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Weekend /co/ creation thread

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Or /coc/ thread if that's what you look for in the catalog.

Wiki:
http://the-conservatory.wikia.com/wiki/The_/co/nservatory_Wiki

Doc:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1b_kW_QkFSAeCjGVP51kVG6J10gR8YLStcNpzPh-ARC0/edit

Last weekend's thread:
https://desustorage.org/co/thread/82756714/
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Last thread we talked about:

-The missing Demon Kings and demons in general
-Cosmic Crusaders anon was there
-New pics (Kid Cookie, Deelette, Motion others)
-The story of Erin's trip to the Cryptic Skein was finished
-General Freedom VS Tantrum
-Tats rivals
-And everything else I didn't mention
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Looks like we're in for another slow thread.
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Well, to try to get the ball rolling, what kind of stories do you think would be in Chaptor's memoirs?
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Could Tats status as a reporter make her used as a framing device for other people's (one-shot?) stories?
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>>82994283
Yes, I've actually brought that up before, like how she's the one collecting Chaptor's memoirs, or conducting an interview that goes into another character recounting an exploit of theirs.
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>>82994283
>friend from the old country comes up to tats' apartment
>catching up on old times
>tats asks how some other person is
>turns out they're still there
>so they're going to go and get them
>but they need tats' contacts to get them some phony papers
>and after this they set off
>and they're never heard from again...until...
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>>82994924
Neat.

Jatpack Viking needs to start working out again.
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Dang it thread.
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Short is justice.
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>>82998958
No, big is best.
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>>82998958
>>82999914
So what's the third option that gets you thrown out a window?
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I just recently organized my archive, so suddenly I can post old stuff on a whim.
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>>83000623
Big and short?
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>>83001277
>smoking and wearing a wife beater

I thought she was Eastern European, not trailer trash.
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>>83001377
Wrong big.
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>>83001277
How old is Tats? I mean she has a Red Star hat but there's no way she wasn't anything but a baby by the time the soviet union fell. Is it just memorabilia?
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>>83001277
Did you find anything you forgot you drew?
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>>83002978
What year is it during "present day" time in the /co/verse?

1989 is probably the year both Ladybug and Diving Belle were born.
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>>83001377
Big, short, AND very young. A powerful combo.
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>>83002999
I do have recollections of most of the drawings I did, although I don't always remember what it was for.
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>>83004906
Together, they are stronger.
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>>83005140
That's... Beckett-Chan, from the Philosopher-chans idea.
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>>83001277
What's the oldest thing you've got?
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What are the opinions on the two demon kings who still lack a design anyway?
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>>83008325
It's kind of hard to say. Plus that one was done by coscru anon which took some liberties versus the designs that were already there. Only really the Crimson King and Glutton Lord are 1:1 there.
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>>83006960
Turning various concepts and people into anime girls is the most hackneyed, insipid bullshit ever.
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>>83008947
Well there aren't any other group shots.

We have names and some ideas for the two that still need to be filled (pic is out of date), but I don't know how agreed upon those ideas are.
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>>83008947
Wavering Mason is essentially the same too.
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>>83011182
And that is the only pic of the Supreme Duke, him being one of Cosmic Crusaders anon's designs.

I'm still not sure where to put that story of Steve telling Erin about the time he met the Duke (via golem) at a club since it takes place after she's gotten back to Earth.
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I wonder if this will ever be updated.
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Bumping.
Might do something GG if you have requests
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>>83015316
How about her making gadgets?
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>>83015492
I'm leeching onto this request to add how about she's wearing a front zipper sports bra while tinkering around/making gadgets?
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>>83015492
>>83016006
Instead of a utility belt, a utility bra?
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>>83016054
Would it have pockets to hold her tools, or would she just use her cleavage?
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>>83016054
>>83018113
So she's actually able to pull things out of her cleavage, and since the comics code blocks that from the brains of almost everyone, it looks like she pulling gadgets out of nowhere and no one ever finds her gadgets when they search her.
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>>83018686
That sounds pretty ingenious.
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>>83006960
Wow, people remember who that was for, I only remember the concept for some reason. Never had too good of a memories. I just noted that that drawing appeared 6 months before the first Colby drawing.
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>>83002978
I can't see why she'd wear it, considering her own country was an oppressive regime. She'd be personally aware of what it represented, rather than some western millennial were a Ché shirt.

If anything she'd wear a beret with a cross of Lorraine on it, if she wore any hat representing a fight against tyranny.
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>>83018686
I don't think she would do that since even though other's wouldn't notice, she herself would probably not be comfortable with that. Also storing things in cleavage is pretty uncomfortable especially if they're of an oblong shape like a grappling hook or something.
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>>83007049
2011 June, 30th. Although I have already participated in coc in a while, this is the first related drawing on the blog. It was during my "I wanna do things myyyyy wwaaay" period.
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>>83016006
>>83016054
That'd be especially anachronistic, wouldn't it?
The few times we see it she's got those metal cone ones from the 50s
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>>83019446
>he fell for the french resistance meme
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>>83019759
How inventive is Audrey, anyway? And is it only with things made of metal? One could imagine that maybe at some point she created a sports bra to keep her girls in during missions. It's not anymore far-fetched than Peter Parker having made his form-fitting Spider-Man costume, is it? In this case, it's just one article of clothing as opposed to an entire suit. Maybe it could still have something reminiscent of that 50s cone look, though.
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>>83023986
There was a joke how they fight a guy from the future and some of the future tech the apprehend from him is the material sports bras are made of.

In the 50s era GG is set in, they probably only have those wire bras still.
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>>83024130
I think there was an idea for strip about that. Mad scientist has a super magnet, Audrey gets stick to it because of the sheer amount of underwire she needs.
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>>83025363
This one?

It's not exactly what you're describing.
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>>83025535
It's similar but not the same one I'm thinking of. Maybe the post I'm thinking off got telephoned into that.
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>>83025774
It might not have been made into a comic then since there are only 7(?) GG comic strips so far that I know of.
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>>83019564
If she makes a utility bra, which I guess is already out of character for her(?), odds are anything she pulls out of it will be stored in pouches, so it's not like any of the gadgets are in direct contact with her skin.

Anyway, here's hoping the thread survives the night.
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>>83026317
Still think that she would never do anything like that and just make it a belt like a normal sidekick. Utility bra is a stupid idea especially since you'd have to dig around for things even if they were in pouches, the shape of the breasts would by necessity require more time to fish around for things that you need than just a belt. GG has huge tits but her character does not exclusively revolve around said tits. Something like BQ would be much better for a "cleavage of holding" type character.
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>>83015316
FUCK ALL THESE OTHER IDEAS

Silver Queen and Golden Girl being rewarded with some frosty chocolate milkshakes from the owner of a 50s style diner after thwarting a robbery. Maybe GG can even hold it in her cleavage or something like that one Power Girl image, I don't care.
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/r/ this with /coc/ characters.
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>>83026936
I do kind of agree with that. It just does seem like it's too late to give her a proper utility belt, but a utility bra wouldn't make much sense either. Just have her use hammer space, I guess.

Although is there a joke to be made there? Like maybe she tries a utility belt but gives up on it because she's got enough things flopping around and distracting her that she doesn't have any control over as it is, or she lacks the hips for it to stay on properly.
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>>83015492
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>>83027855
Ey.
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>>83027855
Aw yeah. Saving this super hard.
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>>83027855
That's really good for just a few hours.
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>>83028225
I should add: it's absolutely great to begin.
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>>83018686
No, I mean while she's working in a bra, she'd use her cleavage to hold tools like screwdrivers when she's not using them to keep them in place.

>>83027855
And holy SHIT that is good!
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>>83027855
Amazing stuff! This is quality GG content.
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>>83027855
Nice.
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>>83027855
This is an amazing drawing. The angle and shading really gives depth and a sense of... I don't know, realistic perspective? I'm not sure if I'm using any of the right words, but it looks fantastic.
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>>83027855
Cute. I like the magnifying goggles.
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We're not going down this early.
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>>83028717
That's a neat idea

Thanks guys, usually I only draw lewd things which I LARGELY, and HEAVILY favor. But when it's fun it's fun.
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>>83027855
Nice one.

>>83028717
That sounds uncomfortable.

>>83026936
I think if she ever figured out there's a mental block in place on her world, she would hide things there if she knows she's going to get captured.
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>>83032560
Threads are sinking fast today it seems.
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Save!
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>>82993656
Before he went bald.
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>>82994283
That makes me think: did Marion ever get in to any adventures during Britains past, or meet any famous people?
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>>83037701
Probably, but it does seem she was confined during her first generation there, by the second generation they probably let her out into the field.

Now it's the fourth generation and she is once again confined, only this time in a tomb of paperwork.
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Who's got the swankiest place in /coc/? Plana has a pretty kickass palace on top of a mountain.
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>>83038856
I don't think we've ever put much thought into where most of the characters live.

Chaptor has a mansion, but I don't know that the exterior of it has ever been drawn.

It's located n the floating island, with an estate so big it doubles as a park.
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Sketch of Golden Girl for this thread to stay alive
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>>83040149
Cute! CUTE!
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>>83040149
Nice.

Have you ever thought of drawing her doing something action orientated?
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>>83041018
Oh eah I thinking of drawing her doing some action, if you know what I mean ;) But seriously I am kinda new here so if someone have suggestions I can draw some stuff later
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>>83041371
GG swinging through the air on a grapple, catching someone representing a /coc/ thread as they fall.
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When will big hair become better than big tits?
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>>83041513
Probably never, but Briana has a pretty sufficient lion's mane.
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>>83041513
About 30 years ago.
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>>83040149
This is an adorable rendition of Golden Girl! Good job, man!

