, ignorant of the UR's presence, and the UR don't even want to say anything.

>>83915586
Doc guy here, I'm going to turn on edit sharing because this is just too much for one guy to handle and I have shit to do this summer. I also don't want to have shit fucked up, so I'll make backups just in case things go south as well. Feel free to add any Sprite sheet or moveset here.

>>83915587
Rolf probably thinks that they are practicing Old country wrestling, but then notes that ball gags aren't part of the reglamentary equipment.
Moto Moto tells Cartman that he has potential to become a Big Guy, Cartman thinks that is because he's big and strong, but Moto Moto indicates that is because he's a fatass with manboobs.

>>83915065
Yeah, Moto Moto is there, the one we are missing is the 4th Big Guy and his Stand

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>>83918246
Tubbimura from Xiaolin Showdown?

Here's a stand concept too.
>[STOP THE BREAKS]
>The stand is a gangly, plantoid creature with a head made of various bulbs.
>When a bulb is removed from the head and placed somewhere, anything going near it or already near it will be pushed off course. The bulbs create a sort of opposing force that prevents people from going near one.
>The radius of this field is very small. You'd have to be very close to be pushed away from the bulb.
>The bulbs can be placed in midair. Additionally, they only last for a few minutes before they turn to ash.

>>83916292
will shoot ideas at the wall.

We already have some ideas for Kuzco, Hank and limitations on Stand users floating around.

Will add them into Doc

>>83920250
You know.

I never thought that characters like Mr.Nobody, Jay and Silent Bob, Xavier, Captain N, and the Warden could all be within a single universe with a coherent story.

This project has truly been an exercise in stretching imagination. If the story weren't based on JoJo, I dont think it would ever have worked.

>>83920660
You forgot the part where Johnny Bravo banged Captain Amelia and fathered Tom, or Maleficent having eggs with Chernabog.
The best part is how all this shit is intertwined and makes sense (kinda) in context.

>>83918955
Suggestions for it seem to be limited >>83876872

So far I think only one of the 4 big legal guys has any actual legal ties in his source material.

>>83921308
We need a big lawyer.

Someone who looks at home both in a courtroom and in a porno.

Kingpin from Marvel?

>>83921480
Kinda redundant with Whale, though.

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>First OC project /co/ might ever finish
>Anime inspired

>>83924177
you say this like it's a bad thing. Also, thanks for the bump.

>>83924177
>Implying we're ever finishing this

>>83924304
there is no need to be so defeatist.

>>83921480
Peter Potamus from Harvey Birdman would be ideal, but... he's a hippo. We've already got Moto Moto.
Fuck.

>>83924354
Fat Tony could work, he was part of a jury once.

>>83915587
What if Penny was sent by Interpol and Gadget was sent by Strickland, with neither informing the other?

>>83924975
Gadget self destructed in Part 4, didn't you read the doc for it?

>>83925575
I think he meant the other Gadget, from Rescue Rangers

>>83924970
I kinda like that.
Thinking about it, maybe we should replace Moto with Peter? The legal connection's too good to pass up. Or maybe we could just have two hippos.

>>83925763
you mean 2 hippos, 1 Bane?

I'm watching jojo so I can participate. On episode 5 :) it's very good

>>83924975
Also a possibility, though it seems a tad unlikely since Strickland has employees already working in the prison.

>>83921480
>>83924354
>>83925763
I'm down with replacing Moto with Peter, they're both hippos so it wouldn't change anything we have for Moto already.

It still brings up the issue of needing 4 guys though.

>>83925834
Thanks to you, I now have a mental image of two cartoon hippos spitroasting a muscular hispanic masked wrestler.
I hope you're fucking happy.
>>83926012
Boss Biggis? http://dcau.wikia.com/wiki/Boss_Biggis

>>83926162
Maybe we should just go with two hippos.

Monstroso, Bane, Moto Moto, and Peter Potamus.

Or do we still want to use Tobias Whale?

>>83926543
I think one of them should be Plankton from Sponge Out Of Water.

His Stand is a swarm stand that lets him inflate his body with water.

>>83926733
There's already a suggestion for him in part 6 though. And we already have Patrick and Squidward in part 5.

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>>83926162
>>83926543
Oh boy, double the hippo

>>83926770
well now I just feel silly. Maybe we can give the Swarm Stand to one of the Hippos.

Is jojos bizarre adventure good

>>83926787
This is beginning to remind me of this.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eA4zsRdcdN4

>>83926543
I... somehow never processed that we weren't counting Whale.
Monstroso, Bane, Tobias Whale and Peter Potamus feels like a solid lineup to me.

>>83927068
Whale was scrapped because we already have a DC character in the line-up.

>>83927125
Ah.
Does that matter too much? I feel like we should just pick between Whale and Moto Moto and be done with it.

>>83927196
I guess not.
Between them, Whale might be more suitable. But the "2 hippos, 1 bane" is tempting. I still give my vote to Whale.

>>83922690
but he'd be replacing him tho

>>83924975
Strickland helped build the prison man.

They were the ones that funded the Warden in the first place.

The only guy who's even a bit like "old" Strickland is Dale, and that's because he's in a robot body and never ages. Everyone else is already working on a different wavelength.

It's as if the nazis had had an android on their side who insisted on following Otto von Bismark while also defending Normandy on D-Day.

>>83925834
>>83925763

I can dig two hippos.

How about this. Moto Moto is a good star, but he's not a lawyer. So he just has a framed picture on the studio. But no fight.

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>>83927237
>the "2 hippos, 1 bane" is tempting
Oh no, what did I unleashed?

>>83927125
Kingpin was another option.

>>83927416
Do we want to swap out Moto Moto with Kingpin then?

