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Hard mode: Write an isekai that is actually good

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Hard mode: Write an isekai that is actually good
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>>160973908
Typing it right now.
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>Two friends have been together since as long as they can remember
>one day one friend betrays the other killing him
>the dead friend (the MC) is brought up to the gods to be reincarnated into another world
>but instead of it being a reward it's a punishment, the MC's friend managed to ascend to a power that threatens all worlds and gods and it was the MC who helped him achieve it
>now the MC is tasked with killing his friend, saving the world, and getting revenge in the process
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It’s the Cold War. Tsubuki, a double-agent for the CIA working in Berlin, is about to retire (she's a 1000 year old vampire teenage girl) when she’s given one final mission: she’s been asked to “defect” to the USSR to help find and assassinate a suspected double-agent for the Kremlin (which is run by cute teenage girls). Tsubuki is highly trusted, and she’s given to understand that this mission is need-to-know only between her and very few superior officers. But as she falls deeper into the folds of the Iron Curtain, she begins to suspect that his superior officer might just be the mole - AND her love interest! The mark Tsubukis been sent to kill is on the cusp of exposing the leak.
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>>160973908
Death March AOTY edition. Done!
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>rapes a ship
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>>160973908
Come up with a new hard mode I already beat this one twice
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MC is isekai'd into an RTS as a disembodied spirit that places buildings and hires units. However, the units all have minds of their own and he has to somehow get them to do what he wants.
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>>160973908
>might warrior from a fantasy realm is isekai'd to Japan
>he now has to deal with the struggles and trappings of everyday life as a salaryman
>he uses his past experiences a hero to aid him in this new and alien environment, but that causes him to fail as much as it helps him succeed at times
>he makes friends with his otaku coworker and, a gruff barman of late night diner
>he ends up falling in love with his female coworker who reminds him of a late companion from the realm he came from
>his past is hinted only through brief flashbacks that hint he died during a bloody battle trying to beat the the big bad of his realm
it's a slice of life
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>>160974449
>>>160973908 (OP)
> >might warrior from a fantasy realm is isekai'd to Nihonguo

I can do butter.
>Vietnam vet dies from agent orange poisoning and gets isekai-ed to modern 2D Japan countryside
>He deals with his daily struggle in the body of a rori.
>He uses his past XP to seek ADVENTURE TIME, but is hindered by his PTSD, which is wrongly passed off as autistism cause by Bill Gate's vaccines.
>He ends up falling in rove with his Dagashi nee-chan.
>It's called Non Non: Purple Hearto Jack.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aEVGCJxQisE
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fuck it copypasta

>high school MC is transported to another world with cheat ability
>but the MC is chuuni as all hell and abuses the fuck out of the cheats
>his fun causes misery and suffering to the world's people and they bring up heroes to stop him
>they managed to seal the MC but the seal actually brought him back to his own world
>years passed and the MC becomes a salary man with wife and kids, he chalks up his Isekai memories to chunni delusions he once had and ignores them
>cultists ends up breaking the seal summoning him back into the other world
>having a wife and kid and job he wants to get back but there's only one problem, 1000 years have passed and no one knows the seal used last time
>the awakened ancient evil now has to find his way back home
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>Re:Zero
Done
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>>160974949
>Muh sales
Righto.
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>>160973908
>Demon lord is hack the fuck up and Goddes can't summon people from real world to be the Brave she need.
>She discovers she can summon everything but people.
>So she tries to summon knowledge in order to make the people stronger and more advanced against the army of demons.
>MC is the genius in math but an absolute disaster in magic.
>MC learn the boolean and computing and uses the idea to digitalize the magic.
Builds a computer what runs with mana instead of electricity.
>One entire book is for invention of first mana computer/calculator and it's evolution to something similar to latest core i7 or RYZEN, 32GB RAM, 4TB SSD, 4 QUADRO P5000 in SLI.
>The development and evolution of this magic computer happens in 1 month since the Goddess summoned entire googleplex, Intel and AMD corporation to her world. Except the humans, of course.
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>Naval ship (Any country other than India would work really) on a routine patrol hits a strange supernatural weather phenomenon
>Lightning strikes the ship and the ship loses power, all the lights freak out and the ship disappears off the face of Earth
>The Ship suddenly appears in an alternate realm where technology never progressed past Renaissance times (IE; Early arquebus, Early production lines, Incestuous rulers.)
>The Ship and her crew disagree on the Ship being treated like a deity
>Gruzzled old Captain besieged with marriage offers
>Ship shooting the shit out of Horse Hordes
>75% of the show is about how the new technology begins corrupting the lands and the crew goes from peacekeepers to cruel arseholes.
>Other 25% deals with the rest of the Countries Armed Forces attempting to locate the Lost Ship.
Ending reveals after three years of research and attempting to reach the Ship the armed forces finally get to the other dimension
They find a nuclear wasteland
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>>160973908
The Earth is a propaganda weapon, subtly shaped by an eldritch abomination to create pawns and contrive them to other worlds, to become myths and legends there that will ultimately turn those worlds toward worship of the monster.
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>a fucking shonen
>post-nuclear apocalypse
>basically fallout and madmax but there are people who mutated to be superhuman(still most aren't capable of tanking bullets)
>a lot of them have deformities like 3 arms, wings,1 eye, oversized arms, fangs instead of teeth, black skin...
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>>160975338
To add on to this
>The MC is just plain dude looking human
>he is highly sought after because of this by Ara~ warlords who rule the land
>he actually has two dicks
>it's been so long since anyone has seen a pure human they just go along with
>MC is fucks/is fucked by everything
He ends up with a harem of qt mutants
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>>160974918
This one is still by far the best idea I have seen in any of these threads.
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>>160973908
Why do we do this when white piggu can't make manga?

Except that one time a black man did it with some success
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>>160975664
>Except that one time a black man did it with some success
When did this happen
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>>160974918
Hi, Ore wa anime Producer Miyamiro Shiro, I am a here to find new a tarento, and I seek this one to be za one, desu ka?
I will only make it Rearity if you arrow me to change ichi thing, and that iz to make MC Sama leader of Rori Harem in isekai, do you accept?
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i die and go to another world and be a Gary Stu more powerful than Shiba Tatsuya,I get all the bitches and I win at life.

The end.

>Implying all of you don't think about that.
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>>160975721
7 years ago.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Peepo_Choo
Unfortunately he came back to america to work for Marvel and did a terrible ghost rider reboot staring a Mexican ghost rider with a metallic skeleton who drives a car instead of a bike.
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A guy is living alone for the most part and recently finds out that his parents have mysteriously disappeared.
His parents own a storage area and keep a bunch of weird artwork, heirlooms, etc. there. One day he gets a call from inside the warehouse. Some confused chick is apparently stuck there and wants out.
He drives over to find out what's going on. When he opens the door he finds that she's basically the girl of his dreams, and as they get to know each other their relationship only gets better.
However, he starts developing skepticism and eventually tries looking into what happened in the warehouse. Apparently an old life-sized statue of a gargoyle went missing around the same time she appeared.
Looking into the nature of this statue, he finds that it was originally looted - along with several others - from some middle eastern tomb by grave robbers. For whatever reason, anyone who owns one randomly disappears along with their paramour at some point.
Eventually word gets out that weird statue things are attacking people in the name of some untold master. They have multiple powers over stone, such as petrification, building stone barriers, summoning stone weapons, etc.
Meanwhile, MC's girlfriend starts developing some weird traits. Every so often her skin turns hard and gray, and eventually he realizes she's turning into the gargoyle that had gone missing. To make matters even stranger, it turns out that these statues apparently start out being the mate of the person's dreams when they're first bonded, but over time they destabilize back into animate statues and murder the person bonded to them before becoming true statues again. The statue that became his girlfriend also happened to be the same one that became his mother (Thus he is theoretically a sort of half-breed).
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>>160975863

Apparently this master has figured out how to stave off this process and is buying up all of the statues in hope of good ol' world domination. Since the only thing not petrified when it strikes a statue is another statue, the MC's girlfriend volunteers to help out. Using similar techniques the MC manages to keep her human when necessary but turn her into a full-blown monster when it is necessary as well. Unfortunately there's no denying that the situation is deteriorating, but eventually a new development arises because the MC's starting to go through similar changes.
At the end both become their true forms, destroy all of the other statues, and petrify the big bad. When they realize they're still with it together they decide to live together on a cathedral for presumably forever afterward (After all, they're immortal).
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>>160975664
I'm a curry nigger. So I can a mango rite?
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>a young samurai and two ashigaru chance upon a secluded Emishi village several days after their army was routed
>desperation and the unwillingness of the villagers to help the soldiers causes them to raid the village for supplies
>at the village shrine they are confronted by the goddess who watches over the Emishi
>she deems the soldiers and their kind a blight upon her people and incapable of anything but bloodshed
>she sends them to modern day Japan, "a time where there is no use for men of war" to either put down the sword or perish
>landing in a seedy place on the outskirts of a large city they encounter a yakuza execution taking place
>after being forced to defend themselves as witnesses, the man about to be executed sees an opportunity in the soldiers and offers them a job
>maybe the future isn't as peaceful as the goddess believed
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>>160976011
You probably have a better chance because "Muh buddihism", just don't shit in the streets.
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>>160975739
take it I ain't using it
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>Youjo Senki
What did I win?
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It's the distant future and humanity is in a losing battle against machines. Earth is a wasteland, and the resistance is having trouble simply living in the planet conditions alone.
The MC is a resistance soldier. He piloted the last A-10 Thunderbolt II before it got shot down and lost forever. Now he still fights on foot, but with not nearly as much effectiveness.
A new development arises when humans examine a warehouse they recently took from the machines. There are devices that humans can link to to gain insight into the machines' operations.
This is a far more hopeful prospect at destroying the machines, for theoretically one could just rewrite them to destroy themselves rather than exterminating all of them (They're on a networked intelligence system).
A battle operation is assembled on the machines' servers using these devices. Hardware is fabricated into virtual form once more, and the MC is given a virtual version of his A-10.
However, when they go to the other side they find things are exactly the same, and a bunch of weapons the machines were testing in VR basically annihilate them.
The MC is quickly shot down and has a 12lb. shell detonate in his back. He wakes up in an apartment building, which is extremely jarring to him because he's never lived a day in peace.
Some other chick asks to come in and he flips out because the machines are also really good at making human lookalikes (Think Terminators, but using artificial muscle rather than a skeleton). Eventually she manages to convince him that everything's fine, however, and he starts getting used to what we would regard as a "normal" life.
However, he starts figuring out that chances are that little - if any of this - is real, and asks if he's just a dead soul on the machine server. She responds that he's just like everyone else on the server - former humans that for whatever reason ditched their physical bodies in favor of becoming part of a machine network.
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>>160976387

