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DOOM General - Squad Goals edition

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Writefag stuff:
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Ideas!
>cacodemons struggling with the high Martian winds
>demons taking fire safety courses
>cacodemons drinking alcohol and belching fire
>archviles accidentally burning/melting things they're holding
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>>1538649
>>archviles accidentally burning/melting things they're holding
They get emotional and their powers flare.
Same thing happens to imps and even barons sometimes.
Martian handheld devices usually come with insurance coverage for such things.
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>>1538741
>Mother Demon
>One of a kind MILF of the dark legions
>Has always been a sweetheart, even during the dark days
>Locked away millennia ago by the shadow lords for being perceived as weak
>Freed during immigration
>Such a sweetheart, she even forgave the Doom Slayer
>Just wants her kids to be happy
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>>1538765
>the UAC cult has her as the virgin mother to avoid the awkward subject of the icon's defeat at the hands of the Doomslayer
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>>1538772
Icon ain't dead.
It just sleeps.

>To answer that, you must picture yourself transported to the wide open Umbral Plains, or the steps of the great cathedrals of Argent D'Nur, or the glassy shores of the Lake of Fire. Imagine yourself worshipping before the Icon of Sin, in awe of its splendor even as it sleeps till the Call of Ages comes. Envision chanting the names of dark lords in the correct order, empowering them with your rote learning. Fantasize about how it will feel to sense the caress of the Bukavac as it rises from the blood pools of Angrax and strangles the life out of you.
-UAC data log, The Necropolis
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>>1538854
This is bordering on spam.
Please stop.
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>>1538866
webms don't get posted very often.
I've just compressed some I have so that others can repost them in later threads.
It's a one time thing, don't worry.
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>>1538869
Alright then.
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Samus and doomguy lewds when?
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>Sitting on a stool in the middle of the footwear department of the local UAC shopping mall, it strikes you once again how odd and unecessary this little excursion is.

>The entire thing was your roomate's idea. She had decided that the one thing she desperately needed more of was shoes. Specifically, a brand new pair of sandals.

>If the notion had come from any other person, it would have been completely understandable. Everybody needs new shoes once in a while.

>But coming from your roommate, it's simply baffling to you. What does she really need shoes for? She hardly ever wears them. She hardly ever walks!

>And why would she? As you watch her hover above the simple patterns of the aisle's carpeting, you try yet again to puzzle out your bizarre roomate.

>She's a cacodemon; an immigrant from the pits of Hell with the ability to levitate and fly despite lacking any visible means of doing so.

>She's roughly humanoid in form with deep red skin, short horn like protrusions across her body, a broad mouth filled with sharp, sparkling white teeth and a long tongue.
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>>1539176
>Her tongue and the inside of her mouth glow a vibrant electric blue. You know from the few times you've seen her bleed that her blood is the exact same color.

>You wonder if her organs share the coloration.

>Capping off this parade of strange demon anatomy is her eye. The cyclopean sphere sits above her mouth, taking up the remainder of her face. It's bright, shiny green in color and its pupil is slit like a cat's.

>She's dressed sparsely; wearing a midriff revealing t-shirt that clings tightly to her sizable bust. Her shorts hug her large, round rump snugly and are cut just long enough to barely avoid being glorified panties.

>The messy mop of hair on her head is cut short and dyed sandy blonde. She'd tried wearing it long once, but the temptation to chew on it had been too great.

>She's currently flitting back and forth across the aisle, floating up and down the shelves looking for her ideal purchase. No pair of shoes stays in her hands for long.

>She has a very short attention span. You wonder if that's a quirk of hers or if all cacodemons are that way.
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>>1539177
I'll add more later.
I need to get to sleep.
Give me feedback.
It's the only way I'll improve.
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>>1539176
I can already see where I made some spelling mistakes. I got in a hurry and let them slip past.
A consistent problem with me.
I should break the habit.
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>>1539176
>>1539177
Pretty good so far man.
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>>1539301
SENPAI NOTICED MEEEEEEE
For real, tho. Thank you.
More tomorrow.
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>>1538649
see >>1538622
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>>1539874
Exactly the inspiration.
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Post immigration revenants.
Fashion? Upgrades?
Having to reclassify as a demonic citizen?
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>>1539943
How long would it take for the boner jokes to get old?
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>>1539957
>jokes
Oh, they can't help those.
It's like a twitch or something.
Nobody, demon or human, can explain why it happens.
Not even the revenants.
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Call me a massive dork, but I actually started wondering how to handle pic related ingame.

Assets:
>Super Shotgun

Demons:
>12 imps
>1 Pinky
>2 Barons
>2 Revenants
>1 Mancubus
>3 Cacodemons
>2 Hell Razers
>4 Lost Souls

That's a lot of demons.
Solution:
>2 imps are already dealt with. One just got shotgunned and the other is getting Glory Killed. 10 imps to be dealt with as they come.
>IMMEDIATELY escape the murder circle
>Focus down the Pinky
>Take out the Souls
>Focus down a Baron
>Switch focus to Revenants and kill them
>Take down last Baron
>Switch focus to Cacos and kill them
>Focus down Mancubus
>Save Razers for last

Not the best, but the situation was tense going in and all I had as Super Shotty.
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>>1540100
Or just fire the BFG
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>>1540112
The SS was the only certain asset, so I operated under the pretense that it wasn't available.
Really the biggest threats in that image are the Barons and the cacos, but the pinky and the souls are distracting elements that would interfere with the other demons. The imps and the razers are practically a non-threat compared to everything else. The revenants are a threat, but there easy to keep an eye on and their missiles can be avoided. Unless the mancubus manages to get closer, it's not much of a threat either.
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>>1540120
Boy, when I wanna write something quickly, spelling goes right out the window.
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>>1540100
It's not as bad as it looks. You have a lot of ranged enemies in a wide open area, so you should get them infighting if you keep running in circles.
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>>1540149
Too risky for me. The Barons alone are going to be a huge issue. Never mind the cacos. I swear they go faster when you're not watching them.
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So how do the Nazis fit into all this? They seemed to get along with the demons in Doom 2.
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>>1540274
It was just an easter egg, I'm not sure if they belong here. The demons are in the secret levels because it was probably too much hassle to implement the Nazi dogs and especially Grosse.
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>>1539177
She "Ooh"s and "Hmm"s over the various footwear, sometimes even bothering to slip them on. You note that she never actually tries to stand or walk in them.