I'm pretty sure all 4 of the big guys will have to fight the UR. I don't even know how good their teamwork will be yet since the members haven't been set.

>>83927451
Something glorious.
https://youtu.be/R9w_uoUHgiE?t=99

>>83924304
>Implying this beautiful collab won't getting finished
>Not having hope on /co/'s powerful autism
Also, we already finished 4 parts, this is already acceptable enough to pull the game at least.

>>83925893
That's great, Anon, we really need some more people collaborating, feel free to participate if you have any ideias.

>>83926908
Yes, but it gets a little overrated because of memes. The most famous is part 3, just so you know.

>>83928033
Oh I am doing one right now with Dio and JoJo. I accidentally watched episode one of a part and it talked about stands, and I see stands here too so I suppose the later parts are important

>>83928120
All of the parts are important. Part 1 tells you about Dio's connection to Jojo's family and Part 2 tells you about Joseph and it's also the most fun fully animated part so far.

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>>83927657
>Kingpin as a Big Guy
>His Stand is 「RHINO SKIN」

>>83926908
Of the ones with anime adaptations: 1 is okay, 2 is fantastic, 3 is kinda boring and overrated, and 4 starts off slow but becomes GOAT.

>>83928875
>Bring me my Horn!
Dammit, is this or the hippo spitroast

>>83930453
>Kingpin gets incredibly riled up, but can't actually summon his Stand until someone brings him his Rhino costume
I think we're onto something here.

>>83930556
>Kingpin as a costume fetishist
>Moto Moto with a Stand that's basically a layer of lube
Remind me again, are we writing a JoJo story or the script of a porno?

>>83930614
What's the difference

I still have no idea how to do the 4 big guys legal fight.

Just keep in mind that it's not even the last fight the UR have to go through on their way up the tower.

>>83930730
That's fine. We're still spitballing right now. Might as well work on something else until we have the basic ideas down.
I think it'd be a good idea to have at least one more fight with the team at the bottom of the tower. Maybe one with Donald's team and Max's team meeting?
Show off the Warners using Stand combos, and then have Donald and friends come in from above.

>>83930847
We never decided if anyone was with Donald.

>>83930730
The only thing I have clear is that whoever uses [Satin Soul] could be fooled into slamming against the floor with increased density, plummeting through all the 500ish floors.

>>83930896
I think Donald was wrecking his way to the first floor alone.

>>83930896
Someone said that Ami, Yumi and Fifi le Fume were with him, and I don't remember anyone objecting.
I dunno. It does not matter.

>>83930944
Fifi is at the base of the tower controlling hordes of WB workers, making them carry the piles of their defeated allies out of the building so they don't have to climb over the bodies.

Not sure what Ami and Yumi are doing.

>>83930932
That could make for a funny moment. Max's group meets up with Donald after having to climb over and dig through hallways filled with bodies and then some big guy in a BDSM/leather getup comes smashing through the ceiling and keeps going down.

>>83930730
>I still have no idea how to do the 4 big guys legal fight.
With even more posing than the pillar men.

Bebop and Rocksteady could be decent grunts for Max's team to face when Donald shows up, but I am too tired to think of Stand ideas for them right now.
I do think they need one more "real" fight to show that they've been doing stuff while the UR fights their way up.

>>83931156
They have Stand suggestions in the doc, but for part 7, I think.

>>83931184
They're supposed to fight Tempo to demonstrate how she lacks control over her stand.

>>83931184
>>83931231
Ah.
I was thinking they'd work here as henchmen fighting at the bottom of the tower while the UR fights the bosses at the top, but I don't know how appropriate their Stands would be here. Anyone else have suggestions?

>>83915587
I had another thought last night

I remembered this old cartoon about the world's first criminal and how cavemen built the first jail to contain him. At the end of the cartoon it switches to modern day (1940s/50s) where the jail still stands and the narrator is revealed to be the criminal, still imprisoned in it, who asks something like "When are you gonna let me out?" while a tear rolls down his face.

What if the Warden builds his jail on top of the first jail ever built by human kind and the first criminal from the short is still alive because he's a Scopeman (Our Stoneman equivalent I think)?

>>83931156
Would there be things other than stand users in the tower?

Like maybe some rooms filled with lasers or something that pits them against an environment or a puzzle?

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>>83931292
No one's brought up these guys yet.

>>83931343
PERFECT. God damn.
Could throw in Coconuts if anyone has a good enough idea for him.
>>83931329
I figure one "trap room" - the one Xavier gets Max's team through - is enough to show. Maybe another one for Scruffy's "fight".
We can assume there are more, but we don't really need to show them.

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>>83931329
Could work since it's pre-80s. The short you're talking about is "The First Bad Man" by Tex Avery I believe?

We probably do need a Scope Man from Superjail in our part 8 now, with the reveal of Caato. Then again, we have no idea if she is or if she isn't. Really, we just might need a character from part 6.

>>83931431
Yeah, that's the one. I thought it'd be good to foreshadow the Scopemen in our part 6.

>>83931392
I was just trying to come up with something more for Max's group to do without needing to come up with any more stands.

>>83931343
>>83931392
>Grounder's Stand accentuates stress points in walls and other objects, causing them to fracture and collapse when struck
>Scratch's is a turret-like device that fires any small object placed in its bucket out of its barrel at high speed
>Coconuts' causes things to explode with energy on impact based on how far they've travelled
So Grounder collapses walls, Scratch fires the rubble, and Coconuts makes it explode on impact. (I basically just cribbed what their in-game mook counterparts do.)
Because they're robots empowered by Wernstrom, their Stands are all kind of limited and shitty, but working together they're enough to irritate the celebrities, until Donald bursts through the ceiling and takes out Coconuts, reducing them to basically throwing rocks at a group of pissed off Stand users.

