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/Co/Co/'s Bizarre Adventure: Steamin' and Machinin'

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Previous thread: >>80940915
Past threads: http://pastebin.com/YWEhkBmT

YOU SHOULD READ THESE LINKS BEFORE CONTRIBUTING YOUR AUTISM
(ALSO, try not to suggest 1:1 copies of characters and events in JJBA)

>Plot summaries and character list
http://pastebin.com/TXVavPMR

>Abilities and Stands
http://pastebin.com/vYTvZPFP
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QycIbBT6L7Ny5elmmnhI4OdQYk-yJ-mGJC6TrdwBii8/edit?usp=sharing

>Every part, in order
1 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IdBYK9zXpJrDc4vAIHnRLmZpPiKyxiIkj25oOTaaeF0/edit?usp=sharing
2 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KA0-Y_HnU_m6V5pwZ7fEtqGMnwm43NrshzANTcCxr34
3 - https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hDbP7BA0XBP3_3GW0uphroYjQdcW1EW5b37w-r_lsaI
4 - http://pastebin.com/k6abNX8f
5 - http://pastebin.com/eqPVKMgJ
6 - http://pastebin.com/jUsLRrx1
7 - http://pastebin.com/gq9SjBtj
8 - http://pastebin.com/KqiBUwav

>Images
http://ccba.booru.org/

>Fighting Game
http://pastebin.com/7Q2JhgQg

>/Co/Co/ playlist:「THE SHOW MUST GO ON」
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL0rToV4jvAVAnamBNW_KGUrKXvhTM7n0E

>Phantom Scare: Chapter 1
http://pastebin.com/bsmui6f7

>M.E. LeTerally's Over Heaven: Chapters 1-3
http://pastebin.com/4mfBbVxS

MAIN TOPIC: Fleshing out Part 3's script and a few other things.

>Stand suggestions are welcome. When making a Stand:
1) Read the pastebin/docs to check that there isn't a similar ability already. In fact, try not to have something that mirrors a Stand in JoJo either.

2) Make sure the power isn't too close to what a character can already do in their comic/show.

3) Give it a song/album/band name. Normally it shouldn't directly reference its powers. Instead, pick something based on it loosely reflecting the Stand through the lyrics, feeling, or history.

4) Include the parts it could be in and reasons why it's a fit for them. Please refer to the pastebins to see what each part is about.
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That's still some top quality art right there.
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>>81007902
>Men At Work VS. Duwang Gang
who wins, and who loses? How does the fight go?
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>>81008044
fuck, didn't mean to reply.
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alright, so did some more work on the Bluto on the training boat fight. have the gang "losing" to him, and then their victory later on in the journey to show their progress all in one go

>ship gets "attacked" by Bluto
>Tom: "Looks like your boat's taken on a few rats, old man."
>Johnny: "Yea? Well be a sport and clean em up, why don'tcha? Isn't that what cats are for?"
>Tom and the Ed boys summon their Stands. Johnny is still taking free drinks on the boat
>Tom: “Who needs the old monkey? Set em up, I’ll knock em down!”
>Ed whips out Spoon. “Smile for the birdy!”
>Bluto looks off the boat at a passing seagull while Edd rearranges the boat’s crane and random metal into a giant robotic claw to slash at him from above
>Bluto blocks it with his giant cutlass, bending it out of shape with a mighty blow
>”Thanks for that…” Tom muses right as he appears out of the bent claw’s corners
>Bluto hardly looks up. “Bah! What kinda captain…”
>Another sword appears from off panel to block Tom’s fist with the flat of the blade. Tom looks over to see another Bluto, this one dressed as a swami, wielding the same blade
>”...doesn’t have a loyal crew?”
>Eddy: “Uh, guys…”
>sweet pullback shot as the other Blutos appear in a mob flanking him all wielding cutlasses (a cowboy, a spaceman, a carnival strongman, a boxer who is still somehow holding a sword, etc)
>Eddy: “Looks like we’re gonna need a bigger boat.”
>Edd: “Really, Eddy?”
>”Less commentary, more fighting!”
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>>81008614
Wait, so are the other Blutos his crew, or the effect of his stand? Because that's not how his stand works.
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>>81008614
>Johnny: “Come on there’s just twenty of ‘em. This freaky Me guy’s probably got more than that?”
>Edd creates a table-like barrier that clamps together around a sword coming down at him ”Twenty one, Mister Bravo!”
>Ed: "I can count to pirate!" Ed is pinned down, with Spoon right above him and its arms blocking a number of Bluto's swords.
>Tom is cornered by a half dozen Blutos, reaching to touch the corner when one throws his knife in the way, nearly taking his hand
>Eddy summarily bearhugged by a Bluto dressed as a knight
>Eddy: “Hey! Can't you give a guy a fightin' chance over here?!"
>Bluto: "Haw haw! You think your buddy the duck that talks to himself is gonna you half a chance? Not on your life!"
>"Damn. He's got... wait, you know about the duck?"
>Bluto grins and busts out laughing, opening his arms to release Eddy and the rest of the party
>"Alright, looks like the jig is up, Johnny!"
>Johnny steps over, playing with one of those little umbrellas from his drink casually
>"Yea, they've had enough for now, cap'n. So how'd you boys like your first day on a trainin' ship?"
>Tom dusts himself off. "Training ship? Are you nuts, old man?"
>"Only in the good way, Tommy boy. Cuz we're gonna have to be to beat that nutty duck, and that means no slackin' off while we're lookin' for em. Bluto here's not just a Stand user. He's an old pal, captain of this ship, and one heck of a trainer. He'll show you kids how to hold your own against a real Stand user."
>Eddy and the boys slump down dejectedly. "Great. We scammed people out of tickets just to sign up for a floating gym..."

(and then I got into what I understand the Eds can do)
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>>81008678
I was under the impression it was several Bluto clones, and there was some debate about that last thread, so I tried to write the combat itself like it could work either way

>after lots of implied training at sea, maybe a one page montage, or a stop at a location or two Bluto checks in with the gang, Tom dismisses the challenge and sits by his dad at the bar
>Johnny gives him a weird look, and Tom shrugs. “They said they’ve got it.”
>Eddy: "So you're one guy who can fight like you're twenty. Big deal. Cuz after all this training..."
>pose like a team cuz shit just got real
>"we're three who can fight like we're ONE!"
>the Eds' speech bubbles all join together on the "ONE," but Edd adds one more meek "one" afterward."
>"Lovin' the enthusiasm, Double D!"
>"No, I mean twenty-one. His Stand is 21 guns."
>"Way to ruin the moment, Double D. Now let's show em our latest technique..."
>cut to a puzzled look on Bluto's face
>"Men At Work: Tower of Ed Formation!"
>The formation is just the boys sitting on eachothers' shoulders
>Bluto: "...you runts are kiddin' me."
>"Try us and find out! Cover me, Double D!"
>Edd summons a giant wall of scrap that creates a high barrier out of the boat's loose metal, obscuring Edd and Ed while Eddy sticks out at the top
>Bluto: "So, stickin' together to watch eachothers' backs. Not bad... but can that scrappy wall block all THESE!?"
>Bluto produces a large flintlock, his Stand aiming ones to match
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>>81008787
>Eddy suddenly shouts to them. "Gentlemen! If you'd kindly… ...GIVE me your attention!"
>Ed and Spoon look through peepholes in the barrier to force Bluto and his Stand to look up at Eddy
>Bluto: "The little bigmouth?! Why's he trying to draw my fire? I thought he was the weakest out of the bunch!"
>Bluto still cocks his pistols
>Eddy: "Thanks a million. Now how about you GIVE me a round of applause for my little trick?"
>Bluto looks concerned, but him and his extras start clapping, guns still in hand
>Bluto: "Thanks again, chumps! Now how about you do a guy a favor and point those things at your user?"
>the Stand Blutos turn their guns at Bluto himself, startling the captain
>Eddy and Bluto have a staredown, Bluto sweating it before he grins
>"So, you're not as convincing as you think, little man. You haven't got enough on me to get me to pull the triggers, do ya?"
>"You got me, fatso. But you gotta admit, it's a heck of a stall. Ready, boys!"
>Ed bursts out of the deck of the ship, holding the huge engine over his head, propellers and all
>"I found a boat, Eddy!!"
>Edd climbs up behind him and starts rearranging the engine
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fighting game has a Google Drive now

https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0BzsuKz5EhsUkQjlNaG5UQmxDcTA&usp=sharing
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>>81008815
>Bluto has a hindsight moment, complete with visual aids showing that the bottom of the trash tower Eddy is on top of was hollow with a tunnel going underneath
>"He pulled the wool over my eyes! While I was busy with bigmouth, the other two smashed their way under the deck and got to the engine without me even getting them in my sights! So now..."
>Edd has arranged the engine into a towering robot with multiple arms wielding the propellers as giant swords
>Bluto: "...he's got the most powerful piece of machinery on the boat under his control!"
>engine-bot slashes down as Bluto shouts "Swords up, ya fools!" and raises his many cutlasses, only for them to be shattered by the propeller swords
>the broken tips of the blades fly into the water while engine-bot's swords all point at Bluto's neck, perhaps slicing off a few hairs of his beard for good measure as the Ed boys smirk down at him
>"I-I-I give! You kids done good!"
>Ed: "We did it! It's like I always say! Three heads are better than pirate!"
>Eddy: "Yea, especially when one of those heads is on top of a giant freakin' robot!"
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>>81007804
Reposting updated directory of previous threads
http://pastebin.com/5yK4WWa0
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I wonder where the KND went.

>mfw they have been replaced by waifus.
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Well, now that we have writing for Bluto, we'd better clarify his stand. It's the 19 floating hands thing, right? Because that was the last thing I remember us saying about it.
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>>81009128
19 floating hands is cool. they could stand to do something in addition even

reminder that Rolf can have copies of whatever is inside his doors and that three is the minimum, not the maximum
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>>81009050
The KND are being saved for the DB parody series.
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>>81009050

From what I gathered they were suggested for a role in part 5, I myself suggested the delightful children and will eventually post some rambling of ideas I had for them.

But Im a lazy fuck so there's no telling when i'll get around to actually doing it
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>>81009050
They jump around. There were stand ideas, not sure where they went though.
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>>81009305
think they're always armed with whatever Bluto has

and we thinking something like hands out of fucking nowhere oh shit they're right behind you and in your basement?
or more of a mecha-shiva to the max setup coming out of him?

I just remember (possibly falsely) a version where his stand was making the various Blutos he's been over time
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>>81010364
One guy said he thought it was like this, but instead of arms connecting the hands to the body they just floated around.
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>>81008787
Yes, I'm also confused over the nature of Bluto's stand.

All the discussion I've seen of it is that it creates copies of Bluto based on weapons he's held, but he doc describes it as him just having extra hands come out of his back.
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>>81009305
>>81010364
Maybe Bluto's stand has multiple stages where at first its just floating hands, but then they grow a whole Bluto from them if a condition is met.

Like if Bkuto uses a boxing glove while his stand is fighting, one of his 21 guns will evolve into Boxing Bluto, or if he uses a pistol one of his 21 guns will evolve into sharp shooter Bluto.
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So I had an idea last night concerning the Lonely Hearts Club. Now, this idea only works if Hector is the leader/head of the club
>Hector's latest attempts to take over the world ended in horrible disaster, almost as terrible as what lead to him being in his disembodied state
>Fed up with how things tumbled so quickly, he completely scraps his current organization, dropping off the grid to rethink the situation
>Relocating himself to [wherever part 4 takes place in] he encounters a serial killer (possibly a member of the Club before it was made) and during the encounter, Hector awakens his Stand, and due to the connection, Boscov and Stomach awaken Stands as well
>Defeating the killer, who was also a Stand user, gives Hector a brilliant idea. Rather than building a grand, evil empire in the open, he would construct something far more sinister in secret
>His plan is simple, gather together psychopaths into a group, whose only goals are to kill. But the only ones allowed into the group are those that can provide for Hector, financially, scientificially, whatever it may be, and with this club of serial killers funneling their skills or fortunes into Hector's efforts, he would slowly expand an underground empire, far more deadly than anything he's done before.
>Of course to fit into this, he had to indulge in some blood shed himself, which he didn't mind, and it turns out killing and eating the corpses brought Boscov and Stomach under a semblance of obedience to Hector.
>Thus the Lonely Hearts Club was formed, with the outward intention of being a brotherhood of rich, brilliant and influential psychopaths indulging in their twisted joys, but it's true purpose is to construct a global evil empire under Hector's rule, using psychotic Stand user's to force it's growth.
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>>81011864
How many killer organizations are in play during part 4?

Hector feels very different from whatever Snow White was involved with.
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>>81011864
It could work, fits the theme of all the other big villains wanting to create a perfect world.
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>>81012121
So far we only seem to have, suggested at least, three actual members of the Lonely Hearts Club. Hector, Father and Jumba. Fred wants to be in the club, but doesn't meet the standards.

I've always thought the three princesses were like, wannabe members, or something.
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>>81012121
The Lonely Hearts Club is the only actual killer organization. Fred is a would-be member, as for anyone else, they are, as far as I know, unrelated to the Lonely Hearts
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>>81012187
IIRC Fred is part of the serial killer club, it's just that he does his own thing and the other club members are too scared shit of him to boss him around.
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>>81012187
>>81012167
I always thought the princesses were part of the organization. That's how we discussed it when coming up with the organization idea, anyway.
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>>81012215
Every mention of the situation I've read is that Fred is in a tiffy because the club won't let him join even though he's really good at killing stuff. It would fit that they reject him from the club, since he's just a murdering barber, hes not wealthy, a scientific genius or influential in any way, at least from my view, he's just a plain ol' nutter.
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>>81010591
>Yes, I'm also confused over the nature of Bluto's stand.
It Just Works.
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Did anyone do an Sheen/Ultralord stand yet?
Was suprised when I didn't find one on the Booru.
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>>81012395
[Hero]?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uGcsIdGOuZY
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>>81012395
[Wonderboy]
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ACiA1TX0tvA
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Good Night Bump.
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Mailbox (Either for part 5 or 6)
>Songbird: Mailbox's Stand takes the form of the written word 'Songbird' Any surface the word is written on (if the person writing has knowledge of Mailbox) will cause the surface to peel open like a envelope. The inside of the envelope will be wherever Mailbox is currently residing, acting as a window that can span miles of distance. If Songbird is erased, the envelope will forcefully shut, even if something is passing through it.
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>>81012395

I remembered a power from the list of unassigned Stand Powers that I think would suit him.