Apparently the machines were a project spurred by humans to find immortality. They found that if they put their consciences on computers they could live in a virtual world forever, while still establishing the means to work in real life by using drones and the funny Terminator things. The whole war of man versus machine was a lie - it's just humans that gained a higher level of existence versus those that denied themselves that prospect and then became envious of their mistake.
Realizing this the MC begins to embrace that this world is how things realistically should be - and not only that, there are dozens of other worlds on the server that he can visit at any given point.
However, real-life humans begin an invasion once more, and using physical hacking techniques they have gained an upper hand this time. The MC's given another CAS aircraft and told to kick some ass.
Blah blah blah he manages to convince humans to stop blah blah, goes full romance with his roommate, blah bah. We all know endings are boring.
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>>160976965
Huge dogfucker.
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>>160976382
>>160976518
>>160976573
>>160976685
>>160976764
>>160976897
>>160976965
This is infinitely more annoying than the same seven shitposts every plot thread, fuck off with your epic forced meme.
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>guy dies
>lived a pretty shit life
>god tells him he's going to, at best, stay in purgatory if not hell
>unless he proves himself worthy of heaven by emulating the deeds of a great man
>he accepts this challenge
>is reincarnated as either oda nobunaga or toyotomi hideyoshi
>hijinks and hilarity ensue as a neet otaku attempts to unify japan
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The people who died in the 2011 tsunami were really isekai'd to fantasy Japan. Mc is ken sama, with his side kick davido kun. They travel Japan in kimono fighting evil time traveling robot nazis with their katana.
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>>160977060
maybe even tokugawa ieyasu as well for shits and gigs
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>>160977121
>>160977121
Also the wise mentor character is the Japanese westaboo cowboy, and the main villain is "shit was so cash" John, who was isekai'd in a car crash ten years ago and has risen to power amongst the nazi ranks. He's trying to kill the Jews who were isekai'd in the holocaust
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>Medieval/Victorian Era Setting
>"Archfantasy" is an archaic heirloom granted to mankind from the supreme deity during the last millennium -- said to grant any and all beings who come across it with one wish of their desire.
>Since then, Archfantasy has spread it's power throughout the world, and given each human the potential to bring about their inherent powers through dire stress. Those who wield these powers effectively are known to man as "Awakened Souls".
>People everywhere have set out from home in hopes to find Archfantasy and get their eternal wish granted.
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>>160973908
An isekai staring a literal cat
>The cat is accidentally summoned to defeat the demon king instead of the hero
>Given all sorts of cheat powers and human level intelligence
>But it's a cat
>The entire show is just a slice of life of this super-intelligent cat being a cat while the actual story goes on in the background
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>first episode, opens on a normal highschool kid going through his day. talks to the girl he likes, eats lunch, talks with his friends, gets a talking to from his teacher, afterschool club, cleanup duty.
>he takes the late train home
>slips and falls, dies on the railroad tracks
>wakes up thinking "oh, i've had a bad dream"
>he's in his crushes body
>obligatory fanservice
>tries to save his old self
>fails
>wakes up in best friend's body
>repeat alla groundhog day with everyone he interacted with that day
>cycle won't stop till he saves himself

just came up with this on the spot, not sure if its any good or not or even if it counts as an isekai.
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So i actually went ahead and wrote a complete prologue for the thing. No synopsis yet, just that it's a reverse isekai

“Advance”
I don’t know about other people, but there were certain words that i liked a lot for some reason.
Couldn’t quite put my finger on the reasons why, though. Maybe because of how they sounded, their aestetics when written, or the things they represented?
“Broken”
Hearing them, saying them, reading them. I enjoyed it, it gave me an exciting feeling of emptiness and wholeness.
“Absolution”
I tended to speak to myself often, and at times i just felt like saying them, even if they didn’t have anything to do with what the monologue was about, maybe to sound cool or something? ‘SYNERGY! PREACH IT!’
Okay, that definitely sounded lame.
“Redemption”
Some of them brought random images to my head with no coherent relationship, i wonder why? My head always tended to feel like a disorganized mess, guess that may be why my hair was so curly.
“Beyond”
Anyways, what’s with all of this pointlessly pretentious talk? Actually, why was all of it in past tense?
“Regret”
Hmmm, i wonder why?
“Farewell”
But still, that ass was fat.
And so, as i once again idly thought to myself about matters of extreme importance, as if it was just another day in the office, i…
I died.
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>>160977680
The kingdom of ‘something-or-other’. Biggest of the 3 empires located in the continent of ‘whatever’, and as such the one holding the most power. When shit hit the fan that power didn’t mean much, and by ‘shit hitting the fan’ i mean when the demon lord awakes and wrecks havoc in the world, with the sole objective of destroying and enslaving the human race.
Forced by necessity, the size or relative individual power of those 3 empires didn’t really mean anything, so they put their differences aside and made a temporary alliance to deal with the demon lord. Thing is, the difference of power between the strongest humans and the strongest demons in this world is far too much, so the humans were pretty much doomed.
I said ‘were’, because the humans still had a winning card under their sleeve, and that was the arcaic magic arts for summoning a hero from another world, a world with humans strong enough to protect us and beat the demons.
All said and done, they summoned a hero, at first people had their doubts about his otherworldly common sense, his weird talks about ‘human rights’ ‘democracy’ ‘technology’, and above all his great aversion to girls’ advances. The locals couldn’t really understand his cultural customs when courting, like the first time one of the many girls that had fallen in love with him tried to seduce him and receive his seed, only to be answered with a blushed face, a flustered scolding and some stupid talk about how ‘proper girls’ had to behave. She had expected him to release his internal beast, like any man would, and yet he just left her there hanging for no apparent reason.
2/??? (14 pages in word)
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>>160977729
Talks questioning the masculinity and tastes of the guy went on for long until he finally decided to marry someone. By the way, that someone turned out to be the first girl he met, an average girl from an average farming family. Really makes you wonder why would he have gotten a party full of cute female adventurers that fell in love with him if he was going to pick the blandest option anyways, as if it was all decided from the beginning.
So, matters about ‘japanese’ (that was the country he said he came from) sexual impotence aside, the guy was strong, very strong. Strong enough that he managed to bring down the demon lord and all his lackeys. When he came back he was proclaimed a “hero”, and he was promised to have any of his wishes fulfilled, but for some reason he just wanted to have a quiet live in a random village far away from the trouble of the big cities, arguing about “normality” and what-not, another one of his weird values from another world.
After that the guy just sort of disappeared. Of course myths and legends about his glory kept being told, well, when creating false stories it doesn’t really matter whether the guy in question is alive or not.
Yeah, his whereabouts became unknown. Or at least that’s how it is for the great majority of people from this world, except a select few. And i am among those.
The reason is not very special, it’s just that the guy from the legends, the super famous and extremely powerful hero, Kurohara Ichika, ended up being my father.
“Noah! Hey Noah! Nooooaaaaahhh!”
Oh, speak of the devil. But sorry sweetheart, right now i don’t feel in the mood to go selling my soul.
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>>160977771
“Kurohara Noah!”
Damn, he called my full name, better reply before the situation gets out of hand.
“Yo dad, need anything?”
“Not really, just get here, gotta tell you something”
Shit, that tone means it’s definitely not just a simple “something”.
I quietly went down the stairs, as if hoping that he didn’t sense me, and tried to peek to assess the situation before deciding which course of action to take. Just as my eye poked out just barely from the wall I saw…
I saw my dad’s face, right in front of me, with a smile which honestly was a pretty amusing, a seemingly impossible mix of smugness and rage, a smile going from ear to ear, mouth barely open and creepily showing just a little bit of his teeth, the eyes of someone that just saw his friend comically falling ass first into a muddy pond just seconds after telling him to not go near it because it was very slippery, which would have been a pretty funny situation for the observer if the friend hadn’t splashed mud all over as he fell, making a mess out of them both. That ephimeral mix of fun, anger, irony and emptiness. Under normal conditions I would have liked to take my time to appreciate all the details of such an unique facial expression as a third person, but unfortunately I was busy shitting my pants because that look was directed at me.
“Say… Do you know how many pairs do three flies make?” Said the creepy man in front of me.
Surprised by the unexpected quiz, I gathered all my wits at once and gave it my all to find a solution to the riddle. I ain’t getting eaten by no sphynx!
So how many pairs do three flies make? Huh? How am I even supposed to solve that? Three flies are 3, tres, три, 三つ. A pair is made out of two, so the logical answer should be one pair plus the unfortunate third wheel, but in that case why would he say “pairS”, as in plural?
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>>160977803
There just can’t be two pairs with only three units, 1.5 pairs then? Does that make any sense? What does a “pair” mean anyways? Could it be as in a “couple” i.e man and woman? In that case how does he want me to guess the flies’ gender? But wait a minute, can I really exclude the posibility of a same-sex couple? I certainly read something about the posibility of homosexuality in flies when they were in a drunk state. Alcohol sure is a scary thing. *gasp* Wait, what If it’s actually a three-way relationship? Can such a thing be allowed by mother nature? Who would be the one(s?) giving and who would be the one(s?) receiving?
By the way, how do flies even have sex? Do they just stick it in and out just like us? But aren’t you supposed to do some of the so called “foreplay” first? Now that I think about it, don’t flies always suspiciously rub their front legs, as if craftily planning your demise while munching away at any given piece of trash? Could that actually be some sort of training to get better at foreplay? And you’re telling me they do it openly, right in front of your face, even as they shamelessly stand on top of your favorite sausage bread? I didn’t think flies could display such audacity and be so lewd. But now I kind of feel a certain sense of fraternity towards them. We all have our own troubles interacting with the opposite sex, huh? I wonder if by rubbing my hands I will do better whenever I get the opportunity to get rid of my V-card...
Hmmm, looks like I went beyond, what was I even trying to figure out at first?
“Heeeey Noah! Earth calling Noah!”
This voice, my dad? Man, what’s with him today? Pulling me out of another internal deliberation of utter importance…
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>>160977680
Use a pastebin, anon.
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>>160977680
>>160977729
>>160977837
>>160977771
please use better formatting
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>>160977853
Good idea, here https://pastebin.com/xHn6gWte
I'll keep dumping it to see if i can get more people to read it
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>>160973908
Gate but only it's the Harlem Hellfighters instead of the Jsdf.
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>>160977837
“Come on son, again with that habit of yours of just wandering off into your own world in the middle of a conversation? And then you wonder why you’ve got no friends and no girlfriend. So sad…”
“What do you mean by no friends? I’ll let you know I have lots of those, and girlfriends? There are many girls with whom-…”
“You do know manga characters don’t count as friends, and specially not as lovers, right?”
“Oh, a lecture on how to get a girlfriend from the legendary “impotent hero”? Please enlighten me, good sir.”
“Impot… !? I’ll let you know there’s a bunch of women that would-…”
Heh, he got flustered, guess I hit him where it hurts. Those younger years of his must surely have been hard.
“Legends about the hero’s deeds made up by some random con don’t count as facts”
“Made up!? How can you accuse your kind and innocent father of lying!? I didn’t save the world to receive this kind of treatment! You tell him, honey!”
Oh, at some point during our exchange of verbal abuse my mother had come over and was looking at us with a beautiful smile, a smile as if she had gotten that one present she wanted the most for christmas, a smile so bright you had to avert your eyes. And the reason for that smile was in seeing how we competed to see who could hurt the other’s ego the most. Women can be so sweet, and yet so merciless…
“Noah, your dad is right. Despite how he looks, he’s not someone worthy of a nickname such as ‘impotent hero’ ” Said mom in a soothing tone, as if intending to share with me a bit of her deep wisdom.