She pauses her search and simply floats in the center of the aisle, bobbing gently in midair. Her hands are on her hips, her lips are pursed over her fangs, and she's giving the racks of shoes the ugliest look her single eye can manage.

She huffs in frustration. "Oh," She says. "this is the worst!" Her voice is high and feminine with a distinctly sibilant accent. "Why does everything in this store have to be so drab and boring?"

Having spent an hour just sitting in this department, you opt to involve yourself in her dilemma to stave off the maddening boredom.

"Well," You say. "the UAC isn't really known for its color and excitement."

She rotates vertically in midair, turning to face you.

"I just don't see why!" She says. You struggle to focus on that big, green peeper of hers and not stare at her mouth. It's a little distracting with its size, rows of fangs, and supernatural glow. "You'd think they'd be more colorful, not less!"

You bite down on a yawn while she speaks. "And why's that?"

She crosses her arms across her generous chest and you redouble your efforts to maintain eye contact. "They have so many resources and so many super smart people running around that you'd think they'd be bursting with color and creativity."

She rotates horizontally until she's lying on a bed of thin air, her legs tucked.

"But they aren't." She continues. "They just... aren't. For everything they've accomplished, the UAC is the dullest, most boring, and most unhappy bunch of creepers and sourpusses I've ever met."

She somersaults and suddenly she's in your personal space, her emerald eye wide.

"And I'm a demon!" She says, incredulous. "From Hell!" She raises her hands, gesturing at the ridiculousness of it all. "How do they do that?!"
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>>1540388
I am really digging this.
More.
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>>1540564
Not tonight.
Gotta let my brain rest.
More tomorrow.
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>>1540100
>Focus down the Pinky
shit nigger what the fuck are you doing? you can double jump dodge him out of LOS and aggro the souls instead. once youre outed him he's gonna take a while to gather himself up, once you're done with the souls you can finish off the imps by batches of 2, then swap over to cacos, then barons, all the while avoiding revenant fire almost effortlessly with minimum strafing skills. pinky can safely be left unbeckoned up until this point since the battleground has been just about wiped off entirely.

mancubi are isolated so they pose close to no real danger unless you meander about. razers are a fool's ill timed joke after everything else.

do you hurt yourself with rockets in snapmap too?
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>>1540626
I see your point. My first instinct is to always take out any Pinkie first because of that damn armor.
We agree that the souls should go first, though. They're fast and they do a ton of damage, so they should be dealt with. I believe the imps should just be taken out as you face other demons. They're effectively made of tissue paper.
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>>1540388
I forgot to ask for comments and critique on this.
Please comment and critique.
Thank you.
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I'm going to bed.
I'll work on my story more tomorrow.
Night.
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>>1540655
Still solid stuff, really capturing that caco spirit. Though I'd argue, just on a world-building poin that Nu-Mars is a fully functional city with independently owned stores and major retail centers and everything. I just pointed out an example of a store that your caco would go gaga over.

Now, UAC's branded products, design sensibilities etc." Yes. Super dull and dumb shiny "future" shit.

Some of their buildings are nice in that ostentatious over-deluxe, kinda bioshock 1 atmosphere kind of look, like the Olympus Mons apartment building, but your caco's on point with them.
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>>1538609
Who drew this?
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>>1541350
Thank you so much.
It means a lot to me to read that coming from you.
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>>1541582
I kept the store generic and vague because it's not really critical to the overall narrative.
I'm not really sure what else to say except thank you again for your feedback.
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>>1538866
Good lord I want to impregnate her so hard.
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>>1541634
She seems preoccupied.
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>>1541636
I don't see any problem in that.
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>Cacodemons are known for their voracious appetities, their penchant for eating wildly contrasting flavors of food in one sitting, and their ability to consume near anything.

>However, there is in fact a limit to what the cacodemons’ digestive system can withstand. And when that right combination of volatile ingredients hits at just the right time, and their stomachs finally stand up and cry ‘no more!’, well, any cacodemon who goes through it will tell you that no matter what plane they came from, -this- was true hell.

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>>1541957
OOOOOOO
Reading.
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>>1541957
That was super cute.
There were a couple of spelling and punctuation errors and you got Sadie and Doxy's names mixed up once, but otherwise, it was flawless.
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>>1542115
Blame the errors on sleep deprivation.
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>>1542239
You got it.
Gonna work on my story later.
Thanks for being such a huge inspiration.
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Just thought of something.
>Cacodemons have blue blood.
>They also have green eyes.
>What happens when their eyes get bloodshot?
>Answer: cyan eyes.
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>>1542301
You can tell a lot about a caco just from their eye.
>green is healthy and normal
>cyan is bloodshot and can mean the caco is upset, angry or tired
>flaring yellow is bad and usually means that the caco is about to spit a ball of plasma
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>>1542506
>And then there's ones with novelty contact lenses and you don't know WHAT the fuck to expect.
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>>1542519
>young, antisocial cacodemon
>wears yellow contacts because they think it makes them look tough
>cacomom and cacodad hope it's just a phase
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>Cac-Man
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>>1542519
>Demons who normally have single-colored glowing eyes now wear contact lenses to have pupils and irises
>Human eye-like lenses have moderate popularity, other, more colorful or differently shaped eyes are much more sought-after
>Blue, green, purple, violet, yellow, cyan, you name it
>(Don't forget all the possible patterns and color combinations)
>Human, dog, cat, lizard, completely fictitious eye shapes, you name it
>Some demons like to combine colors for their both eyes
>Heterochromia becomes very stylish
>Cacodemons have to settle on wearing multi-colored lenses, but they compensate it with the amount of colors on them
>Their big eyes can take many more colors, anyway
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>>1542519
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>>1542824
And through all of this, the hell knights are left to wonder just what everyone is getting so worked up about.
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>>1543093
Too expensive.
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>>1541957
Hey, if you need a proofreader I'm all for it. Not knocking your writing at all, trust me, but the errors do crop up sometimes.
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>>1543311
Hey man, knock yourself out.
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>>1540388
Used to your friend's antics, you take her abruptness and vehemence in stride. Looking at the racks of shoes on display, you find yourself agreeing with her.

