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Amber is a crazy bitch
In other news, I've been banned from the DOA wiki:
http://walkypedia.wikia.com/wiki/Thread:3598
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>>83367709
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Amber falls on both of them, killing them instantly.
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>>83441327

Wow people were talking about me in that thread.
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>>83442417
ARE YOU BECKY?!
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>>83442579

n-no I'm not becky

LESBIANLESBIANLESBIANLESBIANLESBIANLESBIANLESBIANLESBIANLESBIANLESBIANLESBIANLESBIAN
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>>83442601
We're all Becky Anon

Say it with me

I am Becky, Lesbian and Proud.

I AM BECKY, LESBIAN AND PROUD

I

AM

BECKY

LESBIAN

AND

PROUD

When everyone is Becky, no one is
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>>83442878
Fuck you, Becky, I love God and Mary!
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>>83443790
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>>83443569
Why not both? The bible's pretty much fine with lesbians.
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Fuck off you cocksuckers

Nobody wants to read this shit
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It irritates me that Willis can earn so much money and attention, while still not being able to effectively write a villain character. He should be seeing the treatment of Mary as a learning experience, and hell, even the reaction to Toedad as a learning experience. Maybe a chance to see, 'hey, maybe all my villains don't need to be one-dimensional psychopaths', or, 'hey, maybe my villain is more sympathetic than my designated hero'.

But, hey, he's happy keeping his comic the illustrated form of Buzzfeed, so, whatever earns him cash.
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>>83443340
Wanted to give Carl a nice bulge, but couldn't get it to look right
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>>83443862
Nobody wants to see a villain whose politics they disagree with who isn't a baby-devouring psychopath. If you make them nuanced then they might come off as sympathetic, and then people might switch to the wrong side.
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>>83443876
Way too feminine. Now she just looks like a flat tomboy.
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One idea that was floated in the last thread that I thought was really interesting was the idea of doing a series of videos on DoA chronologically. Since the timeline is super fucked up, I think a half-decent narrator listing off every stupid thing that happens each day would be pretty amusing.

You could also keep running tallies like for "racism" or "times mary gets shat on" and stuff.

I think it'd be a good way of mocking the absurdity of it without being labelled as just hateful or mean-spirited, and youtube's viewers are more fluid than stratified tumblr and twitter cliques. As long as you keep it light-hearted and friendly at first, of course.
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>>83443888
>mfw I decide the politics of my villains by closing my eyes and picking from a list of political ideologies on a .txt file

That way, no one can be offended, and I get a varied, colorful series of villains.
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>>83442878
Who lives in her own world which no one can see
BIG DYKE BECKY
Homeless and shouty, self-absorbed is she
BIG DYKE BECKY
If you are an autist who thinks she's your match
BIG DYKE BECKY
She'll run off and dump you chasing her best friend's snatch
BIG DYKE BECKY

BIG DYKE BECKY
BIG DYKE BECKY
BIG DYKE BECKYYYYYYYYY
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>>83443909
Fixed?
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>>83443888
It kills Willis that people still see Mary as sympathetic. He tries to shrug it off by saying it proves what bigots everyone is because they didn't want to stone Mary as soon as she misgendered Carla.
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>>83444078
In a pretty lazy way, but I suppose so. You really need to work on the shape of her face, though. Look at the faces of the other male characters, like Walky, and try to match them a bit better.

Remember, this is why people say Carla isn't drawn well. She doesn't look like someone who's transitioned, even with the help of millionaire parents - she looks like she was born female.
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>>83443876
If this was /qcg/ they would've given her a giant cartoon dick.
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>>83443876
>>83444078
Try changing his clothes, make him a nice Christian man in a sweater, pants and a little cross necklace.
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>>83444150
With some of his male characters, Willis uses a more square jaw, and generally a longer face. Joe (Square Jaw), Danny and Jason (An Oval, longer than the female faces). However, with some characters he uses the more flattened round face that his females generally have, most notably Walky himself, though I guess that is supposed to be because he is Sal's Twin (even though, in real life male/female twins stop looking exactly like each other after puberty, generally, it's obvious they are still related though)

So, Carl can be a femme-boy. I'm okay with that.
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>>83444114
I didn't see Mary as sympathetic since she was kind of a passive aggressive bitch, but Carla sure as hell isn't sympathetic either she's a super cunt.
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>>83444061
>queefwhistle.mp3

>>83444114
In attempting to make villainous characters with a clear agenda of hatred, Willis accidentally makes a morally gray area of conflict.

Somebody in a previous thread compared it to Chuck Asay making arguments where the concept was that "the sheer thought of X alone" was enough to support one side or another.
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>>83444256
I get you don't want to use her female name, but it's unlikely that her birth name was Carl. People don't often go with a female version of their birth name when they transition.
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Every time I go to /co/ I see these threads around and the strips themselves always seem to be really meanspirited and full of assholes. What the hell is this Willis' guy's problem?
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>>83443340
Is this one of those trick answer things where Carla is already a real boy because you can't change chromosomes?
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>>83444404
He's a really shitty webcomic artist who thinks he's God's gift to social justice when in actuality he's gleefully making his side look batshit.
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>>83444404
He has psychological issues stemming from his childhood that become blatant upon reading his comics. Recurring themes include hypocrisy within religious people, parental abuse towards their children, and good old-fashioned ignoring an alternative point of view in favor of strawmanning an argument.
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>>83443808
I thought the cross on her chest was a loss at first. I need a break
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>>83444229
MSPaint can only do so much, get a real drawfag in here who can ape Willis' style

>>83444204
I guess just the head sticking out in the last one wasn't obvious enough?
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>>83444114

He's actually flown off the handle about it in the comments multiple times, talking about how unambiguously evil people like Mary are and how treating Carla's actions as even slightly disproportionate (or criticizing them in any way) is tantamount to going out and punching a transwoman in the face.

It's so bizarre. I'm liberal as shit, I get told to go back to hugboxes by newfags who don't even know there used to be an /l/ board, I had a transwoman bridesmaid at my wedding. But even I think Willis is out of his fucking mind. At a certain point of torment people just snap, and while it's still bad and should be framed as bad, you can't simply expect instant hatred for one character who said something mean and one hundred percent forgiveness for another who directly tormented the first character for no reason for hours.

People like Willis are why it's so hard to talk about racism, homophobia, any kind of -ism, because they want to pretend every single racist or homophobe or -ist is an irredeemable monster as opposed to a human being who fucked something up. He's why anyone who does squinty "Asian" eyes in a fun photo explodes when you suggest that's kinda racist, he's why your grandfather thinks he can't be uncomfortable with gay people without two burly bikers storming into his apartment and fucking on the crudenza.
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>>83445229
It takes a special kind of stupid to so thoroughly piss off both liberals and conservatives
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>>83443956
Each video would have to be about each in-comic day, and talk about all of the subplots in order (so you don't go from Joyce and Sara to Walky and Dorothy to Danny and Amber to Sal to Walky and Dorothy to Joyce and Sara back to Danny and Amber. I'm sure you get my point).
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>>83444588
Also one that I hadn't noticed until recently but which bodes really well for his future as a husband and father: using pregnancy as a way to salvage relationship problems.
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>>83443956
The "Day 1" video would be an hour long.
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>>83445229
i feel ya, but remember willis is a deeply emotionally unstable man. all his actions are basically to rationalize that he is not a mess.
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>>83445229
>they want to pretend every single racist or homophobe or -ist is an irredeemable monster
It's easier to pretend you're a crusader for an ultimate good if you paint your enemies as an ultimate evil.
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>>83446042
Ah yes. Because suddenly having responsiblity for a tiny helpless poop factory that won't stop crying fixes everything
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>>83445820
Because, as much as Willis would like to disagree, he doesn't give a fuck about gay people.

I really just think he hates conservatives so much, he puts gay people in his comics to spite them. Looking at every queer character he's done, he never really gives them any serious development or personality, even by his scant standards of development and personality.

I find it ironic that the two biggest arcs about queer people, both revolve more around an evul right-wing stereotype that harasses the poor faggot, than said queer.

Gay people in Willis' comics have two purposes:

1. To make Willis look good
2. To make Willis enemies look bad, in the form of sinister, angry, Limbaugh-listening homophobes that target the gay people, who are good people because they're not republican.

It's really incredible that Willis has managed to create an incredible psychoanalysis of himself, when he just wanted to make a dumb, politically motivated college comic. DoA become 100x better when you see it as the Author's rage against his conservative parents, and him trying to fight for left-wing causes the only way he knows how, through being an annoying fucking crusader.
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>>83446316
I feel bad that he was so fucked up as a kid that he never masturbated til college. However that doesn't excuse him from criticism, or the fact that his comic is doing more harm than good. Just look at these threads, it's just playing up the idea that transwomen are insane people who want to play the victim card to get whatever they want. That isn't helpful for anyone.
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>>83446459
well, nobody can say damaged goods applies only to women.
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>>83446459

I just think dude needs to see a therapist. which to be fair I say about everyone but c'mon
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>>83446422

His Ethan/Danny arc's probably the only healthy queer writing I've ever seen him do, and it's probably only because it's always been a peripheral thing. I wouldn't be surprised if their homophobic parents show up the moment they decide to date.
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>>83441308
For someone who hates frank miller so much it sure does seem like he wants to be him.

And it sure does seem like he's bad at it.
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This is the comic with the ridiculous anti-religious strawmans, right? Like with the Dad what with the shotgun?
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>>83446566
WHORESWHORESWHORES
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>>83446580
Yeah, Willis dun fucked up, though, and made his newest religious crusader genuinely sympathetic by accident.

>>83446501
Was that directed at me?

Also, was that from Roomies, or DoA? Are we supposed to agree with her, or not agree with her? Willis confuses me.
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>>83446580
I have never seen a character in this comic who wasn't a strawman character.
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>>83446580
Yeah, you're in the right place. Welcome to hell, have a handbasket.
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>>83446656
>Was that directed at me?
No, that pic was relating to what you said about Willis, and it was from DoA.
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>>83446656
So this is one of those "Let's read to watch it burn and see how shitty it can get lolcows" that /co/ seems to like right?
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>>83446501
what was the context for this? How was Mary wrong?
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>>83446697
Exactly.
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>>83446735
I don't know the context, and after being banned from walkypedia, I'm not sure i really care to find out.
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>>83446491
Oh no he definitely needs to see a therapist, the guy is all sorts of repressed and self hating.
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>>83446766
He doesn't believe in it. He distrusts doctors too.
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>>83446751
>>83446735
The context was Mary was giving the DA shit for supporting Carla for being trans.
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>>83446687
Haha, my bad. I felt like I was getting to that point when I posted that.

>>83446697
Yeah, pretty much. Sometimes people produce OC of the antagonists, like writing Toedad (the crazy guy with a shotgun) as a PTSD-scarred veteran in the middle of a nervous breakdown, and there's been a ton of art and OC of Mary, because she's cute and way more sympathetic, and was only an 'antagonist' because she responded to someone who happened to be trans being a huge cunt to her.

I don't keep up with it much, but sometimes it's fun to lurk in these threads.
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>>83446656
>>83446735
>>83446751
The context is Mary just saw Ruth physically struggling to be nice to people. This comment came after Ruth talked to that character who is just Willis with blue hair. Apparently she's a lesbian too (which brings the count up to what, 8?)

Mary isn't wrong, but we're supposed to think she is because she says "the queers".
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>>83446810

i'm so conflicted on this because looking at history i totally understand a distrust of doctors and establishment but on the other hand you won't get any better alone.
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>>83446810
I remember Roz tried to refer Joyce to a therapist earlier after the whole rape thing. If that's some shitty lead in to an anti-therapy story I will probably actually be mad at this comic.
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>>83446810
So it's one of those cases, my dad's like that even though mental illness runs in our family. Still he just thinks it's freud nonsense.
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>>83446735
She didn't realize Ruth was in an abusive relationship with the woman she sexually assaulted, she thought she was just constantly intoxicated. Which is kind of funny, given that she's perceptive enough to tell Carla is trans without ever being told that.
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I couldn't tell if Mary misunderstood Billy and Ruth's relationship, like she thought they just got drunk all day together, or Willis was unconsciously skewering himself in the most brutal fashion for his own hypocrisy.
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>>83446829
>Because she says "the queers"
Has willis ever even interacted with gay people? I'm a bisexual dude with a lot of gay friends and everyone calls each other much worse shit then "queer". And no one bats a fucking eye.

Is Willis a bigger faggot then actual dick suckers ?
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>>83446936
You can't- that's THEIR WORD! It's THEIRS!
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Well, it looks like Sal's probably going to be mildly inconvenienced, before having a plot contrivance make Amber look even crazier.

To make up for this big load of nothing, here's something from last thread made by an awesome Anon.

