New Fluffy Thread!
>>738494999
>>738494999
Holy shit I got trips
Also here's my try at a fluffy sketch
-wew
>>738495205
Any tips?
-Wew
>>738495205
Thats actually pretty good for a first time sketch yo and its my idea so that helps
Good job wewfag
>>738495205
Holy shit wew-anon! Are you sure that's your first fluffy sketch? Good job!
~K.P.
>>738494999
Witnessed
>>738495360
The tail looks like his shit to be homest
-wewfag
>>738495414
yeah tail could deffos be better but still good job
>>738495387
I used to sketch a lot, I'm about to try another
>>738495444
Cheked
>>738495261
Don't forget to add the ears. You could also add hooves. Other than that it's really good man.
~K.P.
>>738495205
>>738495261
Proportions are good for starting out.
Head should in this pose be more in line with the spine/more dorsal.
I'd use a smooth line for the mouth.
Nose has a bit of a sharp wedge but I don't want to say it is wrong, could become a neat style feature. Just have an eye on it.
Can't say much more on this level.
question: in your headcannon, can smarty behavior be corrected?
>>738495632
>poopie place huggies
kek
>>738495797
In mine? Not without SEVERE correction if it's past foal stage. If it's a feral, it's damn near impossible. They've had a true taste for power they can't let go of.
>>738495797
Yes, with the right amount of trauma.
>>738495797
>can smarty behavior be corrected?
Yeah with a shovel
>>738495797
Yes. It also is not that frequent as a thing as often portrayed.
>>738495797
long term peobably not. They can be scared into complience. Theyre loyalty can even be won, but they will always be little jackasses (at least until they are fully broken and wan die)
>>738495797
Under extreme circumstances, and even then only sometimes.
>>738495672
You got anymore by this artist? Preferably abuse?
>>738496016
Kek
>>738496235
>>738496375
>>738496481
>>738496531
>>738496481
Lol
>>738496235
McGonagall (a.k.a. Mistah Magawmagaw among the fluffies). Look him up on the booru. He's one of my favourites too.
>>738496578
>>738496481
>>738496531
God, these things are ugly.
>>738496578
>>738496309
never seen this artist before
>>738496648
Who is McGonagall as a character? Just an abusive asshole?
>>738496578
gotta have the followup
Tard fluffy vs snek
-Wewfag
>>738496714
He's a Scottish fluffy breeder. Enjoys gardening. Has some trouble with feral herds ruining his profit margin.
>>738496714
He is in it for the money, capable of being nice to the product but he seems to have a choleric streak and snaps into abuse. In normal proceedings he has an air of indifference.
>>738496932
Any more suggestions guys?
>>738496714
Short answer, yes.
Long answer, seems like he's a farmer who in spare times collects feral fluffies oland/or probably breeds them for extra cash, cooks them from time to time. In the comic he tortures a smarty after he rape-killed a bunch of foals he had "rescued" after he himself had killed their pregnant mummah with a shovel (the smash provoked the mare to expell the foals).
Yo onii-fam, The_Enygma from the booru here once again for my weekly visit of a random ass fluffy thread.
so just posted chapter 2 of my latest work, and i gotta say... i have no fucking clue what ending to go with. basically i have most of the story already planned but as usual my dumb ass still doesnt know how to end it.
Is this bad as a writer?
>>738497129
Could you provide this comic you describe?
>>738497198
That isn't a bad thing, every author has writers block every now and then.
>>738497230
I will as soon as I find it. I'm heading home atm, so if this thread doesn't die I will post it.
>>738497198
have multiple endings?
You still here K.P?
-Wewfag
>>738497230
I have it but the file size is to big and I'm to lazy to fix it.
Here's a link
https://www.fluffybooru.org/post/list/artist%3AMcGonagall/2
>>738497375
well, i stared out with a feeling of how i wanted it to go, but now as im fleshing out characters and planning the next few chapters i feel like my original plan doesnt work anymore.
>>738497516
that wouldnt work, i'm in kind of an "all or nothing" deal with the endings im imagining.
>>738497129
Oh, so that's where those foals came from. That's grim. And that fucking comic....was it ever finished. That smarty's rape faces have to be the most disgusting work in the fandom.
>>738497641
It's okay to completely change it, whenever I start making something it always ends uo different from the original plan
>>738496932
>>738497015
Try to define the head eye and snoot bumps on snek, this can go a long way for perceived quality as many don't include those details for a long time.
Fluffy got worse. Head connects to the spine not the center of mass.
Make the nose an asymmetric form that has a sense of flow to it.
Don't have the face be a slope, fluffies are generally more puggish.
The cheeks and mane are an easy inclusion you can make.