>>160977884
How exactly? I'm just copypasting from word.
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>>160978002
“ ’Despite how he looks?’ Y-You could have put it a bit nicer, but thanks a lot hon-!”
Interrupting the poor guy as he was just getting done giving her thanks for such a ‘helpful’ intervention, she cut him off right away and continued with the same bright smile, albeit with a slightly evil vibe.
“I have experienced it myself, Noah, and I can tell you that ‘impotent hero’ couldn’t ever be enough to make it justice. Objectively speaking, you should call him ‘ultra useless impotent hero overlord x100’ ”
Bwahaha, I love this woman.
“H-Honey!?”
“I mean, no matter what world you came from, you get teleported here, save the world, be offered the greatest treasures and the most beautiful women, all of which you can marry because polygamy is perfectly fine in this world, and you reject everything to pick up the plain farmer girl and come live in a village in the middle of nowhere? There’s definitely something wrong with you, limp-dick.
“Honey…”
She said such harsh words, but strangely, her tone didn’t transmit any hostility or resentment. Quite the contrary, actually.
“Really, there’s some very fundamental screw loose in that head of yours… And that’s what I love about you the most”
“Honey!”
Moved by her kind words, my dad who seconds ago looked like a puppy abandoned in the rain regained his composure and jumped straight into his lovely wife’s chest. But right as he was about to land his head inbetween her two feminine assets of considerable size... He was stopped by sharp words said with a very cold tone.
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>>160975202
would work better as a semi-realistic survival/military drama

they start out as an untouchable superpower, but think about it; there is nowhere they can resupply, nowhere they can properly repair the ship, they don't speak the same language as the other people living there and they have no immunities to the diseases of this new world. Long term, if they don't adapt they're fucked.
In fact, even if it is the same diseases that exist in our world and they have immunity via vaccines, they could still be spreading disease unintentionally to the people of this new world who aren't vaccinated and don't have modern medicine. This could easily be seen as an attack or curse created by these foreign invaders, as they spread disease but don't get sick themselves

That's all without bringing the possibility of magic into the show. With magic, the locals suddenly have a way to possibly strike back and become MUCH more dangerous. If you add in monsters, even more so. Also, what happens if the locals manage to steal or even reverse engineer guns from the ship?

Then, what if other people from our world start appearing? How much damage could they do to any peaceful relationships the naval vessel managed to forge with local rulers? What if they started arming and training the local forces, or even worse, local criminals or monsters? Imagine how much firepower an orc or troll could use if it knew how.

Add in actually good medieval politics and believable characters and you could have an amazing series. Could end up being what GATE should have been.
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>>160978047
“But that same madness made you refuse the money. I married you because I love you, but was there any need to refuse all that gold? I wouldn’t have asked you to receive it all, was it too much to accept just enough to live comfortably without having to lift a finger for the rest of our lives?
Do you think just because I’m from a farming family would have liked to keep plowing fields every day for the rest of my life? You know what passes through my mind every time I pick up the plow? It’s ‘My feet hurt, I’m hungry, this farm sucks, the cicadas are too loud, look at that dipshit of my husband acting as if this was the most enjoyable thing ever, I wish I was at home studying my collection of stamps’ “.
“But honey, you already spend most of your time studying your stamps anyways”
“What are you even talking about? A woman can never spend too much time studying her personal collection of stamps!”
That a fact?
After a little back and forth between them, as always, the winner ended up being my mother. Heroes may be able to beat any demon with their fists, but a simple farmer girl can pretty much destroy them with just a couple of words. Perhaps that’s how they fell in love in the first place.
Mom decided to go back to her stamps, and then I was left sitting with my seemingly dejected father. He would probably have looked better after a bloody fight with demons than right now.
“So dad, what did you even need me for in the first place?”
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>>160978083
“Hah… Hah…”
“Dad?”
Looking again, the guy has this slight blush in his face, and that suspicious panting…
Ah man, he’s horny.
“Dad, there’s a bunch of moles eating our crops”
The man in trance suddenly regained his senses, and I could feel the wave of bloodthirst being emitted by him. It was pretty amazing to think that this guy was the same masochist that got reduced to an ‘ultra useless impotent hero overlord x100’ by his wife’s verbal abuse.
“WHO DARES TO ATTACK MY CUTE LITTLE PAPAYAS!? I’M GONNA FUCK THEM UP!”
Hehe, what a weird dude.
“I was kidding, what did you call me for?”
Calming down but yet for some reason still cautiously looking out the window towards the papaya fields, as if to not give even the smallest chance to any potential aggressor, my dad answered.
“I got a letter from your school, saying that your grades are falling bellow the average and that I should go speak personally with the teacher. I know you’re pretty smart, so what’s going on?”
School, huh?
“What are you talking about? My grades for biology and history should be pretty high”
“Well, they indeed look good, but why are the rest so low?”
“The rest doesn’t interest me”
“I get where you’re coming from, I also remember the boring classes and useless knowledge they taught me back in my own highschool, but that doesn’t mean you can just put aside the other subjects. All science and humanities are related one way or another, it wouldn’t hurt to give it a bit of effort, don’t you think?”
“Nah, don’t wanna”
I answered right away, as if to shake his words out of my ears.
My dad seemed to notice it, and was silent for some seconds while pondering what to say.
“Actually, why do you like those two subjects so much? For starters, why history?
To find out more about the heroes.
“No reason, I just like it”
“And biology?”
To find out the reasons behind a hero’s strenght.
“Same”
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>>160977958
Better idea: Gate, but with good writers and directions.
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>>160978126
I don’t like this sort of conversation, always makes it too awkward for me to say the truth so I just end up pretending to be apathetic. I can’t just come out and say ‘It’s because I admire you so much, and because I want to know more about you and your past’. My irrational and useless pride wouldn’t let me. I felt a bit at ease, a bit guilty and a bit empty.
Giving up in getting a proper answer for me, he just looked at me in the eyes, and in a tone which suddenly made me feel as if I had suddenly fallen in the depths of hell he said.
“Okay, I will go talk to the teacher, and you will go and fix your grades. Understood?”
His eyes slightly slanted, his pupils contracted, his expression immobile and the aura of someone that won’t hesitate to bring you down if you try to oppose him. It wasn’t the face of my goofy and masochistic father anymore, it was the face of the hero, Kurohara Ichika, when he was out for blood.
“Yes sir”
I answered before my brain even processed what he had said. When he showed that face there was no room for discussion, not even for my mother. The face that saw countless demons die by his hands, the face that saw countless allies die by his side. The one that scared me the most, and the one that inspired me the most. The living proof that the legends may not have been made up by con men after all.
After our conversation, my dad suspiciously gave me a rather generous amount of money to go out and do something ‘productive’ while he ‘helped mom with her stamps’. I wonder why he looked sort of restless, with his cheeks slightly blushed. I guess he must also love stamps a lot.
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>>160978214
Now, I’ve got the money, I’ve got the time, now I only need someone to share it with and have fun (totally NOT because walking alone around the village would look sad and make me feel kinda miserable). Luckily, I spotted a group of guys from my class engaging in some sort of game. Oh, it was marbles.
“Yo guys, you playing something?”
The tree goofs looked at me, looked at each other, then looked at me again.
“Hey Noah, need anything?” Said the one guy in a friendly tone while the other two looked at me skeptically. If I’m not wrong he’s the one I have interacted the most, what was his name again?
“You see, José, I’ve got my hands on a little something and I may be willing to share it with you” I said with the kindest smile I could paste on my face.
“Who the heck is this José!? My name is Walter! remember it properly damn it”
“Okay Willfred, so the thing is-…”
“It ain’t Willfred either! How can you get it wrong right after I told you!?”
Seems like my friend Wilhelm is getting irritated again for some reason beyond my understanding, what a tough guy to deal with. Why does he nitpick so much when it’s obvious that the one I’m addressing is him? I will advice him to go and get some classes in how to properly communicate with people. You should be glad that I’m such an understanding person, Willford. And then you wonder why people have trouble talking with you…
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>>160978255
After a little exchange with my colleague Willy, he and his gang of random side characters accepted to tag along with me, the promise of a free meal proving too tempting to ignore. ‘For money the monkey dances’, once again popular wisdom proved to be of great use in personal relationships.
We played 2-on-2 basketball, one of the games imported from that parallel world by my dad. Me and Wilberg vs the other couple of mob characters. As always my performance was impeccable, but unfortunately I couldn’t say the same about my comically unskilled teammate.
He did give it quite a bit of effort, but sometimes he made me wonder whether we were playing basketball or some sort of screaming contest, taking into account how he kept yelling at me unintellegible gibberish like “stop trying to make 3-pointers if you can’t aim for shit”, “don’t just stand still after throwing the ball, go get the rebound!” or “JUMP dude, J U M P”. Is he okay? I barely broke a sweat but he looks just about to die.
“I’m… never playing… a team game… with you… again” Said my exhausted colleague as he desperately gasped for oxygen.
There he goes shifting the blame again. But rest assured, I’m not so cruel as to plainly point it out. Feel free to relieve the frustration of those school days of old by pinning the blame of your failures on me, I would have also grown to hate the world if I was rejected by my crush in front of the whole class in 5th grade. Actually, I’m going to answer his hostility with good intentions.
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“You constipated? I could give you some papaya from my family’s yard. It will help you get rid of all that accumulated negativity. You will be a new, happy man after you eat it!”
Aren’t I so kind?
“… Just… Shut… Up…” Said my perishing friend right before going even limper, as if dedicating his last words to the cruel shinigami that decided to take him away from this world at such a young age.
How strange, he’s been recovering for a while now and yet the more I talk to him the more exhausted he looks. Could it be he suffers from some sort of social anxiety? Fear not, Waldobert. Your old friend Noah will take you to the best psychologist he can find!
“So guys, about the meal. How about we eat at my place?” Said Wallace in a merry tone, completely recovered from our little match earlier. I guess he won’t be needing that papaya.
True, his family owns the best restaurant in our village. I often pass by because their menu has incorporated some of the recipes brought from the other world by my dad. Contrary to what you may expect, sitting alone in a corner and looking out the window while munching on some balls of takoyaki is great to focus your mind in thinking about matters of extreme importance, such as world peace, analyzing methods to see under girls’ skirts without getting caught, or where does your favorite sock disappear to when your mom washes your clothes.
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I kek'd a lot while writing this one.
>>160978357
And by favorite sock of course I mean the personal fapping sock every respectable man keeps close by his bed’s side. Hmm, wait a moment... What if my mom realized its true identity while sorting out the clothes? But it can’t be, I made sure to roll it up inside the fapping boxers, which at the same time were rolled up into the fapping shorts.
In the worst case I could explain its smell and stickiness saying that I used it to clean a milk spill or something, I always carry my food upstairs to eat in my room, and mom knows that if I spilled something I would be too lazy to go get the mop after all.
Every excuse has a coherent follow up explanation, and I’m sure mom would reach that same conclusion after analyzing the facts. The plan should have no blind spots, and yet what is this uneasy feeling in my heart?
It couldn’t be, did she catch me jerking off without me realizing!? Even though I try to be as stealthy as possible, it’s true that when I get close to cumming my hips start moving on their own and my legs tremble, making the bed emit awkward noises.
Could she have noticed the sound during that ephimeral moment of carnal release? Could there be any logical explanation besides the natural assumption about the infamous self-pleasuring back-and-forth?
Fuck, so it’s the bed’s fault after all? I should have asked my dad to get me one of those so-called futon before it came down to this. Those treacherous wood planks, you promised me freedom by raising me from the ground level, and turns out you were cause behind my downfall!?
Unforgivable, I shall let the punishment rain down thee integrity when I go back home. Thy corpse shall be offered to the gods’ messengers (ie trash men) and thy sins shall be atoned by turning your remains into pencils or something.
Recycling! What a wonderful thing. It teaches us that even the most worthless piece of trash can find redemption.
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>>160978406
“Noah! Noahhh!... What’s with this guy?”
“Oh, yeah, the restaurant. Prices are decent and the flavor is great. Indeed, it’s the best possible choice. I commend you for your services, Waltraud.” I said as I was once more pulled out from the unknown depths of my conscience.
Only then I opened my eyes, only to realize the one in front of me wasn’t Wandal or one of the two stooges that were tagging along. It was a girl, a girl i knew well, perhaps too well.
“Hehehe” The long haired blonde girl in front of me laughed as she made her signature smug face, with her mouth making a small arc on the right side of her face, consequently closing her right eye just slightly more than the left one.
Childish, yet seductive enough that you felt the strong primitive impulse of proposing right in the spot. Hold it in, sweet child o’ mine, you can only do such bold movements when you’re assured of the coming victory.
“When we talk you’re always so silly, Noah. But at least try to remember my brother’s name properly, okay? His attitude aside, when he dad asks him about his friends he speaks about you the most…”
“Iris!? You traitor! You promised to keep quiet!? A-Actually there’s no way that can be true, she’s just lying!” Said our poor, shameful Wandalin as he futilely tried to turn time back on the spilled milk. Heh, what a foolish scrape of a man.
“You basically admitted it before backpedalling spectacularly in the same phrase. Brother, oh my sad, pitiful brother, did your brain melt down together with whatever was left of your dignity?”
Said iris in a dramatic tone with a the back of her right hand positioned on her forehead, and her left arm extending to the side in a perfect 45° angle, giving off a sensation as if the humble dinning locale had become the stage of a theater play. Damn, she’s good.
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>>160978463
Seeing Woodrow with his face looking like a red mixed mess of shame, anger and the desire to dig a hole and plant his head on it, I decided to fulfill my duty as a law-abiding citizen and use my daily good deed to help his soul find some amidst this merciless world.
I carefully selected my words, adjusted my tone accordingly, plasted a perfect business smile on my face, then approached him with the most positive of attitudes and told him:
“So, should I get you some papayas after all?”
“So here are your orders, if you need anything just call me!” Said Iris with her well-trained waiter smile. I know it’s false, I understand it perfectly, and yet I can’t stop my heart from skipping whenever I see it.
While such thoughts wandered around my mind I watched her retreating back as she went towards another table.
Hoh, she bent to pick something up. Mental picture taken aaand saved. Dayum, what a nice ass she’s got.
“Dude, stop oogling at Walter’s sister like that, the guy is sitting right next to you.” Pointed out one of the hang-ons. Fool, you should just keep quiet and remain a part of the interior decoration.
“Whatever could you be talking about? I definitely wasn’t looking at her. Nope. Not at all. Absolutely not. Zero.”
“Man, even the methods you use to hide your embarrassment are weird” Said hang-on #2.
Guh, what’s with these guys? Are they conspiring to bring me down from my position as a main character? Sure, i’d like to see you try, you nameless doormats.
I’ll let you know a despair akin to that of biting more than you can chew in the middle of a date and suffering as you debate whether you should spit it back in your plate or foolishly try to chew on it until it becomes small enough to swallow.
I’ll let you in on a secret, no matter what you pick you’re not going on a date with that girl ever again. If you want to blame someone blame your own worthlessness.
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We're almost there
>>160978530
“Say Walter, why aren’t you telling him off? It’s your sister, you okay with this guy looking at her like that?”
So you decided keep challenging me, you foolish parasite?. That steak of yours looks quite appetizing, it would be a shame… if some jerk bathed it in the ultra spicy jalapeño sauce of the house while you weren’t looking. Yep, a great shame. Ha ha ha.
“Well, taking into account that both monogamy and polygamy are socially accepted, she can pretty much do anything she wants. And first of all, do you seriously even think she would pick this guy? My sister may be clumsy, but definitely not stupid”
Et tu, Wassim?
“But you know, I’ve been peeking on her and while you guys were talking she seemed to pay special attention to this table, sneaking peeks at every chance. What if she actually likes him?”
H-Hang-on #2! I knew I could count on you! I’ll treat you to some tiramisu later.
“Nah, no way” Replied Mr. big brother “It’s more likely she’s doing that out of caution, disasters tend to happen whenever this guy is around”
“True dat” Replied both of our fellow mob characters at unison.
“So you asses have really come together to take me down, huh? Very well, i was thinking it was just about time to discipline this cheeky herd.”
I challenged them, making the gesture of taking out a globe and throwing it at them to symbolize the call to a sacred duel.
Now only one of us four is going to come out alive. I shall feast on thy blood.
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>>160978582
“Whoa dude!”
“Geh”
“Oh man…”
Huh? What’s with that reaction? Did something happen to the table? I looked at the table, only to find my strawberry shake laying sideways in an awkward position, with its content splattered all over our food and Wallerian’s clothes.
Who could have been the dipshit that made this mess?
*stare*
W-Why are they looking at me like that?
*staaaaare*
Okay okay I get it it’s my fault please don’t look at me with those eyes, anything but the judging eyes!
During the course of this mental strength battle hang-on #1 looked quite happy that he reacted on time and was the only one who managed to protect his precious steak from the wild milky spillings. And thus, just as he was about to dig in his well earned spoils of war…
“What the fuck, why is my steak swimming in this pool of jalapeño sauce!?”
We may have been borns at different times and in different places, but when we die we die together.
After apologizing to the best of my abilities to Iris (fuck, I kinda feel like dying right now) and parting with the three walking sources of disgrace, I decided to go back home as my monthly quota of social life activities has been seemingly filled.
Definitely the best moment of going outside is the moment when you come back to your good ol’ room, your good ol’ bed and your good ol’ fapping sock. I can’t understand travellers, whenever I’ve been away from home i’ve gotten tired of the “adventure” within 48 hours.
You can learn about anything you want by reading, foreign places are no exception.
As for what is not known yet you will be okay as long as you have a research subject around. In my case that would be my dad, so I may as well just stay here and take it easy for the rest of my life.
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>>160978635
Being reminded that I still have to fill my afternoon quota of ‘impotent hero teasing’ by my idle thoughts, I kept walking.
Then, something came to my attention, it was a small, square paper laying in the floor, right in the main street of our village.
Well, you may call it “main street” but in such a remote place barely any carriage passes by, so it’s pretty much a pedestrian path like any other, just a bit wider.
I went and picked up the little paper. Heh, my eyes didn’t deceive me, it’s a stamp. A pretty rare looking one actually.
I never saw such an intrincate design, and it… Shines? Wow, seems like it’s decorated with glitter. I’m sure mom will like it.
“-ul!”
Hm? Didn’t mom say that all women loved stamps? That indeed seems to be the case, could it be that Iris also likes them? I never asked her about it.
“-areful!”
Maybe if I give it to her as a present she will forget about today’s shenanigans? But wait, could I just give her such a rare stamp? My mom’s birthday is coming soon, and this could be a great present.
“-of the way!”
What do I do, my mom or my future wife(lol)? The breasts that fed me during my youth, or the ass that will get me through my adulthood? Mmhm, Iris’ ass… I still have that fresh, juicy mental picture.
“Out of the waaaaaaay!”
What’s with that random guy saying gibberish for a while now? Just when I was remembering that fat ass. *gasp* Could it be Waldemar again? Better snap out of it, in case Iris is with him.
“JUUUMP”
Is this guy going off about the basketball game again? Jeez.
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>>160978704
That’s what was going through my mind at the exact instant I opened my eyes and came back to reality.
But how strange, even though I opened my eyes, even though I supposedly came back, something is not quite right with the picture I’m getting.
There’s this huge carriage coming at me at full speed, just a couple of meters in front of me. And I’m standing right in the middle of its expected trajectory.
How strange, it hit me that I should quickly jump out of the way, like right now, but for some reason my body is not moving, as if completely frozen on its place.
Ah, I guess it’s too late anyways, I have been seeing all of this in slow motion for a while, but the carriage is indeed a couple of centimeters away from impact.
Dad
Mom
Iris
Walahfrid
Mob characters
Iris’ ass… That sweet little ass. If I focused enough on my mental picture I could even make out the shape of her underwear.
That ass… Was definitely fat.