>SHEEN
>[WONDERBOY] or [SELLOUT]
>Appearance: Ultralord
>Abilities: [WONDERBOY] multiplies the effect of any action its user takes. A single punch can have the effect of a hundred punches, a single step can shift him the distance he would have traveled if he took a hundred steps. The maximum number of times an action can be 'multiplied' is by a hundred times or the maximum number it can be repeated given the resources (if he was asked to peel a basket of potatoes but there are only 99 of them, peeling one potato would only replicate the effect another 98 times).

I thought of this mostly because of that episode when he got the power to vibrate his body at superspeed. This power from the googledoc is close enough to that without being exactly the same I think. The unassigned stands list in the googledoc is a goldmine for ideas for characters which we may be stumped for powers for.
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>>81012737
Stanley (No specific choice, could be an ally or whatever)
>Saviour Machine: Stanley's Stand is bound to his Big Book of Everything, it allows him to pull out anything shown in his book, but they will be paper-like. However whatever he pulls out will be under his command, and possess whatever abilities to functions it's supposed to have. However being paper-like means whatever he pulls out will be very fragile.
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>>81012232
they were at the fundraiser for the club. they were either unaware of the backers and were raising charity, or yea, just pat of the pyschokiller club
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>>81012825
Shere Khan [Minor or major enemy, but no one really important overall]
>7(Prince song): Allows Shere Khan to melt his form into whatever his surroundings are, becoming an 'abstract tiger' as he stalks through the shapes and figures of his surroundings, continuously changing his own shape as he moves through different shapes in the landscape
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Going for a more manta ray-like look here
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>>81012912
There could be a rich female serial killer who has the princesses working directly under her (perhaps tempting them with possible acceptance into the club in the near future) My vote is for Cruela de Vil
>Ride With Me: Cruela can drip a black ink from her finger tips. This ink can be splattered on any surface, and regardless of how she throws it or how much she drips, it will always be a messy, circular splotch. By touching one of these splotches, all other ink splotches in range of the one shes touching will begin to pull towards it, pulling whatever they are stuck on with them, even if it means damaging or destroying whatever they are splattered on,
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>>81013135
Part of the reason the club idea stuck was because of the inherent hilarity of having a cute, sweet Disney Princess be a vicious killer. I think they should just be club members. Cool stand idea though, we should definitely use it.
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Thread is a bit slow lately so I'll cook up another suggestion:

>User: Kim Possible (Kim Possible)
>Stand: 「EVERYDAY SUPERHERO」 (Smash Mouth song)

>Appearance: Her battle suit from So The Drama.

>Abilities: Null shock - The suit emits an electrical discharge that disables the non-physical abilities of an opposing stand whenever near. Kim can use this discharge against an enemy to disable their stand's abilities, or remove negative effects on allies.

>Stats:
>Power: C
>Range: C
>Speed: A
>Durability: A
>Precision: B
>D. Potential: B

>Part appearance: Waifu Ocean (6) as a redhead elite gang member, who forms a tag team with Jazz Fenton and her 「SUPER FREAK」.
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Can't Stop Won't Stop

I know the description says it's a barrier around the user, but thats boring, so I tried to make a Stand.
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>>81013531
>>81013119
You are dong gods work anons.
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Another one (bites the dust).

>User: Candace Flynn (uses her 2nd dimension appearance with some slight JoJo-fication)
>Stand: 「WATCHING YOU」 (Rodney Atkins song)

>Appearance: A Ducky Momo-styled digital wristwatch on her right hand.

>Ability: Tracking - 「WATCHING YOU」enables Candace to track down distant enemies using their current and residual heat signatures (i.e. heat-based footprints). She can then use this information to guide her allies, hunt foes, and avoid danger.

>Stats:
>Power: None
>Range: A
>Speed: None
>Durability: C
>Precision: A
>D. Potential: C

>Part appearance: Waifu Ocean (6) as a vanguard for the redhead gang. Frequently works with Kim Possible and Jazz Fenton on gang hunts.

>>81013823
>dong gods
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>>81013885
I feel like that might be too close to Aerosmith.
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>>81013531
Also I apologize that so many of my designs have words or writing on them. I dunno why I just really like words on Stands
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>>81013981
Sounds more like SHA to me, but that's mostly just because of the heat signature thing.
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>>81013981
>>81014025
Feels more like a smaller, less visually interesting King Nothing
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>>81014008
Meanwhile most of mine are either robotic or have weird faces so we're good.
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>>81014008
I like that stuff too, but more so on the character's clothing
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>>81013823
>dong
*doing
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Sorry, I'm really late to the party, but, does Johnny Test have a stand that looks like twin red-headed girls, and as it's basic power create tiny sonic booms when he moves?
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>>81014549
It does create sounds that increase in power the more he repeats it, but it has an original design.
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>>81014595
That is so much cooler than what I had thought of.
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g42_3OTeVUk
I have no idea why I'm posting this here.
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>>81010456
Maybe Bluto could have a crew of basically identical twins thats implied to be the stand, but its actually the 21 Guns thing with the arms coming out his back thing.

(He can maybe use the 21 Guns to Arm his crew?)
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Jumba's Stand.

These Stand drawings are really giving me a chance to work on musculature, it's kind of fun drawing muscles.
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>>81014595
Original guy who made Johnny's stand here. Good shit!
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>>81015025
Noice!
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I finally realized who would be perfect for one of the MCs of Part 7!

I mean come on, the only one who could oust him as the perfect combination of comics with heavy cartoon zanyness would be The Tick or Darkwing Duck

As the person who suggested Under Pressure as Goofy's Stand, I would suggest it be used for Freakazoid too, if he is used instead of Goofy, as I cannot think of a personalized Stand for him right now.
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>>81015339
>The Tick
It's a shame Spoon was taken though...
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Suggest me a character from the roster, I want to make a moveset for them. Preferably one of the non-stand users first
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>>81015741
Courage?
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>>81013885
Pretty sure that name is already taken Famiglia.
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>>81015866
Heh, I made the same mistake too, they aren't suggesting that as the name, more just joking about them suggesting "another one"
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>>81015878
Silly fucking me
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I think progress on the various parts would go more smoothly if one of us made a googledoc checklist on what needs to be done, like in
>>80992594 so we can delete things as they're taken care of.
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>>81015764
Alrighty then.

>Perfect Block: To deal with his low health pool, Courage Is the only character with this special ability. If an opponent attempts to attack Courage, he can parry (or "Just Defended" for Mark of the Wolves fans) and reduce the amount of damage taken. 6 right when attack frame hits (or 4 if standing opposite) Cannot prevent damage from air attacks.

Specials:
>Melody Wave(236P/HS): Courage taps into his Melody and creates a ground level projectile that comedically exploits his opponent if hit.

>AAUGH(214K/S): Courage screams and runs away , jumps off the wall, and onto his opponent. Tap button twice for feint.

>Melody Spear(623+P/HS): Courage taps into his Melody and throws a spear at his opponent, holding them in midair for a second before falling back down to the ground. HS version shoots spear at an angle.

>You're Not Perfect(2[hold]8+D): Courage launches himself straight up into the air, propelled by fear. Multi hit attack, akin to Shinryuken or Rising Tackle.

Supers
>Level 1: Buff Courage(214 214+PP): Courage morphs into a more muscular body, and elbow rams into his opponent. Causes some knockback to Courage if blocked.

>Level 2: The Man in Gauze(236 236+KK): Courage plugs his ears while King Ramses's theme plays. Full screen super, does a pathetic amount of damage if blocked.

>Level 3: Melody Medley no. 5(2141236+HS): Courage jumps at his opponent. if hit connects, then a series of comedic events follows, ending with an anvil falling on the opponent.
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/g/entoo man here... will be a mugen of this? because I'd like to help with the character programming
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>>81017022
Alright, I'll copy whatever was from those couple of posts into the Part 3 googledoc at the top. That is, the issues that haven't already been resolved in one way or another.
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>>81017194
https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0BzsuKz5EhsUkQjlNaG5UQmxDcTA&usp=sharing#grid

Yes. These are all the characters planned so far for the game and the completed movesets.
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>>81017226
nice, I'll check it out, thanks
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I got an idea!

User: Professor Pyg
Stand Name: 「PERFECTION」
Appearance: Maybe a misshapen humanoid made of clay.
Ability: When the Stand grabs hold of someone, their skin becomes malleable and soft like easily modifiable clay. Professor Pyg would then deform and distort the person until they fit his idea of perfection. No matter what shape and size they are contorted to, the victim will survive the resharpening. The effects are reversed if Professor Pyg is killed.

Honestly, I really think he'd be great in Part 4. I know he's a capefag, but I feel like this would make a great mini-murder mystery with some horror mixed in.

Thoughts?
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>>81017375
I like it. Part 4 would fit well, and even if the majority end up wanting him moved to 7 he would still fit. A good idea all around.
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>>81017216
Thanks a Bundle.
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>>81017375
I like it anon... he can be the "Cinderella" of /co/co/'s part 4
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>>81017487
At first I thought you meant the character which was already in the doc but then I remembered Aya Tsuji's stand.
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You know who would be perfect for Part 7...Speed Buggy.
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>>81009050
>>81009669
Well I was going to wait until Part 5 before bringing them up again, but since it came up here they are again with some changes since my original proposal.

>NIGEL UNO
>[I AM ONLY ONE]

>Appearance: A stone tortoise with a sundial for a shell

>Abilities: [I AM ONLY ONE] can [ACCELERATE] or [REVERSE] the flow of time in a 1km radius around its user. The act of [ACCELERATION] or [REVERSAL] affects everything within its circle of influence except entities who are implicitly aware of the concept of time (i.e. any being that possesses self-awareness be it human or not human). It would, for example allowing its user to accelerate a section of a city to the point of ruin or to reverse it into what the area was like before it was constructed. The process happens in ‘real time’ and anyone caught in it will experience the [ACCELERATION] and [REVERSAL] as it occurs. The stand's effects are undone once the location is no longer within the stand's range.


>HOAGIE P. GILLIAN
>[TWO MINUTES TO MIDNIGHT]

>Appearance: A gnat or fly made out of miscellaneous items, like tennis rackets and duct tape.

>Abilities: [TWO MINUTES TO MIDNIGHT] empowers duct tape with repair properties. By merely sticking a strip of duct tape on a broken piece of technology it will be restored to full functionality until it is removed. Duct tape can also be used to ‘create’ makeshift technologies by taping man-made objects together (such as a motorized bicycle by taping batteries to a normal bike or a bomb by taping a digital timer to a stool)

TO BE CONTINUED with 3 through 5
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>>81017656

>KUKI SANBAN
[THREE SMALL WORDS]

>Appearance: A short, fat stuffed monkey with a rainbow on its belly

>Abilities: [THREE SMALL WORDS] is physically embodied in a Rainbow Monkey doll Kuki carries around, when she is angered it comes to life and attacks. [THREE LITTLE WORDS] can create more copies of itself by consuming fabric and will multiply like a gremlin until her anger subsides.

>WALLABEE BEETLES
>[WHEN I'M SIXTY-FOUR]

>Appearance: A horned matador with long hair that completely obscures their face.

>Abilities: [WHEN I'M SIXTY-FOUR] is a close-combat oriented stand that attacks with a bright red cloth, the cloth’s edges are razor sharp and it is capable of deflecting most projectiles.
>It has a secondary ability [WASTING AWAY] that allows it to gain a tremendous boost in speed and power temporarily in combat at the cost of its user permanently losing his knowledge of important facts or trivia and being unable to learn them again.

>ABIGAIL LINCOLN
>[TAKE FIVE]

>Appearance: A skeletal pharaoh made entirely out of various types of candy.

>Abilities: [TAKE FIVE] allows its user to manipulate sweets, and can generate hard candy from its body as projectiles or sticky taffy to entangle opponents. The Candy it produces is edible and safe for consumption, if a bit high in base sugar content.

Still aiming for Part 5 since we could use more characters there, maybe as a rival gang to the Urban Rangers who may or may not be working for the Warners or some outside faction.
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>>81015339
Yeah, that'd be fucking rad. I wouldn't be opposed to him being Part 7's JoJo.
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>>81017459
>>81017487
Thanks! I was thinking, being the deranged lunatic he is, Professor Pyg would never be satisfied with his creations, no matter what they end up looking like. So, he either kills them or deforms them into shambling blobs of human beings, wandering around as monstrosities until the Eds become aware of them.
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>>81017769
Even if he's not part of the club, hell, who says Fred's the only L.H.C. wannabe? A good deal of the minor baddies could be small time killers trying to get in, thinking that all you need is to be a good killer.
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>>81017375
All I would recommend you change us the name, we have too many syand's with indicative names.
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>>81017861
Perhaps. I'm just not sure if Professor Pyg could think that straight, though it's a good idea.

>>81017889
Okay, I'll just pick a random song name.「AIN'T IT FUN」
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>>81017981
It's not like they NEED the club's help, all Fred wanted was to not have to worry about cleaning up his crimes by getting in. Even if Fred isn't the first killer fought, his diary would still lead the Eds to the L.H.C.
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>>81018038
I was under the impression Fred wasn't a member, but the club was still cleaning up after him because they were afraid his actions would lead the police to them and they were too scared of Fred to get rid of him themselves.
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>>81017619
Also ha Stand is Punchghost with the ability to [throw] voices to other locations, Speed Buggy uses this to fool people into thinking he's just a normal car.

The Stands name is...[I've Been Driving In My Car] or [Driving In My Car] for short.

EVEN SPEED BUGGY IS AFRAID!
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>>81015339
>Dexter struggles with whether he or Feakazoid is the "true" heroic identity
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I'm not sure how many people saw >>81005261 since the thread closed like right after I posted it. Any thoughts?
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>>81018369
>throw [voices] to other locations

What is Echoes Act 1
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>>81018802
Nothing like that you numpty, Echoes creates Kanji that emulate a physical effect, [Driving In My Car] makes anything a person would say come from a different location to where that person actually is.