Excuse the snipping tool scribbling.
>>738497921
Thank you so much anon, I did these sketches fairly quickly though, so I'll take my time on the next one tomorrow. I'm also still experimenting with the style, hence the changes.
-Wewfag
>>738497827
It's got 1 page left to go before he's done if I remember right.
Also
>the most disgusting work in the fandom
pic related
>>738497833
it's an issue i've always had, there have been 2 stories that i had a clear idea how to end. Lately i just fly by the seat of my pants.
I've been wanting to do hugbox lately, i've wanted to make an pure hugbox story, i just find it difficult to write one simply because theres no conflict, no reason for the story to exist.
Fluffy gets taken home from shelter, human loves it, it gets 'sketties' and lives a good life, The end.
i've read almost every major story from every old author and some new ones and it feels the same all around.
i find that when i write, i give up half way unless the plot is something that i NEED to get out of my head.
I'm gonna head to bed, see you guys tomorrow.
-Wewfag/Op
Since we're giving constructive criticism tonight.....Goofballfag here. Sorry for all the moan and groans I've called. Would it be preferred if I wrote my shit in a story format? I really kinda want to use the fluffy I created as the focus. Any tips?
>>738498464
g'night
>>738497394
Same Anon here, just arrived home.
>>738497604
Glad you posted it first for that kind Anon >>738497230 who requested it.
>>738498610
story format would really depend on you, i would say write out a few paragraphs, and if it feels natural continue, if it doesnt then try something else.
the hardest part would be 1st 2nd or 3rd person perspectives, a lot of people seem to have issues with picking one. i usually flip through them when the need arises.
but best advice i can give do what feels right to you. Nothing wrong with green text.
>>738499053
I just gotta sit down in front of a word doc I guess. Idk how I feel about greentexts though.
>>738498915
Everyone should have the chance to see McGonagall's work.
>>738499241
Well as long as you spend time on it and youre happy with the result (and proof read it a few times) id say post it somewhere and just sit back relax and enjoy what you've done.
>>738499451
And wonder why his recent fluffies look like pastel mashed potatoes with pig/bird faces?
>>738499550
i think they look fine, it feels like something that a toy should look like.
>>738498610
Go for it, stories are appreciated. Though I do not like goofball, at least in a vacuum. You played him still a tad to human and he is to much of a chad. He lacks the fluffy desire to play with the babies or see them. And a single pet without pedigree wouldn't be that sought after as a stud I reckon. Your rp with him almost had a sincere bragging tone, when the point of fluffies is generally to be severely underpowered. Not saying characters aren't allowed to brag but it was a bit like you wanted to brag about your paladins vorpal sword +5.
And I'm not sure in which direktion you aim to go. Didn't seem like a fall setup.
>>738499659
I sure as hell wouldn't buy them. Carpdime's like jelly beans, on the other hand....
>>738499550
pastel mashed potatoes with pig/bird faces=fluffies
>>738496375
Mcgonagall is the best.
Anyone got Blue haven't caught up in over a week
>>738499680
What I was writing in my head was a runt that grew up to be "toughie" material. He had good genetics, so his owner and his buddy went into studding him out for what would usually yield sturdier fluffs with better colors. I really should have written him more as a strong doofus with less intellect than what I had given him. The not caring about playing with his babies was a lore oversight on my part. I always thought fluffy studs were indifferent about their foals.
Starting to think the blue author has died or some shit
>>738500185
Convenience store shooting. It was supposed to be his day off...
>>738499988
The author hasn't been around lately.
>>738500263
I really don't get your fixation on that movie.
>>738500422
People have been making Clerks references surrounding Blue Guy since day one.
>>738500054
It's not an oversight, more a headcanon thing. But I think the males not particularly caring for babies is human bachelor bleedover and not how fluffies would behave. I think in your rp you tried to much to stay in control. Clearly you can't let the first random edgelord wreck the situation, but you locked goofball into a sort of unaffected attitude that hurt the flow and the potential to discover interesting things. Don't love your characters too much is what I'm trying to say. Love the suffering.
Does someone has or knows where the art of this one is?
>>738500567
I'm picking up what you're saying. I'm a straight up hugboxer, so that's probably where my aversion to abuse comes from I gotta let that shit go and explore some deeper themes. A lot of people just treat fluffies as adorable stressballs, but there's something really fascinating to me about a sentient animal with such low intellect and weakness in all areas being able to just exist.
Sketty hell...
>I'm sitting here in the dark trying to understand why I've been taken from everything I've ever known... I had blockies, sketty, and Huggies.
It's cold out and I'm alone... They won't let me inside.
>I can see them... In my safe room giving everything to their new fluffy friend.