And that's it for now. Sorry for hijacking the thread and the lazy formatting. Faggot anon is a faggot.
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>>160978797

I didn't read any of that, but thanks for the butts.
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A young cartography enthusiast is sad about how he was born too late to explore the world, but too early to explore the stars. He somehow is transported to another world where civilization is made up of small, isolated city-states, separated by vast tracts of unexplored wilderness (due to monsters and magic). Seeing this as his chance, MC sets out to make a map of this new world, accidently attracting the attention of corrupt individuals that see profit to be made from such a map.
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>Our MC gets sent to an Isekai world via being run over by a bulldozer. The reason for this was an attempt to prevent his house from being demolished for the sake of new developed, which didn't quiet work out in his favor.
>He ends up meeting a god who take sympathy with his situation and offers to send him to another world with a unique power of his choosing.
>Our MC instead starts berating the god saying that he doesn't want to sent to a different world that in all likelihood does not have any good form of plumbing. Plus the whole reason he "died" was to remain at his home so the best thing the god can do is sent him back and do something about that bulldozer.
>This in turn infuriates the god having a mere mortal find any fault with them, a god. So with a small chance of plans ejects our MC to another world with no unique power, "ungrateful sap will just have to make do with what he has" mutters the god
>We return to our MC sitting in a fetal position trying to cope with the fact with he had died, got sent to an unknown world, can't read a thing in this worlds writing, and there is in fact no good form of plumbing.
>After a while of this he looks up and sees something that catches his eye. A book, a non descriptive one at that but a source of hope. He can read whats on the cover.
>The book turns out is a magic one that is written by countless other travelers from other worlds listing all you need to know about this world, the do's, maybe do's, and defiantly do not do's unless your a barking idiot or are trying to get laid
>Our MC searches in the book for a way to get home and only finds one line of text "We are sorry, we have no information regarding this. Please wait for a new edition of this book to be released, it might have a answer for you"
>This leaves or MC with 2 options, wait for the new edition so he can get back home, or go searching for the information himself. And since the first option would be extremely boring and mundane, he choices the latter.
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>>160977945
So i tried to add some spaces to make it more readable, because it indeed looked way too shitty. Here's the V2
https://pastebin.com/Pu3Dse98
>>160979254
You're welcome my man.
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>>160979691
Noah is a weird fellow. Will Iris be his waifu?
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>>160976241
A copyright lawsuit you twerp
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Two people die at the exact same time. One is an otaku who is an isekai fanatic. The other is a prepper who secretly wants the apocolypse to happen so he can live out all of his fantasies.

The God who manages the wheel of rebirth mixes the two.

The doomsday prepper is reincarnated as a young villager in a quasi-mideval setting, while the isekai fanatic is reborn in a desolate city, years after a mysterious event caused the collapse of society.

The anime chronicles the simultaneous adventures of these two heroes as they try and survive.
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>>160979956
Not even i know. The thing i hate the most about harem stuff is how most of the time the first girl is 100% guaranteed to win and the rest are just added to hook waifufags with various tastes.
I would like add more girls, flesh them out properly and try to make the race for the bowl fair.
assuming i don't get bored and drop it
Thanks for reading it, anon.
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An investigator is tracking down a wanted criminal. The criminal escapes through a magic portal into another world, and the investigator pursues FOR GREAT JUSTICE!

