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Hi, posting a series of superheroine porn comics I wrote and drew in which a teenaged mutant rapes and enslaves the most beautiful women in the Marvel Universe.
Let me know what you think! Any and all feedback appreciated.
Here's the newest chapter: Phoenix.
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>>327056
This is technically the third chapter in the Submission Agenda series, taking place after the main character has already enslaved the White Queen, Emma Frost.
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>>327115
Again, any thoughts welcome. Love it? Hate it? Let me know.
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>>327187
stop morphing them into russian plastic surgery bimbos
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>>327192
hey man some of us like RPSBs
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Thank you Pegasus.
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>>327220
welcome
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Nice work. Better. Than anything I could draw.
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Bomb stuff op
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>>327125
>Suck it, Pheonix
Kek
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>>327192
>marvel women aren't rpsbs
M8 do you even read comics?
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Any DC stuff in the works?
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>>328112
I don't know if you've read my Darkseid series set in the DCU. If not go to benchleyfan01.imgur.com to check it out
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>>328114
No I've read that, but is there anything new from the DC side of things?
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>>328117
I'm working on a fourth chapter but it's basically on hiatus. Planning to finish the Marvel stories first.
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Your shit is great pegasus. I've read it all.
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A couple things, is there a place that you upload your stuff to? And what are the chances of you working on the mystique chapter soon?
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All my work is up at benchleyfan01.imgur.com. No plans yet for a Mystique chapter, sorry to say
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http://benchleyfan01.imgur.com
http://pegasus.wwoec.com/
http://www.mcstories.com/Authors/Pegasus.html
http://writer-pegasus.livejournal.com/
http://www.superheroinecentral.com/~wizard/Stories/Pegasus/SA1.html
[email protected]
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>>327056
More.
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You're doing decent work, but you're suffering from a lot of the pitfalls most beginner artist suffers from. One of them is that all your faces look the same. One of simple things you can do to differentiate the face is to figure out what kind of eyebrow and jawline you want a particular character to have and then be consistent with those characteristic of the character. I don't know how much time you spend doing these but take it into consideration. Small attention to details like that will make your art stand out better even if readers are not consciously aware of it, they'll see the difference.
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I like your work, It seems that you're starting to develop your own sense of style. I could do without the big plastic surgery lips, but hey... I don't think it detracts from your work too much.
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Wasn't this shit originally like old school fapfiction? I mean pre internet usenet era?
>>327192
But anon, that's just keeping with house style. Well house style with a little bit of what looks like hentai lightboxing, but the dick wants what it wants..
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Wasn't he supposed to be doing something with the DC girls?
I always had a thing for them, particularly Wondy
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I got to say, I have a thing for this particular fetish, and I think Pegasus' stories are great, but I'm not much a fan about the fact that all the female have the exact same body type.
I mean, I can see how someone like Emma Frost would look like a bimbo, but someone like Psylocke should be far more athetic and slim looking, and someone like Susan Storm have a more mature/soft type body with milfy curves.
Than again, asking for realism in porn is sort of stupid, specially when even the official artist themselves can not even do that themselves.
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>>327120
Busy fappin, will report back later
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>>331580
How would she even be captured when she is as strong as Superman and pretty much immune to mind control?
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of all your stories Peg, this has to be the weakest.
I can't really put my finger on it
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>>327056
you should consider doing celebs next
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Eh, hard to get into it when the main character is clearly the author.
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I don't get this guy, first he started doing his own art, it wasn't great but good enough, then started straight out lifting out panels from some Japanese artist ala Land, and then it seems now he went back to making his own art but in the style of the Japanese artist?
I wish he would find his own look, because I have actually read his stories and are not bad at all, some sexy stuff. The comics are a bit to bare in comparison though.
Meh, but in the end it is hot either way, can't really complain about free porn.
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>>331787
Wait, I though it was supposed to be Michael Cera?
Unless the author is Michael Cera...
