Wish there was more Korra size content.
The little of it there is out there isn't very good.
It's western. Same with AtLA and size things. If they had more fun with what happened in season 2 then maybe something would have come of it.
There's a decent enough story out there that's unfinished.
>after a few hours and constant begging by her shrunken friend she finally decides to go replace the batteries
>points the recharged shrink ray at her and gets ready to grow her back when she pauses for a moment
>"hmm I wonder if there's a limit for this thing. hold on a sec I wanna try something out."
>instead of growing her she hits the shrink button again and causes her to shrink even further
>her friend screams in protest as she dwindles down from a few inches tall to a barely visible speck
>she's still screaming when the shrinking stops but it's impossible to hear anything other than an insignificant squeaking noise
>to try and get a better view of her tiny friend the girl gets down on her hands and knees and brings her face right down to a few inches from the ground
>"oh my god, you're like, microscopic right now. you're gonna have to tell me what it's like when I grow you ba-"
>with her face right down at the ground she accidentally inhales a load of dust and lets out a massive sneeze
>when she opens her eyes her friend is nowhere to be seen
>"ah crap" is all she can say with casual shrug
>gets out her phone and texts another one of her friends
>tells her she's her new best friend and ask if she wants to come hang out
It's been a while since I've seen Spokle's art. He seems to be improving at a moderate pace. Good for him, my boner is proud.
One way to resolve the slowness issue would be to post poser content. Another would be to encourage artists to come here and do some light sketches and such. Yeah they might get told to fuck off, but if we encourage the halfway decent one's then this thread could get one or two dedicated drawfags. You could also write some greentext or pastebin. It doesn't have to be Shakespeare, just good enough to fap without cringing.
What do you guys think of the potential for text adventure games like these:
This one has a fairly decent amount of content and it's written fairly well.
There's also this one, it has even less content though, and the writing is sub-par and adheres to some of the worst tropes in this fetish.
I'm working on one of these myself, but I'm in very early stages. My aim is to really focus on mostly unaware content.
more like this?
God i just love these stories where one person slowly shrinks and toys with another at various sizes....we need more stories like this
pills>find graphite>cut paper/threads>use thread on inkwell>enter drawer>use graphite on chewed gum>climb out of drawer>use gum on bell
You can pretty much go from there for the interactions, or type 'say size matters' after ringing the bell at normal size in the lobby to access a different part of the game.
Tormenting someone by constantly shrinking them is the best, especially when it involves the person in control making up excuses to keep them small or shrink them even further.
How did you guys discover that you're into this shit?
for me pic related
>that house scene
Probably Honey I Shrunk the Kids
I remember watching it a ton of times when I was younger and not knowing why I was obsessed with it so much.
I've been fiddling off and on with witting a few text adventure things in twine, the only two relevent ones would be a tiny superhero in his giant GF's apartment and a shrunk in a victorian manor thing
I keep running into roadblocks where I can't get twine to do what I want though and am contemplating starting over in java
>Nice, is there a story behind it?
Not really, just a series of drawings about that guy getting tormented by giant girls. Might expand it into a comic.
Not bad anon. I Like the style and the detail you put into the thighs and butt. Specifically, the POV in the second panel was really well done. Not going to lie though, there are some things that I'd consider flaws. However, I will respectfully refrain from judgement until I've seen more of your work.
TornadoTitan (Tumblr and DeviantArt).
Idea was that it's Jack and the Beanstalk, but Jack finds a giant high school instead of a castle, and the beanstalk gets chopped down while he's up there. He enrolls in the school and gets bullied by giant girls.
Since we are talking text stuff, here's this:
It's old as shit now but this particular chain starts a couple story lines that lead to some decent mini-gts and gts stuff. I wrote a few chapters deep in a few chains.
Unfortunately no one really seems to be updating anymore, with most branches dead.
You definitely should! Particularly if it's /co/ themed.
I can't say I care for the art in this comic in its current form, but the Jack and the beanstalk idea is pretty solid. In my humble opinion, you should work on improving your style, build up your credibility as an established content creator, then release a comic.
Also does anyone wish there was more giantess art done in this style? Call me a pretentious artsy asshole if you want, but I think the blend between realism and romanticism is exactly what drawfags need to start producing. A high degree of anatomical accuracy and detail but exaggerated slightly to give the giantess allure.
Sonic the Hedgehog episode where Tails turns into a giant and terrorises a hot dog city.
