/Xeno/ Thread No. Д

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Story Time.

This is a segment from S.EXpedition by ebluberry.

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Page 65 and the first half of this page don't pertain to this section of the story so feel free to just ignore them.

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And donion rings.

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Studying xenos is important work

>>883292
>Namefag, SameFace and futa
Three cancers for the price of one.

>>883307
we should really think about putting a "no dickgirl shit" in the OP

>>883311
Let's not start splitting up the threads. It's already a niche enough fetish.

>>883311
I concur

>>883311
No.

>>883311
Fuck you, nigger.

So i brought it up here >>882872 but would you guys like a mod for free cities that introduces xenos?

>>883387
Yes. Even tough it is only text I would take it.

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>>883311
I've never understood why you guys hate futa so much.
Yeah, I get it, it's not your fetish, but so what? Why can't other people enjoy it?

I can't stand diaper shit and I hate seeing it, but those people have the same rights and privileges as us, so why can't they enjoy their fetish too?

I don't like everything I see on /aco/ but that doesn't mean I'm going to attack! Come on guys, you're better than this.

I believe in you

>>883449
I think I'll wait until the development of free cities is done first.
I get triggered just thinking about trying to fix the mod to work with every new version.

>>883406
Dayum froggies feet must be tiny

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>>883406

>>883509
So you think it'd be okay if people stared posting diaper shit in this thread if it was an alien wearing it?

>>883509
Diaper shit stays in its own threads. Scat and piss too. Pretty much every fetish except futa stays in its own thread and doesn't feel the need to insert itself everywhere.

It's the same reason people hate Furries and Bronies. They didn't stay in their own threads and it took global rule changes and a shitload of bans to change that.

On top of that, sometimes you can't recognize it at first glance. So you click on something thinking it's a chick, and instead you get a dude with tits. It's understandable that people get annoyed.

>>883576
>>883588
fuck off with this shit
anti-futa is getting more annoying than futa spam at this point

>>883588
You do understand the difference between futa and she makes right?

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So I've got a bit of a minor design dilemma going on here, lads.

Back in june I posted Smolxeno [pic related] but recently I got a little overly inspired by Slaanesh on the bus ride to school and I'm gonna redraw her again. Mostly some more reasonable changes like shortening the arms and thickening the legs and also giving a slight booty, not to [thicc] levels but just enough that it's not borderline skeletal. I'll also attempt to make her look a bit softer and cuddlier but still having a slightly menacing first impression, as was the original intention.

The more major design changes include:
-making her tongue really long and bumpy, as well as some form of mandible-type inner mouth, so that she can massage the dick while giving head, similar to the xeno in https://www.sofurry.com/view/654141
-making her tail a bit thicker with a less chitinous underside and replacing the spike on the tip with a sort of grabbing hand and a vagina-like opening in the middle that is capable of milking, because tail sex.
-giving her regular vagina a long tongue on the inside, based off this one slave chick you find in Corruption of Champions.

Now all I've got left is her ass, which is unfortunately the only thing vanilla at this point. Any thoughts?

>>883625
It's a distinction without a difference.
Cock = male
Futa fan = in the closet

And regardless, it should stay in its own thread.

>>883063
Who's the artist/animator for this?

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>>883627
On a slightly related topic, from the start I've had Smolxeno be a small, soft and cuddly sub slut.
One of the ideas I had today involved that if Smolxeno were to figure out a technique that made anon super weak [one idea was that she were to suck anon off with the tail and then give a rimjob/prostate play with her vagina tongue] that she would eventually become spoiled and dominant, and as such she would grow from being under 5ft with B or C cups and an overall petite body, to about 8ft tall or so with DD cups and a considerably thicker body. Obviously not chubby/BBW type thick, I'm not into that shit. Something more like [pic related] in regards to the thighs, at least.

Expanding on this [ha], I figured that her juices [especially from her tits] would be a form of light aphrodisiac, and growing stronger if she increases in size and aggression. Another small idea I had was that if Domxeno were taking charge long enough, her tongues [both in mouth and her vagoo] would turn into some form of tentacle dongs. Though I could hold off on that for now, considering the shitstorm happening right now in this thread.

>would you rather dick the small, soft, diminutive petite sub, or get dicked/tongued by the tall, aggressive buxom dom?

>>883640
get rid of the dick shit and I'll take the big xeno

>>883588
>>883630
The point is that futa is supposed to be a person that is feminine in body shape with a dick.
Most cases, it's about the whole act of being surprised that the cute girl you're about to fuck has a dick.

Aside from shemales and real-life examples of botched transgendered men/women, how many times have you seen men with tits? And by this I mean an obviously masculine person with a pair of tits?
That shit doesn't fucking happen, because guys and tits don't fit.

As for the futa=gay argument, no. I love dick, but I hate guys and love women. The closest solution is having a girl with a strapon, but having cold plastic and rubber between a woman's legs only goes so far.

Regardless, futa is such a broad topic that it's pretty much a thing in every other subject. Everything involving female characters will have a chance of having a dick, deal with it.

>>883630
Futa = biological female with a dick
Shemales = male with hormones and/or surgery to look female.

I'm fine with futa

And considering this is a xeno thread you should probably be expecting wierd

>>883644
Dick or no dick, the vagina tongue stays. Although in Domxeno's case, it's going into places.

>>883646
>being surprised that the cute girl you're about to fuck has a dick
what shitty and horrid surprise

>>883652
>what shitty and horrid surprise
What are you, fuckin' gay?

>>883656
no, that's the point

>>883627
>>883640
>>883651
Oh yeah, aside from coming up with what funky sexual horrors she possesses in her ass, I'm gonna need to think of a name, unless you guys really like 'Smolxeno' and 'Domxeno'. I was thinking of something related to a succ pun, considering how [almost] all of her orifices are related to mouths, sucking and milking, ha ha.

>>883646
>it's about the whole act of being surprised that the cute girl you're about to fuck has a dick
So, yeah, closeted gay.