Read the fucking manga you dunce.
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So, for part 6's party we have
>Dora
>Creepy Suzie
>Giffany
>Jacknife (sorta)
>and this empty slot
Who should go in the empty spot? My votes for Toki Wartooth, personally.
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>>81015025
Glad to see you enjoy what you do (and hopefully as much as we do).
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>>81018928
Hm, guess I misunderstood your last post then, my bad.
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>>81018658
By part 8 would it become a regular thing for the police to have stand users in their ranks?
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>>81018946
Star Butterfly?
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>>81018946
Even if Toki isn't a protag, I have an idea for what his Stand could do. Though It'd fit any other member of Dethklok.
It would be an incredibly sick looking metal Stand, with the ability to completely obliterate...one cell. Only one cell at a time. And it needs several hours to recharge.
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>>81020218
A jail cell, or a cell in the human body?
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>>81020350
A cell in the human body.
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Any progress on part 3/4 story structuring so far?
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>>81019984
thanks anon, I have an idea in mind for star... just wait me a couple of minutes
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holy shit this is one of the most autistic things i've seen in a long while.

and I love it
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>>81021347
I was going to insult you, but then I read the spoiler, now I won't
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>>81019984

User: Star Butterfly
Stand Name: 「LOVIN' SPOONFUL」...reference to the band who wrote the song "Do you believe in magic"
Appearance: Humanoid stand, all the body is color pink combined with purple, unicorn horns in the shoulders and star in the forehead
Ability: This stand is a low range stand but has the ability to use spells that the user says. combat fight regular on this stand.

pretty shitty tbqh but it can be improved
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>>81017055
Not bad, man. We're using the Guilty Gear button set, right? How will stands be activated?
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>>81021106
There was a lot of part 3 progress last thread.

Peach Creek's order of events was finally smoothed out so things fit together better there.
The fight with Ratburn was covered.

In this thread the Bluto fight was covered, though there are still some discrepancies with what Bluto's stand does.
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>>81021690
It's HS+S.
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>>81022090
I think >>81014838 had a good idea.
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>>81017055
Instant Block already exists as a universal mechanic in GG. I was thinking Courage gains meter from it and maybe has further reduced guardstun
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>>81020218
I think this should be Murderface's stand. All he does is intimidated others with how it looks, realizing fully how shit his ability is.
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>>81017055
also moves in GG don't have more than one button input to choose from unless multiple versions of the attack exist
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>>81022328
yeah I like the idea of Murderface's Stand being incredibly hyped but pure trash while Toki's is decent but unbearably cutesy and a disgrace to metal
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>>81022251
>>81014838
So the whole crew is just made up of different versions of Bluto?

I feel like Sinbad the sailor would show up at some point while on the cruise ship.
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>>81022273
That makes sense.

>>81022348
Shoot, you're right. Do you think the K version of the wall attack could be removed and the HS version of the wave could be shafted as well.
I need to get back into GG, the moves system seems so foreign compared to KoF
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>>81022328
>>81022376
>the first time we see Williams stand, it takes out a base guitar and puts it's finger on a string
>everyone around William begins to cower in fear

>the first te we see Wiliam's stand, it's when Toki is asking Murderface about "taking care of" the party
>it's feminine, cute, and waif-looking, like Paisley Park
>Murderface calls his stand shit and tells him to stay the fuck back and not interfere so he doesn't run something
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>>81022588
feints in GG are usually done by holding the button so the wall attack doesn't need more than one button

I'm thinking most of his attacks are his transformations and that's why his hitbox is deceiving. might elaborate on him later but I have no wifi and am resigned to phoneposting
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>>81021658
The powers are way too vague. Maybe it can summon a limited amount of killer, cute animals to fight?
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I haven't been looking at this all too much but on /v/ someone posted a gif that seemed to be this as a fighting game with all the different characters and their names and stands and all that, it seemed neat. Anyone have it to post?
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>>81022966
>>81017226
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>>81018946
Gwen Stacy? one of the Ghoul School girls?
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>>81022966
>>81023094
Whoops, misread. Is this it?
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>>81023249
Yeah that's it, thanks man.
I like the mix of both old and new characters.

This is really cool, are you guys actually trying to make a working game out of it?
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>>81023343
First and foremost we're just making up fanfiction, then button combos.
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Should we write up some form of backstory for the guy who becomes Danny the Street?

>"I'm sorry young detective, but it seems you've been a bit naaaaauuuuughhhhttttyyyy..."
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>>81023343
the pic itself is mostly random stuff not on the actual roster

but I'd like to bring up that Billy absolutely should be on the roster
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so looking into the future a bit, any thoughts on Plucky's stand's appearance? I've been pretty subpar at suggesting them, but maybe something vaguely resembling La Cucaracha? or if more simple, just the chain and plug of a drain

and do its hole powers create suction to try to trap enemies? do they travel through tholes like portals if they get big enough, like Plucky can, or do they just get absorbed into nothing space? or fall through whatever has the hole in it?
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>>81022877
yup, it can be of course
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>>81023745
Fortunate Son is already on the Booru and I like that design

they shouldn't be portals because that's too similar to Rolf. I think his power honestly doesn't matter too much considering he's (SUPPOSED to be) put in a coma fairly early on
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>>81018946

I would be okay if both Toki and Gaz filled that last spots.
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Vocaroo guy here.
I don't have any immediate ideas for another piece, but if you guys are interested, I can take a recommendation.
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>>81025338
Kuzco and Bravo doing a pose off would be golden.
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>>81025338
Rolf confronting Patrick about Dazed and Confused.
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>>81022705
>William Murderface
>Ride The Lightning
>Ride The Lightning had been e power to cause any object in it's range to melt and waste away as if affected by an extremely powerful acid, as long as it's having a solo or otherwise playing it's base guitar
>although flashy and visually impressive, this power I'd more or less useless in combat. For one, it's rather slow, making William am easy target. Two, Wiliam's V range means he can't use it to support an ally. And three, he needs to focus on the solo for it to work. Similarly to am actual solo on a physical guitar, it takes mental fovus, and anything that would interrupt a regular solo interrupts his stands solo.
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>>81025338
TOM talking to Mr. Nobody on the plans for the race
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>>81025404
>>81025527
>>81025808
Thanks, I'll think on a script while I'm at work and record later tonight. Whichever ones I don't use I can save for other nights.
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>>81018928
That's Echoes' Act 2 ability. His initial ability is effectively creating sound. He can shoot if from his hands. However, it's specific to SFX kanji. Also

>Throwing your voice as a stand ability
>You were a ventriloquist the entire time
>Coping with your shitty stand
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>>81026084
>That's Echoes ACT 2's ability
No it isn't chucklenuts, read the manga.
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>>81025527
Good lord, this
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>>81018802
Echoes Act 1 cold pitch comic book-style onomatopoeia, not voices.
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>>81021106
I was discussing the idea of having Gadget introduce the Part 4's story through a first-person narrative (similar to Koichi in DiU), albeit noirish, describing the mysterious disappearances and/or murders that have taken place. Gadget is drawn to the city to investigate the disappearance of a rookie who was following up some leads to bizarre crimes in the area that no one else would touch either out of fear or disbelief. Gadget now believes that something is definitely wrong and seeks to bring the criminal responsible to justice. Little does Gadget realize that the missing rookie has now become a literal part of the city itself as Danny The Street.
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>>81026146
>Sound Maker: Echoes ACT1 can write a sound effect in Katakana on anything, from human flesh to the ground, and have that sound repeat itself over and over with increasing volume. Echoes can shoot sound effects from both its tail and hands.

http://jojo.wikia.com/wiki/Echoes

> Sound Maker, ACT2: Echoes' second form increases its sound abilities beyond its first form's capabilities. When the kana is written on an object now, touching it activates the effect of the sound. For example, if the sound word hyoo ("whoosh") is written, it creates a gust of wind with increasing force.

You referred to Act 2 when incorrectly correcting the anon who mentioned Act 1. And he's kinda correct. Act 1 is very well capable of the abilities you initially described in the stand ability premise.

Wryyyd the manga, anon.
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>>81026758

I think after the reader is introduced into the story by Gadget's narration, it should cut to the Ed Boys in their current location. Don't remember if is the construction place or the restaurant where they meet Scrooge and Stan for the first time tho.
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>>81027183
Maybe segue into it with, "Meanwhile, across town..." or something, then cut to the Men At Work doing what they do.
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>>81027183
The Eds meet Stan and Scrooge at the restaurant.

Should we start working on part 4, or iron out part 3's kinks first?
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>>81027386

As far as I remember, there are still lots of parts to fill up in Part 3. For instance, I don't know how Tom will confront Yosemite Sam.
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>>81026758
Zum you are brilliant.
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>>81019396
Well, if Stand Users aren't integrated enough with society, then they could just be a Private Security Provider under [PART 8 SETTING]'s hire.
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>>81028207
>>81026758
Did you rip the first person bit from my proposal with the construction set?
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>>81017216
>Angel Island/Mystic Ruins segment needs some fight details and adjustments.
What kind of adjustments? I still have the full Captain N battles on notepad, so I can fiddle with them as needed.
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>>81027386
Part 3 still has huge gaps.

I think when they get to Agrabah there should be a huge festival happening with impossible parades that Aladdin is the center of. He's doing it all to impress his girl, Jasmine, but the party suspect him of whatever they came here for since he's the center of all the impossible things.

Jafar meanwhile is selling twisted wishes in his old man disguise.

>>81028215
By part 8, if we're not doing a timeline reboot, would most of the world powers know about stands? Secret Squirrel is an Interpol agent in part 3 and he has a stand, so that means the governments are aware of stands after that point.
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>>81028566
You could make one of Jafar's wishes for the day to disguise his stand as Aladdin's genie to further complicate things.
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>>81028794
His wishes always come with a horrible cruel twist, so he can't wish for anything for himself, that's why I thought he'd be selling wishes.
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>>81028251
Actually, I hadn't seen that.

I've only just finished reading Part four about a week ago, so it's fresh in my mind and I liked the idea of Gadget giving a sort of hard-boiled detective narration. When someone suggested Danny the Street be one of Fred's victims with a connection to Gadget, I just ran with it.
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>>81029176
Unless, of course, >>81028251 is the anon who suggested the Danny/Gadget connection. In which case, I somehow missed any mention of a construction site.
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>>81029066
I'm down with the selling wishes thing.
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>>81013135
>>81013389
I like the idea of the Princesses being members, but only as fodder for Cruela. They do all get taken out together so they probably aren't too much of hot shit. Cruela, however could be far more of a challenge. That stand ability sounds great but it's pretty reminiscent of Yotsuyu's I AM A ROCK ability in Part 8.
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Alright, so I have a Stand concept, but no one to give it to.

Stand Name: 「RASPUTIN」
(https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OBXRJgSd-aU)
Appearance: Humanoid, quite large and blocky, with design elements based off Orthodox monks.
Stand Power: Gives targets in a D-class range enhanced hemophilia. Potency increases as distance decreases. Exiting stand's range will return rate of blood loss to normal. Low physical power.

First thoughts for a user were some sort of vampire, but the only cartoon vampire I can think of off the top of my head is Marceline, and I got the impression AT characters are being avoided. Beyond that, perhaps some sort of alchemist character could work.
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>>81028352
Mostly stuff to make it more coherent with the addition of Clifford. Also the fights with Boy George need a bit of elaboration. The stuff in the Captain N pastebins was great, but it felt weird for Tom & the others to be paralyzed for the entirety of the fight (especially since Tom is supposed to be the main character). I took the Eds out of the final battle by having them fight Clifford and Tom & Aladdin fight George before being knocked off the Emerald's platform by the blast when Captain N touches it to gain power (the idea being that they were fighting with George close to the edge). The rest of it is the same with Knuckles and Johnny teaming up to take down a bad guy one last time.

I hope you don't mind the alterations, feel free to revert them or make any other changes you think are necessary.
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>>81031446
Flame Princess got in as a possible minor antagonist in Part 6, so I think most anons are okay with letting one or two in if the concepts are good.
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>>81031446
who else
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>>81032112
Seems a little too on-the-nose for Rasputin to have a Stand named「RASPUTIN」.

Anastasia being the Stand user could be some great irony though.
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So, Giffany is going to be like FF?

Does that mean she'll hijack someone's corpse?
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>>81031603
I tossed out some minor suggestions for George's fight before, but the only response it got was someone saying they wished I'd stop bringing up the idea of using George.

>when provoked, uses 「MELLOW YELLOW」's primary ability to incapacitate some of the group, leaving one of them to fight
>battle seems somewhat one-sided since George can't seem to land a hit or grab whoever he's facing
>character mocks George for the close-range limitation of his Stand
>suddenly George drops to his side on the ground in a relaxed posture and begins scratching/rubbing his stomach as if out of boredom (something like pic)
>agitated, character charges George, only to realize too late that he was using this to build up static for the yet unseen 「SHOCK THE MONKEY」 ability
>character now has to find a way to avoid being pinned or electrocuted at long range while working to defeat George

Due to the nature of 「MELLOW YELLOW」's second ability relying on flat surfaces to transmit static for long-range attacks, perhaps something like a valley or plateau would be best for the battle.
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>>81032951
>(something like pic)
This, I mean.
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>>81031603
>>81032951
What you guys have on the doc sounds good to me.
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>>81008044
I know I might be a little late but it depends on how much prep time double d has and whether koichi has all of his acts. The only way I can see the men at work winning is if eddy can scam them enough before the 'fight' fight actually starts and double d setting up a lot of shit
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I thought I'd mentioned some other stuff when I originally posted >>81032951, so I googled "boy george mellow yellow" trying to find the old thread. This is what came up, haha.
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And on the topic of the four possible ways the last battle goes down, they all seem great, we may just need to vote/draw straws.
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Will get off mobile in a bit and do another fight for part 3. Any requests in particular?
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>>81035042

Not a fight but I'd like to see Yosemite Sam imitating this pose by Hol Horse.
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>>81035042
I kind of want to add something to part three where their cruise ship gets attacked on the way to Agrabah by Sinbad the sailor and his crew of rare animals, but the other planned fights probably take precedence.

