English paper

Bumping for hopeful -A ):

I'll read it, where is it?

>>18020905
It's on my email, I'll share it with you.

It's google email though.

>>18020820
make sure u cite after almost every sentence. thats literally the only thing they take off points for in english classes.

>>18020908
Sweetie, don't email things to strangers on 4chan.

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>>18020908
I'm retarded with technology so I'm not sure why it being a google email matters. Post your email and I'll email you and then you email me the paper. Don't attach it because my computer is strange just copy and paste it as the text of your email.

Make sure you don't forget to floss regularly, stand up straight and do moderate exercise. Habibi.

Or if you can just copy and paste it here, that way more people can read it.

>>18020916
I was thinking I could share it, but I forgot I can send messages too. I'd post it here, but the character limit is a hinderance.

My email is [email protected] (I made this when I was like 13 I know)

>>18020927
>I was thinking I could share it, but I forgot I can send messages too. I'd post it here, but the character limit is a hinderance.

Why not just make multiple posts? I'm emailing you now

What's the prompt?

>>18020954
It's basically an event or a time in my life that influenced me in a significant way

I saw at least one conjunction, make sure to get rid of them. Maybe in a quote it's okay.

>Dealing with all sorts of customers but the worst were the ones that would leave a mess when they’d pay; spilled beer glasses, food on the floor, even cigarette butts on the plates.

See you can just say "when they pay" or "when they would pay" and the semicolon doesn't work here.

Seems meandering so far.

>>18020961
So, is it good to turn in? I really need an A. Could you italicize what I should get rid off please?

>>18020965
Okay I messaged you the corrections. There were a few grammatical mistakes. Your style could be honed in a little.