>That shit doesn't fucking happen, because guys and tits don't fit.
And women and dicks don't fit. But since tits are a secondary sex characteristic and dicks are a primary sex characteristic, it's more medically accurate to say dudes with tits.

> I love dick, but I hate guys and love women.
This is what we call being in the closet. The sooner you realize that and accept that you're gay, the better off you'll be mental health wise.

>Regardless, futa is such a broad topic that it's pretty much a thing in every other subject. Everything involving female characters will have a chance of having a dick, deal with it.
You could make the exact same argument for diapers, scat, guro, and any number of fetishes. Yet futafags are the only ones who insist on invading other threads.

>>883648
>biological female with a dick
Literally biologically impossible. Those two things are mutually exclusive by definition.

>And considering this is a xeno thread you should probably be expecting wierd
Weird I can deal with. But otherwise vanilla characters with cocks slapped on them isn't the same thing as a weird monster. Keep it in it's own thread.

>>883640
>would you rather dick the small, soft, diminutive petite sub, or get dicked/tongued by the tall, aggressive buxom dom?
Smol, cuddly xeno best xeno

>>883665
it's called fantasy you dense nigger, of course futas are biologically impossible.
that's what makes them so appealing in the first place.

>it's more medically accurate to say dudes with tits.
Men do not possess vaginas.
Technically speaking , possessing male and female genitals makes a hermaphrodite. Are hermaphrodites men, now? Nigga you're stupid.

Also, being gay would imply that I do not like women in the first place. As I said before, I fucking love women, and I also love dicks. Don't twist my words, faggot. At best I would be bisexual, not homosexual. Considering the amount of SJWs trying to cram bullshit down our mouths every day, I would have expected you to know this.

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>>883640

Would rather dick the petite xeno.

>>883677
>Of course it's biologically impossible
So you admit that something with a dick isn't a girl. Good start.

>that's what makes them so appealing in the first place
No, what makes them appealing is that you can pound it to dicks and convince yourself that you're still straight.

>Technically speaking , possessing male and female genitals makes a hermaphrodite. Are hermaphrodites men, now?
No, hermaphrodites are individuals with an extremely rare congenital birth defect.
But that's beside the point. 90% of futa posted on this site isn't hermaphroditic. "Muh hermaphrodites" is just an excuse. If I mostly smoked crack and smoked weed maybe once a month, I'd still be a crackhead, and nobody would buy me saying I'm just a stoner.

>As I said before, I fucking love women, and I also love dicks
And as I said before, you're in denial.

>Don't twist my words
I don't think you know what that means

>At best I would be bisexual
This is also a possibility. But if you prefer dicks to pussies, you're more homo than bi.

>Considering the amount of SJWs trying to cram bullshit down our mouths every day
You know who argues for nonexistent genders and tries to claim that you can have a penis and still be a woman? SJWs.

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>>883677
>>883698

Ladies please. You're both pretty.

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>Cute face
>Cute voice
>Cute personality
>Also wears a hoodie, as if she wasn't perfect enough already
>Easily a top contender for best mass effect waifu
and then
>Sidelined to some garbage dlc in which she is the only redeeming quality
>She's forced to play second fiddle to the generic blue tsundere bitch that literally nobody cares about
>She can't be romanced.
>She can't be permanently added to the squad.
>She can't even be saved from her own nonsensical death.
>Her 'heroic sacrifice' was so pointless and poorly executed that it's barely even acknowledged by other characters. All she gets is a couple of offhand mentions by the bad guy.
>The only reason she had to die was because Bioware didn't want the dlc to have any loose ends

Fucking Bioware, man. Such a needless waste. Why even bother going to all that trouble if you're just going to kill her off in some hamfisted way? Yes I'm mad.

>>883710
don't forget how 3 made pretty much everything that happens in 2 pointless

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>>883698
Well it seems you are incapable of listening to just about any argument, and if anybody is in the closet, it must be you.

It is difficult to argue with an intelligent person, and impossible to argue with an imbecile.

Have a girldick, you undeniably heterosexual man.
Ironically enough, it just happens to be the only futa ayy I have on my hard drive. What a pity.

>>883712
>don't forget how 3 made pretty much everything pointless
Fixed that for you.

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>>883710

Don't remind me. I'm still mad salty about that.

Bioware is such a fucking shithouse of a company.

>>883714
>Well it seems you are incapable of listening to just about any argument
I've countered every point you've made. You're out of arguments and now you're trying to weasel out of it. Sad.

>It is difficult to argue with an intelligent person, and impossible to argue with an imbecile.
I dunno, arguing with you has been extremely easy and you're pretty stupid. I think you're just bad at arguing.

>girldick
No such thing :^)

>just happens to be the only futa ayy I have on my hard drive
Good. The less of that cancer to clog up our thread the better.

I'm not telling you what to like. I'm telling you to keep your fetish in its own thread. I don't go posting real women in futa threads, and I expect the same level of courtesy. Your fetish isn't the problem, it's your behavior. If futafags just stayed in their own threads, nobody would be complaining.

>>883730
>If futafags just stayed in their own threads, nobody would be complaining.

This really is the only problem with futa, imho. I for one don't care what gets you off, that's none of my business, but you have to admit it's pretty obnoxious that futa fans insist on spamming their fetish in other threads. No other fetish group does this. You'd be pissed if I came into a futa thread and started posting non-futa images. So why do you think it's OK to do the opposite?

>>883730
>>883742
Like I said before, futa is a very broad topic and pretty much everything has a futa version.

>>883663
Milkubus?

>>883744
Oh come on, that's a bullshit argument and you know it. You could make that argument for pretty much any fetish.

You have your own thread. Usually multiple threads. On two different boards. There's no excuse. The diaperfags, the vorefags, even the fatfags all stay in their own threads. Why can't you?

>>883730
>>883742
>>883744
I normally stay out of discussions and just come in to post shit and leave, but I'll take this small opportunity to say that although I like futa, regular girls are good too. And before you start accusing me of anything, I admit that I find a lot of futa porn to be below average, usually because of how the dicks [or the women in general] are drawn.

