"I Hope You Have a Happy Thanksgiving" edition
>tfw Adam might be browsing our threads
Not that I'm opposed to having a thread mind, but in what way is thursday considered part of the weekend?
Early weekend thread? Let's hope
(heh)they let us keep it... Happy Thanksgiving BTW!
If anybody, ANYBODY of the SvtFoE team were to read one of my fanfics, I would most certainly die. Just affirming it for posterity: if I suddenly disappear from these generals, you now know why.
I know, I know, reddit, but did anyone else here read Adam's AMA? Some of the more interesting answers he gave re: season 2, for those not wanting to read the whole thing:
>what's been your favorite part recording season 2 so far?
The best part has been learning more and more about all the characters. There was a lot of setup in season 1, especially at the beginning. Season 2 really explores more about every character and we see some super fun places too. I really love everything about it so far.
>How many episodes are there going to be in season 2
I don't think I can say. But you'll be happy :)
>no one's getting a crazy character redesign... right?
not that I've seen!
>are we gonna get the spades? ;) I've been sensing a new character coming in ever since I saw Ms. Heinous's clovers
Spades? ;) Good eye. It only makes sense that we would.
>Should we be scared of this room from St.Olga's? (links to "prophecy room")
No... just be aware.
STARCO IS CUTE AND PERFECT!
CUTE AND PERFECT!
Like its a legal thing, they can look at fan-art but anything that might be misconstrued as an episode ideas is verboten. Its a legal thing they get drilled into their heads.
Well its not that big of a deal, I just didn't want you to get your hopes up dude. Some creative types can be more, uh.
Brisk about this than others.
You working on anything, by the way?
>I just didn't want you to get your hopes up dude
No problem! I seriously wouldn't have a problem even if they DID stole one of my ideas, plots, of characters for anything: for what I'm concerned, anything I put online is public domain.
>You working on anything, by the way?
I am, in fact: I'm just on the beginning phase, with mot of the ideas set, but very little stuff actually set in stone (and even less on paper).
Three words of spoiler:
cheerleader training camp
So this is a thing that happened.
>>show ex SVtFoE
>>Ex: I think it's cool that they have a guy and a girl being bros without romance getting involved
>>Me: Well they get kinda subtexty later on.
>>Ex: ...oh my god, you ship it, don't you?
This is why I don't like people knowing me too well.
Some time in 2016
Welcome to the hiatus, its going to be a hard one.
I'll try not to, I once saw a guy get steam rolled by an obese lady in a motorized scooter trying to get a cheap TV.
Happy Thanksgiving ass nutter.
Post yfw when ass nutter turns out to be Adam MacArthur
Happy Thanksgiving/Turkey day/Early weekend thanks to American holiday everyone.
Godspeed for our retail working brothers and sisters.
My /sveg/ sense was tingling. Can't believe this is up so early. Not that I'm complaining.
I have a couple of things in mind for green this weekend, as well as another game I'm working on to consolidate my knowledge of C++. Hopefully it'll be more accessible and better done than the last one, if I manage to figure it out...
Bless you, WF. We're all praying for you.
Sometimes, I wake up in the middle of the night in a cold sweat, worried that IWNIHA guy might fail to wanna nut in her ass.
Thank you, son, for your dedication.
Any requests for greens?
Post yfw when ass nutter turns out to be Adam MacArthur
Poor Janna, always destined to suffer!
Hi, RedHoodie! Looking forward for your greentext. Good luck on your programming efforts too!
Ha-ha I loved that ep. Especially the Sony vs Microsoft CEO fight.
Anyways I gotta go to work, today through Saturday is gonna be bad so I'm not sure how often I can pop in, but I will try.
Happy thanksgiving to all.
Oh and here's my pastebin if anyone wants to read all 4 chapters of my accidental marriage proposal fic, King for a Day
Someone was going to do it, and I wanted it to be me:
Shall we do something interesting and commemorative on this thread to commemorate the occasion? Post it to her twitter with the heartfelt wishes of /sveg/ behind it if it's appropriate.
And if it's inappropriate we post it anyway.
"Marco? He's kinda cute I guess. But I don't know, he doesn't really seem like my type."
>Come on, Star, this is for Marco!
"You think so? Because I think you two would be great together, Jackie!"
"Maybe... I think I might just be looking for someone with more experience, you know?"
"Muh-Marco has experience!"
>Damn it, where did that come from?!
"I mean, yeah, he has plenty of experience! Like kissing! He's an amazing kisser! And, well, he really knows how to, uh, please...a woman..."
"Wow. I'd never have thought it of him, to be honest."
>She's buying it, thank goodness...
"You seem to know quite a lot about it. Is there something you're not telling me?"
"What? Oh! No, nononono! It's not what you're thinking! He just, well, you know, because we live together, and we're best friends, you know? We're just close like that."
"Close, huh? Like, THAT close?"
"NO! I mean, we've never-. It's just Marco-"
"You know, Star, I'm feeling a little uncomfortable here..."
"No! You should be feeling good! Ah! I mean, Marco would make you feel good! I mean-"
"Look, how about the two of you just keep it to yourselves, alright? I don't want to come between two good 'friends'. In any sense of the word."
>Crap. Marco's not going to be happy when he hears about this...
What kind of Lovecraft are we talking about here? Bullshit with tentacles? Themes of hopelessness and despair before an uncaring universe? Forbidden knowledge driving civilized minds wild?
"Lovecraft" is a pretty big umbrella dude; off hand, I'd say the most in-character lovecraftian reference would be something a little less obvious than usual, like Janna finding Herbert West's notes and trying to build herself a boyfriend.
Here are the only other two:
There needs to be more
>Themes of hopelessness and despair before an uncaring universe, Forbidden knowledge driving civilized minds wild
Old Gods occupy a locked dimension that even dimensional scissors can't open, some mysterious new student or existing cast member under the influence of a shadowy figure is trying to trick Star into combining her magic with dimensional scissors.
Marco and Star notice something is off and do some investigating and read big ass book as find out about the Old Gods, one note mentions 1 wielder of the wand succumbed to the madness but failed to summon the old gods
Turns out the guy trying to trick Star is some insane end of the world cultist with majority of his body already transformed (similar to Marco's tentacle arm) (may or may not be the old wielder who went insane)
haha Thanks Red
On a serious note: Whatever time isn't spent doing their jobs, maintaining appearances and studying and/or training is probably spent sleeping. I think reading is a possibility, but the content is probably heavily monitored/controlled by Heinous and her minions. Just about everything is treated with such a professional coldness that it's hard to tell if they derive any enjoyment out of it. Or any emotion for that matter.
On a goofier note: It's invading the dimension of their unbrainwashed selves and showing off their superiority.
and doing lewd things in front of them
Oh, an early /sveg/, how nice. I forgot it is actually a holiday in the states right now. Anyways, I'm glad people checked the Adam's AMA. The man is a boss, he had time to answer plenty of fan questions. I wonder how our fellow anons will behave now that we know that Adam may or may not be around this place >>77731153
Too bad I wasted my question with some trivial stuff, today I noticed nobody asked anything about Janna. Sorry, Manna bros.
Anyways, happy thanksgiving for our American brothers and sisters, some Starco trash pic related for everyone else.
It was I, Original Character Blanon, who asked about /co/ with the name of DonChile. Adam knows about our autism... he knows everything...
ass nutter turns out to be Adam MacArthur, master of kung fu... and we've made fun of him some times...
Pic related is some stuff Adam said about Tom, some hints for season 2.
Hope we'll see more svtfoe AMA's in the future.
Some words of Adam on Jackie. It may hint some development for next season...
Thanksgiving Day by Deafbro
>HAPPY THANKSGIVING, DIAZ AND BUTTERFLY FAMILY
>King and Queen came to join in Diaz’s house. We enjoy in the dinner room and Marco says, “We give the foods to be thankful for our family of all together.”
>HAPPY THANKSGIVING DAY!!!
It seems Daron's birthday was recently. Deafbro drew a picture too.
>HAPPY BIRTHDAY DAY, DARON NEFCY!!!
>I give you a special gift: Marco and Star bring you a birthday cake and StarFan13 likes you while they said, “HAPPY BIRTHDAY, DARON!!!”. Also, Star wears a Sagittarius headband for you have a birthdate of Zodiac.
>ME: Daron! You turned a same age for me, too! HAPPY BIRTHDAY, DARON!!!
Happy Thanksgiving everyone; odd to see a thread up so early, but it works I guess.
