poem advice

it just depends, man.

Personally I think it's slightly cheesy in a cute as fuck way. ;_ ; be my sempai

>>16445428
you think so? if thats the case it should be alright.
shes into that stuff

>>16445432
tell me what i can change anon

and why the hell can't i quick reply in /adv/.

>>16445439
>>16445432
>>16445422
atleast contribute instead of samefagging anon

>>16445432
>calling a guy a fag for making poetry
stop feeding into hyper/toxic masculinity then yelling at feminists that there's "too much pressure on men"

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>>16445440
Lol its fine, short and to the point.

If i were you, instead of 24/7, id say "all day" to rhyme with "be my bae, what do you say?" but work your own magic with "day", its cool

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>>16445404
dude
dont do it. girls laugh at things like this, then show their friends and laugh as a group. the fact that you think this is acceptable/a good idea is indicative of a deeper problem. i think you need to reevaluate your perspective on women

>>16445462
thanks man
>>16445513
go play somewhere else

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>>16445513
Some women stay innocent enough throughout life thinking its very cute. Probably only 5% tho, but this man is right. Look at Miley Cyrus. Make sure shes very playful and artsy type.

>>16445404
I would slap your face for writing me such offensive "poem". Write another one or get lost! Ashhh... Jinja

>>16445553
just wrote it to her
we'll see how she reacts, then again, shes in love with me so no biggy

>>16445561
Yes but you are a guy so it's not of relevance for these matters anyways.