Among those, the Jafar fight currently has my interest because, as I understand it, ARABIAN NIGHTS wishes don't ware off after a day and the repercussions continue.
Daffy might have been targeting Jafar as a possible threat or wanted to bring him under his influence, but Tom ruined that plan, so Aladdin becomes the new target.
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Can't stop myself from making okay-quality stand ideas, but I've run out of Characters that pop into my head right away.
(Really though I just want to use things like Crush 40 and This Too Shall Pass as stand names.)
Someone give me stupid chars to work with.
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>>81035042
scrawl?
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What are some Crush 40 songs you would want to use?
[spoilers]I know who they are, I just can't think of any off the top of my head besides Open Your Heart[/spoilers]
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>>81036030
>Night of the Wind
>Free
>Fight the Knight
Just to name a few
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>>81036030
Well, I don't want to list off the songs here.
[spoilers] Even though I have like all their songs on my phone god help me. [/spoilers]
But I was wanting to use [CRUSH 40], but I would use a song if I come up with a fitting stand/character idea.
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>>81036197
>[spoilers]
It's spoiler dum dum
Stop being so new
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Writefag here. Currently working on the Bullwinkle/Aerodynamic fight concepts. I wanted to work an angle with him that he's sort of the Vanilla Ice of the group, following Daffy not out of fear or gain or due to La Cucaracha but rather out of a sense of awe for the duck and his command of the unconscious which led him to his own training and eventually awakening his Stand.
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>>81036030
>>81036197
Ctrl S
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>>81037013
Cool. I'll take Jafar and Skrawl after I'm done eating, like those other anons wanted.
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>>81031446
The only things blacklisted are Homestuck, SU, and MLP, so I'd say AT is fine
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>>81037104
Thanks, man.
I just didn't want to ask how, took a gamble.
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So for the version of the end of Part III where Porky's Stand becomes a Reality Marble that traps Daffy, what do you guys think about his evolved Stand's name being 「TRUE SCATMAN'S WORLD」 as an homage to Ringo Roadagain?
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>>81039207
I'm absolutely certain we dropped that route entirely, because that steals the spotlight from Tom, and the group wants it to be just a straight up clash between the two jokes that started this horrid mess of a project.
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>>81039207
Regarding the Porky Pig thing in general, I feel it should be a piece of background to explain Daffy's motivation in making the world in his image. A selfless friend dies and it makes him a selfish, megalomaniac. Other than that, I agree with >>81039268 It's a glaring deus ex machina and cheapens defeating Daffy.
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>>81039207
No dude. We lost a lot of focus in the past few days.
The Plot to Part 4 is now a clusterfuck, we've been dropping most excess Stands and Users into Part 5, and beyond that, mostly everyone never stopped posting Stands.
We haven't developed the story in Part 3 as much as dumped more and more on it.

We should close the floodgates on Stand concepts, trim parts out of Part 4, and buckle down and finish Part 3. Sans the Porky importance.
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>>81015339
I liked that early fanart that had Dexter Douglas' stand as FREAK OF THE WEEK.
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>>81039382
Problem is people bitch and moan when you cut off stand suggestions entirely. I'd say if you have a drawing to back it up post it, but otherwise yeah, we need to buckle down.
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>>81039382
"Finish" isn't the right word since part 2's outline still isn't finished like part 1's is, and part 1 got some serious fleshing out just last thread.

Part 3 still has room for expansion in places.
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>>81041071
Part 1 had some really nice fleshing out, but Part 2's outline in itself is done. Very little plot points remain without resolving.
It took us a while to hammer it into that, but it works. I cant say the same for Part 3.

Honestly just having a clear outline and building from there will do wonders for Part 3. We almost had that 2 threads ago, but we sorta lost it in the Stand suggestions
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>>81041435
I'm working on Jafar and Skrawl right now, which should clear up the misunderstanding with Aladdin and how they convince him to join them, so at least that should get done soon. The other major issues should be either self-apparent or at the top of the google doc for part 3.
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So why is Tom separated from the gang during his final showdown with Daffy?
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Hope I'm not interrupting discussion for parts 2-4. Just wanted add another redhead character for part 6 (I like to plan in advance).

>User: Summer Smith (Rick & Morty)
>Stand: 「X GON' GIVE IT TO YA」 (DMX song)

>Appearance: Hulking humanoid with a hairstyle similar to her grandad Rick, specifically his appearance in the episode "Something Ricked This Way Comes" with some JoJofication.

>Battlecry: When [X] buffs an ally/overbuffs a foe, it will yell "LET'S GET RIPPED!/RICKED!".

>Ability: Muscle boost - [X] can boost the musculature of another person's body part or their whole body, greatly increasing their physical power (which carries over to their stands). However, excessive boosting will cause the muscles to explode or tire out extremely fast due to the weight. Inanimate objects can also be boosted.

>Stats:
>Power: A
>Range: D
>Speed: C
>Durability: B
>Precision: C
>D. Potential: B

>Part appearance: Waifu Ocean (6) as a redhead gang member. Summer is said to rival Wendy and Vicky in terms of physical strength.
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>>81041524
That's cool then.
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>>81041435
From what I can tell part 3's plot moves like this:

-Tom fights guys in CN city
-Goes to Peach Creek and recruits the Eds
-Goes to Cape Suzette, fights more guys, meets up with Johnny
-Boards cruise ship and training happens
-Gets to Agrabah, fights more guys, recruits Aladdin
-Goes to Angel island, more fights, recruits the big red dog

Here's where it gets dicey, how do they know to go to Fantasy Island from here?

The initial landing in Agrabah is also a really hazy area.

>>81041524
Cool.

I think part 3 has actually developed a lot since last thread.
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>>81041701
I know that my man. I was just referring to the smaller parts, and how we started to cram in some unnecessary things a thread ago, and that the influx of new characters never stopped. But I've since seen that I was wrong.

As long as we can keep on track and filter out the shit suggestions without letting everyone in, we can make this.

But dont lose focus. We HAVE to stop the floodgates at some point so we can focus on development. That's how we got Part 1 to make sense.
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>>81041701
Maybe Daffy sent Lowly and Snoopy to invite them since he wamts to show off the Act 2 they helped him develop? Seems like at that point Daffy would be confident that he can kill them on his own and they have messed with him enough that he would want to end them at his own hands
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>>81041554
Carolina in the Morning is activated for the first time and the two of them are transported to Daffy's ideal fictional world within the book from the cartoon..

This happens https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bG2utZB3zCk

This happens http://vocaroo.com/i/s0cWcCvLe6qq

Cool book fights happen.
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>>81041811
Well right now I'm actually focused on part 3 and only have a vague idea of what we're working with for part 4. I haven't really looked at what we have for part 4 aside from the Eds being the COnman COalition and Freaky Fred being the bad guy, which is something I might want to pry into since he IS Muriel's nephew, so if there's anyone left from part 1, they might know about him.

But part 3, up to about Agrabah, seems stable. We ironed out the kinks with Peach Creek and the Eds having a way to counteract Daffy's Act 1 last thread.

The next hiccup is Bluto's stand and if that lets him be a one man crew for the entire cruise ship.

Then there's landing in Agrabah; the Jafar, Skrawl, and Bullwinkle fights are all being worked on, but I still want to know why Tom is alone when Secret Squirrel finds him.

S.S. seems to just disappear from the story after Tom's fight with him, so I'm thinking he could be the one to inform them that Daffy's hideout is on Fantasy Island after the Angel Island events. Tom might call him to make sure his friend on the inside is kept in the loop about the happenings to avoid any problems with the law.
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>>81041928
Snoopy is another issue.

I think he should be like an overseer who's been watching in the shadows for Daffy since Agrabah.
Snoopy was sent there to recruit to eliminate Jafar, Daffy tells him to hold back since Tom has arrived and Daffy wants to see what he can do. After the Jafar fights, Daffy has lost his chance at wishes until Snoopy tells him about FRIEND LIKE ME, so he sends Carmen to steal the lamp, but she gets side tracked by the emerald and Lowly is sent to kill her for being a failure and a traitor.
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>>81042152
I thought Johnny knew that Fantasy Island was Daffy's hideout from the start, and the cruise was just to toughen the party up while they were heading there? Also, the way I'm writing the lead up to Jafar will make Secret very useful to the party.
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>>81042152
I like what we did to the Edds to counter Daffy. I agree. I had some doubts on the labelling thing and made them known, but I think I like how they came out.

Part 4 also has the important Gadget subplot. It leads into Fred being a fucking maniac.
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>>81042280
Okay we can work with this. I'll type up a new outline once I get off mobile
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>>81042280
And another plot hole I need to point out is why they're going to Agrabah in the first place. They're going there because of crazy phenomenons that Johnny thinks is being caused by a stand user.

Daffy's forces are there because Daffy wants wishes and they're having a hard time finding the source of the wishes.

But do they suspect the duck is there? If so why do they suspect this?
It's possible Johnny already knew about the wishes and thought they could use that power to locate Daffy and Daffy's guys being there also for that power at the same time is coincidence, but I don't like that sort of piled on coincidence. It could work, but it would need tweaking.
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>>81042494
The cruise was to toughen them up, but I don't think Johnny knew where Daffy's hideout is at the start.

So, working off of >>81042574 Johnny sets their first destination to be Agrabah on a hunch, that seems like something Johnny would do and it would piss Tom off at the same time when they get there, then doubly so when it turns out his old man's hunch was on the money.
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>>81042520
And another thing I just thought of, after Lowly gets off the cruise ship and heads into the crowded dock, one of the heroes should chase him, maybe Knuckles since he can smell the blood on him, and then Lowly crushes a word like "breathing" causing everyone on the crowded dock to asphyxiate, then something like this can happen:

>Lowly is about to kill one of the heroes
>a plane propeller can be heard outside
>Lowly looks up in rage, then settles into that smile
>"We'll settle this later."
>he fucks off, cursing the beagle

Snoopy did so since killing all those people would've without a doubt brought unwanted attention to their little group at a bad time.
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took my first crack at a Stand idea. thought The Grinch might fit in with the Lonely Hearts, or just as a random antagonist as needed

>User: The Grinch
>Stand: Relax Max (Michael Buble song; alternately Green Sleeves or Kickstart My Heart)
>Appearance: a savage-looking anthropomorphic dog with a long horn growing from its head. A small red heart is visible where you'd expect it to be on his chest.
>Ability: Relax Max attacks as one would, punching, biting, slashing with his horn, etc. Every time it attacks, the heart on its chest grows slightly larger. The more it attacks and the more its heart grows, Relax Max's strength grows as well. It hits harder, but its movements become more hesitant and clumsy, as if it grows less and less willing to fight with each attack. It grows less fearsome in appearance despite its growing strength, eventually refusing to fight without The Grinch browbeating his own Stand back into the battle or resetting its heart.

>Relax Max is a Stand that The Grinch somehow stole from another user. The Stand's reluctance manifests in its strange heart. Striking its heart does no damage to the Stand or its user, but instead "resets" the heart to its smaller state. This removes its strength buffs, but makes it willing to obey all orders once again. Grinch will regularly strike his own stand in its heart to maintain its offensive abilities, but prefers to wait every few strikes to abuse its attack buffs.

>Theoretically, defeating The Grinch when the heart is at its maximum capacity would free the Stand
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>>81042520
Going by the following Posts

>>81042152
>>81042280
>>81042494
>>81042574
Outline from Post-Cape Suzette onwards

>Johnny has heard about the strange happenings at Agrabah, and that some [People who talk to themselves] have been spotted there OR he just has a hunch that the Duck would target powerful Stand users
>Snoopy is in charge of the efforts to track down Jafar/Aladdin, but he lets Skrawl and Bullwinkle do their own thing for the most part
>They arrive at Agrabah and fights happen, I'll leave it to the anons working on those fights to establish how.
>At some point Tom questions one of them about a duck
>Snoopy, monitoring events from high in the sky, reports this news to LeTerally
>LeTerally flips out because he thought his identity was still a secret, immediately calls up Carmen to steal one of the lamps so he can fix things.
>He is still crazy anxious however, which is what leads him to unlock Act 2 under pressure.
>The group separates to take some downtime while Aladdin is getting things in order to accompany them
>Tom ends up facing Secret Squirrel alone in the cafe/club
>After the fight Secret Squirrel tips Tom off to a suspicious place called Fantasy Island where tourists have been going missing/coming back strange.
>They set a course for Fantasy Island
>On the way they stop at the Mystic Ruins to resupply, leading into the Knuckles thing
>Lowly shows up, kills Carmen, tells them LeTerally is waiting for them .etc .etc
>They go to Fantasy Island and everything happens as in the doc

This a good sequence of events? Anything that needs to be elaborated or added in that's not in the doc?
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>>81043094
Yeah, that works well for putting things into sequence.

Then we just need to fill in the details.
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Okay, got vs. Jafar set up. Going to warn everyone in advance, this shit's long, but it also includes some character stuff with Tom and Johnny.
>Tom and co. arrive in Agrabah. They’re worn out from Bluto and Johnny’s relentless training schedule, but they’re definitely stronger thanks to anime training montage rules
>the second they get off the boat, they notice a large crowd of people gathered around some kind of festival
>Ed wants to go have fun, Edd is curious since he read up on Agrabah in his free time and he can’t think of why there’d be a big celebration on that particular day, and Eddy wants to scam the partygoers
>Tom just wants a freaking drink and to get away from everybody since they annoy the shit out of him
>Johnny and Bluto figure that the boys have had enough training for now and should loosen up a bit. Bluto docks the ship while the rest head to the festival
>the festival is incredible. The entertainment is top notch, all the food is amazing, and everything is completely free
>Edd begins asking around, all the locals say that the festival is thanks to the generosity of a rich magistrate only calling himself Ali
>Eddy wants to find Ali to scam him, but no one seems to know where he is
>he decides to try scamming other people in the meantime, but most everyone already seems content
>they keep mentioning a local genie who popped up a few weeks ago who can make people’s wishes come true like magic, for a price
>while the Ed boys are running around the festival, Tom is sitting in a local bar, drinking his scotch
>Johnny walks into the bar and sits next to him. He starts asking how the Captain and Kronk are
>the two catch up a little bit. Captain’s been fine, is convinced that Johnny will come back one day with some crazy story about him saving the world again. Kronk keeps her company, has been leading the local (insert preferred Boy Scout ripoff here) troop and they love him
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>>81041595
Redesign anon here, now with working 12 hour graveyards I.should be able to contribute more.
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>>81043709
>Johnny laughs and tries to apologize again for leaving. Tom still hasn’t fully forgiven him, but it’s readily apparent that he’s warming up to his old man at least a little
>Johnny says something about how he wishes he could see Captain
>”I think I could help you with that, stranger…”
>They turn and see an old man in a hood (revealing that it’s Jafar’s old man disguise would spoil things too early for people who’d seen the movie, I think)>”I know a way to make all your wishes come true…”
>suddenly, trumpets blare outside. Tom and Johnny head out to see what’s going on. The hooded man disappears
>the sound was a gigantic parade full of amazing acrobats and animals doing tricks and all kinds of crazy impossible shit
>leading the pack is none other than Ali himself (Aladdin in Prince Ali garb, naturally) riding on Abulephant
>Johnny narrows his eyes. Something’s up with the parade. He asks a local who this Ali guy is
>the local says he just sort of showed up one day and announced via posters around town that he was going to throw this massive festival for everyone, no one knows where he came from or how he got his cash
>Johnny suspects ENEMY STANDO, tells Tom to grab the Eds just in case
>Tom finds them. Eddy’s pissed off about the genie granting everybody’s wishes making it impossible for him to scam anyone
>Tom raises an eyebrow, then remembers the old man. He starts telling them about how the old guy was saying he knew a way to grant people’s wishes
>”Excuse me… did you say a genie was granting wishes?”
>the guys turn around to see Jasmine in her street clothes. She says she knows someone who may fit that bill
>she’s going to see him at the town square and invites the guys to come along. Tom thinks it’s suspicious but decides to go with it anyway since they don’t have a better lead
>when they hit the town square, Jasmine is stunned that Ali seems to be the guy she’s looking for
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>>81043766
>Ali comes up to her and starts asking if she likes the festival. She calls him Aladdin and wants to know how he did it
>Aladdin starts to say something, but stops when he notices Tom and co.
>Tom starts to question him about whether he’s selling wishes to people
>Aladdin feigns ignorance and tries to head back to the crowd of people trying to thank him
>Tom tries to cut him off
>Aladdin sighs and mutters “I wish these guys would let me get back to the festival…”
>Tom swears he hears someone say “You got it, Al! Only one left!” before he is overcome with the urge to leave
>the heroes leave. As they go, Tom turns and watches Aladdin and Jasmine discuss something before she leaves in a huff
>the guys regroup with Johnny at the bar. He’s been doing some digging, and apparently this genie grants pretty much any wish you want as long as it doesn’t involve healing or hurting someone, assuming you have the cash>Tom deduces that Ali/Aladdin got his money by having his genie grant wishes for people
>the group agree that they should seek out the supposed genie and confront it
>night falls. With the festival winding down, the heroes go out to search for the genie
>Tom stumbles upon Jasmine in his search. She’s crying. He asks her what’s up
>cut to the Eds, who decide to split up to better search the town>Eddy leaves and hears a voice beckoning to him from an alleyway
>it asks Eddy if he would like his wish granted
>Eddy realizes it’s the genie guy, chews him out for scamming everyone so well no one else can get a scam in edgewise
>”Oh, it’s no scam. In fact, I’ll give you a wish for free…”
>Eddy considers. “So, I can wish for anything I want, eh…?”
>cut back to Tom and Jasmine. Jasmine is telling Tom about Aladdin
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>>81043811

