Hello /adv/
I'm a beginning pixel animator, and decided to start small with this video: https://youtu.be/joJFmAJq9dk
I have two requests
>Please give me critique
>tell my if it looks like he's moving his hips from side to side, or if he's gyrating.
Gyrating
>>18403206
Bitch, he's swaying
I'm sorry, but I don't know what he is. I do not see this thing as a human or animal. It looks like a green line on a yellow pedestal or something with some fuckin handle or tail or something that grows and flickers, topped by a yellow thing under a mushroom cap.
I'm sorry OP, but I am completely lost.
>>18403125
Shading could help. Otherwise it looks fine I suppose, but I have no fucking clue what it is.
Also your video didn't need to be more than 10 seconds long
>>18403125
Join the forums pixeljoint and pixeljunk
Also reddit.com/r/pixelart is good too
>>18403797
i meant pixelation.org not pixeljunk lol
Try making a 2D shape rotating or a ball bouncing to begin with.
''Tis a lamp I BELIEVE
>>18404332
You right
>>18404332
I can see that
>>18403125
What is this, a lamp? You want it to like, bounce back and forth, like a dancing idle animation? If so, the whole green part should be moving back and forth, the middle more that the extremities, and the whole top part should move down and up again. Also, shouldn't the round part on top of the bulb come down and cover the bulb a little more?
Honestly this is pretty bad, it seems like a troll.
>>18405858
Also it doesn't look like it's moving its hips or gyrating, it looks like a mess. Also that one gray pixel on the wire that doesn't light up is annoying, shouldn't it light up, too?
Anyway, try doing the stuff I suggested.