>>83041371
Doing some... other... kind of action? Curses, though, we're on a blue board! I really like the way you draw her so I'd love to see you draw in that kind of art, but rules are rules. I'll try to shoot some board-appropriate ideas if I can come up with anything, though, since I'd really like to see more GG art from you and I'm sure I'm not alone.
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>>83041371
Maybe just some acrobatics? I mean she's pretty much just robin but with giant tits.
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>>83041995
That is how the idea got started.
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>>83041513
Why not Both?
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>>83041371
I'm down for pretty much anything if there's ample focus on her boobs, I'm not even gonna bother to cover this fact up. But maybe the situation she's in can be something cute? Maybe an everyday situation, too. There's not as much art of her in her civvies as there is of her in costume.
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guess I can bump with what I've been working on.
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>>83043888
>trips wasted

damn.
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>>83043913
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>>83043929
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>>83043974
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>>83044022

getting kinda lazy here.
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>>83044078
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>>83044204
So is this a shock wave through the air or did his fist connect with a building?
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>>83044938

shockwave. General freedom pushed Tantrums fist down which connected with the ground.
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>>83040149
I've seen your art somewhere before but I can't remember where. It's very good, especially the face.
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>>83042790
Does Silver Queen have a love interest?
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>>83046064
Silver Queen is less developed (haha) than Golden Girl is.
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>>83046064
I don't think that's ever been explored before. There's still a lot about Silver Queen that we don't know about. I don't think she even has her own wiki article.
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>>83041371
If you're REALLY interested in drawing THAT kind of stuff, it looks like someone made a GG thread on /aco/ that you can post that stuff on.
>>>/aco/584716
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>>83044204

one pic left. This is really frustrating.
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>>83047940
What's frustrating? Not happy with the way it turned out?
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>>83046581
>>83046669
I have a strip idea that would help with more non-GG specific world building but it requires like, an entire team of superwomen.
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>>83051135
Color-themed or metal-themed?
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>>83051135
There are some interesting collections of public domain golden age supers who could be useful in making such a team.
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>>83051184
It wouldn't matter. The basic script idea would have Silver Queen and her teammates, one per panel, with the final panel having Audrey note that they're all subject to the Most Common Superpower trope and thus she's in good company.
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>>83051526
And maybe realizing that she's actually the biggest one there?
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>>83051586
Possibly. I was thinking of this old Cartoon Network commercial
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t8iDFG6d734

and trying to figure out how to make a similar joke as the one at the end.
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>>83051677
>and trying to figure out how to make a similar joke as the one at the end.
Have Audrey narrate it, talking about she's always meeting other superheroines through Silver Queen, and they all tell her she's going to develop into a fine superhero one day, and in the last panel she comments that she's already more "developed" than they are.
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>>83047474
>GG isn't for porn!
>fuckload of porn
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>>83053675
I'd be nice if the porn artists would throw in a non-porn comic strip every so often.
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>>83053675
It's the ones that aren't intended to be lewd that end up the lewdest.
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>>83053675

What do you expect from a girl with giant beasts?

No seriously, What do you expect people?
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>>83053871
True. Some of them are pretty talented, and it'd be great to have more non-porn GG from them.
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>>83053675
>>83054166
>>83054296

Perverse Psychology.
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>>83053675
>>83054166
GG really isn't for porn, but I think that's actually the MAIN REASON there's so much porn of her. It's the whole "forbidden fruit" thing. She's not supposed to be for porn, so because of that, people find the idea of porn of her that much hotter. It's an inevitability, so we should just try and do our part by trying to make more non-porn content of her.
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>>83054480
Then why doesn't Brianna have a single porn pic?
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>>83054480
I think she has a lot of porn of her because she has tits the size of her head, not because people were told not to.
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>>83054480
>so we should just try and do our part by trying to make more non-porn content of her.
I still have a text file with all those strip ideas we haven't done yet. We just gotta find people to do 'em.
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>>83054480

Anon, If she didn't have huge boobs.

She will be forgotten like [insert /co/ character]
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>>83054598
Look at the post above you. Briana has super huge tits, too, and is the main character of a fucking comic called BreastQuest, and yet there's no porn of her. So clearly it isn't just the tits.
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>>83054738
Briana is also incredibly stout-shaped rather than a thin innocent girl with huge tits.
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>>83054480
>>83054585
>>83054598
>>83054666
>>83054695
>>83054738
It's because she has huge tits AND is jailbait from the 50s.
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>>83054784

She is magical girl.
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>>83054784
>Huge tits, super young, from the 1950s.
You have to admit that's quite a unique combo. Sometimes mixing together different things can trigger someone's sexual fascination all the more.
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>>83054877
Don't forget she's also a superhero. /co/ is crazy for capeshit as it is.
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>>83054863
Saburox should do an Audrey!Sorceress cosplay next, if only for the floppy hat.

ANYWAY when is /coc/ gonna produce something like K6BD?
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>>83054666
It does seem like lately every time we try to get one of these done, we never hear back from the artist. It's a shame, really.
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>>83055029
At first, I was here to steal one of your artists.
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>>83055029
>something like K6BD

In what way would that something be similar to it?

As in story wise, or as in the art? Because there's nothing we can do about the art without a dedicated drawfag.
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>>83055225
I mean in scale. Something that gets beyond just the forumlative idea stage.
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>>83055347
When there's a dedicated drawfag who sticks around long enough to draw it.
Nothing we can do about that.

Cosmic Crusaders anon is you best bet for it, and he's usually too busy with work to draw the comic he wants to draw.
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>>83055617
Hmmm, that's a shame. As much as I love talking about the resident oppai loli it seems a shame that so many ideas in these threads go unfulfilled.
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>>83055775
We can spin the idea mill all we want, but we cannot actualize without a drawfag, and a dedicated on at that.

There are a number of them who have tried, but none have yet to produce the full comics they wanted to make when they started.

On the other end, we can write stories all we like, but no one every takes notice of the written word here, all anyone cares about are pictures.
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>>83016006
Went somewhere else with it, a little bit


Wish I was still a NEET
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>>83056805
Whoof, she's not the only one sweating right now.
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>>83056805
Goddamn man, you're awesome. I'll consider these to be my birthday presents.
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>>83056805
Well, hot damn. This is actually closer to what I was hoping for anyway, so I can't say I'm complaining.
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>>83054769
Wouldn't Briana not having any porn make her the purest girl of all? Plus she's got the whole emotionally stunted "born yesterday" thing going on, she's more innocent than GG.
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>>83056805
Great stuff, man. Thanks for providing these awesome drawings! I hope you never stop drawing Audrey.
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I am kinda curious why Golden Girl and Silver Queen doesnt have main villain/antagonist like Batman and Robin with Joker. I woud love to develop some bad guys.
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>>83060648
Well there's the Racketeer, Yokazuna Yeti, the evil scientist and the greaser kid. Have anything in mind?
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>>83060733
(Not him)
The Racketeer is probably the most hilarious to me. I might enjoy doing a strip or two with him in it, but I'm not a writer-type.
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>>83060648
Jade Empress is their serious nemesis.

She's an ancient Chinese mummy out collecting various magical artifices. SQ's arm bracers are on her list.

She has a terracotta army that she controls because a jade heart is implanted in every one of them.

It's the closest there is to a plot in the GG setting.
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>>83060733
>>83060938
Well all already existing bad guys are good, I just think they are doesnt have all that charisma for being main villain and I think he should be less serious, I mean its story about 13 old with the huge rack. But thats of course just my opinion.
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>>83061338
14 - 15 year old. She's in high school, not middle school.

I said Jade Empress is their serious nemesis.
They don't really fight her all that often though, usually it's either Rocker Billy or the Racketeer.

There's a lot of untapped villains in that GG's A-Z comic.
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>>83061472
I remember GG being described as a junior high student who had just recently entered puberty, as opposed to a high school freshman.
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>>83060938
Has she even appeared in the GG strips yet? I know the backstory for her exists and all, but I don't think she's made an appearance yet, right?
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>>83060648
So far, there haven't really been many adventures fleshed out for them, either. There's only 7 strips in existence so far, I think.
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>>83037701
>"A pleasure to meet you, your royal highness."
>"V-V-V-V-Vampire!"
>flash forward
>"And that's all King George ever said to me."
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>>83061578
I'm pretty sure she's supposed to be a freshmen in high school.

>>83061625
She has not.

She was made to be their "serious" villain, but since no one wants to play that angle yet, she hasn't gotten any spot light at all.

I think she'd be someone from SQ's days from before GG came along.
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>>83061701
>I think she'd be someone from SQ's days from before GG came along.

That'd probably be a good idea. I know that GG is the whole reason for the creation of these villains, but it seems like anons forget that Audrey is the sidekick to Silver Queen, the villains would naturally focus on the main heroine.
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>>83061472
>>83061657
I woud like to draw some comics of GG, but I have a brain of 6 year old and can only think about pervert jokes and boobs shenanigans and what read in wiki main idea of everybody ignoring her huge tits. And there is now villain/antagonist for my stupid jokes so I kinda stuck in here
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>>83062083
-Panel one GG jolts out of bed because a hero alarm is going off
-Panel two she's struggling to get her costume on while running (like hopping on one leg)
-Panel three she gets stuck in the door on her way out
-Panel four she's dealing with the speed of the bike causing her boobs to not be cooperative (they're bouncing into her face repeatedly in the sidecar if she's in the sidecar)
-Panel five she's punching a purse snatcher in the face
-Panel six ggcivicduty.png

>PANEL 1: Missiles streak through the sky.
>RADIO VOICE: Soviet missiles incoming! Those blasted Commies are trying to destroy Platinum City!
>PANEL 2: As the missiles approach the cityscape, something begins to rise up to meet them.
>RADIO VOICE: Deploy missile interception system!
>PANEL 3: The "something" is a gigantic bra, suspended from two poles like a slingshot. The missiles land in the cups with a loud "SPROING!"
>RADIO VOICE: Interception successful! The city is saved!
>PANEL 4: In the foreground, a general salutes Golden Girl, who returns the salute. In the background, the recoil from the bra sends the missiles flying away from the city.
>GENERAL: Golden Girl, your country is eternally grateful for your contribution to national defense!
>GG: Happy to be of service, General! That one was getting too small for me anyway.
>PANEL 5: Audrey suddenly wakes up in bed. It was all a dream. A book (her dream journal) can be seen sitting on her nightstand.
>PANEL 6: Audrey opens up her dream journal and begins writing in it.
>AUDREY: October 3: I had that silly missile dream again. That's the fifth time this week, and it's only Tuesday!
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>>83062083
>Rockerbilly is commanding people to riot with sound powers
>Cut to SQ and GG. "I'll take care of this musical malcontent Golden Girl! You disable the speakers!"
>GG grappling hooks up to giant novelty speakers, has to tightrope walk to them.
>This was much easier when I could see my feet. (Maybe add a pov shot to illustrate the point)
>She falls on top of RB, disabling him.
>Great job, Golden Girl! The day is saved!
>She lands on him boobs-to-face. As she gets off him in the last panel, he's staring wide-eyed up into the sky and mumbling in stunned incoherence.