>apparently Aladdin has totally changed since she first met him. He started off as just a poor kid with a good heart, but ever since her father said they couldn’t marry because he didn’t have any cash he’s been talking to himself
>that little detail causes Tom to perk up for obvious reasons
>cut back to Eddy. He claps his hands and grins
>“Alright, let’s try this out!”
>cut back to Jasmine’s story. A few nights ago she confronted him about his changes and Aladdin said something to her about a genie which could make all their wishes come true. She suspects he’s the one selling the wishes, and she’s disgusted by it
>Tom asks her why
>cut back to Eddy. “I wish I was the richest man in the world!”
>cut back to Jasmine. She’s disgusted because the genie’s wishes always come with unintended consequences. One man wished for a woman he knew to marry him, and she died in an accident the day after the wedding. Another man wished for his daughter to go to a good college, and the second she stepped foot on campus it was bombed by terrorists. So on, and so forth
>cut back to Eddy’s wish being granted. Eddy checks his checking account and discovers that it’s been filled up with cash
>he tries to say the voice isn’t as bad as Tom said, but it’s gone
>Eddy runs after the others. When he catches up, he tells them he found the genie guy and now they’re freakin’ loaded
>Edd freaks out about it, Eddy says don’t worry about it. The Eds start spending tons of cash around town
>cut back to Tom. He asks Jasmine to take him to Aladdin so he can settle things and try to get him back to normal. She agrees
>they head to his home, but he isn’t there. She’s worried, Tom promises he’ll find Aladdin for her. She tells him to check a lion-shaped cave just outside town because that’s where he said he was going before he started talking to himself
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>>81043853
>Tom runs back into town to try and find the Eds. They’re at a gigantic casino, throwing money around like it ain’t no thing
>Tom asks what the fuck happened. Eddy tells him about the voice that granted his wish
>Tom realizes shit’s about to go down and tries to get the Eds out of there
>then the fucking feds burst in and try to arrest Eddy for stealing all the cash he’s been throwing around. Apparently he got it by taking it directly from the accounts of the richest men in the world
>Ed distracts their attention and they all book it. Tom tells them about the monkey’s paw thing and they all go to track down Aladdin and hopefully undo the wish
>after a pit stop to grab Johnny and thanks to Jasmine’s tip, the party soon finds themselves at the Cave of Wonders
>they head in. They find Aladdin talking to himself, asking about why “[you’re]” selling wishes
>this causes Tom to pause. The others didn’t say “[you’re]”
>the heroes creep up to find Aladdin talking to a blue genie coming out of a lamp. The genie swears that it has no idea what he’s talking about
>Tom and co. step in. They demand to know what the hell’s going on
>Aladdin recognizes them, tells everyone to take it easy. He explains that he found the lamp with the genie in the cave, and that’s why he’s been talking to himself
>the money came from a wish, which is why he made so much so quick. The only reason he isn’t confronting the genie in his home is because he didn’t want to do it where he knew Jasmine would probably be trying to find him, just in case the genie was secretly malevolent
>the genie is offended, reminds Aladdin that he’s “never had a [FRIEND LIKE ME]! Being friendly’s part of my name, Al! I would never sell my wishes!”
>Aladdin sighs and admits it seems out of character
>Tom is even more confused. “Wait, if you’re not the guy selling the wishes… who is?”
>the hooded old man appears out of nowhere, cackling
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>>81043725
Coolio, the more drawfags the merrier.

If only I could use my tablet instead of being stuck with pencil and paper…
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>>81030493
Well I Am A Rock was more like "oh shit all this random stuff is flying at us" Ride With Me would be more like "oh jesus christ my arm is being drawn to my hand, even if the bones are in the way!"
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>>81043874
Same, I have markers and my phones camera.
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>>81043873
>Ed quips “Probably that spooky guy!”
>the old man whips off his hood to reveal Jafar’s old man disguise. With a Mysterio-tier stage trick he reveals himself to be Jafar, with a lamp of his own, [ARABIAN NIGHTS] (I came up with that damn name and I still think it needs changing. Rock the Kasbah?)
>a red genie appears out of Jafar’s lamp and taunts Eddy, asking how his wish turned out
>Eddy starts bitching about how he got out-scammed. Jafar cackles again and wishes that the heroes were trapped in the cave
>this traps them all, naturally. Jafar shrugs it off and says he’ll be able to use the other genie to get out
>he starts raving about how now that he’s got the cat and his friends cornered, the Beagle will see that he’s trustworthy and will allow him into his organization
>Tom tries to question him, but Jafar sends his genie out to crush them all
>everyone sends out their stands. Aladdin’s natural sense of justice results in him asking [FRIEND LIKE ME] to help the heroes
>no matter what attacks the heroes use, only [FRIEND LIKE ME] seems able to do any significant damage to the red genie. He explains (mid ORAORA just for fun’s sake) that it’s because both stands are able to channel pure [STAR] energy, which allows them to more effectively block attacks from other stands
>Tom files that tidbit away for later
>Jafar gets impatient. Tom gets an idea and has OMT teleport around the cave in areas where Jafar is going to be unable to avoid seeing it
>this gets Jafar seething with rage. He demands his genie hurries up and kills the heroes
>the genie, technically being independent like [FRIEND LIKE ME], gets annoyed and says he’s doing the best he can
>Jafar gets so pissed he wishes that he had the power to destroy the heroes himself
>the genie tries to remind Jafar that his wishes have catches but is forced to comply and retreat back to his lamp to recharge
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>>81043905
>Jafar suddenly becomes a powerful sorcerer and starts shooting fireballs and shit at the heroes
>his attacks blow open a hole in the cave. The heroes flee into the desert, but Jafar is following them
>the heroes hide behind [FRIEND LIKE ME], who’s doing his best to counter Jafar’s assault. Eddy thanks Tom for fucking them over. Tom just says be patient
>as Jafar keeps attacking, his attacks become more powerful and his limbs start bulging Akira style
>Tom smirks and says he was right- the catch to Jafar’s wish is that he’s too powerful for the human body to handle, and he’ll probably die soon
>Jafar screams in rage and bends over. He’s so full of power he’s about to explode
>Aladdin wishes that Jafar was encased in a magical shield which will protect the heroes
>as the shield encases Jafar (and his lamp, which is hanging off his belt), Tom asks if he knows anything about a duck that makes people [talk to themselves]
>Jafar screams in pain as the shield finishes covering him. He explodes in a burst of pure magical energy
>Tom curses that he didn’t get any new info, but everyone else is just glad that the Jafar problem is solved
>Johnny compliments his son’s ruse, says it’s as good as one he’d come up with
>unbeknownst to everyone, Snoopy was watching and heard Tom’s duck comment…

Shit, that was longer than I expected. Anyway, it should explain why Tom's alone with Secret (the Eds literally can't go into the city because of the feds and Johnny's watching them) and we can have Secret clear Eddy's name in time for part 4.
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>>81043890
Well fuck, that explanation is far more terrifying now that I hear it and I would seriously love if it became a thing.
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>>81043948
Nice.

I feel like there's a song titled "Poisoned Oasis" which could serve as a replacement name for Jafar's stand.

Is the lamp Jafar has destroyed in the blast? If not, then it will need to be taken out of play somehow or else Snoopy will probably obtain it.
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>>81044126
The idea was that the lamp was destroyed in the blast since it was on Jafar's belt, yeah. Even if it wasn't, Snoopy saw the kind of shit that went down when Jafar made a wish for himself. He'd keep Daffy away from it at all costs as long as Genie was an option.

Poisoned Oasis is a good name, but the guy who made it seems like some Youtube/Soundcloud only guy working out of his basement or something. Not sure if that fits our naming standards.

I have to get up early tomorrow and I don't want to step on Bullwinkle guy's toes, so I'll hold off on Skrawl. If someone else wants to take him while I'm gone, go ahead, since I'm heading out on vacation and I'm not entirely sure when I'll be able to writefag again.
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>>81042922
Boop
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>>81044616
Baller as fuck.
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>>81043725
Oh dayum just barely over an hour an there's already a design for my suggestion. Gureto-daze!

Got time to do the other redheads? (Kim and Jazz's are wearable suit-stands, btw)
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>>81044616
keep it up
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>>81037104
god dammit i'm so thankful but yet feel like a retard
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>>81045237
Sounds fun, got a mountain of paperwork first but I'll give it the ol college try. Are they in the list with descriptions? I haven't read it yet.
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>>81044616
>>81045241
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>>81045322
There's:
>>81013519 (Kim)
>>81013885 (Candace)

And the rest are in the doc:
Frankie Foster
Vicky
Wendy Corduroy
Jazz Fenton

Preferably I want to see Kim, Candace, and Jazz all working together in one pic with their stands.

Might suggest more redheads in the future.
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>>81045395
Gotcha
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>>81045395
I know we aren't anywhere near organized in regards to the contents of Part 6 but maybe we're blowing up redheads a bit too much? We are going to diversify the number of enemies confronted since the premise is trekking through an outlandish prison full of waifus and weirdos. Are people pushing for the redheads to be reoccurring or are we following the same route with other gangs within the prison that get dealt with when we get to them or something?
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>>81045632
I'm pretty sure someone wanted in part 6 a redhead gang, so i'm guessing we are going down option 2
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Here's (something) an almost forgotten /co/ character (I believe).

>User: Rex Salazar (Generator Rex)

>Stand:「HARDER, BETTER, FASTER, STRONGER」(Daft Punk song)

>Appearance: Rex's Evo form but the same size of the user (Not sure if that one or the Omega evo form)

>Abilities: This stand can manifest inside or outside the user:

Inside: Technology Manipulation: The user can create weapins using simple objects. The more objects, the bigger the weapon. Also, the user can open doors that can be opened with codes.

Outside: Combat: The stand comes with the Big Fat Sword on the right hand, a Smack Hand on the left hand and 2 Slam Cannons on the shoulders, that can be combined to form the Boogie Pack.

I'm new to character-making, I hope you can accept it.
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>>81045916
Stands that essentially do the same thing the character normally does are really boring, no offense. I feel the same way about Stands that have an appearance of something in the characters universe as well (like Stands that resemble other characters in that characters show, or are just "characters [x]"
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>>81045916
>>81045916
>weapins
Nah, jk it's pretty good, but always make sure to wrryyyyyd the pastebin incase the ability is already taken/similar abilities. Personally I feel that is a bit op and similar to both Penny's Stand and Double D's stand but with no downsides
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>>81045916
I take it you're not very familiar with Jojo. I implore you to read the series, as that would give great insight to contributing to the project. Other than that, I think its cool as fuck someone mentioned Rex, but the powers you suggested powers mirror his regular powers far too much. Read the pastebin to get a jist of the powers people have been coming up with. Jojo has a certain flavor of unique and abstract in regards to that area.
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>>81046070
Well that's my first attempt on this, but feel free to modify him, I just did it because it's one of my favorite characters and if there was a chance to get him in a story.
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>>81046127
I kind of like the idea of rex being somewhere in this, but i can't think of any part to put him in...Maybe Part 7?
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>>81045395
This seems a little lazy to me. I'll redesign later.
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>>81031446

Brainstormed and refined some elements of this in case people have any interest in using this. I don't have any artistic talent, unfortunately.

Stand User: Marceline the Vampire Queen
Part: Probably 6?
Design elements: Roughly seven feet tall. Black Orthodox monk's robe, multiple large golden rosaries hanging from it like the chains on Marley in a Christmas Carol. Hangman's sack covers and hides its face. Any other visible skin, including hands, is completely bandaged in a mummy-esque way. Should have punchghost physique in spite of not actually being a competent punchghost.
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>>81046460
>Marceline the Vampire Queen
I thought Adventure Time was on the never ever list.
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Y'know

Considering that part 6 is where we shove our waifus into I'm kind of surprised that nobody mentioned the Wakfu girls.

I did think of giving Miranda something luck-related, but that's far too obvious given that she's an Ecaflip.
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>>81046478
I asked about that earlier, but it seems not as long as it's within reason.

I don't particularly care if it's not Marceline either; I just like the concept of the Stand and hope it's usable.
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>>81046487
She'll be with the savage Anthro gang, undeniably
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>>81046520
Eh, she's technically still human.

Wakfu religion does weird things to your biology, man.
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>>81046544
I'm aware of that, but for the sake of categorization, she fits there more than anything else. What other gangs would exist? I'm assuming Milfs, Brown Girls, Tom Boys.
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>>81045916
>>81046070
>>81046087
>>81046102
>>81046127
>>81046178

Alright I'll give it a shot.