Kuruma Hero Shinjin:

Animated:
>Kuruma Hero Shinjin Prologue: Six episode OVA used to determine if the show was marketable
>Kuruma Hero Shinjin: 78 episode tv series and arguably the most popular part of the franchise
>Kuruma Hero Shinjin: The Movie: Retelling of the first season
>Kuruma Hero Shinjin: Ignition: Four episode OVA based on unused concepts that forms an alternate universe
>Kuruma Hero Shinjin: 52 episode tv series that is a direct continuation of the first series but is usually considered a distinct entry by the fandom due to the three year break in production between the shows
>Kuruma Hero Shinjin Eternal: Movie retelling the second series

Print adaptations:
>Kuruma Hero Shinjin: manga series that covers the first series though its plot diverges rougly around episode 55
>Kuruma Hero Daisuke: manga series following the story of a minor character from the first OVA
>Kuruma Hero Shinjin: The Long Road Home: four book light novel series that is basically a shoujo version of the story. Shares little in common other than the characters and basic plot setup

Sequels:
>Kuruma Hero Shinjin the Second: Regear: 26 episode tv series that is the infamous sequel to the franchise, widely panned for arbitrary personality changes, replacement of established characters with new ones, cheap animation, and poor CGI
>Mechanic Wendy: manga series focused on the titular character that serves as an interquel and sequel to the second series

Adaptations:
>Ultracar: 65 episode redub for American television
>Ultra Car: low-budget live action pilot, never aired. Only the theme sequence and toy concepts have been made public.
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>>83447424
Pretty good
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>>83444590
Someone should do a daisy Duke cut off shorts.

Kind of want to see some slutty Mary edits but part of me feels like that's a sin.
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>>83447424
I always wanted Kuruma Hero Shinjin: Ignition to be expanded upon. The alternate universe could have easily carried its own series.
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>>83446735
The context was people were telling Willis this, and so he had to put their comment in the mouth of his villain so he didn't have to refute it.
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There was also the time Willis and his buddies went all crusader on the TFWiki over comments about female transformers and misogyny which is hysterical when anyone brings up the misogynistic way Mary is treated.
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>>83441308
Credit where's it's due, I like how the speech bubble hid what'sherface in the first panel.
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>>83448137
It's OK to gaslight a woman if she's a bigot, though. They're fair game for anything.
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>>83448137

i keep staring at this waiting for it to make sense.
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>>83447599
>Kind of want to see some slutty Mary edits but part of me feels like that's a sin.
nah man.
She needs some sexy representation.
There's literally zero pics of her on rule34.
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>>83447599
Mary is not for sexual!!!
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>>83448460
i beg to differ
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>>83448503
Noooo! Not my perfect puritan waifu
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>>83448503
Oh that's Mary first time I thought it was a not colored in Sal because the song.

Anyways I'm throw something else out. I think we should make some submissive Joyce edits. Ballgame, handcuffs, ect. I think we are all past Joyce is not for sexual phase. Joyce is supposed to be coming out and finding herself in college, but it feels like she is in Stockholm lesbian relationship with the universe.
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>>83447617
I don't know, the OVA writers didn't really seem to be willing to expand their story much so it was running pretty thin on plot by the last episode. Some of the later plot in the manga lines up with Ignition, the writer of the manga worked on Ignition, so you could probably build on that with a little of the stuff that later went unused from Prologue.

The Long Road Home is a much more developed AU and if you haven't I suggest giving it a read. Be warned though, it is a character drama with very few action sequences.

>>83447424
I want full Toedad out of the Sal-Amber War.
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>>83448503
They're opposites in a different way.
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>>83448667
If you really wanted to make DW shit himself in apoplectic rage, you could depict her with the guy who drugged her.
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>>83448250
To be fair, that's not all of it. You can read the whole thing here, but that's the best part.

http://tfwiki.net/wiki/Talk:Ruined_FOREVER

This basic gist was the page was a joke commenting on all the thing TFfans say will ruin Transformers. Willis plunked a comment about women in there and some people questioned whether it was a good idea since it was bound to bring heated discussion and Willis and some others went all indignant and sucked the fun out of everything.
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>>83448838
That'd be absolutely perfect. Can we please get a drawfag onto this?
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>>83449167
>Joyce approaches the guy who drugged her, glaring down at him
You know...
>She then grabs him, pulling him into a tight hug and looking into his eyes
You could have just asked. <3

lame-ass writing but you get the idea
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>>83449434
>Guy who drugged Joyce (seriously, what's his name?) walks up to her in the courtyard
"Hey, Joyce! Look, I'm sorry about what happened, at that party. Just, you're so cute, and I didn't know how to tell you. I thought maybe if you ended not feeling well, and I helped you back to your dorm, you would have thought I was a nice guy, and would have been interested in dating me...D-do you wanna go get a slice of pizza with me, sometime?"
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>>83442878
I argued with my gf about how it's possible that Becky being a lesbian could be a cry for attention. There is some proof against it, but what do you anons think?
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>>83449788
I think it's pretty shitty she came out as a lesbian and straight up assumed her friend was gay and wanted to be together.

In that strip, Joyce tells her straight up and Becky has a hard time processing that Joyce doesn't want anything to do in her pants.
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>>83448197
I didn't even notice her. I think it'd help if panel 2's bubble were at the top of the panel, so that way your eyes are drawn back up there.
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>>83450011
Yeah, that was bad. I took it as Becky had no other friends but Joyce, and because she loved her the most, she confused it with sexual feelings.

I don't care if Becky is actually gay. But it's really hard to believe it when you need to constantly convince everyone you are.
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>>83450106
Suddenly I want to see a remix of that one clip of the black guy at the evangelical church who's handed a microphone and proclaims "I'm not gay anymore!"
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>>83441308
Jesus fuck, Venom. I remind you you've been doing this for like 2 weeks?
How has no one freaked out at how far gone she's gotten so quickly? this isn't a gradual slip, this is a full psychotic break.
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>>83443569
>>83443790
>>83443808
Maaa-ha-ha-haaan dat's good vultin'!

>>83444632
At least one of the VULT pictures *has* been posted with the small crosses switched out for lossrune marks, so you're not alone.
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>>83450758
Willy is really, really bad at pacing.
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>>83450758
>>83450862
By November, the entire school will have resorted to cannibalism.
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>>83441308
how did she get up there without being noticed?
sal has been there since she got all buttmad at sadsack mcbuttfuck, how did she not see her do it?
did she drop from the roof or something? did sal not hear her fat ass plopping onto the awning just over her?
can she teleport or some obnoxious shit?
WHERE THE FUCK DID SHE COME FROM?
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>>83451302
*shrug*
Grappling Hook?
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>>83451227
>November

So what, like 5 more years from now? I could theoretically have toddlers before Willis moves this shit along into the second semester.
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>>83451302
Hey, work's work.
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>>83449167
Now, would they make it consensual or not? And if not, which would be the aggressor?
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>>83452921
Joyce
turns out she's into some kinky shit
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>>83446810
It's funny because even Jeph of Questionable Content had Faye see a therapist for the shit he went through.

Hell, even SOHMER of Least I Could Do had his characters go to therapy.
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>>83449788
But everyone's giving the obnoxious bitch attention and always has.
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>>83453328
They have, but have you ever had a friend that just acts way to hard to make you focus on him. Like, you knows he's there and isn't annoying, but he's trying to make a spectical of himself? That's Becky. The only down side is no one is telling her it's okay to act normal and calm.
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>>83443956
Hey, if someone wants to write it, I'll read it.
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>>83450106
I thought that was actually some legitimately good writing from Willis personally.

Her constant vocal affirmation to anyone and everyone that she's a lesbian could as varied as her getting a thrill out of it, a form of affirmation, or even just a reaction to repressing it for so long.
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Why are progressives such retards?
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>>83453721
Just Willis, who actually managed to undermine his entire point with Becky.
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>>83454023

And Willis's unironic fans.
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>>83454080
They are but extensions of Willis. Lesser Willi if you will. Should Willis die one will mature into a full Willis and the cycle will continue. It's nothing but Willis all the way down.
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>>83448137

>>M "I have a different snide, pithy comment for a middle name every time I post. Know your place, peon" Sipher

And I thought he was a smug, self righteous piece of shit on the Allspark
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>>83453645
Yeah, that's fine writing. I think the best character studies can be done one Becky, Joyce, and Amber. They are complex and realistic. (obviously, the superhero stuff is a slight stretch.) His writing suffers when he tries to put in strawman narrative. It becomes gross pandering and a horrible view of how the gender/race politics actually work. It's why liberals who love being victims enjoy his work a ton (I.E. Cerberus) while most rational people look at it as gross pandering.

But what do I know? I'm just a bigot in his eyes.
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>>83441308
Holy cow does sal realy cuck amber or is this just teasing?
My dream is coming true.
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>>83455320
Nah, Amber's just so withdrawn into her Amazi-Girl persona and her own personal issues that she thinks that Sal talking with Danny is outright cucking. All the two did was talk, but the moment Amber saw them within five feet of each other she broke up with Danny so that he could go get anally penetrated and so that she could commit murder.
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>>83446501
Mary's pretty cute.
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>>83455320
>tfw willis doesn't have the balls to have sal cuck amber and turn it into a shitty slipshine.
We will never get "Sal Performs a cuckoldry"
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So, are we supposed to agree or disagree with Amber?
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>>83455829

I'd like to think he hate-reads 4chan enough to know that we'd want it, and refuses to do it for just that very reason.
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>>83446501
>Willis creates mary to be a self insert for his shitty fundie views in roomies!
>Everyone hates her and she turns into a horrible person to save face and because he turned apostate
>He pushed to far and now she is the hero we deserve
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>>83455847
Everyone in this comic is terrible.
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>>83446821
>DA
>mary is a defense attorney, defending her position against an onslaught of litigation and a biased jury
Almost as good as crusader Mary
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>>83455847
I'm not sure. She's obviously wrong and delusional. but because of her trauma and her 'good deeds' we're supposed to be conflicted, I guess.

I just think she's shitty.
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>>83455847
At this point, Amber is in a very disagreeable situation, but I'm sure Willis will bring up her childhood abuse and that will make her redeemable or something.
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>>83452979
>>83452921
They force Becky to watch (but never join)
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>>83455847
I've only ever partially read Willis's more recent stuff, but I can never quite shake the feeling that his terrible characters are, in some ways, purposefully meant to be terrible. Like, he knows he's making them terrible and doing it on purpose. And you're not really supposed to agree with their terribleness.

The disconnect, I think, is that Willis is trying to make them that lovable terrible. That sitcom way where some does A Bad Thing so there's conflict and to make them More Human, but it all works out in the end and the casts better nature prevails. That sort of shit.

For Willis, he doesn't really understand where the boundaries are with that, what things and behaviors are, in fact, so terrible there's no "every laughs ending." Combine that with how he's become a hypocritical, raving SJW lunatic who doesn't see people who disagree with him as either honest, reasonable, or people, and we get messes like the Carla and Mary subplot and Amber's nonsense.
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>>83457324
He has said things along those lines but he doesn't fully believe it. That's just an excuse to cover his crappy writing. There are clearly characters whom we're supposed to excuse their flaws, and characters whose faults we're supposed to hate them for. Like the case with Carla vs. Mary. You're supposed to find Carla endearing and Mary to be horrible. He's said as much and flips at the people who like Mary or don't find Carla to be charmingly mischievous.
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>>83452921
>>83452979
Could do both. If I were an artist I'd do one where he drugs and deflowers her, but then it turns out that she woke up halfway and kept going because she realized she wanted it. But I'm a freak that way.
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>>83457324
>>83457572
It's like he saw that people loved Mike for being an asshole and decided to make everyone an asshole in DoA, missing the point of having one asshole doing terrible things as opposed to everyone else as a comic relief.

DoA is like Ultimate Walkyverse at this point, with Joyce being the largely unscathed Spider-Man.
Get ready for her to die and be replaced by Lucy as the MC, is what I'm saying
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>>83443340
>tfw you draw more fanart for things you hate than thing you enjoy
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>>83454080
>Willis's unironic fans
They give me the heebie jeebies.
Where do they come from?
Do they cry because their dead grandmas watch them masturbate too?
How many of them live among us?
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>>83457324
He did at least say one reason Carla was so terrible to Mary is that misgendering is always wrong no matter what. To which all I can really say is "if you punch someone, you don't get to be upset when they kick you in the balls."
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>>83458744
Holy shit that's funny
Love that it's toedad marrying them. But it kind of looks like she has a broken arm a bit.
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>>83458984
>broken arm
I'm pretty terrible at limp arms, and I usually end up combining cartoony/realistic features when trying to emulate a style until limbs look like they've been broken and improperly reset.
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>>83442878
Is that what she calls it?
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>>83446501

These statements just baffle me; it's like Willis forgot that Mary knows that Ruth is "a queer".
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>>83455112
Mary could be a great character study too; an examination of someone who when confronted by things that don't adhere to their worldview isolates themselves and doubles down on their opinions.

>>83456447
Mary Bradford: Ace Attorney

>>83458744
Since Carla is trans and Mary thinks that transwomen are just guys with mental issues does that mean she'd be okay with dating Carla since it's technically a heterosexual relationship?