Or even recreate this comic I did in MS paint.

I fully expect you to disappear forever now that these script ideas have been posted, just like the last two guys.

There are other script ideas still.
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>>83062179
>Requesting comics about Communists to drawfag from Russia
:^)
>>83062273
Nah dude I will be here for time to time. Do you think I have a life to live, if I have I will not be sitting on 4chan for sure :)
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>>83062484
I choose to believe the Soviets had many comics during the 1950s of heroes fighting the evil capitalists, so it all evens out. There is probably a Soviet version of GG and SQ that they have to team up with to stop world ending threats.

It's just that the last two times someone drawing GG asked for comic ideas and those scripts were posted, they never came back.
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>>83062586
>Soviet comics in 1950s
Pleas nobody cares about comics all Russinas were busy to earn some money for food so they family doesnt die from hunger. Maybe the was some shitty propaganda comics I dont know.

I can understand those artist, drawing good comics not so easy. Mine probably will be some cheap crap too
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>>83062273
Sketch for now. Just to see if I understand everything right
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>>83064748
Well, I can't speak for anyone else, but I'm hyped.

Anyone got the style guide that one anon posted, or was that lost when the archive fell? Because I can do the dialogue if we can't get that info it to the artist.
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>>83064748
Holy shit I like Silver Queen in your style, goddamn.
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>>83054769
>Not liking big girls
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>>83064748
I love these shorts, can't wait to see it finished.
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>>83064748
Nice.

Not sure if the chalkboard opening panel ties into the following panels for that strip.

>>83069471
That's right, soon it will be their time again.
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Well I've been given ample reason to bump this thread.
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>>83072642
We must band together or surely this thread's position will sag in the catalog.
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>>83072845
The high possibility of new content in this thread makes me want to see it last, but while we're waiting for the GG strips, I wouldn't mind talking about something else.

Like the space setting set in the future or the demon setting.
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>>83074361
Or BQ or Ladybug or Colette & Friends or any of the other hundred million things in /coc/. It always astonishes me how slow these threads are sometimes.
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>>83075123
Unless someone is drawing content, no one ever wants to talk since they don't feel it'll amount to anything.

That's my guess anyway.

The Lovely Ladybug team set up a tumblr that updates MWF with comic pages.
http://lovelyladybugcomic.tumblr.com/
Their mindset is the next chapter will be finished by the time they go through all the previous pages and they'll be able to post the new pages there like a proper webcomic.
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>>83075475
Well I like BQ but nobody wants to talk about that.
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>>83076047
I'd talk about it if it was actually going somewhere with the story using the plot elements already developed instead of just more world building or titty talk.

What were the summaries for the scripts? Boobanon gave up after writing one script because no one could commit to finishing drawing it, but she posted summaries for what would be in the others.

What was the summary for chapter 2's script?
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Alright chumps, here's something any ding-dong can try.
GG is pretty fleshed out, at least design-wise, and considering part of the joke is that the rest of her body will fill-up and catch up with her tits when she's older, how would Golden Guardian, older GG, look like?
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>>83076527
2 is a battle between Sharon and Bri. Bri is wounded and wanders to Los Lesbos where we meet Carmilla and Laura. Thr bounty hunter from the short story catches up to her and they fight, and in this fight both Briana's standard revolver and C&L's bar is destroyed. C&L join Bri because they've got nothing else tying them to Los Lesbos, and before they depart Bri gets her super gun from the resident gunsmith. Issue 3 is Cassandra and Seymour.
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>>83076974
>>>/aco/584930
Part of her initial design. Although I'm sure no one would object to more content involving Golden Guardian.
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>>83077179
>Part of her initial design.
I'm aware of that, my dude. I'm trying to get things going by proposing people itt throw-in to get a more finalized look.
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>>83077101
>Sharon VS Bri

Why are they fighting? How does the fight go?
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>>83078865
The fight is initiated by Sharon because a) she's kind of a moody bitch after what happened to her, and b) Briana's giant knockers incense the anger over her loss.
It's a draw since Briana is super powerful obviously, but Sharon has a ton of tricks up her sleeve along with a lot of weapons. It's basically Batman VS Superman, since Sharon is a mix of Punisher and Batman. Issue 2 starts with the fight, it picks up after a brief conversation following the end of issue 1.
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>>83076974
Man I wanna see more pixel art of the /co/verse friends. Pixel /co/lette in particular.
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>>83079872
I don't believe Colette has ever been done.
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>>83079872
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>>83076974
I think she'd probably go through a Nightwing phase for a while. I don't particularly care for the current Golden Guardian look, it's too much like Donna Troy.

>>83069471
This is really cute.
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>>83079872
Is there anyone you'd like to see other than /co/lette? I could try doing something with them the next time I'm doing pixel stuff. It'll probably be a while before I do, but I need to get some more practice in at some point.
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>>83081469
Soon it will be their time of relevancy again.
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>>83081475
I'd love to see Motion.
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>>83081475
Not that anon, but would you mind trying something with any of the Vixen Six?
http://the-conservatory.wikia.com/wiki/Vixen_Six

Just to see some shine in some of the more obscure characters.
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>>83081469
Have a coloured image of them
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>>83081475
Ursula is my favorite villain, if you wanna try something less human.
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>>83080159
Dem pixel /co/lette feet. Hnnngh.
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>>83082554
You mean Ursus McFlannigan, right?
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>>83082554
Ursus* the bear

Stupid autocorrect
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>>83047940

and thats it, lets see what I do next.

>>83049558

the sequence is kinda how I imaginated it but damn, I didn't think I was that weak at drawing heads/faces.
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>>83084955
Next General Freedom either punches Tantrum's face, gets headbutted by him, or gets swatted at.

That's my guess.
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>>83047474
Lots of new pics happening over there.

Van's drawing GG fighting Ma'am it looks like.
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>>83084955
more like so

tantrum isnt meant to look angry as much as contemptful

also tantrum is only like 15 feet tall, you're making him out to be a colossus
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>>83089688
>>83084955
this is the original height chart i did but i can definitely see him being a bit bigger.
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>>83089688
>>83089923
Would it be too bullshit if he got bigger if he stayed in that form for too long?
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>>83090116
to an extent, if he continually grows i'd say he should MAX at like 20, maybe a little more
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>>83088363
>crossovers
Why? I mean, it a /coc/ crossovers, but still.
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>>83089923
Is that an older, but not that older, Liberty Lass?
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>>83090594
Because someone posted a funny comic idea in the /aco/ thread for it.
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>>83090645
>>83089923
nope, she was a character suggestion that faded out of existence.

she is the /ss/ version of general ross

on a side note, i think i drew her very ugly on my first go so here is a better looking edit
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>>83090932

Note: "Generess" does not exist. "General" is a unisex rank in terms of command.
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>>83091073
i am aware, lol.
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>>83090759
>crossovers
>why?
No, I get you. It wasn't that funny, but I get you.
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>>83089923
>>83090932
You got a gallery, sweet cheeks?
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>>83090932
>she is the /ss/ version of general ross

This is, was, and always will be a shitty idea.
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>>83092215
He already said it faded from existence.
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>>83092202
kind of
http://www.roillz.tumblr.com/

i don't post often but will probably start soon?
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>>83089923
amended height chart.

i think the female officer could still be made into a thing if the /ss/ creepiness was discarded from the idea.
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>>83093602
That's some really good looking work, anon. Hype to see more of it here, or wherever.
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>>83093890
Maybe make her someone who sorts through files of super activity.
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>>83064748
Made me think of an alternate ending where Audrey asks Rockerbilly in his civilian persona how he got 2 black eyes at school the next day, and he's too embarrassed to talk about it.
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>>83076974
>>83081469
A Nightwing phase is an interesting angle.
Maybe she takes inspiration from 60s costume designs, with her Golden Guardian design taking cues from 70s era costumes?
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>>83076974
>>83081469
>>83095950
I think you're expressly missing the point of GG in that the sole purpose of her existence is to make tit punchlines in a sunday newspaper style comic strip. That's it. None of what you're discussing will ever come into play.
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>>83096171
>None of what you're discussing will ever come into play.

Yeah, like most of the other stuff in these threads.
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Well bump with hopes the thread makes it through the night and more new things are posted in it.
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>>83096171
>I think you're expressly missing the point
Not really when it's about her future self. Since her body "balancing" out when older, was also the point, and part of the joke.
I get you, though.
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>>83097495
Having the distant future of 1977 implementing both aesthetics of 1970s sci-fi and 1950s sci-fi could be fun.
Just thought of a Zardoz parody with GG
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>>83064748
Daily reminder that I am not dead, just busy. Probably someone should do speech bubbles, becouse I am not really good at this stuff.
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>>83089688

I exaggerated his hight because in this picture >>83043929 I did Tantrum first and then GF so big that he mostly covered Tantrum. It was either do another angle or make GF smaller, it was a quick decision.
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>>83084197
>that apron

She was the lion the whole time!
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>>83102145
We still need more /coc/ heroines in wrestling getups.
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>>83101107
i understand, but the exaggeration is excessive, you're making him like 50-60 feet tall
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>>83100940
Looks nice so far.
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Threads are sinking super fast right now it seems.
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>>83102867
The number of actual wrestler characters in the setting is quite limited.
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>>83105469
The wrestling themed alt-universe where nearly everyone is a wrestler solves that problem.
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Here some sketch of Brianna. I make her kinda thick, not in the right mood for drawing muscles :)
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>>83107022
Well that's certainly a different take on her. Looks good though.
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>>83107022
Wew. When you're in the mood for muscles draw her again.
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>>83107022
After defeating the DFC Empire, she raids their snack pantry.
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>>83107632
There was that idea for the future 'epilogue scene' of her having a kid with one of her crew... softer even curvier super(soldier)MILF? Don't know what to think of that
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Is Strummer's forward and aggressive facade due to her small chest?
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>>83108370
No? It's never been a factor as far as I've heard, she acts like that because she's a goddamn punk.