I finished the greentext I started last weekend, so without further ado: The Problem with Love Spells:
>It all started on a relatively normal Friday morning right around when first period had just ended
>"Hey Marco, I'm gonna grab a snack real quick, see ya in class" -Star Butterfly offhandedly told her best friend Marco Diaz as she skipped away from their lockers
>"Ok Star, see ya in a few minutes. Might want to remember to bring your homework with you too, it's due today." -Marco tried to remind her, but she was already off and away
>"Nevermind, guess I'll grab it for you..." -Marco mumbled to himself as he grabbed her homework from her locker and started making his way to their next class
>Sitting in his seat before class started, Marco started skimming Star's homework, checking to see if she'd finished it last night like she said she had
>She had; causing Marco to smile in victory and fistpump'd the air. He was happy his late night tutoring efforts were having a positive effect on her study habits
>Just as he started to give his own homework a check, he heard a rather loud boom, then time itself seemed to slow down for a few seconds
>As he slowly turned to where he thought the sound was coming from, he distinctly felt...purple for a few seconds, then the strange feeling disappeared as quickly as it had come
>Shaking himself slightly, he turned to ask his classmate Janna if she'd heard that loud boom just now...and she was staring at him oddly
>"Hey Janna...can you hear me? Did your hearing get damaged? You ok...?" -Marco asked, somewhat concerned, as she wasn't responding to him at all, just staring
>After a few moments, she shivered and seemed to remember herself
>"I'm sorry Marco, did you say something? I must have been daydreaming..." -Janna dreamily stated while still not taking her eyes off Marco
>Just then, Star and Hope ran into the classroom, out of breath and looking a little worst for wear; Did Star's headband look a little singed?
>Quickly sitting down next to each other, and not in their assigned seats either, the two girls started whispering back and forth, making Marco curious
>When did Star and Hope become friends? Eh, not like you can have too many friends I guess...-Marco thought to himself, then got up to hand Star her homework
>"Hey Star, you forgot your homework in your locker earlier. Here you go, and good job finishing it, I knew you had it in you!" -Marco praised Star while handing over her homework
>Star quickly accepted the few pieces of paper, then started...giggling? Hope quickly followed suit, then a few of the other girls in the class did too
>This oddity caused a few of the boys to raise their heads and stare blankly at the giggling girls
>"Thanks Marco, what would I do without you, eh?" -Star said as she grabbed the papers and winked at Marco, then started giggling again
>Just then their teacher walked in, and the lesson finally began in earnest
>By the end of third period, Marco knew something very strange was happening
>Most of the girls in the school seemed to be following him between classes, and while in class, a lot of them kept staring at him, playing with their hair, giggling, or whispering to each other.
>Sometimes even a combination of all of the above
>Marco assumed that the loud boom earlier had been one of Star's spells backfiring somehow, affecting her and a large chuck of his classmates
>Thankfully the day was finally over, as Marco ran out the door once the final bell rang out and headed straight toward his locker
>Reaching his locker, he noted that there were a bunch of girls hanging out nearby, and they were starting to drift toward him at an alarming speed
>"Hey Marco, do the carpets match the drapes?" -Janna asked him with a strange twinkle in her eye while winking at him as he started dumping his stuff from his last class into his locker
>"Oh Marco....what's your favorite color? I'm thinking of buying some new panties tonight..." -Hope cooed at him from behind his locker door, making him jump slightly
>"Heya Marco, can you check and tell me if my skirt's too short?" -Star asked him while lifting her skirt up, showing that she wasn't wearing anything underneath
>"Oooook...something is seriously wrong with you girls, and I'm gonna find out what." -Marco said as he slammed his locker shut and started running, hoping that they wouldn't follow him outside
>"Why are you running away Marco!?! We just wanna have our way with you! It'll be fun, we promise! Janna brought some handcuffs!" -Star yelled at him as the other girls yelled similarly lewd things at him
>This only spurred Marco on to run faster
>He didn't want to get arrested for public indecency after all
>What would his parents think?
>Just keep running Diaz, you'll find a way to fix this somehow...-Marco thought to himself, checking to see if any of the girls had started gaining on him
>Star was slightly ahead of the pack, with Sabrina and a few of the other cheerleaders on her heels
>Looked like half the school's female population was chasing him!
>Not good...need to split them up somehow, reduce his chance of being caught, and if he was...lowered the odds of him dying from exhaustion
>Thinking quickly, Marco ran down an alleyway, then took a turn real fast, jumping over a chain link fence and gunning it past his favorite Chinese restaurant back exit
>I really need to stop by there more often...such good Lo Mein noodles -Marco absentmindedly thought to himself
>Looking behind him, it seemed that he'd lost a decent chunk of the girls in the alleyway, or they hadn't gotten over the fence yet
>Either way works in his favor
>Not too far from the house now
>He just needed to get to Star's spellbook and ask Glossaryck for help
>Maybe he had an idea of what spell had caused this situation and how to reverse it
>Worse case scenario, he could beg for asylum from King and Queen Butterfly
>He's sure they'd understand
>Looking behind him real quick, Marco sees a group of girls still chasing him. but he has a decent lead
>Too risky to just run into the house and lock the door, they'd probably find another way in too quickly
>So Marco just keeps running, eventually turning off into a side street and running back the other way toward the house, figuring he can jump the neighbor's fence to get back in
>Marco hides behind a nearby garbage container and waits to see if he can hear any of the girls run past
>After a few minutes he does, but it doesn't sound like all of them chased him this far
>Some of them probably got lost, gave up, and went home
>He hoped so at least
>After waiting for the gaggle of girls to dispurse, Marco slowly started making his way back home
>Once he got close to his house however, Marco noted something odd
>All the lights were on
>"That's weird, Mom and Dad should still be at work for a few more hours..." -Marco mumbled to himself, sure that he had turned all the lights off before leaving for school that day
>Just to be safe, Marco decided to go in through the garage
>Collecting the hidden key from under one of the nearby cacti that they had around the yard, Marco quietly made his way into the garage
>So far so good, everything's pretty quiet
>As Marco moves into the kitchen, he notices that some of the perishables have been taken, and the refrigerator appears to have been raided as well
>He really hopes that they haven't been the victims of pantry gnolls again
>Walking into the living room, Marco sees that the front door is slightly ajar
>He's pretty sure he locked the front door before leaving as well
>Not like his parents to leave it open either
>Someone had been here, then appeared to have left after taking some food with them as spoils
>Not much he can do about it now though
>Taking a quick peek into his parent's room, he noted that nothing looked out of place, then headed back to the living room
>Closing and locking the front door, Marco started sneaking up to his room upstairs to finish his check of the house
>Finding his door also open, he peeked in, and gasped in horror
>Someone had stolen all his hoodies!
>His clothing drawers were open and empty as well
>Even his pillow and blanket were gone!
>Who would do such a thing?!
>Leaving his upended room, he checked on Star's room next, fearing that Ludo had been behind this latest misdeed to try and find an angle with which to steal Star's wand
>That might explain the missing food; minions had to be fed after all
>Maybe even the open front door
>Who would close the door on a place that you'd just pillaged?
>Fearing the worst, Marco slowly opened Star's door to find...that everything looked about the same as the last time he'd been in her room
>That's a little odd
>Why would Ludo only steal Marco's stuff?