>REX
>[HARDER BETTER FASTER STRONGER]
> Appearance: A clockwork robot made out of gears
> Abilities: [HARDER BETTER FASTER STRONGER] can utilize the gears on its body as a means of close range or long ranged attacks.
>Mechanization: When a gear is embedded into a machine or living thing, [HARDER BETTER FASTER STRONGER] can increase the efficiency of its movements and activities to a level that would normally be impossible by spinning the gear. Living things will have their reflexes and reaction time enhanced, computers and machines would run many times as fast. This can be both a help and a hindrance as living things affected may no longer be able to control their movements while machines might go out of control. Gears may also 'jam' if they are spun too fast, freezing up movements or functionality.

Its a minor change and still has something to do with machines, but I think the fact that it involves gears makes it fairly unique at least among what we have come up with so far. Part 7 seems to be the superhero part so that's probably where he'd end up going if he gets in.
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>>81046602
Heh, fair enough.

What other girls did /co/ latch onto? That Osamodas girl from the Dofus series whose name I forgot?
I haven't been round the Ankama threads very much, so I'm out of the loop.
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>>81046363
don't u have a scanner or somethin
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>>81046651
>Speeding up a living things bio-mechanisms
Oh yeah, THATS gonna end well for people.
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>>81046969
Not at work
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>>81046995
The application of this seems way too similar to the effects of Made in Heaven imo
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>>81047077
Who the hell doesn't have a scanner at their home nowadays?
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>>81046995
>>81047113

Its more like giving people nigh uncontrollable superspeed and reflexes rather than aging them to death. Unless you meant that their metabolic processes would be enhanced such that they become emaciated?
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>>81047166
>>81047113
I was referencing a Stand from Purple Haze Feeback called Manic Depression. It's ability is to speed up biological processes by stabbing people with thorns from it's body. Pretty much everyone besides it's user that was exposed to this power ended up a gorey mess on every surface of the room they were currently in.
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>>81047230
Ah I see. The intent I had behind the gears was to them to improve the functionality and efficiency of things they were stuck in. I wasn't exactly sure how to articulate the effects though.

I was thinking the gears would basically make living things move faster, react more quickly, feel less tired while doing so and so on while Machines would consume less fuel, move more smoothly and work more quickly. Being able to enhance biological processes like metabolism would probably make it too similar to the Stand you mentioned so the gears probably should be limited to the parameters I just laid out.
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bampu
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taking a new approach to panelling not in the way that they're laid out so much as the way I plan and organize them

let me know how it feels compared to prior pages
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>>81048860
Not bad.
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>>81048860
Nice, you're alive! I like it. Assuming you haven't put text in, though?
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Can we get an edit of that image of Bruno Bucerrati going "I have no idea what the FUCK is going on." with Rolf? The caption should be replaced with Rolfspeak, of course.
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>>81044236
Huh, I suggested Poisoned Oasis since it only felt like a song name that I'd heard before, I figured it would've been bigger league song if it actually was one.

You could go with NOTHING LIKE A FRIEND for Jafar's lamp.
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Also, I mentioned a couple threads back on how Bugs Bunny with [THRIFT SHOP] could be one (of many?) fake Warner Bros. in Part 5, but I figured his stand also would allow him to be W.B.'s main informant, monitoring the rangers with his disguises.
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>>81049637

>This son of a shepherd has lost his sheep
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/a/ here, I just thought you all should know that I frequently masturbate to gay porn, own more than one dildo and still think this is the gayest shit I've ever seen.

Good Job
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Got bored so I made an attempt at drawing Jacknife's stand.

>>81050750
Say hi to /a/ from us.
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Idea from an old tread I found, though the name would need to be changed now

STAND USER: Lady X

STAND NAME: [X GONNA GIVE IT TO YA]

APPEARANCE: A humanoid creature made out of boxes of cereal.

POWER: [X GONNA GIVE IT TO YA] can warp nearby name-brand products in a 5-yard radius to suit her will. Coca-cola can become grenades. Doritos can become shurikens. Etc. Her power is useless against products made by generic brands.
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>>81051103

There is already a stand with that name:
>>81041595
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>>81051165
I know, hence
>>81051103
>though the name would need to be changed now
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>>81015741
You fucks better give Daffy a pretzel motion super
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>>81051324
>Activating [CAROLINA IN THE MORNING] the same way you'd activate Raging Storm
DO IT
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>>81015741
Swaggy and Mystery Machine?
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Gonna post some Stand ideas I've had. I've been listening to the Beatles recently.

>「GOOD DAY SUNSHINE」
Manipulate the serenity of others. It could either cause someone to feel more or less serenity, or cause the target to feel the same emotions as the user. Can't decide which.

>「DEAR PRUDENCE」
Allows the user to act vicariously through other living beings. If used on a dog, you can hear and smell what the dog smells. I used on a plant you, you get energy from the sun. If used on a fish, you can breath underwater.

>「HELLO, GOODBYE」
Causes objects to take on the opposite property of what they are usually like (flame becomes cool, ice is hot) without the usual consequences (flame doesn’t go out, ice doesn’t melt).

I'll post some more when I can. I'm currently trying to fit userless Stands from the doc with characters.
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I don't even know

「Line 4 Ruin」
Appearance: A punchghost made of overlapping pieces of quartz. It's actually a swarm stand, with smaller units of quartz forming the punchghost form

Ability: When a unit embeds itself onto a body part, said part will gradually be encased in quartz, rendering it immobile.
This process is fairly slow initially, but it's possible to speed up the process by embedding more units on the victim.
Likewise it's possible to send out units to attack multiple users or to set up traps.

However, those units are rather weak on their own, so the user cannot send out too many units or they'll risk not having enough on the punchghost form to protect the user.

I had a feeling this might be OP but eh
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>>81008044
That depends on a lot of variables.

Assuming that Eddy fights Josuke, Edd fights Koichi, and Ed fights Okuyasu, Eddy probably gets wrecked if he doesn't get the chance to run away. If he does, he probably still gets beayen, but leaves a pretty big dent in Josuke from using MFN on random civilians and scamming them into attacking Josuke. Koichi probably beats Edd, as despite his intelligence Kiochi has a far wider powerset and a genuine punchghost. Ed almost instantly beats Oku by distracting him then smacking him upside the head with Spoon.

Then that leaves a very weakened Josuke and Ed. Ed probably takes out Josuke pretty fast since Crazy D is weaker, and Spoon is an incredible punchghost. Kiochi probably slows Ed down with ACT 3, but his ludicrous strength keeps him going. Kiochi probably knocks out Ed after using ACT 1 to ruse him in front if a truck or something.
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Memes have gone too far.
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>>81043709
>(insert preferred Boy Scout ripoff here)
The Bean Scouts perhaps?
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>>81053583
they haven't gone far enough
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>>81044616
Not bad
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>>81048860
NICEEEEEE
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Is it safe to say that Bluto is a party member?
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>>81048860
seems a lot more organized and sharp. like it, though the occasional weird overlap like the bottom of pic related was a neat style choice


also any pressing scenes that need writing for the early chapters?
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>>81056626
He pretty much stays on the ship, but yeah, I guess.
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>>81056626
sounds like more of a temporary ally. I don't think he ever fights anyone but the team for training besides an off-screen battle with Lowly
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>>81056626
Wasn't Carmen being considered for a party member?
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>>81057230
Nope. Someone may have brought it up, but it never reached conception.
She gets wrecked by Lowly.
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>>81057869
Shame, she would have fit the whole globe trotting thing well.
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>>81058149
It's not like we can't bullshit her back in 5 if we want.
Would fit the theme of "what the fuck" too, a minor villain from 3 becoming a party member in 5.

I kind of want this now
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>>81053545
>Ed almost instantly beats Oku by distracting him then smacking him upside the head with Spoon.
Spoon being the size of a small building helps with this.
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>>81057230
One guy was pushing for it but we decided to kill her off to establish Lowly's threat level instead.
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Sometimes I come in these threads to see new art work

keep up the good work drawfriends. Arrivederchi
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Have we gotten any art done for Part 4 characters yet?
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>>81058348
She could fill a Polnareff role in Part 5, crippled and wheelchair-bound.
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>>81059824
Check the Booru. Use the "jaw is unbreakable" tag.
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>>81059962
You know, I was thinking Pelswick could take that role.
>big dramatic reveal
>everyone gasps
>"Wait, who the hell are you?"
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>no PPG

I don't have any ideas myself though
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>>81060071
And if this comes from Kevin I will not be surprised in the slightest.
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>>81060089
Someone mentioned Mojo Jojo being in Part 7.
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>>81060089
You NEED to see this >>81018607

That's an impressive crossover with the PPG.
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I know that there is no place for the NEVER EVER'd characters except for a cell in Superjail, but I figured I'd share the Stand idea with you guys at least. Maybe you can use it for someone else.


>User:Kevin(SU)-Please feel free to change this, though.
>Stand Name: 「Two To Tango」
>Appearance: A humanoid Stand with a silver-sheened skin, having two differently colored halves of a disco ball attached to its hips that change color freely.

>Abilities:

「Don't Like Goodbyes」- The user asks a target if they would like to dance. If they answer yes, the target will enter into a trance and dance until they collapse from exhaustion or the user is defeated. If the target refuses, the user can ask a second time to dance. A second refusal prompts the user to challenge the target to a dance-off. A crowd of nearby living organisms, animal or otherwise, will flock to observe the dance-off and based on the performance of the user and the target declare a winner. If the user wins, the target becomes a 「Partner」 that acts as a thrall and serves under the user until released. 「Two To Tango」 is limited to having only two 「Partners」 at a time. Anyone under the influence of the 「Two To Tango」 has no recollection of the events that occurred.

「The Nearness Of You」- A secondary ability that forces a 「Partner」 to only be able to attack while dancing near the user. This restriction extends to a Stand under their control as well. The more bystanders that watch a 「Partner」 dance, their attacks will increase in strength and speed accordingly. Should a 「Partner」 stop dancing through any outside method, 「Two To Tango」's influence will stop and they will regain full control of themselves.
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>>81061369
>but I figured I'd share
You figured wrong, shit-eyes.
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>>81061369
Huh. This isn't actually a half bad Stand. If we had more of this kind of effort, we wouldn't need to blacklist.
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>>81061369
Like the stand idea, but we need to ditch the user.
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>>81061369
I like the idea behind it, plus I'm a Louis Armstrong fan. It would be a nice addition. Definitely can't include that user for never ever reasons, but this sounds like a nice enough Stand. Maybe change around a bit of the restrictions, because this seems like a fairly powerful Stand.
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>>81061369
Change the user to someone like Handsome Squidward and you've got a deal
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>>81062025
>Handsome Squidward
Oh yes!
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>>81061493
>>81061841
>>81061924
>>81062025
>positive reception

Well, at least I did something good today.
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>>81031446
Came up with (very) rough art for「RASPUTIN」As I said I don't really have artistic talent, but hopefully this conveys what I'm trying to get across. If someone more talented than me wants to improve this then all the better.
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>>81062129
Is good anon.
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g42_3OTeVUk
THIS MUST BE THE WORK OF AN ENEMY STAND!
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>>81061369
>Fall in love with a Stand concept
>Its for a Steven Universe character

I've been rustled good today.
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>>81061369
Why is Steven universe black listed again? This is golden
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>>81062374
Some anon wanted SU characters in this, but refused to come up with ideas for it himself, then spammed porn in the thread when we wouldn't come up with ideas for him.

Also the fanbase is just too big of a presence on /co/, SU characters would drown out the whatever part they show up in.
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>>81062520
Ah I see. I don't know why but I like the idea if Kevin being the only Steven universe character though.
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>>81061369
I like it, I think it could use some ________NO MEANS NO________
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>>81062654
The reason I liked the concept was that he seemed like prime JoJo material with his background. Glad to see someone ran with the idea, though. Would definitely support a new user for it.
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>>81062722
Well I guess we could give the Stand to someone who hasn't been NEVER EVER'd, there was a suggestion to make it Handsome Squidward a few posts ago.
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>>81062722
Calm your tits. He had the decency to even spoiler the post. Dude just wanted to share a Stand and realizes the status of the series.
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q3EEaPj-5qs
We haven't had any Bloc Party Stands, have we?
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>>81062025
Does that mean Squilliam will be in the Lonely Hearts Club?
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>>81063372
He seems like a perfect fit for it, but he might be a false lead.
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>>81060089

Could use: >>81052502

Blossom >>> 「GOOD DAY SUNSHINE」

Bubbles >>> 「DEAR PRUDENCE」

Buttercup >>> 「HELLO, GOODBYE」

Not sure where we would put them though.
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>>81064364
I'd be funny if they all had Beatles Stand names, considering there was a PPG episode that was nothing by Beatles references.
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>>81061406
What does that even mean
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>>81060089

Mojo Jojo was suggested with a good idea for a Stand, though there is no idea where he would placed except maybe Part 7.
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The Abilities and Stands pastebin is not working for me. It says it was deleted or something
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>>81067089
Works for me, try the link in the OP?
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>>81067089
Works fine senpai, but it seems to be a bit outdated.
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>>81067189
>>81067257
Aright I got it to work

Thanks buds
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>>81007804
Got some free time in my schedule today so I'll be trying to organize the character suggestions in the Abilities doc into different groups based on what part they belong to (i.e. Villains in Part 4 classified into High/Low Ranking members in the Lonely Hearts Club, Generic Prisoners/Prison Staff for Part 6, .etc). It'll be mostly based on my own discretion and what I remember the original suggestions requested for them but feel free to voice out if you feel a particular character should be in a different section from where they are in the doc.
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taste the meat, not the heat
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>>81069027
Nice, man. I like it.
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>>81069098
well I didn't draw it, Shwig did; http://shwlg.tumblr.com/post/140573554181/a-golem-of-propane

just felt it needed to be shared with /co/
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>>81069027
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>>81069132
Bloody knew it.

I'd be surprised if Shwig ended up drawing anything for this.
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>>81069800
well to be fair a lot of what Shwig draws could be repurposed as a Stand quite easily
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>>81013885
Revising the stand design due to feedback:

>Appearance: An anthromorphic stand resembling a cartoon duck (Ducky Momo) with partisan-esque wear.

>Ability: Heat signature intel - 「WATCHING YOU」enables Candace to use heat signatures to predict the movements of enemies in an area or to interrogate suspects (i.e. the heat signature will change if the suspect is lying/scheming).