ANARCHY IN THE UK!
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>>83108110
Milk that makes her children(super)strong. Besides she's alreadt got pretty wide hips, she's a powerful, solidly built woman as it is.
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>>83108601
Well think it would be more passing on her superpowered genetics that would make her kid strong.

So similar in looks to the picture of "little Bri" but darker skin since her father would be Arthur. A scrappy little brat that could stalk and takedown wasteland beasts with just a knoife.
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>>83108528
So a typical angry white girl?
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>>83108997
Coping with children when she herself never had a childhood would be a fun slice of life thing.
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>>83109161
Isn't she only like, 5 - 10 years old herself because of accelerated growth?
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>>83110579
More like 2.
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>>83109080
Who says she's white?
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>>83110936
All the art of her. Don't start this shit.
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>>83110677
How many years did it take to bring down the DFC?
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>>83111483
Well that hasn't really been decided on. She's "2" when the series starts at issue 1, so unless there's a timeskip I don't think the main series timeline would stretch on for more than a year.
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>>83108528
>>83109080
There was an idea that she was actually a shy royalist, who drops to her knee for the king/queen to thank them for allowing her to provide her faithful service.

With it being revealed that she's actually just a postman working for Royal Mail.
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>>83111920
Its alright to worship Queen Liz, she's a cool old lady.
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>>83112008
>Britain in ww2
>something close to Judge Anon's idea of heaven
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>>83111920
Strummer isn't a postman though, she fights monsters.
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>>83112008
>dressed like that
>still rides side-saddle

Too much Lady for me.

>>83112863
Obviously that's referring to backstory.
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>>83112907
Did she get discovered one day when delivering mail to the Queen's Queers?
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Someone say Queen's Queers?
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>>83111527
I think it would take a couple of years at least for her to meet everyone necessary for the alliance to form to oppose the DFC.

>>83079403
Does it just start in the middle of the fight?

Wouldn't ti make more sense for Sharon to have been after the same bounty Bri was after in issue 1 and her to fight Bri over it for muscling in on her territory?
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>>83108110
>preggo Bri
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>>83115079
The set up for the fight is Bri comes across a ruined DFC patrol, which is where she meet Sharon (who obviously did the ruining). Sharon's temper flares as described and they briefly fight. It's like Wolverine, sometimes he's just an aggressive asshole who picks flights for no reason. Sharon's character gets fleshed out later in the series so in the beginning she's just sort of a cunt.
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>>83115079
If I remember the script in question of Episode 1 Briana encounter Sharon after the latter wipes out a DFC patrol from ambush nearby the town that Briana was getting paid for her bounty at, which caused Briana to go investigate.

Sharon is kind of angry in general, what with the trauma and all, and the situation devolves into a fight because of Briana's interruption of her DFC-targeted killing spree being being a pretty charged atmosphere and the two being wasteland warriors that fight to survive?
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>>83115200
I really feel that Sharon should not like Bri initially because she's a new upstart rival bounty hunter.

It makes it less of a random encounter.
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>>83115289
Sharon is not a bounty hunter, she's the Punisher because the DFC killed her tits the kidnapping and everything else too but that's the part why she doesn't like meeting tittymonsters, its a sore reminder.

She slaughters DFC-aligned individuals for personal vengeance, not hunting down bandits for money.
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>>83115577
Then I guess she just hates Bri for being ignorant.

>>83115286
So the end of issue one, the DFC are looking to ambush Bri, but Sharon ambushes them and kills them all. Bri comes across this, Sharon is a rude fucker and mad that Bri doesn't even know how much she's being targeted. Then they fight?
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Since people are talking about it I'll post the BQ docs: https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1KNfs-o7z8bJv3l5Axl4zKMzjO4BgENHAhfK_lZt4Mvw/edit#gid=0

>>83115792
I'm not sure Sharon would know that Bri is being targeted specifically if that's what you're implying.
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>>83117114
It's obvious that Bri was being targeted when she sees her. She has huge tits and the DFC guys were sneaking around trying to be commando-like.
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>>83117203
Well probably in a general sense in the manner that they patrol for big tits. I think word has just really gotten back to the DFC about Briana's existence, that's implied in the bounty hunter's story.
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>>83117265
Based on the end of issue one's script, Bri still has no idea about the DFC and she fights Sharon because she killed a man in front of her.
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>>83118569
Sheeeit, I totally forgot about that last exchange. I really need to look through these old docs again. But then yea, there you have it. Briana probably has just a cursory knowledge of the DFC at that point and isn't aware of their villainy, and thinks Sharon is just a murderer.
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>>83118676
So it would start with Sharon talking down to Bri for showing any mercy to a DFC dog.

Bri has some sense of appreciation for life, so this bothers her.

Sharon condescendingly explains throughout their fight that the man Bri was going to try to save would've killed her without a moment's hesitation if given the chance.
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>>83100940
It's worth bumping for.
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Guess we need one of these with GG now.
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>>83121947
As has been said many times already.
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>>83125849
Fantastic.
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>>83125849

Its like that fight in Kingpin, where Claudia gets punched in the tits a bunch of times and it does nothing so she clobbers Roy

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m0tFoXvCcMc
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>>83125849
That's the one van is doing over in the /aco/ thread.

Also over on /aco/ there's another GG comic happening, only it involves tentacles and goes down a NSFW path.
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As long as I have a reason to bump this thread I guess.

>>83115053
Who were even members during his time with them?
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>>83125849
Shouldn't she say non instead of no?
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>>83125849
Excellent! Even at this early stage, this already looks very promising.
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>>83125849
I can just picture Markey watching this on the news with this exact expression.
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>>83132266
Marley, not Markey. Hit the wrong letter there.
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>>83113723
Could have done.

Or at least a Scottish branch.

>>83112863
I think it's meant to be a reference to this:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jon_the_Postman

>>83111920
Just imagining her trying to be all prim and proper and just coming across even worse.
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>>83125849
>dat pomf in panel five
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>>83112237
>>83112008
>something close to Judge Anon's idea of heaven

"The peculiar aspect of the Second World War in Britain is its amount of women in military uniforms and big leather boots. Such a change in fashion was prompted by the sudden appearance of a strangely white Argentinian man, who then vanished in a burst of white and static."
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>>83132818
Having her be a proper laced postman before getting a job at the QQs/Britainment where she's granted much more freedom in what she wears and how much she's able to get away with sounds interesting.

She should have a good grasp of bureaucratic things, but never lets anyone know since she does not want to get stuck sorting through the mountains of backlogged files.
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>>83134735
>Strummer riding around small highland villages on her old pashley
>little do they know the chaos going on inside her head
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>>83135915
>delivering paper by pedal bike

Is Britain still secretly a 1930s country?
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>>83136658
Just an affect of the Bad Thing That Happned.

A lot of roads and infrastructure has been destroyed so many modern ways of life very quickly became unworkable.

Though pedalling around Scotland would be total bullshit, so I envision something like the Australian model.
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>>83125849
Finished.
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>>83137821
>That cheesy wordplay
>that HON HON HON
Magnifique.
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>>83137821
Looks great and I love the word play.
Maybe /aco/ should make more GG threads if this is what comes out of it.
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>>83138438
>Maybe /aco/ should make more GG threads
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>>83137000
>the Australian model.

Postie Bikes?
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>>83135915
>>83134735
Being a postman is Scotland would explain her aggressive personality.

Imagine having to deliver junk mail to this house in the middle of nowhere.
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How did Strummer go from postie to monster puncher?
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>>83139211
Not all of Scotland is the scattered highlands.
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>>83139917
Only the good parts.

Though there are also scattered islands.
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>>83112237
>you will never live in a world where a standard issue company vehicle is a fucking triumph
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>>83138438
Or BQ threads if their creative output is this high.
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>>83142020
If GG is around 5'0", SQ must be like 6'4" or something, that's huge. Not even Wonder Woman is that tall. Is it just the bands that do that?
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>>83143287
Audrey isn't much taller than 4'8" I'd say, due to puberty not taking effect yet.
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>>83137000
Just use one of those off road ATVs then.

Also, I think Scotland is pretty much still the same since the thing that happened is central to Britain.
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>>83143486
Scotland is still Britain, and part of the greater british isle, do you mean England?
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>>83143601
Yes, I'm still waking up here.

>>83139915
I figured she moved down south to help out those southern pansies who can't seem to get a handle on the new monster problems they're having.

She realized she had regeneration powers after falling off a cliff while delivering the mail to fuck all nowhere.
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>>83144796
I feel like anons forget that a comic was drawn of this fanfiction born of a crack pairing.
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>>83146079
One look at the name is enough to give that away.
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>>83146123
Yes, but they often forget a 55 page comic came about because of it.
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i am in an GG drawing mood.
https://picarto.tv/BitS
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>>83146079
What about it?
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>>83146285
Dang it, it's the middle of the day and I have stuff to do.