>Not like his minions could fit into any of Marco's clothing probably
>This just deepened Marco's sense of unease
>But no time for that, he had to get to Glossaryck and figure out what was wrong with his classmates
>Marco quickly checked under Star's bed, finding the large and unwieldy book, and pulled it out and started flipping the pages at random
>"Ahh, I see Star's friend is back. To what do I own the pleasure of having you riffling through my pages?" -Glossaryck asked pointedly as he slowly floated up from the middle of the spellbook to lightly glare at Marco
>"Just the blue...whatever you are I wanted to see!" -Marco said, not sure what the little man really was or cared to know
>"Star's in trouble, along with most of the girls in my school, I think one of Star's spells must have backfired and did something to them." -Marco said, attempting to appeal to Glossaryck's apparent endearment toward Star
>"Star's in trouble you say? That's fairly normal for her, she's a rambunctious girl, always has been. What makes you think it was a spell that's causing this problem?" -Glossaryck asked as he started brushing his beard
>"Well for one thing, she started acting weirdly around me...more weirdly I guess? Not just her though, maybe half the school's girls started acting the same way, asking me...things..." -Marco said, somewhat embarrassed as he remembered some of the phrases they had used
>"What kinds of things? I hear you sometimes helping Star with paperwork of some sort, maybe these other girls also need your help with...whatever it is that you are apparently good at." -Glossaryck intoned as he started waxing his legs, to Marco's annoyance and slight discomfort
>"No, nothing like that...things of a certain...nature." -Marco mumbled, blushing slightly, and unsure he really wanted Glossaryck's help anymore
>Might be easier to just head to Mewni and live as a flying pig farmer
>"Considering your tone of voice and the fact that you appear to be blushing, or have red goblin's disease, leads me to believe that they starting asking questions of a sexual nature... just nod your head if I'm correct." -Glossaryck said, smirking slightly as Marco started nodding
>"That narrows what sort of spell might have been misapplied a fair bit...I'm guessing Star was attempting to either wake a Lotilador...or she was trying to cast a Love Spell on something, which isn't how those spells work anyway, causing it to backfire and affect her and any nearby females as well." -Glossaryck said as he stroked his beard, somewhat deep in thought
>"Yes...I'm guessing it was a Love Spell, which would make more sense. If all these girls are fixated on you, then you must have been the closest male to the spell's origination point. Lucky you, eh?" -Glossaryck said as he slowly started floating back down into the spellbook
>"WAIT, how do I fix this? Is there a reverse spell you can do or something?" -Marco asked, desperation and slight terror in his voice
>Glossaryck just looked at Marco, a small measure of pity in his eyes
>"There are three ways this can go. If you evade the girls you will save yourself, but at a very high cost to them. The longer you wait, the more crazed and passionate they will become. Eventually their bodies will shut down from hormonal imbalance and they will pass into a permanent sleep-like state." -Glossaryck explained, as Marco listened with rapt attention and growing horror
>"If the girls do catch you, they will despoil you, but in the joining of your body and theirs, they will be cured. They will return to normal but, depending on the amount of girls, you might be left a withered husk." -Glossaryck stated, not envying the poor look on Marco's face as he contemplated his options
>"But you said there was a third way, right?" -Marco asked, hoping for a better option than the ones before him
>"Yes, you could always just have relations with Star and, once she's returned to her normal state of mind, get her to cast a reversal spell on the other girls." -Glossaryck said as Marco's eyes lit up with something like hope
>"Then I'll do that! That way I get to live, and the girls don't have to turn into sleeping beauties! Why didn't you suggest it earlier?!" -Marco roared at Glossaryck, somewhat angry that he had not suggested this course of action in the first place
>"Good luck getting her alone; one of the spell's side effects causes those affected to roam in packs. Unless you split them into smaller groups, the outcome for you will still be...not good." -Glossaryck clarified
>"Oh, I sorta already did that earlier, a fair amount of the girls chased me way up the street, not far from the mall. I evaded them and made my way back here to talk to you..." -Marco said, somewhat relieved that at least some of the work had already been done
>"Tell me then, has anything of yours going missing since the spell hit? The worst affected tend to become...possessive of their focus and will start to gather things that remind them of their target." -Glossaryck asked Marco, who started pacing in place while looking out the window nervously
>"Yeah, almost all my clothing was stolen when I got home, even my pillow and blanket" -Marco said while starting to look more worried, if that was possible
>"Then odds are the most affected know where you live, not to mention how to get into your home; they might be coming back at any time to wait in ambush for you. I wish you luck in your current predicament, for I must leave you to inform River and Moon of you and Star's situation." -Glossaryck said as he disappeared in a blue flash, leaving Marco alone once again
>At this point Marco realized that he needed to prepare if he wanted to live through the coming ordeal
>Scavaging the house, Marco collected the supplies (food, water, viagra, etc) he hoped he wouldn't need later and stored them in Star's room
>He decided to make his last stand in her room, as it seemed somewhat fitting, and she had a much larger room than he did
>Then he started making and setting non-lethal traps, like he'd learned watching survival shows on the TV late at night
>If all worked out as he hoped, enough of the girls would be caught in his traps that he wouldn't have to engage in...close combat with all of them, increasing his odds of surviving he hoped
>As the afternoon started working it's way into evening, Marco was finishing the last of his traps and eating some leftover tacos from the night before when he heard it
>The sound of girls walking up and down the street, calling his name and other, less appropriate things
>Thankfully, most of the kids at the school didn't know where he lived, so he figured so long as he stayed hidden, he'd be safe
>He was only partially right
>He heard a series of loud knocks at the front door, then a crash as the door was broken down
>Here they come -Marco thought, as he got himself into position and waited with baited breath for the trial to begin
>"MARCO! WE KNOW YOUR IN HERE! COME OUT COME OUT WHEREVER YOU ARE" -Star screamed as she and some of the other girls started wandering around the house, looking for Marco
>"I'm up here Star! In your bedroom! Maybe we can talk this out?" -Marco yelled, somewhat hoping that it was all some weird misunderstanding and Glossaryck had been playing him like a fiddle
>"THE TIME FOR TALKING IS OVER DIAZ! IT'S TIME WE GOT THIS ORGY STARTED, DON'T YOU THINK GIRLS?!" -Hope yelled in a frenzy as the other girls started yelling obscenities
>Well it was a nice try, he just hoped they would be somewhat gentle with him...-Marco thought as steeled himself
>As the gaggle of girls made their way up the staircase, Marco heard a few of his traps going off, to the disappointment and rage of the girls caught in them
>But all too soon, Star's door slammed open and in waltzed a dozen very horny girls, dressed in a assortment of Marco's stolen clothing
>Marco quickly realized that he knew all of them, at least by name, if not by more
>He hoped if he survived the night, they wouldn't hate him forever for taking all their virginities at once
>As the girls descended upon him and tore their own and his clothing apart and flesh met flesh, Marco's last thought was about the condoms he'd stored in his now destroyed clothing, before he too fell into a haze of foreign and erotic desires and actions...
>Saturday morning was an odd affair at the Diaz house
>Not only had Angie and Rafael Diaz not come home the following night, but the Diaz household was temporarily playing host to a multitude of extra guests, who were just waking up and were somewhat confused, not to mention embarrassed
>Thankfully for all involved, Marco Diaz had played the host as best he could under the circumstances, handing out a breakfast of pancakes and orange juice while also passing out some of Star's extra clothing to give his guests a little dignity
>"Oh man, what happened last night? I had the most vivid dream..." -Sabrina asked as Marco was finishing up bandaging her arm that she had hurt during the night's activites
>"I know...I remember Marco playing an important role in my dream though" -Janna said as she winked at Marco, who just smiled tiredly and went about his rounds
>"Yeah...that was my bad...I sorta screwed up a love spell yesterday that I was trying to put together for Hope. I'm sorry everyone for this whole situation..." -Star explained while handing out the rest of the extra clothing to the girls
>"But no one was really hurt, barring Sabrina, and hopefully we can move on from this as better people and not with bitterness in our hearts, right?" -Marco asked while trying not to look at any of the girls in their eyes
>"Oh I dunno about anyone else, but I enjoyed myself last night..." -Britney said while trying to catch Marco's eye
>"Well I cast a reversal spell earlier, so we don't have to worry about any lasting effects thankfully. Speaking of which, how did you know what we had planned Marco?" -Star asked, somewhat curious as she didn't remember boobytrapping the stairs and hallway to her room
>"Ah, yes...I consulted Glossaryck about the situation, and he sorta laid out what my options were. I couldn't leave all of you in that state, so I did what I could to cure all of you while also giving myself a shot at not dying from exhaustion." -Marco explained, trying not to blush too much
>"Awwww, thanks for saving us Marco" -The girls cooed all at once, causing some confused looks, which quickly turned to snorting and laughter as they all joined Marco in a big group hug
>Just then, a portal opened up in the living room, and out walked both Marco's and Star's parents, chit chatting and laughing about something
>"Oh kids! We're home!" -Rafael yelled as he walked into the kitchen and noted the mess, waving at the group who waved back somewhat less excitedly
