http://cyberkitten01.tumblr.com
>those man faces
>that messy linework
>bland colours
>shading with blacks
>lazy anatomy
You're either too close to the reference image you're using, or you just trace the image. Either way dude, you really have to learn how colours and proper linework can make an image look better by a landslide. I can't say it looks good, but it just looks insanely ameteurish. Almost as if you started drawing only a couple weeks ago.
Study how to make the female figure looks arousing, because these honestly remind me of those pathetic Family Guy porn advertisement images that look fucking terrible.
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Shit Greg, I thought you only did scripts! Awesome!