Help with my cover letter?

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Yo /adv/, Im applying for a position as a research scientist at a startup nearby, and I need to know if my cover letter is up to snuff. My problem is that its being sent to a generic HR server, so I have no clue who to address it to. Here's what Ive got:


To whom it may concern:

It has come to my attention that Mucommune is scouting out candidates for a recently opened scientist position at your Chapel Hill location. With my strong background in research, breadth of experience, passion for hard work I believe I am an idea candidate for the position. I am amply qualified for this position, having knowledge of and experience with ELIZA, Western Blots, and Gel electrophoresis.

My strong personal work ethic, coupled with actual non-scholastic laboratory experience puts me ahead of most other recent graduates who may seek such a position. I have also long desired to be involved in healthcare, and see your company and its research as a natural fit.

Attached is my resume. I look forward to hearing back from your representatives and discussing how my skills can be put to work for your organization.

For your consideration,

anon