/Co/Co/'s Bizarre Adventure: Midnight Velocity Edition

>>82946544
Gotta remove those "(embed)"s and update that past thread pastebin.

So Monstroso for being the guy in charge of the WB's stock market branch Taffy, Squidward, and Toph fight while Rolf, Dexter, and Cartman are at the Farmer's Market.

Any thoughts on that?

Main topic of the night, Part 5. What do we do for it?

>>82946807
I just copypasted, sorry.

I'll fix it next thread unless someone else does.

I thought Azazel was the head of Stock Market? Or is that different than Finances? But then where does Azazel go if they fight him?

>>82946815
Well first, I think anons should read the doc for it to actually know where we are in it.

I keep seeing old stuff get re-posted so I know a lot of people aren't keeping up with the updates.

The overall plot outline is getting there, a few places still need to have some dots connected, but the locations seem set.

Next we need to work on the fights.

There's still so much to do that I wouldn't be able to form a to-do list. Or I mean a to-do list that long would be useless and we still need to spitball some more to see if we come up with anything good before the opinion shifts to the "locked in" mind set.

>>82946883
Fiances and legal keep getting interchanged.

I never meant for Monstroso to be the guy in charge if Azazel is in the same shell company as him.

>>82946807
Monstroso is legal.
Which is in HQ.

>>82947100
Monstroso is legal. Where does that put Demongo though? An underling? His boss?

>>82947157
>>82947100
>>82947100
fuck, mixed them up.

Nevermind.

>>82947157
Lawyers typically have partners at a firm.

So they're all on the same level on the legal team.

>>82947274
Wait, so is Demongo in finances or legal?

I think we need to settle who is in legal and who is in finances.

Fiances (stock market):
-Azazel
-Who else?

Legal (WB tower):
-Monstroso
Who else?

>>82947406
Monstroso and Demongo are on legal. It was also suggested to be hidden behind an adult video thing I believe? If so, mooks should be oversexed characters, like Bane or someone similar.

>>82947530
Big guys, is the correct term.

Bane, Big Paw from the Pound Puppies, The villain from Surf's Up.

>>82947530
I thought Demongo was with finances since he collects souls.

How do we tie in an adult video store to a stock market?

>>82947581
Would Kingpin and Moto Moto work in that case? I think Kingpin was one of the original suggestions actually? Though I think Tobias Whale (either comics or cartoon version) would fit the part better. He seems lecherous enough.

>>82947654
The studio belies the legal firm, not the stock market. Stock Market is the shell company for Finances, which is lead by Azazel.

>>82947703
>>82947581
Bane, Tobias Whale, and Moto Moto.

3 big guys, together at last.

We drop in on them when they're filming /co/'s version of "Boss of this Gym"

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aMFZNZ18z5k

>>82947703
The legal firm is in the WB tower, we can't have a porn studio there, can we? ... 666 floors, we could. This is turning into the building from Gremlins 2.

That's going to be a weird floor to ding on when the elevator stops.

>>82947788
It's 4 big guys then.

Legal:
-Monstroso
-Bane
-Tobias Whale
-Moto Moto
Fought in a studio located in the WB tower.

Not sure how I feel about Bane since Johnny mentioned that meme in part 2.

Are we moving Demongo to finances?

>>82947581
>Big Guy Legal Firm and Porn Studio
>"We all fight (and fuck) for you"

>>82948161
Are they supposed to be gay though? Or are there females on set?

Moto Moto is pretty female-oriented, I could see him selling his soul to possess Gloria or something.

>>82948161
Bane is ageless. We set up Part 7 and the corpse if anyone who reads this is autistic enough to read deeper into this.

Bane is connected in a way to the Corpse. So it makes sense that things like Age don't affect him.

But again, in Part 2 it's a joke more than anything else. And in here the Big Guy's don't get an in-depth story.

They're just Big Guys that are both the best lawyers in the world, but also the hottest up and coming porn stars.

>>82948342
It's both. sometimes they have females and do normal porn, but it just so happens that in this particular day they were filming

"Boss of this Old County"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aMFZNZ18z5k

>>82948342
Gay for pay maybe.
Maybe they're trying to cater to the female market. I don't know.

Monstroso was always portrayed as being straight in all of is appearances. Not sure why there's a gay thing going on here.

>Jojo parody actually includes gay porn stars
I can't tell if this is subtle trolling or if this is an actual, serious idea we're considering.

>>82948891
We saw the stand suggestion in the last thread, don't oversell it.

>>82948891
Quit suggesting that stand unless you want it NEVER EVER'd. Reviewfag already approved it. You can stop now.

>>82948943
>>82948960
shit, sorry folks. it's been a while since i've visited these addicting shitholes.

>>82948861
I thought of it as a joke from last thread, but I can't think of a reason NOT to include it, so I'm not going to shoot it down.

I'm more concerned with finances than legal right now since they do fight finances far earlier in the story than legal.

I've also yet to see anything for or against the party split idea during the business at the two different markets.

>>82948861
Monstroso, Whale, and Moto Moto aren't gay. They may be gay for pay though. Or we could switch them with more sexually ambiguous characters.

>>82949063
I'd rather not switch out Monstroso since he IS a lawyer with a devil theme.

With all the shit he's done in the show he comes from, making a gay film does not seem like something he'd back out of if there's money to be made.

But did the legal department just get bored and convert their offices into a film set? It brings up several questions with no possibility for answers.

>>82949057
I like the party splitting, that way you don't have a bunch of guys ganging up against a single opponent.

>>82949057
Party split would be nice. Taffy needs some more exposition.

Who resides in the Stock Market? Probably sellers and loan sharks. I feel it should be strangely uncanny. Pete, Sheriff of Nottingham, and Tally Man could be in if we go for the debt collector thing.

Tally Man would also be a good character for part 7 too, now that I think about it.

>>82948861
This is a serious idea I am considering.

>>82949163
It's mostly the bordeom bit. Also because sometimes the office gets a bit too boring and, being in the same building as Red Guy, they can't be boring.

That puts their lives in danger. So they do gay porn. They do gay porn to appease the deamons and make a shitload of extra cash.

They also do normal porn. But we dont see that.

The heroes get off the elevator after a difficult battle and run into Moto-Moto wrestling with Whale while they're both stripped to swimsuits.

>>82949166
So is it just Azazel in finances?

And since legal is now 4 big guys, where does that leave Demongo?

>>82949194
Azazel is head of finances, so he's there, don't know who is under him or how or why Taffy and his group end up where they are.

The idea is Taffy is looking for leads about Gideon Graves' location, so why does that take him to the stock market?

>>82949252
Demongo could go in Finances do to the whole Soul Collector bit.

Gideon is a member of the four businessmen of the apocalypse. That may have something to do with it. Maybe they're the usual debt collectors?

>>82949312
But what causes Taffy to think there would be leads to Graves' location at the stock market?

They got info on Graves out of the WB's computer network when raiding HR, so they know he's the guy responsible for Plucky's condition from that, so did the file also mention his position in the WB are a finance guy so Taffy goes to where that's located hoping to find someone who knows where Graves would be?

Squidward is with him, so he'll need to fake mess up to silence any possible leads.

>>82949386
Maybe Gideon has been taking out stocks, and the find he's been making an unusually high amount of cash with it? They think he's rigged something at the Stock Market to investigate, while the other's head to the Farmer's Market.

I don't know if they'd actually put that in a file though. There could be some mention that he works there or was once a major player there, maybe?

>>82949194
Maybe a bunch of frenzied stock brokers yelling "buy!" and "sell!" as cannon fodder

>>82949386
they probably wander around the farmer's market looking for info and end up in the stock exchange's entry that is disguised as another market stall.

>>82949561
Maybe his file just has his position listed in the company, so they go where he's listed as working at hoping to find some trace of him.

>>82949609
Pretty sure the stock market and farmer's market are different locations.

There was a joke about the stalk market, but it didn't catch on.

How do we go about the presentation of the two different markets? Do we alternate back-and-forth or do we do one group in its entirety and then switch to the other?

>>82949781
Alternate back and forth. It works better that way I think? It'd feel better anyway.

>>82949828
I'm for this only if right before it cuts to the other group someone says "I should've gone with the other group" and when we see the other group someone in it is saying the exact same thing in a different situation.

Like Squidward says it when they're surrounded by stock brokers looking for a fight, then cut to Cartman saying it when he's surrounded by flies or something.

>>82949976
There is also this idea from the previous thread >>82891400
So, during the fight in the farmer's market even the slightest shit (like tipping a cabbage) causes the prices in the stock exchange to shift seemingly at random. At the end of the fight Patrick reads through a long strip of paper all the variations in the stock market and figures out everything that happened during the fights before the machine broke, signaling Azazel's defeat.

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>>82949227
>Moto-Moto wrestling with Whale while they're both stripped to swimsuits.

G-Go on.

>>82950199
That's pretty funny.

>>82950199
I could see that.

>>82949976
That reminds me, we still need an assassin for Cartman and Chuckie to face.