If you end up drawing something too lewd for a blue board, there's a GG thread over on >>>/aco/584716
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>>83146445
Why is GG such a slut in fanwork but Bri is the purest waifu who at most acts a little smug about the fact that she is HUEG?
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>>83146693
Because Bri is best girl.
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one more
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>>83146693
GG is very blatantly fetish bait. It's obvious as hell, and she's got more fetish angles on her character (huge tits, petit body). Furthermore she's not tied to a narrative or anything like that. Bri's titties are bigger but she's more of a well rounded, proportioned woman. There's plenty of THICC characters. I suppose the trend is to prefer petit knockers than Amazon ones, even if the Amazon's are bigger.
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>>83147616
>this one project entirely around giant titties is fetish bait
>but this other project based entirely around giant titties isn't
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>>83148816
Maybe there's no Brianna porn because no one wanted to hurt boobanon's feelings.
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>>83148816
BQ isn't just about giant tits, it's about small ones, butts, robots, post-apocalyptic raiders, evil empire, and rebellion. GG is purely about tits. Now GG is no less a legitimate enterprise than BQ, but one does have a bit more going on than the other.
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>>83149179
BQ's reach exceeds its grasp.
I don't mean this to be disparaging, but like, if you want to drawfag a BQ strip it would require infinitely more range to do all the raiders and robots and empire towers and shit than a more funny cape strip.
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>>83148816
Nah, BQ is about cow tits vs flatties in the post-apocalypse.
And also about FREEDOM.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1ww5hUMN8KI
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>>83147365
How far did you go with it?
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>>83150717
i'm streaming live right this second.
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>>83149280
Well BQ was never really supposed to be a strip, it's more of a standard comic book, which generally have more going on than just a comic strip.
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>>83150783
>no flash on Android

Fug. I'll look for the finished pieces in the /aco/ thread.
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>>83150924
Mate, this ain't Hogwarts. Ambition isn't intrinsically bad. Just daunting.
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>>83149280
Draw friend here, I tend to agree. I've been reading the scripts and they'd require a lot more design skill than your average pin up(which is way more likely to get done).

I want to tackle at least the first issue, I feel as though I could level up significantly.
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>>83151482
The thing about the first issue is, two different people have both started on it and never finished it.

http://boards.plus4chan.net/coc/t51279.html#p51745

They both got to around to the 9 or 10 page mark before disappearing.
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>>83152304
why do you think that is?
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>>83151482
If you really want to have a go at it be my guest, if there's anything I can do to help you let me know. Having it actually get finished would be great.

>>83148855
m8 I don't care, people can draw whatever they want.
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>>83152304
A shame they didn't relay it. Maybe the next time someone takes a crack at it implying they could just pick up at page 11.
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>>83152375
Time consumption, lack of coordination between artists.

>>83152444
That would be better than starting over from page 1 again.

It feels like I'm seeing Spiderman's origin over and over and over again when I think about how they always start at page 1.
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>>83152375
Well John switched over to doing commissions to pay his bills, the other I don't know what happened.
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>>83152580
That makes more sense, I'll just start from where ever john doe left off.

Though I'd be lying if my ego didn't make me want to "claim" the issue from start to finish. I may just do the whole thing for myself anyway.

what I really wish is that we had dedicated pencils/inkers (maybe colorists and typesetters?). Less attrition, but more coordination. If there is any idea men reading who wants to take a crack at project management, maybe this is the time?
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>>83152836
My opinion is that having the art change halfway through the issue would be a tad jarring but I understand not wanting to do the entire thing again. Don't really need a manager if there isn't a team that needs to be managed. I would really do whatever you want to and then when it's done someone might jump in to color it. Without the lure of money it's up to individual ambition really.
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>>83152824
That's a shame. Good for him, he deserves the compensation but I can't say I'm a fan of his current output.
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>>83153286
It is a shame, he was doing a damn good job imo. Pages were coming fast and they generally looked pretty good. But hey, you gotta do what you gotta do, and in his defense his art has improved dramatically.
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>>83151482
Do you have a blog or something with art?
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>>83056805
im envious because im currently NEET and im nowhere near your level and i have all day to art
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>>83154612

just do the /ic/ challange.

>>2533431
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>>83146285
>>83147365
good shit

really need to get back to art, like 10 hours a day or something. looking at what i can do is just heartrending when i compare myself to others.
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>>83154701
heh, can't follow your cross man, its dead or something. i mostly have trouble staying with it, i get crazy discouraged when i don't see results after putting in time.
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>>83152993
Oh, I do want the whole thing done (by me) It'll just be a big undertaking.

I'll do a break down and thumbnail the script this weekend, my goal is to get to a tight pencil stage so it's at least readable and anon can come in after me and ink it if they so choose.

>>83154360
sidneyanders.tumblr.com
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>>83154949
Hey man if you can get all that done there'd probably be a decent amount of people willing to pick it up. I'd just ve happy to have the whole thing ready to go. Good luck.
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>>83155024
Post when you have something finished, motherfucker. This will just zombie the thread.
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>>83155024
Hopefully I'll be done with stuff soon so I can pop into the stream chat and watch some of this.
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>>83155024
If you're still streaming when I get off work in 45 mins I'll hop in, been wanting to watch.
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>>83146285
>>83147365
When you're done, I hope you post the results. Either here or on the /aco/ thread (depending on what kind of stuff you're drawing).
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>>83146285
You have guest chat disabled, so I'm not able to post in chat.
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>>83146285
>>83155698
I kind of prefer it like that on some of the streams. There's a bunch of dick-riding going on right now, and Polter's there now, so yeah.
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Let's be real. The only reason anyone wants guest chat enabled is to spam requests anonymously.
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>>83156260
You'd have a hell of a lot more in the view counter than 16 if you had guest chat enabled, just saying since I have no reason to make a picarto account due to my lack of artistic ability.
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>>83156755
Actually I'd just comment on the current drawing and maybe reminisce with BitS about the first time he started drawing around here in the AT drawthreads of yore.
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>>83156755
>>83156260
Pretty much.
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I need a name for SQ and GG's city for a thing.
Anyone opposed to Castle City?
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>>83157444
It's stupid, and I hate it.
What thing, donkey-ass? If there's one thing these threads are for, is to actually lay-out what you plan on doing.
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>>83157444
Well, Platinum City is where GG resides, perhaps another lustrous metal would suffice?
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>>83157444
>>83157591
maybe Copperton?
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>>83157660
Sounds good to me, man.
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>>83157444
>>83157591
>>83157660
>>83157932
Platinum City is already perfect, though. It's so on the nose, it fits with every other goof.
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>>83158083
It obviously should be Platinum City.

>Silver Queen
>Golden Girl
>Platinum City
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>>83158083
>>83158227
Platinum City is what it's supposed to be. I only wanted to suggest Copperton as a different place in their world.
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I'm confused. Does he need a name for a second city (that's what I assumed at first and why I said Copperton sounds good to me), or is he just unaware that Platinum City is the name of the setting of the GG comics?
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>>83158382
The latter. It's for a postcard themed picture. I was not aware we'd settled on Platinum City. That works for me.\
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>>83157660
That would be a good Gotham style city name as copper is a more dirty metal.
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>>83153286
John was already a pretty good artist when he was working on this stuff too.
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>>83159488
>Crunch

Good think Colette's hands are actually in the end bits.
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>>83161742
Depends on the version I think.
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>>83162956
Well I mean to say "aren't actually in the end bits" but I generally default to Psu's take since he's done like 10 billion images for her.
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I'm bumping since there's still a GG WIP strip.
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>>83165597
Like a day away, I think.
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>>83165765
Well if the thread doesn't last that long, there will be another one on Saturday and there's also the /aco/ thread.

Though I'm rather enjoying how active this thread has been so far.
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>>83162956
Is there any official list of shit she can do with the gauntlets? Or is that purposefully vague for comic-book effect?
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>>83167654
It's left vague since everyone seems to use her differently.

The most common powers are:
-Super strength
-Zero point energy (remember Syndrome from The Incredibles?) which we often call gravity manipulation
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>>83137821
If nothing else, this was a good thread for Golden Girl.
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>>83169612
Well it was a good thread for GG porn anyway.
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>>83169926
Two new non-porn strips were drawn because of it, even if one of them is still a WIP.
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>>83171932
I think the most exciting thing is someone's looking to draw the BQ comic. Although I'm cautiously optimistic, lest my hopes be dashed again.
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>>83172299
That won't really register with me until something has been posted showing it's actually happening.

The thing with BQ is, the only part about it I could really help in any way with is discussing the plot outline, which I was doing earlier with how Bri VS Sharon would go down. From there it could actually be formulated into a script.

How does Sharon even fight?
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>>83172370
Weapon of choice is a crossbow that she has several different varieties of bolt for, but she also uses handguns. She's able to use just about every conventional weapon you'd find in the wasteland though.
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>>83172442
So do we have an extended action sequence with Bri that ends with one of them getting hurt, or a stand off between the two until one of them realizes how stupid fighting each other would be?
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>>83172597
I figured Bri would get hurt and Sharon would realize despite that, she can't win in an open, fair fight and escape. Have her shoot Bri in the thigh with a normal bolt or something. Bri removes the bolt and wanders to Los Lesbos, where she sees a doctor about the leg to which the doctor replies astonished that her wound has already healed. Good chance to introduce her healing factor while still showing that she's not invincible.
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>>83172692
OK, so Bri is still holding a dead man in her arms that Sharon just shot. He's a DFC soldier, but Bri is ignorant to what that means.

They're having a stare down. Bri goes to reach for her gun, Sharon fires a bolt from her cross bow, Bri rolls and dodges, ending up behind the destroyed DFC vehicle. Sharon is already on the move, she's got another bolt already loaded and Bri is lining up the shot. Sharon fires, Bri fires, Sharon gets glanced by the bullet, Bri takes a bolt to the leg but keeps on shooting.

Bri's mobility is unhindered by this even after she pulls the bolt out, catching Sharon off guard who ducks behind some rubble. Bri then throws the car at her general location to smoke her out. Sharon realizes this chick ain't normal and skidaddles the fuck out of there. Bri wonders what all that was about as she ties a piece of cloth around her leg wound and starts heading to the nearest town that isn't a dust bowl like the one she just claimed a bounty at. She was already going to head in that direction anyway since now she has money.
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>>83172928
Not bad. I like the car throwing bit, I don't think someone like Briana would hold back in a fight because she wouldn't think to do so.
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>>83173141
I'm just trying to get the beginnings of an outline started for issue 2's script.