The UAC's distinctive lack of variety and vibrancy permeates the entire store, but it comes to a head in the clothing departments.

She was right about it being drab. The color palette is dull and faded with nothing but light gray, powdery blue, safety yellow and matte black.

The variety of footwear is equally limited. This aisle seems to contain nothing but very samey sneakers and some flimsy looking sandals.

You nod to yourself. "Yeah, it's a bit of a wonder."

"Ugh!" She groans and puts her face in her hands, floating away to a more comfortable distance. "I know! I'm starting to wonder why I even came to this stupid store!"

"I've been wondering too, actually." You say, standing and stretching your stiff back. "I kinda wanna ask you a question, but I don't want to come off as insensitive or anything."

"Man, look who you're talking to." She says, rubbing at her eye. "I've been insulted by things a lot older and a lot scarier than you. Shoot."
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>>1543441
I'm gonna try and get more written before bed.
Please comment and critique as always.
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>>1542684
wokka wokka wokka wokka wokkka
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Writing in the Hellish language must be the worst kind of headache.
Have you seen their alphabet?
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>>1543784
I mean wow!
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>>1543784
Most of those are probably very specific runes, though seeing a seemingly dull witted demon artfully writing up those runes for like a shopping lust must be a sight
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>>1543806
>cacodemon roommate asks you to take her shopping list (written in scrawled demonic) and go pick up some groceries
>imp penpal writes entirely in demonic and you've had to take a night class and use a translator just to read their letters
>you get a tattoo in demonic to try and look cool, tough, and inclusive, but later learn that it just reads "smelly idiot"
>you try to write in demonic yourself, but you have a hard time with the syntax and your hand keeps cramping up
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>>1543861
"How can a language so ugly to hear look so beautifle in writing?!"
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>>1543918
>The written language is a beautiful, haunting script filled with meaning and power
>The spoken language is pure ear torture
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>>1543925
Given what we hear it mostly sounds like shreaking, snarling and wails of agony
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>>1543944
Like I said.
>pure ear torture
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>>1543441
"Right. Straight to the point." You clear your throat. "Why do you need shoes?"

She looks at you, perplexed, eye tinged cyan. "Huh?"

"I said," You say, choosing your words carefully. "why do you need shoes? You hardly ever wear them and you don't even walk that much, so I'm just wondering why you bother with them."

She gives you a look and places her hands on her ample hips.

"First of all, dude," She says. "it's not a matter of need, it's a matter of want. I need food, but I want shoes. Got it?"

"Okay." You say simply. You know better than to test her.

"Second of all," She says, extending her left leg and waving her foot at you. "these feet were made for accessorizing and I am not squandering their potential." She wiggles her toes at you.

You regard the squirming digits. That actually brings up another question.

"Sorry for all the questions, but why do cacodemons even have feet? I mean, you guys just float everywhere, right?"

Her foot drops and you get the feeling that she'd raise her eyebrow at you if she had any. "Why do birds have legs, dude? We gotta land sometimes."

She looks thoughtful for a moment. "I actually asked one of those UAC eggheads about it once." She says, remembering. "He said some junk about "demon evolution" and I think he brought up Argent at one point, but I kind of tuned him out because I was struggling with my bag of trail mix."
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>>1544216
And with that, I bid you goodnight.
I will work on it more as the opportunity arises.
Please comment and critique.
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>>1542684
>Doxy: "Well I -do- love eating pellets!"
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>>1544297
>Sadie: It's horrifying! Her mouth unhinges! Like a snake!
>Doxy: Yeah, it's pretty awesome.
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>>1544312
>Sadie being phased by Doxy's eating habits by this point
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>>1544316
>Doxy figures out how to unhinge her jaw
>Then has to figure out how to rehinge it
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>>1544335
>Doxy: "Sai-ghee, I caghd maghd idh gho -ack!"
>Sadie: stares at the camera like the office
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>>1544348
Sadie is just... resigned at his point. As far as Doxy is concerned.
Doxy ate an entire box of laxatives because they were chocolate coated? Yawn.
Doxy unhinges her jaw with no thought to how she'll rehinge it? Please.
Doxy drinks enough alcohol to reignite the sun, then upchucks most of it into the bathtub? At least once a week.
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>>1544376
Doxy's not That stupid, but yeah.

And indigestion is a rare event like I wrote, Demons can hold a LOT of alcohol.
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>>1544386
>Doxy's not That stupid, but yeah.
Sorry. Didn't mean it like that.
Anyway, I have to get some sleep.
Check this out if you want: >>1544216.
Night, dude.
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>>1540274
They wanted that sweet demon pussy
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>>1545116
O HFUCK YES
NEW STUFF
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>>1545142
its good stuff too
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>>1545144
Y E S
source?
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>>1545144
>>1545116
Alekksander? Shit I know that guy.

Well we hung out in the same general for a while, never interacted with him myself...
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>>1545166
Checked out his Tumblr.
Dude likes guns.
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>>1545172
Yup, that's him.
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>>1544216
I've been pretty busy today, but I will definitely be adding more later today.
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>>1545116
>>1545144
I actually prefer the former to the latter.
I just wanna feel up those big, red abs, slip my hands beneath her shirt, and squeeze those crimson mounds.
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>You can always tell when an imp pack has moved into the neighborhood. Their idea of marking territory is to leave burning handprints on their turf.
>Dentistry has added a new tool to its belt: the file. Some demons need to keep their teeth nice and sharp.
>Mancubi are some of the best waste disposers in existence. They have no problem eating leftovers or rotten garbage.
>Pain Elementals often train their lost souls as attack animals. They've been known to sell them as security.
>Hell Knight wrestling is the hot new Martian sport. The hulking bruisers love to throw themselves at each other for a roaring crowd.
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Trying to think of names for my shoppers.
Any ideas?
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>>1546237
Regalth, and vlyxart
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>>1546239
It's actually for that story I'm working on.
This one >>1544216.
Human and cacodemon.
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Where is everyone?
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> ++ Pyrokinesis Workshop! Tuesdays at Wentwurth Center ++

>A summoner in a white blouse stands in front of a whiteboard, covered in various diagrams of hands and fire.

