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I wrote a poem for my 18 yo classmate who I plan to confess my

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I wrote a poem for my 18 yo classmate who I plan to confess my love to. Tell me what you think, please.


I love a girl with bright blue eyes
Her tongue it speaks of love not lies
If she'd command me down on her
I'd quickly fall then on my knees
And would not mind I aim to please
Till she would like a kitten purr

I love a girl with fire hair
Her soft lips touch I could not bear
around my cock for more than one
a quarter of an hour but
If I could stick it in her butt
Then all my worries would be gone

I love a girl with virgin thighs
A redhaired maid with bright blue eyes
And speak to her of love not lust
However if she seeks to know
Physical love, a hearty plough
My nut in her I'd gladly bust
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>>717700726
you're reading that for someone you love? what is it, a love letter from your cock? don't be an idiot.
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>>717700726
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>>717700726
and the ugly people losers that smell like poop has no friends and smell like shit
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This is too much effort to put into a joke, anon.
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>>717700726
Beautiful OP I am touched
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Are you serious?
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if its for real... good luck getting laid bud (... could happen) if its a joke, try harder next time.
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dont write a poem grab her ass and say your dicksize only faggots actually have a poem
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>>717700726
Cringe thread
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Your cock shouts "inexperience", from atop a hill,
You believe this poem, shall excite and thrill?
She shall laugh, and shout, but not with glee,
She'll show your poem, for all to see.

There's the "fag" they'll snigger and snort,
that wrote a poem, without a thought,
So heed my warning, and cast away your words
For they shall plonk down, like ...so ...many..turds
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>>717700726
not bad, I wish girls were smart enough to write us that kind of stuff
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>>717700726
You really need to learn to count syllables OP
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>>717701145
It's that Kip?

Czech em
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Oof. That's some top quality cringe material right there, OP.
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>>717701170
>>717700726

you deserve each other
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>>717701170
Fucking Rimbaud over here
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>>717701364
What should I change?
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>>717702039
Schools if you read that to her.
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>>717702297
We'll graduate soon anyway, so I figured I'll take my chance
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>>717701480

My dear fellow, I will write one just for you.

A mote dances, carried hither and thither by your panting breath. A pause ........ as the rod slides deeper, you shudder. Your pulsation increases, veins pumping and heart beating so that it might leave your body. You thrust back.... every inch the newfag.
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>>717700726

Yeah, looks good man your G2G
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pic related?
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>>717703453
yeah
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>>717700726
Excellent. I appreciate that you took time to use a more sophisticated rhyme scheme than the usual ABAB crap): AAB/CCB is interesting Your scansion is decent, though a but/butt is a lame rhyme, and a little more enjambment would improve the flow. A solid A-.
(The funniest part is that I actually am an English professor, and of course nobody will believe me).
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>>717703962
I believe you anon-kun :3
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>>717701170
under-rated post (7/10 would employ if there was a market for shit like this, but there's not)
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>>717702667
You're improving.
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>>717700726
Please do this and film the results.
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OP don't embarrass yourself. If she sees the amount of failed rhymes in this poem you'll never get her to fuck. Avoid synonyms like but and butt, just sounds shitty when you read aloud. One and gone, are you fuckin kidding me. Know and plough, again, you fuckin kidding? I love a girl with virgin thighs, you better be pretty damn confident about that.

Also, the whole premise sucks dick. Ask her to the movies or some shit like a halfway normal person.
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>>717703962
But who the hell pronounces "plough" to rhyme with "know"? The purring kitten thing was stupid too, especially the word ordering, even making allowances for poetic license. Also "one a quarter"??? Plus attempting to rhyme one with gone, which is only possible in Middle English, not Modern English, and it's highly doubtful she speaks Middle English. Also describing her as a virgin is a bit presumptuous on his part. Not that this could ever be considered a serious thread... nobody could be socially retarded enough to use this as a mating call.
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>>717705393
>>717705658
Ha... we said the same thing!
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>current year
>writing poems
ishygddt
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>>717700726
OP is this you?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eRCNeBjrFuc
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>>717700726
>>717702371
>future school shooter
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>>717700726
>>>/1800's/
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>>717702371
Life doesn't end with high school.