>Think it's kinda neat, never really pay it much attention.
>Browse it another day.
>Wonder if there's a size thread.
Oh my god, I think I died and went to heaven. Please tell me this isn't anything like /d/ and it's ridiculous size threads.
These threads probably won't be around much longer considering we're getting an average of like 5 posts a day.
There's full support for adding images, youtube videos, web links, emails links, sounds etc.
It would be pretty cool to see one these have an artist behind it making character graphics to appear at appropriate times.
I actually prefer the second one.
The first one seems to make the mistake of building up a lot of things up front, without much follow through where it matters.
At least the second one lets you get right into things. Which for smut is a plus.
Are you asking if these are micro based content where the player character has been shrunk?
You've got a good point, one particularly annoying thing about the first game is how much unfinished content is in the game without a little 'WIP' message to avoid having people trying to access stuff under the impression it's just a puzzle they haven't figured out yet.
I went with the player character size of 3 millimeters tall, since it was sort of close to the size of a common ant and it allows for somewhat believable unaware. Particularly if the player is hanging around in a pubic hair forest, in a sock or face to face with an anus.
It's not finished yet. I'm almost done with the layout of the first major area for exploration and /size/ smut. I don't want to release it until It's got a decent amount of content, ideally allowing the player to go anywhere from the feet to the head of the main girl in the game.
I like most of what I've read of Bearchive but it's fallen victim to it's own success, it's too damn big and has nothing resembling a good index/search function, I really wish it was split up across several stories rather than one big branching clusterfuck
Someone's making more towergirls/best princess pics?
>not enough loli butt stuff
Is it bad I mostly only enjoy loli butt stuff when it's giantess lolis? And when it is I fucking love it?
>and then she farts.
[spoiler]Gassy giantess is also hot, but not when she's too big[/nospoilershere]
Mind you I feel the same way about any giantess related thing, just big enough to use someone as a dildo/swallow someone whole or twice a normal person's size is best giantess size
These chat bots are sort of neat, seems like a huge undertaking to actually create a good one though.
>girl finds a strange gun-like device when rooting through her room
>a slider on the side reads "shrink / grow" at opposite ends
>she shows it to her friend, who jokingly tells her to try it out
>girl turns the slider almost all the way to "grow" and shoots her friend with a flash of red light from the gun's tip
>instantaneously, her friend begins to expand, her size doubling in less than a second as she continues growing larger
>girl and her growing friend both scream in unison as the latter crashes through the roof, while the floor buckles under her weight bringing them both down to the first floor of the building as it begins to creak at the supports
>the girl's giant friend just keeps getting bigger, tearing the roof and upper storey of the house off with her growth, barely having time to grab the smaller girl to protect her from the debris
>girl spends a few dark seconds in her friend's enclosed hand, which she still feels expand around her
>soon, the crashing noises settle, and the gigantic palm opens up, revealing a safe but frightened girl no larger than her titanic friend's thumb
>around them, the house is ruined beyond repair
>she squeals and falls over when the much bigger girl begins shouting down to her, begging to be changed back with her booming voice
>girl's heart sinks as she looks around for the size gun she dropped in the chaos, finding it on the floor, broken to pieces
>"W-what do you mean it's broken?!"
>"W-what do you mean it's broken?!"
Best end. It's always great when the size change ends up being irreversible, especially when it involves someone being shrunk and the one who did it destroy the gun afterwards to trap them like that.
>you will never be the pet/plaything of a cute and nerdy teenage girl
>she will never trap you under her feet to squirm while she masturbates
>she will never suck on you while she plays videogames
>girl takes her shrink ray to school and one by one, covertly shrinks the entire girl's volleyball team and carries them home in her satchel
>when she arrives home, she moves them all into a small, glass pet enclosure
>while the many small females protest and beg to be freed, she starts toying with all their sizes with the adjustable shrink ray, leaving the two dozen girls at various sizes varying from three inches to speck-size
>says she'll grow some of the girls back, but only if they stomp on and eat some of the really tiny ones
>the next minute or two are frantic, with the tiny volleyball girls running and pleading in vain as their teammates devour and step on them in hopes of surviving their ordeal
>after nearly two-thirds of the team is gone, girl sticks to her promise and gives the survivors the shrink ray to fix themselves, only for them to discover they're too small to operate the device
>they beg girl to fix them, but instead she promises they'll be kept in her care, as her own personal playthings
>"too bad about your teammates, huh?"