>“Okay! I think we’re ready for our first exercise! Everyone, hold out your dominant hand onto the provided Temp-reader. Now, I want you to all visualize a knob, or a valve, in your mind. Imagine turning it just sightly to the right. Say, seven percent. Now with that image firmly in your mind, try and heat up your hand!

>”Great! Great job everyone! The more you practice precise control like this, the more you’ll be able to use your abilities safely and in much more practical ways in your daily lives, as well as, if the unfortunate event arises, be able to defend yourself much more effectively!

>”Now, Barons and Baronesses, dont worry if its harder for you to maintain a stable heat output. As we all know, the spectral energy of a baron is far more powerful than the standard fire magic. It’s going to take more time to really focus that much power.”

>”Next week, we’ll discuss some of the arcane origins of fire magic, as well as work on some fire-ball practice in the basketball court! Hope to see you all there!”
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>>1550178

>The benefits of careful, considered, nigh-scientific approaches to fire magic open up whole new worlds to demons who used to just consider fire magic as a crude projectile.

>Lazy demons using their own hands as hot plates.

>Demons particularly in tune with the arcane focusing their flames into welding torches.

>That feel when ur demon gf keeps you both warm under the covers on a cold mars night.

>Icon-Loyal raiding forces being caught completely unprepared when the defense forces of the colony they’re raiding start hitting back so much harder than they can dish out.

>Summoners conjuring defensive walls of flame

>Fireballs that explode into clusters of smaller fireballs.

>Mancubi belching white-hot flames.

>Cyber-demons hacing been taught/re-taught pyrokinesis doing… well. You ever see Shin Godzilla? Yeah.
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>>1550178
>>1550181
>The Martian Fire Department becomes the most effective in the system
>Mining operations become far more simplified when the miners can melt solid rock
>Demon metalworkers and sculptors become the latest artistic movement
I love this.
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>>1550267
Traditional stone sculptures in Hell are already badass and metal. Imagine how cool they must look when they're made from shaped MELTED rock.
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>>1550312
I wouldn't even what I could compare it to in reality.
It would look amazing.
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RED HOT DEAMONS ARE UPON US
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>>1550479
DOOM VFR might be worth looking into.
It's a shame you don't play as the Slayer, but I honestly don't mind that much as long as the game is good.
I'm leery of it being VR and on Oculus Rift or whatever, but I think it could work if they tried.
IT"S DOOM. It'll run on anything.
Let's have some faith in id. They're bringing back DOOM, Wolfenstein, and Quake. They deserve some respect.
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>>1550669
it even runs on a table thanks to their board games
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>Bruiser girls running bootleg videogames about the slayer on their face screens.
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>Writing a story about the demon's finally being brought to earth.

>The UAC decided that a good way to integrate the demons with society would be to start off with home stays.

>Participants don't sign up, the UAC just ask if they want to participate in housing a demon on earth and offers to pay for the expenses. Even paying a pretty penny for up front just for participating.

>Anon is a farmer in rural Indiana, gets asked if he would like to participate. Que dollar signs

>Cant decide which demon I want to use... first.

Help a brutha out /aco/ what demon would be fun to have in a farm setting.
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>>1550958
Maybe a hell knight?
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>>1550988
That was my first thought too. They would indeed be very useful in such a line of work.
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>>1550923
Kek and true.

>>1550953
That's just adorable.

>>1550958
Cacodemons are always fun. All that wide open sky and fresh air would probably be like paradise for them.
Imps around all that flammable farmland is hilarity waiting to happen.
Pain Elementals might actually do well as farmers, considering how they have to herd their lost souls.
A baron or baroness of Hell having to adjust to simple farm life has potential.
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>>1551045
>Cacodemons are always fun. All that wide open sky and fresh air would probably be like paradise for them.
The thought of a super happy caco flying across the countryside makes me happy.
>Imps around all that flammable farmland is hilarity waiting to happen.
They're attempts at making popcorn were less successful and more destructive than they had hoped.
>Pain Elementals might actually do well as farmers, considering how they have to herd their lost souls.
There's a lot of difference between a cow and a flying, flaming, bite-happy skull.
>A baron or baroness of Hell having to adjust to simple farm life has potential.
I can't help but picture a baron(ess) trying to squeeze into a pair of overalls that are infinitely too small for them.
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>>1551045
would D4D Count as a bootleg of Doom 4?
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>>1551247
You just touched on the the things I had thought up for each demon. I'm sorta leaning towards baron or caco right now. Though a Imp harem could be fun, it would probably get exhausting to write in what I'm hoping will be a novel length endeavor.

One last question, would you like to see a demon that's straight outa hell (I.E just got the body modifications and is still really unadapted to human culture) or would a mars colony citizen be better (Been on mars for a while and might as well be a human with an odd physiology and a disposition towards certain behavior) because I can see both having equal potential.
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>>1551276
>would D4D Count as a bootleg of Doom 4?
Possibly.