>>82951742
Wasn't it decided that Tad Strange and his [PANIC SWITCH] would face them in the Farmer's Market?

>>82950199
There's gotta be a MY CABBAGES scene at some point, right?

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random bit that came to mind today

>a spotlight from the panopticon blinds Dora and Susie
>strange sound effects indicating their warping in the background
>the light fades and they find themselves standing in a vast, desert-like area of nothing but flat ground
>Dora: "Where are we?"
>Susie: "I 'ave 'eard stories zat troublemakers get sent somewhere strange, where no one ever hears from zem ever again. ...or perhaps we are just dead and we are finally in Hell." *smiles awkwardly
>Dora: "It doesn't answer the question, though. Where are-?"
>an illusory double of The Warden poofs into existence in front of them, all smiles and enthusiasm
>"HELLOOO AND WELCOME TO SUPER-"
>Warden is immediately punched in the face by [BOOTS], caving in his face like it's made of rubber
>Warden clone pauses, unmoved by the punch, still in his jovial pose... then continues with [BOOTS]'s fist still buried in its face like it’s not even there
>"...to SUPERJAIL! Or as I like to call it... a world of [PURE IMAGINATION]!"

tweaked around as needed, I just really liked Suzie's line and Dora just instinctively punching the stand-in Warden the second she sees him

>>82952679

All right, that got me. I'm up for keeping it. Plus it gives a better impetus for why he turns a blind eye to all of the shit she gets into and a reason for the other prisoners to start targeting her.

These Stands got suggested for the Heylins a while back:
http://desustorage.org/co/thread/82603832/#82638061
http://desustorage.org/co/thread/82603832/#82638083
How are these for names?
>#1: 「Justus」
>#2: 「Instant Replay」
>#3: 「Good Times」
>#4: 「Pool It!」
The joke is that they're all Monkees albums.

>>82953549
Still not sure about the Stands, but I like the joke.

>>82947581
The villian from Oliver and Company?

>>82952679
I like it. Reminds me of the beginning of SO with that guy with the puppet.

Is Cartman staying until the end or is he our Fugo?

>>82954198
I suppose his Stand's only going to be useful once, so there's no harm having him quit before the tower climb with a "Screw you guys, I'm goin' home!"
(Before? Maybe it'd be funnier if he turns around to go home at, like, the 400th floor, more than halfway up.)

>>82954307
That would be funnier indeed, but there has to be a "reason" why he chooses to stop. Maybe the 404th floor is filled with stuff he dislikes or something.

>>82954461
Redheads.
He gets pissed off that his Stand won't do anything to them and goes home.

>>82953549
Makes sense. If we go with those stands and the users in the doc I'd give Justus (sharpening stand) to Silver Monkey, Instant Replay (monkey's paw stand) to Monkey Fist, Good Times (banana stand) to Baboon, and Pool It (barrel of monkeys stand) to Monkey King; they seem to fit their personalities well. I do feel like Good Times could do with simplification, but otherwise I think they work well. (Justus is boring, but I think that's kind of necessary in a group battle - it gives more room to show off the others' abilities, plus it's a punchghost which allows for some more traditional fighting.)

Thinking of the Heylins, should Wuya have a "Stand name" when posing as Jack's Stand? If we go with >>82953549 maybe it could be "Re-Focus"; a subtle clue that she's "different" in that Re-Focus was a compilation album rather than a studio album. I dunno.

>>82954198
I thought he was, he's currently written as having been beat up by the Red Guy along with Taffy before Squidward starts buying time.

>>82950199
I'm not sure how to incorporate that.

>>82955796
They still need some tweaking though I feel. And they really shouldn't be monkeys in general themed, they should be based on the actual characters.

I like them all being Monkees albums though. But I might come up with alternative stand suggestions for them if you don't mind. The joke is "Who would have a monkey for a stand?" after all.

>>82955992
We never decided on Jack's real stand either, did we?

I might try to come up with something like that too.

>>82956787
Sure. Though the only ones that are actually monkeys are the sharpening one (could be replaced with a chinese-flavored punchghost, maybe with subtle monkey designs involved) and the barrel of monkeys one (which is funny enough that I'd like to keep it).
I'm not really sure what the "who would have a monkey for a stand" joke is about, though.
>>82956849
I didn't even realize he was going to have one. I thought he'd just use Wuya as his stand.

>>82956787
Honestly? I feel like they match up pretty well to the actual characters in addition to being monkey themed - a martial arts-type stand for Silver Monkey, a banana-themed one for Baboon, a "funny" stand consisting of multiple monkeys (that he could be said to "reign over", eh?) for Monkey King. Monkey Fist's is a little out of place, but it's appropriate for a martial artist, and also, uh, it's a literal monkey fist.

>>82957029
Jack Spicer has a stand, Wuya just pretends to be his stand.

So Jack's stand probably isn't anything amazing looking for it to be so easily overlooked.

>>82957217
"Monkee Flips". Allows him to grow a tail and increases his agility. Doesn't really increase his fighting skill or anything.

>>82957336
Its visual isn't much of anything for Wuya to effectively pose as his stand I mean.

>>82957358
Well, I figure he just wouldn't use it. It'd have a negligible effect on his ability to fight, and would ruin the illusion that Wuya is his Stand.

>>82957358
Maybe it has something to do with his goggles? It has to be something he normally has on him that no one would suspect.

>>82957445
Could be bound to his Monkey Staff. He could use it to fight with without giving away that it's his real Stand.

>>82955796
>Good Times could do with simplification
Yeah, probably reduce it to one support banana and one offensive banana (reviewfag liked the BIG banana idea)

>>82957029
>could be replaced with a chinese-flavored punchghost
Something like a Jiang shi? (chinese vampire with the talisman in his face)

I can already see some combos: 「Justus」 sharpening 「Pool It!」 chain of monkeys or Monkey fist limbs, while the healing banana of 「Good Times」 reverses the damage from 「Instant Replay」accidents.

>>82957674
>I can already see some combos: 「Justus」 sharpening 「Pool It!」 chain of monkeys or Monkey fist limbs, while the healing banana of 「Good Times」 reverses the damage from 「Instant Replay」accidents.
I like the way you think.

Yukako episode today

>>82957674
>Something like a Jiang shi? (chinese vampire with the talisman in his face)
I was thinking more like an Arakibot wearing Han Dynasty soldier armor, but sure.

>>82957491
Jack has a staff, Rolf has a staff, they have a staff fight.

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>>82956849
>>82957217
>>82957336
>>82957358
>>82957445
>>82957491
>>82959982

Wanted to try my hand at a stand for Jack. I gave him two, because I had two different ideas, and one could be a loaner. Alternatively, he has two from having his yin-yang switched like in the cartoon or whatever. That happened.

>「DOOLITTLE」
>Resembles a staff.
> Jack can turn himself and others into monkeys with it. People turned into monkeys will still retain their knowledge, but may have to get used to whatever primal form they take.
>It can increase speed and strength for the user and others.

>「ONCE UPON A TIME IN SHAOLIN」
>A dragon-like punchghost wearing his goggles, with calligraphy covering it's body.
>The stand can manipulate pressure points along the body, making them visible to the user through the use of their goggles. Pressure points take the form of black dots that cover the body.
>When a pressure point is struck, the opponent may loose control of their limb for a short period, as well as experience intense pain.
>The user can tear off pressure points from people, placing them wherever. If they are stuck on something and hit, it will alter that thing or destroy it. Placing it on a table and hitting it will break apart the table, or placing it on an air current and striking it will alter the direction of that air current. Of course, he will loose the ability to effect the person he has taken the point from until it has been reapplied to their body.
>The more points that are hit, the more the opponent will loose control of their stand for a short time. If more than 70% of the opponents pressure points have been hit, they may have a chance of exploding due to chi buildup.
>Finally, the user can manipulate people with this effect, by removing a point that has just been struck, chi in their body will reverse it's flow, increasing the more this is done, and altering their state of mind, making them more violent, paranoid, and sadistic.

How do these work?

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>>82959982
>Looks like we have the same kind of Stand, farmer boy
>Your monkey scratching stick is no match for the tool of the shepherd!

>>82960255
I think「DOOLITTLE」fits Jack better.

How do we incorporate the UR thinking Wuya is Jack's stand?

Once the warriors are beaten, Wuya manages a sneak attack on Plucky, rendering him unconscious and letting Graves do his thing somehow.

>>82960896
Maybe she flies around the staff, like the snakes in a caduceus

>>82960960
Maybe she flies through anyone he's turning into a monkey.

>>82960255
>>82960896
Yeah, I... cannot see Jack with a punchghost at all. He's too much of a wimp.
A loaner, maybe.

>>82960896
>Wuya manages a sneak attack on Plucky
>she possesses him and smacks his head into a wall like an asshole

>>82961462
The idea was more "Jack seem like a wimp but has a pretty cool stand" actually. Plus, for a kung-fu themed team, there weren't actually a lot of kung-fu based stands. I originally made OUATIS for Chase Young, but gave it to Jack because I couldn't place him anywhere and I thought Jack could use a decent stand.