Damn, these are so good. I would totally read some full length stuff of yours, if you don't have any already. Some anons come up with quality stories on here, being totally honest. Have some saved when I feel like going back to them.
oh yah, that was a thing
Thought of a good story or comic that involves Launch from Dragon Ball.
Ok so magical bullshit starting context aside, I was thinking that every time launch sneezes the person/ anon in the story shrinks a little bit, while she herself changes as normal.
This continues with the blond side doing more cruel/ "fun" things to the person (tormenting, humiliating, stepping on sitting on, taking advantage, you get the idea), while the blue haired one has the more gentle aspects (such as taking care of the shrinking person, possible accidental sexual thing and things of the gentle nature). Also possible parts where one sets something up for the other, for instance blond launch eats the tiny, then the blue haired launch finds out and then throws the tiny back up and cleans them off (personally not into that, but to each their own).
It could end one of several ways:
>A. the person shrinks into nothingness and is eventually forgotten.
>B the blond launch disposes of the tiny in an aware scenario ("now its time to end this" situation or "one final bit of fun").
>C. The blond launch unaware kills the tiny in some way (loses track or whatever) and just shrugs it off, which leads to her seeing if the power works on others.
>D. the blond launch sneezes and changes to the blue hair launch who accidentally steps on, sits on, etc the tiny while trying to find them.
>E the blue haired launch thinks that it would be best to put the tiny out of their misery (in this scenario there could be constant plea from the tiny not to do it but the blue hair launch decides it would be for the best)
>F. The blond haired launch purposely leave the tiny in a situation where she knows the tiny will be killed or hurt by the blue haired launch (if hurt she would check that place once she changes back and finish off the tiny)
That scene in Willy Wonka and the Chocolate Factory where the kid gets shrunk and his mom drops him in her purse. I used to fantasize about her just taking him home like that and treating him like a toy.
Since I was little I've been best friends with a girl we'll call B. Back in the day B was quite an energetic loli, with a bit of a bossy streak. She met me not long after moving from mexico and learned english from me pretty quickly for a kid, and in addition to our common interests our personalities meshed well too. Often when she had time free, B would be at my house where we'd talk and play gamecube games and do whatever else, usually what she picked for us to do. Now, she was used to a no shoes in the house rule at home, so whenever she came over she would leave her shoes at the door going barefoot the entire time, which always, subconsciously, mind you, stuck out to me a little even though I totally didn't get it.
So, one particular day, she shows up and we go to play super smash bros. melee together. After we've been playing a little, B, who is laying across the sofa hogging most of it, begins complaining about her feet hurting from her walk over.
I'm indifferent to begin with, but then she sort of ask-demands that I rub them so she'll feel better. Without thinking too much of it, I put down my gamepad and get of my end of the sofa so I can kneel down and get her feet from a comfortable angle. I start massaging them like she asked, while B is still playing gamecube.
Now, even back then, B had great feet. As a loli they were obviously small, and overall B was quite thin in build though not without a little bit of cushioning. Her feet were actually really soft and suitably plump, enough to massage comfortably, helped by how smooth her warm, tan skin was to the touch.
I continue for about ten or fifteen minutes until she says it feels better. That was that, then I get back up and we keep playing. I didn't get it at the time, but it was the first time I'd ever felt that weird, but still nice feeling, like having stomach butterflies only warmer. The day went on, and that night I go to sleep. Suddenly, I'm in the middle of a vivid dream sequence re-enacting what had happened during that day, with a huge difference. I'm about a quarter inch tall. I'm on the sofa, at the feet of a gigantic B, who is again asking for a massage. Even years later, I still have an image of her being huge and looking down on me burned into my mind, it was just that striking to me. I remember breifly questioning how I'm supposed to do what she asks, yet it only leads to me approaching one of her toes so I can try to rub it. I make a little progress on her foot, but before I can keep going I jerk awake and it's all gone, leaving me confused and amazed.
I didn't quite get it back then, but I knew I had become the /size/fag. The very next day I told B all about my dream. She thought it was funny.