>>1551280
>You just touched on the the things I had thought up for each demon
Sweet.
>I'm sorta leaning towards baron or caco right now
Both awesome choices.
>Though a Imp harem could be fun, it would probably get exhausting to write in what I'm hoping will be a novel length endeavor
>novel length endeavor
YEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSS
>One last question, would you like to see a demon that's straight outa hell
>or would a mars colony citizen be better
I'm so torn! A Hell native would be absolutely out of its element on Earth. A real fish out of water story. But a colonist would be good, too. They've got the basics of human life figured, and now they have to adjust to Earth.
Both are good. Use your judgment.
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>>1551302
I want a Baroness to be fresh out of hell and still be of the mentality that violence and intimidation is the only way to survive, then she meets Anon...at a peaceful farm...where no ripping and tearing happens...she's insanely confused and uncomfortable.
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>>1551484
Another idea: a cacodemon colonist coming to Earth and experiencing life a free of shadow lords and corporate oligarchs. Being able to fly when she wants and where she wants. To eat food that hasn't been preapproved by the UAC.
To see some scenery that's neither on fire or red. And she finally gets to see a proper ocean with her own eye.
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>>1551484
Seconding this, i feel it has the potential to be pretty funny
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>>1551723
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>>1551723
>>1551725
Why?
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>>1551735
furaffinity's weird bro
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>>1551247
>I can't help but picture a baron(ess) trying to squeeze into a pair of overalls that are infinitely too small for them.
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>>1539109
More of this. Fuck the crazy out of her
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>>1551934
Wouldn't MC be better suited to that task?
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>>1551882
Beautiful! I love inspiring people!
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>>1550958
>A year or so after Nu-Mars city is properly established, the issue of earth-mars relations is being heavily considered.

>Pretty much every government on earth had been against the idea of integrating demons into human society, but the UAC were the ones providing earth with power, so they were pretty much powerless.

>But even with a Mars colony with humans and demons interacting productively and more on the way, true progress still required Demons being abl to live on earth.

>Even with evidence of demons and humans co-existing now, It takes months of wheeling, dealing, pressuring, and occasionally outright blackmailing, but eventually some Neo-America politicians allow for an ambassadorship program, allowing a baker's dozen of demons to live in pre-selected earth homes. Preferably secluded ones to prevent press/angry mob interference. The New-Morn incident still fresh in many people's minds.

>Though that number doesn't account for the prowlers stationed nearby, ordered to stay out of sight for the duration, in case any Anti-Demon chucklefuck decides to come along and make a mess of these hard-won plans.
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>>1552458
A political minefield.
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>>1552458
I hadn't planned on going too awfully in depth with that. I don't know enough about politics to feel I can really do it justice. Though now that you put in this kind of light I feel like maybe keeping a character around for exposition of this type may be a good idea.

Other than that though I want to keep this as a slice of life piece. Maybe adding some demons in later chapters.

Anyways. A rough draft of chapter one is almost done. This is my first adventure into writing so I'm probably not the greatest, hope you all like it.
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>>1552568
EXCITE
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>>1552458
I like to imagine TnO is canon to dooms past and that's part of how the UAC got so much power, after the fall of the Nazis the national power gaps were filled by big corporation who took over the terra forming operations planned for Mars and venus
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>>1546012
>Pain Elementals being hired and well-paid to do security, because that means bringing a pack of Souls to help with the patrols
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>>1552599
I've been playing Doom 2 and I stand by this.
A PE with a horde of souls is just as disconcerting as a baron or an archvile.
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>>1552615
It's worse on hord maps when they are hidden but see you, they get a chance to spawn a whole fucking swarm of them, like a flying bottomless beehive
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>>1552622
>someone tries to break into a UAC facility
>the PE on guard has their entire (flock? swarm?) patrolling the halls
>the break-in fails spectacularly with the thief getting nommed by souls
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>>1552637
>And I would have gotten away with it too! If it weren't for those meddling demons.
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>>1552637
>PE patrolling the center and corridors, while the flock is watching from above the rooftops
>Lost Souls seem to talk at subsonic or utrasonic, because when one is alerted they all are.
>Thief sets loose a flock of pigeons
>Entire soulsquad alerted in attack and devour
>Distraction buys precious 15 seconds he needed to get in
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>>1552657
...Where did they get the pigeons?
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>>1552662
Where's a city, there's pigeons. Were this a personal world of mine, could be someone's pet pigeons eventually getting loose -- but that would mean tons of pet pigeons getting free and interbreeding, could take years.

it could have been the result of a shipping error (We cant have PIGEONS in a CHICKEN COOP!!) followed by them just being released.
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>>1552637
>be thief
>a pretty good one at that
>remember stealing from a few tiny outposts of this UAC company a few months ago
>they're closely guarded, but it's not impossible to stay hidden
>plus the tech they have there sells for insane money on the black market
>a perfect night for some thievery
>sneak past some guys who don't even pay attention to their surroundings
>get past some computer security with my über hax0r skills
>getting near a promising vault
>holy shit, it's even unlocked
>wait, what's that noise? it's like some giant dog is breathing or something
>turn around to look at the knee of some giant red bipedal monster
>look up to see its, uh... assets, fucking hell, is it a she?
>look even higher to stare at her horned head with glowing green eyes above a mix of a hearty and evil grin
>fuckmesideways.jpg
>she doesn't even put her whole strength into the throw after she grabbed me
>I barely don't hit a wall on the opposite end of the hallway
>struggle to stand up and run away screaming
>badidea.pk3
>through the complex I start hearing echoes of other screams
>first one flaming skull appears
>then two
>before I even get to the parking lot, it's at least a dozen of them, screaming as they charge at me
>the guys at the gate are laughing their asses off as I keep running and screaming
>that's it, I'm never coming to UAC again
>that hulking red demoness looked cute though
>mfw
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=otV_k-K5oN8

Oh, my frater
Can't you hear me say
Oh, my frater
You'd better get down on your knees and pray

Get down, get down, get down, get down
Get down on your knees and pray
Get down, get down, get down, get down
Get down on your knees and pray

Oh, soror
Can't you hear me say
Oh, soror
You'd better get down on your knees and pray

Get down, get down, get down, get down
Get down on your knees and pray
Get down, get down, get down, get down
Get down on your knees and pray

Oh, magus
Can't you hear me say
Oh, magus
You'd better get down on your knees and pray

Get down, get down, get down, get down
Get down on your knees and pray
Get down, get down, get down, get down
Get down on your knees and
Get down on your knees and pray

Get down on your knees and pray
Get down on your knees and pray
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>>1552853
Exactly.
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>>1552854
>Hey, hey, wolves don't pray!
Oh wait, wrong song.
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>>1552568
Ooh, idea. One demon coming down to earth because they themselves are SUPER interested in earth fauna.