>Stats:
>Power: B
>Range: E (stand combat range), A (heat signature)
>Speed: B
>Durability: B
>Precision: B
>D. Potential: C
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>>81069852
>jacking designs for the "creative" part of this project
>well to be fair
How is that fair?
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Just out of curiosity, has there been a stand that actually resembles an animal, rather than an inanimate object or otherworldly being? I keep seeing suggestions for stands that look like dogs and things and it just seems wrong to me.
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>>81070553

Iggy's Fool resembled a lion-like creature, and Avdol's Red Magician was pretty much a bird man.
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>>81070553
There hasn't. Les Fuellies kind of looked like a bug though, I guess.
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>>81070553
Does Horus count?
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>>81070553
Tower of Gray is a beetle
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>>81070620
>>81070553

That actor guy from Part 6 had a Stand called Dragon's Dream, which was pretty much a dragon inside an orb.
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>>81070553
Some look like insects. Anubis and Horus get a pass because Ancient Egyptian Gods. Red Hot Chili Peppers is a Kappa. Clash is a fish. Otherwise no, animals usually play into minuscule details of the stand. Like Killer Queen's face.
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>>81070553
Many of the stands in Purple Haze Feedback resemble animals.
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>>81069027
NEAT!!!
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>>81070438
I meant more from an aesthetics point, I'm sure if someone asked Shwig nicely he'd be fine with us using his Propane Golem as [PROPANE NIGHTMARE]
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I guess these are the new Hunger Games threads
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>>81071559
I don't see how
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>>81071559
At least try harder than that if you're gonna talk shit.
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I was thinking of renaming [Sid Vicious]'s trapping subability from [Schools Are Prisons] to [Pretty Vacant] since the former was a song by EX Pistols (a knockoff band).
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>>81071742
Pretty Vacant isn't as on the nose as the former suggestion. I vote that.
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I remember someone posted a Stand idea like this in one of the first threads of this. I dunno if they were serious, but I wanted to bring attention to it again.

User: Dan Backslide
Name: 「A HARD DAY'S NIGHT」
Appearance: Humanoid, covered in locks and keyholes, maybe wearing a zoot suit.
Ability: Whenever Dan Backslide 「steals」 something from someone, they'll never know. In that, the person that had something stolen will have no memory they had that object in the first place.

Maybe a minor Part 6 villain?
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>>81072076
>not 「ROUNDABOUT」
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>>81072076
>So it Suit
I think we have enough so it suits for one series.

We need to start branching out in terms of fashion.
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>>81072419
One would think that name would be an untouchable for stand suggestions.
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>>81072426
You mean the Stand or Dan himself? Seems silly to deny a character based on his wardrobe, especially since that can be changed.

>>81072419
They're called RUNabouts, not roundabouts.
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>>81072549
Just the stand. The idea with the locks and stuff is good, I would just prefer if we avoid adding any more zoots.
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>>81072602
Fair enough. I was just trying to add razzle-dazzle since most of my Stand design ideas were lackluster.
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>>81009669
>>81017656
I honestly really think these ideas should be used for Part 5. Especially Sector V's, it's pretty damn good.

An idea of mine is maybe The Delightful Children each have one Stand, but each Stand (on its own) is rather weak. But, combining two or more of the powers together makes the Stands more difficult to deal with.
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>>81072623
How about same design, but a stereotypical burglar instead of a zoot suit? Might be too on the nose but it fits his bombastic personality.

Also we really need to get back to part 3's plot. How does the fight with Yosemite Sam go? What leads Tom there?
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>>81072799
Tom gets Sam's name after interrogating J.Test, nobody has taken up writing exactly how the fight will go though. Check the doc for what's been agreed upon so far.
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>>81071559

Nah, the mods and janitor leave these threads alone.
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>>81072750
Anon who wrote Sector V here, thanks for the compliment. I might make some adjustments to Numbuh 1's stand after the Stand-Reviewer gives his input. The range might be a bit much now that I think about it, and I should probably have elaborated that it completely doesn't affect self-aware beings. So when he's around and activates his Stand buildings will just eroding away from age and plants would start dying but the people around him would stay the same.

It also occurred to me later that the concept was similar to Made in Heaven, but I'm hoping that the differences make it distinct enough for it to be accepted. However, I'd be open to alternate suggestions or doing a full rework as long as the name is kept.

Personally I'm hesitant about having the Delightful Children each have their own stand since Hector con Carne already has that theme going, another anon suggested a while back that they could have a shared swarm Stand instead like Bad Company or Les Feuilles. I'll wait for that other anon to post his ideas before giving it a shot myself though.
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>>81072799
Should it be wealthy Texas business man Sam? He's got an office building, he thinks Tom would have to fight his way to the top floor but he just OMTs his way right up to him from the lobby.

>>81061338
I think this should go in the recommended material to view for working on this project.

Fist of the bOrf Star for the ridiculous we're going for and Super Secret Crisis War + the fan continuation of it for examples on how characters from different shows interact with each other.

Johnny Bravo challenges a killer robot then fleece it out of money when he takes it to the carnival so they can compete in carnival games, and the Eds manage to destroy the giant Powerpuff Dynamo robot in it.
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What character would possess Retarded Alligator Beats?
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>>81071917
It also has the same number of syllables as "Icky Vicky" so there's that.
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>>81061369
This is alright the stand name and concepts are good but I really think going back on our blacklist is asking for trouble and opening floodgates
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>>81077275
Oh, no, I really wouldn't want to make any issues with the blacklist. I just wanted to share the Stand, because I thought it was a nice design, if a bit overly strong. I'd be more than happy to have Squidward take it.
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>>81070553 here. I don't mean something that might share some resemblance or have animal features like >>81070620 said, but outright animals. >>81070673 is the closest I can think of and it was basically a xenomorpn murder beetle anyway.
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So, uh, tablets are hard, guys.
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>>81078840
Git gud also have pen pressure enabled if your tablet settings had them off.
(note that not all programs support tablets)
Your lines will probably look a lot less wobbly
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>>81079795
I've only just figured out how to have Windows stop making my stylus right-click instead of drawing when it touches the tablet, but I hope to be drawing normally on here sometime soon.

>pen pressure enabled
Thanks very much, anon. That was driving me nuts. Since doing that, I'm sitting here practicing my handwriting and the difference is substantial. Just my signature looked like garbage not ten minutes ago.
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>>81080108
Hmm...

Which tablet are you using? Wacom?
(figured those settings would be similar regardless of which brand anyways)

Just fiddle around with your tablet settings, make sure that on the mirroring (?) settings it's set to follow the screen's proportions
or else the positioning would be out of whack.

And yeah pen pressure makes a lot of difference, especially when you're using something like Sai where the smooth as fuck lines relies on pen pressure being enabled.
(I've tried drawing on photoshop before, never quite achieved the same quality lineart as I do on Sai)
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>>81080254
I'm using a Wacom Bamboo on PhotoShop CS5 currently. I think somebody linked to Sai on one of the previous threads, so I might have to look into that if it handles better for the tablet.
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>>81080292
Yes, yes it does.

Not like you can't fiddle around on Photoshop to make sharper lines, but unlike Sai Photoshop is not designed as an art program so there is a difference.
The built-in stablizer Sai has can be a life-saver if you're not used to your tablet and couldn't draw smoothly.

Sai has fewer tools than Photoshop, but it's easier to navigate and use at least.
The copy I uploaded has more custom brushes and textures, but it shouldn't be too hard to find custom brush settings made by other users.
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>>81080292
>>81080254
Careful with SAI. It's good for linework or inking but the stabilizer is practically cheating. It's less you and more the program and really hurts you in the long run to use exclusively.
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>>81080367
What he said, more or less.
I had mine set fairly low at least, since I have experience with my tablet and I also do pencil stuff.

It's mostly just that photoshop lines aren't quite as sharp as Sai ones.
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>>81080354
>>81080367
>>81080394
I really appreciate all the advice. I'll be putting it to good use in the days to come and hope to be doing some digital art for the threads soon.

Anyway, I've been messing about with this thing for longer than I should've tonight, so I'm calling it a night.
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Got really bored so I made this.

>>81080869
Best of luck to ya.
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>>81072799
My hand slipped.

Not really stereotypically burglar but whatever
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Bampu
I believe in you, /co/
Keep going
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>>81081587
I like it. It's got just enough to get across that it's a thief without being too in your face.
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So when is this stand reviewer guy coming in?
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>>81081994
I'm on vacation senpai, mobile only and will be busy most of the weekend so I won't be reviewing for the next thread or two. If someone can take over reviewfagging in the meantime that would be much appreciated. If not just stick it under pending like last time I was MIA.
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>>81082145
Got it my liege.

Might as well update [SID VICIOUS]'s appearance stats based on >>80980770:

>Appearance: Appears as five large drones that resemble UCAV-Manta ray hybrids, patterned with the letter V and roman numerals designating their number. The first four drones have a predominantly black-grey color scheme, while the fifth drone is crimson colored. This fifth drone is larger and more powerful than the others and has added flamethrowers. It primarily guards Vicky though it sometimes leads the others.

>Stats:
>Power: B (A for fifth drone)
>Range: A in open areas, otherwise limited to building size
>Speed: A
>Durability: A
>Precision: B
>D. Potential: C
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>>81082145
Damn, I was planning to ask about >>81053404

Have fun in your vacation!
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>>81081587
Dan Backslide Anon here. I love the design! I kind of feel that the Impish design works better, considering Backslide can't really pull off big heists with his Stand.

Which reminds me to clarify, only the person he steals from forgets they owned the object stolen. Any witnesses will be aware that he just stole something. That being said, even if Backslide is killed, the target's memories are never restored.
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>>81082513
>That being said, even if Backslide is killed, the target's memories are never restored.

In general, if a Stand user is killed, their Stand's effect is ALWAYS cancelled.
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Where are the writefags at?
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>>81083005
I suppose that's true. Never mind then.
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>>81064364
Id' switch Blossom and Bubbles Stands.
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>>81061369
Since we'd need to change the user how about this guy?
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>>81085219
Max or Squidward would work.
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>>81085414
It has to be Sexy Squidward though.
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>>81085452
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CwRHDqFt5ls
[Twin Galaxies]?
It has the power to flatten itself under objects and [flip] them. This Stand manifests as muscular body formed out of bubbles that is pouring out of the holes on Spongebob, with a mass of inverted jellyfish tentacles serving as the head. In actually it's a swarm stand made up of the individual bubbles.
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>>81086025
Spongebob's stand name should be [Ocean Man]
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>>81086085
>>81086082
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>>81086109
>>81086085
Sounds like a better name than the one I had in mind.
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>>81082145
Don't sweat it boss. I'll be cataloging everything at the top of the doc like last time, but if you feel like its getting a bit too much to handle I can prioritize suggestions that got zero feedback whatsoever to be pushed to the top and immediately put the ones that got relatively positive reception straight under their respective sections. Should take a load off your back if you don't mind me deciding which characters to officially add in based on what I see other anons saying about them.

You give pretty good feedback which is why we value your inputs. Thanks for all your advice so far and enjoy your weekend!
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So, are we handing off Kevin's Stand to Handsome Squidward?
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>>81086239
Yes, partly because SU has been NEVER EVER'd, and mostly because it would cause confusion (there is ALREADY a Kevin in Part 5)
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>>81086141
>>81086085
Why not B.O.B.?
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>>81086327
Eh, if it weren't never ever'd it would make for a funny Abbot and Costello moment. Good that we can actually keep the Stand, because it sounds too fabulous to pass over.
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>>81085219
I'm surprised Powerline doesn't have a stand yet.

He fits perfectly in this.
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>>81086458
Maybe we should toss up a poll for Max and Squidward and pass off 「Two To Tango」to whoever wins.
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>>81086507
I'd prefer Handsome Squidward to get the stand.

I'm trying to come up with ideas for Powerline's stand at the moment.
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>>81086555
Well, I guess those trips gets Squidward a Stand. Looks like SU finally contributed something to these threads.
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>>81086617
Would Handsome Squidward be a villain or ally with this power? I can see it going either way.
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>>81086664
Squidward is pretty antagonistic in general, but he also hates Patrick. Tough call.
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>>81086664
He'd be a minor ally who wants to join the Lonely Hearts Club because he thinks it's some fancy rich thing Squilliam is in, only to find out they kill people.
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User: Hogarth Hughes.
Stand Name: 「GREY SINATRA」
Appearnce: The Iron Giant, but smaller and Araki-fied.
Ability: 「GREY SINATRA」can swallow metal (and only metal) objects, and fire them at high velocities out of his hands at his opponents.

I'm thinking him as a minor protagonist, can't really imagine this kid as a villain.
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>>81086952
Hogarth could be like that Rock-Paper-Scissors kid in part 4.
He just wants to use his stand against anyone, doesn't matter to him.
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STAND NAME: [I2I]

APPEARANCE: A man with an eyeball for a head wearing an Elvis costume.

POWERS: When an enemy makes eye-contact with Powerline or the stand, a curse is placed upon the enemy and they must keep eye contact with Powerline or his stand. Not keeping eye contact with Powerline or his stand for about 5 seconds will result in an insta-death.

If his opponent is still fighting him after 2 minutes, Powerline has the option to begin a [WORLD TOUR]. When Powerline begins a [WORLD TOUR], the stand [I2I] gains a keytar that sends out harmful notes when played, and the song I2I will begin to play. While the song is playing, the opponent will slowly lose eye sight in one eye. At the end of the song, it will be completely gone.

[I2I] will also occasionally throughout the fight attempt to get the enemy to get the enemy's eyesight off of him or Powerline by blinding them with bright, flickering and colorful lights.