>>83458967
I think a lot of them read it because it adheres to their worldview. Others, like Cerberus, use it as a form of vicarious identification.
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>>83459442
>does that mean she'd be okay with dating Carla
Yep, and she'd slowly use scriptures and sexual favors to win Carla over to her side.
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>>83446658
Mary. She's written as a totally reasonable person driven to rudeness by the insane, belligerent assholes around her.
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>>83443340
I dun did it
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>>83459903
And is apparently the bad guy the whole time. Can't say something hateful to the one trying to get people to hate them, after all.
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>>83459903
>>83460027
She's a petty, bigoted, judgmental asshole; she also happens to have a legit grievance.
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Why do we still read this comic?
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>>83460521
the quality fan art of mary does anyone have that imgur album by that one really good artist for mary and carla ?
>>83443569
>>83443790
>>83443808
>>83448503
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>>83460686
Yoto? http://imgur.com/a/DNK9S Not sure if it's complete though
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>>83461614
thanks family.
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>>83460016
amazing
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>>83460027
>Can't say something hateful to the one trying to get people to hate them

I wonder what Carla's endgame was there? Clearly she wasn't going to stop annoying Mary. Maybe that's a large reason of why I'm so against her disruption: it seemed like the only purpose was to piss Mary off.
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>>83460016
How about a real challenge.

How about you make Willis into a real man
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>>83458967
I was a fan of his wacky aliens n superheroes comic. I remember there were Republicans and even Christians among his fans, and he was friends with them.

What the fuck happened?
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>>83462428
All I have is a computer anon. Not a fucking act of god.
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>>83462668
He drank the Kool-Aid. Just one sip changes your whole political identity.
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>>83445942
I would watch the crap out of this. I started reading this garbage at the beginning, and it feels like no time has passed AND an eternity has passed.
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Why do you guys waste so much energy on Willis? I mean, if you dislike this shit, why do you keep reading?

Do you people watch the fucking news and go "Wow this guy who show up a mother fucking school isn't being portrayed sympathetically enough?"
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>>83462954

Shot up a school, even
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>>83462954
If I had it, I'd post that image of Peter Parker enjoying his anger, because that's basically it. We enjoy being angry and also shitting on people.
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>>83461614

Holy shit. DoA characters drawn by someone with a sense of form and line control
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>>83462954
Why do you come to a thread on complaining about Willis, to complain about people complaining about Willis?
Seriously. How does this affect you?
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>>83463029

... You do realize that wasn't meant to be a positive moment for Peter, right?
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>>83463091
Why do you complain about me coming into these threads to complain about me complaining about you? How does this affect you?
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>>83446891
No, she does know. Mary said something about Ruth "defiling the cheerleader" when she was talking about how much Ruth sucked at her job.
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>>83463145
Because I love irony
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>>83462954

I'm not angry. I'm laughing at him. Willis is like a successful version of Dobson and that means he gets to keep making a ton of content for me to laugh at for being awful.
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>>83450758
Oh snap, the mask is a symbiote. That's why Lucy went on a murderous rampage when she became Amazi-Girl
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>>83463205

So why are you so set on getting justice for Toedad and Ruth? The comic is awful but why do people frame it around the issue of gaining justice for bigots?

I mean, the drama's overwrought, the continuity is poor, he has a poor sense of pacing, he writes worse smut than Alan Moore, he actually makes Becky insensitive and double standard towards Joyce, Dina is an insulting, almost Sheldon from Big Bang Theory level caricature of an autistic person

But no, people keep focusing on Toedad and Mary. Are you mad that the comic is bad, or that he's making people with these views out to be bad people?
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>>83463389

Toedad and Mary, even
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>>83463389
The characters actually have some hidden death that Willis refuses to explore because he needs them to be one dimensional villains.

Shades of Grey morality is transphobic and homophobic I guess
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>>83463389
Wanna know the real reason?

Because it pisses people off, including you apparently
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>>83463486
*hidden depth
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>>83463389

>So why are you so set on getting justice for Toedad and Ruth? The comic is awful but why do people frame it around the issue of gaining justice for bigots?

Same reason I was rooting for Triple H to win at Wrestlemania. Obviously he's supposed to be a bad guy but I hate Roman Reigns so I'm cheering for the villain out of spite. Saying "Toedad did nothing wrong" or "Mary did nothing wrong" is a funny and provocative way of pointing out that Becky and Carla are fucking cunts. You're being intentionally contrarian and it feels fun.
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>>83463434
Does anyone defend Toedad? The complaints I usually hear about him was just how one dimensional and silly his whole story was.

As for Mary. Carla started that whole thing. Mary's crime was calling her a boy and only after Carla just wouldn't let up, and how this is supposed to be worse than murder.
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>>83450011
Yeah, she did some massive projecting onto Joyce, and Joyce deserved none of it. It sucks that that ended up with Joyce feeling bad about hurting Becky's feelings. No. It is not your fault, Joyce. It is Becky's fault for being selfish.
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>>83463486

No amount of hidden depth justifies the shit they do, dude. That's the point.

School shooters are people with hopes dreams and emotions. That doesn't mean they deserve to have their story told in a light that makes them out t be sympathetic or misunderstood.

Mary's story is flawed because Willis is a terrible storyteller who failed to accurately portray how a bigot behaves. But the core idea that no amount of asshole behavior justified subjecting someone to hate speech is a valid one.
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>>83462428

I think itd be easier to turn lead into gold
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>>83463627

"Worse than murder?" She got hit with a pie.
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>>83463694
Obviously you haven't read the comments on the strip
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>>83463665
>School shooters are people with hopes dreams and emotions. That doesn't mean they deserve to have their story told in a light that makes them out t be sympathetic or misunderstood.

You've obviously never seen Gus van Sant's "Elephant".
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>>83452258
He doesn't want freshman year to end in-comic, so the zombie apocalypse will have come and gone in the real world before he even gets to April.
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>>83463665

It's hard to say that Mary's "hate speech" was that terrible when Carla hardly seemed bothered by it at all. And even then, Carla is a misanthropic sociopath who goes out of her way to make everyone miserable. Why the fuck should I care about what happens to her?
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>>83463665
Just because a character is sympathetic doesn't make their actions justifiable, dumbass.

it makes you understand how a person can get to that point and not just makes "the villain" out as "the other". It makes the mistake like school shooting or hate speech hit closer to home BECAUSE it's just a regular person very similar to someone you know or maybe even you.
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>>83463731

I don't know if I care to?

Look, dude, every time some white guy kills somebody the news talks about how he was mentally ill, or how he ruined his potential, or some shit like that. Just own up to your bullshit. You want this story to be that safe kind of story where even the bigots "have a point" and "justified reasons" and how "you can't fight hate with hate"
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>>83463746
From 2010 to 2016 (six year real-time), we've moved one month in Walkyverse time.

Therefore, six years real-time is one month Walkytime.
Thus, one college semester (nine months) in Walkytime is equal to around 54 years in real-time.

A person could be born, attend college, have children, send THEM to college, and possibly even see grandchildren in the amount of time it theoretically will take for the characters in "Dumbing of Age" to get through a single goddamn semester of college.
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>>83463812
Just because that narrative is only trotted out with white shooters doesn't make it wrong. The solution isn't to do away with it but to apply it to everyone who commits an act of violence.
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>>83463774

>sociopath

You do realize no actual formal diagnosis of sociopathy has ever been given, right? It's categorically not real.

Carla's just a jerk.
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>>83463812
you do realize school shootings are caused by narcissism, a real thing right? Just because you give an asshole some depth or explanation or depth doesn't make them any less of an asshole. That's just how the fucking world works
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>>83455829
More like Sal performs a cuckhold-up
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>>83463878

No, at that point you STOP DOING IT because this just emboldens future violence because it inspires more people like those idiots into thinking they can go out in a blaze of glory where everyone will cry about their sad story
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>>83463897

I don't actually disagree with that at all
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>>83463665
Maybe I can't bent out of shape when the hate speech is just calling someone a boy. If Mary denied Carla a job or beat her up because she was trans, that's bigotry. Calling someone a name is less than the constant harassment that Carla was subjecting Mary to. For some reason, the fact that Carla is trans is supposed to make her pain more valid than other people. If Carla was just a regular guy doing what he did to a girl, he would be the villain and everyone would be cheering when the girl hurt him back.
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>>83463884

It's a bit hyperbolic, but the point is that Carla is a shitty person. She's not sympathetic in the slightest.

>>83463897

>you do realize school shootings are caused by narcissism, a real thing right?

Mass shootings take place for a variety of different reasons. Sometimes the shooter's a paranoid schizophrenic (Laughner, Holmes), other times there's a political motivation (Roof, Breivik, San Bernadino attackers), other times the shooter is simply a sadistic psychopath (Columbine, Lane, Rodgers) who yes, do have narcissist tendencies. Really, Lanza is the only unaccounted for shooter whose motives are still unknown.

>>83463977

That's basically what makes it so silly: Carla has continually harassed and bullied Mary using Ruth as a means of getting away with it. Mary's oh-so-terrible response is to call her a mean name. In Willis's eyes, this isn't merely as bad as what Carla does, it's somehow even worse.
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>>83463977

>calling someone a name isn't bigotry

Yes, it is. Someone I once knew called another child a nigger in school and they got suspended. The punishment for the damn crime.

Which is why Mary only got subjected to humiliation. Carla didn't beat her up. She didn't murder her. She just gave her what Mary gave her.

If you want a fucking example of disproportionate punishment actually DONE BY WILLIS, look at the end of Roomies, which heaps slut shaming on Mary and punishes her with an unwanted child.
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>>83463977
You just don't understand transgenderism.

Neither does Willis. However he hates himself enough to wade through pages of shit by random trans teens on Tumblr about how misgendering and deadnaming are equivalent to murder, so he gets points for effort.

>>83464122
Mary gets an abortion.
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>>83464087

And you people keep missing the point. The POINT is that Carla is an unlikable asshole. The point is that hate speech isn't justified because someone did a bad thing. Hell Mary would have saved herself all this grief if she went above Carla AND Ruth's heads instead of doing what she did.

If she just wanted to study, there's tons of practical things she could have done.
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>>83463119
It was an edit, Anon.
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>>83464122
But Carla started it. Mary was cordial and asked her to stop and Carla belittled her which is usually a bad thing to do to women according to people like Willis. Carla kept escalating it until she was literally following Mary around which is when Mary threw out the name. Mary never approached Carla. She was always alone in her own room.

In reality, it should've never even gotten to Mary calling anyone a name (the suspension worthy crime) because the RA would've stopped Carla for causing a disturbance.
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>>83464176

Yes, I know what happens. It's still god awful in terms of the context it was originally presented
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>>83464316
inb4 dad divorces mom for being too conservative
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>>83464316
"Never in my life have you so vehemently defied me?" Come the fuck ON, Willis! She's a Christian housewife, not Darth Vader!
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>>83464316
Judging by panel three, it's bound to rebound into another story about Willis' mo- I mean, Joyce's mother being pushy or whatever.

Hell, just look at the character designs. You can tell by her hair alone that Joyce's mother's acorn chin is a sign that she's totes evil.
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>>83464295

>Cordial

She started a god damned two sides pissing contest until it all ended in the mess we are now

But I don't care if you ARE nice at first. That doesn't give you the okay for bigotry. Look, I know you people base your idea of relations with minorities off of episodes of the Boondocks, but that was criticism by a black man FOR the sake of other black people, not a treatise about how it's okay for people to use slurs if you have a good reason.
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>>83464176
sigh.

I'm a crossdresser. I have had strangers throw mean comments at me.

I have also been in situations where someone would bully me nonstop (for non trans reasons) and I felt I had no one to run to because they were like Ruth, and that was much worse and more unforgivable.

Not trying to act like a victim but really, don't throw out the "you can't understand" card. If I started trouble with someone and they yell something hurtful back at me, I would deserve it.

No one type of person has the market cornered on what hurts.
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>>83464232

>The point is that hate speech isn't justified because someone did a bad thing.

So "hate speech" isn't justified, but incessantly bullying and harassing Mary while collaborating with the RA to make sure she's in a perpetually hostile living situation is?

>>83464316

Joyce's mom looks like my grandmother (who is an evangelical christian, and according to my mother was an abusive parent) and I can't stop laughing.

>>83464378

>implying Willis can tell the difference

>>83464413

>Look, I know you people

What do you mean, "you people"?
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>>83464413
People snap. Yes, what Mary did was wrong, but the horrible reactions that treat Mary as Hitler are too. Mary wasn't the bad guy, she was just a human being pushed too far.
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Boy, I can't wait til Willis tells us for whom to root: the obvious mental case or the slightly less obvious mental case.

"Positive" examples of transition, yes! Positive examples of seeking mental help, no!
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>>83464419
>No one type of person has the market cornered on what hurts
Oddly enough you could make hella' bank if you turned that into a card.

But yeah, fuck everybody else anon, you still got assholes like us.
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>>83464413
Anon, what the point you seem to have trouble understanding is, right up until that moment, Carla was completely in the wrong. Mary did everything short of get the RA, who demonstrated that she favors Carla over her. Does calling her a name then mean that suddenly Carla never did anything wrong, and she's suddenly the innocent party?
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>>83464419

So uh, this is a different anon who's clearly pretending to be me.