It's the same as Joshuu having a punchghost that can tear you to pieces in seconds and he can't use it properly.

>>82961565
Makes sense. Still think I'd prefer [DOOLITTLE]; invert the Joshuu scenario by having it be an underwhelming effect that he's actually pretty good at using.

>>82958081
Yukako is the only "Yandere" character I like, because she eventually tries to grow out of it and wins the boy like a normal person.

>>82961565
>Chase Young
>not [Scary Monsters]

>>82961904
Doolittle was pretty much designed with that in mind, except monkeys instead of dinosaurs.

The reason OUATIS was a dragon was because of him. I originally had it that he could alter a person's form with it through pressure points, but scrapped it.

>>82961836
So a Bruno scenario?
>>82961904
Pretty sure we don't re-use canon stands anon.

So, do people think the "who'd have a monkey for a stand" joke is funny/worth keeping enough to prioritise over the relatively cohesive set of stand suggestions we have for the Heylins? We could replace a few of them while keeping the powers, but I don't really think Pool It! works thematically unless it's a literal barrel of monkeys.
Putting it up to vote, I guess.

>>82963519
Put it as a joke with the Firesides at Fang's expense if it no longer works with the Warriors.

>>82952679
I like it. We have to establish that the Part 6 protags are NOT nice people. They're dicks at best, little better than the villains at worst.

At the end of the day Dora only achieved the furtherment of another villains agenda. Destroying Superjail.

>>82953737
We changed the roster. But having him appear as another "Big Guy" could work.

>>82963547
Sure. Could call back to it in the Warriors fight, since the Fireside fight happens earlier.

>>82963609
>Penny slowly becoming resigned to the fact that everyone she's working with is a tool
>Not jerks with hearts of gold like J&SB or the Eds, just amoral, selfish dickbags

>>82963688
Have it be mentioned to it by Generator Rex, who is now her superior.

Something about her being too naive for field duty. Over the course of the part and her brief appearances she gets tricked and fucked over by the protags.

Ends up a better professional, but worse person because of it

>>82963752
Damn it, anon, that's sad.
It's not what her uncle would've wanted.

>>82963821
There will be a reference in part 7 or 8 that's she's now the ruthless head of Interpol, which isn't as active as it once was because she's lost faith in humanity and doesn't want to help out anymore, only doing what she's supposed to and what her uncle would've wanted.

>>82963688
Then, after all that, she meets robo-Dale and actually manages to get through to him.

>>82963967
That sounds awful and not entertaining.

I vote against it.

>>82963967
This could be interesting, depressing background flavour...
>>82964038
...but I think I'd rather have her faith in humanity restored in the end.
There's always light at the bottom.

>>82964093
>>82964038
It gives Strickland new purpose, and probably winds up saving Dale before he breaks down due to getting his ass kicked even with all of his upgrades.

He probably has a moment where he tries to join the cool kids club and puts a jawbreaker he stole from maximum security in his mouth. He is dvastated when he learns that he can't even suck on it..

From the Stand doc:
KND SECTOR V
Rival Gang to Rolf’s Urban Rangers in Part 5

>NIGEL UNO (KND)
>[I AM ONLY ONE]
>Appearance: A stone/mechanical tortoise with a sundial for a shell

>Abilities: [I AM ONLY ONE] can [AGE] or [REJUVENATE] an area of a 100m radius around its user. It would, for example allowing its user to age a section of a city to the point of ruin or to rejuvenate it into what the area was like before it was constructed. The act of [AGING] or [REJUVENATION] affects everything within its circle of influence except entities who are implicitly aware of the concept of time (i.e. any being that possesses self-awareness be it human or not human). The process happens in ‘real time’ and anyone caught in it will experience the [AGING] and [REJUVENATION] as it occurs while they themselves remain unchanged. The stand's effects are undone once the location is no longer within the stand's range.


>HOAGIE P. GILLIAN (KND)
>[TWO MINUTES TO MIDNIGHT]

>Appearance: A gnat or fly made out of miscellaneous items, like tennis rackets. It can dispense Duct Tape from its face.

>Abilities: Duct Tape dispensed by [TWO MINUTES TO MIDNIGHT] has repair properties. By merely sticking a strip of duct tape on a broken piece of technology it will be restored to full functionality until it is removed. Duct tape can also be used to ‘create’ makeshift technologies by taping man-made objects together (such as a motorized bicycle by taping batteries to a normal bike or a bomb by taping a digital timer to a stool)

>KUKI SANBAN (KND)
[THREE SMALL WORDS]

>Appearance: A short, fat stuffed monkey with a rainbow on its bell (Rainbow Monkey Classic). When activated it transforms into the muscular Rainbow Monkey from that one episode.

>Abilities: [THREE SMALL WORDS] is a swarm Stand that starts off as one unit and multiplies when its user is angered. The more things its user is upset or angry about at a given moment, the more instances of [THREE SMALL WORDS] there are.

>>82964836

>WALLABEE BEETLES (KND)
>[WHEN I'M SIXTY-FOUR]

>Appearance: A horned matador with long hair that completely obscures their face.

>Abilities: [WHEN I'M SIXTY-FOUR] is a close-combat oriented stand that attacks with a bright red cloth, the cloth’s edges are razor sharp and it is capable of deflecting most projectiles.
>It has a secondary ability [WASTING AWAY] that allows it to gain a tremendous boost in speed and power temporarily in combat at the cost of its user permanently losing his knowledge of important facts or trivia and being unable to learn them again.

>ABIGAIL LINCOLN (KND)
>[TAKE FIVE]

>Appearance: A skeletal pharaoh made entirely out of various types of candy.

>Abilities: [TAKE FIVE] allows its user to manipulate sweets, and can generate hard candy from its body as projectiles or sticky taffy to entangle opponents. The Candy it produces is edible and safe for consumption, if a bit high in base sugar content. [TAKE FIVE] can only produce up to 500kg of Candy at any point and existing candy must be eaten before more can be generated.

Everyone cool with these? Should they be put in the part 5 doc? I think they're currently the biggest missing hole that's not the Firesides.

>>82964836
>Number two's Stand is MacGyver
Nice

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These stand names are hella long and are just the song titles. Why don't any of them mix it up a bit?

>>82965470
I made some Stands with band names. About the long names, yeah some can be shortened, Crazy Diamond isn't the full name of the song after all.

>>82965227
I mean, it fits.

>>82965470
How so?

>>82965470
>>82965537
The Heylin Warriors' are all album names.
Speaking of which:
>>82960255
>>82957336
Would people mind changing [Doolittle] to [Monkey Flips]/[Monkee Flips] for naming consistency? (Mostly asking the guy who came up with it.)

>>82965470
If it helps, /Co/rge /Co/star stand names are book titles.

>>82965568
Compare canon stand names to the stand names here. Only a handful of names are long and a good number of them aren't just the song title

Examples:
Aqua Necklance
The Hand
Cream Starter

>>82964093
>>82964208
Thing is, she's not appearing again after part 6, so there's no sense in breaking her faith in humanity with restoring it in mind unless it happens with robo-Dale since after that there will be no more opportunities for it.

>>82964882
I'm fine with them.

The KND, after getting beaten by the UR, end up on guard duty.

The biggest missing hole is Mr. Morris.

>>82965568
Well one of the stand names is "These boots are made for walking." Why not shorten it to WALKING BOOTS or something?

>>82965676
>Dirty Deeds Done Dirt Cheap
>Boku no Rhythm wo Kiitekure
>Red Hot Chili Pepper
>Burning Down The House
>I Am A Rock
>Man In The Mirror
>Green, Green Grass Of Home
>In A Silent Way
>Tomb Of The Boom
>All Along The Watchtower

Just to name a few. It's not that every stand name is long, it's just that a few of them are, and so are a few song names too.

This is Jojo fanfiction, and stands need music related names, preferably ones Araki will never use/find. Music names are often terribly long. Because musicians are pretentious.

>>82965738
Morris Stand is also in the stand doc

>>82965744
I was thinking 「MADE FOR WALKING」

>>82965744
We can just use [THESE BOOTS] for the most part, but I think it'd be a shame not to have the stand's "official" name be the full title, really.

>>82965937
That doesn't get in the "Boots" part, which is the reason the Stand's even called that.

>>82964882
Change When I'm Sixty-Four to something like Four Winds or Four Walls of Raiford and I'm good.

The fact that there's a "6" in it really throws me off.

>>82964836
>>82964882
>「IAO1」
>「2M2M」
>「3SW」
>「WIX4」
>「T5」

>>82965961
I can see it going either way. Both have the chance to be worked into a cool one liner, so I'm good with either.

>>82966011
「Four Minute Mile」?

>>82966178
That'll work.

>>82965937
Mr. Morris' stand sounds like it would be invincible against the demons, meaning we need a reason why he isn't fighting them.

Did he get too old?