Seriously, just hide the posts or some shit. I'm not into the gay xenos or the BBWs or the eldritch horror-tier xenos, and I especially dislike Mass Effect stuff because of how common and oversaturated they may be, but at least I don't cause a shitstorm over the things I don't like, even if they're posted in literally every single thread. Just post xenos and fap, lads.

>>883753
Well, I was hoping for an actual name. Something that doesn't straight-out scream 'FETISH FUEL', despite the fact that Smolxeno is exactly that.

Every thread I love always has these insipid fucking debates and every time I have to wait for you niggers to get tired of screeching and go away so things can resume normally

Can't you guys just bitch about bioware or talk about how awful a lot of alien designs are?

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>>883627
You make the inside of her ass have cillia like pic related

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>>883768

But I've already been bitching about Bioware though, it's pretty much beating an already dead horse at this point.

>>883783
Okay, uh, what's a good company? One that puts out games or movies or whatever that do really fucking great alien media?

Open our eyes to other quality niggas

>>883742
>spamming
Theres only one futa pic ITT.
If this thread actually starts getting spammed by futafags then I'll listen to what you have to say.

>>883509
King of the Hill feat. Big Boss

>>883787
The ben 10 aliens actually have some good designs and if you look at the concept art you can tell they wanted to go more grotesque/horror themed with them.

>>883798
Oh God, don't start me on that shit

How does that nigga adventure through a fucking UNIVERSE of 10/10 alien bebs and end up with the normie human girl

HOWWWW

>>883803
Normie audience is how

>>883765
Well, what kind of style of name are you thinking/wanting? Descriptive, weird-sounding, way too many apostrophes?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vp4DzRFSeq8
You might like this somewhat low budget alien movie. The full movie can be found on youtube.

>>883813
My usual naming convention for a handful of races so far involved taking a descriptive word and running it through google translate, taking whichever translation sounded the best, and fucking with the spelling a bit.

But considering the inspiration for Smolxeno being from a discussion months ago about if xenomorphs were engineered to be sex toys instead of killing machines, I had her originating from genetic engineering and being the only one of her kind, rather than being an actual race. Just in case if it wasn't clear enough up to now.

So possibly some """normal""" name may work. something fancy or foreign sounding, probably like if a human were to come up with an alien name lel.

One thing that just came to mind was 'Genesis' but that's really generic and doesn't feel right.

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>>883798

They do have some rather cool designs in that show.

I'd totally dick Verdona.

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>>883719
Sorry to reopen old wounds, anon. I just needed to vent. I only got around to playing that dlc not long ago and it's been annoying me ever since.

>>883828
>project genesis
>creature nicknamed Jennie, but spelled with a G instead of a J

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>>883842
>the look on Shep's face
I'd be scared too.

But then who am I to talk, my ayys are even toothier.

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>>883839

It's too late, anon. The damage is done, only ayy porn can save me now.

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>>883847
Nah they're mouths aren't that scary. They just gotta be careful is all.

>>883852
Shame that like 90% of Nyreen's porn has Aria in it too. I don't want to hate Aria, but I have to hate her out of principal.

>>883860
>tits on a turian
Whyyyyy?

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>>883864
'Cause normies literally cannot function without titts slapped on their porn. Even when it's absurd, biologically incorrect and completely out of place.

>>883868
I just like tits...

>>883868
I don't even fap to Turians, it just irks me that they're slapped on when a) it's not canon and b) it makes no biological sense.

>>883873
Me too anon, but suspension of disbelief can only get you so far

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>>883832

>>883929
Which zone animation did they trace over for this one?

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>>883990

All of them probably.

>>883875
>suspension of disbelief can only get you so far

I think i'm familiar with this.

If i understand this right, a non-porn example would be to try to watch old scifi with a serious face. This takes a lot of doing. Sometimes it gets so silly from being so outdated, i have to give up.

I guess same goes with fetishes for certain body parts in some situations.

>>884039
Bingo.

It's like watching OG Star Trek and trying not to laugh at the effects, or the fact that the most advanced starship in the Federation is using tapes.

>>884059 (Different anon)
You can still enjoy it, though. Just in a different way. Naw, I can't watch OG Star Trek straight, but I can laugh at it in an appreciable 'so this is what they thought things would be like/sheer silly entertainment' kinda way.

I still want real-life tricorders. We've GOT to be getting close, huh?

>>883588
>>883509
Futa is a very broad fetish with a much higher population than diaper and scat combined. Even still, most futa pornography is quite mild compared to the former. If you tried to force futa into it's own thread, it would need to have it's own thread for each little niche there was, otherwise it'd be a total mess; and if you did that, then no thread would have enough posters aside from maybe a futa general.

I'm really disappointed in you guys.

>>884138
Oh yeah no, I love old school Trek. Been watching it since I was a kid. The sheer amount of top-grade ham and cheese in that show is unparalleled.

I mean in a lot of ways the smartphone is a primitive combination of a tricorder and a communicator, just much smaller and with a radically different interface.

>>884149
Yeah, true. In some small ways we've surpassed Trek already, but it's a shame it's gonna take so long (or is impossible) to get to the juicy stuff.

I miss speculative fiction tv shows. Seems like most just don't happen these days. Everyone's too depressed.

>>884148
>Futa is a very broad fetish with a much higher population than diaper and scat combined
Just because there's more of you doesn't mean you have an excuse.

>If you tried to force futa into it's own thread, it would need to have it's own thread for each little niche there was, otherwise it'd be a total mess; and if you did that, then no thread would have enough posters aside from maybe a futa general
That sounds like it's more your problem than mine.

Besides, xeno has tons of variations and they all fit into the same thread. It's possible; get over yourselves.

>>884150
>a shame it's gonna take so long (or is impossible) to get to the juicy stuff.
Like qt ayylmaos
>why live?

>I miss speculative fiction tv shows
I want to create one more than anything. But I also refuse to live in Cuckifornia, so that's unlikely.

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>>884152
I really don't understand;
what is this pathological hatred of penises?