To be perfectly transparent? I'm a 31 year old white person. I'm as cuz as cud can be. I still think you're all chucklefucks.

Also lol at the notion that cross dressing is equatable with being trans. Cuz cross dressers can be some of the biggest trans hating people around.
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>>83464419
>No one type of person has the market cornered on what hurts
Well spoken, brother! As Doug Stanhope says, "How does that suck make this suck suck less?"
>>83464316
Mister Brown is OP bro-tier. How long will it last before Becky's abuse of his hospitality wears thin?
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>>83464505
>>83464465
>>83464456

No, and you haven't been listening. Carla is an asshole. Carla is a pain in the neck. Carla is a detriment to the rest of the dorm. She is an unashamed, unrepentant jackass.

But that DOES NOT JUSTIFY WHAT MARY DID.

The whole POINT is that someone can be an asshole and still be a victim, and that their poor behavior triggering your bullshit does not entitle you to forgiveness.

It's a fucking lesson our parents teach us from the beginning. Two wrongs don't make a right.
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>>83464559
>How long will it last before Becky's abuse of his hospitality wears thin?
Forever, because the universe exists to keep Becky quirky and fun and lesbian.
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>>83464378
>the ability to date women is insignificant compared to the power of the lord
>w-we were just visiting old friends "you're part of the LGBT alliance and a traitor. take her away"
>finds becky's lack of faith disturbing
Willis might be onto something here.
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>>83464465
Plus keep in mind that due to the really retarded 'everything that has happened so far has happened over the course of a month' shit that all the Carla actively harassing her and belittling her religion shit happened over an extremely short period of time
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>>83464527
>Also lol at the notion that cross dressing is equatable with being trans.

That's it. I'm out. Speaking of pissing contests...
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>>83464559
It won't, so far Willis has written him as a semi-real person, so he's done normal fucking things like still worry about Becky but have doubts about what she's been doing, and also covering for Joyce because he realizes his little girl needs to have some space to do her own thing.
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>>83464527

Cuz as cud be? Fucking phone. I mean "cis as cis could be"
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>>83464680
But Carla never suffers any repercussions for her actions, while Mary does, despite Carla arguably being the greater offender.

They're both villains, but only Mary gets punished, because Willis is a hack.
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>>83464680
Competent parents teach people that others will look for ways to hurt them. Carla has been sheltered to such a degree that a verbal riposte stops her in her tracks. Note how she uses technology, deceit, extraneous resources to exact her revenge. "Stick and stones" clearly doesn't apply to them: any affront, to Carla, is worth overreaction.
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>>83464755

Mary gets punished because her victims make an effort to gain recompense. An authority figure has not intervened in any of this.
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>>83464812
Mary's a victim too, anon
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>>83464796
What resources should she use then, exactly? She used a fucking diversion and a bloody pie for Mary to hang herself. All she did was use Mary's own idiocy to enable her to fuck herself over.

Would you rather she beat her up and gotten herself expelled? How is a much larger woman attacking a smaller one brave?
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>>83464680
Ruth is the real villain in everything.
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>>83464859

Mary has lost:

>study time
>The time she needed to wash the pie off

Carla has had her expensive property destroyed and called a slur

That's really balanced anon

That's the fucking hilarious part. Barely anything has actually been DONE to Mary.
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>>83464859
One wonders just how much situational stupidity was required for Carla's plan to actually work.

>Mary observes a machine before her, with an mysterious purpose
>Nearby stands Carla, whistling the same well-known song like a jackass who knows nothing about music, and holding a box
>CLEARLY, the box must be the ENTIRE KEY to the functioning of the machine.
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>>83464957
Maybe Carla shouldn't be using her 'expensive property' to ride through the halls and annoy people who nicely ask her to stop
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>>83464893
Something besides continued harassment, then mocking regarding said harassment.

"The one thing that angers you more than anything else in this world is that I exist."

Totally, not the fact that you make a nuisance of yourself.

>Being obnoxious resulted in negative consequences for me!
>God-damn, better act MORE OBNOXIOUS
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>>83464957

Carla has lost

>The time she needed to wash the glue off since glue doesn't dry that fast under any circumstances
>her feelings only after she insulted Mary's religion multiple times to multiple degrees and tried to get her to fuck up on exams

Not seeing how little miss privilege is out of anything more than Mary
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>>83464957
At the end of the day the majority of people in these threads just wanted someone to admit that Carla was an asshole. The whole "Mary is pure" shit's a meme, and pretty much everyone hates the bitch.
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>>83464957
>Carla has had her expensive property destroyed

Her parents own a fucking company that could, seemingly with no problem, lend her components to a cartoonishly complicated lighting machine. She spent more money on her revenge than on her damn skates, most likely.

>and called a slur
Big fucking deal, when you make the choice to become a disruptive shitbag, you don't get to complain when someone has enough of your shit.
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>>83465086
I don't like her as a person but I want to fuck her
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>>83465055

I never said that she's sympathetic. I'm just posting what's quantifiable from their pissing contest.

What lasting damage has been done to Mary? The poor privileged Christian white girl had one bad study night and a pie in her face.

BOO HOO
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>>83465111
What lasting damage has been done to Carla? She's rich, she can easily repair/replace the skates
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>>83465111

Asking Mary's god to kill her in a prayer is worse than Carla being called a boy, if you disagree you're one deluded fuck
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>>83465086

Carla IS an asshole! That's the literal fucking point. Willis himself has said as much.

That's why this is all so stupid. You want an acknowledgement that's already been given to you.
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>>83465202
Then why does Willis treat her as she's objectively in the right and Mary's objectively in the wrong?
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>>83464680

My parents taught me that when you were being bullied, you had to stick up for yourself and defend yourself. And ultimately, that's what Mary is doing: she's defending herself against Carla's abusive, hostile behavior. She has no obligation to cater to Carla's feelings because Carla has shown nothing but contempt towards Mary and her feelings. And it's patently obvious that Ruth isn't going to defend Carla, meaning that Mary is left to her own devices. In this case, why should we blame someone who is left on their own in the face of an increasingly hostile environment?

>>83464957

Carla has a supportive environment- Mary is universally despised, and Ruth has openly expressed contempt and hostility towards Mary to the point of physically attacking her. Carla is also from a very rich family. She can very easily cope with Mary hurting her feelings.

What resources does Mary have? Her peers hate her, Ruth despises her, and it's not likely the the college administration is going to be too interested in making a religious and conservative student feel welcome.
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>>83465202
>Willis has said as much
okay. Has anyone in universe? I don't seem to recall anyone but Mary ever calling her on her shit and even asking her to stop.
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>>83464378
Who the fuck talks like this? The dialogue in this comic is so convoluted.
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>>83465352
"Never in my life have you so vehemently defied me! MmmmmMMMMMMMmmmmm!"
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Don't forget that Carla slapped Mary super hard
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>>83465145

Carla was misgendered. That's the damage.

Let me lay it out for you. Imagine there's a fucking awful person, does a huge amount of crimes, and they are eventually caught. They happen to be transgender.

It's not okay to misgender them.

It's not okay to misgender Carla.

Is the crime of misgendering equal to other crimes that may have been done? No, because the notion that crimes are equal are absurd - what that applies to is PUNISHMENT. Should they be let off the hook for whatever else they've done because they're the victim of being misgendered? Of course not.

Nothing anyone has done justifies making it open season on denying them their identity.

If Mary cared about getting Justice for herself she wouldn't have done what she did. She wouldn't be manipulating Ruth. If she cared about any of this shit she'd be discussing it with campus authorities and getting Ruth help.

Look at fucking Sarah. She did exactly what Mary SHOULD have done with her damn roommate.

Mary is a fucking idiot and she brought this on herself. That doesn't make Carla a good person, but it shouldn't have to.
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>>83464378
I bet if we looked back at Toedad's dialogue, we'd find some kind of parallel that we're supposed to have already picked up on.
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>>83465221

Because it's wrong to misgender someone.
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>>83465431
Nope, that was the douchebag abusing her power as RA to give preferential treatment to her fuckbuddy

>>83465448
Man up
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>>83465448
So Mary misgendering Carla is worse that Carla bullying Mary for her religion, harassing her nonstop, and asking her God to kill her?

What the fuck are you on?
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>>83465448
If Carla was FtM and black, most of the comments would be against him.
But cause she trans-ed into a white female, she still gets white knight status.
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>>83465448
Totally right.

But I also think that the hipocracy of Ruth being the one to get on to Mary for being "problematic" rubbed too many people here the wrong way, and we all went to the shitter.
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>>83465259

Mary's peers hate Mary because Mary is abusive and condescending towards them.

If you want someone who did everything right and became a pariah, look at Sarah. She did what was best for herself and her roommate by talking to the right people.

Mary decided to get even by luring Carla into a cruel trick, and then brought retaliation upon her.
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>>83465448

>Carla was misgendered. That's the damage.

So in other words, she was insulted. Stop trying to make this out to be something that's worse than just a simple insult. The entire premise of your argument is that misgendering is the worst thing you could ever do to someone ever and totally disproportionate, and that's ridiculous. It doesn't work like that by any stretch of the imagination. Do you even know any trans people? At all?
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>>83458744
I would wear Mary's dress to my wedding AND my funeral. Love it!
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>>83465448
Quite the period piece you wrote there.
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>>83465448
>It's not okay to misgender Carla.
I want Carla to call a black man a nigger, then the black man to call carla a man.
I wanna see your liberal brain explode trying to figure out who the victim is.
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>>83465494

Mary was being a dick to people long before Carla showed up. But no, anon, you didn't fucking read. None of that makes what Carla did okay.

But in a world where white Christians hold more acceptance over any kind of trans person, misgendering them IS a worse thing to do than mocking Mary's religion. Mary has more privilege in that regard. What, do you think God is actually going to kill her?

I actually think Willis's Dawkins-like treatment of religion is asinine, for the record.
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>>83441308
Where is Becky?
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>>83465663
>privilege
>>/lgbt/
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>>83465630

They both are. Are you saying bad people can't be victims?
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>>83465448
The point is that the comic implicitly treats Carla like a good person by never having her face the consequences of her actions.

This is literally the core of the problem with Willis. All his 'progressive' characters are AWFUL PEOPLE. They are every bit as awful as his 'regressive' characters. But because they check off boxes on Diversity Bingo, they never suffer for their actions the way the 'regressive' characters do. It sticks in a lot of peoples' craws.
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>>83465553
Not that person, but I know a trans person and being misgendered is a big deal - if it's intentional.
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>>83465694
No, the black guy is the victim cause Carla is white and rich.
Check your privilege, shitlord.
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>>83465703
It keeps giving me a tremendous cramp in my style. God damn does my style hurt.
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>>83465448
I keep forgetting Tumblr dwells here.
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>>83465703

>The point is the comic implicitly treats Carla like a good person

No it doesn't. It treats her like she's still entitled to her right to not be misgendered
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tumblr pls leave /co/
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>>83444404
Some authors think, being an asshole = good personality.
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>>83465723

The black man has cis privilege
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>>83465777
And Mary has the right to not be harassed nonstop
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>>83465824

Right.

She should have gone over Ruth's head like Sarah did with her roommate.
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>>83465812
but the trannie has wealth privilage. Ask anyone what they'd rather have, a few million or the right gender. Even the trannies would answer the money cause they can chop their cocks off with it.
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>>83465777
It treats her like a hero. People in the comments were cheering over her glorious pie victory.
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>>83465777
Bullshit, Carla skates through this comic. She has not once faced any hardship other than Mary calling her a man.
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>>83465861
This. 5 centuries of oppression and slavery > I don't know what bathroom to use.
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>>83465861

>character has X and X privilege

Playing oppression Olympics is stupid. Winning a gold medal in being white middle class doesn't give you a free ticket to be a bigot if the trans woman is white
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>>83465777
And like she has the right to gaslight Mary for it. And she has the right to say extremely hateful things to Mary. And she has the right to skate down the halls and stomp outside of her door.

If you punch someone in the face, they don't have the right to kick you in the balls. But you have no room to complain when they do.
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>>83465546

Mary is aggressive because she feels constantly under attack 24/7 by an environment that aggressively rejects her religious and moral values. Her lashing out is pre-emptive self-defense. I mean I don't know if you've been to college recently, but they're not great places for right-wing students to be.

>>83465663

>But in a world where white Christians hold more acceptance over any kind of trans person

Not on college campuses, lol

>>83465714

Same, but from what I'm told, it depends on the context. When you're doing it deliberately as an insult, it's inflammatory and insulting- not exactly deeply wounding, but it makes you wanna slap someone. Which is why I'm confused because the anon makes it sound like it's a deeply traumatic and upsetting event instead of something that you normally move on from in like 24 hours.
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>>83465901

She was perfectly justified in getting recompense for Mary's actions. Her other behavior is a separate matter
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>>83465938
But the 'aggressor' is black, not white. Face it, your special snowflake privilege is not as valid as an oppressed people who are still shot on sight by the LAPD.
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>>83465981

Is Carla shooting this hypothetical black man?
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>>83465974
By scaring her and battering her with a pie (which is battery even IF it is just a pie)?
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>>83464295
Plus, Mary simply walked off. Carla CHOSE to follow Mary, and Mary didn't even say the mean thing until Carla asked twice.
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>>83465974
No she isn't. Two wrongs don't make a right, right? That's why Mary isn't justified in misgendering her for being an asshole, right?