You will potentially be embarrassing yourself in front of people you will see often at work, at college, at gatherings.

Cringey shit like this will be the first thing they think when they see you.
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>>717703526
Aurii?
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>>717700726
You can't confess your love for her unless you are in an established relationship.
You don't love her.
Even though the OP is a troll as the poem is sex predator tier, that needed stating in case anyone forgot or didn't know.
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>>717700726
>I love a bitch with bright blue eyes
>I wanna put my tongue between her thighs
>She might look away cause i have Downs
>but I eat pussy better than most of you clowns
>And I would not mind I aim to please
>Just gimme a chance between them knees

>I love a ho with no pussy hair
>Little pink lips, not a grizzly bear
>My hand around my cock for an hour or more
>I edge until I can't then watch my semen pour
>I'd raped that ass and cum in her butt
>But I fap alone cause I got no guts

>I love a little girl with virgin thighs
>I'd take her to my basement, keep her locked inside
>And speak to her of love not lust
>Chain around her ankle because I don't trust
>Rape rape rape just every day
>Then the other kids won't think I'm gay
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>>717707061
-OP, ten years from now
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>>717707169
OP now
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>>717704901
>/10 would employ if there was a market for shit like this, but there's not)

I like you.

Who can fathom, the thought of one, that could make a lady swoon, with a simple word, a sultry wink, a kiss beneath the moon. A kind anon, with simple ways, belying a gallant heart, who with but a simple word... appreciates my art.
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>>717707061
Yes, better.
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suck a truck load of fuck and let her buck you cuck till with luck the muck comes off your puck-er
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>>717708107
aaaaaaaa rhyming scheme
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>>717708107
does cuck rhyme with luck? I think it rhymes with book.
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>>717708892
Cuck =/= cook
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>>717701170
7\10 would not do better myself
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>>717700726
>My nut in her I'd gladly bust
he's trolling , fuckers
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>>717708892
Indeed it does rhyme with book. Cuckold stems from cuckoo (famous for entering the nest of another with the intention to deceive).
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>>717709634
That, or he's fucking lovably nuts. I used to do stupid shit like this all the time in high school.
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>>717700726
ffs op, confessing your love will just crush your chances how ever they had stand. Girls want indipendent men, not needy boys. This is huge turnoff. Go to a gym, get training (maybe ato a gym for 6 month) to get some self confidence about yourself and then just ask her directly out
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>>717700726

Don't say love. girls get weirded out

don't rape her either
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>>717710269
this, OP, grow some fucking balls
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>>717700726
god, that's beautiful, I wept.

Print it out in really flowery font, then wrap it around your cock and present it to her that way. She'll probably start crying too
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>>717710267
if you're right, there's a major chance of him swiching schools very soon

OP, if you're still here, i know grills are ???????? but that will just earn you a weirdo badge
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>>717710403
But if you do rape her, raper her gently and caringly, and make sure to tell her you're only doing it because you love her.
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>>717700726
>My nut in her I'd gladly bust
topkek

probably won't appreciate it, but I do.
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Yeah, she'll dig it and say things like:
"I'm so into artsy-fartsy guys
and ATM, we'll be happy ever after."
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Dont do it, trust me, the girl will hate you.
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>>717711123
she probably already does.

if he's at the poetry-writing stage of his obsession, she's probably already noticed him creeping
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>>717711321
>speaking from experience
someone's speaking from experience here
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>>717700726
Do it, anon. You will forever go down I'm history as "Thee who busted a nut in the firey maiden."
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>>717711123
I hate him anyway, and I'm not even the girl...
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>>717707061
(Slow clap)
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>>717700726
Fag
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