>>82966587
He did it for free.

When people started paying him, he had to quit. Or something like that.

>>82966666
It looks to me that the devils got to him first, super mega Satan.

He tried to take on the WB alone and, even with his power, got stomped.

So he's pretty much crippled by the time Rolf and his rangers find him and that's the reason why he's training new stand users.

>>82965738
Thats what I wrote.
Robo-Dale gives her faith in humanity, and he's happy that he's [Human After All]

>>82967163
From what I was reading, it seemed to me you wanted her to become some kind of embittered, iron-fisted leader of Interpol who is only looking out for number 1 by the time the part was over.

I don't think Penny should ever become leader of Interpol, leaders don't do shit.
You only become leader if you get kicked upstairs so you can't fuck up in the field anymore or if you've been with the organization since the start.

And Penny strikes me as the type who will stay in the field until she's too old to do it anymore.

>>82967360
Calm down bro.

I didnt write that.
Her getting fucked over by dickish protags? Yes.
Robodale getting as much screentime as we're willing to extend?
Yes.

No idea who the other guy is

>>82967360
I was the guy who suggested she become a bitter, cold-hearted leader of Interpol after part 6. And I wasn't being serious, I was just making a joke about how edgy this shit can get sometimes.

Anyway, it's fine if Penny grows up to be good or whatever. I still think the proper "end" to her character is becoming the leader. Or one of them anyway. It's not like leaders DON'T do anything. Jerry and MOM both went on mission I believe, but they were getting old and didn't do it as often. White Knight I know did have a mecha fight in Generator Rex, despite never having left his room (that was because he was afraid of contamination though. He might have fought more if not).

I can see her as the leader type who ACTUALLY leads her group into battles and stuff. not some faceless, far away character ho controls everything behind the scenes. She cares about her men, and just because she's leader doesn't mean she wouldn't see anymore action. She wouldn't see AS MUCH but I do see her still going on certain missions. Edgeworth still prosecutes despite becoming Chief Prosecutor after all.

It might work better if Interpol had multiple leaders, like a group, but I don't know.

>>82967588
So basically Interpol is lead by The Light/Council of 13 style, consisting of Jerry, MOM, White Knight, and who else?

Hunter Gathers? Someone from sources that didn't air on CN?

How are they relevant to the story? Do they become our big good in part 7 in the fight against President Nobody?

>>82967588
That's all in the future, honestly. It's not directly relevant to how she develops in part 6. I like the idea, though; feels a bit more like a conclusion to her story than "and she's off doing missions to this day".

Anyway, we've mostly got the Firesides left to plan out, right? Then we can get to covering fights.
(The Fireside Girls are posing more of a problem than I'd've thought. Should we change their membership or something? I haven't got any ideas for them, and nobody else seems to have much enthusiasm for them.)

>>82967933
nah, they don't appear.

Maybe have them as silhuoettes in a flashback

>>82967992
I've been working out the outline for the fight, but it seems we get side tracked every time we start discussing what their powers should be.

Combos are what's going to be the end of it for me, I'm just no good at coming up with actual combos.

I figure the encounter starts when the UR send someone into the Fireside HQ to scout the place, probably Taffy since he's the most girly looking.
Taffy needs to be getting bamboozled into buying confections by what's-her-red-robin-face from Fillmore before the others see what's happening and try to put a stop to it.

Toph is who saves them here by stomping on Rolf's foot to make him realize he's under some kind of spell, so he squeezes lemon juice into his eyes and the eyes of his rangers to put an end to whatever power red-robin-girl has.

After that the other girls come out to see what the yelling is about. Cindy is their first girl up to the task of kicking the deadbeats out and strikes a karate pose, then that stuff in the doc happens with Squidward.

Now that Cindy can't stop dancing, the other Firesides know they're dealing with stand users and get serious, calling out Fang so they get the pack mentality boost thing from her.

Rolf is using his doors so no one can land a blow on him, they just pass through him.

And this is where the combos get me since not all of their powers have been settled yet. I just can't plan this part of it.

The fighting spills out into the street.

Taffy and Cartman sneak away during the commotion into the Fireside's office and Taffy turns the safe into cheese, taking the documents/deeds the Firesides had stolen. Cartman has been offended somehow prior to this point and starts a fire in the office after Taffy has already gotten out of there.

>>82967933
I suggested Jerry, MOM, White Knight, Major Monogram, and Changed Daily early on. Dunno who else there could be.

They probably wouldn't be too important though, unless Interpol HQ is stormed by someone in a later part.

>>82967992
We can change the membership. Fang is the only majorly agreed upon member. I know Cindy is too, but I've no ideas for a stand for her.

>>82968384
My idea for Cindy was a device that makes thoughts audible, but has a secondary ability to conjure up something from a target's mind to attack them. The conjured thing is only strong against the person whose mind produced it and weak as a puff of smoke to anyone else.

Malika needs some kind of persuasive power, like a box that makes people willing to give her anything for whatever is inside of it (you know the one, the one from Oglaf, that box).
It'd be limited to visual contact.

>>82968368

Actually, REVOLVING DOORS gets nerfed hard in this fight due to Gretchen's MAYHEM.

>>82968995
Oh, right, so he tries doing that and that's how they find out about that power.
And probably also why they take the fight outside.

I was thinking Squidward could invoke a dance off against the Gibbons girl and that's what gives Taffy and Cartman their opportunity to slip away.

So once the fire starts, do the UR skedaddle the fuck out of there?

>>82969212
>>82968552
I'm just worried about group stand fights though.

Cindy's lets her hear thoughts, and possibly use it to summon monsters, but that just feels a bit OP if she can bring out nightmare servants at will. And it's not a very good combo power unless she's just running around pressing it to her friend's heads and making them think. It still doesn't seem to work with other stands though. It might work as part of a gambling stand like Atum maybe? I don't know.

Malika just having a temptation stand that's dispatched as soon as they meet her feels like wasted potential. Why is she even there really? The thing would work even if she wasn't there. She just feels shoehorned in. Plus it still doesn't seem to be offensive in anyway. At least give her the stand suggestion for Eris if we absolutely need a temptation stand. Then it might have some power, even if they were just playing hot potato with unlucky cookies or whatever.

Portia's suggested stand might work, if it can paralyze or suffocate people. I think it attracts dirt to them if they tell her no or something? It might be interesting to see, I still dislike group stands having to be triggered. Squidward's stand makes me uncomfortable because of how it's a "you're fucked no matter what" sorta deal.

We still have no ideas for Fang's. And Gretchen's is probably the greatest stand amongst them. Fang's needs to be better, otherwise why is she even the leader if Gretchen can summon giant mouths out of shit.

>>82970533
I was thinking that Cindy's Stand, along with reading thoughts, could act as a neural disruptor, tampering with the target thought processes.
Fang probably killed the previous leader in cold-blood without summoning her Stand and since then the rest of the group is intimidated by her.

>>82970533

I think Cindy's works better as one that introduces junk data into the thought streams of her targets, mucking up their cognition and under perfect circumstances create feedback loops akin to Jailhouse Rock in Stone Ocean. Imagine if every 4th thought you had was of the Fireside Girls jingle.

On the topic of Part 8:

We really should just take the characters we haven't used yet, and put them in Part 8.

Seems like a simple solution, to be honest.

>>82972268
I dunno, the original Steel Ball Run had a lot of participants, we can use several of them for part 7.

>>82970533
With Squidward's stand all you have to do is not give an agree or disagree answer and it can't do anything. The Red Guy even explicitly says this before stripping it from Squidward along with his looks.

Squidward's stand isn't like Ratburn's stand where the "no" response is triggered by not saying anything. They have to actually answer for it to be useful in anyway, once anyone realizes that, it might as well be useless.

I was thinking the Firesides aren't really all that combat orientated, their main goal is doing land grabs and most of the time they can do that without a fight.

>>82972268
>make part 8 a massive clusterfuck to get everyone in
We were warned about bullshit of this caliber. Don't fall for it.

There was an EEnE pic so now I'm interested.
What is this general?

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>>82972268
>>82972404

No. Part 8 and part 7 have very specific themes (web media vs old animation and comics respectively) and I'd rather not have them stray too far from that.

Some characters just won't get used. We have been saying that since the beginning. It's better that than an incomprehensible clusterfuck like 6 became. Or had become. We're removing and rewriting it so we'll have less characters and more actual plot. In case you were wondering, don't complain that your waifu isn't in it anymore. We just don't have enough room for certain characters. They'll get cut from the story. It happens.

>>82972489

Remember those old bumpers for Cartoon Network that had all of the characters and IPs existing in the same universe?

Do you know of the fantastic world of Jojo's Bizarre Adventure?

We put them in a blender and hit puree.

>>82972489
Tails Gets Trolled tier Jojo fanfiction that shouldn't work yet somehow does. It's a cuh-razy ride.