>"I'll drive you girls home if you'll give me a few minutes to get the car ready" -Rafeal stated as he walked into the garage
>"Oh Marco! Star! I'm glad to see your in good shape, and hello girls, hope you slept well." -Angie said as she hugged Star and Marco
>"Ah yes, good to see your home wasn't destroyed and both our children are in good health." -Queen Butterfly said as she waved at Star and Marco, who were still being hugged by Mrs. Diaz
>"To make up for your lost time and dignity, I'll be giving all of you girls a fair sum of gold in compensation. Sorry for your trouble, and please don't be too hard on Star or Marco." -King Butterfly said while handing out some gold from a chest that a servant was holding
>"Buying our silence I take it? Fine by me..." -Chantelle said as she winked at Marco and started doing cheerleader stretches to ease her muscles and give Marco a show
>"All good to go girls, if you would come with me, I'll take you home and explain to your parents what fun you had at Star's sleepover last night." -Rafael said as most of the girls followed him to the waiting car
>"So...your not mad at what I did? Or how Marco handled it?" -Star asked, somewhat anxious at her parent's attitude to the night's events
>"It's fine darling, the same thing actually happened to me when I was around your age too, mistakes happen, and thankfully no one was hurt. Besides, Glossaryck explained the situaion to us and young Marco's plan. Then we explained it to his parents, so no harm done really" -Queen Butterfly said while giving Star a final hug and a kiss on the cheek
>After the King and Queen had left with a promise to sent more servants to fix up the house, Mrs. Diaz started cleaning up the kitchen while Star and Marco took apart the traps upstairs
>"Just so you don't worry Marco, I used a morning after spell on myself and all the girls, so it's one less thing to think about..." -Star explained, smiling at her forethought
>"Thank goodness! I was worried about that, all my condoms got ruined along with the clothing I was wearing last night." -Marco said, while sighing in relief that he wasn't going to father a dozen bastard children
>"Yep...but we did have alot of fun last night...maybe I can get a private repeat performance sometime? If you want to, that is..." -Star asked, nibbling on her wand and staring into Marco's eyes as she remembered last night
>"That's my line princess!" -Janna yelled as she rolled out of the closet that she'd been hiding in beside the two teens, who both jumped at the sudden intrusion
>"Janna! I thought my Dad was taking you back home!?" -Marco exclaimed, surprised that at her sudden appearance
>"I'm sneaky Marco, you should remember that by now..." -Janna said, smirking as she held up the rolls of condoms that Marco had thought were destroyed in the night's events, then threw them at Star as she opened and jumped out the nearby window, cackling all the way
>"Man she can be weird" -Star said, collecting the condoms off the floor and giving them back to Marco
>"Yeah, no kidding...I'm gonna...go shower now, later!" -Marco said, as he ran to the bathroom
>"You can't hide from me Marco!" -Star exclaimed, laughing as she walked back to her room
>After all, out of all the other girls he'd had sex with, she was the only one who got to live with him
I'm sorry that was so long; I didn't realize it until I started trying to post it and I had to break it up into smaller chunks. If my next greentext is this big, I'll just post the pastebin instead.
Nice Story, AP123! I especially liked the early part when Marco evades the girls: very energetic! Maybe the last part drags itself a little long for my taste, and I would've preferred to have more individual focus on the named girls while they were Diaz-hunting.
But it was a very enjoyable story nonetheless: thanks, and keep on!
are there any serious borderline edgy fanfics, I need some need some inspiration.
Glad you liked it
Thanks; sometimes my greentexts run a bit long, like I don't know when enough is enough.
Switching perspectives actually would have been interesting, but I didn't think of it, and the story probably would have been a lot longer as well. But that could be another story, Marco being hunted by a gang of girls following some misunderstanding.
I am back from work and oh god it was bad...and we still have another 2 days of sales to go.
Fuck black Friday with a broken glass dildo, now to salvage what's left of my Thanksgiving.
Hope you guys are having a good time out there.
Sweet, was anticipating the finale so it's good to see it. I was also hoping for more when the naughty parts came up, but I guess that's a consequence of a 'everyone' ending and this being a blue board.
It was nicely written(maybe an error or two not sure) humor was especially good.(I love how casual the folks were about the whole thing) Despite my earlier complaints, I commend how you handled the lewd by leaving it up to the reader's imagination.
If anyone remembers our last weekend thread, I found some of Daron Nefcy's oldest Star art on archives of her BlogSpot, which she removed from that blog a couple years ago (I'm guessing when Star the TV show began production). Was going to post it, but it was midnight on a Sunday and the thread had just hit bump limit. If you've seen the preproduction stuff she's posted on her tumblr so far, there's nothing really mindblowing, but she hasn't shown some of this yet and it's still interesting if you like Star as a character and want to see how she developed.
Since it looks like mods won't delete the thread, I'll start posting the art now. The weekend just started, so hopefully this won't seem like I'm trying to kill the thread.
Trying to avoid posting duplicates of stuff Daron's already shown, but this is interesting because it's apparently the first drawing she made of Star Butterfly as Star Butterfly, posted in June 2008. The girl with a similar wand and cheeks is an early friend of hers, Leni (she's listed as that in the filenames of pictures of her). Seems they were both anime-obsessed weirdos. Don't think the other characters, besides Cashew the cat, have names.
In interviews, Daron said she had drawn a girl with heart cheeks as a doodle a few times before this. Eventually, when she began trying to pitch cartoons in her third year at CalArts, she tried to come up with the story behind the doodle and created the early concept of Star.
Star art from July 2008. Sorry these are so small, but the original post has been deleted and you can only see the thumbnails.
More characters from her later comic, Sergio the bully and Leon, the kid whose bike gets stolen, are added to the cast.
And more from the same month.
She was using the name "Star and the Forces of Evil" as early as this.
Oh wow these are cute, and interesting. The big guy in the middle looks like a proto-Lars. Though bald big guys isn't really all that innovative.
I love Leni, I kind of hope she makes a return in some capacity in the main series. If she hasn't already.
Maybe as Spades?
She was planning to make the "Star saves kid's bike" comic we saw the first few pages of an animated short.
On the bright side wre get paid time and a half for working on a holiday.
Psn Flash sale is up so I'm gonna indulge a little since I got some extra cash.
If only Disney would release the entire first season of star on digital or bluray I would have bought it in a heartbeat today.
From the same month.
Even though she never finished the later Star comic because she began producing the pilot with Disney a couple months after she began it, in 2011, we can see how it would have ended through these upcoming pictures. This same image was modified to be used as the first page of the comic.
And if you haven't already read Daron's cute/sad comics of Star as a friendless loser who thinks she's a magical superhero, check them out here:
All these were made the same time as the previous one, btw.
This one is the only familiar part of the story.
Star fucks Sergio's shit up with her "magic."
Even though Star didn't really have magical powers in Daron's original conception of the show, she said the main gimmick was that Star could actually make things happen through the sheer force of her desire for them to happen. But, since she really didn't have powers, Star didn't understand why things sometimes worked out for her.
So the series may not have been as grimdark as /co/ sometimes supposed it would've been. If Star's personality was more obnoxious/bratty, that gimmick could be really grating (she's likable here though).
The next few drawings are all from September 08.
This wand design was used right up through the Disney pilot for the show.
This kid's been shown a few times before, like in the picture with the Lars-prototype bully; dunno if he has a name.
It looks like Daron transferred some his tendencies into what would later become Marco as we know him. Original Marco was way different.
>Star didn't really have magical powers in Daron's original conception of the show
>Star could actually make things happen through the sheer force of her desire for them to happen
>original prototype Star was basically a cute interdimensional Ork who can tap into the WAAAGH as a source of "magic" like any other Ork
Hell, I'd watch it if it got made into a show instead of the current premise. Might be more fun and interesting, less limitations too.
Sergio, Cashew, Leni, and some hideous monkey-boy who I swear to God seems to be the original conception of Marco-as-Star's-DBZ-obsessed rival. His name was Sol here, or would've been later (he might be nameless right now).
Another unnamed character, closer to Sergio's age.
Wand designs, surprisingly close to the design scheme we see in the current show. Was she second-guessing the design of Star's wand, or already working on it looking different for different people?
I like how some look like lollipops.
Last for September '08; just a background design posted with the same batch of Star art.
Not as colorful or bright as the show.
Everyone knows there's an unreleased pilot made at Disney from 2011/12, but apparently a short pilot was made at Nickelodeon too, sometime pre-2010. Daron has mentioned in interviews that Star was in development for a brief period somewhere else, and on this blog that a one-minute Star short was in production. I think the Nick pilot and this short were the same thing.
Since no one was all OMG I REMEMBER THIS when Star was announced, I'm guessing that first pilot never made it to air, as the show ended up at Disney within a year or 2. Unless someone's gonna claim it did and we have yet another lost media situation on our hands.
Either way, here's some Star show development stuff from some unspecified time in 2009-- beginning with yet another roster of kids we don't know and will never see again, except for glasses boy and Star.