What ensues is a modern-day officer of the law leading a man hunt through a fantasy world.
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An editor for LNs dies via Truck kun, he gets told by god that he is going to get isekaid until he fixes every single LN he has help edit. He then starts getting ported to each stupid ass harem Isekai LN as a third party that has to pull strings, or outright interfere to make the story better, the characters get development and the plot not be stupid.
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I don't know if that other guy is still writing his isekai (with the genie), but here's my shitty one:
https://pastebin.com/m0XjcXWY
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>>160973908
>MC gets transported to a high fantasy world
>has no money so he gets a job at a library
>comfy comedy SoL featuring our bookworm MC and the qt elf who works at the library with him
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>Dude gets Isekaid to Medieval Fantasy World
>on the First day he gets Cheat Powers and a bunch of Girls following him telling him he needs to kill the demon king
>He immediatly disregards the mission and the Harem to focus on building indoor plumbing cause he doesnt like to take a shit in an outhouse.
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A young man in a small farming village in modern day finds a magic stick.
With it he fights the "boogeymen" that have taken up residence in the adjacent forests and helps protect the forests from poachers.
Hjinks ensue.

But this is a sequel story.
The actual story is that this is 500 years in the future.
His father was the biotech enhanced hero who finally brought down the Dr.Rothax The CEO and founder of the Corporation that ruled the entire world.
Before he left he decided to annihilate his megatower with a single aeon shot burst at the core. But before he got to the core he found something he didn't expect.
A small child sleeping in a tube.
It had a barcode on it's chest with the biocode that simply said "Clone #361".

He couldn't bring himself to murder the child. So he left with it. Destroying the tower and and setting fire to the entire techno empire as he walked.

He took the young boy who was no more then 3 under his wing and walked the world with him.
They had many adventures one of which that nearly cost the boy his life and soul. They eventually settled down in thexidus. A small farming village where he helped the mayor and owner of a small farming collective to grow their town.
The stick the boy finds is an old tech weapon. Unstable and fairly useless unless you knew the codes. The boy is an exact clone of the CEO Rothax and thus has a genetic key that gives him access to all Corp. tech created in the last 215 years.
It will be post cyberpunk with a bit of quasi fantasy thrown in there.
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>>160973908
>MC is the victim of a serial killer
>Gets reincarnated into an isekai with cheats
>Has a twin brother with the same cheats as him
>Eventually both recall memories from their past lives, however it affects them differently.
>twin brother explains vivid memories to MC, not sure what to think about it.
>twin is serial killer.
>MC hides the fact he was one of his victims from him and begins to plot how to destroy his twins life forever as revenge.
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>Transported to a world in inhuman form
>Papa bones
There Easy af to write a good isekai
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>>160973908
>MC is notoriously good high school student with best grades in all subjects
>Actually hates everyone else since they disturb his learning
>Some kind of earthquake happens and a brick falls on his head
>MC gets isekaid into a magic fantasy world
>Everyone can use magic but MC has no mana and no ability to even use the weakest spell and is basically weaker than peasants
>The plot is how MC will use his superior intelligence to raise in ranks from usual peasant and defeat demon king, actually using physics, chemistry, engineering, economy and history knowledge
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>>160973908
"Why Is My Isekai Adventure Just Summoning Crazy Chuuni Schoolgirls From Other Dimensions?"

An anime fanboy but otherwise normal Japanese highschool student discovers he has a strange ability when he is confronted by a magical beast from another world. He summons to his aid... a rather normal looking schoolgirl, who proceeds to speechify in a flowery, kind of crazy way before she busts out a giant dragon of black lightning to obliterate the beast. As the boy talks to her, he soon realizes she's completely nuts; an utter chuunibyou case, she never had any powers before. But now, thanks to him summoning her to his world, she has gained magic abilities matching her delusions.

Over the course of the show he summons a combat harem of deluded crazy schoolgirls who inherit magical powers thanks to being summoned by him. The final battle with the summoner of the magical beasts reveals the truth the boy is secretly from another world, it's why he's being targeted. Season 2 will feature the boy and his harem returning to his home dimension and exploring it for his real parents.
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>>160973908
Isekai set in the actual middle ages.... right before the first crusade.

The main character is a secret zealot who hated the secularized modern world, and see's his Isekai as proof that god had given him a mandate to ensure the crusades are successful as possible.

Basically Isekai Devs Vvlt
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Hello guys, I'm shilling my isekai here. Still not updated yet though. Chapter 6. Try reading it, it's not that long.

https://pastebin.com/fp2w83tA
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Does anyone actually read all these massive paragraphs?
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>>160985838
not really, my eyes kind of glazed over
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>>160985838
What else will they do with their time? Something productive?
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>>160980499
>most of the time the first girl is 100% guaranteed to win and the rest are just added to hook waifufags with various tastes.

I don't get how this works. If I like another girl better than the main one and it becomes clear she has no chance, I just drop the show/LN right there.
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>>160981006
>By Schlomo Shekelstein
>The Yokohama truck drag race
>multi-trailer drifting race
> in a cruel twist of fate, the logger was too good a driver and his vehicle drifted perfectly into the student

Everything about this paragraph is gold
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>>160973908
MC is a young salaryman who gets isekai'd into a basketball vidya
His only options are to become one with the crowd or become one of the custom basketball players
His desire to go back to the real world pushes him up the ranks of the custom players and his team makes the playoffs
His team makes the finals
Suddenly, the world turns black
MC abruptly finds himself into another vidya world - a farm simulator like Stardew Valley
He works hard and build genuine relationships with the NPCs
Months into the playthrough, the world becomes black again and after some time he gets transported into a medieval Grand Strategy wargame
He realizes that he's not isekai'd into games but into some sort of console
He then resists the flow of the game and starts glitches to unravel the fabric of the console's reality
He eventually breaks the system enough to be able to travel to the previous games he visited, as well as travel through other vidya worlds that seem to have a "save file". He can also manipulate save/load states as if he has King Crimson
Season finale: MC crashes the console and takes a peek at the OS
He realizes the "console" is about to get formatted
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>>160986260
So wait he turns into a black man?
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>a teenager gets sucked into an isekai adventure and despite some setbacks, lives a long and successful life in this other world, becoming a famous warrior, a powerful mage, and a loving family man with a wife and kids who is able to support in luxury
>at the height of his happiness he accidentally stumbles back through the portal to the real world to discover that only a few minutes have passed since he left

>the show is about his PTSD
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>>160986292
His first appearance is a blank slate, light-skinned character
Yes, the "player" turns him into some black dude
His appearance also changes from game to game
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>>160986364
BLACKED: The Isekai?
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>>160986358
Could work if executed right
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>>160974918
ok, thats a brilliant idea
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>>160974210
Wasn't the Prinz Eugen explicitly referred to as masculine by his crew??

(no that's not invitation for trapfags!)
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>>160974918
>>having a wife and kid and job he wants to get back but there's only one problem, 1000 years have passed and no one knows the seal used last time

B-but, everything after this line is just a standard isekai with an OP MC, making the prologue irrelevant?
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>>160986233
Thanks, anon. I figured I might as well have some fun with the obligatory truck scene.
Sorry that the rest of it sucks.
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>>160973908
>>160973908
neet commits suicide.
brought before god.
god shows him that his life really wasnt that shit and that he wasted it.
as punishment he is sent to another world
he is cursed to have terrible things happen to him but never die.
some of the things that will happen to him could be like:
instead of starting out in a easy area or village he his thrown into a high level area at level on
gets cucked
accidentally kills heroes
always lose out on quest rewards
and other stuff
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>>160987394
But that is fucking aweful anon
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The MC is a 10 year old shota who gets summoned to an RPG world with his two childhood friends.
Upon arriving, he is assigned the class of mage, while his friends are assigned warrior and rogue. MC has a crush on rogue-chan.
In tony kaku, the kang that summoned them requests that the 3 of them go on a dank quest to kill the demon queen and reclaim his weed stash.
So off they go, farming and having hijinks and whatnot. Along the way, rogue-chan NTRs MC with warrior-kun.
When they reach the demon queen, she turns out to be a thirsty Christmas cake and mindbreaks the MC with gentle femdom.
MC then builds a harem of ara~ ara~ milfs and becomes the new demon king or something.
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>Full-dive VR is a thing
>There's a highly-anticipated medieval-themed VR MMORPG soon to be released
>Its dev team boasts about hyperrealism, and a playable map the size of Earth
>It's launched with an international playerbase spanning millions, all discovering that the devs delivered with a historically-faithful world minus the antiquated languages
>Disenchanted with 22nd century life most voluntarily stay plugged in until they unintentionally let their real bodies die.
>Through some unknown bug, their consciousness still remains with their virtual selves and are unable to log out, because they have no bodies to return to
>The dead players that can't log out live out their new lives either integrating into the MMO's NPC societies or using their modern knowledge to conquer them
>Besides that, keeping to the dev's autistic fixation on realism diseases such as bubonic plague and anthrax do exist.
>Most players are too used to cushy 22nd century life. They struggle with survival skills, medieval combat (until a player advances guns beyond handgonnes and bombards), adapting to farming, learning skilled trades for a living, and learning that disrespecting the social order will eventually get you executed. Most players end up as vagrants leeching off rich NPCs and successful players that did adapt.
>The MC and Co. are players whose real bodies are dead. They resolve on using their modern knowledge and education to conquer the kingdom they first spawn in
>Once they accomplish that objective and set up a functioning government, they then have to deal with other player guilds that had the same thing. Queue total war
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>>160986023
heh, jokes on you, i do neither, :D
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In the afterlife, there are schools

Or rather groups of interest that one can join

One is rather depressing but has healing potential, depending on how sympathetic your emotions remain toward the physical realm

"Suicide Prevention Department"
A group of these angelic astral beings make it their priority to attempt to prevent persons from taking their own lives
The means by which they might do so are taught at a special school
New recruits are taught, given lessons and tests as to the merit of living on as opposed to death, a kind of existential schooling really

They must take what it is they've learned into the "field" eventually, that is to say, among the living who are suicidally inclined, and apply their training. They must try to convince a certain individual to choose to live as opposed to die.

Among the new recruits into this group of "Suicide Angels" as they are known, one is particularly enthusiastic. Her past on earth was marred with several suicides, one among her parents and another among her friends. She was a diligent student, and wants to become a prominent and foremost member of the Suicide Prevention Squad of angelic beings.

She is assigned her first assignment. A downtrodden businessman whose family ignores him and his contribution monetarily to their ongoing livelihood, and also his wife as long since put a wall between him and her sexually, he no longer really understands why he continues to support his family, what rewards it gives to him individually, his children are distant and uninterested in him etc

The new recruit descends, appears to him during the night in a flash of light

She attempts to get him to see his merit among society in general, and that even if his own family cant see the value of his effort now, they soon will once they approach a greater state of maturity...but all the while this business man merely thinks he is going insane and that this apparition is a projection of his subconscious
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>>160988473
and furthermore, he suspects his own biological degredation under the notion that "stress in the workplace can degrade your biological functioning and cause all sorts of physical maladies", some headline he recalls reading to a science magazine he perused over at the convenience store.

He is not convinced that this angelic vision is a product of the "real world" but only of his desperate imagination. He therefore heeds not her words of encouragement, but further sinks to into despair and decides that he is ready to be rid of all this horrific confusing experience.


Thereby the new recruit, and they are known as Suicide Angels (Jisatsu Tenshi) fails her first task.She is quite shaken by this experience.