Or she is justified. But that means Mary was also justified in misgendering her, because she was being a total asshole to Mary first. Can't have it both ways.
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>>83466006
She might as well be. If Carla was in an argument with a black man outside, he'd be shot cause an innocent white female is in trouble.
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>>83465777
So basically Mary should've just brained Carla with a lamp. That's the lesson I'm taking from this comic. Physical violence is the preferable way to deal with assholes. Name calling? That's too far.
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>>83466196
Nah, that's a step too far. Just punch her in the face so hard she goes flying. That's the right way to do things.

Or draw a cock on your hand and slap her so hard you leave a mark.
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>>83466215
The comments would cheer over this outcome, too.
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Reminder that Mary is also being victimized by the RA, because she's enabling Carla's continued abuse of Mary and can potentially taint any further up the chain of command shit with the college by saying "Mary is just making up shit, Carla is 100% in the clear here"

She has no avenue for getting Carla's abuse to go away
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>>83465448
Yeah see this whole argument would work if not for the fact that anytime a woman or minority disagrees with Willis and his ilk, they have their identities erased "(You're really a straight white male so you can never understand!") or disregarded (the entire whole of internalization theory).

Misgendering, like all this other shit, is only regarded as bad by both the author and his community at large when "the wrong sort" does it.

So says one humble sock puppet. Fuck Tim Schafer.
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>>83466295
This is why /v/ made the #notsourshield defense - the regressive left kept harping on about how gamergate was a bunch of white internet racist men, and even with literal pictures of minority opposition they still wouldn't face reality that they were the douchebags
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>>83465448
But it is OK to compare Mary's faith to giving a blowjob. That's totally fine, and Mary doesn't deserve any recompense for that.

You fucking hypocrite.
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>>83465526
Not vehement enough for me
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>>83466386
This is why I like the "Mary as a Muslim" edits, because suddenly religious attacks are not okay.
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>>83466409
The joke here is that Hank is willing to approach the situation in a calm, reasonable manner, and then Becky says something stupid.
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So is this an accurate series of event for Willis's life?

1 - He is raised by christian parents, maybe a little overbearing, but not "ILL BEAT THE SIN OUT OF YOU" level abusive by any means

2 - He eventually moves out and start making webcomics

3 - He founds out that about how some christians/catholics/religious people are fucking nutty monsters

4 - He assumes his non-abuse is same level as actual abuse and decides that is enough to special snowflake himself

5 - He makes parents/christians characters his villains either by making everyone hate them for shit that is non-offensive, or make them over the top crazy/violent, all while not letting his actual parents (or parent if his dad is dead) see his kids for some bullshit reason
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>>83466501
>do you suck Mohammed's cock with that mouth?
>do you suck Buddha's cock with that mouth?
>do you suck Vishnu's cock with that mouth?
Yeah, this entire storyline could have been told from the reverse perspective of if Mary wasn't Christian. It's really disgusting how blind Willy and his fan club are to their hatred.
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>>83466555
now I want a bunch of edits where Carla is the christian and Mary is the transgendered student
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>>83466529
replace Becky with any name, and you have nearly every DOA strip
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>>83466577
Yeah, but Willy and his cult despise Christianity, so she'd be fair game.
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>>83464316
I was thinking Doctor Doom, myself.

>>83466533
Is it a bit of self-induced gaslighting as well? As more Christian horror stories hit the internet, he began to re-write his own experiences as traumatic and horrifying.

Granted, the whole "sell your house give proceeds to church" thing is kind of bananas and plays into the whole seed money concept that some mega-preachers have.
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>>83464378
>>83465352
Also, Mary's dialogue became weirdly stilted and archaic when she was threatening Ruth. I have no idea why Willis is doing this shit, as usual.
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>>83466685
That's the point. Without her shield of being transgender, Carla would just be a terrible bully.
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>>83455320
>>83455736
>>83455829
I want this so bad that I wanted to write fanfics about it, but I don't have the energy to read the whole comic for references.
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>reading from the beginning
>up to Walky and Dorothy's argument over pajama jeans

Why is Mike so based?
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>>83469107
Because unlike everyone else, he's not discriminatory in his assholicism
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So there was this one page of DOA where Rose desanto goes off on a bitch about a dildo one of the characters found or something. Apparently people were asking what it is or something like that, anyone have that page? I keep seeing it shopped for other things
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>>83465448
>misgendering

Doesn't exist, you marxist faggot.
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>>83469431
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>>83469603
it's almost like most of Willis' readers are under the legal age to purchase a vibrator or something
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>>83469431
>>83469603
>>83469673
I honestly thought that other part went up the ass.
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>>83465202

Yeah, no shit Willis has acknowledged it. He put his words in Carla's mouth in pic related.

The problem is that Carla is wrong. Everyone doesn't "get" to act like an asshole. Everyone gets away with being an asshole instead, because they have a fucking terrible RA.

Mary is right. Filter out all the homophobic shit from when she first blackmails Ruth and she's accusing Ruth of being a shitty RA who drinks on campus, sleeps with the students under her charge, and didn't just ignore, but was literally unaware of a homeless person, whatever the circumstances, moving into the dorm. When she does pay attention, it's to insult, assault (and not just Mary, remember she got in an outright fight with Billie in the long ago time of a month ago), and intimidate her dorm into not complaining about her to the higher-ups.

This storyline sucks because for however much of a bigoted asshole Mary is, reporting Ruth is necessary. She needs real help (but apparently Willis doesn't trust real help) and the dorm needs an RA who will keep the kids in line across the board. It could have been a good storyline in which she's called to account for all her mistakes and has to examine her own behavior. Instead we get a shitty revengefic with a dose of shitty polemic about how using mean words are bad even if someone is being a jerk. Real transcendent shit there.

Carla and Mary are just the symptoms; Ruth is the disease.
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>>83469603

Gracias señor
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>>83469886
>just 'cuz i'm trans shouldn't mean i have to be that perfect girl
This has to be an edit, right?
No author is that fucking deluded
Hell, no fictional character can be that deluded
>I should be allowed to be an asshole without any reprecussions
Doesn't his fucking character bio outright say that he's being a dick on purpose and will escalate until you acknowledge his existance?
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>>83470237
Not an edit http://www.dumbingofage.com/2016/comic/book-6/02-that-perfect-girl/antagonize/
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>>83446810

Oooooohhh. He's one of those sorts.

Really that just makes too much sense.
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>>83469886
>I'm used to being everybody's acceptable loss

If I was going to believe that, I'd have to see some proof of it first.
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>>83469886

Pretty much. Mary IS an unpleasant, annoying fucktard, and I can't feel bad at all for Carla fucking with her because in a war of assholes, the best result is that everyone loses. But a proper RA should have been cracking down on such things from the very beginning.

Ruth is a total mess that can just about take responsibility for herself, she shouldn't be taking responsibility for an entire wing of a dorm. She is in fact bad at her job, and probably worse than just having no RA at all would be on the whole.
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>>83465974

>She was perfectly justified in getting recompense for Mary's actions.

Not even close.

You know there's a reason that crimes are generally punished more severely in court if there is obvious malice at play, right?

Mary snapped back at someone who had been deliberately harassing her for hours, Carla is an asshole to everyone at all times just because she can. Carla is the only one being overly malicious here, she is so much higher on the asshole tree it isn't even measurable.

Also if we want to be strictly legal about it Carla actually doesn't have a right not to be misgendered, Mary is free to have whatever opinion about the validity of transsexualism she wants.
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>>83469603

>Man who didn't masturbate until college because he was afraid of his dead Grandmother judging him, talking down to other people for not knowing the secondary functions of a dildo.

It will NEVER stop being funny.
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>>83465448

>Carla was misgendered. That's the damage.

That's not permanent damage, it's an insult, something that Carla is in one way hesitant about dishing up to Mary and everyone else around her.

Look faggot, no one here, not a one, is going to buy this idea that certain insults shoot out magical oppression rays that hurt you in the brain.

The entire concept is grounded in religious thinking. There is no such thing as a forbidden word. Mary talking shit doesn't make her an irredeemable sinner.
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>>83465714

>I know a trans person and being misgendered is a big deal

That's because it's a deeply personal insult.

But that's still all it is, an insult.

EVERYONE has shit that is deeply personal to them which will hurt them deeply if they're insulted about it.

Parental abuse, a traumatic experience like rape or assault, a religion that is sacred to them (EMPHASIS ON THIS ONE), their race, their culture.

Everyone has vulnerabilities. Everyone has damage. Carla isn't special.
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>>83469886

>I'm used to being everybody's acceptable losses

KEK

Yeah, I'm totally sure you were MAJORLY shit on during your childhood little miss Trustafarian. Why, I bet your parents wouldn't even buy you your own yacht.
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>>83470750
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If I ask Willis nicely, you think he'll be ok with me making a gay porn comic of Ethan and Danny. I just wanna see them bang, even if it's a dream sequence.
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>>83471685
Just make it anyways, label it a parody
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>>83442878
Shut the fuck up Willis.
Impolite sage for your disaster of a web """"comic""""
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>>83465482
Next time I'm called a fat bitch, I'm totally going to say "Don't Misgender Me"
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>>83469886
I agree that people don't just "get to be assholes." I'd like to mention that I don't think there aren't any other characters on the floor who are assholes, and none of them are antagonistic to Carla's level. Later on she parkours past Amber, who she knows is nursing a head injury, startles her and knocks her laundry over. She doesn't even stop to help or apologize. She's shitty and disrespectful, and if you go by treat people how you'd like to be treated, she clearly doesn't demand respect in return. This doesn't mean that bigotry towards her is justified, but you can totally understand why someone who she treats poorly would want to lash out at her.

>>83465846
>She should have gone over Ruth's head
>>83464893
>All she did was use Mary's own idiocy to enable her to fuck herself over

I can't believe you're typing this when these are clear fucking examples that the writing in this comic is dogshit. Of course Mary should've gone over Ruth's head when it was made clear that her blackmail wasn't working, why hasn't she? Why hasn't she tried to actually do anything with her power? Why would she go grab a box when there's a weird contraption being set off in front of her room. If your conclusion is, "Mary's dumb" instead of this character is poorly being written in a contrived manner then there's something wrong with you.
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>>83441308
>linking to the "Bad Webcomics" wiki
>bannable
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>>83471879
Willis reacts to criticism like gasoline reacts to a lit match.
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>>83465526

Wait, did they name their dog after a rapper? That's weird for a family likes Joyce's.
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The funny part is it's not even willis who banned me, but his fans who are now in control of the wiki after anons vandalized it a month ago.
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>>83469603
Funny thing is, this comic is a perfect example of how much David Willis hurts his own side. Oh Joy Sex Toy (whose style he's ripping off) has a one comic specifically about how using sex toys in a relationship doesn't mean you or your partner are inadequate, and how using them is a bonus and not a crutch. Then this asshole comes tromping in going "but really, if your girlfriend is using a dildo, it's because you're bad at sex!" Which takes us right back into the world of sex negativity, and basically guaranteeing anyone whose partner does have one of these is going to start questioning themselves. So, good job, Willis.
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>>83446933
Huh. Carla's not as hueg as I thought. 5'7"~5'8", assuming that's a standard 78" door.
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Sometimes people mistake me as a woman from behind. Can I cry oppression?
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>>83469886
ANNIVERSARY LOSS EDIT WHEN
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>>83472199
Not this guy, but the OJST strip in question is here: http://www.ohjoysextoy.com/sextoysrelationships/

Compare it to >>83469603 and you'll see just how stupid Willis is being. Also, don't forget the part where he can't draw a penis correctly despite possessing one himself. It makes you wonder how the fuck he sired twins.

Unless...
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>>83471855
In a sane world she'd have gone over Ruth's head the first time she got slapped so hard it left a mark.
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>>83472355
No, because you're male, and men cannot be oppressed for being male.
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>>83472990
So's Carla
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>>83473013
Not true.
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>>83469603
Maggie must have an entire dresser drawer filled with dildos then.
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>>83469603
I love this comic as an example of what a smug asshole Willis is. Despite all the criticism I throw at his comics, I still maintain his shitty attitude and how he complains online is worse than his work.
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>>83472796
Did that crying woman have a double mastectomy?
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>>83472796
>Unless...
While Willis was having one of his peepeepoopypukey seizures (THAT DOCTORS ARE TOO STUPID TO UNDERSTAND ARE NORMAL!) Maggie mounted him and had sex for the first time since they've been married.
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>>83473228
>>83473394
of all the place to make this kind of criticism, 4chan is the last that should do it.