Reptilians have always been connected with the show.
Hope you can still enjoy yourself this yon Turkey Day; I did a Black Friday run once with my younger brother, and it was terrible.
To be honest, I tried to write a group sex scene, but I disliked it enough that I kept rewriting it to the point that I just tossed it. I can sorta do one on one lewds alright, but a group setup was a nightmare for me. At least you still enjoyed it though.
So have actually-animated closing credits-- or is this the opening?
Either she turned some girl into a bug or is imagining one of her enemies as one through her mahou shoujo delusions. Doesn't seem to match any girl from the character lineup.
It's the most wonderful time of the week again!
Also damn, the thread sure went up early this week. I should checked earlier.
At heart I'm a lazy bastard, so that was going to be the one greentext I did this week.
If you or anyone else wants, they can make their own version of my ending or any part of the story really. I debated adding some Starco or Manna at the end and decided not to, as it was a "Harem" greentext at heart.
As different as the show is from this early concept, Daron's art seems to have had a strong influence. Some of the magical creatures from the wand in the show are identical to these.
This could totally be sold as a sticker sheet.
Last piece from this stage.
It isn't weekend yet if I still have to go to work tomorrow. My masterpiece is still not finished but I must finish it, I promised to deliver it. That cartoon and this general are my meaning of life.
I will not fail you this time.
Star from April 2010.
The art style is moving closer to what we're familiar with.
May 2010, even closer: the face third from the left on the bottom could easily be from the show today.
I think the "big head, smaller bodies" style works better now, with the characters slightly older and taller than here.
You colored it! I was so looking forward to see this one finished, its great! Poor Janna, is like she always gets a sad ending in fan content from /sveg/.
Love these too! the Sol & Lady AU may be my favorite one.
Also I am loving all these pre-release sketches, makes me wonder about all that could have been. But I am very happy with the final form the show took.
I remember someone speculating if that guy who constantly laughs at Marco during Cheer Up Star was meant to be based on Sergio. Leon is kill.
She really had her heart set on that bike story.
Tumblr duplicate, but notable because apparently Daron used these designs to ask readers of her blog which one they liked best to be Star's regular outfit. The one on the top right is how she's dressed in several of Daron's 2010/11 comics, including The Bike Story.
More from the same month coming up.
This is the first definitive art for what would become Marco; his name here was "Sol Juan." Is Juan his last or middle name?
A character we've never seen, August.
I think he's the redesigned version of glasses boy from a couple years back, and probably the inspiration for Marco's "safe kid" personality today.
His bunny is creepy.
>Has some cards and a bunny
Maybe he was into magic tricks? Early male version of Janna perhaps? Also, thanks for dumping pre-show art, it's neat to see what influenced the show.
Some early concept stuff for Oskar is on Daron's tumblr (http://daronnefcy.com/post/131704428025/early-oskar). but not this one.
His name was the same then.
Leni's new design. Her wand looks similar to what now is Mewni's flag/the design on the King's staff.
Big surprise for the rich bitch fetishists: Brittney Wong existed back in 2010, though apparently without a name yet.
The design of the girl on the left looks really familiar, but I can't place it.
Girl on the left has the same hairstyle as one of the cheerleaders; don't know if she's been named yet.
I just wanted to take the chance to thank you Bluejr.
The only two Sabco pics I have both come from you, and for that you have my eternal gratitude.
A bunch of faculty members, placed in one image by me because they don't seem to have had any influence on the show as we know it.
From left to right, Joanne, Dotson, Margaret Baer, and the principal.
It's weird to see the adult characters drawn in a semi-realistic/proportionate style compared to the kids.
You tend to use Sabrina pictures in your posts; we can kinda guess it was you.
I hope in S2 we get to see more of the teachers; I assume Ms. Skullnick teaches a class or two, and is Marco's homeroom teacher.
Do we know the name of the second boy cheerleader? Ed's the Asian one I believe.
And Sabrina isn't standing; I guess they need some extra practice or they don't care enough.
Your words are like a chorus of angels humming in my ear! And It's not even my birthday or christmas yet!
Don't worry, I'll stop now.
I think most have seen these, from 2010, but now we know the mystery guy in the fall one is August, not prototype Alphonso or some rando.
And sadly, she never made any winter/spring versions, unless she just never posted them on BlogSpot.
I could see that being the case; also, aren't cheerleaders supposed to focus on the crowd? I didn't get why they would think the opposing team would be looking in their direction in the first place. But I'm probably overthinking it.
And while Daron just uploaded her 2010 drawing of "8-year-old Star Butterfly" (I think by this point Star and co. were 11/12, so this was meant as a flashback thing) to her tumblr, she left out the other half of the picture, with August.
Late 2010 or early 2011. I think Daron posted this one too, but I just noticed Star's hair is starting to be drawn shaggier here.
Also, for this version of the show, I've always wondered if "Star Butterfly" was just a Mary-Sue name she gave herself and her real name is something totally mundane/awkward, or if her parents were hippies.
January 2011, I think. Some of these Stars look exactly like what we have now. I really love the weird poses they're in so that they can all fit on the page.
Also, the first time Star's drawn with devil horns!
More early Marco from January 2011 (as are the upcoming pictures). Looks closer to the show, but his name is still Sol Juan.
And while I think this was still when Star was in the "sad delusional sixth-grader" stage of development, that is seriously a monster-fighting pose on the bottom.
More of August. Looks like now she was going for a semi-Native American-ish thing with him?
Marco/Sol's parents, in quite a different form.
SJWs would have a field day, etc.
Sergio was still a thing by this point.
Daron did not provide an explanation for whatever's going on here.
Any requests for greens? Feel like writing something. I'll start work on that star/Fallout fic some other time.
Also gives me something to do while wolfenstein:Old Blood downloads.
Also those those who have played Dying Light, worth 20 bucks?
I watched a youtuber play a fair way into it; if you like somewhat open world survival in a urban landscape with zombies, could be right up your ally.
As for green: Sabrina has an accident free day, at the expense of everyone else in the school.
Daron drew the first few pages of the bike comic in 2011 and shortly afterward abandoned it to start work on the pilot.
This is drawn in the style of that comic, but I don't recognize it from anything she's posted on tumblr.
I'd say it is. The parkour system is really well done, combat's nice, and the perks/weapons you get make progressing through the game feel very satisfying. It's essentially an open world Mirror's Edge with zombies, and I personally found it really fucking excellent.
This is from the comic, but notice how many of her monster designs were actually used for the show.
Her first drawing of Ludo was made around then as well: http://daronnefcy.com/post/112641089088/very-first-drawing-of-ludo-and-the-monsters-dont
Speaking of games.
I started a save file of Dragon Quest 3 (for a little something I will share later) and answered the personality quiz at the start like Star would, and It resulted in one of the best personalities possible for the hero. God was like "You are a wonderful person, Star!"
Huh... was not expecting that result.
Another comic-style scene that doesn't appear in what we've seen of the comic.
I've seen some of the scenes from Daron's art described as hellish. This is a good example of that.
Thanks, Ya Janna has some poor luck in fan content in general. But in this au she's no more luckier than other people that try to get the two back to normal. (She got him to say her name at least.)
Saint Olga AU where he and Star get brainwashed into a perfect soldier and lady respectively. How and to what extreme is up to interpretation. But sometime after the actual St.O's episode where Heinous would have incentive to 'annihilate them' fits best/most appropriate. Janna will be back.
Star art from May 2011. I think this is the only pre-production art that remains undeleted from her BlogSpot.
Oooh an early Star thread, don't mind if I do. Happy Thanksgiving you guys. Regardless of whether or not you actually celebrate the holiday, there is one thing we should be thankful for and that is
that none of us are Tom.Have a great weekend everyone.
Daron has referred to this on tumblr as something she drew right before beginning production of Star's unaired pilot in 2011. Marco (if that's his name by now), Star, the Diazes, and Ludo and some minions look as we know them, and even the blasting-monsters-for-real theme is showing up.
That's all of Daron's early art, at least that she's made publicly available, but I'll post a few more preproduction things from after this that some people might not have seen.
If you haven't, check out http://daronnefcy.com/ for the early stuff I didn't post and some of Daron's more recent art (Star and more general stuff), as well as darbobot on BlogSpot for her older stuff, going back to when she was an art student.
Everyone who thinks she's a no-talent hack who's just copying Adventure Time (a complaint I've actually seen a lot) can at least see she can draw in a lot of different styles.
