How is my rapping?

Advice?

>>17876941
Flows decent but everything else pretty mediocre

I don't know you, but unless you have some crazy shit to rap about that I'm not hearing, you'll be doomed. It's just too plain.

Maybe you're lyrics will mature as you grow older or you could just get a ghostwriter but I'm not feeling anything from this besides "what a nice kid"

Don't give up though, just want to speak truth

>>17876941
Lyrical spiritual individual for sure

>>17876941

boring rhyme, boring story, overproduced

if you dont sound good on an empty track ur not gonna sound good with orchestra & drums & synths & all that garbage

dont talk about "the rap game" or "real rap" no one gives a flying fuck

dont rely so heavily on the chorus

dont fucking repeat yourself so much

Thank you guys for the feedback

Anyone else have comments? Thanks