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>>82972804
I know (though the comic-only restriction was lessened in part 7), I'm only saying that dumping all the remaining characters in one part without rhyme or reason is a bad idea, specially when some of the characters could fit in a specific part.
And speaking about part 7, Why you fuckers didn't tell me the Shocker-mobile was an actual thing? This thing is marvelous.

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>>82973140
We can switch where characters wind up. We've done it before. LeQuack is in part 5, when he was suggested early on for 7. There are other examples too, but I can't remember them all.

Also, Shocker-mobile has to show up. I'd like Two Face's car and Joker's in too, but I understand the thing about using mainstream villains.

I actually think Shocker would be a good for for that Roundabout stand we had in the part for the bunny character, but I'd be down with whatever.

>>82973370
LeQuack is still in part 5.

And once again, we are side tracked from this Fireside fight.

>>82971140
>>82971522
Messing with an opponent's ability to think could be interesting.

>>82973741
Yeah I know, he was originally suggested for part 7, then he was moved to 5, but anyway.

A stand that messes with the opponent's thoughts would work well with a stand the requires people to focus on it to avoid punishment. Maybe Malika's? Though I still suggest changing it from a simple distraction stand. Red already has something similar, and he utilizes it in his fight against the UR with Alexandra.

Could also work with Fang's too. We don't know what it does. It could be something simple that makes you go "how did she ever kill the former leader", and the answer is with her fists, although something King Crimson-y would be interesting to see too, if the Rangers wind up underestimating her. "You don't understand, the reason I don't use my stand isn't because it's weak, it's because it makes things too easy."

>>82974102
Malika's stand is still only just a suggestion I threw out there to get the ball rolling on it.

I would like it to have that power since it allows for the whole "traded your deed for a bar of candy" thing as well as Toph being unaffected since she's blind.

But it could do more than just that, no one bothered to think of anything creative past the one suggestion I made, you all just stopped there and thought that's all it would be able to do without even trying to expand on it or suggesting something different.

Point is, I need at least one of them to have a very useful ability for getting people to hand things over "willingly" from the perspective of non-stand users.

>>82974634
I was thinking that, if allows the "trade your deed for candy" thing, the Stand could make stuff to look more impressive or valuable and viceversa, but that would combo ridiculously well with Fang's Stand.

>>82946544
Too much shit to read and my spam attention is shit while on the weed, how do I go about drawing one of these???

>>82975228
Take requests~

>>82975228
For now pick a character and draw them or their stand. We're still technically only on the first chapter of part 1, and we can't really switch artists until that chapter is done imo.

>>82975185
As far as I can tell, Fang's stand just makes people into her slaves if she beats them at something.

It should probably boost the physical abilities of anyone under her too.

I'm not sure I see how well that combos with the current suggestion for Malika's stand.

>>82975281
>>82975285

Can I pick the character? Do all the characters on the list have been made already? Because I don't want to draw one that has already been done.

>>82975416
The most drawn are Tom, Daffy and Johnny, the ones less likely to be already drawn are secondary characters and antagonists. You can also check the booru in the OP.

>>82970533
I kind of want to see one of them use Lovely Rita to stop Squidward.

>>82967933
That reminds me, are Tom and Aladdin ever showing up again? I could see Aladdin doing a little work on the side.

>>82977021
Aladdin relied on Genie for stand battles, and Genie's gone. I don't see Aladdin coming back. Tom might, but it would have to be a major threat.

>>82977021
Tom was in the prologue of part 5, but other than that, he's done.

Unless he's in that side story thing.

>>>82916956 (You)
>Seems like it could work. Might be a bit too similar to his powers in the comics, which we're trying to avoid, but I think it's fine. Will leave to the jury just to be safe, however.

From the last thread, @StandReviewFag

I don't honestly see anywhere that states the stands can't be similar to the character's power. But I do kinda get it, is it supposed to be based off of a sort of one-off instance sort of deal?

Because I can also work with that.

>>82978186
The idea is that it would be boring if a character had the same powers as their show/comic but with a ghost, so we to give them a power that fits the character but is different enough that it feels fresh, if that makes sense. It's not a hard and fast rule as I recall, just something we try to keep in mind to make the project more interesting.

>>82978323
That's easy enough to work around, give me like five minutes.

I'm going to reference his fight with Gladiator, when he used his barrier to defend himself and actually HURT Gladiator.

It's gonna be more JoJo-ish, I kinda understand the problem from before.

>>82975185
>>82975337
>>82974634
Fang's and Malika's still feel underdeveloped. They should be worked on more. At least one of them should have a punchghost as well. Either it be Fang, Cindy, Portia, or Malika. I'd go with Portia for the punchghost myself. Her's seems like it has potential to be one.

I do still like the idea of a stand that functions through bribery though. Cursed candy seems like a safe bet. Maybe turning people in the immediate are into sugar addicts? She's first seen scamming the Chocolate Kid from Hey Arnold into giving her the deed to his house or something. Or is that too similar to Night Bird Flying? (as if anyone knows what that stand is). The perfect name for it would be [I WANT CANDY] if we go with that. Sugar addiction just seems strange on it's own, so maybe the stand drains energy/sugar from the body and make people crave it? I dunno.

>>82976973
Which one was that again?

>>82977339
What side story thing? We're doing side stories?

>>82978502
I just draw a blank when it comes to making up stands.
I can string the story along and come up with at least an outline for a fight, but I'm terrible at coming up with powers.

Malika could have a punch ghost and it makes people want whatever it is holding with both hands.

The side story is that Jorge Joestar parody. It's been discussed a bunch. It's for after we're done with all the parts.

>>82978786
The holding thing is a bit too similar to Ace's stand though. So probably not unless the thread wants it. I'll clean up my Malika stand idea some more and work on my idea for Portia and submit them later as actual stands for judgement and see if the thread likes them.

>>82978957
It's a different effect entirely.

Ace's stand just attracts objects to his person that are similar to objects his stand is holding.

Malika's stand makes people WANT whatever it's holding.

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>>82979132
Okay then, that's a solid concept. I'd still suggest I Want Candy for the name unless you can come up with better. I think you oughta try to develop it more though. It's not a bad idea so far.

Right now, here's my idea for Portia's.

>「Y U M M Y」
>Appearance: The stand is dripping with oil. It's body seems made out of sand. It has razor wire wrapped around it's knuckles.
>Ability: The stand is triggered if the opponent refuses or goes against the user in any way. Once active, they begin feeling hot and will start to sweat out a black, viscous, foul-smelling substance. Not only does it slow down the enemy, anything that hits them will stick on until pried off somehow.
>The stand's liquid is teeming with bacteria and will cause infection if it gets into an open wound. Infections caused by the stand are immediately healed after the user is defeated.The stand's disease affects people in different way, though common symptoms include vomiting, chills, fever, shaking, and coughing, before ultimately killing the opponent.

It's not perfect, but it's what I could come up with. If there are any better suggestions, I'm open to them.

>>82980027
That sounds like it make the dance off interesting.

Squidward gets that crap on him and has to dance better than someone in good physical condition (like landing a flip with a broken ankle).

If he can win than he can command her to undo her stand's effect.

tried to come up with a reason why Donald begins his scrap with the WB

>few years before the events of part 5
>Scrooge sees a potential market in the old country, buys a large building
>Wanting to focus his business within Molly’s Gamble, decides to send Donald to run his new business venture
>The building is turned into a large club- the House of Mouse, with Mickey as the MC and Donald as acting owner under Scrooge
>Club starts to get popular, as many celebrities are invited from across toon town, begins to bring some business to the Old Country with more growth projected
>Warner Bros catch on to this
>Under legal mishaps, perhaps the influences of stands and such, they managed to buy out the building and shut down the club
>Donald loses it over this shit- wants to know what the hell is going on
>Mickey is nowhere to be seen
>Donald attempts to get answers, is met by Dr. Facilier

>>82981072
>Dr. Facilier tries to get Donald to shake his hand, promises him a big position and redemption if he [SHAKES]
>Donald is way too mad for such false compassion
>Facilier gets ready to sneak attack Donald- shutting up the Duck will be a great help to the Warner Bros
>Before he can act, he is blasted by a sudden stream of smoke
>Facilier gets blinded, stumbles back a bit
>”Don’t you dare disrespect me you mad little--- you may think a poor sinner like me is alone, but I’ve got friends on the—“
>Facilier stops talking as the smokes clears just enough to see Donald with a vague shadow behind him
>It is in this moment of rage that Donald has unlocked his stand [STEAM MACHINE]
>Facilier books it- his friends on the other side comment was basically a bluff since he didn’t have any [friends] in his range
>Donald’s rage unlocks a new path- a path of vengeance against Facilier whoever these [FRIENDS] were- as well as the WB

>>82981109
We also need to tie in how Tina Russo Duck is his cousin, so that's also make Plucky his cousin, that's how he ended up with the Monster Mashers.

>>82981072
>>82981109
Where should this get brought up?

While Donald is with the UR during their raid on the Looniversity?

Was Max working at the House of Mouse and after the WB bought it out, that's how he becomes involved with the talent agency?