>>83931581
「Ground Level」, 「Cluck Old Hen」, and 「Coconut Grove」?

>>83931668
I can dig.

>>83931668
Oh, and
>Ground Level looks like a muscular, red cross between Grounder and Screw Head from GoBots
>Cluck Old Hen is just the Clucker's turret from the StH games
>Coconut Grove is a robotic palm tree with arms and legs
Kind of frustrating if I want the Warner Siblings to fight them, though, since Dot's Stand only works on living flesh. Maybe the Seeds could attach to the robots, but they only grow if they have nutrients to drain?

>>83931940
>>Coconut Grove is a robotic palm tree with arms and legs.
When they are first show we get this interaction.

>"Hows ya nuts, bark breath!"
>...
>"Ha, bark breath, he blows googly eyed trees!"

>>83931940
I thought they were cyborgs?

Then again, my only knowledge of these characters comes from Mean Bean Machine.

>>83932312
Badniks are generally small animals being used as batteries to power robots. So they're kind of like cyborgs, but not in a way that would let Dot use her Stand properly.
Since badniks have been powered by power rings and stuff like that before, my headcanon here is that Wernstrom built a trio of robots using jawbreakers as batteries.

>>83931148
posing caressing and licking

Revised tower plan. Yay? Nay?
>Celebs go in at the ground floor, UR + Donald go in at the 100th floor
>UR: Wernstrom/Doctor Doctor/Robot Devil/PBTT fight
>Celebs: Darla Dimple fight
>UR: Baron O'Beef Dip/Administrator fight
>Celebs: Xavier puzzle room
>UR: Elevator ride and Big Guys fight
>Show Dogbert getting called by Patrick and told to make as many obstacles as possible
>UR deal with Scruffy
>Celebs: Scratch/Grounder/Coconuts fight
>UR: Dogbert encounter, Varrick fight
>UR: Gift shop (Neron fight? I think it'd be a fitting way to cap off Squidward's redemption arc for the finale)
>Plucky vs Bill
>UR: Patrick fight

>>83933368
sounds pretty cool.

Does anyone remember what Ami and Yumi's Stands did? If I want to write the Badnik fight, I'll want to make it so that their Stands wouldn't just let them bypass it. (They're not in the docs, and Desustorage is down.)

>>83933537
one of them generates clouds that "marks" targets, allowing the user to turn herself and the marked target gaseous. I don't remember the other one, but it was a glove/gauntlet like Stand

>>83933741
>>83933537
Ami (pink)'s stand let her mark things and then phase through them in gaseous form.

Yumi (purple)'s stand let her mold shadows into different shapes to attack things with.

Neither was really used for battle purposes during the studio bit, they just used them to make special effects during a music video.

And desustorage isn't down for me, it's search is just broken, but after going through about 6 threads and not finding their stands listed with a ctrl+f of the their names, I'm left wondering where the hell those two are since I was there when it happened.

>>83933928
https://desustorage.org/co/thread/82693003/#q82694743
Here, supposedly. Nothing's showing for me.

>>83933945
Stand User: Yumi Yoshimura
Stand: 「PERFUME」
Appearance: A thickly built purple suit akin to hazmat gear, the helmet adorned with a single large pink eye like jewel as its sight point
Ability: 「PERFUME」 is a suit type Stand that is constantly emitting a stream of opaque purple cumulus clouds. Whenever the clouds come into contact with a surface, that point is 「STAINED」. When 「PERFUME」 itself comes into contact with a stained point, it and and the user are allowed to assume gaseous form and pass through the area as if it were a membrane and reach whatever is considered the 「INSIDE」 of what was passed through and shrink to fit if necessary.

Power: B
Speed: D
Range: E
Durability: C
Precision: A
Development: B

User: Ami Onuki
Stand: 「RAINBOW IN THE DARK」
Appearance: An ornate gauntlet/sleeve combination made of an extremely lustrous metal
Ability: When 「RAINBOW IN THE DARK」 activates, it carries the ability of manipulating the 「SHADOWS」 of anything within a 5 meter sphere of the user's hand so long as the gauntlet is under a light source. The shadows are collected into a central mass and then split into a number of monster-like 「SPECTERS」 dependent on the size of the shadows first absorbed. 「SPECTERS」 carry physical mass and carry the ability to damage things either directly or via attacks on the target's shadow if it still has one.

Power: C
Speed: D
Range: E
Durability: C
Precision: B
Development: B

>>83934110
Thanks hombre.

Minor suggestion: The noise that Steam Machine makes should be a steam train's chugging, which gets louder and faster the angrier Donald gets. When he's particularly mad and about to let loose a particularly strong attack, it flexes and gives off a train whistle WHOOT-WHOOOOO.
This could also happen when [STEAM MACHINE] evolves into [STEAM MACHINE EPISODE 2] before Donald jumps into hell.

Hey, whoever removed this from the doc,

>The Urban Rangers find another elevator (there’s no single elevator that goes from the ground floor to the top)
>Baron o'Beef Dip is in it when it arrives
>They immediately turn around, with blacked out eyes like in the JoJo iced tea scene, to take the stairs for the next part (leading to a battle on the stairs)

I was planning on them meeting the Barron for the third and final time with the blacked out eyes "nope" bit.

>>83935323
Ah. I wrote that, and was a fan of it, but I assumed we were replacing it with the second encounter.
To be honest, I'm not a fan of that one - I feel like having an uneventful ride with the Baron kind of ruins the humor in the fact that it's impossible to know whether it's really a demon, but what can you do. I think that if they were willing to ride with the Baron once, it's kind of silly for them to just walk away for the next one.