But yeah, I rather the main character wasn't suspiciously a self-insert and rather some minor character in the Marvel or DC universe, or maybe even a chick or various characters somehow capturing these heroes for their own interests, like some cult or perhaps even more interesting a super obsessed fanclub.
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>>331804
>super obsessed fanclub
I always wonder how this would work in the comic universes, because you know these superheroines would have tons and tons of stalkers and even religions created after them.
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>>331580
He did a series where Darkseid rapes Wondy Power Girl and Starfire and murders most of the JLA
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>>331787
Can't you put yourself in his shoes?
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Again this garbage traced self-insert rape fantasy.
This guy should get banned from here.
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>>331772
no
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>>327056
Any chance of getting these in colour at some point, or is that too much to ask?
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Oh hey, the adventures of the Magical Manlet are back.
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Eh, it would be a hell of a lot more interesting if the main character didn't just have the power of control women instantaneously, and actually have to exploit their various weaknesses, because otherwise it just comes off like a lazy rape fantasy.
It has potential though
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You need to work on your dialogue.
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>>335700
How so
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Doesn't really feel like there's any challenge in getting them to submit. I get this is a porn comic, but having the MC be all powerful is kind of boring.
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>>339599
Yeah, I find the thrill of the chase far more interesting than just having a bunch of sex slaves, its much sexier seeing supeheroines gradually getting more and more corrupted.
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>>331591
I have to agree here. I really enjoy Pegasus's work, and I've been following it for ages, but it does get a little same-y. This is more a problem in the comics than the stories IMO.
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>>327120
New artstyle is dope.
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Daily reminder this is a well known troll on other 'chans that literally traces panels from some japanese guy's manga
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>>339704
What's the original artist? I like the art style.
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>>339765
He traces a lot from Izayoi Seishin, like a lot, dude
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Trypophobia? Ok.
Inflationism? Ok.
Ponies? Ok.
Vore? Ok.
A mind controller that always wins? Now that is too far!
Good to know 4chan's fetishes and priorities.
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>>339968
I don't give two shits about the self insert character, the tracing is on the other hand
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>>339968
More like he keeps following the same exact formula and it gets stale. Give us something other than
>"I'll never submit to you"
>"O-oh no I'm turning into a brainless slut"
>2 panels later she's begging for cock
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>>339984
This
Hard to complain about free smut, but this shit gets stale when there is no build up and it all feels the same
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>>339704
Which chans? Never seen him post on 8ch.
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>>339704
Though I know that, I can't help but fap to it.
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>>340036
The amount of time you fuckers spend criticizing and nitpicking someone who is giving you awesome free porn is incredible. There's literally like hundreds of pages of comics at his page and you're still bitching, or even in some circumstances asking that he be banned? Are you fucking high?? Either shit up and jack off like the rest of us or go someplace else, Christ!
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>>342512
Cry some more about it you sensitive little snowflake. Deviantart is that way.
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>>342512
He came here asking for feedback, he got it. 4chan might not whitewash their criticism but he knows that since he's been posting his comics here for a while now.
In short, shut up and grow a pair.
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so I guess I have a bimbo fetish now
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>>331811
every actress in hollywood have some to many obsessed fans.
very fews were harmed by said groups. most of them just feel annoyed.
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Very cool how you do the bimbofication in this chapter. Phoenix is obviously subjugated and morphed into extreme proportions but still maintains some of her guile and agency. She's clearly dominant of the weaker Emma but once he starts fucking Phoenix she kind of dissolves into the standard simpering slut. Also some very nice ahegao going on. Kudos
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Did this guy ever finish the Submission Agenda story with DC characters?
I kept waiting for him to get to Wonder Woman
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>>347239
no
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>>342957
This isn't the first time hes posting his stuff here, Hes posting his comics on /d/ atleast 4 or 5 other times in the past 3 year and always asking people to critic him.
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>>353195
FK. I posted without thinking and bumped the thread. Sorry guys.
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>>331580
this!
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