>bitchy girl gets her hands on another size device
>this time it works on theft
>shrinks her bff by half, gets to enjoy being seven foot something
>realizes it's not going to be as much fun being huge if she has to hang out with a shrimp all the time and equalizes back
>the two take turns inviting boys over and sapping them away
>they try to make a game of seeing how much they can take before the mark catches on
>kid shrinks himself and is dancing around on the table in front of everyone while shouting about how cool it is
>his mom is naturally freaking the fuck out and doesn't know what to do
>instinctively she snatches him up and holds him tight against her as he complains about how she's ruining his fun as if all she did was take away his video games
>she looks down at her tiny son she could easily hold in the palm of her hand and something inside her clicks
>for the first time all day she smiles as she realizes just how much power she has over him right now after so many years of putting up with his demands and temper tantrums whenever he didn't get his own way
>"wow you're right, this is super cool. so cool I bet you'd just love to stay like that forever"
>it's the kid's turn to start freaking out as his mom unzips her purse and casually drops him inside
>she slings her purse back over her shoulder with a little more force than usual, letting off a slight chuckle when the muffled screams of her son trapped inside are interrupted by him being thrown around inside
>"thank you so much for the tour, Mr Wonka, but we must be going now. I have a lot of things planned for this little troublesome one to make up for the last decade of stress" she sounded like a completely different person to the petite and timid woman who had been walking around with everyone all day
>humming cheerfully to herself she casually strolls off while everyone else just stares at her in silence
>just before she leaves the room she adds one last thing. "oh and Mr Wonka, your little invention here is revolutionary. I have a few friends who would just love to have a demonstration. I'll be in touch."
>she can still be heard talking to herself after she goes out of sight, something about how much she can't wait to get her old doll set out of the attic and that their clothes will fit him perfectly
With your own mom sure, with other people's moms it's hot as fuck.
Can anyone who's really into feet within the context of this fetish give me any pointers as to what I should really focus on if I'm trying to write feet interaction?
I want to give the feet some attention in the text adventure I'm working on but I'm not that into them beyond the entrapment aspect of being stuck in a sock/shoe etc.
Any other interaction suggestions are also appreciated, although I think I'm going to stick to unaware only for everything up to the first public release.
I'm not into feet myself, but being into giantess porn I do come across it mentioned a lot. However, I skim over a lot of it, so I can't get exact pointers.
In general, it's probably a lot like writing any other part of the female body: mention the curves, softness, stuff like that. In the context of giants, you can get more in depth with things like texture and ridges of the skin, depending on the size of the person in relation to the foot. I know a lot of foot stuff also involve odors and sweat. Can't help you out there, that's outside my wheelhouse for sure.
I'm trying to make up an giantess internal stomach loop sound effect.
I've got two versions here, one without any external sounds and another with muffled sounds of a woman yawning/sighing and a burp.
Any feedback is appreciated, I think these can probably be improved a lot but for my first fairly brief attempt at using Audacity I'm very pleased with the results.
Depends on the girl. If it's a tomboy that runs around barefoot, she'd probably have hard calluses, dirt, and a stank to it. Prissy girls might have delicate, softer feet that smell of lotion or soap. These would also change the layout and environment of any shoes they could put you in and what not. Just think about the personality of the character to determine that shit.
If you lifted the scene straight from the book/movie I'd find it odd if she ate him right in front of the tour group, simply given the tone of the story and characterization of everyone it'd be more SoD breaking for me than hot
But the idea of a MILF and her bratty son (or possibly a group of MILFs and their kids) getting a tour of a Wonkaesque factory and one of the kids getting shrunk then toyed with a bit and eaten by their mom is very very hot, especially if you throw in something like dipping him in a bit of chocolate or candy coating and have the MILF toy with him in her mouth a bit first
Giantess vore content where the person she swallows gets mixed in with all the regular food already in her gut is top-tier content.
I like this subtle domination.
How is it possible to make art that looks this good but fail at basic anatomy and facial proportions?
The low standards of the majority of people with this fetish propping an artist up with praise and supporting them through patreon.
If their art is praised and faces absolutely no criticism then they have no reason to try and improve, particularly with patreon bucks flowing in.
The fact that the strawberry is still whole and she's straddling it in the stomach makes it hotter to me too for some reason.
Also we need more giant Tharja stuff.
Has anyone found a good giantess novel?
And I'm not about some literotica poster who charges for their stories on amazon, I'm talking about a legit book written by a legit author.
Looking for an ebook to read next week
I wish there were more Gulivette, porn or otherwise.