Is Tony Stark gonna appear in Part 7? If so, maybe we should give him a Stand called [Drinking From The Bottle]
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CqPU7NSVQwY

>>82983287
We shouldn't have major superhero characters in their. It'd be boring if they were all Supes-tier. We need to spring for more obscure characters. Our mains are Robot Man and Crazy Jane, neither of them are paticularly "super".

>>82983314
Oh, well...how about Captain Haddock?

>>82983371
Also I thought of what his stand would do, it takes the things he says when he gets pissed off and makes them real, either by applying them to the environment or or straight up inflicting them on people.
>"TEN THOUSAND THUNDERING TYPHOONS!"

>>82983371
Now you're catching on. Characters like that.

I'm actually disappointed Tintin doesn't seem to be appearing in it actually, that needs to be fixed.

Lucky Luke and Spirou should appear too while we're at it.

But right now the plot is on part 5, we should be focusing on that before getting to 7. If you have a stand suggestion, you can put it in the doc under the Part 7 Stand Suggestions section. I like the idea though.

>>82983460
>look up Haddock sayings
>http://www.tintinologist.org/guides/lists/curses.html
>one of them is Road Roller
WRYYYYYYYYYY

>>82981981
is Mickey still working under the WB or has he been changed?

>>82981306
How does Donald get along with Plucky? Does he know who his father is?

>>82983460
That's perfect, actually.
Maybe it'd be even better if he didn't actually realise he had the Stand; when someone gets covered in billions of bilious blue blistering barnacles he just concludes that he's had too much to drink.

>>82983462
I'd kind of like Luke (maybe the Man Who Shot Lucky Luke version?) to show up with a friendly rivalry with Jonah Hex.

>>82980027

I really like this. Syncs up perfectly with Cindy and Gretchen.

>>82983460
>>82985965
>User: Captain Archibald Haddock
>Stand name: 「Storm In A Teacup」
>Appearance: A large model ship in a bottle
>Ability: Whenever Haddock uses an epithet or curse, it will manifest into reality, directed at whoever the curse is directed at; for example, "thundering typhoons" would cause everyone within the Stand's range to be caught in a serious storm, "blistering barnacles" would cover the target in literal blister-causing barnacles, and an accusation of "pirates!" would manifest pirates to attack the target. These effects are also applied to the model ship (e.g. being caught in a "storm" in the bottle, covered in barnacles, and boarded by figures of pirates, respectively).
>The user is generally too drunk to realise that he is causing the effects of 「Storm In A Teacup」.

>>82986375

A little OP but still a good concept.

>>82984543

He's good with Plucky, has a grudge against LeTerally for hitting and quitting his cousin.

>>82986666
I figure any OP potential is kind of offset by Haddock being 1) drunk and 2) not very smart, especially when he's angry, which is the only time the Stand manifests.

>>82968384
>Changed Daily
Aw yeah, getting into the obscure choices.

>>82984367
>yfw /co/co/ Mickey is literally https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zVEQwEjOMVw

Docs are sabotaged again. How do you restore them?

>>82988406
Give up?

>>82978502
>Which one was that again?

>Stand: 「LOVELY RITA」
>Ability: When the user selects a certain object,「LOVELY RITA」activates a timer that counts down from a certain amount of time (maybe 5-10 minutes). As long as the timer is active, the object is unable to move from that location. If it's a person, they can still move their arms, torso or eyes around, but their feet will not move. When the timer is up, 「LOVELY RITA」will tow the object towards itself. However, an object being towed can not move through solid objects.

Maybe give to Malika?

>>82988420
NEVER

Which reminds me.
Rorscharch for PArt 7 as an ally who wants to take down the president.

He has NO idea about the Presidents real plan.

He just blames him for keeping the secret formula of Dr.Pepper a secret.

He teams up with the Question.

>>82988420
We can't at this point, we have to break /co/'s curse of never finishing a project

When we're gonna have a comic of this?

>>82988406
Which part?

>>82988783
When the drawfriend in Part 1 finishes, and I get enough drawfagging skill to actually make Part 2.

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>>82988795
It was 5, I just fixed it. Seems like the chucklefucks over at cripplechan thought they were funny

>>82988657
I did suggest him in the Stand page as having a post-it note punchghost. if someone reads or looks at a post-it he places somewhere, he can appear behind them or somewhere nearby out of sight

just my suggestion though. I'm still pretty shit at Stands

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>>82988783
at this rate maybe when the Jojolion anime is finished

>>82988783
Never, I'm afraid.
At best, we might be able to get a prose story with some illustrations for, let's say, parts 1 and 2. Maybe 3.

>>82985973
I like this.

>>82984367
I don't recall Mickey ever being placed in this project.

>>82984367
Honestly, I kind of want the really, really iconic characters like Mickey, Bugs, Popeye, and such to be an ancient order led by St. James Olsen who are the ones who scatter the pieces of the corpse.

>>82989844
Thanks m8. They're the two characters who got me into Westerns, so I'm fond of them

>>82985973
how about

>User: Lucky luke
>Stand name: 「Big Iron」
>appearance: a black revolver with ivory grip
>Ability: 「a bullet fairly ripped」: Is active whenever the gun is loaded and cocked inside a holster. whenever an enemy stand attempts to directly harm Lucky Luke, this ability will cause Luke to instinctively draw 「Big Iron」 and use it to shoot the stand. If the enemy stand is hit by 「a bullet fairly ripped」 It will disappear and be unusable for one hour.

>>82991058
Shooting faster than his own shadow. I like it, but let's see what Reviewhombre thinks.

>>82983593
>Anachronisms!
>Anthropophagus!
>Bodysnatcher!
>Fancy-dress Facist!
>Fourlegged Cyrano!
That gonna be fun

>>82989959
How were the corpse parts spreaded in SBR anyway?

>>82991058
>1 hour
I'd say tone it down to about 30 minutes and you'd be right on the money.

This is embarrassing.

>>82991881
We get it, you think the project is autistic
Now shut the fuck up and let us finish

>>82991635
>How were the corpse parts spreaded in SBR anyway?
Joseph of Arimathea, I beleive

>>82991985
>finish
Nice joke.

>>82991058
I think it needs to either get an offensive potential, or Luke needs to find a partner.

Or does Luke have a real gun on hand that he can use too?

>>82992293
Stand could just be bound to his actual gun.
Also, I feel like it should just give him a "spider-sense" sort of thing where he can sense incoming danger from Stands; he still has to quick-draw himself, meaning he has to be a fast, good shot to use it correctly.

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Do cancelled shows count as /co/ related enough for this?

>>82992293
I remember suggesting another Stand called Big Iron that let's the user fire different materials and substances as bullets. Maybe give that ability to his partner?

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>>82992484
>>82992293
His partner should be Cocco Bill. They seem like they'd work together.

>>82992362
>"spider-sense" sort of thing where he can sense incoming danger
The gun's hammer become half-cocked?

>>82992797
Eh, I like the idea, but that's not going to be much help if a Stand is swinging its fist at him from behind. I was just thinking an instinctive sense of "shoot behind you NOW or you're dead".

>>82992423
Im up for it.

>>82992423
I guess so maybe? If it had an animated pilot it's allowed.

How come there's no Fry from Futurama? You guys are fucking up.

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How about we add my homeboy right here.

>>82993943
Nah, it never got released. It was almost done, then someone told the BBC they could do it for half the price and they bailed. (Spoiler: they couldn't.)

>>82994082
>>82994174
Pitch a stand, then.

Bump.

Let's try and get back to part 5. What else do we need? We were discussing Fireside Girls stands and got one for Portia. Cindy's needs to be worked on a bit to be better defined, and we need to decide on Malika's. Fang's also needs better definition.

Aside from that, we need to figure out who's at the Stock Exchange besides Azazel, and why Gideon has connections with it. Also we need to figure out who's in the Legal/Big Guys porno studio. And what else is in the tower.

The mall also needs work. It's pretty barebones except for Chernabog and Pinky. So does the Looniversity.

>>82995696
Malika's seems mostly settled upon.

Fang's really does need to be better defined. Maybe it's animalistic in appearance and has eyes that intimidate?

I think Demongo would be at the stock exchange, it'd be better than having him be with the big guys. Gideon is connected to the stock market because that's where he's listed on the books as working, meaning his actual job, at the WB as a company.

Graves file states his office is located at the stock exchange.

I don't know if I can make this any clearer.

>>82996047
I'm not sure about moving Demongo to finances since that leaves the legal division without a demon leader, and his proposed Stand fits the legal thematic (though we can swap its owner).

>>82994696
I would, but I don't know jack about JoJo other than it's crazy stuff.
I decided to check the thread to see what kind of cool, crazy shit you guys have made up with /co/ related characters. I like what you guys have done, but I figured that Fry is such an iconic character that he should be included, right?

>>82996872
he should. But im not sure how we write him in.

Most of Fry's story is him being a fish out of water and adapting to a wacky noisy crazy bizarre future.

