finished this edit eventually trying to make her wink during

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from this think i might color it too eventually

>>582701
I feel like your style clashes too much with Mode's, even if your lines weren't colored it's an obvious and jarring edit. Her lack of emotion is weird in this first one well where
>>582752
Is a little better in that she's at least emoting a bit though from the name it seems you intended for it to read as a smirk but instead it reads as a giggle - not necessarily bad but perhaps not what you intended.

Pretty good. I hope you decide to keep working on this :)