What kind of place is Los Lesbos? Is it green? Is it another "old west" looking place? Suburbs? What?
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>>83173649
Walled fortress-city, complete with spiky pit. The actual interior is a multilevel city built in a gargantuan mining shaft. There are multiple levels descending down, with an aquifer at the bottom for water.
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>>83173730
I'm going to say there are trees and gardens in there for at least a semi-sustainable economy to exist. They cannot be 100% reliant on imported food stuffs.

Not everything can be irradiated wastes and giant man eating monster trees.

Is there a customs check point when getting into the city? I will assume the city is run by lesbians, but not all living there are lesbians, but at least a high percentage are.

Is this Bri's first visit to the city?
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>>83173910
1. Sure why not
2. The wastes aren't irradiated, it's not a nuclear apocalypse.
3. A front gate which check everyone before they go in
4. Yes.
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>>83174010
OK. Just so you know I don't know the history of her super hand cannon, so I'm assuming she has some parts of it already (as well as the blueprints) and they came from wherever she came from.

So Bri has arrived at the gates of Los Lesbos, the guards on duty are a pair of girls who give her a look, have her do a spin, then pass her through with a wink. As Bri is walking through the city she notices a lot of girls holding hands. Her first stop is a walk in clinic
>where she sees a doctor about the leg to which the doctor replies astonished that her wound has already healed

From there she pulls out a piece of paper with an address on it, asking around, she finds the location is further down below ground in the city. The ladies who gave her directions also wink at her and blow kisses. Bri does not understand the gesture, but recognizes it as non-hostile.

She finds the place a few levels down, it's a gun smithing place. Inside there are guns in various states of construction, pieces with price tags, and some in glass cases. She presents some parts of a gun, some papers, and a down payment to the wide-eyed astonishment of the gunsmith since this is some crazy shit she putting an order in for.

He asks her to come back in a few days since it will take some time to fill this order. Bri now has free time, she has no concept of fun so she just goes where she often hears people go when they have nothing better to do: a bar.

She gets into the bar, it's operated by a tall busty girl (but not as big as Bri), and a shorter flat chest girl. There's currently some drunken idiot in there waving a gun around saying something about how he's the son of Strong Arm and they should show some respect, one of the other people there says "Yeah, so what? You and like a hundred other people." and he starts shooting. Bri punches him in the face hard enough to one hit-KO him and sits down at the bar.

Any good so far?
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>>83174515
Well if the thread is still up tomorrow, I'll keep going with it.

I figure Laura and Carmilla will end up taking Bri bra shopping since she really does need a custom fit.
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>>83174515
The generally agreed upon story regarding her super gun is that the gunsmith in LL is one of the best in the Sonoran desert and indeed the western US. She (the gunsmith, unnamed) has the frame and most of the associated parts already, something of a dream project, but could never find someone powerful enough to wield it. Bri walks in and absent mindedly picks up the frame one-handed, which shocks the gunsmith. Excited someone can actually hold the thing, she puts the pieces together along with throwing in some of her own craftsmanship to give Bri the gun. Gunsmith was sort of based around a Cattleya-type of body. Also the original plot thrown out by BA had Bri lose her standard gun during the bar fight with the bounty hunter. which is the impetus for visiting the gunsmith, and Carmilla & Laura show her the way. So it coul dbe clinic first, bar/fight, gunsmith, then departure.
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Hey /co/, I want some critique on this WIP of a Witch character I am currently creating. I would appreciate some character design feedback.
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>>83174977
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>>83174977
Overall design is alright, it's not too busy with pointless shit on it which is good. Your post is more fitting for a OC thread though, which this is not.
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>>83174977
Braixen is too easy a pick
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The Docs are being weird for me, are there any links to the completed BQ pages if there are any?
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>>83174996
>>83175044
I tried not making furbait but I guess it can be helped if it is an animal character.

>>83175041
Sorry didn't realize this was the wrong thread
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>>83175521
Meant to say can't be helped doho
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>>83172442
She also has a small axe as a signature melee weapon.
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>>83176414
Haha, cute.
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>>83176414
Nice!
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>>83176414
Fuck GG has some big ass ears.
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Oh man I suck at drawing comics. So there what I have done. I hope it not so shitty as I think.
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>>83177478
It's pretty good.
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>>83177478
Only bad thing I can see is GG's tiny midget arms.
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>>83174923
I figured her reason for going to Los Lesbos in the first place would be to get a more powerful gun.

>>83175482
http://boards.plus4chan.net/coc/t51279.html#p51745

>>83176414
Nice.

SQ is being very daring with a two piece swimsuit given the time frame.

>>83177478
This is the first full color GG comic I think.

We still need someone to add in the dialogue.
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>>83179685
Her reason for going to LL after the Sharon fight was never clearly defined. But I think her getting the gun out of necessity rather than want is better.
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>>83177478
GG's proportions look a bit off in panel 2, 4, and 6. Aside from that it looks nice.
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>>83179685
She has no idea her version of the Dragon Slayer in revolver form is going to be at the gunsmith waiting for her, she just stops by because she needs a replacement gun in general.
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>>83181026
>>83181093
Would it make more sense for the gun to be broken in the fight with Sharon, then Bri goes to a place of some renown for a replacement, picks up the frame of the hand cannon easily, is told to come back a bit later and it twill be ready for her, then goes to the bar and meets Laura and Carmilla?

From there they ask her to come again when she leaves to get her hand cannon, and Bri being Bri comes back right after. But she's been followed by this bounty hunter character.

Laura and Carmilla really do need to take her shopping since she does need more support.

When they get back the bar is now occupied by the bounty hunter (who is this person?), a fight breaks out between this person and Bri, and the bar ends up destroyed.
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>>83181515
The bounty hunter from the short story. It makes her more threatening to be the one that destroys Bri's gun instead of Sharon.
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>>83177478
I'm having a little trouble following the sequence, it seems to jump around quickly and it feels like panel 4 and 5 should be reversed.

The drawings are fine, but I would work on paneling.
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>>83181982
What short story? You keep saying this, but I don't know what it is.

I'm only aware that a script for the first chapter was written and then only vague ideas for what came after that were in the mix.
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>>83182234
It's on the docs page man
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>>83183362
I'm still not seeing it. This short story isn't obviously listed anywhere on the doc >>83117114

Under miscellaneous items I found this:

>Ruiner
>Briana's custom made handcannon. Created for by the gunsmith in Los Lesbos after her original revolver was destroyed in a fight, and based off of a pre-war design. The gunsmith originally crafted the barrel and cylinders in a bet, to prove that she could, but put the weapon away without finishing it due to the fact that no one would be able to wield it at such a heavy weight and recoil. Seeing Briana's super strength, the gunsmith returned to her project and finished it in record time, presenting Briana with the finished product. It rounds can be swapped out with two different types: an explosive round that bursts on impact, and an ordinary (although enormous) revolver round. Since it's a custom gun, any ammunition must be made by hand, or rarely, found in the field.

But I have yet to find this short story you keep referring to wherein Bri's original gun is destroyed.

Jessica's Bounty has no reference to her gun being destroyed and seems to take place before issue 1.
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>>83179685
>We still need someone to add in the dialogue.
Give me the script and I can do it.
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>>83183823
It's from >>83062273

So panel 3 (I count the title as a panel)
>SQ: "I'll take care of this musical malcontent Golden Girl! You disable the speakers!"

Panel 4:
>GG: "This was much easier when I could see my feet."

Panel 7:
>SQ: "Great job, Golden Girl! The day is saved!"
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>>83183821
Yes the story introduces us to Jessica, but she's doesn't do it right there in that story. That comes later in the bar. Also that entry, like many, are very old and need to be updated. The gunsmith has the pre-war parts that she's fiddled with but Briana is the one who inspires her to put it all together. There is no short story where Briana's gun is destroyed, that comes in issue 2. All the short stories are prequels.
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>>83184098
OK, so Jessica is the bounty hunter who Bri fights in the bar, which is owned by Laura and Carmilla.

Do either Laura or Carmilla have bounties on their heads?

I don't see why Bri would go into a bar on her own though unless she had a reason to kill time.

The order of events for this chapter are all kinds of screwy right now since the proposed order I keep seeing lacks a clear motivation for Bri to do the things she does.

I'd rather it be
>See doctor
>Go to gun smith
>Go to bar, fight some guy
>Go shopping with either Laura or Carmilla
>Go back to bar
>Jessica has the one she didn't go shopping with tied up since there's a bounty on her
>Fight
>Bar is destroyed
>Bri's gun is destroyed
>Go back to gun smith (because making a gun takes TIME)
>Get hand cannon
>Leave Los Lesbos with Laura and Carmilla
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>>83146285
>>83147365
>>83150783
So, any word on when Bronie in the Shadow was going to post the image he completed in the stream? It looked really nice and had a lot of different expressions on it.
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>>83185638
He hasn't posted them on his tumblr yet either, so they might not be finished.
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>>83183933
Added a little extra dialogue for context.
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>people stop posting in these threads because it EVERYTIME it just becomes a big titty fapfest
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>>83187749
Don't really understand how that limits discussion of other things. People whine about this all the time but they never suggest to talk about anything else and just keep on bitching and moaning. Discuss something else, literally nothing is stopping you.
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>>83187749
The last few weekends that hasn't been the case, and on those times the threads barely last the weekend. You could contribute something aside from tits, but if your constitution is so weak that the tits scare you off then that's your problem.
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>>83187365
Nice.

Two new GG comics that aren't porn in one thread.

>>83187749
This is the most active and also productive thread we've had in months.
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>>83187936
>People whine about this all the time but they never suggest to talk about anything else and just keep on bitching and moaning.
I think they're more mad that nobody wants to drawfag their deepest lore reporter epics.
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>>83184434
Another question: do we retire Jessica from the story here, or does she keep coming up?

She seems very similar to Sharon concept wise.
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>>83189015
Jessica is killed by either Carmilla or Laura, who shoots her in the back to stop her from killing Bri.
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>>83189304
Her short story introduction seemed to hype her up a lot.

So Bri reaches for her gun which just isn't there, Jessica is about to shoot her while the bar is burning down around them, and then the bar owners shoot her and leave her in the burning bar?