So I'll assume that Ami, Yumi and anyone else unmentioned are dealing with other security in the building.
[After Scruffy fight]
>Cut back down the tower to Max and the Celebrities. Yakko has used [CLIFFS OF DOVER] to form "smeared" barricades out of the floor, protecting against the rapid barrage of explosives from the Badniks. Since the barricades are smeared, they're pretty flimsy; Wakko is using [DON'T PASS ME BY] to add [VALUE] to their durability, but is quickly running out of coins (I figure it needs some time to recharge if it increases value by a lot in a short space of time), since each time it [DAMAGES] the barricades to add more durability, it becomes less able to damage them, and the high rate of fire from [CLUCK OLD HEN] is doing serious damage.
>Dot's firing on the Badniks with [PRISONER], but doing only a little damage due to her shots not taking root in their metal; some of them are sticking, but they're not draining any nutrients or power, and can be brushed off fairly easily.
>Max instructs Tanya, who's been attacking as best she can, to hold back; there's a lot of rocks flying, and if she's injured with a lot of blood out she could be seriously hurt.
>Max summons [I2I], but none of the Badniks are paying enough attention to him; Coconuts and Grounder are throwing rocks into [CLUCK OLD HEN]'s bucket, and Scratch is focusing fire on the barricades themselves. Max uses the [CASTAWAY] line to drag [CLUCK OLD HEN]'s barrel around towards him, alerting Scratch, who looks up and makes eye contact with [I2I].
>Scratch tries to go back to what he was doing, but rapidly realises [I2I]'s effects; he's forced to use Grounder as his spotter, keeping eye contact with Max's stand while Grounder tells him where to point his turret. Max tries to pull the turret away from the others, especially Tanya, but Scratch forces it back around.
cont.

>>83935720
>Dot, while firing, manages to hit one of the rocks out of the air, causing it to land and explode near the Badniks, distracting them and causing Scratch to suffer from Max's Stand. Realising the potential of this, she and Tanya start to try and knock the rocks out of the sky with their Stands. However, one of the rocks knocks [CLUCK OLD HEN]'s barrel upwards, causing it to fire over the barricades.
>Yakko quickly smears them further upwards, but they're easily broken by the explosions. One rock flies through a gap broken in the barricade, and it seems like it's going to hit Tanya, until Wakko - out of nowhere - punches it as hard as he can with [DON'T PASS ME BY].
>The punched rock, now with its explosiveness [VALUE] increased by everything Wakko could spare, hits [CLUCK OLD HEN] head on, causing a huge explosion and knocking out Scratch.
>The team gets up to move past the barricades, only for Grounder and Coconuts to still be standing. They ready [GROUND LEVEL] and [COCONUT GROVE] to fight the celebrities, and pause, as water drips down onto Grounder's nose.
>"Is that... water?"
>[STEAM MACHINE] crashes through the ceiling, landing on Grounder and pounding him into the floor. A raging Donald drops down after him.
>"BWAHWAHWAHWAHWAHWAH - Max!"
>Max and Donald have a heartfelt reunion
>Coconuts, sneaking away in the background, gets swatted by a smear from Yakko's Stand
If someone else with a bit more experience with the characters wants to spruce up the dialogue, be my guest.

>>83935684
We could just merge the two.

Have the UR "nope" out of it and then argue for a bit before begrudgingly entering the elevator.

>>83935836
>The UR >nope away
>Beat panel
>Beat panel
>The UR reluctantly trudge back into the elevator

>>83935720
Do you mean this is after the big guy fight or do we cut away from the UR the moment they see the porn shoot?

>>83936444
>>83933368

>>83935836
>>83936065
Baron also has a stand suggestion, but I can't remember it. We could include an elevator fight against him too.

>>83937356
are you sure isn't the Baron-like Stand from the AU?

>>83937407
Nope. There was a suggestion he be fought in this part. Nothing really came of it though.

>>83937356
Oh, for god's sake, no. That ruins the entire point of including him. It was shot down when it was first suggested.

>>83937476
Don't exaggerate. We discussed and considered it a bit before deciding it might be best if he was just a gag. But honestly that feels boring. Plus, how does he move around?

He could get a quick fight before they reach Patrick's office. It wouldn't ruin him or the "point" of his character because there isn't any. I don't know, but he just feels like wasted potential like this.

>>83937666
Either Dogbert or Scruffy's Stand could haul the statue around. Heck, maybe after being fired, Dogbert goes to the Baron and packs him inside his box.

>>83937787
Yes, this is along the lines of what I was thinking.

>>83937666
>>83937787
Disagreed, I guess. I do think revealing one way or another whether he's a demon or juat a creepy statue would devalue things. The mystery of how he moves around just adds to that.
I can't think of any way he could be fought that would make things more interesting.

>>83937958
This
>UR evading what's possibly just a creepy statue: funny
>UR evading a demon which they then have to fight: not particularly funny

Also, the entire reason that Patrick's shelf of objects exists is so that the Baron could show up there, with the idea being that he's either the representative object of a demon or just a random knickknack.
I dunno, man, taking a character whose entire point and humor lies in its ambiguity and clarifying it seems like a bad idea. We've got enough fights in this gauntlet without padding it out more.

>>83938326
Maybe we have it so after they nope away from the elevator and then come back, he's no longer in it.

But then I'd feel unsatisfied if he didn't make a third appearance being picked up by Dogbert on his way out.

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Somebody said we should use the Guilty Gears controls, mostly because the characters on the docs uses those, but I'm thinking of using this one? Any objections?

>>83939126
In an ideal world, we'd use the HFTF control scheme. Is that possible?

>>83935720
>>83935758

I suppose that leaves Xavier cowering in the corner or having a very enlightening talk with Coconuts before getting KO'd immediately.