Here's the logo for the pilot, still known as Star and the Forces of Evil.
Pilot versions of Star, Marco, and monsters. Some slight differences in design but now really recognizable.
It seems a bit more detailed, but that's because Daron had like a year to work on this and only this (and it may have been just 10 minutes), while now, individual episodes have to be made in like 6 months.
I think the battle from the pilot was incorporated into the plot of Match Maker, as what little we've seen, including this gif, is almost identical. It's also the only episode Daron has received storyboard credit for.
I remember this gif sparked constant debates about whether the show would be shit or not prior to its airing, and even gets "what the fuck" reactions now when posted in Star threads: people don't get why she spins before hitting the monster, why isn't it coordinated like my Japanese animes, etc.
I just rewatched Match Maker and there is a legit reason: just before this gif, Ludo's gator minion sent her flying by hitting her with his tail. She spins in midair to regain her balance and keep herself from slamming to the ground, then just happens to also hit another monster that's in her path-- the spin wasn't part of her attack.
I think the only other thing we've seen from the pilot, which looks like it was incorporated into the bit in the theme song where Star breaks the board. For once the show avoided putting Marco in more pain.
Also, Star with a cat ear headband.
That's right. Basically Lady's the projected ideal of the school, and is there to convince parents to enroll their daughters into St.O's. In some cases convincing the daughters themselves(sometimes as a result of causing local princes to swoon over her) Otherwise, it's up to Sol to bring the unruly teen in, peacefully or not.
Thanks. Haha agreed, though I am guilty of the later to some degree/cases.
The only other interpretation that comes to mind is a 'twisted family' sort of dynamic where Heinous somehow took them in at a young age.(Quite convoluted) But most of the fun comes from the horrified reactions of 3rd parties, and their (combined) efforts to un-brainwash the pair so post-St.O's is preferable/recommended.
Yes, the way it effects other people is one of the main factors that motivated me to go through with making this AU.(And it didn't seem like anyone was jumping on it, unless you count prissy star from the badboy au) Good exercise to see how many people would be impacted by them disappearing and coming back..like this. Probably largely depends on what your pairing of choice is and/or if you want to integrate fan-material/interactions.
I do have an idea for a cute Jarco comic.
I remember you saying how Lady and Sol having a sort of familial/romantic relationship. Would they be co-dependent on each other? Would they be able to hide the affection from Heinous?
Early version of the Star series logo. I could've sworn there was a much cleaner version of this online somewhere, as this looks like it was thrown together in paint or something, but it's all I can find right now.
And the video it came from, an alternate animation for the opening, made by one of the storyboarders: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u0hGvwh-SnA
I think the different outfits worn during the dimension montage make the show look too much like it'll be dimension-hoppin' shenanigans, which people already argue the show doesn't do enough of, so what they went with is probably better (dimension part doesn't make it look like each episode will follow a different "theme"). I think the monster fight sequence is more entertaining in this version, though.
Also, I remember thinking, and have seen others observe, that the dimensional scissors are similar to the subtle knife from His Dark Materials. Even though it's a basic enough concept to just be a coincidence, Daron actually said on her blog that the book series is one of her favorites.
And last one, the animatic for Party with a Pony, with some altered/cut lines and Daron Nefcy and Dave Wasson, one of the executives, doing all the voice acting. I wish we could see more of these.
It's been a fun ~4 hours. Happy Thanksgiving/Daron Nefcy's birthday!
I like that because it doesn't involve "Okay the Mythos is the boss of everything", which is a bad habit of a ton of Lovecraft crossovers.
A good crossover mixes the themes of the two settings and Star's cosmology is very "humans can deal with weird cosmic shit after a while" which is the dead opposite of Lovecraft's.
I still like "Janna tries to build a boyfriend." though and might use that myself.
Man, I've been waiting for you to end this exhibition of the early concept and art of the show, buw I have to head to bed. So I'll say it now: thank you so much for taking the time and dig deep in the web for all of this. Thanks for sharing too, it's been interesting to see the development from early stages to almost final product. Some of the pics are known, but I bet many anons didn't know most of them.
Glad people have enjoyed it!
I've always liked the production art Daron has posted so far (and those episode posters she didn't make are amazing too), and so when I looked at the older version of her blog after I saw an old link leading to a page with Star art, I would've been happy if I just found 1 or 2 "new" things. Never thought there'd be so much in one place.
This is gonna sound stupid but I have a theory.
Basically this whole time we see her as Marco see's her not as how she actually is. Like in some episode the metaphorical spell will wear off and we see how she really looks and the answer is she's nothing special, her looks are just exaggerated by Marco's mind.
Interesting theory; might there be other characters who's appearance is influenced by Marco's thoughts about them?
This is one of those 'open to interpretation' things. Though they do have to be reserved and/or subtle with their affections around Heinous romantic or not.(She does come off as a very prudish lady) On the other hand, I can see the usual Starco-y hugs, and overall closeness being 'played up' to make the school seem more appealing/friendly.
One definite thing I'm sure of is how they anchor each other; for better or worse. Whether it's helping each other survive whatever methods were used to convert them..or something like pic related.. . Despite having new identities they still have each other's backs...Mess up twins through and through.
I loved seeing all the early content very cool and interesting. It sticks out to me that Sol/proto-Marco had a blackbelt instead of the main show's current green.(probably to make him more relatable/emphasize his safeness) I wonder if a bit of him became Jeremy right down to the antagonistic nature.
True; or she could just be blessed with thick thighs or she went through puberty earlier than the other girls. Maybe as the show goes on the other girls will slowly change in appearance as well, Jackie was just the first.
One thing about Marco having a green belt is that it does give an option for stories about him gaining ranks and/or showing his skills progressing as the show goes on.
>All this art and new perspective of Sol and Lady
You waited for this weekend dont you?
My writing soul is burning right now and my plans to write A week of Lady and Sol in Echo creek became much more clearer
Happy Giving of the Thanks /sveg/.
Good thing some folks have an extended weekend! More potential time for content creation.
Same to you fellow anon
I have two scenarios in my mind but it diverges. One is about Sol and Lady going back to Echo Creek in their own universe.
And the other is about Sol and Lady replacing Star and Marco in the Original universe
Take yer pick. /svtfoe/ lads
HaH I'm always waiting for the weekend whether or not I contribute.(Though I'm always hoping I can) Actually getting questions/interest also helps my artist soul burn with passion.
Both sound good, but I'm leaning the most towards the first one since it suggests that Sol and Lady will interact with people outside of Star and Marco. (And it feels like Starco needs a break after..last time. haha)
I actually ship Starco the most; but I've done a few Starco greentexts already, so I felt like throwing you guys a bone.
>Promised to finish a fanfic this week
>Get too engrossed in Bloodborne the old hunters
I have failed you guys, the bloodmoon was too strong
We're not disappointed. just saddened at your choices. But there's always next weekend.
>His Dark Materials
I called it months ago, damn it, before I became a namefag. Feels good to know it had such an influence on the series I love.
I've recently been rereading it, and thinking about doing a crossover fic of Stat and Marco meeting an older Will and Lyra, though I'd have to reconcile the differing rules on interdimensional travel first. Might still go through with it though, especially if there's interest.
That series had a huge influence on my life: I wouldn't be anything like person I am now if I hadn't read it, and that's no overstatement.
Spent a night freezing my ass off, but I got nice tv for my mom (her old one was broken.) I got to see firsthand how made people get when latecomers try to cut in line 5 minutes before the store opens. Cutters can get fucked desu.
Tag the smaller resolution pics as "duplicate" and I will delete them when I can.
Ere we go.
>"My Lady, a letter for you."
>Sol bow as he present the plain looking envelope. It has the Echo Creek symbol on
>She smiled as she open the envelope without damaging or disturbing it. She smile as she flick her eyes on the letter and went back to overseeing the 'princessification' process
>"Sol, it seems that we are invited to their school reunion"
>She smile innocently while enjoying the chants and muttering of the tormented students below.
>"Sol, be a dear and escort me to the headmistress office.
>Sol bow again and hold Lady's gloved hand as she stepped down from her 'throne'
>"What a joyous occasion,don't you think Sol? We have a great opportunity to spread the name of our school."
>Sol just nod passively and they went merrily to the Headmistress office, ignoring the occasional scream and sizzling electricity.
>"Ah...here we are! Earth.What a gre-at place"
>Lady dances with excitement and twirl around the park like a Disney princess. Her cheekmark almost appeared.
>"Lady, your emotion..."