I guess they decide to travel with ri because they now know they both have bounties on their heads and aren't safe in Los Lesbos anymore. Plus Bri really could use someone to watch her back.
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>>83189380
Well there's supposed to be a big fight in the bar, leading to the bar's more or less destruction. They travel with her because there's nothing really keeping them in LL anymore.
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>>83189478
Throwing in bounties gives them added motivation and also more of a reason for Jessica to be at the bar after Bri returns to it.

What level of the city is the bar on? I'd imagine the top level of the city is prime real estate since it gets sunlight and fresh air. That could be outside of their price range.

Having the bar be on fire and also on a lower level puts the level above it at risk as well, which leads to a more dramatic situation. Unless of course there are thick layers of solid rock between each layer of the city.
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>>83187365
The tight rope or whatever in panel 5 is missing and it's kinda throwing me off.
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>>83190670
It could've been off panel if it was hooked to the corner of the speaker.
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>random
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>>83192042
There's a match up I never thought about before.
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>>83189603
Well if there's an aquifer to draw from fire wouldn't be too big a problem depending on the fire suppression services/system.
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>>83193815
The smoke would still be a problem though if they're on a lower layer. It chokes up all the layers above it.
And I assumed he water is located at the very bottom.

I'm still looking for some feed back on the order of events before I try to put any meat on it >>83184434
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>>83194001
There could easily be a pump system to get water where it needs to go, and in a vertical city like that there would have to be. The smoke is still an issue though.
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>>83195159
It's still an inconsequential detail, I am laser focused on the actual plot of issue 2 and really need to know if I have an order of events for it that work.
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>>83195290
What are you gonna do, write a new script?
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>>83195325
I'm going to get the beginnings of an outline for it going at least. If you scroll up you'll see I already got started.

It's better than just having a half-assed summary for what happens after script one.

But there's shit I need to know and I'm not getting any clarification so far since there's apparently a bunch of unsaid things in play that were never recorded anywhere.
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>>83195437
I think BA had it all in her head since she assumes nobody else would take up the torch
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For the life of me I can't figure out who is in the car in the OP picture.

Also, congrats on surviving through the week.
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>>83195529
Well she decided not to write script 2 since script 1 never got done being draw. So here we are, with me trying to figure out at least an outline for it.

>>83196400
It looks like a robot to me.
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>>83197150
I think Bri should not lose her gun in the Sharon fight and lose it later. She's not bulletproof and despite her strength, Sharon is armed to the teeth. 10 feet is all she'd need to win that exchange if Bri is unarmed.
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>>83198754
Currently my order of events is >>83184434

Where she loses the gun while in Los Lesbos to Jessica, but she had already put in an order for a new one.

I want to have it so she came to the city in the first place to look into a gun smith of some renown about getting a stronger gun.
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>>83199861
Maybe preface that by giving Sharon some armor that deflects one of Bri's shots in their fight. Otherwise it just seems like she wants it for no reason other than as a plot contrivance to get her to the gunsmith.
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>>83200168
Sharon VS Bri fight is >>83172928

Which comes before that post I linked back to already.

The order of events is just for when she gets to the city.
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>>83192042
Who is dark hearts

And I hope he isn't just wrecking duet
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>>83201205
The Dark Hearts are a cabinet of 13 magic users (wizards, witches, sorcerers, warlocks, etc) who exist only as a group of consciousnesses in a pocket dimension. They're immortality seekers who have pretty much gotten the prize already.

They communicate with the rest of reality through their golems.
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>>83200231
Ok that's fine but what I meant was that it would be wise when doing the write up for Briana to have a reason to want a more powerful gun. Sharon's armor deflecting her bullet would be good reason for a motive.
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>>83201447
So Bri takes a bolt to the leg, keeps shooting, lands some more hits on Sharon's armor.

That's an easy enough addition.

She can ask the doctor in Los Lesbos where to find a gun smith and gets an address from there.
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Well the thread has about 40 bumps left in it.

Are we going to use them all?

>>83174515
I'll make some modifications to this later. Continuing on.

The bar owners introduce themselves, Carmilla Laura, and ask what's she's having. Bri has no concept of what to do in a bar and just asks what people do here to kill time. This strikes them as very odd and, after she goes through an entire bottle of some kind of alcohol showing no signs of drunkenness (super soldiers cannot get drunk as is my understanding), they decide drinking probably isn't something for her. They also notice her outfit seems to not be well fitted, so Laura decides to ask her to help her with shopping while Carmilla minds the bar.

Bri helps carrying the supplies bought and Laura takes her to a clothing shop where Bri gets fitted for a custom bra. Her muscles make some of the store girls drool.

They get back to the bar and find it's closed, and that ain't right. Inside Carmilla is tied up all pretty on the counter with a gag in her mouth.

I need to read that Jessica story again to plan out this fight.
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>>83203945
Bri would know what to do in a bar, she'd just be shit at conversation with the bar tender. It would be more appropriate for her to order a drink and when the bartender tries to have a conversation as bartenders are won't to do, Bri would just give short, terse answers or tilt her head in confusion when presented with anecdotes or colloquialisms. She's been traveling the wasteland for a year, she's picked up a few things, but traveling alone hasn't done her any help on the socializing part. She'd probably have to down the entire bar's worth of liquor to get drunk, you're right about that.
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>not making the bar the creative spirit

Swing and Miss.
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The bar in question.
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Interior.
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>>83204251
The bar burns down.

It could cameo as a bar across the street.

>>83204151
There's so little information about what Bri knows and does not know at the beginning of BQ that I just assume she knows next to nothing and has never been in a big city or around this many people before without them trying to kill her.
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>>83204339
>so little information about what Bri knows and does not know

Let me see if I can spell it out more clearly: She is socially and emotionally stunted, but generally a quick learner when it comes to observable customs that do not require an accompanying emotional cue. So she would know that bars are where people drink, because she would have been to a bar at that point and seen people drinking in one. WHY people come to bars to congregate would be something she wouldn't understand. She can have a conversation about things revolving around facts, events, and is able to negotiate for rewards/etc. Small talk, conversations about abstract things like philosophy/emotions, and most jokes would either confuse her or fly right over her head.
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>>83204527
OK, so what line of conversation would be the most likely to get Bri to agree to go shopping with Laura?

A comment about giant tits from Carmilla and how they're the biggest she's seen so far leading in to Bri talking about how clothes are somewhat difficult for her?
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>>83204672
One of the two would mention to Briana that breasts like her must require a very sturdy bra. Briana, in her naivety, thinks this is a request to see it, and with the two of them being women she senses no danger and thus lifts up her shirt to show it to them. Laura, being the more level-headed one, see what a raggedy old thing it is and makes a suggestion that the two of them travel to the shop.
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>>83205005
Makes sense.

Odds are Bri has never been measured before, so Laura will have to keep her from punching the tailor.
Bri strikes me as the type to flex when her 'guns' are being measured.

At what point in the story does the reader become aware of Bri's origins?
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>>83205267
Issue 1, it's in the script, although the entire thing isn't explained. The reader knows she is an artificial human, but not who created her or why.
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>>83205317
It seems like that would be something she'd mention to her group after the party is assembled, and they'd brush it off as a "oh, so that explains things" moment.

I bring it up because I'm wondering if that's someone she would mention to Laura or Carmilla, but it seems like it's not something she'd bring up in conversation.
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>>83205432
She doesn't know who created her or why either. The entire thing was to be the subject of an issue once the gang was assembled. Her being an artificial human isn't probably something she discusses though, one of her few secrets.
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>>83205488
Alright, so Bri does not talk about her past much. Odds are that will lead to many people she meets forming their own fantastic stories about her and legends will crop up about her as the story goes on.

Now back to the bar, Jessica has tied up Carmilla, Laura already has a gun drawn and Bri has as well. They haven't see her yet, she's up on the rafters. She tranqs Laura as she's heading over to untie Carmilla.

She jumps down with a gun pointed at both their heads and does the gloating thing. The usual "do you remember me?" "is you scar throbbing?" "I can't believe my luck, not only a traitor, but tow more fat chested bitches to turn in" spiel.

Her eyes are on Bri, so she doesn't notice that Laura has managed to untie one of Carmilla's arms and pass her the gun before losing consciousness. Carmilla lines up the shot to shoot Jessica in the back, but she dodges at the last second. Now C & L are behind the bar (C pulled L over the counter with her free arm and rolled) and Bri is setting her sights on Jessica who has pulled out a detonator and pushes it, blowing up the door to the bar behind Bri. Jessica means to make her escape since she knows she can't fight Bri head on like this. As she's jumping out the window, Bri catches her by the leg and pulls her back in, slamming her onto the floor. The bar is now on fire.

Jessica tries to pull out her knife like the last time, Bri decks her in the face. She probably would've done more if not for the fire spreading and C & L needing a save.

Well, that's what my tired brain is giving me right now.
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Well there are 25 posts to go until bump limit and it is very early morning Friday.

If somehow the thread is still up during the daylight hours, I'll keep hammering out ideas for BQ issue 2's outline.
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BQ made some great progress this thread.
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Why are /coc/ characters all so 'clean'?

No one drinks, smokes, has tattoos, fucks, has any scars...
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>>83208247

Colette has her bondage fetish, I dunno if that counts...
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>>83208322
I'm pretty sure that's just a guy with a bondage fetish just trying to make excuses for themselves.

>"I'm just being true to character! Honest."
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>>83208247
>No one drinks, smokes, has tattoos, fucks, has any scars...
Colette is covered in scars, or was at least supposed to be, because Cassandra Cain
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>>83208247
Strummer definitely has piercings, since any tattoos she got gets erased fast due to her regeneration powers. I do think she smokes and drinks a lot, since her regen can take it.
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>>83208247
Quite alot of /coc/ characters have scars actually, some of them taking up half their face. July DeForthe, Firedamp and even Briana are a few easy examples.

Plus if you look through them you can find smokers or people with body modifications too.

