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English native speakers, I need your help.
Which of these two sentences is grammatically correct?
1: If you remove an already sold item from your wish list you will not be notified if it will be relisted.
2: If you remove an already sold item from your wish list you will not be notified if it is relisted.
Also, is the sentence clear.
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>>17771162
Non native here. Putting my yuros on #2
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>>17771162
both of them are correct, they just both mean different things.
the first one is saying that you will be notified if it is *going to be* relisted in the future.
the second one is saying that you will be notified *when* it is relisted. immediately.
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>>17771174
this is me but
i'm going to assume that you want to imply you are notified *when* it's relisted. that is what makes most sense in the sense that most people would expect that. so you want the 2nd one.
but the first one isn't grammatically incorrect is what i'm saying.
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2 is better but here is an even better sentence
>If you remove a sold item from your wish list you will not be notified if it is relisted.
The word already seems redundant since "sold" means you have succeeded in selling it
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>>17771178
>>17771181
thank you. So number 2 and remove "already".
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>>17771162
No 2 is correct friend.
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