>get captured by a hot teenage giantess living alone who makes you into her toy
>fuck yeah this is a dream come true
>she just makes you kiss other normal-sized dudes all day and play with her pet hippo
That would actually be kinda terrifying. Keep in mind, the anthropomorphic animals are probably at the same height as an average human at their peak so imagine living in constant fear of being captured and or killed by a giant crow, a giant hippo, or even a giant person. Shit, this is a macrophilia thread, uh
>you will never ever be engulfed by a pseudo-tidal wave created by a giant entering a bathtub
Yeah, there's way too much thread of death.
Something like shrinking could only be fun if it also made you nigh-invulnerable and you could return to normal size.
I've always loved the ones where the tiny was more or less invulnerable but squishy, so they could be chewed up or squished flat but still not die
Karbo's a really good artist but I can't help but feel his stuff has started to get a little repetitive over the years.
Playful cruelty, MILFs, lolis, bratty teens, unbirthing/insertion, vore of all kinds, butt stuff, breast/ass crushing and/or worship, [spoiler]the tiny being immortal so he can survive all this[/spoiler]
I'm guessing the window for story requests has passed but since everyone else is posting theirs then why not anyway.
Chubby/lazy girls, ultra sadistic girls without reaching into murderfag levels, the girl having the power to shrink her partner whenever she feels like it, unaware but with an aware onlooker who put them in that situation, grudual and endless shrinking, girls being ultra evil/abusive before the size changing starts and them being the one in control
Oh to be squashed flat against a giant qts sole.
>>she just makes you kiss other normal-sized dudes all day
That's hot as fuck.
>She dresses you as a girl and forces you to suck all the dick
Alright /aco/, since /d/ has apparently gone full retard and SBPR doesn't have giant animu eyes I'm posting here. Here's a sample of a thing I'm working on. About 60 images so far, no idea how many it'll be when it's done. If it's not up to quality standards let me know by bitching incessantly.
1 of 6
6 of 6
Expect a shitton of vore if I ever stop being a lazy piece of shit. It's a lot of work to do right, gotta go back and redo most of the shot taking because the SBPRS lighting engine is a colossal piece of shit that lights bodies relative to the camera and not the light source.
extra / 6
If I say yes am I violating the guro rule?
This dissenting opinion is too civilized. How am I supposed to irrationally hate you on a personal level?
Whatcha like anon? Content-wise there will also be a bit more crush and a fair amount of handheld, maybe even a little breast play if I can contrive a reason. Obviously, gentle is a out of the question for this set. Can't do much about how it looks, though I will be running the whole thing through photoshop to smooth out some of the joint kinks and add a filter or two to make the look more consistent, so it won't look exactly like the stills.
Sorry about the politeness, anon, just used to talking that way. I'm more into cute and gentle interactions, and when in the mood for kink stuff I usually like it to happen around the chest area. I'll take a look at some of your future stuff when you finish it to see if there's anything that catches my interest.
Mouth: Yes but it's not great. Stomach: Not really, but anything's doable in post.
Ah, that's more 'like it. Just like /d/ used to make.
If there's one thing I can't stand it's a giant woman doing fuckall for 30 frames or what basically amounts to normal hentai with a dildo shaped like a man. If you want vanilla ice cream try those insipid MM comics or GiantessClub.
I dig the whole growth by eating angle and there will be growth after people are eaten, but I'm not doing any dialog/exposition so it'll all be on how well I can sell it with expressions and visuals alone. The writer in me can't help but point out that the first growth spurt is completely arbitrary so assigning hard rules to why anything's happening is sort of a lost cause.
tl;dr: Yes, ostensibly, and I'm a faggot.
Also getting way ahead of myself. I can see why interaction with smaller characters and multiple smaller characters all doing shit is so rare in this fetish, this is a lot of work and this shit's not gonna be done any time soon.
>a sexy woman 100 feet tall isn't interesting enough
>therfore inject some brutal torture and repulsive odors
>pleasure is so goddamn bland
>people being into stimuli that aren't strictly conventional on a fetish forum
Here you go anon, a frame with nothing going on that could offend anybody.
I fucking hate Felarya. Having giant characters is meaningless in a giant environment, it's always the same forest or posh castles and the enormity of the characters is completely lost. The setting's always the same, the characters all look the same, and they're all doing the same thing every frame of every 60 page comic unless they're farting around with banal character development nobody cares about.
His one-ofs are nice when they get away from that shit, but you need more than a single image to do anything really interesting, and all his comic efforts are spent retreading ground he's walked so many times it's more of a trench than a road.
Cant have a giantess thread without gorthag.