I remember an anon getting shitted at and being called a virginfag for not knowing what a wetspot is.
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>>83473801
Why not? As bad as the worst faggot on 4chan can be, nobody is making a living off shitposting.
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>>83473394
>Despite all the criticism I throw at his comics, I still maintain his shitty attitude and how he complains online is worse than his work.
Probably. He's probably one of those Dunning-Kruger Effect people who thinks they're a complete genius and that everybody else is jealous.
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>>83466555
I actually posted this question a few days ago, with Islam and Buddhism. Everyone that replied said it would be fine because Mary was being a bigot and was using her religion against Carla. She was manipulative, blah blah blah.

I don't believe that for a second.
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>>83473979
I want to take someone who has never even heard of David Willis, or Dumbing of Age, and have them read the Carla vs Mary plot with no context, and see what they think.

I also want to know if everyone would still be against Mary IF Carla was just another biological female.

>"I'm taking you to the boy's dorm, where you belong!"
>"Good, let's go! At least they're not prudes, bitch!"
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Can someone explain to me what this comic is about?
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>>83474130
It's a slice of college life webcomic, where everyone is irrational, half of the cast is a special snowflake minority, and all adults are the devil (except for the lesbian gender studies professor).
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>>83474130
A bunch of terrible people go to college and somehow all live on the same floor. There's a lot of "premarital hanky-panky," as the main character says. They sometimes go to class. After 6 years running, only a month has passed in-comic.

Everyone hates everyone, Becky and Carla are annoying, and this floor has the worst RA ever.
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>>83474130
It's a comic about frehsmen going to college and making stupid decision.

> and all adults are the devil
Wrong.
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>>83472796

It goes back to the notion that "Sex Positive" for guys like Willis basically amounts to simply adding whatever scenarios will net them the largest audience. And of course, what gets his rocks off.
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>>83444114
>He tries to shrug it off
i don't thing he shrugs it off so much as he sincerely worships at the High Holy Church of the Tranny and believes that even thinking bad thoughts about one warrants a lifetime of righteous abuse
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>>83444114
>He tries to shrug it off by saying it proves what bigots everyone is because they didn't want to stone Mary as soon as she misgendered Carla.

what's great about this for the high holy church of the tranny is it doesn't just justify every single insane thing the tranny does after this """because of it"""", but also every single thing the tranny did before this to goad her into saying it, because the real sin is ever having had bad thoughts about the high holy tranny.
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>>83464316

Is this, like, Willis trying to make the adults sound old-fashioned or Crusade-era-esque?

He keeps making them talk weird as hell.
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>>83473768
Maybe? My first thought is "trans-man who's still in the process of transitioning." Erika's got a thing for doing different body types, which is something you don't see very often, but it can be hard to tell what the really esoteric ones are sometimes.
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>>83475458
She doesn't seem to have a penis, and seems to have a pair of horizontal scars instead of nipples.
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>>83475513
Well, he's still transitioning, which is why he doesn't have a penis yet. She uses transitioning body types relatively frequently.
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>>83475746
No one gets bottom surgery if they're ftm. Doctors actively dissuade people from it since all we can do right now is glue a dildo on them.
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>>83466577
>>83475827
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>>83475827
>Understand this shit doesn't happen in Canada.
Except when it does.
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>>83476274
My understanding is that Canadian gun laws are very similar to America's
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>>83465261
On the Cast page, it says Carl is an asshole, and if you don't hate him he isn't trying hard enough
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>Have a villain character in a comic
>Have them be constantly shit on to the point where all the dickish things they do are a reaction to being shit on all the time
>surprised when people start to sympathise with them
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>>83476430
Nope, they're much stricter
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>>83476795
It like when Bugs starts in on Elmer Funds for no reason. It just makes Bugs look like a dick even though you know Elmer is a bad guy
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>>83476795
The same thing happened with Malaya. As someone who's never read Shortpacked, I was completely in the dark about why everyone hates her.
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>>83476918
Clearly I was missinformed
Also
>Gun deaths per 100,000
>Canada 1.97
>US 10.54

Yeah, that one school shooting last year means that the Canadians are totally failing at gun death prevention, they should just give up
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>>83477134
No one said that.
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>>83464295

While I am of the opinion that Mary's as big an asshole as Carla, I do have to reflect that NONE of this would have happened if Ruth didn't suck at her job so much.

First, Ruth reacts to Mary annoying her with a complaint about people drawing dicks on her whiteboard by bitch-slapping her hard enough to leave a handprint, which is already pretty good grounds for her to lose her job if Mary tattled on her before we even get to the sleeping with a student and drinking regularly on campus bit or the various other shitty things Ruth does. It also ensures Mary no longer sees Ruth as a legitimate authority and so will take matters into her own hands when she has a problem because experience has taught her the RA is a surly bitch who will get violent when asked to do her job.

Ruth continues to suck at her job by being selectively deaf to Carla's loud, obnoxious behavior but comes a-runnin' when she sees an opportunity to stick it to Mary some more, and then even botches that when Mary is able to use evidence of Ruth's staggering incompetence to make her back off and let Mary do what she wants. So...

>Mary might have gone to talk to the RA instead of calling Carla names if the RA had not shown a tendency to dismiss complaints with violence
>Mary might have let the issue go and not called Carla names if the RA had done her job and poked her head out to tell them to knock it off when they were making a racket
>Ruth would have been able to do her job and protect a student from perceived hate speech if not for her own prior misbehavior putting her in an easy position to be blackmailed by anyone that wants to get away with murder on her floor and can't count on her tendency to be selectively blind and deaf

Really, no matter how things play out, Ruth needs to get fired and sort her fucking life out.
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It's possible to write good SoL but it requires knowledge of the rules (some of which aren't specific to the genre):

• Divide large casts into monads/dyads/teams and give those units plotlines appropriate to each:
-- Monads get plotlines about internal struggle/development.
-- Dyads get plotlines about relationships (whether it's the A plot or the B plot).
-- Teams get plotlines about learning to get along despite personality conflicts.
-- These units interact with one another at the least to enforce their shared reality, but also to be humorous or complicate things.


• Reader investment (initial and continued) requires dedication to the following:
-- Provide interesting characters whose traits imply chemistry with their setting / each other, and continued followthrough on those promises.
-- A sense of time passing reflected by nonreversible events and circumstances, not the seasons changing or the characters going on a trip.
-- An authentic worldset where actions have consequences true to the setting. This is an unwritten contract between writer and reader. Repeated "virtue insulation" of a character from the likely in-world consequences of their actions is dishonest and indicates the writer prioritizes wish fulfillment over authenticity.
-- At least a modicum of suspense as to what's going to happen next that isn't reducible to "(how soon) will they fuck."
-- Respect of Chekhov's Gun.


• Conflict drives story as in every other medium, no matter how trivial it might be in SoL.
-- Character development is the result of CONFRONTING this conflict: risk, choices made and their consequences. Once a character has conquered an issue they do not get to struggle with it again without something else upping the ante.
-- Adversity works best as a reflection of the character(s) involved. Random acts of God like cancer or being run over by a bus are the fastest way to tell readers the writer's treading water.
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>>83478112
The "Jesus' cock in your mouth" and "please God kill Mary" type comments come much closer to harassment than anything Mary actually said as well, and Ruth managed to miss both of those cases also.
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>>83478264

I mean honestly it comes across as tit for tat where Carla is getting proportionate retribution for a slight against her identity by insulting an important element of Mary's identity in return, but this seems very disproportionate when Mary insults Carla while Carla gets to insult, harass, and pull extremely elaborate pranks on Mary. That's like "they throw a punch, you pull a gun" levels of disproportionate response.

And again, an escalation that would never happen if their RA was not terrible.
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>>83477126
>Malaya
Yeah, he did a piss poor job of conveying any reason for Malaya to be disliked, but everyone in the comments just carried over their loathing from Shortpacked. I really like that she stands up to Sal, despite her being alluded to being the 1st/2nd most powerful character in the fiction.

>>83478112
Yeah, Ruth is the real problem. Even beyond her Mary-specific fuck ups, she's created a precedent of solving problems with threats and violence, which is the opposite of the type of environment she should be fostering. It's not really any wonder that Mary might've thought the device was going to harm her after seeing how the only authority behaves.
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>>83478445

It also seems fairly likely that Ruth was not so secretly hoping Carla would seriously harm Mary rather than pranking her, based on this comment.
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>>83478112
>Mary's as big an asshole as Carla
Nah, not really. She didn't start it. Carla is the one who broke the rules and responded rudely to Mary requesting that she follow the rules because others are trying to study. Mary tried to keep her from breaking the rules first with her body and then through putting glue on the floor, which Carla frankly would have been able to avoid if she had been going on a speed that'd have enabled her to avoid collisions with people suddendly leaving their rooms or such - so the fact that she got glue in the skates in the first place shows that she was endangering everyone else and going too fast to stop if something sudden happened. After that, she had the nerve to complain that she wasn't allowed to break the rules in peace and continued to cause noise just to be a bitch.

Only after this escalation did Mary pull a verbal insult, but frankly misgendering is NOTHING compared to actually wishing for someone's death in a way that also insults their beliefs, which is what Carla pulled with her "dear lord, kill mary" bullshit so on that front Carla is the bigger asshole yet again. Also the atmosphere of constant harrassment and the weird contraptions take it way over the line.

I mean the whole reason for all of this is that Carla is upset that she's not allowed to break the rules as she likes. She's a massive cunt
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>>83478152
>>83478152
None of these following points should need to be made but here they are:
-- College/high school age characters are not made interesting by having terrible and/or dead parents.

-- From a literary perspective addiction is a weak character flaw.

-- Diversity is an avenue for a good writer to research interesting characters who will play off of other interesting characters. It is not a quarter you drop in a charity box to feel good about yourself or a self-deluding attempt to pacify judgmental internet people.

-- Gay people constitute below 10% of the population. As a thought experiment, imagine changing all the gay people in your cast to Mennonites and ask yourself if it seems any more forced, or if you just made a better webcomic.

-- You don't deserve a Patreon. Get a fucking job like everyone else because lord knows your writing could use more real world experience in it.

-- "Talking thing that shouldn't talk" character is perfectly acceptable. If you work for Hanna fucking Barbera.

-- "Antagonist asshole for no reason character" is shorthand for "I have no idea how to do character dynamics" and "I thought learning to draw meant I know how to write."
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>>83465448
misgendering is, in the end, just a deeply hurtful personal insult. As is insulting a religion someone holds dear and telling to their face in earnest that you hope they die etc.

Misgendering isn't lasting damage.
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catching up on the thread. seems like a big problem was not showing how the misgendering effected Carla outside of like a panel or two? he assumes the sympathy is automatic i think.

among other problems, >>83465448
is right about willis' intention I think but the comic doesn't succeed in carrying it out

and i would probably agree with that poster on 99% of things
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>>83465448
This is b8
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>>83479945
Did anyone actually create a DOA edits tumblr we were all talking about?
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>>83477134
Removing black people from the equation the US ends up with a similar rate of gun deaths to canada
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>>83478152
Did you get this from somewhere? It's a good list.

>>83479326
I like this addendum.
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Carol's not particularly attractive but I still want to sexualize her.
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>>83480840
I wrote both of them on the spot.
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>>83483248
Well, both are good lists.
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>>83470582
>secondary function

YOOUUUUUUUUU
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>>83483276
thanks, most of it was based on complaints I've had about the longer running webcomics whose creators are set in their keenspot ways
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>>83483566
Awesome! I have a writing blog. Mind if I post your lists on there? They can apply to a lot of types of writing.
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>>83483566
I missed the days of keenspot. What are some telltale "this person was a keenspot guy"signs. Only former keenspot guy I read right now is egs.
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If we really are talking about making videos that explain what's happened so far, what we could do is start a separate thread and each take a week at a time.

We could look over a week and make notes about the major events and stuff like that. We can even include running themes, like how many times Christianity is insulted or every instance of a parent being terrible, kind of like Cinema Sins.

I think we could split each day/chapter into its own video.
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>>83483836
I like it. All we have to do is find someone willing to re-read this.
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>>83469603
I just reread my comments on this particular strip, and seeing a younger Yoto slowly go from joking to actually insulted and angry reminded me how fucking stressful and fucking toxic Willis and his fans were and are.
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>>83483960
If you could go back in time and talk to your younger self, would you tell him to avoid willis' comics?
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>By the time I wrote this article, I had effectively read this comic 3.4 times. If I seem hostile to the author now you know why.

The Bad Webcomics Wiki review is top notch.
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>>83484013
Honestly. Partly no. I would warn him sooner not to take Willis to heart so much. I feel like reading his comics for such a long stretch of time did open my eyes to different things than I was used to, some of which I still think affect how I think now. It also, over the years taught me that someone who is on the "right" side can still be a piece of shit. Basically, over the years I went from complete ignorance, to radical left, to moderate liberal but realizing that bullying and being a shit person because you think you're right makes you just as bad as anyone else.
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>>83484169
What do you think of his earlier work (Roomies, It's Walky, Joyce and Walky)
www.itswalky.com
>>83484133
badwebcomicswiki.shoutwiki.com/wiki/Dumbing_Of_Age
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>>83484229
>If you thought this review was too long, don't read the comic.
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>>83479326
I'm going to disagree with you on points 2, 5, and 7; point 6 is situational.
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>>83484169
why are you literally me?