An ecosystem this diverse and vibrant? With some creatures that dont even eat meat??? whaaaaaat?
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>>1552921
Not the author, but that sounds like a great idea.
Some Earth fauna don't even have fangs?????
Or claws of any description????
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>>1552921
Interesting idea, I plan on trickling demons into the story over time and would like to take suggestions from DOOM general whenever I do.

But that's a ways off for now, finishing touches on the first chapter then pastbining it. See you guys in... an hour? Maybe.
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>>1552972
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
yes
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>>1552921
>Imps playing with dogs and puppies
>Don't let them try to play fetch with "harmless" fireballs
>Arachnotrons and Spider Mastermind planning world dominance with cats
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>Pinky joins the farm and immediately forms a bond with the cows, considering them her new foster-herd.
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>>1553206
>Old farmer trying to explain why he cant sell Pinky milk with the rest of the foster-herd's.

Woulsnt a Pinky attack the cows though? Imean what kind of meat you think a Pinky would be eating all the time on Earth?
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>>1553206
Too. Cute.
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Ugh. I feel like this is bad and I should feel bad. Oh well, first thing I've ever really tried to write. There will be error's, I will learn from them, I will get better.

On a side note you could really call this chapter a prologue. It's shorter than what I plan the others to be as I literally wrote it in my spare time over the course of two days. Anyways enjoy what could be the start of something OK.

Pastebin- https://pastebin.com/c460Cgxs
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>>1553261
>The uac would probably give the visiting demon regular supply drops of UAC-tested Bio-reproduction meat (Which is how they manage to feed so many meat-eaters on Mars in the first place) so as to not put too much strain on the hosts, or the local butchers' shop.

Additionally, all pinkes, from conversion, are trained intensively NOT to attack living things that aren't a threat.
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>>1553323
>Argent Energy, its origins are well known, and the people it brought. But, it brought many innovations in power, weapons... and food.
>Yes, just like the tabloids speculated, vat meat IS produced from raw Argent energy, the same energy that makes demons spawn from nowhere to be hunted by their own kind in the depths of their own rocky homeland. Argent Energy is the solution of the food crisis they created, as they escaped Hell, and their 'Slayer' when they came to New Mars.
> Like all things Argent, we have this market cornered. New Mars needs me -- the UAC to keep themselves fed for the foreseeable future. All the wealth these demons produce, is ours for the taking.

>Please excuse Dr. Hayden, he's having a moment.
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>>1553388
Reminder that Hayden's whereabouts are unknown in current AU time. The continuity I envision is heavily informed by all doom games, but not beholden to any direct series of events.
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>>1553305
It's very good anon, I don't read the whole but I will.
I like what you got there.
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>>1553305
Reading.
Enjoying so far.
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>>1553447
Fair enough, but I couldnt write all that without hearing his voice in me head.
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>>1552921
You'd get a second wave of culture shock (and/or whatever the environmental version of that is)
However revelatory Mars was compared to hell, it's still a barren dustbowl outside the base and city.

>>1551511
That could be sweet. Outside of actual transfers, I wonder if some might at least be able to swing some leave on Earth as employees. I could see that being easier to wrangle legally and politically for the first year, and a way to figure out what needs to be in place for something more substantial. Plus a travel agency staffed entirely by megacorp analytical/HR staff and G-Men/women sounds like the most terrifying place to book a holiday imaginable.
>Being able to fly when she wants and where she wants.
Well, insofar as air traffic control says so. Though going by the games they don't really go up enough that it'd be proper airspace territory, so it might be a non-issue other than pointing out not to go TOO high

>>1551302
Not sure how well a direct migrant would pan out though. Even with the city apparently greatly expanded to being a more or less fully fledged city state rather than just a corporate pseudotown it's still a controlled environment where they can at least get to grips with the basics safely.
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>>1553472
>However revelatory Mars was compared to hell, it's still a barren dustbowl outside the base and city.
ALL THE GREEN. SO MUCH.
The foliage would be the most amazing thing for demons.

>Well, insofar as air traffic control says so.
A cacodemon with a walkie-talkie constantly getting reminded "Not so high!"

>Not sure how well a direct migrant would pan out though
Probably not that well. The stark contrast between Hell and Earth might be too much for some demons.
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>>1553464
Why thank you very much Anon, when your done please do let me know what you think i could improve on and how.

>>1553469
Thanks mate.

>>1553472
I decided to go with a recent migrant rather than a direct one for just such a reason. She's been on the colonies for about 3 months so she knows what is generally considered acceptable, but is still learning a lot about human culture and mannerisms.
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>>1553305
Not bad, not bad at all.
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>>1553464
it's me again...

>>1553505
I really love it, very wholesome.

I suppose the farmer will be brief about Audry needs, like her ideal room temperature, food portions, health care, etc.

But I will love to see how he reacts to “Daemon studies” (A.k.a. Daemon sexual habits 101) in the UAC facilities before he goes to the daily “Bonding exercises” with Audry The Baroness.

PRO TIP: Make a reference about how gravity is stronger on earth compare to mars.

Can you select a reference pic for Audry or a full description to commition art?
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>>1553607
Thanks Anon, good to hear such glowing reviews for something I had so much fun with.

>>1553758
Glad to hear you truly did like it Anon.

As for your suggestions and comments.

>I really love it, very wholesome.
Glad to hear I didn't piss people off by not including a sex scene in the first chapter.

>I suppose the farmer will be brief about Audry needs, like her ideal room temperature, food portions, health care, etc.
I'm not sure how in depth I'm going to go with the discussion when the farmer wakes up. Because if it gets mentioned anywhere it would be there, though Audry herself probably knows most of her preferences and can communicate them just fine.

>PRO TIP: Make a reference about how gravity is stronger on earth compare to mars.
SHIT! I could have had Audry reference that in the tripping scene. Whether it be her actually getting a bit of a scrape because of it or just it being the reason she tripped. Could have been FUCKING GOLDEN! Note #1 go back and edit something like that in.