In the succeeding episodes, she is given new persons which to convince of the value of living onward. She fails at all these successive tasks, eventually taking her own life.

It's a series of hilarious blunders, a dark comedy if you will. Jisatsu Tenshi.
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>A western anime fan is on his deathbed after a car accident
>regretting his wasted schoolhood days wasted on being a hhk virgin weeb
>is transported to the typical slice of life harem anime highscool
>wakes up on the first day of anime high school
>Realizes all the stupid shit works out the way in normaly dose in animoos
>this gives him the confidence to live a satisfying high school life and trying to start a harem
>first few days go off without such a problem except for this one girl that dosent act in a way he can expect
>he trys to figure out what trope this girl is for a few days
>things seem to go her way alot too and all her friends are really lively and diverse , and no matter what he is doing she messes it up for him, even preventing other girls from getting close to him
>one day she meets him in the roof
>he expects her to confess
>she says
> "I can get a read on most of the class, but there is something strange about you. You are oddly confident for a boy that looks like you, I was hesitant to ask because I don't know what would happen if you said no... but it's too important a detail to ignore. So, I'll just ask. You're not from this world either, are you?"
>from then on the two of them try to live in there own peridise
>they go on liveing this way for a wile until one day a new kid transfers in, a cold sweat runs down the boys face, he looks to the girl, she is staring back with an equally grim face, to any anime fan it would be obvious what this means
>they looks at the transfer student, his plain features, round yet spikey hair
>the class whispers as the transfer walks to his seat
>it's in the back row
>next to the window
>it hits them , they aren't the protagonist
>the transfer is...
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>>160987615
Id fap to it
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The MC travels to an isekai that is identical to the real world in every way except one: in this other world he is a cute girl.

He discovers that he still likes girls though.

It's literally just yuri but he still thinks like a dude.
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>>160973908
a typical edgy teenage kid gets isekai'd and starts hyping up for le isekai life.
he is a complete insufferable cunt, tries to be mean but is just being annoying, abuses girls because "all women like bad boys" and abuses his isekai strength to terrorize people. members of the main are presented while he is at it.

then (still episode 1) a knight shows up and fucking slices him up until the edgelord gets the most pathetic, regret-filled death imaginable. the show then turns from isekai to dark fantasy, with the main cast trying to save the(ir) world from a soul disturbance that is slowly destroying the world.

the appeal is that
is technically isekai even if it were for half an episode
fuck isekai edgy kids
10 million youtube views from annoying mc dying so early and unexpectedly
actual story ends up being engaging and dramatic
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>>160973908
>University student (just 18), doesn't go to classes, Hiki-mode
>Enters medieval fantasy world, who gives a shit how
>Tries to replicate some more modern tech
>Realizes he doesn't know shit
>Still tries and fails
>The entire village laughs at the retard
>Tries to preach modern mindset of science and peacefulness and shit
>Everyone laughs even harder
>Goes to sulk
>Waifu tells him to stop being a bitch
>He eventually does so and helps out
>Waifu likes him for it
>Bandits kidnap waifu
>MC, thinking on how awesome he has become, attempts to rescue her
>Dies
The end.
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>>160975149
https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3238329/1/A-Hero-s-War
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>guy gets isekai'd into generic fantasy land
>gets assigned a native hero as his handler to make sure he stays on the right path and slays the demon king
>they squabble at first but eventually become bros
>travel the land fucking bitches and fighting evil and get into Funny Hijinx™
>build up a posse of bros
>end up completely sidetracked from the original goal chasing their own ridiculous schemes
>they still end up in conflict with the demon king, because he's just, like, a huge dick, y'know?
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I've actually have partially written some of this already. I wanted to make it a light novel or something. It's awful but I had a lot of fun writing it. I should finish it someday.

>female lead comes home from America. she was studying at a prestigious music school as a classical guitarist because her father pushed her into it.
>she comes home just in time to join her childhood friend in their first year old high school.
>female lead is a musical prodigy. not only is she technically proficient and can play and write extremely difficult music, but her true talent is the overwhelming intensity of her stage presence. basically she has John Petrucci's chops and Taylor Swift's charisma/stage presence.
>her childhood friend is an average bass player. Though she loves the female lead like she was her own sister, her skills and beauty makes her very self conscious about herself. she's a very meek small tittied girl.
>female lead made a promise to her childhood friend before leaving for America that one day she would come back and they would start a rock band in high school.
>the two friends join the school's music club. the sole member is their senpai. he's a goofy, kindhearted drummer who watches out for them. a running gag is the old club was a death metal band and the entire school is terrified of him because they think he's a violent murderer. this fucking destroys his self esteem because he can't make any friends or find a gf. the band slowly helps him dispel the rumors.
>another recurring gag is even though he's generally spineless, when someone does anything to threaten his band mates, he sticks up for them without fail, often reverting to his violent death metal persona.
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>>160990832
>the final member of the band and the male lead is a brooding guitarist blatantly modeled after Elliott Smith. his special skill is even though he plays really simple music, his music easily invokes a lot of powerful emotions from people. he and the female lead are like the opposite side of the same coin. they both have the uncanny ability to captivate their audience, just in slightly different ways.
>due to a misunderstanding, female lead starts off hating male lead because she thinks he hates music and she herself has a profound love for music. female lead softens up on his once he she hears him singing and playing the guitar for the first time, recognizing his raw talent. something about his past makes him not want to make music with other people. she refuses to take no for an answer and successfully recruits him.
>lots of slice of life chapters about the band hanging out. female lead and male lead's romance begins to blossom.
>culmination of the first arc is their first ever show at a school festival. at this point they've already gone out on a pseudo date and shared a romantic first kiss with each other. after their performance, they kiss on stage for the entire school to see. later at a school rooftop female lead asks male lead to dance even though there's no music. bassist and drummer begin to sing the in universe equivalent of an Ed Sheeran song. other students on the rooftop also sing along, some dance as well. male lead gives female lead a promise ring, making their relationship official.
>more slice of life. then shit goes off the rails.
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>>160990848
This is as far as I've written. the rest are a basic outline of what I plan to write in the future.

>it's summer. a British girl walks into everyone's life. it turns out for the past three years, every summer a half British/half Japanese girl visits Japan. she became close to male lead during those three summers. she's a talented piano player and she and the male lead wrote and played a few original songs together.
>male lead confesses to her. she declines, citing the distance between them as the main reason it could never work out. male lead is crushed.
>now she's returned. not only for the summer either. her parents are getting a divorce and she's moving to Japan with her mom to live with their family.
>male lead now has conflicting emotions, but decides to be faithful to female lead
>female lead becomes insecure of her love rival and the relationship between her the male lead begin to fray. the honeymoon period of their relationship is over and now they're having stupid fights over little things. but they always manage to patch things up.
>female lead is helping male lead clean out his garage. she sees a CD labeled with a marker, male lead's name and love rival's name on the cover
>she pockets the CD and listens to it at home. male lead's talent to convey emotions through music makes her realize how much he really loved the love rival. their whirlwind romance begins to unravel.
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>>160973908
Quake 1
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>>160990867
>love rival and male lead run into each other by chance. they finally talk things out. male lead tells her that he love female lead and they can't be together. love rival begins to cry. in a moment of weakness he kisses her, sort of as a goodbye. unfortunately female lead walks in at the worst possible time. gets the wrong idea and their relationship is completely shattered.
>female lead quits the music club/band. so does the male lead. drummer senpai graduates. he ends up going to the same college as his two death metal senpais and they get their old band back together. bassist/childhood friend is now all alone.
>new school year starts. flashback to drummer senpai cleaning up the club room. bassist asks him why he's not taking his drum set with him. he just smiles and says he's sure someone will find a use for it.
>bassist goes to the club room to see a new student. surprise, it's the drummer's young brother. unlike his goofy lovable older brother, little brother drummer is loud, arrogant, self assured and a borderline delinquent.
>they're soon joined by two new girls. they were a sister idol duo who was insanely popular. but then without any explanation announce they would leave the idol business.the younger sister is the energetic little sparkplug vocalist. the older sister is the guitarist and is lazy as fuck and just seems to follow the younger sister's lead. even the decision to quit being idols was the younger sister's idea and she just shrugged and went along with it. it's later revealed that she just really loves her younger sister and just does whatever she thinks will make her happy like a good big sister. also their mom/manager was an ex-idol. their father/producer was an ex-guitarist for a successful band. mother is heartbroken at their decision, father is ecstatic and gloats about it.
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>>160990889
>female lead take the opposite route of the girls and sets out to become an solo idol. she works with a talented producer her age. the two of them begin to date, but she feels no chemistry with him. she mostly does it to make male lead jealous.
>male lead jumps off a bridge to kill himself. there's actually random music related hints throughout the story that he's struggling with depression. and funny enough a lot of hints that he's going to try to kill himself by drowning. saying he doesn't know how to swim in the token beach episode. the lyrics of the first song female lead hears him sing explicitly mentions drowning. fortunately love rival happens to see him jumping off the bridge just by cure coincidence. she jumps in and saves him without any hesitations, proving that she's not just some homewrecking whore, that she does love him and would literally risk her life to save him.
>bassist, drummer and love rival are with him at the hospital. lead girl is in tears and wants to see him but he just turns away, love rival tells her to leave and that she's done enough damage already
>during his recovery, love rival offers male lead tickets to see his favorite band, an American indie band modeled after and amalgamation of Brand New and Senses Fail. they go as friends, not as a date.
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>>160990908
>during the first song, the vocalist's voice gives out. the band begins to panic, half the crowd is worried about him, other half as restless because they paid to see the band play. male lead begins to sing loudly while the band continues to play.
>vocalist heads male lead and holds the microphone in front of him. love rivals takes a phone photo of this exact scene. it goes viral the next day. after the song he grabs male lead by the hand and pulls him up to the stage asking him if he'd like to finish the rest of the set.
>after the show, male lead, love rival and the band are hanging out backstage. vocalist, and his musical idol by the way, pulls him aside in private. he confesses that he's planning to leave the band after the tour and asks male lead if he would like to take his place. vocalist was so impressed by his voice and his innate skill to draw out emotion from the crowd that he offers the job to him on the spot. male lead agrees.
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>>160990938
>during his time living out his dream as the new lead vocalist for his favorite band, male lead has minor relapses of depression. the female guitarist seems to be very much against having a teenager tour with them. he deals with the new found anxiety of being a professional touring musician by turning to groupies and alcohol. drummer and bassist reluctantly enable his self destructive behavior because they believe he should live his life the way he wants. guitarist is fucking furious at him all the time. a big turning point is when he passes out on stage due to exhaustion. guitarist literally drops her guitar on the stage and runs to check up on him. turns out that out of everyone in the band, she probably cared for him the most. while the other three are arguing backstage about how he's too young to tour with them and the crowd begins to disperse, male lead makes his way back on stage with an acoustic guitar and begins singing solo. it's another huge viral moment for him, fans and critics praise him for having the dedication to finish the show. the rest of the band lets him finish the song alone and joins him to finish the rest of their set.
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>>160990950
>around the same time female lead gains traction with her solo career, quickly rising in the charts in Japan
>drummer senpai gets an email from a promoter from England asking him and his band to come play a prestigious extreme metal festival among some of the biggest metal acts on the planet. due to the hipster nature of extreme metal, a lot of purists love searching for the most obscure, unknown acts all over the world. the promoter heard their band's high school demo and decides it's good enough to warrant them an invitation.
>meanwhile bassist girl is sad her original band fell apart and everyone went in different directions. but she tries her best to help her new band on their musical journey
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>>160990962
>the final scene is a Japanese music festival. male lead is a bonafide rock star. his band releases their first record with him as vocalist to critical acclaim. female lead is number one in the charts in Japan. Drummer senpai's show in England turns him and his band into cult favorites in the metal scene. Bassist and her new band/music clubs manages to secure a spot playing in one of the smaller stages.
>drummer senpai and female lead finish their respective set. both acts absolutely killing it.
>bassist plays with her new band and is a surprise hit at the festival.
>after the set, she lingers on stage playing a bass riff over and over again.
>male lead is up next to perform with his band, but he notices the song she's playing. drummer and female lead notices it too.
>drummer makes his way to the stage grabbing a pair of drumsticks from his little brother who was standing at the side of the stage. he takes a water bottle and pours it on his face, taking off his shirt and wiping the corpse paint off of his face then finally sitting behind his old drum set. he starts playing his part.
>female lead joins them on stage wearing her plain old t shirt and jeans instead of her flashy idol dress. she joins them on guitar.
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>>160990973
>male lead's set about to begin. he gets a surprise visit from his idol and their ex-vocalist. ex-vocalist says nothing and takes off his shirt. He has a tattoo on his chest that reads 'follow your bliss'. all the band members have similar tattoos somewhere on their body, including male lead. male lead runs to join his old band, ex-vocalist fills in for him for his band's set.
>the four friends are finally reunited again for an unscheduled performance. male lead, female lead and drummer senpai are big enough deal in the music world that fucking nobody tries to stop them. everyone is confused and hyped to see them together because no one had any idea they were friends.
>they play a single song, the first song they ever played together as a band.
>male lead and female lead gives each other a look mid song hinting that they still love each other and are ready to get their relationship back on track.
>last sentence of the story is the female lead addressing the crowd, simply telling them the name of their band which also happens to be the title of the story
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>>160991001
Too much drama for my taste.
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Already a thing.
https://1d4chan.org/wiki/Stranded_in_fantasy
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>>160973908
Generic JRPG fantasy land where femaleMC performs a conjuration/summoning ritual, hoping they would get a divine warrior or a powerful entity. Instead, they got MaleMC, a graduating highschool student, who turns out to be a warlock.