You might if you were the sort of person that thinks about making contingencies for waking up small, since you're obviously a nutter-butter whose life exists entirely through the lens of this wacko fetish.
She was my ex-domme and her ex tied her down and cut off a mole and ate it. She is absolutely anti-vore. Hates everything to do with people getting eaten, refuses to watch AoT because of it etc. I fixed the irrational hate and pointed out the differences in the fetish at large and fucking insane cannibals.
I don't get much sleep, so I have plenty of time to come up with silly bullshit. I wouldn't say it's through a lens of GTS as much as I have an extreme power fetish that directs most personal encounters.
case and point, I'm up at 3:40.
Just decided to give these aco giantess threads a try today to see what the fuss was about and Its fairly adequate. The images maybe so-so but the average posts here are less angsty and alot more productive compared to the /d/ version . I've been looking for a steady alternative anyway, So you can add +1 more subscriber.
It's from Tsoni's giantess workshop on tumblr. Lots of great stuff there.
I will never cuddle up to Marceline's huge foot and fall asleep ;-;
Submissive giants yay or nay?
Shrink or Growth
For me it's growth all the way
[spoiler]and gentle as well[/spoiler]
I enjoy both for different reasons, though I think I lean more towards shrink because it allows for a much wider variety of scenarios and it can be much more intimate/secretive.
I'm struggling to find the page where she climbs into a giant woman's mouth (it's a portal or some shit).
There's also plenty of random fairy play throughout the series, but nothing so involved as the previous three pages.
Can't decide. With shrink, you can have scenes of the victim being kept in panties or bras, dunked in food, played with on the bed. Your scope is very limited, though, in terms of setting.
With growth, you can involve way more prey for the grown predator. Usually that comes with destruction, which I'm cool with though it doesn't do anything for me.
I guess I'm more for growth, since with growth you really don't get unaware stories, and the unaware aspect to the fetish does nothing for me. I want my giant women fully aware of what they're doing, and very aroused by it.
You either get a guy who makes shit and posts alot or a guy with talent who posts every blue moon. Thats how this fetish seems to roll....
My heart is in growth but my mind says shrink. If it takes place in a modern setting. And since I want romance and a somewhat normal personal life, reversible Shrink is the easier route to take. Ideally I'd want a 7ft spartan style gf (think Satsuki/Mikasa) but With the ability to miniaturize things at will and adjust their durability/compliance as she saw fit.. If we want to be kinky, We could do lewd stuff stuff in public like I can be shrunk in her underwear and be getting her off all day while shes at work. conversely she could have me naked in her mouth doing the same for me.
"Outdoors" is a very broad spectrum of settings though. The giant is usually doing the same thing in each one, with some minor differences (using buildings for sex toys, trees for tooth picks, mountains for...I don't know, back scratchers? never seen mountains used).
"Indoors" -can- be used for more settings, but I rarely see anything done outside of a bedroom or, at most, a kitchen. If the giant goes outside the house, the point of view typically shifts to the prey, who has been stuffed inside a pocket/sock/panties/etc., so the experience doesn't really change from locale to locale.
Again, indoor settings can be more varied, but I haven't seen that put into practice, yet.
For once in my life I'm going to try and be constructive, because I know if we just scream you off the board you'll just filter us out and keep making the same stupid mistakes.
1)Anatomy: Your sense of proportion is decent, but it looks like you don't have much experience figure drawing. I'd recommend practicing full body sketches in various positions and POV's. Really get a feel for the creation process. Study human anatomy. See where the muscles are, how they connect, how they look from different angles. Never skimp out on the basics.
2)Buildings: Try adding some architecture, explore different styles used, so that in practice you'll improve both your backgrounds and gain experience rendering different materials and shapes. Trace pictures of buildings if you have to.
3)Perspective: You could stand to do a few perspective sketches. Like I recommended above. Try tracing photographs. Nothing is better at perspective than the camera, so you might as well study from the best. When in doubt, keep reference images handy, so that you get a general idea what's too far or little.
4)Colour: A bit bland. Everything looks watered down and slightly grey for some reason. Everything is one solid color without any visible variation or shading. Try experimenting with different colors and shading. Take one of these images into Photoshop or Gimp and play around with it, see how the feel changes when you alter the variables.
I know you're trying hard Joe, but we need to see some improvement from you mate. I know it seems like I'm asking for a lot, but I'm really not. Practice practice practice. Do a couple sketches per day. Really aim to improve your art.