>Can you select a reference pic for Audry or a full description to commition art?
I believe this guy >>1551882 pretty much shaped my image of Audry before I even started writing her in. Perhaps a little more junk in the trunk and a pair of lips but other than that it pretty spot on.
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>>1553758
Me... again, change name to WholesomeDoommate.

>>1553839
>Glad to hear I didn't piss people off by not including a sex scene.

Sometimes Pastebin stories are more develop (or just longer) compare to regular green text, but depends what the writer wants to share.

Doom general always want more people collaborating with art or anything to keep it alive. I’m not very good drawing but I planning to do some 3D in the future.

>Note #1 go back and edit something like that in.

I'm glad to help.

>Perhaps a little more junk in the trunk and a pair of lips but other than that it pretty spot on.

So.... no anime face like Hdoom?
That’s already better.
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>>1554014
>So.... no anime face like Hdoom?
>That’s already better.
Y E S
I need demon face.
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>So.... no anime face like Hdoom?
That’s already better.

Aw hell no. Anime face<Demon face.
Its part of what makes them exotic and different.
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>>1554049
I know man...
that's because I say it's automatically better.

Anime face is ok to me, BUT DEAMON FACE.... OOOH BROTHER....
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>>1554049
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>>1554070
>BUT DEAMON FACE.... OOOH BROTHER....
Yeah, baby.
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>>1554071
I mean... you're free to think of them any way you want bro, whatever make's them most ascetically pleasing to you. That's just how I prefer it.

Honestly the only reason i had her have lips is because I was having a hard time with Anon being able to read her emotions without them. Smiling is important.
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>>1554103
Anime face just ruins it for me.
I didn't come to these threads for Monster Musume.
I came for hot demons.
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>>1554112
Very well, but don't scare artist just because they prefer the Hdoom look.

I welcome any type or style of work if there is quality in it.
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>>1554112
i think both are hot
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>>1554144
Yes.
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>>1554144
This. I could go for a toothy mawed Hell Baroness, or a cute, soft faced one.
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>>1554084
>>1554049
Probably going to sink my good will here but I'm perfectly fine with anime face.

(My first mental image of Sadie's face was basically the HDoom design)
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>>1553305
Ok, perusing it a bit since it's late. I like it, I like it, ONE MAJOR CAVEAT

If this is going to be a real project, a work of creative effort that you're gonna devote real time and characterization to, then you need to do one major thing.

Give Anon a real name. He's got to be a real character.
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>>1554600
Also, present tense is a little awkward with third person writing. Idunno.
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>There is rumor of a new force moving up amongst the echelons of the Hell factions.

>Some mind of disturbed intellect, strategic skill, and ambition, whipping the forces of hell into an idealistic fervor.

>The demons of this faction fight differently. More tactically, more efficiently. With regimented order.

>Some have even been seen using technology of similar make to that of earth.

>Not much is known about the figurehead of this force. Just a name. In a language foreign to demonkind. But one that brings an unexpected shock to the humans who hear it.

>A name that was thought to be swallowed by the fires of hell.

>To

>Ten

>Kopf.
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>>1554717

No.

No fucking way.

This is (not) really happening.
It is.
WOW
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>>1554717
Oh for fuck's sake.
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>>1554725
>>1554727

Yeah, the second >>1552582 brought up the idea of TNO being canon with the AU, the gears started turning in my head.

There's so much I can work with with this.
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>>1554049
>Anime face<Demon face
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>>1551723
>>1551725
This is funny to me.
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>>1554717
yes, Yes, YES!
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>>1554717
literally who
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>>1554866
I mean, it's okay to like anime faces, but isn't there a shitton of monster girl threads on /d/ already?
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>>1554970
you used < instead of >
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>>1554991
wait fuck no
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>>1554918
He's a recurring villain in the wolfenstien franchise, better known as Deaths Head, recently killed off for real in the latest instalment.
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>>1554600
That... is actually a really good point. I started out with a real name, but I didn't think the one I chose felt right.

Maybe DOOM General has some suggestions?

>>1554659
Noted, I'm going to try something different in chapter two.
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>>1555255
Johnathan Stahlvern
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>>1554717
>Totenkopf returns with an army of demonic Nazis and Nazi demons
>BJ, Doom Slayer, and Ranger are all stuck in The Arena Eternal
This could be problematic.
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nyx and slash are absolute trash as always

sorlag best grill
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Farmer of doom here.

Which do you guys prefer shorter, more frequent chapters or longer, less frequent.

I'm REALLY enjoying writing this, so at the rate I'm going I could probably get a short 7-10 page chapter done every 2 days or so. The longer ones would probably be 25-30 pages and come out once a week as I'd probably binge write on my off days.

Ah, and Anon is now John Miller.

I've also decided to try a first person POV with this chapter, so it's going to be another short one just to see how it goes over.
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>>1557408
Post a few more chapters then I can give you a better opinion.
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>>1558011
who dat?
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>>1557408
Reading the prolog, I'd suggest less characters expressing their internal thoughts to themselves out loud. A bit awkward.
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>>1558142
My wife.
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>>1558179
'sgot some saggy tracks of land
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>>1558142
I think it's a Prowler
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>>1558090
'Aight

>>1558177
I agree, one of the many changes I've made.
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Hey! Some more fanart from a cool pal of mine.

I really think they captured Sadie's expression well.
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>>1558835
>Sadie's expression
"Yeah, well, I guess this is my life now. Alright. Whatever."
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>>1558835
Nice!

We need more OC, tell em to keep it up.
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>>1558835
I'm getting "wants to be hopeful, but is too busy experiencing trepidation" with a dash of "what. why."
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>>1558857
This!
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>>1558860
That's her to a T, yep.
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>>1558835
>>1558853
>>1558861
I like this very much.
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>>1558835
>Doxy art with a tummy.

FINALLY
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Thanks to all for the nice comments. I can't promise nothin' but I'll try to draw more stuff in the following days, I guess.

Any harsh criticism is welcome tho.
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>>1558923
>harsh criticism
You don't draw enough and you're too attractive.
Thank you for joining us.
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We're almost to the farm stuff I swear!