Forced memes aside, I agree. I was goony fucking male feminist in high school. Even had a fedora. Always going on about how terrible this or that thing was for women and the gays and such. And sure I cringe thinking about shit I said and did, I don't regret having learned that stuff from guys like willis. The first hand experience of how much of a miserable asshole I was has helped me loosen up a lot now that I'm an adult and shit actually matters.
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>>83484229
>Roomies
Not particularly funny but cute. Joyce was super fucking horny, and that's a delight.
>It's Walky
Pretty enjoyable. There are LONG stretches of that series that I am completely lost on but the characters weren't all terrible. Walky was Becky done well and I actually liked his interaction with Joyce. It's not great, but for Willis it's decent.
>Joyce and Walky
Didn't read the actual story. I liked the sunday comics though. Cute relationship stuff and I'm a sucker for schmalz.
>Shortpacked
I'd argue from the start it's Willis' best comic. But halfway through Willis goes full SJW and ruins the comic. I like most of the cast, and before every customer interaction was a strawman who would get, OH so cleverly taken down by his character's CLEVER and INSIGHTFUL viewpoint, I though the jokes were funny. Also Robin and Leslie were cute when they were just "We love each other" and not "fuck yeah! we're lesbians!!!" also I fapped to Malaya a lot.
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>>83484446
>Didn't read the actual story.
if you want, I could dump the paid links for you.
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>>83484250
>The kind of sex Willis chooses to depict makes it hard not to start forming judgments about him. Women are almost always the aggressors, the scenes are almost exclusively where women are on top (like the late-night Skinemax flicks Willis apparently learned everything he knows about sex from) or lesbians making out.

I completely missed this when I was actively reading the comic. But yeah even joe in that one story was tied up and ridden. What the hell is going on with this dude.
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>>83484446
>I'd argue from the start it's Willis' best comic
Let's agree to disagree, Yoto/anon.
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1/2
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200508octbargein.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200509freeload.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200510pluto.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200511rockthisplace.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200512honorroll.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200601dorothy.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200602flattered.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200603alternate.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200604bedside.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200605arm.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200606exercise.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200607marry.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200608danny.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200609search.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200610molehill.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200611rosenthal.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200612distractions.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200701baldy.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200702leave.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200703ponies.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200704reunion.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200705kids.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200706david.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200707worry.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200708wham.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200709birth.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200710dining.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200711fall.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200712yule.html
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On a lark, I decided to look at the comments for Willis' latest strip, with Amber on the roof or whatever.
Here's what they say:

>Ease the fuck up there, Gollum.
>Clearly the only thing left to take is her mantle. Sal’s gotta become the new Amazi-Girl.
>Jesus Christ Amber, Sal didn’t take Danny from you, you are the one that wouldn’t listen to him!
>Well, this seems perfectly healthy.
>Oh, fuck off Amazi-Girl
>am i the only one who is starting to like amber/amazigirl a little bit less every time i see her lately…
>Amber, just fucking go to therapy already. You’re quickly becoming one of my least favorite characters.
>So at what point does a hero become a serial killer
>This… is terrifying. Her clear distinctions between Amber and Amazi-Girl, coupled with her unhinged aggression, I mean, yikes. The fact that this is going on unchecked and undiagnosed and untreated is just making me really sad, because Amber could channel all her stuff in a really good, healthy way if somebody (a mental health professional) showed her the tools with which to do that and really just talked to her/listened to her.
>I still find it weird Amber doesn’t have a criminal record. That said I’m more worried that Amber is going to put Sal in a place she is always struggling to get out of. Bad enough Malaya is always pushing her buttons, now Amber might be the straw that broke the camels back.
>Wow Amber. Obsessed much? Follow the words of Elsa and Let It Go.
>I think this arc is coming to a head, because a lot of people seem to be running out of sympathy for Amber’s actions. Something has to give, and soon.
>Show of hands, who’s still gonna defend Amber/blame Danny/blame Sal if Amber goes down this road?
>Jesus Christ Amber, you are one bad decision away from needing to be institutionalized for your own safety, not to mention the safety of those around you.

So yeah, even among DoA diehards, the general consensus is that Amber's gone koo-koo.
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>>83484483
he has to make sure no one on tumblr can misconstrue it as male on female rape, I'm assuming
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>>83484492
I dunno man, early shortpacked! was pretty good. I don't know where I'd say the downfall happened though.
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>>83484509
2/2
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200801movingon.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200802speedyhitched.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200803fisticuffs.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200804showers.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200805iscanbemarriage.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200806studentteaching.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200807marcie.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200808dropit.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200809vows.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200810fonts.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200811missing.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200812themom.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200901chopper.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200902brockosmodernlife.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200903parents.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200904vendetta.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200905transplant.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200906dead.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200908thedayof.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200909stranded.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200910hiya.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/200912voices.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/201001fightfightfight.html
http://www.joyceandwalky.com/members/201003flyaway.html
http://www.itswalky.com/members/theend.html
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>>83484466
I downloaded that, but I haven't brought myself to read it, because I'm just so soured on Willis now.

>>83484492
Which do you think is best, anon?
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>>83484542
>>83484558
I still think that It's Walky/Joyce and Walky is the best willis comic in terms of overall quality.
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>>83472796
>Also, don't forget the part where he can't draw a penis correctly despite possessing one himself.
Why DOES he think they look like purple tubes, anyway?
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>>83484483
>tfw I'm hard into femdom
It's probably the only reason I can sexualize his characters so easily.
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>>83484651
My theory is he has a really fucked up penis and no one has the heart to tell him.
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>>83484651
Obviously he draws penises true to the appearance of his own. He should probably see a doctor.
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>>83483743
credit me as Duane Moody and we're good
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>>83441308
Does this mean we can ship this crazy bitch with this crazy pic related faggot now?
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>>83485029
Yes.Go with god anon.
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>>83484542
>I don't know where I'd say the downfall happened though
drama tab
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>>83484721
>>83484740
But as many dicks as his wife's taken, surely she'd know it's not supposed to look like that?
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>>83485338
>implying he's allowed to watch.
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I'm reading the Bad Webcomics Wiki review and I just got to Mary's section.

I've figured it out. I've figured out how Mary learned of Carla's transsexuality.

>Mary is so traumatized by her time with Roz that she refuses to even enter the room when Roz's sister visits, because she assumes she'd be getting the Roz Treatment in stereo. Where did Mary sleep? Willis knows his fans won't care.

The only way for Mary to have ever learned about Carla's transsexuality is if Mary had slept in Carla's room during said visit. That's the only explanation.
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>>83485374
I said SHE'D know.
Just because Willis wishes he were a woman, that doesn't mean transition actually works and it makes sense to humor trannies; I was referring to his wife.

Of course, if it turns out Willis is an FTM and "his" "penis" is literally a purple dildo, that would explain a lot about how constantly bitchy and assravaged he is.
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>>83485375
>The only way for Mary to have ever learned about Carla's transsexuality is if Mary had slept in Carla's room during said visit. That's the only explanation.

Or Carl has a man's voice
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http://wayback.archive.org/web/20130420180140/http://itswalky.tumblr.com/post/44925990876/whats-your-opinion-of-danny-your-comments-on-the

>I haven’t thought of Danny as an author avatar in quite some time at this point. I don’t think there’s much of me left in him, any more. He’s firmly become his own pile of traits which I don’t really identify with. I couldn’t point at any specific character as my current author avatar. They all take things from me on some level. Joyce is a collection of my sexual and religious insecurities. Ethan is the jerk part of me that interacts with fandom. Amber is my frustration and rage, Dina is my struggle to understand human interaction, Walky is my childishness, Ruth and Billie are my self-destructive tendencies and depression, and Mike says what I want to say but don’t.

>Some day, I hope I will be Dorothy. That is my end game. But I still have lots of stuff to work out first.

It was nice of Willis to confirm our theory that every character in DoA is a personification of his own dissatisfactions and inadequacies.
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>>83485375

I mean, the art style makes it pretty fucking tough to distinguish between genders anyway.

It's entirely likely that Carla just doesn't pass all that well
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Christ, that Bad Webcomic Wiki review's linking to the Wayback Machine showed me that Willis used to have a poll up where the choice was
>Becky:
>( ) Great character
>( ) or greatest character

That dumb fuck knew what he'd done, didn't he.
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>>83485604
>Dina is my struggle to understand human interaction
Jesus, he's fucked up.

>Some day, I hope I will be Dorothy. That is my end game.
His final ambition is to be a woman. That he named Dorothy.

I'm just gonna... I don't know what to say to that, I'll just underscore it and leave it at that.
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>>83485029
>Be Wolf
>Married to wife
>Has kids
>Master Technician to one of the most successful crime syndicates in-universe
>Fucking nuts
>Possibly 35 years old

So, you want to ship this guy with...

>Amazi-Girl
>Single
>Fatass
>"Master" computer nerd at Indiana University
>Fucking Nuts
>Possibly 18 years old
>Fat ass

Are you fucking nuts yourself, anon?
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>>83485715

But Anon.

Maybe he'll kill her and we'll finally be rid of her.
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>>83485631
Becky was the big dividing point for a lot of fans. I was in the comments kinda actively at the time and slowly people started to say "man becky is kinda annoying". That sort of lead to a schism I guess and the diehards got more diehard.

I wonder how many people in this thread have a story along the lines of "I liked this comic but then becky showed up."
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>>83485604
>Willis thinks Dorothy is a good person and worthy ambition to reach for as opposed to a toxic self absorbed shithead

You sure do have lots of stuff to work out first, li'l pal.
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>>83485709
It would be nice if he explained what Dorothy represented. I can only assume Dorothy represents his hopes and ambitions, since apparently having a successful webcomic and being married with children isn't lofty enough.

What, does he want to become an actual Transformer?
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>>83485762
Why not just have them fall in love and run really fat away together? Then it'll be /v/'s problem!
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>>83485715
Somewhere deep inside all of us is the desire to nut inside a mentally unstable college freshman.
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>>83485781
For me, it was that and a combination of Ruth/Billie being treated as sweet and adorable when Ruth had actively bullied and sexually harassed Billie beforehand. I couldn't understand how the DoA comment section OF ALL PLACES was willing to support an abusive and codependent relationship.
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>>83485029
>>83485715
>>83485890

>Makes Amazi-GirlxWolf porn
>Sends it to Willis
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I'm confused about Becky (ginger lesbian right?) and the brunette with christian parents, ((Joyce?)who I think is the main character and maybe a little self insert of author??)

like is it three's company style goofs where it keeps seeming like they're lesbians or is Joyce realizing she's gay or ????
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>>83485895
Same here, for very much the same reasons. "Wow, Ruth has tormented and abused Billie, and she forces a kiss on her? That's so fucked up. It's really interesting that he's making one of his characters this crazy. I wonder how Billie is going to deal with this kind of insanity... No, wait, they're codependent now. Which is a good thing somehow. Fuck you, Willis."

I kept reading it until the TRIGGER WARNING, though. I guess it was out of inertia. That was really the final straw, though.
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>>83485927
>In his artstyle
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>>83486271
>in a much better artstyle than he'll ever achieve.
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>>83485927
>print it out
>have it laminated
>mail it to Willis
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>>83485781
Becky was in the very first DoA comic. At the time I think Joyce and Sarah were supposed to be the main characters, but Becky's always been there, lurking, waiting...

I stopped reading DoA regularly early, when Ethan/Joyce happened, and it became obvious that Willis was just going to lead us through every painful mistake each of his characters made in the old continuity, again. Meh. It's for the kids now, I'm too old for that shit.

The final straw, which made me give up on Willis after a decade as a fan, was "you came out whiter." I read it as, oh, this is Sal being Sal, she's self-righteous and irrational sometimes, like in the old continuity when she tried to destroy the world to get revenge for something or other... but no, word of Willis is Sal is right, Walky is whiter and their parents are racist fucks.
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>>83486658
>Walky is whiter and their parents are racist fucks.
I'm still waiting for a storyline to elaborate on this further.
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>>83486720
see you in 8 years then
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>>83486720
They are literally the same color. Check it with an eyedropper tool.
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>>83486720
It won't happen. The best we can hope for is that someone points out how racist it was to make the "blacker" twin the thug who robs convenience stores and talk with a deep southern accent.
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>>83486720
Sal acts like a delinquent while Walky is a good boy.
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>>83486805

It's more like they assume Sal's "blacker" than Walky because of...her hair andliterallynothingelse. Not sure what Willis was going for there...
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>>83486897
so she did come out blacker.
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>>83486897
How is this a black and white thing?
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>>83486948
But Walky's hair does the exact same thing when he's stressed.