Gay stuff is sometimes posted in xeno threads, and while I'm not fond of the stuff it has as much of a right to be posted in this thread as futa. I rarely see gay posters get harassed over this.
I'm genuinely concerned you might have a psychological disorder. I don't mean to insult you, but I think you may have an actual problem. Have you considered speaking to a councilor about this?

>>884162
he's not the only you hates dickgirl shit, get over yourselves and accept many people hate the shitty fetish that gets forced everywhere

>>884167
I get it, it does get forced sometimes but I've never seen such a thing happen in these threads.

There really is very little futa posted in xeno threads, now that you mention it. Less than 5% of the posts are futa on average.

I think you need to get over yourself, friendo. Your attitude regarding this is unacceptable. You're behaving like a spoiled child.

There are some instances where yes, futa posters get way out of line but that has not happened here. It's time you deal with the fact other people have other fetishes. Don't like it? Hide the fucking post.

>>884162
You sound like a Feminist. Sly, backhanded insults and no argument.

>>884174
The amount in this thread is irrelevant. It's a problem board wide and needs a containment thread, and those rules need to apply to every thread or it won't work.

>>884184
Why does it need a containment thread? And no, it is not a problem board wide. You're literally manufacturing your own narrative to support your argument.

Look at yourself. You're just as bad as barneyfags.

>>884186
You yourself admitted it gets out of hand. I'm not the only poster who's gotten annoyed by its prevalence in threads it has no business in. Just like the diaper and scat fags, and just like /xeno/, you have to keep your shit in one thread.

>>884184
>>884187

I really am disappointed. I had hoped I could convince you to see the light and learn to tolerate your fellow posters. I can see now that your hatred blinds you to any logical discussion.

I hope one day you will be able to coexist with others.

>>884188
You really sound like an SJW. Sanctimonious, smug and weaselly.

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>>884190
2bad

>>883990
Reiko the biker girl I think

>>883757
Because they see futa as a sub fetish, that can be freely applied to other threads without issue, probable used to doing so without issue on /d/ before the split, they can perceive how much of an intrusion they are to people who see futa as a step towards being gay, also on old /d/ civil fetish talk was a thing, compared against the stone walling "out faggot" tone they get here, because for some insanity they think liking cocks isn't gay, instead of realizing they aren't welcome thwy try to debate thinking the rest of us are ignorant instead of that they are the ones with shit tastes

>>884190
I've seen SJWs talk, honestly your posts resemble them more, deaf to any opinion that doesn't reflect a personal narrative, constantly acting like being offended gives you the moral high ground, claiming to refute an argument when all you did was paraphrase the same general sentanced infinatly, and constantly moving the goalposts of the debate

>>884251
It's the same issue /h/ had with people not wanting dickgirl shit everywhere and what lead to the containment board /d/ being made. Even back before /aco/ was ever made people on /d/ complained of the absurd amount of dickgirl shit and how there was a thread for every stupid littler different version of dickgirl grabage.

>>883868
Hurr durr nobodies boobies can be bigger then mine fucking Normie's reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeEEEEEEEEEE

>>884259
On /d/ it got to levels of stupidity these threads could never dream of "futa with glasses" "futa with guns" "futa wit short hair"

Wanting to offer some content to a xeno thread that is relivant to the topic, but happens to be futa is a different thing, the first is much worse as it was activly degenerating into spam, this is futa fags being compelled to step out of their shelter and confront just how niche their fetish really is and how little it's cared for in real life. The message that they should be ashamed of who they are just like diaper fags will eventually set in

>>884260
Anon are you okay? Should I call a paramedic? You appear to be having a stroke.

>>884190
>>884258
>two smug contrarians trying to out-strawman each other over the concept of being considerate of other users

>>884307

New here?

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Aww man, I came here to make happy times to some sexy pictures of freaky skittering alien spider-snake monsters, but a bunch of dumb jerks just keep on posting a bunch of those gosh darn penises!

>>884339
I know, they're so inconsiderate/annoying

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>>883840
>Jennie / Genni
...Damn, that's actually pretty good.

>>884148
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>>884167
>>884174
>>884184
>>884186
>>884187
>>884188
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>>884259
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>>884339
>>884343
>You lot are seriously making such a big deal out of futa and then completely ignore the full-blown 100% male gay xenos posted right in the middle of the argument
You people are fucking killing me here. Is it really too hard for you to hide the post or just scroll past it? Oh, you saw a girl with a dick today, boo hoo. Day after day in every single thread I visit I see shit that just shrinks my dick the moment I see it but you don't see me throwing a hissy fit because one nigga has tastes different than mine.

Come on guys, you can do better than this. Not saying you have to like it, just stop throwing a tantrum and acting superior to somebody else on a board where EVERYBODY is a fuckign degenerate.
You're all faggots whether you like ladydick or not. Now shut up and post more xenos. It's too early in the morning for me to be dealing with this shit.

>>884398

What program are you using to make those models.

shit tier artist taking requests, ask away

>>884412
Lewd Doom Pain Elemental.

You heard me.

>>884412

An alien grey sucking boba fetts dick

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>>884412
A Spathi stroking a human's cock with his tentacle body.

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>this whole fucking thread

>>884415
That's a demon yo
>>884429
Seems fun, is she stroking the cock with her neck?

Also a gray sucking boba feet seems cool

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>>884412
>>884423

A hot Kaminoan slut deep throating boba fetts gigantic cock.

>>884450
>Seems fun, is she stroking the cock with her neck?
I had imagined it as her coiling her eyestalk around it and stroking it with that. I'm not sure it would normally be long enough to do that, but porn magic doesn't have to worry about such things.

>>884412
Xenomorph babe spreading her tight butthole!

>>884251
The crux of the issue here is that this isn't /d/. I don't care what they do on /d/, but this isn't /d/. They have a whole fucking board where they can spam dicks to their closeted hearts' content, but still feel the need to come here.

>>884258
That sounds more like what he was doing than me. And, key to all this, I'm not trying to force something on anyone. You lot are. That's the core of SJWdom: forcing other people to like your shitty fake gender or else they're a big meanie.