and it turns out: that for some reason, the maleMC's(which was a big fan of all things occult and was a member of an occult/paranormal club in his world) spells are still working, despite being in a different world. Now it's up to him to venture in the new world and find out on how this is possible.

the premise is basically the MC's magic from his world, which he got from real life grimoires and scrolls containing spells from different cultures(voodoo, mayan, ancient egyptian, hebrew, arabic, japanese, tibetan, etc.) vs the spells from another world.
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>>160973908
An average panty thief was on his regular trespassing routine when he bumped into a peculiar box amid the smelly laundry.
To his surprise, the box sprang open in a dazzling light and threw him into a pocket dimension with flashing lights, things making tinkling sounds and microgravity.

When the shenanigans stopped, our hero regains his senses to find himself in a world populated by monsters, elves, goblins, dwarves, slimes and dragons.
But there was one thing that bothered our hero immensely: everybody was naked except him. In fact, he was the only one who had some sort of clothing.

Thankfully, the box took pity on him and gave him a set of magical pantsu that he must wear at all times. Thus began his quest to spread the joys of pantsu and find a way to return to his nirvana of ordinary pantsu-filled life.
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I want a Game of Thrones type anime about military battles and political intrigue. But then I realized that's more of less Code Geass and that shit was fucking awful.
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Okay get this. China harnesses illegal biological experimentation to create an army of giant kaijous that easily take over the world. Japan secretly builds giant mechas to counter the kaijous. Japan's mechas go to war with China's kaijous. Except this isn't treated as a mecha anime or a kaijou anime, it's a straight up battle shounen. Both of the kaijou and mechas are extremely fast moving with pin point accuracy, not slow and sluggish. they do crazy flips and firing lasers at each other. both sides get their own shounen style powerup. Mechas get part upgrades and kaijou get mutations.
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>promo only shows some girls in high school
>for the first few episodes, the series is only about cute girls doing cute things
>in episode 6, WW3 breaks out and the country gets attacked
>the girls flee from their high school into the woods, they get cut off from family and need to survive
>in the next episodes, they need to flee from attacks, a few get captured and eventually killed by other soldiers
>series ends with main girl trying to avenge other girls and getting killed
>I call it K-On!!!
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>>160973908
Modern human (about 1000 people in one planet) isekaied by alien to another universe where they create nation that war with native people (humanoid alien)
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>>160991877
>That night the main character was at his friend's party but suddenly there was a shimmering white glow enveloping the whole town instantly sounded strange and the air temperature was like strangling
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>Middle school girl late for school
>decides to take a shortcut in the backalley
>accidentally bumps into a thug trying to light a smoke and dropped his cigarette
>Thug is pissed off and tried to intimidate the JC girl "Oi oi, you bitch that cigarette is expensive, how are you going to pay for this? HUH?"
>Thug take a closer look and thinks the girl is cutie. "Maybe you should pay with your cute little body of yours"
>Girl got scared and tried to run away
>Thug gave chase "Oi where the fuck you think you're going?"
>as she came out of the backalley she arrives at a unfamiliar forest
>Girl quickly hide in a nearby bush, sure enough the thug appeared and is searching for her before going into another direction.
>Girl come out of hiding and find herself in unfamiliar territory and tries to find her way out and stumble upon a group of men in medieval bandit clothing
>Meanwhile the thug is still looking for the girl and suddenly heard a girl's scream and he followed the noise until he found the girl being gang raped by a bunch of medieval thugs
>Thug could do nothing but watch and jerk off, knowing that it's suicide to try to be a hero
>Once the bandits are done raping the girl they left her to dead and the Thug emerge from hiding once he's sure that they are gone
>Thug proceed to fuck the girl who gave up struggling after being raped
>Once he's satisfied, he finally realized he's in unfamiliar territory. But the thug is not that heartless to leave the girl to dead and takes care of her. Due to the Thug's experience in living in the wilderness by himself, him and the girl are able to survive
>After many days of surviving many days they finally got out of the forest and find themselves in the strange new world
>Now the thug and the girl have to survive in this fantasy medieval world while trying to find their way back
>Girl develops Androphobia after being raped by bandits but also Stockholm syndrome for the thug
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The brilliant heir of one of the most important conglomerates in Japan and the world, Murakami Sei, contracts an unidentified and incurable disease. By order of his father, who wants him to further humanity with his extraordinary potential, he is placed inside a cryopreservation capsule and will remain in a deep slumber until medicine has made enough progress to cure him.
Little did they know, Sei's case was only the beginning, and all of humanity would eventually develop the same disease and almost go extinct. The survivors have suffered mutations, and gained new traits such as oddly-colored hair, eyes, longer lifespans, and powers similar to ESP. Using these new abilities, humanity manages to get back on its feet in less than a century, and even surpasses the previous generation, labeled the "old world", in every field. Space travel is not a dream anymore, and humanity prepares itself for its first expedition to Kepler-186f, a habitable planet. The world's very first spaceship was created for this purpose; the ISS Platinum Wa.
Sei's forgotten capsule is loaded on that ship by accident, among other resources. One year after the Platinum Wa's departure, Bellas Inazana, a young female trainee, finds Sei's capsule in the ship's storage and ends up freeing him. After 150 years of slumber, the first thing Sei sees is Inazana's beautiful rose eyes and light green hair. They both fall in love at first sight.
Unsettled by his plain black hair and eyes, the crew's scientists immediately run tests on his body. They find out that extended exposure to the virus has caused his body to assimilate it and become immortal.
He is dragged on a space expedition, despite being from the "old world". This is a story about how he makes use of his immortality to lead humanity on its conquest of the sea of stars, but this is also a story about outliving loved ones and becoming nothing more than an observer.
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>mc has a genius father
>he gets mind fucked by him to use a gigantic mecha
>the world gets attacked by unknown creatures who try to annihilate humanity
>a girl who has a childhood trauma, is also fighting those unknown creatures and they start to live together with their supervisor to encourage teamwork
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>MC is a regular guy/girl/whatever, gets transported into another world
>Said other world is basically the same
>Similar technology level, relatively similar culture
>Not the same language
>Doesn't have any special ability since he comes from a similar world
>Story revolves around him being taken up by society, learning language and the ways of the people who live there, passing for an extremely inventive lunatic who created an entire world in his mind after a trauma
>Doubts his own sanity
>Meets cute girl/boy/whocares who is interested in his stories since this still has to be isekai
>Travel and discover said world
>Ends up writing books that are pretty much histories he's heard of in his world
>Suddenly brought back to his world, as if he was never gone
>Feels like he has to start over again
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>>160976037
This one is really good
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>>160987091
pretty much

this is Isekai after all
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A lonely young man is roaming through parallel realities with the devices he and his childhood friends found near a crash site. His goal is to find his friends, convince them to abandon their dreams, and return to their reality before their devices deactivate. His friends, however, believe the device is their miracle: the only opportunity they have to find meaning in their lives.

One of the childhood friends is a young man with a passion for history. A collector of historical artifacts, he intends to be the first person to discover the New World of an alternate past, and be a part of human history.

Another childhood friend is a futurist who desires being one of the first colonists of Mars, far into an alternative future. She has fantasized of being an astronaut since childhood, but knows the space exploration stage of her reality would never reach her goal within her lifetime.

The lonely young man searches for them in his vain attempt to bring them back. His intentions are also selfish in nature: more concerned of avoiding the loneliness facing him than the welfare of his friends or the danger imposed by tampering with the alternate timelines.

The narrative explores the downfall of relationships, and confronting the failures of clinging to dreams.
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>>160995599
Kinda reminds me of Cannon god Exaxxion
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>>160996257
does that End with the Grandfather/Father taking over the MCs body as well?
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>>160996400
Nope.
He might have planned to though. Dude was Tzeentch incarnate.
But the end isn't like that, it's even a bit bland.
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>>160980639
That's actually a really good idea, and would be a legitimate "deconstruction."
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>>160996527
>Copying the shittiest part of a shitty story
>Legitimate deconstruction.
Dont forget to copy the cucking of both his sons, and the brainwashing of the Harem so that they would always be loyal to him.
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>>160996111
I like this one. It could work with a Zetsuen no Tempest-like aesthetic.
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>>160996111
This is actually pretty good premise.