Farm of DOOM - Chapter 1 = https://pastebin.com/c460Cgxs

Farm of DOOM - Chapter 2 : Argent boogaloo = https://pastebin.com/GcuCnhWh
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>>1559584
Gotta sleep, but will read later.
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>>1554717
protom pls
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>>1559584
Dialog feels flat and stilted. Anon could stand to have more personality in particular. Give him some more famery vernacular. (Don't write out a southern accent though that's always really onoxious)
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>>1559580
Why is this so funny?
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>>1559888
Hayden being so damn calm.
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>>1559751
I'll start looking into how to write better dialog.

Hm, farm vernacular. I don't know about that. I could try, but I'm not sure of my ability to make it not sound tacky.
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>>1560357
I won't want to step on your toes or anything, but would you be bugged if I gave your work a bit of a proofread? Fix up grammar stuff, polish up some jank?

I like what you're building here, I just thought I could help give it a bit of polish.
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>>1560357
Characterization feels a little inconsistent. MC starts off refering to demons as "those things" and then immediately totally friendly with Audry.
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>>1560437
I would be honored!

As I've said before, never really written anything before this, so I am well aware I'm probably scumming stuff like that up. Many thanks.
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>>1559888
https://youtu.be/zIQgoMbJpBQ?t=152
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>>1560456
"Those thing's" where probably the wrong words to use. It's among the things I am likely to change when re-writing chapter one down the line. Thanks for the comment!
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>>1560479
Nah, Nah. I like the angle of at least having an initial feeling of a barrier of prejudice. Let me see if I can make it work a bit.
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>>1560490
Ah, I remember what i was going for now. My thought was that John, living in an area where demons are pretty reviled, was kind of trying to make himself hate them before he found out he was in the program.
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>>1560550
Well, peer pressure DOES that to someone.
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Been playing DOOM 2 and the funniest level has to be MAP08: Tricks and Traps.
You effectively stumble in on the Cyberdemon giving a speech to a bunch of barons, it spots you, flips out and starts trying to murder you. The barons, not having seen you, react to their leader's sudden outburst with retaliatory violence, plunging the room into chaos.
You're left to watch as the meanest SOBs in Hell rip each other apart over a misunderstanding.
It's gloriously absurd and hilarious.
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>>1560621
This invulnerability spheres right there help out alot
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>>1560663
I feel like it's one of those rare times in a Doom game where you are better off just sitting back and watching Hell eat itself.
Pic related to my feelings.
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>>1560681
Wait until you reach Gotchya
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>>1560458
Ok heads up this is gonna be a "Little bits done at random whenever i get the urge." Life responsibilities are rearing their heads this week.
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>>1560781
Hey bro. I'm just happy you liked the idea enough to offer.
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>>1560767
>The Crusher
I love the gimmick of using a giant press to kill the SM. Honestly, everything else in that level after that could be cut out and it wouldn't bother me.
>The Focus
"Come out swinging" has never been more appropriate. The instant the door opens, you had better have your chaingun ready.
>Dead Simple
The most tactically you have to think in the entire game. You could just run up and immediately press the button, but that removes the fun from the level.
>>
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>>1560621
>>1560663
>>1560681
>>1560767
>>1560951
>DOOM levels with reformed demons and no zombies
>Hangar
An imp pack is just puttering around some old hangar and not bothering anybody.
>Nuclear Plant
Some imp workers are just trying to get through the work day.
>Toxin Refinery
Some pinkies wandered into the refinery and the imp workers are trying to shoo them away.
>Command Control
The imps working here have brought some pinkies along for guard duty.
>Phobos Lab
There's been a nukage spill and the imps on duty have to keep the pinkies from playing in it.
>Central Processing
The imps complain about who designed this place while the pinkies bumble around sniffing things.
>Computer Station
"ROSY! NO! BAD! GO ON THE PAPER!"
>Phobos Anomaly
The Bruiser Siblings wrestle with each other and their pet pinkies and specters.
>Military Base
A bunch of imps decided to have a cage match because they were bored.
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DOOM VFR

GAME DESCRIPTION:

Available for PlayStation VR and VIVE platforms, this DOOM adventure will bathe you in virtual carnage. Developed by id Software, the studio that pioneered the first-person shooter genre and modern VR, DOOM® VFR brings the fast-paced, brutal gameplay fans of the series love to virtual reality. Immerse yourself in the UAC facility on Mars and the depths of Hell, as your skills are put to the test through intense combat and challenging puzzle-solving. Play as a cybernetic survivor who is activated by the UAC to fight the demon invasion, maintain order, and prevent catastrophic failure at the Mars facility. Lay waste to an army of demonic foes as you explore and interact with the outlandish world of DOOM from an entirely new perspective.

STORY:

Set shortly after the demonic invasion on the UAC’s Martian research facility, you are the last known human survivor– until your death. Under a top-secret UAC operational contingency protocol, your consciousness is transferred to an artificial brain matrix. Your designated purpose: restore operational stability and use any means necessary to stop the onslaught of demons.

KEY FEATURES:

Experience DOOM combat and its iconic weapons and demons from an entirely new perspective
Physically interact with the DOOM universe as you seamlessly traverse across the UAC facility and Hell using teleportation and jet-strafe movement
Explore all-new UAC Martian research facility areas and discover the unique abilities of a cybernetic UAC security operative
ONLY AVAILABLE TO SHIP TO THE CONTINENTAL U.S.
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>>1538628
Anymore of these big beutiful demons?
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>>1561854
With color!
>>1548665
>>1549110
>>1549914
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>>1562863
Why would you crop the original?
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>>1563194
Cuz.
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Slow day today.
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>>1564249
Took a break from writing today, I'll have something done the day after tomorrow.
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I have an honest question for this and the next thread: would you play a DOOM game if it was an isometric shooter?
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>>1564665
Sounds like the next step from Doom Rogue like
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Holy crap, this thread's been pretty damn active. I hope the archive isn't too much of a mess, now.
https://pastebin.com/agBn1LNU
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>>1568339
Bump limit was already reached.
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NEW THREAD:
>>1568366
>>1568366
>>1568366
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