>>83939244
not if non-stand users are more commonplace than youngJoseph was

>>83939042
have him be picked up by Dogbert. But put in a glass case with crucifixes on it.

Is it a cursed item? A Demon? A toy with a special carrying case?

>>83939244
The one who said we should use GG controls especifically said against that, but I'll look that up and hope we still can fit them in there. We will not be able to maintain that traditionality if the HFTF controls are too complex though.

>>83939344
Chaka, Khan, JoJo, Hol Horse... there's a few Heritage characters without active Stands. What's the issue?

>>83939470
The fact that Kuzco and the pillarmen are supposed to play like BlazBlue characters.

But you do have a point about almost any other character.

Jack would play almost the same as Chaka.
and Courage could literally be Iggy.

>>83939126
We'd have to go back and restructure most of the characters, then.
Out of all movesets created, Captain N seems out of place, seeing as he's a minor character. Should he be removed?

>>83941224
Part 6 characters shouldn't be brought up much at all since part 6 barely has anything in it anymore. We're kinda starting from scratch and all we have in the potential idea of Warden building the prison over some ancient ruins for some purpose. All he wants to do is imprison the whole world, but the means of doing that are ambiguous right now.

The possible plot outline had Dora/Hero arrive, get sent to regular prison, accidentally reveal her stand in an escape attempt, go to Pure Imagination, engage in Hunger Games, and then... Nothing much really. The Hunger Games thing is suggested to be because Pure Imagination gets stronger the more that are killed within it, and Warden wants it strong enough to engulf the world, and will further boost it with something in the ruins and some other stand possibly, but all of this is very tentative.

With everything being gutted, we don't even have a cast aside from Warden. Judge Doom and Dora are both possible set characters, but we don't know yet.

We'll work on it more when we get there.

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Where will this be released if it's ever finished and how will you guys not get bombarded with copyright infringement cases
I do support you guys, don't get me wrong but, how?

>>83941453
>Judge Doom
I thought it was Judge Dredd. I'm still not really sold on using a Judge as one of the Warden's lackeys.

With the archives all jumbled, I probably should go find the other ideas I had for part 6 so they don't get lost when the time comes to finally discuss them in earnest.

>>83941587
It's fanfiction.

>>83941603
Welp, now the archives no longer work for me either. I had ideas for the beginning of part 6 that I had posted at the end of a thread a while back after it had hit bump limit.

This is what I get for trusting the archives to still be there when I wanted to check something.

So anyway, our 4 big guys are:
-Monstroso
-Bane
-Kingpin
-Peter Potamus

Right?

>>83941788
Put them in the Part 6 doc.

>>83941788
Right I guess? Those are our Big Guys.

>>83941852
The doc for part 6 just looks like a mess to me. As much as I want to fix the damn thing so it actually looks like our other docs, I have the feeling it will lead to much bitching and moaning in the threads, and I really don't have time for that since we still have part 5 to finish.

>>83941870
OK, so what are their stands?

Do they all wear costumes to activate their stands? Monstroso puts on his devil horns, Bane puts a mask on top of his mask, Kingpin has his rhino costume, and Peter has a... yellow raincoat?

>>83941998
If Desu is up, Monstroso Stand is Justice for All, Bane's is in the doc and the Hippo's Stand is this one:
「SATIN SOUL」 (Barry White song)
Appearance: A vaguely humanoid stand composed of a translucent slime wearing armbands, bracers, collars, belts, etc. (Like pic related)
Abilities: A wearable Stand that can be placed in both allies and enemies. Once placed, the wearer immediately gains a hardened hide that increases his defense and is also slippery (the wearer looks like Dexter in the episode where he laminates himself), increasing its defense. Additionally, the Stand user can manipulate the density of the wearer, making him either very heavy or extremely light. This ability allows the user to hinder an enemy or increase an ally’s strength, or making an ally very agile.
Stats:
Power: ?
Speed: C
Durability: A
Range: C
Precision: C
Potential: B

>>83942074
Desustorage is fucked for me now. It was working earlier with only a broken search and no images, but now it's not connecting at all.

>(Like pic related)

I know better than the call that irony.

Once I know what all their stands are I'll start trying to pace out the fight, but I'd like >>83896841 's help when it comes to the pre-fight dialogue.

>>83942262
>(Like pic related)
If memory serves, the pic was from the yugioh card "humanoid slime"

>>83941453
We did establish that Superjail was made by Covert Government/Strickland foundation funding as a jail for Stand users.

We're keeping Dora. But her drug ties are firmer. She only has a recent Stand because she insisted on trying the stuff she was shipping. It just so happened she was also smuggling Jawbreakers. One of the final batches.

She gets caught and tossed in Jail.

From there it's pretty iffy. With early jail shenanigans turning into outright battles as she finds her way to Pure Imagination after starting fights.

Turns out PI is where unruly inmates go. The ones with "unpromising stands" get to stay as justification for the funding the Warden needs to keep the jail running.

Maybe we limit the Warden's stand to needing Stand users to die inside it specifically. It's not until he gets to a certain point that any death will do.

Judge Dredd fits here. Hell, if we replaced Jail bots with Mechanismos it'd be perfect.

I again mention the neat contrast in political idealogues in villains between Part 6 and 7.

Mr. Nobody and The Warden make great foils to each other. I so want them to have banter in the fighting game.

>>83942262
Sure thing.

What do you have in mind?