And as for sex you can assume anyone thats in a romantic relationship is getting down to it, for random one-nighters who knows since it isn't usually a relevant thing unless the character happens to be especially prolific in that regard.
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>>83208247

they all had sex, Colette even has a kid from a tentacle monster.
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>>83209630
Hey now, Deelette is a treasure.
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>>83208247
A ton of characters fuck and quite brazenly. There are only a few virgin characters.
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>>83207539
We still have around 15 bumps left, so that's probably enough time to think up something else.

>>83206077
So Bri carries both L & C out of the burning bar, Jessica is left inside, KO'd. The Los Lesbos fire department or whatever they have in place show up and there's also the police or whatever they have. Carmilla tells them it was caused by a bounty hunter for the DFC, the fact that the county hunter wasn't flat chested is what got her through the checkpoint.

I'm going to assume L & C lived above their bar, so now they don't have much of anything left.

We need a reason for them to start travailing with Bri since they barely know her.
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>>83214013
She saves both of their lives and now they have no home. It doesn't have to be a super air-tight reason to travel with her, it's a comic book. Jessica dying from being burned alive is a bit more grim than just being shot.
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>>83214059
Well we never see the body, so if we need her again we have her, and if we don't then she's dead.

Jessica seems like the type who Sharon would end up killing.
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With only 12 posts to go untill bump limit I will not allow the thread to die until then.
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>>83214116
She could be brought back Archer style by the DFC. I think Sharon eventually comes around to joining Briana and Co, right? Could set those two up as rivals.
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>>83215650
So every time we see her, she's more and more scarred and deranged.

I don't know if the DFC has the technology to turn a person into something like that.
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>>83216537
The probably have some pretty decent cybernetics, I mean if the people out in the expanse can cobble together a robot arms someone with an actual facility to do so wouldn't have much of a problem. The real question is how the hell she would even wind up back in DFC hands, and why would they feel obliged to help her?
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>>83217070
There could be DFC spies.

I think if Jessica comes back into the story, it won't be until after Sharon has joined the party, which happens late in the story from what I can tell.

By then Bri will have the biggest target on her place by the DFC, so much that they'd be looking into anyone who had fought with her before and survived.
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There was talk of a cyborg antagonist before, though she was a former-rebel rather than related to the DLC.

Basically a volunteer for a super soldier experiment they were running to try and give themselves some sort of edge over their much more powerful foe, unfortunately ends up with said volunteer becoming megalomaniacal after the transformation and running off into the deep wilderness to carve out her position as a bandit queen using her cyber enhanced strength.

So basically a dark mirror of Briana in being an artifical super soldier with giant (weaponized cyber)tits, would be naturally antagonistic towards the heroine in her ability to rival her new powerful form.

Also had story relevance to other Resistance-related characters, like knowing King Kiloton from back in the day and trying to tempt him into becoming one of her warriors, or amongst the various information-gathering of the Q-Twins one is being to track down information as to her location since the Resistance don't want a psycho-bandit with knowledge of their secret base running free.
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>>83217934
Yea, I remember her. Unfortunately she never got any art.
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>>83217070
>>83217934
From Los Lesbos, where does Bri head next?
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>>83218357
Well issue 3 is where Arthur is introduced. He doesn't join right away, that comes later. How he's introduced was never hashed out.
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>>83219062
The nearest marked location are the ruins of Vegus and the rebel base.

So I assume issue 3 either takes place on the journey to Vegus or at Vegus itself.

There's a king type guy living in a skyscraper there, right? What if Arthur was working for him as a bodyguard or enforcer for the casinos that still worked.
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>>83219140
>Vegus

Vegas. Also Arthur isn't the type to work for a crimelord. He deserted the DFC army and a cushy upper class life on moral grounds. Way back when he was first getting discussed, it was suggested that someone skilled like him would provide protection services for women who needed to travel alone across the wasteland. He's like a paladin, a real good guy.
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I said I would keep this thread bumped until we hit 500 posts, and now we have.
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>>83219494
So do L & C hire him when leaving Los Lesbos to wherever they're going?
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Bri is still holding a dead man in her arms that Sharon just shot. He's a DFC soldier, but Bri is ignorant to what that means.

They're having a stare down. Bri goes to reach for her gun, Sharon fires a bolt from her cross bow, Bri rolls and dodges, ending up behind the destroyed DFC vehicle. Sharon is already on the move, she's got another bolt already loaded and Bri is lining up the shot. Sharon fires, Bri fires, Sharon gets glanced by the bullet, Bri takes a bolt to the leg but keeps on shooting, landing some hits on Sharon's armor that don't penetrate.

Bri's mobility is unhindered by this even after she pulls the bolt out, catching Sharon off guard who ducks behind some rubble. Bri then throws the car at her general location to smoke her out. Sharon realizes this chick ain't normal and skidaddles the fuck out of there. Bri wonders what all that was about as she ties a piece of cloth around her leg wound and starts heading to the nearest town that isn't a dust bowl like the one she just claimed a bounty at. She was already going to head in that direction anyway since now she has money.

Bri has arrived at the gates of Los Lesbos, the guards on duty are a pair of girls who give her a look, have her do a spin, then pass her through with a wink. As Bri is walking through the city she notices a lot of girls holding hands. Her first stop is a walk in clinic where she sees a doctor about the leg to which the doctor replies astonished that her wound has already healed.

From there she asks for where some location is and gets an address.

She pulls out a piece of paper with an address on it, and after asking around, she finds the location is further down below ground in the city. The ladies who gave her directions also wink at her and blow kisses. Bri does not understand the gesture, but recognizes it as non-hostile.
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>>83222034
She finds the place a few levels down, it's a gun smithing place. Inside there are guns in various states of construction, pieces with price tags, and some in glass cases.

Bri absent mindedly picks up a very large gun frame one-handed, which shocks the gunsmith.

The gunsmith in LL is one of the best in the Sonoran desert and indeed the western US. She (the gunsmith, unnamed) has the frame and most of the associated parts already, something of a dream project, but could never find someone powerful enough to wield it, until now.

Excited someone can actually hold the thing, she tells her to come back a bit later while she puts the pieces together along with throwing in some of her own craftsmanship to give Bri the gun.

Bri now has free time, she has no concept of fun so she just goes where people go when they have nothing better to do: a bar.

She gets into the bar, it's operated by a tall busty girl (but not as big as Bri), and a shorter flat chest girl. There's currently some drunken idiot in there waving a gun around saying something about how he's the son of Strong Arm and they should show some respect, one of the other people there says "Yeah, so what? You and like a hundred other people." and he starts shooting. Bri punches him in the face hard enough to one hit-KO him and sits down at the bar.

The bar owners introduce themselves, Carmilla and Laura, and ask what's she's having.

After she goes through an entire bottle of some kind of alcohol showing no signs of drunkenness (super soldiers cannot get drunk as is my understanding), they decide drinking probably isn't something for her.

One of the two attempts casual conversation with Bri, but she has toruble with abstract concepts and can only deal in facts.
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>>83222069
In another attempt, one of them brings up that a bust like Briana's must require a very sturdy bra. Briana, in her naivety, thinks this is a request to see it, and with the two of them being women she senses no danger and thus lifts up her shirt to show it to them. Laura, being the more level-headed one, see what a raggedy old thing it is and makes a suggestion that the two of them travel to the shop.

Bri gets fitted for a custom bra. She's never been measured before, so Laura has to keep her from punching the tailor. Her muscles make some of the store girls drool. She's the type to flex when her 'guns' are being measured.

They get back to the bar and find it's closed, and that ain't right. Inside Carmilla is tied up all pretty on the counter with a gag in her mouth.

Jessica has tied up Carmilla, Laura already has a gun drawn and Bri has as well. They haven't see her yet, she's up on the rafters. She tranqs Laura as she's heading over to untie Carmilla.

She jumps down with a gun pointed at both their heads and does the gloating thing. The usual "do you remember me?" "is you scar throbbing?" "I can't believe my luck, not only a traitor, but tow more fat chested bitches to turn in" spiel.

Her eyes are on Bri, so she doesn't notice that Laura has managed to untie one of Carmilla's arms and pass her the gun before losing consciousness. Carmilla lines up the shot to shoot Jessica in the back, but she dodges at the last second. Now C & L are behind the bar (C pulled L over the counter with her free arm and rolled) and Bri is setting her sights on Jessica who has pulled out a detonator and pushes it, blowing up the door to the bar behind Bri. Jessica means to make her escape since she knows she can't fight Bri head on like this. As she's jumping out the window, Bri catches her by the leg and pulls her back in, slamming her onto the floor. The bar is now on fire.
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>>83222098
Jessica tries to pull out her knife like the last time, Bri decks her in the face. She probably would've done more if not for the fire spreading and C & L needing a save.

Bri carries both L & C out of the burning bar, Jessica is left inside, KO'd. The Los Lesbos fire department or whatever they have in place show up and there's also the police or whatever they have. Carmilla tells them it was caused by a bounty hunter for the DFC, the fact that the bounty hunter wasn't flat chested is what got her through the checkpoint.

L & C lived above their bar, so now they don't have much of anything left and decide to move on from Los Lesbos.

Bri returns to the gunsmith's establishment to pick up her order: Ruiner

A custom made handcannon based off of a pre-war design. The gunsmith originally crafted the barrel and cylinders in a bet, to prove that she could, but put the weapon away without finishing it due to the fact that no one would be able to wield it at such a heavy weight and recoil. Seeing Briana's super strength, the gunsmith returned to her project and finished it in record time, presenting Briana with the finished product. It rounds can be swapped out with two different types: an explosive round that bursts on impact, and an ordinary (although enormous) revolver round. Since it's a custom gun, any ammunition must be made by hand, or rarely, found in the field.

As Bri is getting ready to leave Lost Lesbos, she finds L & C already packed up and about to set off, they figure if the bounty hunters from the DFC can find them here, they can probably find them anywhere and plan to keep moving.

Should they ask her to travel with them?
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Anyway, that's what I have for the outline of BQ issue 2.

We're on page 10, so I really can't expect any feedback right now.

We're on page 10 and past bump limit... it's been a while since that happened.
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>last
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>>83222610
Neat.

The elbow looks kind like a gatling gun.
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