Nothing I've said is based on personal narrative, it's based on wanting you vermin to live by the same rules as everyone else. You're the one who thinks your fetish is a special snowflake that's exempt from the rules.

Never did I claim to be offended or act like that gave me the moral high ground. This is an actual strawman.

I'm forced to re-state my core point because you're either too dense to get it, or you're deliberately missing it.

Where did I move the goalposts?

>>884272
>On /d/ it got to levels of stupidity these threads could never dream of
Proof positive that futafags will do that if given the chance, and that it should be nipped in the bud while we still can.

>this is futa fags being compelled to step out of their shelter and confront just how niche their fetish really is
Good. It's well past time they learned they don't run this site and can't just do whatever they want.

>The message that they should be ashamed of who they are just like diaper fags will eventually set in
If that's what it takes to get them to fuck off back to their own threads, then so be it.

>>884307
>strawman
I don't think you know what that means

>>884398
Oh boy, some irrelevant namefag is disappointed in me, whatever shall I do? /Sarcasm

>>884439
The difference is that this is not /d/. It's turned into /d/ II: Electric Boogaloo, but that's due to incompetent moderation. /aco/ was supposed to be Western /h/.

>>884527
It's not western /h/ either, and xeno would fall under the /d/ catagory, /aco/ has morphed into its own animal and everyone seems to act as if they know what it is, but it's us, all of us.

Also seriously why are you more mad at futa content then actual gay content?

>>884561
>xeno would fall under the /d/ catagory
Not necessarily.

>Also seriously why are you more mad at futa content then actual gay content?
Because it's a bait and switch. Regular males you can easily identify and just not click, but with futa you often think it's a girl only to discover a man with tits after you've clicked it. I don't care if people are gay, I do care when every thread is a bloody minefield.

>>884561
Its a transition, two different hentai communities who have been sheltered from one another effectivly forced to share the same space, the mad is a matter of principal, trying to gain a victory where none can be had.

>>884574
I guess browsing e621 has taught me that this is just an inevitablity, I find a pic that looks good, suddenly it turned out to be scat or gore, suddenly an unexpected dick disn't seem so bad, also I've been to /h/ never saw a xeno thread there

>>884584
Yeah, well not everyone is as degenerate as you.

There's also like no Nip xeno content, besides that one thing with the pussy hand-ear things that gets posted almost every thread.

>>884577
>two different hentai communities who have been sheltered from one another effectivly forced to share the same space
The only people forcing anyone are the futafags by refusing to stay in their own threads.

>>884527
>I'm not forcing them to deny basic facts that I don't feel like understanding, YOU'RE forcing me to inhabit a world where you exist without bullying you out of it!
Trying to get something removed from existence just because its presence clashes with your worldview? Sounds exactly like the sort of person that would act like disagreeing with them is an act of war.

>>884595
Not removed from existence you sophist. Contained to it's own thread. I know it's almost Halloween, but keep the strawmen under control.

This one guy is quite dense. He goes to such an effort to justify thread separation because simply because he doesn't like certain content, and is very keen on using pronouns 'we', 'us' etc. like he were some goddamn representitive.

I don't even have to read all details he's so painstakingly commenting on as that's only a distraction from a very simple issue.

Fetishes are not a probem, because as said many times, they can be scrolled past and ignored, and desensitizing yourself to dislikeable content is not that hard if you are willing to even try. What is now a problem is that this guy wishes to obstruct mine and somebody elses pleasure for a petty reason.

>>884678
This is why people are annoyed with you.

You're just as bad as him. You didn't really respond to half of what he said, and then act like you're so much better and above everyone else. You do most of the shit you accuse him of.

Fetishes can be a problem, if they're forced and their fanbases don't play by the rules. Futa is a niche fetish. Every other niche fetish has it's own thread and stays there. What makes you any different?

>he wants to obstruct my pleasure

And that's the crux of the issue. You just want to do whatever you want, and act like you own the site, and if someone doesn't like it, fuck 'em. Meanwhile if you don't like someone's actions then they're a hateful manchild or whatever. I don't care about futa but any fetish fanbase that behaves like you is annoying desu senpai

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>>884758
>>884678
Shut the fuck up both of you

>tfw anon comes in to save the thread with alien dicks
My hero.

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>>884784

I concur, niggas need to shut up and post ayy lewds.

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>>884803
If you got em post em.

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>>884824

>>884803
Wow homo bro to the rescue. Not even into dudes but I love ya right now

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Not sure if alien or demon, could be either

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>>884813
Too bad there's not much porn of RoR, not even straight.

>>884862

>multi-segmented insect anatomy
>bizarre design choices like the weird arms that help it look truly alien
>can't figure out how to manipulate neotenian attraction or fisherian selection to make people want to fuck something so foreign
>just slap a bunch of giant tits on it lol

>>884879
>tfw kissing that would result in a nasty, excrutiating death
Goddammit, Giger, always mixing the sexy with the horrible...

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Reposting my request for the Xim guy.

>Basically I would like another chastity pic. But this time it is a human grill in a chastity cage that only allows anal sex. A bunch of male ayys are around and she is giving them head and one fucks her ass while they talk and some watch ayy lmao porn in holograms. The main one could have a speech bubble saying something like "Good girl, you have endured these 2 weeks well. Just 2 more and we will let you back on earth. Remember: if you don't get your quota filled you we wont let you out of the belt or back to earth!" and in the wall there is a progress bar showing her quota and how she is just about 40% done. You can choose the alien race too. Grays are ok but feel free to try something like Turians or such.

>If you need better clarifications and such feel free to ask.

>>884856
Are her pubes shaped like a fucking pot leaf?

>>884814
>>884818
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>>884825
Snekman comes in to save the thread

>>885025
seems fun, female chast is underrated

Should the Aliens look ripped as fuck, female like ( femboy ), or normal?

Alien like dicks or humanoid dicks?

Will draw, looks like i've got a ful week ahead of me

>>884464
there's a lack of kominoan porn, so kominoan it is!