>>83943221
I've been having trouble painting the picture in my mind, so this is what I've come up with so far:

>The UR exit the elevator, the floor they've been forced to stop on is dark
>In the distance they can hear grunting, moaning, and roaring
>The UR step out of the elevator just as it drops, crashing down to floors below and the doors slam together
>They proceed with caution to the where they hear the noises coming from
>The UR peer around a corner and see two men doing... something (we should avoid showing what's happening here for the "what if" miracle this ever becomes drawn) with a third holding a mic boon and a fourth big guy working a camera
>Rolf is first to see this and says nothing
>Dexter looks around the corner, then takes his glasses off
>Squidward looks and we can't really tell what he's emoting since he always has his handsome face on
>Taffy looks and notes to himself "I'm glad none of the others are here to see this"
>Finally Cartman looks and says "Ahh, sick, what are they doing?"
>Rolf says "Are you so simple? They are preforming the tradition wrestling moves of the old country. Look. The thorny lion fish maneuver being evaded by the garden eel stream. Rolf does not recognize the equipment though."
>Cartman doesn't buy this
>One of the big guys whisper yells "Quiet on set." while the others finish
>They all erect themselves and they are all very large, and they begin to glow with stand power
>Cartman interject "No, this is not OK, pause. Pause! What the fuck? No, seriously, what the fuck?"
>Monstroso speaks "Sometimes the office gets a bit too boring and, well, we can't be boring here, that'd put our lives in danger."
>One of the others chimes in "So we do porn to appease the demons."
>Cartman is still confused and angry looking
>"It's not always gay porn, the girls have today off since we're shooting 'Anal Brackets XV: Insertion Taxation, the Tax Return."
cont, but I don't have much else to add to it right now.

>>83943937
It's here they should rattle off some of their other work, them making note of the ones with girls in the pictures, then end with one of them saying it makes them a shit load of extra money.
The fact they do this for money should be enough to piss off Cartman, but not enough to make his stand take its hood off.

Then the fighting starts I guess.

>>83943937
Demongo probably puts on his little demon horns and says "You have to understand that working with a devil as CEO places some... burden on your accounting table. Sure if you produce well done labor, if counts towards keeping the demon satisfied, but eh... it's not enough. Having your salary and job depend on the appeasement of a demon leads to some... kinky problems."

Here is where Bane comes in, butting on the mask and doing the Belt Pose. "In the best case scenario, you get fired. In the worst case scenario, your boss decides to balance out your debt by having... fun. It's the sad side effect of being a current asset here. We've already lost one of our own in this way."

Here we see MotoMoto in an oiled painting with the words, "For you forever" engraved on a gold plate."

Here the other hippo says, "we did 'Debbie clears her T-Bills (and gets spitroasted by two BIG hippos)' together." He sheds a tear.

Dexter says, "I do not vant to ashk, but, who vas Debbie?"

Bane sighs, runs his hand over his mask and says "Darla Dimple, a total diva".
Elsewhere....

We finish up the Darla fight.
Maybe she offs Xavier and we get the reveal that he was actually an angel all along when he ascends to heaven.

>>83944669
>Demongo
He was moved to the stock market. I think you meant Monstroso.

The Darla fight was also already concluded before this encounter, Xavier met up with Max's group after that on a higher floor. Not sure where Xavier is in >>83935720 >>83935758 , but he's supposed to be with them by then.

>>83944669
>Debbie clears her T-Bills (and gets spitroasted by two BIG hippos)
inb4 /tv/ makes a porno out of this

Here is a random idea for the fight:
>Peter Potamus: Well, since it looks like we are gonna have some more action, let me get...my lube
>He pulls a weird looking bottle from somewhere
>The UR expect an attack from the bottle, so Taffy turns it into cheese
>The hippo squeezes the cheesed bottle anyway, and a strange fluid splashes all over him while moaning
>Peter Potamus is now coated in a transparent layer, with armbands, necklaces and stuff
>Dexter: That's it your Stand's ability, getting laminated? I did that once in my lab, no big deal.
>Peter: and I betcha you enjoyed it as much as I am enjoying it right now
>Dexter just reels in disgust

>>83945009
Yep, this is the level I can't seem to get on, which is why I've been having so much trouble with thinking this fight out... that and the fact that we didn't have the big guys members set until this thread.

>>83945009
and another idea
>Dexter looks away, trying to avoid watching the spectacle
>He Notices an Antonio Banderas Blowup Doll and begrudgingly wraps his Stand around it to fight.

>>83947275
The problem is its super lubed up so his Stand can barely work properly.

>>83947275
Keep 'em coming. I'd like this fight to be more of a group effort than to attempt it solo.

>>83947637
Still can't get into the archive, so I can't check what's Monstroso Stand.

>Bane managed to sting Cartman with one of his Stand's darts and it's feeding on Catman's anger.
>It grows until a certain point after Bane teased Cartman about his fatness, but still hasn't reached its climax
>Cartman yells something about respecting his authoritah
>Bane: Oh, but I respect you
>Cartman is puzzled: Wait, you respect me?
>Bane: I respect you and I desire you!
>This drives Cartman mad, causing Bane's Stand to hulk up to the max
Also, if somehow they manage to keep Cartman in check, Bane probably fires a dart at Peter and makes his Stand feed on the excitement that the hippo got from being coated in his Stand.
At this point I'm pretty sure I'm writing some weird-ass porno instead of a fight scene

>>83948044
>At this point I'm pretty sure I'm writing some weird-ass porno instead of a fight scene.
After the "fight", we get this line.
>Cartman: "Let's all agree to never tell anybody about the the fucked up shit we were just part of"
>Everyone else: "Agreed"

>>83947275
>Antonio Banderas
Why though?

Why not Lionel Hutz or Adam West or something?