>She stopped and composed herself as the mark slowly disappeared
>"Current location: Echo Creek Park. Next destination: The Diaz house. ETA: 20 minutes"
>"Be a dear Sol and help me with my bag"
>"Of course, my Lady"
>Picking up the small bag, Lady and Sol proceed to their next destination.
Wow...internet went shitty after raining. Sorry for this but ill post after it becomes stable
I just wanted to thank you for taking the time to post all these anon!
These are all very interesting and gives a nice insight on how things changed over the years until the finalized product we got.
Nefcy is so creative.
>my face on that part where she almost slips into the end theme
This is off to a great start.
(Though part of me wonders how that letter reached them)
The dark humor lover in me chuckles at their nonchalance at St.O's(newly found?) heavily implied tortures. Probably because they might have been subjected to it themselves and are convinced it's helping the students like it 'helped' them.(but I'm just assuming)
I think he simply got too frustrated with the project and decided to put it on hold, that's something that happens a lot with fan projects, it's a shame but its understandable, projects often turn out to be way more dificult to make a reality than it seems during the planning phases.
I just hope CodeAnon continues to visit us here in /sveg/ even if theres no VN made.
Now all I can picture is everyone in Echo Creek being a human-armadillo hybrid.
Lots of people make that mistake! I blame it on autocorrect tho.
Glad you enjoyed them despite their poor grammar and typos, my excuse is that I am not a native speaker but I think I still do worse than I should.
I got an idea for a one-off fanfic not connected to the continuity I have going with all the others from this very thread, I may do that one to deal with my writer's block, just a one off for fun.
FPPH would of course only tease Star when Marco isn't looking.
While completely oblivious to everything, Marco keeps doing things that are easily interoperated as relationshippy or romantic with Star while FPPH is around. This only makes her teasing worse and embarrasses Star further.
Just like ye-olde sanitarium
>And they've arrived at a small cozy house covered with wild grasses and chipped paints. Its garden filled with rotten plants and withered flowers while the mailbox cannot hold anymore bills/letters.
>"What a beautiful house! I am loving Earth already"
>Lady squee in excitement as she knocked the old door. It takes a full minutes before a melancholic voice answered.
>"Is this the Diaz house? We are here from St.Olga and wishes to stay. I have the appropriate amount of fund for your service."
>Another minute before the sound of several bolts and door lock became unlocked. From the creaking door came out Rafael Diaz, a shadow of his former self and instead of his famous clean shaved grin, a sad smile and dirty facial hair.
>"I am sorry girl, we dont do-
>He stopped when he turn to Sol
>Sol look at him passively and lift an eyebrow while Lady just smile.
>"Marco...is that you ma boy?
>Who is Mar-"
>"Oh yes Mr.Diaz. It is your son Marco Diaz returning home"
>Lady interject Sol and before he can question her motive, his 'father' suddenly pounce him into a bear hug.
>"MARCO MY BOOOOY!"
>Mr Diaz cried while hugging Sol like a squishy doll...actually you can hear Sol letting out a squeaky noise. Sol just glare at the innocently smiling Lady as if she just back-stabbed him for the eight time.
>Rafael then stop and glare at Lady but still crushing his 'son'.
>"And you are...Is that you,Star?"
>"Oh no Mr. Diaz. My name is La-"
>"yes father. That is Star"
>"STAAAR MY UNOFFICIAL DAUGHTER-IN-LAW"
>With brittle endurance, the bear hug almost killed her but she have the will of a perfect princess, she can survived this with a smile. A smug appeared in the corner of Sol's mouth and so both are glaring at each other while being hugged.Suddenly a slightly grey haired woman appeared.
>"Rafael...whats with the-"
>"ITS OUR CHILDREN! THEY ARE BACK!"
>Angie Diaz froze and look at the 'children'. She then quickly join the hug, warm tears in her eyes before slowly encouraging Rafael to ease with the hug and enter the house with the Sol and Lady still in Rafael's arms.
>They are escorted(forcefully) into the dining room, something about celebration and not eating well enough. The interior is a bit dusty and there are plenty of papers, newspaper clip of missing children, detective works, some magical armor, robot guards half intact ,and used socks. Yuck!
>Angie quickly cook something while Rafael stays with them, questioning them. Lady answers them easily and manipulatively while Sol just nod like a good soldier.
>Time pass by as Angie pour the dining table with Marco and Star's favorite food. The Diaz look at the eating children with a tired smile, uncaring about how the style of their table manner contrast with the past.
>After the meal, Rafael help them to their 'old' room.
>"You children must be tired from long trip"
>"Oh yes we are Mr Rafael"
>"Oh Star...Mr Diaz is fine"
>Lady smile and enter her room and Sol followed before he was stopped by his 'dad' "
>"Young man...you know the rules"
>Sol tilt his head questioningly
>"When in Rome?"
>" Not to be in loved or involved with home-stay students"
>"And always use condom or your life be bombed"
>"Marco my boy! You still remember. Lets go to your room"
>Rafael gently pat Sol's back while slipping a condom in his pocket.
>Its going to be a long night
Gonna rest for a bit. So, how do you guys like with Sol and Lady interacting with the Diaz?
>So, how do you guys like with Sol and Lady interacting with the Diaz?
Heartbreaking just as I hoped, the Diaz's are so happy but Sol and Lady--AGH it hurts. I like all the details of how much time has passed(though I guess the reunion should've been the major tip off) I laughed at that bit about the used socks.
>So, how do you guys like with Sol and Lady interacting with the Diaz?
My feels, Why have you got to hurt me so?
Q: What happens if Sol and Lady break their conditioning at the same time?
Q: Will the Diaz's contact Star's parents and will all four of them try and break the mind control on their kids?
Q: Are sol and Lady sexually active together? And what would happen if Lady got pregnant? Would the shock free them of the mind control? and would they run back home?
>I love Star's face in this image
> FPPH teases Star about how close she is with Marco
> Star gets embarrassed
> Begins avoiding Marco so FPPH won't tease her anymore
> Marco gets confused but shrugs it off
> Star slowly goes crazy from Marco deprivation
> She needs her Marco fix bad
> FPPH finally leaves
> Star tackles Marco
> Hugging isn't enough
> She needs to feel as close to him as possible
> Rips off his clothes
> Skin on skin is still not enough
> "Star, wha-"
> Kisses him
> IT'S STILL NOT ENOUGH
> There's only one thing left to do
> Two hours later, lying in a sweaty, sticky mess
> "I just needed my Marco fix...sorry Marco."
> "Star you just hung out with FPPH for like, a day."
Decided to give this show a watch.
It has a certain je ne sais pas to it, however its a good thing. One of those things that I can watch and be like "Heh, maybe this era ain't so bad."
Oddly enough found more charm in the one shot comic though, mostly because of the bittersweet nature of Star Butterfly being a schizophrenic tween stuck in a bubble of that magical youth in a world that demands it destruction.
Not that I'm complaining about the show's premise though, its just enough zany without being "LOLSORANDUMB" and doesn't take it too seriously like some other animated shows nowadays.
Its like discovering hazelnut chocolate spread for the first time, enjoyable but meant to be enjoyed in small portions. In that I give it a solid B outta 10.
One of the more enjoyable things I've watched this year.
>Oddly enough found more charm in the one shot comic though, mostly because of the bittersweet nature of Star Butterfly being a schizophrenic tween stuck in a bubble of that magical youth in a world that demands it destruction.
Wouldn't say I prefer the comics since many of my favorite aspects of the show relate to the magic/other dimensions, but I kinda wish both had existed. Like, if Daron had started that comic years earlier and then went on to do the show.
I'm glad she seems to love what the show's become and is serious about her work on it, though, because "Make the magic real! Put everyone in high school!" is the kind of suggestion that could easily lead to a creator feeling their vision has been raped.
I do like the main characters being 14, though. It's old enough that they can do ship-teasing shit and have sort of lewd lines like the tentacle bit, but young enough that they can still act like kids without it seeming too ridiculous.
The feels. They are good.
Interesting take on the AU, having them kidnapped and brainwashed (or was that the premise? Being an alternate ending to the St. O's episode?).
The Rafael condom jokes felt a little oddly placed, given how much the situation meant for him and Angie, but it's not jarring.
Either way, I like it.
So when do the king and queen of Mweni show up to set the school on fire for brainwashing their kid?
Like I imagine most of the royalty don't know how fucking crazy Saint O's has gotten under Heinous.