Putting him back in the present makes him HAVE to come from the future. Which makes Futurama canon in /co/co/?

Not sure,

>>82996799
Monstroso is a demon I guess? I've never seen Venture Bros. before though.

>>82996872
You can research Jojo on it's wiki. Look up how stands work and what they do, and pitch an idea. It'd be a good idea to read the manga, or at least watch part 3 and 4 of the anime to get more of a grip on stand design too. We've no obvious place for Fry as of yet, but we could put him in somewhere possibly if you come up with a good enough concept. I think Bender would work better here though.

>>82996993
well, we already have Farnsworth in the present time, and in the creation of the String Theory Sewing Machine there is a dialogue with someone (presumably Fry) that question why the machine spits jawbreakers

>>82997098
That could work better actually. Farnsworth is a big player in here. I almost forgot about that. Fry could cameo.

>>82996872
>I figured that Fry is such an iconic character that he should be included, right?
There's actually a general preference for using less iconic characters, hence why we've got Daffy but no Bugs, Donald but no Mickey, etc.

>>82997241
Bugs is in, but he's an minor character. He's a make up artist at the studio, and a fight. He doesn't show up anywhere else afterwards though.

>>82997320
he spreads the Corpse though.

Only one anon liked the idea of him as a Make-up guy.

>>82996799
The thing about lawyers is, they're human, but demons fear them because humans generally come up with things far more evil than the demons could ever devise.

When you have a species capable of both good an evil, they tend to be better at both than one-alignment only factions like angels and demons.

>>82997073
Monstroso is a lawyer with a demon theme.

>>82997320
>>82997398
Yeah, I don't think Bugs should be a make up artist, there's even an atomic super clone (Loonatics version) of him fought at the Looniversity, and they'd only clone specimens who show exceptional ability.

Would Bugs have a stand, or would he actually be a melody or style user? It feels like they'd be the ones who have hidden the corpse, them being an ancient order and all.

>>82997476
Bugs is a relatively short fight I presume. He's a melody user. One of the first guardians they face.

He gives Jane and Cliff a seemingly hard time, Jane knocks him backwards though and then Mojo squishes him with his stand.

>>82997553
>Mojo squishes him with his stand
>As they walk off, Bugs sticks his head up and says "What did you expect from a part 7 parody, a happy ending?"

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>>82997649

>>82997649
And the Cliff shoots him. "I had a feeling he wasn't dead".

Alternatively we get a shot of Bugs crawling out of the hole, every bone in his body shattered, the the Wizard appears and reduces him to nothing. Even if he isn't the same LeTerally, he still knows about their rivalry. It's what he would've wanted.

So, maybe the catalyst for Donald to become the Duck Slayer will be something to do with the sould of Scrooge.

>>82998012
I don't think Scrooge kicks the bucket during part 5, the bastard is very healthy for his age (and apparently found the fountain of youth in one comic)

>>82997874
That just ruins the gag.

>>82998184
In any case, if we're having old/famous characters be corpse part guardians, their fights should be easy. Sort of the inverse of how they were is SBR.

When Mickey shows up, Goofy would distract and crush him with his stand. Goofy cares more for Max's soul than his friends after all. He's supposed to turn against the group when it seems he might not get it back. He only realizes his quest is in vain after losing. He then commits suicide against Nobody.

Jimmy was probably the guardian of Supes' ballzencock. Nobody erased him off screen.

The others are just as quickly dispatched. The thing they have to worry about are their fellow racers stealing the parts.

The only thing I'm worried about is, would it be too similar to our current working idea for part 8's rockmen if they were all classic characters?

>>82997874
wow, edgy.

>>82998458
not really. They serve similar purposes, but in different ways and for different reasons.

>>82998458
That's dumb.

If anything Mickey would join Goofy in the race if Goofy found the corpse part Mickey was guarding.

>>82998458
I thought what >>82989959 was implying was that the iconic characters would only appear in a flashback showing the history of the corpse, like what happened in SBR.

>>82998458
I like this. Maybe make a few of the fights simple footnotes for comedic purposes?

>"And so, after a long and arduous battle against Killer Moth, Cliff and Jane continued on there way. Mojo had stayed behind, after being injured."

>"Oh, and they met Popeye. Cliff threw a rock at him and killed him after he ranted for too long and got the Hero's left arm."

>>82998771
Goofy isn't exactly his sanest at the moment. He thinks his son is dead and blames himself. He's ridiculously edgy while being his normal self. It's impossible to take him seriously. Alternatively, the battle against Mickey is still short after Jane knocks him off a mountain or something.

Or we could do this. >>82998825 This is fine too.

>>82997476
Who should be in make up then?

>>82998825
i prefer this

>>82999215
Homer with his makeup shotgun

>>82999289
Homer is already in the Four Buisnessmen unless you want to change things and put in a different outsourcing character.

>>82999252
Yeah, it works better I feel. Let's just do that.

>>82999215
If Fifi is actually appearing in part 5, she should be the makeup artist.

>>82999355
Homer isn't in the 4 business men, the monorail guy took his place.

>>82999355
>Homer is already in the Four Buisnessmen unless you want to change things and put in a different outsourcing character.
Wait, what? I don't remember this. We had a different set of businessmen.

>>82999518
>>82999355
>>82999462
This is the first time I'm hearing about this. Who are they supposed to be? WB elite guards or something?

>>82999553
Them plus Gideon are the ones who made an entrance into Plucky's comatose mind.

an entrance that Bill the dream demon used to implant himself in Plucky's mind.

By the time the UR close the hole, Bil is already embedded way too deep, and needs Plucky himself to remove it.

They are Doug Dimmadome
Gideon Graves
Monorail guy
and some other guy

>>82999518
>One desustorage trip later
Oh, Hindu God Homer.
Yeah, I never liked that one, doesn't feel fitting for a group of businessmen. Lyle Lanley, perhaps. Any other ideas?

>>82999553
We've talked about this for the past 3 threads.

Monorail Man (Lyle Lanley)
Doug "Speedwagon" Dimmadome
Gideon Graves
Toffee

The four business men of the Apocalypse, former business owners who were bought out by the WB and now work for them, climbing their way back up the corporate ladder.

>>82999707
>Doug "Speedwagon" Dimmadome
I don't get it.
They're fitting, though. Which one's which theme? I suggested Gideon for acquisition.

...Goddamn it, I just remembered that Hank Scorpio was one of the suggestions. Who's better, him or Lanley?
(I vote Scorpio. Lanley's more of a con artist than a businessman.)

>>82999775
His hat is fucking huge.

It just keeps getting taller and taller until it can no longer be contained on whatever panel it is on.

>>82999857
I feel it's too low of a position for Hank Scorpio, the guy is a super villain who took over the East Coast. If anything he'd be a member of President Nobody's cabinet, or someone the top brass of Interpol have to fight.

>>82999970
It's too low of a position for Toffee and Doug Dimmadome too, but they're still in until further notice.

Nobody's presidential cabinet needs more comic characters in it I think? I dunno.

>>82999970
>I feel it's too low of a position for Hank Scorpio, the guy is a super villain who took over the East Coast. If anything he'd be a member of President Nobody's cabinet, or someone the top brass of Interpol have to fight.
>The WB takes control of Scorpio's assets, he works for them
>Between part 5 and part 7 he takes control of what's left of the company and turns it into a profitable empire, becoming one of Nobody's allies

>>83000168
Scorpio just feels like a bigger than life guy, he'd steal the thunder of anyone he's in a scene with.

The current line up, none of them have that thunder stealing ability so they can actually play off of each other.

>>83000444
Plucky took most of the WB's properties, but Scorpio took the finances.
He funded the superpac that got Nobody elected.

If Callie Briggs is in this anywhere, she'd be the one who takes the fall for it and it lands her in Super Jail.

And if not her, we do need some people in Super Jail who are former WB employees.

>>83000463
Fair assessment.

>>82999700
we already filled out the spot.

Dont worry about it anon.

>>82999775
Doug Dimmadome has a hat not unlike Speedwagon's razor hat.

His Stand allows it to rebound off of one surface per throw, and so he times his throws like Captain America, plus the knowledge that he has confirmed control of how it bounces BACK to him.

He can also use the Stand power to make the protags trip and falter in important moments.

It looks like a Raygun Gothic spacesuit-clad Texan Hat wearing Squirrel that's consistently sipping lemonade. Wherever it spits the lemonade, is the area that turns rubbery.

>>83001221
So... his stand is Sandy Cheeks?

>>82946544
who the hell is Rolf?

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>>83001461
stylized as a waitress from a 50's burger joint.

Imagine if Alex Ross drew Sandy as a background character in Kingdom Come.

>>83001630
The son of a shepherd.

Do the various WB employees stationed at their businesses need to go in the part 5 doc, then?

>>83002575
>stationed at their businesses

What?

You mean all the stand users working for the WB that actually have fights? They'll end up in the doc eventually.

>>83002717
Departments, not businesses, sorry.
I mean, like, listing who works at each department.

>>83004081
Yeah, we've been working on that.

