Resume review/feedback

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>>2807318
>general feedback

General Feedback!

>>2807318
No one cares that you were a restaurant server. And it doesn't look very good that you were at that one job for only 2 months.

Remove "job title".

>Most recent should be first cuckette. Revise this shit.
> Also don't post anything that you've been at for less than a year.
> last thing, make sure you have an excuse or a reason for gaps in employment


>cuck

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>>2807318
>capitalisation in lists

in the bin you goooo.

>CFO
>managed budget of $3500

I would immediately throw out your resume if I saw that. I don't like trying to decipher from a wordy sentence that you were doing basic bullshit. Also, remove the server job, it's not relevant when you have the internships.

>>2807534
Lol taking advice from someone that doesn't know how to spell capitlization. Learn to spell check, cuck.

>>2807744
That's a title for a club orgnization lol christ. It show's that I was involved in school and not sitting on 4chan all through college.
Also, if you could read, I said I added all the experience I had because I plan to condense it when I apply places.

Christ just asking for some advice.

I'd lose the table for Address, Phone number, email, linkedin. That information doesn't really need labeling, and IMO that table is kind of an eyesore on what is otherwise a pretty sleek looking document

It's terrible anon. Too many repeated words. No focus on teamwork, just a bunch of "I". Specific numbers aren't important; ie I trained 3 employees is less strong than saying I was responsible for training new employees into productive associates. 0/8, would wipe my ass with

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>>2807318
too much of a try hard

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>>2807938
>capitlization

>>2807318

This was fucking painful to browse. Here's a clue: nothing you have accomplished so far requires more than a single page. You could start cleaning it up by getting rid of the useless extra-curricular bullshit. I promise you, nobody cares about any of that.

>>2807318
Shorten it to one page

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>>2808769
Lmfao putting gpa on your resume. Might at well kys.