>no pic of Star going nuts over a nacho sombrero?
Seriously, we need this.
Sorry. fell asleep
ill cover most of yer Q's but lets just say that they 'suddenly' changed school to St.O.
>"Here you go son, your very own room"
>The room is tidy and spotlessly clean, the only room that seems that time does not touch. It is proper and disciplined but the owner of the room seems to have useless trinkets and wide space will lead to ambush/disadvantages. However, it is a satisfaction to Sol usual room (which consist of only small bed and toilet. Think of it like a one man prison).
>Sol nod politely as he placed his small bag beside the bed but Rafael still haven't left yet.
>Sol answered without looking at him, still looking on how to reinforced/use the environmental to his advantaged.
>"I know...the Queen told us about your sudden 'exchange' school but we were worried..."
>Then Sol turn to face him, passive as ever and ignoring the tired face of his 'father'. This is usually Lady's area.
>"I am busy 'studying' and 'helping' Father"
>Just like a recorded message, yet to a desperate father, it is a message given by God Himself. He cant help but smile and misty eyes.
>"Thats...my boy. Just...remember to call us once in a while. We really...really missed you. Good night Marco"
>Rafael slowly closed the door before ranting 'he is really back' again and again as Sol resume his activity, uncaring about what just happen.
>Suddenly... something within him felt something as if calling him deep from his soul...probably Lady being lazy again. Sol just sigh and went to Lady's room.
>"Ah...there you are Sol"
>"Lady,please refrain on using our Soul Bond just to summon me..."
>"Sol,please. I feel that it is rather rude to call you from your personal chamber"
>She smile innocently as a yellow face with its tongue out slowly appeared. Sol just rolled his eyes.
>"My Lady, your emotions..."
>She covered her cheek, which slowly became beet red
>"S-shush now. Be a good boy and lets began our 'training'"
>Sol nod and Lady left to change, leaving him alone to analyze this room.
>This room is much more larger but there are sign of royalties here. It is similarly spotless clean yet there is a mountain of clothes just beside the magical mirror. There are contrasts between this room owner and the other room owner. This made Sol questioned Earth tidiness but it is still sufficient for Lady to sleep in.
>"Sol! I ordered you to disrobe and you are still covering your body. We cannot began our daily 'night training' now"
>Lady pout as she enter the room wearing a transparent blue baby-doll. The nightwear fully utilize the wearer's body shape and highlight the erotic body parts. The silk material will make sure that the user have free movement and comfort.
>"At once,my Lady"
>Sol quickly and simultaneously disrobe ,and neatly place them on the nightstand. He is a man of many talents after all.
>She licked her lips greedily
>"Let's creat an hei-What are you doing?"
>Sol was opening the condom in his pocket
>"Following the rule of this house: Have to use this strange rubbery contraption to prevent unwanted pregnancy"
>"Silly Earthlings, Sol, put that contraption down. We already deal with it plenty of times and it is efficient to use magic"
>"Negative! Must follow dimension protocol!"
>"Ugh! fine...how to use it?"
>Sol just shrug and a skull on Lady's cheek appeared
>The irritated Lady deep kiss him just to shut him up. After a few tongue wrestling, she became calm again.
>"Now then...lets study the contraption quickly"
>After a minute of analyzing the condom...
>"Why is there a hole in it?"
>Sol is baffled as well but his poker-face still stay strong.
>"Earth is really interesting... Anyways, let us commence the practice of 'Heir Making' techniques"
So...Is it alright to write lewds here? or you guys preferred fade-to-black. Remember:
I am not great in lewds
Well, just got back to the thread and the green is looking good
The feels in the second and third part were really strong, I felt really bad for Rafael and Angie
If you don't feel comfortable writing lewds, you can fade to black if you want, it's your choice
Prompt: Marco finds and takes the Saitama training regime, How do the monsters and Star take react to this change and the fact that Marco now ends all fights and problems with a single punch?
>Also requesting a drawfag to draw Marco as One Punch Man
I like Janna, she's a cutie.
No problem, if you think the lewd part won't be good, it's only logical to throw it out of the story
I have to go again, and I think I won't be back til night, but keep those green coming! I'm really liking this story
>After ours of practicing efficient and 100% will-get-heir position (St.O patented), the couple snuggle in the after-warmth.
>"To conclude, the condom is not efficient and and will only stall orga-"
>"Sol...Be a good boy and be quiet. It is a great courtesy to snuggle after the grueling activity in order to improve bonding moment."
>Lady pat his head as she slowly drift away to slumber, with the heart slowly appearing on her cheek
>"Just...let me...in your warmth...again..marc..o"
>Sol just smile and quietly clap, initiating the 'perfect princess' protocol. He gently put his hand on her ears like a headphone and let the 'calming' chant 'heal' her.
>This always happened but it is something that Sol wouldn't tell the Headmistress about
>It is morning. The birds chirps happily, welcoming the warm sun.
>Lady yawn and stretch. She always felt well rested, despite the grueling activities last night.
>Sol sleep beside her with one eye open, a cute habit he picked up while he was in training, and rise like a vampire as Lady stand.
>They each perform their morning ritual. Lady brush her hair and chant her daily morning chants as birds approached her and played with her. Sol limber himself before his usual 100 push-ups,100 sit-ups and 250 crunches. It helps him concentrate.
>As they finished their morning rituals, they can hear Angie's voice.
>"Childreeen, its breakfast time!"
>Taking a quick shower together, Sol and Lady went downstairs, looking perfect as always.
>In the dining room, a delicious, warm waffles with bacon in each plate is served by the tired,smiling Angie.
>"You know...you kids are pretty silent and controlled tonight."
>"Usually, Rafael's cry disturb me but tonight he was sleeping like a baby. It have been a long time since he sleep."
>"Oh Mrs. Diaz. It is our nature to be perfect. We thank you for the meal"
>Sol just nod as he take place in the table.
>"Oh you kids..come now. Lets get our breakfast"
Sounds interesting and all but... how much bald?
>Sol help the Angie with the plate after the meal was consumed while Lady sip on her own herbal tea.
>"Still helping your mother I see"
>Angie pat Sol's head
>"It is a common custom..."
>"Oh my boy Marco..how big you've become"
>Sol just nod at each complement before Rafael enter the scene.
>"Angie...I have a beautiful dream that our boy Marc-MARCO!"
>Rafael pounce him again as Sol expertly put away the plates before it create a mess.
>"MY BOY! NOT DREAM!"
>Angie just sigh and pat her husband's back while he joyfully bear hug his 'boy' again.
>"Now now Rafael. Let him down"
>Sol just felt indifference while Lady chuckle
>"Mr. Diaz. Could you please let him down? I need his help again"
>Rafael stopped as Lady used her angelic command voice on him and he automatically put Sol down as if in trace.
>"Oh yes...forgive me, Star. I need to eat"
>"Dont worry Rafael dear. I have plenty of breakfast"
>He smile childishly as Lady and Sol permit themselves to exit the dining room.
>"Sure children. We will be out to get more food today. Coming?"
>"I am sorry Mrs.Diaz. We have a reunion to attend in few hours later"
>Lady use her fake-apology smile and Angie sadly nod. Sol nod back.
>Lady and Sol gathered at Star's room, planning their next strategy when suddenly the magical mirror activated.
>Cold authoritic voice came out of the mirror
>"Ah Mother! What a joyous occasion!"
>Another voice pitch in. It hold authority but mixed with hidden sadness
>"And father too! To what do i have the honor of such visits, My Kings and Queen?"
>The queen smile while the king frown
Ill end it in cliffhanger here. Sorry, need to sleep to control sleep pattern.
How do you guys enjoying it so far?
I have a name...but i prefer to be anon. Some might already know my name .
>Q: What happens if Sol and Lady break their conditioning at the same time?
Grief, rage, and being really really scared of being reconditioned. How well they bounce back depends on who's present to support them. Hugging may comes to mind, but mostly from Star, since Marco would be reluctant to use his cybernetic arms with all the trauma attached to them. She'd wrap her arms around him really tight while he keeps the arms slack, feeling bad for not hugging back and noticing the return of Star's hearts Marco will initiate cheek nuzzling. (Comment on their warmth.)
>Q: Will the Diaz's contact Star's parents and will all four of them try and break the mind control on their kids?
Considering how they called Star's parent's during STC this is quite likely. If they witness this>>77745783
They'll probably keep Marco on Earth and Star on Mewni with hilarious and/or tragic results.
>Q: Are sol and Lady sexually acti