Stuff's in the doc when they actually go to those place, just not organized in the character list, which takes up at least the first 15 pages of the doc right now.

>>83001630
You're joking, right?

>>83004081
We should probably come up with stand ideas for them first. Then move them to the doc. Gideon and Doug have stands, so they can be placed there.

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Has Captain Crunch or any other cereal mascots received a treatment yet?

>>83005593
We talked about it for Farnsworth's creations, but switched it to Space Jam monsters rather than cereal monsters.

>>83005593
In part one, the chocolate vampire duck fought Hank.

>>83005593
WRRRRYYYYYYY'D Part 1

>>83005885
Count Chocula and Count Duckula are two different creatures.

Any update on the fighting game?

>>83007193
Not really, but I've been considering making sprites of some of the characters. I'm working on a couple other things though.

I didn't know if you wanted it ASB style or Heritage style. I hope the latter cause it's easier for me to do. Right now I've just been reading through the rooster. I might not do anything with it, but it's a bit tempting. I'm still working on a few other projects, so if I do try to do anything for it, it won't really be a major priority. I'll do small things when I have the time. Still, it intrigues me.

>>83007653
Heritage style would work a lot better than ASB style, seeing as not only is it the better game, but it's relatively easier to create.

>>83005349
There is a userless Stand suggestion proposed for part 5 in the doc in case it come in handy.

>>83007653
Most likely Heritage style, since All Star Battle is 3d and that's a helluva difficult to make.

>>83001221

I want to call it GUILLOTINE but the idea of Dimmadome listening to Death Grips is just too weird.

>>83008284
[Hey Sandy]

>>82999462
>Fifi
Actually, let's put her in the department store as the one in charge of the perfume department.

It's so obvious I can't believe no one thought of it sooner.

>>83008792

Having made her Stand, I feel utterly retarded for not pitching that.

Basic stand for the standless

>Name: [U CAN'T TOUCH THIS]
>Effect: Force field that repels everything physical. This means energies like radiation and such will still pass through.

Everything else is variable.


>>83008654
Too good

>>83008854
Well, no one else did until now either, so this is a shared feeling of idiocy.

So HR, top side department store, we have
-Pinky
-Fifi

Who else do we need for fights in the store?

Bottom side, demon offices, we have:
-Chernabog

We need more office jockeys, how about at least one of the demons from Jimmy Two-Shoes?

>>83009883
Pinky's Stand acts as a sort of "fake La Cucaracha", I can see him fighting alone with a bunch of mooks (maybe fans) posing as himself once 「Brain Damage」 strikes his target.

>>83009883

Eloise as Chernobog's secretary maybe?

>>83009883
If he's not in Part 8, Huckleberry Hound as mall security.

Gigi or Laney from Grojband works at a Hot Topic store along with Roxi Bear from Yo Yogi.

Randy Cunningham works a part-time job in the arcade. Possibly with Michelangelo from TMNT.

Mindy from Billy and Mandy could work at a high-class fashion store like American Eagle. May also work with Sissi Delmonte from Code Lyoko

I dunno who could be at the cafeteria.

Tony the Tiger is at sporting goods.

Blinky Bill is the mall mascot.

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>>83011055
What about Yucky Duck in the cafeteria?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N6EmNSXdywE

>>83010959
I was thinking more along the lines of some of the actual monster/demon characters.

>>83011055
Here's a thought, we use some characters from that show, 6teen.
They can be the random mooks who don't last long.

>>83011734
Nikki and Jonesy maybe? They get beaten up first, then the heroes need to go through the winding maze of shops full of overpriced shit and fight the the owners, then head on down to the real head of the mall.

I imagine the store would go into lock down mode when the UR made themselves known. Shutter gates drop around randomly forming a labyrinth and the lights go out or turn red.

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>>83011734

I was thinking of Blackheart as an office jockey due of his daddy issues and inferiority complex, but then I remembered he is from Marvel and people here seem they want to avoid using Big Two characters outside Part 7 as much as possible.

>>82992423
「DOCTORIN' THE TARDIS」
https://youtu.be/Adk1ujjmguo

>>83011974
It'd be okay if we used some. It's not like we already aren't.

Besides, he's an obscure enough Marvel villain to show up.

>>83011974

Isn't he jobber tier though?

>>83011933
>forming a labyrinth
You ever see that commercial with the kid who has the maze sheet in front of him and just just draws a straight line from start to finish saying this is the maze when you have this truck?

A maze would be like that to the UR since that have Rolf.

So the department store goes n lock down, Rolf just keeps going straight ahead, to the big volcano-like crater in the center of the mall, one of his doors opens up in a dressing room leading to a visual gag and maybe a short fight.

>>83012371
Who knows which store leads to the HR too. It's not like it'd be obvious. After Mall Security shuts the gates, the group has to search the stores for which one it could be hidden in.

Could be the mall can actually change its form as well. When the gates close, a button is pressed and the area they're in changes it's location.

Oh for fuck's sake. Someone vandalized part 5's doc again.

>>83012930
It was probably >>83012756

Not like it can't easily be restored though.

>>83012660
I think they just make for the center where the big demon is, it's just they keep bursting into the wrong kinds of place on the other side of some of Rolf's doors.

>>83013314
Ok. I just thought the HR department was hidden behind the perfume department, and the UR would have to find it.

I still want to make it a bit more difficult with a slight maze aspect though. I was working on a stand that mall security (possibly Huckleberry) would have that basically alters the interior and shape of whatever it's inside. They'd be using that to change the mall's layout while using the shutter gates to disguise this fact. It would seem like Rolf's doors are just taking them around in circles, when really it's the security chief.

>>82946544
>All of the docs are fucked
This is why you lock them after each part is finished, or at least make backups, /co/

>>83013919
Restore them. It's easy.

>>83012010
A tad too obvious, I'd reckon.

>>83013919

GD has a built-in rollback feature.

>>83013689
That could work, I just think the first thing they do is go straight for the huge demon in the middle using Rolf's doors.

After a few fights the security gets turned on and the path forward becomes less forward.

The department store is volcano shaped, remember, so in the middle of the building there's a long shaft leading down, it probably has glass walls all around it for some kind of artistic effect, but it's really just so Chernobog can look at any story in the building at any time.

>>83013919
We could probably switch doc 1 to view only, but doc 2 is still being worked on by sandcastles.

I realize what this sounds like, but I think that for Cocolion we should use a Homestuck character.

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>Finally finish the last two Stands for the Loonatics
>Doc is getting reset every 5 minutes

>>83014659
READ
THE
FUCKING
DOC

Can Space Ghost be a Rock Human?

>>83014823
He had Coast to Coast as a pseudo reboot.

Maybe he could be, but rebooted things are a bit iffy. It'd be up to the thread really.

>>83014395
See, what I figured was HR was beneath the mall at the bottom of the volcano, while that actual mall was at the very top, plugging it up. When Chernabog is defeated, the lava within swells and destroys the mall.

The security head would be watching over the mall with his stand and security cameras, reporting directly to Chernabog. I don't really think he'd care much for the actual goings on in the mall. It's a good cover for HR, which is his main priority. He might change shops around inside, but he's more focused on the WB's soul collection. Having people sell their souls for overpriced bullshit is really the only thing he cares about, mall-wise. Shell companies are just covers for the actual companies from what I've seen.

The UR would storm the shops while security fucks with the layout, trying to find the actual entrance to the HR department, which is hidden in the employees lounge of the perfume department. They'd take stairs down into the hellish bowls of the volcano, enter a rather drab and small office building at the bottom, fight the few demons working there, then battle Chernabog and make a break for it back up and out of the mall as the volcano begins to erupt.

So I was thinking about Superman.

He's dead in Man of Steel Ball Run. But what killed him?

I mean, it doesn't really matter since it's for an allegory, but it could be a good tie into our Jorge Joestar.

If we end up doing it, I assume it'll be focused on reboots, right?

Superman and, The Avatar(?), are trying to piece reality back together as it has/is being being twisted apart due to the world's rules being broken by the shattered [PURE IMAGINATION]. They're one of the few that are retain memories across iterations(?).

It could also tie into fanfiction, which could be fun and/or Meta.

Of course, it ends with Superman dying somehow. Maybe due to using himself as a metaphorical/physical 'anchor' to tie everything back together.

>>83015477
Yes, HR is beneath the mall, but it's not an actual volcano, it's just a building that's volcano-shaped.

Once the UR get to the center where the shaft is, that's where they find Chernabog, then he flees down into HR, which the door to is located at the very bottom of the shaft.

Once they get into HR, they need to fight demons in office suits, or broken humans while Dexter gets into their computers and downloads the data they came for. Once Chernabog is defeated, the mall could erupt with collected souls.

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>>83016002
The world wasn't shattered by the Warden's stand.

How many times do we have to keep repeating that?

>>83016002
I tossed (half joking) the idea that he was just crushed by a giant meteorite of kryptonite at one point in the past, like the ice king in that alternate timeline.