>I tap on the glass trying to get in... They kick me away.
>"Nobody wants you anymore shit rat"
>"Daddeh wet babbeh in... Nu wan Huggies or toysies wan home"
>The door was slammed in my face... I am so confused and cold.
>"Hewwo nu fweind am bubble gum... Wan Nummies?"
>"Gu way... Wan go home!"
>"Why haf saddies?"
>"Daddeh nu wan babbeh... Babbeh wan die"
>"Bubble gum! Come back inside... It's too cold out"
>"Hewwo daddeh bwing nu fweind?"
>"God damnit I told you to go the fuck away... Bubble gum go inside"
>"Daddeh nu hwurt wittle babbeh... Pwease am sowwry."
>"Okay... You can sleep in the garage for tonight ... Only tonight"
>I'm so happy... I'm home.
>Next morning...
>"Come on... I'm taking you to sketty land to make up for leaving you outside"
>"Sketty fo fwuffy?"
>"Yay! Sketty day... Love daddeh!"
>I should have known better... I didn't know the hell I was about to enter.
>What did you guys think... Should I continue the story?
>>738500564
I know, it's weird
>>738500944
Don't know how I feel about normal narration if the fluffy speaks in standard "fluffy talk" in the dialogue.
>>738500813
>but there's something really fascinating to me about a sentient animal with such low intellect and weakness in all areas being able to just exist.
Absolutely.
Another thing about the studding. I think a fluffy shouldn't be like a fratboy or cavalier about it, except he picked it up from a human. It needs a sense of sickly sweetness, up to a tinge of squicking your reader out. Babies making babies. Of course that is a matter of taste.
>>738501369
Any examples?
>>738500944
Interesting, I hope it won't be just straight torture.
Hey Anons, Derpbastian here.
Taking on suggestions/ideas to draw.
I'm actually new to this fluffy drawing thing.
Interested mostly in medical-related, and foal abuse stuff.
Not too complex stuff yet as I don't have much free time to draw, so maybe standalone stuff...?
Anyway, open to suggestions and taking notes from you all.
>>738501810
Foal vivisection?
Please draw my story!!!!
>smoking a blunt on my back porch
>see something in my backyard
>its a fat neon purple fluffy
>it notices me and woddles to the porch
>dummeh poopeh stoopie stinkeh hoomin!
>dis am smawty's yawd nao!
>gib bestes nummies, ow get FOWEBA SWEEPIES!!!!
>welp, time to get the baseball bat
>dummeh poo poo sniffen hoomin!!
>ge off smawtys yawd! Gib foweba sweepies!!!
>gib smawty nummies!!! GIB SMAWTY NUMM---
>FWACK!!!
>I hit it hard as fuck right on the top of the head
>gggggaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhggggggghhhhhhhhuuuuhuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
>SCREEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!! Hewp smawtyheeheeeee
>nu wan...no wan huwtiez!!!!
>its left eyeball is bulging out of its head and its missing a lot of teeth
>hahahahahahaha!!!! You look like glenn from the walking dead! Lmfao
>cough gurgle hewp...smawty...
>fuck you!
>I go inside and watch TV. I hear a light scratching at the back door
>I open the door and its the smarty
>what the fuck? Its been 3 hours how are you not dead?
>pwweeeeeaaaassseee mistaahh...Hab wowstest head owies...
>nee hewp...nee huggies
>pwweeeeeeeheeeheeeesseee
>waaaaaaaaahaaahaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!
>I go get my gun. I cock it and point it at the smarty
>pweease..neber com on mistahs yawd eber gain...no wan foweba sweepiez...nee wuv...
>nuuuu nuu nuuu!!!!!! SCREEE SCREEEE!!!!!!!!!!
>AM MOMM----
>BRAKOW!!!
>I blow its head off and its body flails around violently
>brrrrrrrrrrrrrphhhhttttttttt!!!!!!!!
>it shits and pisses everywhere
>quueeeeeeef QUEEEEEEEEEEF!!!!!!!!
>SPLORRRRRTTTTTTT!!!!!!
>cheeep! Chirp! Chirp! Peep! Squeek!!!
>after I shot her she gave birth to 10 foals..
>>738501810
How about a lady who just got home from work and really needs to shit but her fluffy wont stop running around her feet all excited so she kicks it into a wall.
>>738501260
It's the smartys thoughts...
>>738502239
I posted some drawings on foal vivisection on the booru actually. Still in progress btw.
>>738502447
Hmmm.... too straighforward, but could use it as a back story for some "surgery" due to broken bones and stuff on the fluffy.
Any more Frankenstein-ish ideas, welcome.
>>738501647
I do pics not stories. But I'll try.