I'll give him this, having the flashbacks be in muted color allowed him to continue this bullshit without actually having to show them being the same fucking skin tone.
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>>83486990
Willis managed to unintentionally imply that criminal behavior is an absolute trait of African-Americans.
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>>83486948
I think it's pretty classic Willis at this point. "Show? Instead of tell? HATE CRIME!"
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>>83479945
Magnificent.
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>>83484483
I'd guess, with all his emotional problems, he legitimately feels guilty putting a man on top. He sometimes has Chris-chan levels of "my characters are real"

>>83486990
From the recent badwebcomics review
>This leaves open a troubling question: since Sal literally can't be talking about skin color, which part of being an inept, ill-educated, violent criminal did Willis write-in to make her "blacker" than Walky?
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>>83484446
>I fapped to Malaya a lot.
There any good porn of her? especially post 25.
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>>83487254
If there's any, HE probably made it. :)
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>>83486948
Well it certainly can't be that Willis is saying her being a criminal and not as smart as Walky are black traits, right?

Right?
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>>83455847
I'd say disagree - she's often in conflict with Sal, who has been portrayed as being in the right at least 98% of the time
>>83464378
Okay, now I'm reading that dialogue in James Earl Jones' voice and it's 10000% better. Thanks, Anon!
>>83464958
That's the thing - everything Mary's done to lead up to her getting pied makes no sense, because it was just meant to make her being pied seem less sympathetic to us.
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>>83487276
>HE
God?
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>>83487394
Yoto. His DoA/Shortpacked fanart has a LOT of Malaya.
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>>83487394
no.
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>>83483566
It shows. Addiction is a perfectly fine character flaw if you have any chops. There are currently zero webcomic authors that could get a fiction novel through the traditional publishing process.
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>>83485338
His wife's never seen his dick.
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>>83487210
>He sometimes has Chris-chan levels of "my characters are real"
That blog post about Becky not dying during the Toedad shit was terrifying.
http://itswalky.tumblr.com/post/133911326532/the-storylines-over-and-now-that-it-is-i-wanted
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>>83486260
Co-dependent and in a suicide pact to drink themselves to death. Mary probably saved Billy and Ruth's lives.
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>>83488133
Their relationship isn't co-dependent. Ruth is abusive and controlling while Billie is enabling.
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>>83479326
>Gay people constitute below 10% of the population.
It's been gradually increasing as the stigma has gone away, but yes. Trans people are less than 1% of the population and are even more overrepresented.
What it basically comes down to is that most webcomic artists are just into yuri, and thanks to the social media dialogue indulging their fetish means striking against oppression and supporting the most noble cause of our time.

>You don't deserve a Patreon. Get a fucking job like everyone else because lord knows your writing could use more real world experience in it.
Willis worked at Toys R Us during the IW! days. That was the best writing he ever did. Then came Shortpacked.

>"Talking thing that shouldn't talk" character is perfectly acceptable. If you work for Hanna fucking Barbera.
Eh. It can work if the setting allows it, like the talking cat in Errant Story.
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>>83487930

The weird thing is how all or nothing it is, like it's either you bury your gays or what he did. i know how often we harp on his black and white view.
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>>83488530
>Tfw /u/ are responsible for Dumbing of age at least a little

I'm...I'm sorry.
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>>83487210
>He sometimes has Chris-chan levels of "my characters are real"
To be fair, that's something that some people believe in regards to fiction in general.

But to think that Willis feels his characters are real, and then puts them in situations such as those in Shortpacked and Dumbing of Age... I've often wondered what his characters would say or do if they met God and He was Willis.
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>>83488797

Mary: "I was right. God hates us ALL."
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>>83488530
Funnily enough, the most massively overrepresented group in comics are redheads.

>>83488644
The only issue is his self-congratulatory tone about everything. If he had just said, "I didn't want to do a gay angst story," no one would care.
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>>83488797
>Becky, Mary, and Amber team up to bring down Willis for the pain he's caused them.
>Carla, Dina, and Sal team up to stop them.
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>>83487210
>>83487930
>>83488644
>>83488797
>>83488824
>I knew Becky couldn’t be shuffled offpanel forever. She had to stay. We couldn’t get our pathos out of her and discard her. But I knew her dad would be following her, and he’d have to be dealt with. He’d have to be dealt with definitively.

>That was the genesis of everything, but I think it’s really wonderful how it all worked perfectly with what the story needed. Joyce needed to feel betrayed by her family and her community. Amazi-Girl needed to face a threat that was leveled up from the previous showdown her own father. Dina… needed to be in the best strip ever.

Note how Willis feels that his own creations NEED these things. He felt that Joyce needs to feel betrayal, rather than perhaps an alternative angle to look upon her beliefs in light of hypocrisies. He felt that Amazi-Girl needed to be put up against a force worse than her psychologically abusive father, rather than surpassing her angry world-view and seeking less dangerous alternatives. He felt that Dina needs to be in "the best strip ever", which is just plain narcissistic and probably one of the more scary things to unpack.

I mean, think about it. He thinks that the "Dumbing of Age" universe is the best thing he's got, and that it's the only place for Dina to be, and it's a decision he's making without her input. How do we know that Dina wouldn't rather live with the dinosaurs she idolizes? How do we know Dina doesn't want to live in a universe where "Jurassic Park" is an actual thing? How do we know Dina wouldn't rather live in Florida instead of Indiana?

Willis is a terrible God.
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>>83489078
>I wanted to subvert the shit outta [bad things happening to lesbian characters].

>So bad stuff is happening to Becky, but the narrative says Fuck No. Her dad’s attacked by her girlfriend in the woods. Her dad is followed by her best friend and somebody else on a friggin’ motorcycle. Her dad is hunted down by a goddamned SUPERHERO. And they all work together, somewhat unwittingly, to shut that jackass down. Physics is bruised a bit, but that’s the point. That’s the subversion. Becky’s not going down. The universe will melt in the face of her. And she will get that shining final moment with her father where she backs away, all grins, double birds. The last word. Because goddammit, she gets to win this time. Fuck you, dad! God answers lesbian prayers.

Obviously, Willis is an awful God, but one additional point to make here is that there's nothing wrong with a character being given a Win after having suffered.

However, it would have been nice to have seen that suffering, and not simply in the form of a flashback and a physics-defying car chase. Becky's previous sufferings is left to the reader's imagination, as well as her scene with Joyce; we get her rise to happiness in her relationship with Dina (which is also hinted at as being Becky hiding her pain by dating Dina on the rebound); and then all of a sudden we get a climactic third-act scene in which Becky's father finds her, kidnaps her, and get socked in the jaw by Joyce. And that's it.

I suppose what I'm getting at is that Becky's story is only half of a story. It's like starting "Star Wars, Episode IV" after Obi-Wan's death, when the Rebels stage their final attack on the Death Star. Or something like that.
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>>83489078
>Dina… needed to be in the best strip ever.

I feel a strip about a woman throwing herself into harm's way against a man twice her size so that her girlfriend might escape unharmed would have been better served without the Jurassic Park reference.
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>>83465663
>in a world where white Christians hold more acceptance
Your kidding, m8. Whites and Christians are the only denominations that people still feel safe, and even good about, shitting on anymore.
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>>83465481
The words "Defy/defied me".

Which nobody in the 21st century uses.
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>>83489586
No one uses defile either. But it's kinda hot when mary uses it.

Mary is becoming my waifu and I can't stop it.
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>>83472015
I was under the impression it's short for "Snoopy".
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>>83489449
>without the Jurassic Park reference
One that didn't make sense, at that. The first clever girl was clever because they used one raptor as bait so the other could flank the hunter, cleverly reversing the hunter/hunted role.

Dina was a clever girl because "lol hiding in bush for Jurassic Park reference"
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>>83491923
>bumping the thread after an hour of no activity
Fucking why? I like laughing at Willis as much as the next person but why does there need to be a 24/7 general for this pile of shit?
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>>83489028
>>83488797

Walkyverse: Civil War. Choose a side!
Granted God-Willis would probably try to solve all the problems and trauma he's caused by resetting the universe yet again. After three or four times he's gotten pretty good at it.
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>>83492031
We were this close to 500 posts. Now we're there.

>>83492054
There's only been one reset, and a couple of parallel worlds, no?
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>>83492258
I believe it's three universes: Roomies/It's Walky/Joyce and Walky/It's Pregnancy, Shortpacked (an offshoot universe based on but outside from It's Walky), and Dumbing of Age.

It really is a bit unhealthy how Willis falls back on the same characters in every comic, especially given the information in >>83485604. Like, seriously, branch out, man!
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>>83492054
>Ninja Rick and Ronald Regan will never appear again because they don't fit in the grounded DoA universe

Fuck me
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>>83492518
I'm pretty sure Shortpacked is in It's Walkyverse, actually
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Just as a bit of a thought experiment, I looked over the first week of strips and listed important facts & other continuity things. It's more thorough than the other weeks will be, simply because we meet nearly all the major characters here.

>Book 1
>Chapter 1
>Week 1

Starts September 10, 2010, which is a Friday.

>Becky and Joyce check out Joyce's new room. First poop reference. It's established that Becky is going to a different school. Joyce's dad complains that the dorm is nicer than when he was in school. Joyce mopes because Becky will be gone, but Becky is encouraging. A few other characters are visible in the lobby. Joyce has a lot of stuffed animals. Joyce's parents leave; they live 3 hours away. Joyce tells Becky she won't forget her, and Becky tells her not to change.

>Billie and Walky show up at the check-in desk. Billie is established as an alcoholic by the check-out person and by Walky. First religion-based cursing. Billie doesn't like Walky and is cautious about rooming with his sister, who we can see on her motorcycle. We learn that Sal went to Catholic school, and Walky references Billie's alcoholism a second time.

>Danny and Dorothy (boyfriend and girlfriend) arrive and clearly state their problems: Dorothy is transferring to Yale later, and Danny only went to IU to follow her. Joe and Danny know each other.

So how many people are interested in working on this? I think it would be a fun project to explore how ridiculous the character arcs are for such a short amount of time.

But I have a Master's in English, so my idea of fun is probably a bit skewed.

Anyway, it could be a fun project if we want to deconstruct this monstrosity together. It only took a few minutes to jot these notes, so it won't be hard if we can get a group together.

I'm including the first 7 strips for reference so you can see what I drew from.
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>>83463869

So Amber went off the deep end pretty fast
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>>83493121
The calendar in strip #3 implies August.

As for an analysis of DoA, I think it would work best not so much in a strip-by-strip basis, but in more of a totality. Y'know, like collecting all of a single day's worth of story and analyzing it collectively, seeing what happens during that day's events and how it stacks up compared to previous days.

Or something like that. That was the idea I had for a DoA analysis video series, at least.
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>>83492545
Well, I mean, there could be kids in a history class watching a video on Ronald Regan.
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>>83493121
The $64,000 question: was Willis planning even then to make Becky the obnoxiously quirky lesbian she is today, or did it just kinda happen?
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>>83493121
>There's a MUSLIM working at the desk!
>SO PROGRESSIVE!
then she was never seen again because you can only hate religious christians.
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>>83492545
:(
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>>83493290
Thanks--I didn't notice that! I was just going with the date it was published and figured we'd get a better idea in a later strip.

Yeah, I was working with the original concept and figured if we broke it down into chunks, then we could make videos over each day and whatnot, like you said.

Going week-by-week would allow us to get some general ideas and then create an overall picture of what we found.
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>>83493429
RIGHT??

According to a quick check, she shows up in a total of 7 strips in 6 years. SO PROGRESSIVE.
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>>83493402
I think so. Her original character description talked about how she "totally loves Joyce." He was SUPER-pleased with himself and said everyone should have seen it coming.
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>>83493757
My bad--two of those "appearances" are literally silhouettes.
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>>83493788
>He was SUPER-pleased with himself
Willis' perpetual state.
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>>83494960
Maybe his seizures are moments of rational thought, and they're so horrifying he pisses and shits himself.
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Oh willis is doing the parenthesis thing too.
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Mr. Brown continues to be the only sane fucking person in this comic.
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>>83495489
why is that dog so horrifying
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>>83495489
Good old "I'm destroying my best friend's life and laughing about it" Becky.
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>>83495723
good ole' "i'm a lesbian" becky
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>>83495723
Joyce's life was built on lies and fundamentalist Christianity. It needed to be destroyed.

Now all Becky has to do is lace Joyce's meals with trace quantities of LSD and subliminally convince her she's a lesbian (there is experimental proof that LSD can alter sexual orientation), and we're golden.
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>>83495489
Becky really needs to learn when to shut the fuck up, and not talk about the crimes she committed within talking distance of Joyce's mum.

She's on thin ice, but does she get off the ice? No. She jumps up and down like a lunatic yelling about being a lesbian who broke into her own house.
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>>83495864
Bullshit, I've taken tons of LSD and I still love cockwait a minute.
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>>83464316 (prev strip)
>>83495489
Cool joke, Becky. You shithead.
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>>83495489
This is going to sound awful out of context, but fuck it: If Becky doesn't try to rape Joyce when they go to bed, then fuck her outright.
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