>>83947637
>Rolf is fistfighting Kingpin, who doesn't appear to have a Stand
>Kingpin's kind of clumsy and stumbling around a lot, so Rolf's getting more hits in even if they don't hurt much
>"To a master of Old Country wrestling like Rolf, your movements are in slow motion!"
>Kingpin ignores this, but starts grunting, clearly being riled up. His swings get wilder and wilder, and he's punching holes in the walls and floor.
>Rolf manages to knock him onto his ass, where he lets out a roar, and dives into a nearby closet. Rolf summons Revolving Doors to make a door into the closet, only for Kingpin to burst out in a skintight rhino-skin suit.
>"BRING ME MY HORN! THIS CHILD MUST PAY!"

>>83948933
At one point Rhinopin embeds Rolf in a wall.
>"Never again will Rolf store house keys in his trouser pockets."

>>83948044
>"You've impressed me, Cartman. I'm inclined to offer you a job here."
>"What? You want me to do gay porn?"
>"Certainly! After all, you're a big guy."
>"But not for you!"

>>83950016
Cartman should be unsettled by the fact that Bane's Stand keeps saying "J U I C Y." in a really deep voice.

Who's the wiseguy that made a thread on 2x4/co/?

Desu's still down. Does anyone remember what Scruffy and Varrick's Stands did?

>>83952066
Varrick's is
>Handlebars
>User is able to touch, hold, and manipulate gases and liquids as though they were malleable solids.
We really need to update the docs.

>>83948923
Because in one episode of South Park there was an Antonio Banderas doll and Cartman thought it was his Christmas gift

>>83952066
Scruffy's is this one:
「DREAM THEATER」 (American Band)
Appearance: A skinny avian humanoid (like the skeksis in Dark Crystal or the kroot in WH40K) with a sickly and pale skin, long arms with sharp claws and a fanged beak, its lower body is composed of a bunch of blueprints. It usually remains submerged on the walls from the waist down, generating a purple vortex around it.
Abilities: The Stand can bind itself to a building, allowing it to traverse through it and keep the entire structure under surveillance. While bound to the building it can manipulate any inanimate object that belongs to said building, like chairs, doors, etc., using them to attack and hinder intruders (breaking windows close to them or immobilizing an elevator).
Whenever someone opens a door inside the building, 「DREAM THEATER」can change the room at the other side of that door, allowing him to lure opponents into traps and rooms with allied Stand users.
Stats:
Power: E
Speed: C
Durability: E
Range: Varies
Precision: B
Potential: C

>>83948044
We might have to make up a new one for Monstroso. I don't even recall us actually coming up with one for him outside of the name.

>>83949472
Like smashes him through a wall before he could make a door to soften the impact?

Quick writeup for Kingpin's.
User: Wilson Fisk, aka The Kingpin, aka The Rhino
Stand:「RHINO SKIN」 - When Fisk wears any costume with a "horn" on the forehead, he will form a vortex of air to pull things and people in front of him when he runs. The kinetic energy dispensed on impact from his charging is also enhanced by the Stand.

>>83954375
Oh, and Peter Potamus will likely use his own Stand to slide gracefully over to Kingpin with the horn helmet.

>>83953723
Monstroso got Demongo's original stand suggestion, but I have no idea what that was since it was never relevant when it came time to write the parts.

Outside of that, I think that's all that was ever said about Monstroso's stand.

>>83955110
It was something about writing laws that compelled his targets to obey them, if the said targets are Stand users, they can resist them, but that allows Monstroso to retaliate with [legal actions]. there was the issue about defining what those Legal actions could be.

>>83956038
Sounds like it's in need of a re-write.

I guess we'll have to get their stands all sorted before we can proceed with the fighting.

>>83957324
Quite.
In the meantime, here's something for after the Big Guys fight.
>Cut up to Dogbert's office
>Dogbert's writing something, Scruffy is sweeping the floor. The phone rings.
>Dogbert answers it. "Hello?"
>"Dogbert. These intruders are fighting off everything in the tower that we're throwing at them. The microphone broke which means Customer Service is down, the nose picker's broken which means Legal is down..."
>"I keep telling you, Patrick, it's not a -"
>"Save it! I need you and your lackey to deal with them, or you're both fired." There's a click as Patrick hangs up.
>Scruffy leans on his broom. "So. What's the plan?" Dream Theater emerges from the wall behind him.
>"The "plan" is you shut up and do exactly what I tell you. Now, let's see..."

>The UR are walking away from another fight, with the staff of Mr. Meaty, who are all seen unconscious.
>Taffy: "What is with all the meat in this place? How many fast food stops does one tower need?"
>Rolf: "A healthy diet of much cook-ed meat is the staple food of the Old Country diet, mouse-child. All God's creatures make the hard worker strong when fresh off the grill, yes?"
Aaand I'm no good with traps, so I'm not sure what would work here, but I'm thinking that Scruffy basically traps them in an infinite loop of rooms with Dream Theater.
Also, when Dogbert gets the call telling him he's fired, it should go like this.
>"They've gone straight through the traps you set up, Dogbert. You've failed. You and -" There's a pause.
>Scruffy leans over to the phone. "Scruffy. The janitor."
>"...The two of you are fired!"

>>83958377
It should be like that Xavier episode where he starts off in a room of doors.and gets put in different scenarios. But even if they die. They return to the room.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gfja7ofOhxg

To get out Taffy probably looks at the ceiling and realizes there's an escape hatch.

>>83958788
I was actually thinking that they'd realise that it's the doors being messed with and start breaking them down or through the walls next to them, since Scruffy's Stand specifically affects the doors.
An escape hatch seems kind of like an easy out.

>>83958377
Customer Services didn't even get a scene in Patrick's office.

I think the electric nose picker breaking is what should tip Patrick off to how high they've gotten in the tower.

>>83959000
Still, it's a department, so I think we can assume it had an item. I just needed something to pad that sentence out with, since it didn't flow right otherwise, and this way it's a vibe of "they're taking out EVERYTHING" rather than just "they've taken out the Big Guys".

