You know the drill, work on your smut!
I saw some discussion on the /aco/ weekend creation thread, and decided to give this a try.
The main distinction on here, is that you bring anything that you're working on, and you're not tied to anything like the webcomic thread, or the /aco/ creation thread. So if you're familiar with the regular /co/ "Batman" threads, you know how this goes.
I was hoping for one of these threads!!
Here's page 1 of a comic I did last night.
And the WIP of page 2. In the first panel Ame will say "Yeah, you could say that."
I'll likely be streaming this to completion today.
In the middle panel to the left, it looks like the dick is coming out of her hip. To fix it, you could just flip the legs so it's the right leg coming forward instead of the left. Good work so far. I really like your style
You're totally right, thank you!!
Can't believe I missed that. I was drawing nonstop for hours last night, totally didn't see it.
Thanks for pointing it out, glad I got that feedback before finishing and posting the page!
And thanks!! Don't know how long this comic will be, aiming for ~10 pages... dunno if I'll get there, but I'll try!
That's the one the image I used for the last thread had.
Looks like my drawing was considered loli and someone deleted it. Anyway, here's a Rosalina I'm coloring.
Started my NSFW monstergirl blog just recently and I've been pumping out monster girls like a mad cunt. Anybody interested? I've got character bios and everything.
And also, my side project My Arm Or Maiden, which is a spoof on hentai with really stupid as fuck plots.
working on a fall out girl i guess, just need to shade her and shes done, m-aybe a background t but i doubt it
Another character I'm working on. Some cavegirl named Lucy.
Any critiques on this one before finishing it? Not so much on the drawings, none of these are finalized. Just thumbnail roughs.
Working on disney princess blowjobs. Rapunzel up next. Not terribly happy with facial resamblance so I'll have to work on that.
I really like the way you drew her body. Very nice cartooning.
Yeah, I'll get in on this late Halloween stuff too.
The original is on http://awmbh.deviantart.com/art/Witch-And-Familiar-Commission-3-Resize-570415683 but it's a monster file size for line art. You can go if you're really autistic about wanting to look at originals.
Cartoons are green on paper, paper seem a deferent green to each and everybody but may not be may not all new.
I seen these western anime
And Rick and morty[best]
Board is going wel
Any other sugestions /co/
Has it's flaws, but I'm really satisfied with how it turned out. First drawing I've really tried coloring.
better but it still looks like you have a front view of the forearm and have the wrist bending towards the bicep you should be seeing the side may be a bit of the back of the forearm and hand
I see now! Thanks man, the radius and ulna really showed me what was up. Got a blog or anything?
Yo, i'm an oil painter and Im trying to get into SAI,
I did these for the draw thread. I should be making my lines thinner right, at this point it looks like butt.
The left foot is positioned unnaturally based on the position of the rest of muffet's body. To help, you can to like a cross section of the leg and follow the direction the leg is going in. The foot is turned almost perpendicular to where it should be facing.
Not dedicated to being a porn artist, but it's good practice. Sexy practice
Really though, that anon is right, don't reply to bones. In the regular /co/ threads, he'd just go "lol i don't really care" and shrug off any constrictive criticism, or gotten extremely defensive over it. Not worth anyone's time. It has happened before.
just fooling around with simple coloring for now since I just got a new tablet because the old one shite the bed
I only draw with pencil. Got a really old wacom but hate using it and can't git gud with PS or sai. :(
Here's a really old pinup I did. Have been working on a comic for ages following this character from slavery to gnolls in childhood to pit fighting teen then wandering barbarian adult.
Never get more than a couple of pages in before I lose interest. Then next time I pick it up I find my drawing style has changed and doesn't match what I've already done so I scrap it and end up redrawing the same shit over and over !
can I get some feedback on it before I fuck it up further?
What I'm most concerned about is mostly the consistency of the coloring, not so much the anatomy.
Also I'm afraid the face is looking wrong but there's some stylization involved.
chief, I wouldn't know where to begin. I just draw naked ladies all day, every day. If i'm not at work, then that's what I do. That's all I can tell anybody. Just get out there and draw lewd shit all day.
Not that anon, but that's generally how these threads work. You post what you've been WORKING on, in the hopes of people telling you what you might be doing wrong, what you might be doing right, shit like that.
So, these are two panels of a little comic that I have been working on featuring a rule 63 Sokka and Suki.
>slow pen settings.
What would these be? My Sai is on other language, so I am not sure...
Welp, I've just got into drawing smut, I'd like to get some feed back on this sketch.
I've posted this on /ic/ before, but I have made a more limited album with the resolution bumped up a bit.
Did these on /f/lockdraw and hope to do some more on there soon for some practice.
Well I get what you mean. More rendering on the thigh might've helped alleviate that issue.
Pic related is the reference material. What were your thoughts on the other images in the album though?
its a very odd angle i belive its the thickness of the thigh and the lower leg that we are seeing head on instead of seeing the inside of the leg, as for the folder there is some proportion issues and some anatomy here and there noting some care in the construction phase and practice won't fix
I think it's ok now
Just preliminary, but my what is now my third attempt I believe at this. I still have a lot to render. but you'll see some of the under lying work done.
Did a quick redline pointing out a couple things I noticed. Looking great overall, these are pretty nitpicky. Hope it helps regardless!
I guess I need to go beyond the reference a bit then.
Did some update and practice on some skeletal foot work
Hey guys! Any critiques on the most recent page before I clean it up and finalize it?
Either on the art or the dialogue.
Try adding folds to the skin of the penis when it is more flaccid. Really put the emphasis that what's happening isn't arousing to the character. You don't need to be overly detailed though.
been a long while since i last drew something. i kinda got the shading and color right-ish but the're still no expression going on yet :/
Your painting is a lot better than your drawing, if that makes any sense? You should probably put a lot more work into your lineart before you worry so much about colors. That said, your colors are really good.
New guy here, have started with Fun With a Pencil, since that's what everyone advises. First steps, woohoo. Also added a horrible hastily done tit, since I don't know if we're allowed to post explicitly non porn images.
>>181621 I was able to redraw about 20 pages, there's like 15 more to go.
First volume got published a few weeks ago. Only in spanish at the time :/ And I'm getting published among other fellow artists, so if you buy a copy, there's other comics inside. Think of it as a Mexican Shonen Jump or something. I'll give more details later, since a lot of good stuff happened over the course of nearly 10 weeks of Dumm inactivity.