I'm thinking of that sense of fascinated disgust that capture many a fluffer, just looming in the background.
"Oh... otay daddeh... daddy kno best... Oh! o-If nu can pway wif babbehs, can make nu babbeh fow pway bumpy game wif baww?"
Thought is "I'm making babies as toys for play." Utter disregard for gravity of the situation and responsibility. Perhaps not the best example. But the fluffy is not at an emotional stage to deal with stuff, at least from a human perspective.
>>738495205
If a fluffy is screaming it needs to be pissing and shitting too. Otherwise good job.
>>738502860
>Sure it's cute and innocent in a very twisted way but that is not how it works or should be. And I sure don't want to hear it from something that sometimes has a way of sounding like a human child.
"If only can see fwuffies fow specul huggies... mabbeh can gif babbeh huggies su can see? Pwease?"
I'm a sucker for the dark psychological stuff, so this example is coming on heavy in comparison.
Bump!
do you guys think Chris-chan would own fluffies if he could?
>>738501810
Pregnant mare has to have ultrasound.
>>738504458
I think so.
>>738500663
the artist of this one has been updating it, he's working at a rate of a panel colored per day it seems, he'll get there.
>>738495514
what WOULD happen if you had a fluffy watch anime instead of fluffy tv. would it affect them or would the just zone out and not get it?
>>738504544
Oh I like this one!
Ultrasound contraptions are rather fragile and if they're poorly built cheap chinese ripoff... they may not be well calibrated.
Thanks Anon, will draw it. Please, choose the name of the unfortunate mare, I may use it for the title of that strip.
>>738505497
I think most would zone out
>>738505497
"daddeh, why big miwkie-pwace hooman tawk siwwy?"
>>738506505
Bump!
>>738505588
Lilith!
Bump
>>738507873
>>738505588
Dori.
>>738495205
You fucking suck
>>738507770
Ok, Lilith it is.
Here's an early sketch.
Will work on it soon enough and upload it to the booru.
>>738502264
I started this then got bored, I probably won't finish it. Enjoy shit paint art!
>>738511786
Sorta like it.
If you won't finish it, perhaps just lit up say, 20 cigarettes, then burn smarty with them?
>>738510258
English you fucking Slavic fags
>>738498248
Come on anon, that's top far, Jesus that's fucling brutal
>>738511786
Sweeeet
Bump!
I'm new to this and it seems oddly satisfying, I like to see them being psychologically broken for entertainment. Someone post the classics so I can get a feel for this.
Bro, my ass-crack smells like shit and fish!!!
>>738514691
have one before I leave
>>738514785
Time to clean it?
>>738514691
Here's somethin' somethin'.
>>738514785
And..... does it taste like chicken?
>>738500663
>>738505246
That's my comic. I currently have a paid commission I'm working on, once I finish that I'll get back to work on it. Glad you like it so far
>>738516298
I'm intrigued by the thumbnail on this but it's not the same pic once enlarged
>>738516611
yeah idk why it was showing that, I definitely didn't make it that way lol. Gonna try another pic and see if it does the same
>>738516611
lets see if I can post the same image and if it'll do the same thing, tried a different one and it was fine
>>738516814
nope, didn't happen this time. Musta been a 4c glitch
>>738516712
nope back to normal, I am a fan of your work though dude, keep it up!
>>738516908
I appreciate it :)
>>738512147
Eh fuck it I'm no quitter, I'll keep going but it won't be finished anytime soon
>>738494999
>>738517521
Please, take your time. As many days, months, or years as necessary.
anyone else hates "dancie babes"?>>??
adorably stupid is best fluffy
>>738495797
Yeah, with a good derping.
>>738499748
>>738510465
Needs a deeper story, a background perhaps?
More frames focusing on the process of trying to focus the ultrasound on the foals (not easy to focus on them as they're too little, and that would be a good opportunity to increase the power gradually).
An explanation on why the ultrasound could hurt them if using a more powerful signal, as well as displaying such effects.
Maybe also knocking the mother down (she remains suspiciously silent).
As is, the story is weak, but can improve. Also using less shitty shapes to represent them, even though it is only a sketch, it need more working.
>>738502552
The difference is that the Smarty thinks he's smartest. He's not actually smarter or more accurately, smart enough to lead and especially don't have the capacity to talk or think like a human.
>>738514691
Here you go pal
>>738519059
I always thought of smarties as the Peter Principle in action. They're in position of authority, but no competency. So they compensate by bullying, yelling, and demanding.
>>738519524
>>738502264
Belted another panel off before bed, I'll try to finish before the weekend but the next couple days are busy for me
need more fluffy on fluffy violence
>>738519749
whoops forgot hooves, I'll touch up inconsistencies as i go