Destructive Power: C
Speed: A
Range: A
Durability: C
Precision: D
Developmental Potential: B
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>>81087360
The chapter of Part 4 he appears in can be surmised thusly
>Stan Pines punches a kid.
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>>81087529
[He Had It Coming]
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>>81087529
I kek'd.
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>mfw I got Into JoJo because of these threads.
Fuck, why didn't I give it chance earlier.
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>>81078840
I'm still using PhotoShop at the moment, but did a quick sketch of Courage. I'm not at 100%, but it's not bad for my second attempt at using my tablet.
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>>81089293
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>>81088336
honestly, the Jojo art style messes with me. I hear lots of good shit about it, but I just cannot look at it for that long

I think this fascinates me because it's kind of a gateway with my friends to get some of it and get something of the experience
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>>81090032
>Assuming Johnny Bravo is a virgin.
That is why you fail.
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I'm surprised this guy hasn't been mentioned at all.
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>>81007804
>Fighting game
Wait what
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>>81090202
Jotaro pls go, and take your boyfriend with you.
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Bumping again.
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>>81090202
Who is that?
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>>81090984
Jojo from Courage the Cowardly Dog.
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>>81090032
I think the OVA has has the best art style so far.
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>>81091302
>OVA
>Best art style
You're kidding right?
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>>81091471

It did have the best animation and the best DIO'S WORLD, at least
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Here is some Taffy/Nibbles for you. FYI I decided to make Taffy Nibbles his full name. Just to combine his names.
Stand User: Taffy Nibbles
Stand Name: [I DON'T WANT TO SET THE WORLD ON FIRE]
Appearance: A hat made out of cheese. Changes between Musketeer and Indian.
Abilities: [IDWTSTWOF] allows user to pinpoint a location of 1m radius in 10 meters. This location heats up in seconds, severely scorching and subsequently turning the target into a perfectly edible cheese.
By using ability [TOUCHE, MR. CAT] hat changes into an Indian-style hat. It allows to manipulate milk and products made from milk.
Too OP?
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>>81073800
Sam being the big business version of himself (I'm pretty sure that happened at least once) in this story makes for a lot of interesting dialogue opportunities.

If he has a big sky scrapper Tom can use that "big ego, little man" type of lines when he sees him.

Sam fills every level of his sky scrapper with tough guys and Tom just bypasses them all using OMT, he can either play this off as Sam not being confident in his own abilities, or that he beat all Sam's guys without taking any damage or even being short of breath to intimidate him.
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>>81091003
>>81090202
Being an actual Jojo apparently does not get you a free pass into the /co//co/ universe.
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>>81093606

I can't describe how much I want Mojo Jojo explaining how he figured out the enemy Stand's trick in the most longwinded, convoluted, roundabout ways.
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MAMMOO
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bump
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>>81095524
>Typical Dead Workers Party celebration.gif
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>>81051400
>Implying anyone on /co/ is competent enough to Raging Storm, let alone Deadly Rave
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>>81095661
>whenever a villain dies they're forced to dance at the Dead Man's Party Monster Mash
"Hope you like non-charcoal grilling."
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>>81092486
Maybe you should just call it [WORLD ON FIRE] for short.
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>>81095524
>>81095529
Well guys, I do have something to bring up since no one is biting on talking about part 3 right now.

The Red Guy.

He can be summoned by swearing, I recall Plucky Duck once having a potty mouth, and Rolf uses alternative swear words that don't count.

So, what if one of the things Rolf does with his Urban Rangers is to try to make them not curse so much? The less they curse, the less powerful the Red Guy is when they fight him. I figure the more times someone has said a swear word recently, the more powerful he is in a fight against that person.
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Ms. Frizzle needs to be in this.
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>>81096620
She kidnaps waifus and brings them on a 「MAGICAL MYSTERY TOUR」 to Superjail
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>>81096620
>>81096712
The Frizz uses her Stand, 「MAGICAL MYSTERY TOUR」, to transport prisoners to Superjail. It can have some kind of Stand nullifying ability.
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>>81096936
To be fair, I mean almost exactly what >>81096712 said, but in a more official capacity.

>CAPTCHA: Select all of the buses.
Call it fate. Call it luck. Call it karma. I believe everything happens for a reason. I believe we were destined to post about the Frizz today.
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>>81096936
Maybe the Bus is some form of mental inhibitor. People get dazed and knocked out upon entering it, rendering them unable to use their stands. The insides of the bus act upon her will, like seat belts coming alive to restrain people. If someone has a stand ability that acts outside the user's consciousness it could be restrained. The kidnapping and transport to Superjail is ultimately a mysterious sequence of events since everyone gets ambushed, knocked out hard, and wake up inside.
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>>81087420
I think I need to draw this
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>>81096620
Give her >>81075011
I'd rename it 「REPTILIA」 though.

Her stand is a bus full of retarded Alligators which she drives around. If she tricks you into entering the bus, it activates the ability 「POP QUIZ」 where she will quiz her opponent on various subjects. Failing to answer a question correctly will cause the alligators to become both more powerful, and more retarded.
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>>81097691
I like this, failing the quiz entirely should allow her to activate 「MAGICAL MYSTERY TOUR」 which transports the bus to a place of her choosing. She can use this strategy to take her victims to Superjail.
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So what will be the OPs and EDs for each part here?
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>>81100126
>Part 1 ED
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mynzbmrtp9I
>Part 2 ED
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XUNiKKE5lXI
>Part 3 ED
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2X_2IdybTV0
>Part 4 ED
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SLK9owh9Ysc
>Part 5 ED
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_w4Xulsjo5I
>Part 6 ED
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9O6e7cgkeqw
>Part 7 ED
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GRz4FY0ZcwI
>Part 8 ED
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jsArcMMqbhw
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>>81100293
I need this as a background joke in Part 7.

>>81100394
>Kansas
>Not the Part 5 ending cuz Plucky
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I hope one day there is enough story and art to make MADs

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o6hKE-L9BbU
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>>81100789
no
never
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Vote here, will ya?
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>>81100950
nevermind
i've thought it a while 2 minutes, and it'd be a great idea actually
this was created using the slam jam idea:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nxl6SZf19ec
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>>81101008
>mfw there's an obvious number of people ignorant to the source material but don't give a fuck.
>mfw there's nothing we can really do about it except scream at them like autists.
>mfw I don't really care anymore and do my best to sharpen their ideas.
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>>81100950
The word "never" is for SU.
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>>81101068
I saw that first then some of the actual part 3 MAD and I decided to get into Jojo. I only heard of it through the roadroller Dio animation from the PS1 game.

>>81101008
I haven't read part 6 and onward yet. Finished part 5 which I didn't hate but didn't love like part 4.
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>>81101245
>filename
i kinda feel bad for skipping half of D4C Love Train in Part 7, and then going straight to the end just to read JJL
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>>81097691
>>81097224
>>81096936
>>81096712
No Stands that are essentially what the character already does or has in their own universe. A Stand that is just the School Bus is boring.
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This is pretty important for the setting layout of Plano Does Not Crash
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>>81101507
Meant
>Plank
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>>81101080
>mfw there are people that use stand names that are already in canon jojo
consult the fucking wikia
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>>81101494
What is Magician's Red? What is Beach Boy? What is Rolling Stone?
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>>81101507
I hope on the outskirts there is pic related
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>>81101597
Avdol is a fortune teller, Pesci is an assassin not a fisherman, and Scolippi is a sculptor
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>>81101494
The stand should be the Chameleon. And possess any vehicle she begins driving. Her vehicle of choice being a school bus. It's not that bad to use something already in the material we're drawing from. That's where the ideas come from. I'd like an Araki'd as fuck Magic School Buss lizard stand.

>>81101507
>mfw we get to the point where we can DUWANG our part 4.

>>81101558
When we reach bump limit, I hope the next OP actually takes heed of my suggestions and adds the Stand part of the wiki as well http://pastebin.com/5yK4WWa0 so people have past ideas and already canon shit at the click of a button so they don't recycle stuff like idiots. Maybe add the vocaroofag's stuff as well. That was neat.
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>>81101494
A school bus full of retarded alligators that nullifies stand powers and quizzes you straight to jail is too much like what the character already does?

Are we supposed to just make up something completely unrelated and slap it onto a /co/ character?
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>>81101597
What I mean is a character from a cartoon who has an important object, or already has a super power, and their Stand is that important object or super power and just that. Like that anon who suggested Generator Rex with a Stand that was just what Rex already did. It would be like having Captain America be in this and his Stand is just his shield that does what his shield always does
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>>81101868
>Are we supposed to just make up something completely unrelated and slap it onto a /co/ character?
Thats what Stands usually are, so...
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>>81101839

>Wants to make sure people don't recycle stuff
>Suggests a Stand that possesses vehicles when its user begins driving them
>Forgot to check the Pastebin
>We already made plans for a Stand (Gogo's 「Streelight Manifesto」) that possesses vehicles when its user begins driving them.

Maybe take a little bit of your own advice anon.
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>>81102089
Gosh I'm dumb. Strength did it first anyway. Ms. Frizz should just stick to a school bus. Or maybe. The school buss has the stand? It is alive, no?
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>>81102208
>Get It Hot
>Stand user: School Bus
>Once the user decides on a destination, Get It Hot will steadily transform the user's surroundings to progress them on a path to their destination, for example, overpasses suddenly dropping down to let the user on or off, buildings sliding apart to create a shortcut right to another road, garage doors moving around to create a passage through houses, even roads stretching out across waterways to bypass them. Whatever transformations Get It Hot performs don't damage any of their surroundings and return to normal once the user passes through
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>>81101839
>DUWANG

Suggestion: An enemy Stand in Part 4 can interfere with linguistic abilities in a wide radius, causing everyone to start randomly speaking Duwang and leading to mass confusion and pandemonium until the Stand user gets taken out.

Rolf is for some strange reason unaffected, and Plank's menacing katakana are replaced with "SCAREY"
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>>81101724
The Stands live up to their names and have some correlation. Maybe not within their occupations, but it goes to show that Stands operate by some logic.
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>>81102089
What happened to I Can't Drive 55?
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>>81102082
Stands are usually a made up power for a character also made up by the same guy. If we're not creating stands that fit the character, why even bother using /co/ characters?
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>>81102208
TWIST, Frizzle is the stand, Bus is the user.
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>>81102932
Name was changed a while ago because some anons weren't satisfied with it.
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>>81102932
I wasn't as cool sounding.
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>>81102932
Too obvious of a name.
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>>81101245
>Finished part 5 which I didn't hate but didn't love like part 4.
I'm reading through Part 5 now and it's just not keeping my interest like Part 4. I'm wondering if I should just skip it and come back to it later. Part 7 sounds cool and it's an AU anyway from what I understand.
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>>81102942
Because seeing /co/ character having Stand battles is cool.

Look through the damn pastebin, most of the Stands are only a tiny bit connected to the user
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>>81102975
I'd buy this, while keeping everything else from >>81097691
>>81098724
the same
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>>81101868
The Retarded Alligator thing can still work, just have the Stand be Liz instead of a School bus and have Liz shoot the baby alligators out of her mouth or something, or maybe she carries them on her back like a scorpion.

Then we can have the bus have its own stand like >>81102790
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>>81101654
This is how Rolf trains the Urban Rangers in extreme survival.
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>>81103091
I agree it's lame as fuck to borrow to much from the source material but The Ed's stands, visually, are all references to the show, and everyone's cool with it. It's the abilities that are supposed to shine through with creativity. Ms. Friz having a school buss stand isn't bad unless we make it function as what it exactly is in the show.
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>>81103141
The point was to have the Frizz use the bus to capture fugitives and transport them to Superjail. You know like a fucking prison bus. Having Liz shoot retarded alligators has nothing to do with that.
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>>81103276
How about Frizze's Stand is something like Jail House Lock, in that it impairs those effected by it into inactivity in some way, but not a direct Stand battle. It could be a perfect way for the MCs to be introduced to Stand fights and Stands in general without their lives being on the line.
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>>81103276
Nothing is stopping the Frizz from driving the bus while her stand fucks them up with retarded alligators. Wasn't the problem that earlier anons had with the initial proposal that having her Stand be the bus itself was too boring?
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>>81103437
I like that. I assumed that her job would be to incapacitate for imprisonment, not to cause permanent harm, especially since she's working for the Warden and wouldn't want to spoil his fun.
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>>81103659
That's nice and all, tripfag
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>>81103659
>Paradise City
>Frizzle
>A Stand that inhabits the bus Miss Frizzle drives (but can inhabit any vehicle she is in) Paradise City imposes restrictions on the movement of those that are in the bus (for example, not being able to stand up, leave their seat, progress past another seat, ect) and these restrictions can only be bypassed by answering a trivia question. Of course since Frizzle can change these restrictions freely, answering just one question won't mean you are free from Paradise Cities control.
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>>81103949
The Retarded Alligators function the same though. Since they're retarded, even if a question is answered right, its still "wrong."
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>>81103896
He's a namefag, since no tripcode.
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For the next OP if someone decides to prepare it before we autoprune.

>Previous Threads Update
http://pastebin.com/kGnySuUJ

>Vocaroofag's Dialogue
http://pastebin.com/ctG7NsC6

>Fighting Game Google Doc
https://drive.google.com/folderview?id=0BzsuKz5EhsUkQjlNaG5UQmxDcTA&usp=sharing

If I wasn't unsure of the status of impending Pastebin Updates, I'd prepare the next OP myself but here's some stuff what shouldn't be forgotten. I think someone will pull through with updates if they are necessary.

>>81103896
Give him some slack. He's only namefagging and actually produces art. Drawfags are drawfriends.
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>>81103949
So can we agree on whether the Stand should be the bus or something else like Liz? Is it boring if its the bus or not? It seems to me that if it can inhabit any vehicle it might as well be Liz, but honestly I don't really mind as long as the majority of anons are okay with it.
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Where's stand-doc-fag because he needs to update the current stand suggestions.
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>>81104236
I'm here, just waiting for the debate about the Frizz to settle before chucking all of it in for the Reviewfag to look at when he returns.
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>>81045372
This should be next Thread OP pic.
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>>81104219
I personally think the Stand should not be the bus, but still be Frizzle's. Theres no reason the Magic School Bus can't just be the Magic School Bus. Plus while writing down Get It Hot's description I imagined the Stand as humanoid-ish, and to impede people's movement it half-melds through the buss and grabs people with it's hands to prevent them from moving.
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Page 10.

New thread is needed
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>>81104906
I notice the counter doesn't go red until page 11. Is page 11 the new page 10? Very confusing.
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>>81105061
There's a sticky right now.

Stickies don't count towards the thread limit, so they push threads to page 11.
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>>81104847
I feel like having Frizzle/Bus as a stand/user duo is best because it fits and we're not adding too much extraneous shit at that point. I do like the twist of Frizzle being the stand and Bus being the user though, could make for some amusing stuff because characters would assume Frizzle is the user. I like the idea of the stand disabling stand abilities (or at least combat abilities) while users are in the bus. I also like the idea of a pop quiz where the goal is to get them to answer wrong enough times so they can be shipped off to superjail.

I like the retarded alligators just because it's funny, but I suppose it could easily be cut.

I vote for all these things I've mentioned.
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>>81105199
Bam page 11. Also, insightful. Wait, holy shit, we bumped to page 10.
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>Page 11

NEW THREAD WHEN
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>>81105245
A thread was probably deleted then.
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>We're the last thread on the board
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>>81105367
We're still on page 10 as of 20 seconds ago, so two more threads being made will push the thread into the archives since there are two stickies up right now.
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