>>83959037
If Customer Service got an item, I'd say it be a brochure for a cruise or something. Mainly because I always see those things lined up whenever I go to Customer Service.

Could also be a phone or a stress toy thing, or do we have that already?

>>83960045
The phone is Telephone Avatar, and I mean that he IS the phone.

And speaking of TA, it feels like we've been depicting him as some voiceless sort of horror.
When it comes time for him to finally make a proper appearance, we will need to come up with lines for him.

>>83960045
The Administrator is a chain-smoker, so it could be a pack of cigarettes. Phone would be stepping on the Avatar's toes.

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>>83960198
He talks in Doom Patrol, but I'm not sure if he actually speaks or just replays phone calls (like bumblebee in bayformers)

>>83960343
Imagine if some of the words he plays back are in Toph's voice just to mock Rolf.

>>83958377
>Patrick: That was your plan? making them run in circles?
>Dogbert: It's a devilishly complex mind trap meant to shatter the weak
>Patrick: No, it was stupid!
>Dogbert: It was the Janitor's idea

>>83963199
Perfect.
Make it so that the room they end up in is actually a lot closer to the top of the tower than they were, because Scruffy randomly picked rooms that they hadn't yet reached to use for the trap.
>>83960343
The Avatar speaking for the first time should be an "oh fuck" moment, whether we use playback or not.

>>83963376
>>83961843

He starts off using Toph's voice. We do a green box color for the text.

This reveals how long the TA had been with them.

>>83963376
That, or he decides to make the next room the UR enter be the gift shop, as a parting gift to his former boss.

>>83951539
Did anyone realize the tsundere faggots on 23chan/co/ vandalized the docs just like our fellow /a/utists?

>>83964366
That'd be good.

The gift shop is where Patrick gets all of his less exotic knick-knacks.

>>83964366
He does that after being fired, but before they fire him he accidentally bumps them up much closer to Dogbert's office.
>>83964846
Fantastic. Do you mind reverting it? I can't right now.

Anyway. I think right now, we need to work on Monstroso's Stand and get some ideas going for Varrick's fight.
I need sleep, so I'll polish the Scruffy and Dogbert stuff when I wake up.

>>83964846
damn it.

The worst part is those guys consistently make a beeline for our worst Stands to call this project shit.

Half the time those Stands never got used at all.

>>83964846
I've been busy all day, so I haven't check any of the docs since the last update I made to doc 5 some 20 hours ago.

>>83965056
Maybe his stand is like a pen or something. He can use it to write down "laws" that must be obeyed as well as penalties for disobeying them?

If the penalty is too severe for the law, then his stand won't ratify it.

>>83965130
Is a pen and a judge's mallet, if memory serves (damn storage is still down)

>>83965368
There's a new archive, but the name choice for it is probably word filtered.

Just google desustorage to find their twitter feed and it's the top tweet there.

>「JUSTICE FOR ALL」 (Metallica album)
>Appearance: A heavily ornate fountain pen and judge mallet.
>Abilities: The pen of 「JUSTICE FOR ALL」 allows the user to quickly write down a legal order in a special demonic parchment with the seal of the WB. Once the user proclaims out loud the order and smacks the mallet, anyone in the surroundings that is aware of the order will be compelled to obey it. Stronger willed individuals, like Stand users, are able to directly defy these orders, however this allows the Stand User to conduct 「Legal actions」 against the lawbreakers, with a second smack of the mallet. The full scope of these 「Legal actions」 is unknown but the user's favourite method is summoning a squad of demonic soldiers (like the ones from Ugly Americans) to dispatch the offenders.
>Weaknesses: In order for the writs to have any effect they must be written in the special parchments, requiring the user to carry around a stock of these. The Stand User and his allies are also subject to the orders created, so it needs to carefully think all the consequences that may derive from each order.

Needs a re-write.

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>>83964366
Oh, wait a minute. There's still Varrick to deal with before the gift shop, unless we want to just put Varrick in the gift shop.

What if Xavier kills himself during the demons arc to open up a portal into hell for Donald to jump through?

>>83967499
we haven't figured yet how Donald ended in hell, so that's a possibility

>>83945009
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>>83947275
>It's lubed up and hard to control, but that makes it the perfect counter to Peter
>Taffy is assisting by turning as much of the lube as possible into cheese to keep the place from becoming a slippery mess

>Squidward has his tentacles full grappling with Bane while Cartman contends with his stand
>>83950016
>Just then Peter collies with Bane, sending the two of them into a compromising position with Squidward
>Rolf has gotten himself out of the wall and begins making use of his revolving doors to get out of Kingpin's path when he starts charging

>Monstroso has been busy writing things down with his fancy pen on a creep piece of paper until he slams a mallet down, decreeing that if they fight, they must fight while on camera
>Everyone is physically compelled onto the set while Monstroso begins filming it
>He makes various decrees while this is happening to make it increasingly gayer
>Before slamming the mallet down on another decree, Taffy turns the paper into cheese and it fails to take effect
>Taffy then turns the camera into cheese and causes a cheese fist to form out of the lens and punch Monstroso in the eye

>Dexter has figured something out and makes his stand (still wrapped around the sex doll) pose suggestively
>Peter leaps into the air to dive on it, then Dexter releases it from his stand at the last second so he won't take damage as Peter crashes through the floor, and the floor below
>Taffy uses all the liquid cheese still everywhere to trip up Bane and cause him to fall down the hole as well

>Kingpin begins charging Rolf again who this time places a trapdoor between them, causing Kingpin to get comically stuck before Rolf beats on him hard enough to break his horn
>Squidward has gotten a hold of the camera in all of this and ends the fight with a "Smile for the camera!" before smashing it over Monstroso's head and then kicking him down the hole for good measure
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