>>885265
The aliens should look manly. Feel free to make some ripped and some more normal looking.

Go wild with the dicks. As long as they can be sucked and used to analy penetrate her, and blow loads it;s ok.

>>885295
alright, the human should be chubby/normal or?

>>885335
Hmmm, a regular girl should work. Maybe a little THICC but not overweight.

>>885355
thicc it is

>>884796
is that a fucking space jockey

>>884879
the lips are shopped right

>>885572
Yes, from the original movie no less.

>>885581
No, that was the concept design for the xeno in aliens 3. The movies was going to be in a monastery full of monks and this more human-like xeno would seduce and kill them like a succubus. I believe it was also going to knock Ripley up too.

>>885590
>monastery
>not mentioning it was meant to be a wood and iron spheroid space station

>>884879
Real talk though, if xenos were like the 'female' version, and still did the tongue thing but without the 'ripping out the organs' part, would you let her kiss you?

>>885795
What kind of fucking fucking question is that

>>885907
I know right? It's an obvious, resounding yes.

>>883509
>i believe in you

That was your first mistake.

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Just cooked up a new concept of Smolxeno based off of >>883627 and >>883640, thoughts?

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>>886256
And the Domxeno edition.

Also, Smolxeno would be soft and a light pink, while Domxeno is a bit more tough and leathery, and a bit of a purple color.

>>886256
>>886265
http://www.mrinitialman.com/OddsEnds/Sizes/compsizes.xhtml
this might help you

>>886269
Yes, I know how scale works.

>>886265
Anywhere I can get amazonian women to dominate is good with me

Though what the hell is the pussy tongue? I don't wanna get my dick bit off because there's teeth down there

>>886283
Don't worry senpai, it's just the tongue.

>>883104
oh, oh, i know who that is. Thats reksin, the leg champerino

>>886256

I like the design. Good work, but I find the smaller alien more appealing.

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>autists getting mad about posting aliens with alien genitalia and anatomy in the alien thread
There is some serious irony in getting autistically bootyblasted about futa in a thread about ALIENS, one of the only reasons futa anatomy could be justified.

It would be extra ironic if the first ayys to show up did in fact have tits and a dick, just to spite you.

>>884464
Holy shit, that's genius. I didn't know I needed this in my life.

>>885265
HYPE

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>>885025
>only allows anal sex
>chastity
This is considered chastity? You do know it's possible to have anal orgasms, right?

Anyway, I like the idea.

>>886385
That's actually rather unlikely to happen. Using our own fauna we can see that higher lifeforms are male/female and only more basic organisms have species that are hermaphrodites.

Oh shit lads

I just reverse-searched >>884856 [source is http://derekhetricknsfwart.tumblr.com/post/146379588754] and holy shit it's the biggest treasure trove of eldritch monster girls I've ever seen in ages.

But anyway, one idea I got is to give Smolxeno/Gennie some form of titty-mouths, like with this character: http://derekhetricknsfwart.tumblr.com/post/127044200164
Definitely not doing the teeth though, just to be clear.

So should I give Domxeno some form of breast-mouths? Could be as little as lips on each tit or as much as a full-blown mouth [without the teeth of course].

Aside from that, looking back at >>886265 I can say that domxeno's breasts, hips, and thighs could most likely use an increase in size.

>>886385
>It would be extra ironic if the first ayys to show up did in fact have tits and a dick
Not really. They'd just be males with tits, which can happen in Humans.

>>886494
Inverted nipple with "lips" could be really cool

I think making her thicker would be great, maybe draw the legs a little longer? i think it'd look great

>>886389
Anal orgasms are a thing indeed, but they are much harder. Not to mention most people who think they can have them are actually gay phaggots who are having prostate orgasms.

>>886494
>So should I give Domxeno some form of breast-mouths? Could be as little as lips on each tit or as much as a full-blown mouth

Do you want them to be there for the sake of implications, or to make some sense, or both?

>>887118
This would be easy to make sense out of. These "lips" could have controllable musculature for some reason that allows them to produce movement similarly to real lips on one's mouth.

On a sidenote bAv, would you qualify these beings as mammals - mammal analogues - or something else? Have to ask because they have tits.

>>887411
In my professional observation, she's fucking terrifying

>>887118
Noted, I'll try doing that.

>>887411
Mostly just because she was engineered to b a sentient fucktoy, I figured I might as well do something with her tits since everything else is so weird.
As for their classification, not entirely sure. Gennie was part of humanity's first attempt to make it's own lifeform from scratch, and is the first one with genetics stable enough to survive more than a few weeks or months, before it all got shut down. She's got genetics from so many different critters, it'd be more accurate to say she's some form of amalgamation or chimera, rather than saying she's just from one group.

>>887639
heh. Not to worry, she only uses the bits that her companion is attracted to; if she ralizes a trait is unattractive, she hides it and never uses it again, unless it can eventually be used in combination with something else to heighten the pleasure.

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I just had my wisdom teeth removed earlier today and my fucking mouf hurts.

Can someone do a qt xenomorph dentist/nurse? It'd make me feel a whole lot better. Good fap might help the pain.

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9 Inch statue of best waifu (and her spectacular ass) is currently on sale from the bioware store for 60(us) dollars. Available in 2 flavors.

http://www.biowarestore.com/collectibles/statues/talizorah-bishoujo-statue.html

Picture oh so related.

>>889114

That's actually pretty cool, would buy.

Too bad I don't want to give Biofaggots my money.

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>>889114
I have this

>>889171
>Impact font
That box that box looks like a Chinese bootleg but christ her ass is out of this world. I'm gonna have to pick one up one of these.

>>889171

>ASS EFFECT
I hope that was intentional.

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This just in, Sweden YES!

http://archive.is/YMICg

I for one welcome our sexy alien overlords.

>>889214
>aliens send bottles of lube to Earth

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>>889214
>>889220
>aliens send giant dildos with the lube

>>889214
>implying aliens have not perfected medicine and are able to cure everything
>implying female aliens cant control their own reproductive organs to prevent pregnancy.
>implying aliens prefer sex to acquire useful knowledge.

