can I get some constructive crit on my first vlog? tinyurl com

>Your speech is hard to hear.
-> Audacity -> boost voice frequencies
-> get better microphone
-> learn how to speak better
>Why do you show your face
>Why don't you have better background
>Why is half the video ducks?

Anyway if you want to be famous, make your videos longer (10+ minutes?) and talk about interesting things in interesting way.
Build your style and keep to it.
Don't except anything and you won't be disappointed in the end.

>>16943185
>why do you show your face
oh

>>16943185
what do you mean by learn how to speak better?

>>16943218
Ok, when you do this v-blogging, most information you put through your voice. In your video the voice was so low I couldn't catch every 3rd word.

Maybe you want to see good example: youtube channel TotalBiscuit. All the guy did to become famous was:
British accent
clever ideas in nice sentences
easy to hear voice in all his videos
and also his topics.

In your demo video you lack mostly the easy to hear voice and ofc some interesting topic. :-D

>>16943266
thanks bro, I guess all I have going for me is the British accent