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>>889318

Don't ruin the fantasy.

>>889114
>>889171
>dat ass
It's nice to see the sculptors remember what's important.

Anyone got female Batarians, Turians or Protheans? Maybe some female Krogans or Vorcha?

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Is Wraith still hip?

>>883633
http://sta.sh/0luoe564ddp

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>>889671
Wraith is very hip(s).

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>>889717
Good.

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>>888782
not a drawfag, but here's a female turian nurse in bad quality. hope it helps lad.

>>883509
> I believe in you
>4chan
get off 4chan you hippy nigger

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>>889799
Laddie, what are we supposed to see?

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>>889799
found bigger version

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>>889671
Wraith is all hip

>>890024
thanks

>>890013
that was what your supposed to see.

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>>883063
Stop bitching around and post porn goddamit

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>>884879

reminds me of the kp0988 sfm model.

have some oc.

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>>890652

i'm thinking of animating it, but it looks like futa.

if you look carefully, it's actually a pretty little girl xenomorph scissoring with ripley.

>>890652
>>890659
Very nice. It doesn't look like futa to me. Would recommend tucking Ripley's left leg more under the xenomorph's though, just to make it more clear that they're rubbing clits.

>>890175

What started it all.

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Alright, so, I know it's been a while and I don't know if anyone still cares but I'm finally working on part 4 of Adventures of Tash and John. I've had my life get in the way, way to goddamn much so I haven't even been able to browse the thread really let alone get any real work done. So if you're in the mood to read something I'll post a pastebin link since I don't want to shit up the thread with my writefag spam.

Adventures of Tash and John Ch 4: http://pastebin.com/PKdgh6CF (UNFINISHED)

Something else I've been working on as well;

The New Holland Incident: http://pastebin.com/KLD1Td9j (also UNFINISHED)

Going to try and smash these out as soon as I can. Enjoy /xeno/

>>890550
This feels like the most early millennium cg porn ever given a remaster

>>890973
it's ancient furry porn that I'm pretty sure is older than some people that post here

>>890549
>Way the cock rests against his cheek

This is the most hottest thing i have seen in a long time.

>>890938
D-damn..!

>>890916
I thought you died.
Welcome back.

>>884031
why does this artist only draw markiplier

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>>884869
>>884810
>>884808
>boobs and even lips on a xenomorph
makes me ree but I save it anyways. wish there was enough material for me to be as picky as I'd like to be

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>>891626
Thanks, I appreciate it. On an unrelated note I didn't realize how hard it was to find an editor to look over your stuff and just tell you simple things like when you've made a gramatical error. If anyone has any tips I would sure appreciate it.

>>892449
Hey, I get super autistic about grammar when I'm drunk and would be happy to review your stuff if you want. Just post a link!

>>892473
Sure, thanks, I'd appreciate it. Pastebin links okay? If so please see >>890916 . If not, let me know what format works best.

>>890916
Good to have you back. I really need to be more productive too.

>>892672
>http://pastebin.com/PKdgh6CF
Sure thing! I'll start now. My usual disclaimer of "I am a hypocritical buttface and may not obey all grammar rules I criticize you on in my own comments" applies. (English really needs a punctuation mark that separates clauses other than a comma, because that last sentence was confusing, but grammatically correct AFAIK.)

>The poking stopped and a low and somehow familiar voice followed it up.
>“Ah, so you are awake.” The voice, a males voice, said.
I believe this should all be on one line. In general, try to keep all dialogue and actions done by one character on the same line. You can also shorten the extremely awkward clause on the second line to "a male voice said."

>L36: typo, should be "rubbed"

>L48: “That makes, what? Three times this trip so far?.” John jabbed at her
nix the period after the question mark, other than that, it's correct

>L56: Because what female in her right mind would want to destroy her genetic line with something so obviously incompatible and alien.
Question mark here. Even if it's rhetorical, eve if it's her thought, it's still a question.

t.b.c.

>>892672
>>892979
*even, ugh, I can type.

>L58: claimed someone from out of the Kai'ani species.
Believe "outside of the Kai'ani" would be more correct here.

>L64: that you wanted 'swallow my meat pole'.”
Hahahahaha. I've been there. But getting back to the review, you missed the verb "to" in this sentence.

>L66: as she listened to John recall to her about how when
Recall doesn't seem like the right verb here. How about "recount" or "John told her how she had..."

>L68: “The Captain made an announcement not long ago that we would be arriving in the Seya system soon.” John told her, changing the subject after taking a few moments to chuckle and smile like an idiot at his girlfriends reaction to her previous night's escapades.
You're really missing an opportunity for character development here. Show their dialogue as she's embarrassed by what she did while blacked out and he laughs it off.

>L70: A few minutes after a crewman came by to make sure everyone was secure the ship began it's deceleration out of warp.
Needs a comma after 'secure'

>L76: “Just feeling little sick.”
Should be "Just feeling a little sick," unless you mean to emphasize that she's not speaking, or not good at, English.

>L78: John asked once again, a slight tone of concern in his voice.
Totally subjective, but I believe you should drop everything after the comma. The fact that he's asking shows us that he's concerned for her. Try to omit as many words as possible while still keeping the same meaning. Naturally, I'm way better at editing than I am at writing in regards to this piece of advice...

I'd nix the "now" on L80 and 82. It's fairly clear these events are happening in sequence and having the extra "now" word seems clunky and distracts from the rest of the sentence.

>>892672
>>893030
>L84: there was a stigma to being seen as weaker than a male, weaker than the ones who can't carry life within them.
Excellent job describing the view of another culture! But I believe the "can't" here should be "couldn't" to match the verb tense of the rest of the sentence. I believe it's grammatically correct to add a comma after "Sure" earlier in this sentence too.

>L86: Yup, definitely something wrong with her.
Tiny nitpick, as I could definitely see this being artistic license with her thoughts, but perhaps this should be "Yep, there was definitely something..."?

Add a paragraph after this sentence and before "The couple left..." to help the reader notice a change between her musings and the action in the story.

>L88: Tashaiea knowing herself would have probably
Tashaiea, knowing herself, probably would have

>since she had seen the Light Giver of Kai. The yellow dwarf star that had given life to her home planet
Kai: The yellow dwarf star
(The second clause here cannot stand on its own as an independent sentence, so it must depend on the first.)

>L90: John asked her, causing Tashaiea to break away from her thoughts of home.
This is pretty clunky. How about "John asked her, interrupting her reverie" or "breaking her out of her reverie" or something similar?

>L92: her favorite desert
Dessert is the edible kind :) English fucking sucks.

>L104-106: The older woman obviously noticed that she had inadvertently sneaked up on the younger Kai'ani, so she held her palms out in a gesture of 'I come in peace'. When Tashaiea visibly relaxed Petran continued.

>“Sorry, I didn't mean to startle you.” The older Kai'ani apologized.
This should be on the same line as the previous action since the primary actor/focus of the action is the same as the speaker. I'd nix the "obviously noticed that she had inadvertently sneaked up on the younger Kai'ani" part unless we can read her mind - the palms-up "I'm harmless" posture communicates that well enough.

>>892672
>>893063
Hey, I do want to pause here and say that honestly, your grammar is very good, and none of what I've been pointing out would stop me from reading your story. I'm only ripping on you this hard because you asked for grammar nazi critique.

I do think this part is dragging on a little bit, but that maybe because I haven't read the preceding chapters.

If I could give you one piece of advice, it would be to work on your dialogue tags. You don't need to perfectly describe every sequence of events that happens or every feeling a character has - your dialogue is the strongest part of your narrative and stands on its own. See if you can omit and/or smooth out some of these dialogue tags down where possible.

>>893072
I appreciate you looking it over for me, and a grammar nazi critique is exactly what I'm looking for. I can't improve if I'm not told where I messed up, no matter how small it is. I've been adding your suggestions as you've been suggesting them. As for it dragging a bit, I noticed that as well. I got into a bit of a slump at that point and it ended up kind of turning out not really how I had anticipated. I'll see if I can trim the dialogue some. I always have this nagging feeling like I'm not giving enough character to my characters. Thanks again.

>>893090
Want to chat or email or some other kind of private medium? I just realized I was not in fact posting on the /efg/ thread and thus, my critique would probably not interest any other posters.

>>893090
>>893072

I also forgot to add that with Tashaiea when you see broken dialogue it's mostly on purpose. As the chapters go on I've been slowly improving her English. When she's talking perfectly you can assume she is speaking in her native language if it's not already stated. I also just wrote another page and a half and bumped it to the pastebin.

>>893092
Sure, throw me an email at humaboo.anon on gmail. I was planning on sleeping soon, but I can put that off for another time.

>>893097
Oh god, this is awkward. GMail now wants me to feed them my phone number before it will let me log into my account for this sort of purpose.

How about titanpad? Then we can chat and edit in real time.

>>893097
>>893111
nm, just sent you an email from an old yahoo throwaway account, lmk if you don't get it

So where them egg-sacs at? Big, long, fat ones, dripping goo and eggs into an alien (or xenomorph) nest?

Lads, im doodling a martian tripod. what color scheme should i give it?

>>893608
Red

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>>884429
can finally draw

will draw the rest in the next days

hope it is what you wanted

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>>894506
something's fucky with the dick, fixed

>>894506
>>894509
I think you are the first person to ever draw porn of the spathi.

>>894582
what's it from by the way? A strategy game?

>>894654
Star control.
First one was a strategy game.
Second one was an RPG.
Theres a free remaster of star control 2 called the ur-quan masters.
https://sourceforge.net/projects/sc2/files/
Give a try.
It's a really good retro game.

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>>890977
It's not THAT old.

>>894654
>>894733
Actually don't download that version.
Heres the HD version.
https://sourceforge.net/projects/urquanmastershd/

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>>894506
>>894509
Yep, that's what I had in mind. Much appreciated!

...Actually, the two neck segments look a little weird. They don't seem connected. The one in the back looks like it curls backwards, rather than forwards to the one with the eyeball.

>>894582
>I think you are the first person to ever draw porn of the spathi.
Not quite.

>>894654
>what's it from by the way? A strategy game?
They're from the Star Control series, which is a mix between a space dogfighting sim and either a strategy game (the first) or a role-playing game (the second). The Spathi are a shamelessly self-proclaimed race of cowards who spend most of their efforts to anticipate and avoid any dangers they can imagine, which is quite a few. They evolved from herbivorous land-dwelling mollusks before advanced from the bronze age to the space age in less than a century, just to get away from predators on their home planet; they then dwelled on their planet's moon until they were conquered and enslaved by an interstellar empire. Most of the in-game images of them just show their eyestalks peeking onto the screen; you never get a clear view of what the rest of their bodies are like (hence the differing interpretations).

>>894909
Aw i fucked it up, sorry, shouldn't have drawn that while tired.
The games looks interesting, might give it a try when I get tired of Stellaris

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>>892449
I wish there was more female salarian art. Especially with dat ass.

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For the love of dick, does anyone know what the source to this is? im desperate

>>895882

so uh, with it looking like Hiro will be scrapping /aco/, where do we migrate to next?

>>895942
8 c h a n
Though I know we've had this debate before. It will be too bad if it happens; I think we've got a nice community now, whereas I remember more crap when we were on /d/.

There are also anonymous chat sites like https://livebunker.rocks/chat/home

>>895942
We used to have a Xenochan up and running. It was pretty good for the short time it existed.

>>895942
Fucking Hiroshima Nagasaki, just start a 4chan patreon or something. Or do a boating drove like back in the old days. I know there are thousands of anons who would be willing to thow in a few bucks to keep 4chan alive.

>>896166
>boating drove

Fucking auto correct. Donation drive.

>>895934

http://g.e-hentai.org/g/839073/2f33a4a308/

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>>896020

As long as he gives us a date telling us when /aco/ gets dropped, we can figure out where to move to en masse before then.

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>>896474
>>896474
>>896474