Dont fuck it up.
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>>160996111
Would watch.
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It's a about alien girls doing cute things in space. Instead of going to different planets as you'd expect, they spend most of their exploring outer space's very own ecosystem in a faraway galaxy, with weird fauna and flora everywhere. Their town consists of alien-ish buildings and architecture, all floating in space as everyone floats around living their daily lives.
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>MC is a NEET
>Drops out of high school after finishing Junior year
>Spends 3 years lazing away and playing vidya
>After a overhearing his parents talking about kicking him out and how much of a disappointment he decides to turn his life around
>Forces himself out of his NEET lifestyle and gets good grades, makes friends, accepted into college of choice, things are generally looking good for him and his hard work is paying off
>Finally, graduation day comes, and he's ready to face life as a new man
>He dies as the first victim of a school shooting, and watches as his classmates around him get slaughtered by the gunman as he moves on to the next realm
>Everything whites out, he's able to hear a lot of shouting
>His vision returns to him, and he's in a huge audience chamber with hundreds of other people, all of which just as confused as him
>Upon closer inspection, the majority of said people don't even look human
>Humanoid lizards and dragons, anthropomorphic animals, treants and golems, few being truly human like himself
>A fat black man in royal attire explains that everyone here died short, unfulfilled lives and have been reincarnated here to finish them
>The world has an RPG system and a Demon King, as to be expected of a fantasy otherworld
>Turns out it has many more detriments to it than positives, and is a curse that was placed upon the residents of that world millennia ago
>Almost all natural inhabitants are Xenophobes, and hate otherworlders
>MC has to live his life struggling to make ends meet as an adventurer, getting pulled into the Demon Lord Conflict

I'm writing the prologue right now
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>>160996111
Marche go home you're drunk.
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Which story dis he copy?>>160996593
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>>160997663
fuck I just noticed he was quoting someone else, sorry im retarded
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>>160973908
>>good isekai
A grim, gritty fantasy hero slays the prime evil and saves his world from destruction but sacrifices himself in the process.

He wakes up on the sidewalk in Queens with no idea what happened.

It's a comedy slice of life.
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>Sicario kid dies at 17 while out on a hit
>gets isekai'd to nippon as 17 year old japanese
>was always a genius and dedicates his new life to saving lives instead of taking them
>becomes a doctor
>one evening he gets into a mugging incident
>sicario murder reflexes activate and he murders the guy without breaking a sweat
>guy is revealed to be otouto of sime high ranking yakuza guy
>a syndicate reaches out to him promises protection for his talents
>becomes assassin again but doesnt want to kill "good people"
>becomes known as Dr. Death in the underworld, his real identity unknown to most
>has to balance saving lives and taking them, coming to terms that he is nothing but a hypocrite who doesnt help out of goodwill but because he wants atonement
>next hit is a patient of his
>starts investigating further and realizes the hits he carried out weren't all such clear cut cases either
>does he save his patient as a doctor and risk a turf war after his patient's recuperation or does he kill the mark as an assassin and prevent further bloodshed on the streets

Welp came up with this on the spot
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>>160973908
FeMC gets reincarnated as a state in a fantasy world. She needs to secure the country (aka herself) from annihilation or she "dies". Grand strategy games shenanigans with shoujo-esque comedy happen afterwards.

First she influences some people to assassinate her incompetent womanizing king, just because she doesn't like him. This however causes the neighboring kingdom to invade her because he is blood-related to the late king. Chaos ensues and she's barely kept alive by the pope's intervention, forced to sign unequal treaties and personal union. The very thought of her being absorbed into another bigger country disgusts her and she now vow to desperately plan a better long-term strategy in order get independence at first.

Much later on, she gets stronger from abusing her abilities, and tries to blob her way around the continent, only to get rekt by a containment coalition. She gets partitioned into a bunch of small territories, but fortunately it's a new mechanics abuse as she now has different personae that can "multi-task". Eventually all the different personae fought each others over rights and against other countries too, plunging the whole continent into chaos once again.
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MC-Kun is down on his luck. After being rejected by MAIN HEROINE, he gets into an accident! Miraculously, he wakes up in the hospital with no injuries! As he tries to gets back to his normal every-day life, he starts having weird dreams…where MAIN HEROINE is his girlfriend! So comes the romantic-comedy of MC-Kun trying to make his dreams a reality!

Except it stops being a comedy at the end when MC-Kun tries to kill himself to permanently be with dream version of HEROINE. Been writing it so far, anyone interested to read?[/spoiler}
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>>160999739
Geographical divisions or Political divisions.

THIS IS IMPORTANT
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>>160975338
Hokuto no Ken with mutants?
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>>160973908
MC is a hero that fights for his magitek city state against the demons and wields the power of twilight.

The day before the final battle he overhears that he's going to be sacrificed so that his soul would serve as a battery for the city for another 5 centuries. The hero, rightfully angry as he wants an afterlife over burning out into oblivion, won't allow for that. In the final battle against the demon queen he charges her in a suicide attack that wipes out the two.

The hero awakens in a hospital in the body of a baby. The hero reincarnated in a reality where humanity went to the stars, colonized many worlds and made contact with various races. One of these worlds, an aquatic world, is where the hero got reincarnated. Seeing this as a blessing compared to the long life of fighting and warfare without a moment of normality, the hero enjoys his new life and can properly socialize. However, nothing is eternal...

Two decades after his reincarnation, strange mechanical creatures appear out of nowhere spreading chaos and carnage in both human worlds and those of their neighbors. The races, who at this point had skeleton crews of military forces in times of peace, united into a alliance and started to recruit fresh blood. MC, having his own world attacked by the monsters, strides the path of the warrior yet again in order to fight for those he cherishes. Having his experience from his previous life, he quickly becomes squad leader of a mecha unit designed to combat the creatures. Later on, he discovers that the power of twilight didn't leave him, yet it's so weak that he has to start from scratch to use it normally.

The mechanical creatures are in fact the people of his city state that were so desperate that they experimented with alternate energy sources. This resulted in a freak accident that turned them into what they are.

One of MC's squad-mates and love interest is actually the demon queen who also reincarnated.
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>>160997823
I'd watch this, if only because I'm a westaboo. It'd probably be relocated to some sort of Japanifornia because anime.
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>generic fantasy world with magic
>hero and his portable harem travel the lands in search of big bad
>MC is part of the group
>has no magic, no tallents, not even a pitiful berserker
>everyone else is insanely overpowered, either in terms of magic, sword skills, being a mastermind, alchemy, whatever
>hero is chad ultimate, usually would be the MC, unbeatable, shining with his unwavering will
>actual MC tries really hard to help the group since he knows what the big bad can do to the world
>trains every day trying to improve his sword skills, in vain, really
>MC is childhood friend of hero, so hero is fine with him sticking around, but the portable harem detests him
>they consider him dead weight
>every episode ends with MC being mildly helpful in some unexpected way, but no one gives a shit
>he keeps trying
>the final episode ends with MC dying tying to save hero and his group from big bad evil plan/contraption
>no one besides for hero really remembers he even was with the group
>MC actually lived, walks into the sunset feeling like he managed to accomplish something

I'm even tempted to just use the last scene to show that MC actually didn't help much with his final sacrifice.
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>Hero doesnt bitch out the Harem for cursing the MC

Cuck the series.
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>>161002372
Oh, he defeinitely would, but bitches be bitches, they gonna bitch anyway.

I think it's crucial that the hero is actually likable, and the portable harem is the part that viewers love to hate.
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>>160979691
i read a bit and i must say, their is to much swearing. i guess you are aware of that, but if you actually want to keep this style up, it is going to be annoying pretty fast.
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>>161000806
>The mechanical creatures are in fact the people of his city state that were so desperate that they experimented with alternate energy sources. This resulted in a freak accident that turned them into what they are.
sucks dick. to much randomness for shock factor.
>One of MC's squad-mates and love interest is actually the demon queen who also reincarnated.
expected but could be interesting

>>161002155
they idea is not that bad. with interesting cast and group dynamics and not to many cliches it could be entertaining.

>>160997581
>>A fat black man in royal attire explains that everyone here died short, unfulfilled lives and have been reincarnated here to finish them
actually a pretty good reason for ones to be transported to another world
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>>161003095
>they idea is not that bad. with interesting cast and group dynamics and not to many cliches it could be entertaining.
Yup, that's the idea, to have various members of the group have slightly different attitudes towards MC and then play them off one another, and have the MC constantly trying to keep the group together. Actually, most the harem should be pretty awful to one another as well.

We could even make the crew of the big bad be nice to one another as a silly contrast. I mean, still keep him evil with evil plots, but just make his team seem much more harmonious in comparison. As time goes by we could even have someone go from team BAD to team GOOD and that would be the only person that actually likes MC. There's a lot of space.
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>>160977803
>>160977837
also their is to much information in a short amount of time, which is confusing and hard to read.
>I saw my dad’s face, right in front of me, with a smile which honestly was a pretty amusing, a seemingly impossible mix of smugness and rage, a smile going from ear to ear, mouth barely open and creepily showing just a little bit of his teeth
their are about 10 different informations in this one sentence to describe the head. it takes time to create a picture. if you start to imagine the smile of the father by the beginning of the sentence and you have to change the depiction of the smile in your head about five times just in one sentence, it is really confusing. the smile you imagined at the beginning, is totally different, to the one at the end, which feels not natural
>There just can’t be two pairs with only three units, 1.5 pairs then? Does that make any sense? What does a “pair” mean anyways? Could it be as in a “couple” i.e man and woman? In that case how does he want me to guess the flies’ gender? But wait a minute, can I really exclude the posibility of a same-sex couple? I certainly read something about the posibility of homosexuality in flies when they were in a drunk state. Alcohol sure is a scary thing. *gasp* Wait, what If it’s actually a three-way relationship? Can such a thing be allowed by mother nature? Who would be the one(s?) giving and who would be the one(s?) receiving?
By the way, how do flies even have sex? Do they just stick it in and out just like us? But aren’t you supposed to do some of the so called “foreplay” first? Now that I think about it, don’t flies always suspiciously rub their front legs, as if craftily planning your demise while munching away at any given piece of trash? Could that actually be some sort of training to get better at foreplay????????????????
and so on... joke gets dragged out to long. it just gets cringy.
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>>160973908
a writer mining plot ideas...you lazy fuck
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>>161003556
I'm never gonna make a manga/anime, so I'd be happy if someone successfully "mined" my idea and made it into an actual thing.
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>>161003663
Same really, even it it doesn't go anywhere it's still nice to share ideas
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>>161003384
yep, lots of options. i find myself stopping to watch/read something if it is to similar to something i have already seen. i almost stopped watching HeroAcademia because it felt like Naruto, just with a different setting. fortunately HeroAcademia does keep some interesting elements which clearly separates it from others. if i would read your story and it would be like Konosuba, but Konosuba is better, i would stop reading it.
... got dragged away a lil bit
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>>160976387
>>160976535
I'd watch this.
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>>160978074
I think you would benefit from reading the destroyerman series by Taylor Anderson.
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>>160973908
Dive MMORPG NPC accidentally is transferred into a real players body. They can only communicate when they are playing the game. They don't tell anyone because both secretly like living the other's life.
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>>161003963
...that could be amazing, but only for a short amount of time. if it gets dragged out to long, it will eventually become a normal story, after the bodychange thing is exploited
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>>160999914
the title could be:
how the author escaped reality by writing a novel but ultimately just wrote the story of his life (just without the accident)

post the story, maybe someone will read it, maybe not
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>>161004071
Yeah maybe a 1 season type deal. I suppose the exciting drive besides the original novelty could be love interests they found in the other's world. Or they instead of trying to fix it they spend all their time dicking around not noticing they are losing bits of their memory or they start having moments where they cannot control their bodies. They if they remain as they are they will perish and the only way to freaky friday themselves back is some huge in game undertaking. That requires huge assets to be corralled in and out of game.
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Reverse isekai about a guy who's waifu comes to life. I could make it a zany comedy, or a grimdark romantic drama.
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>>160988591
Underrated. I like it.
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>A boy is isekai'd into a different world
>except it isn't a different world, it's the world just decades earlier, before he was born
>he has to decide between living a normal life, or abusing his knowledge of the future for his own benefit
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>>161004522
i want to expand on this one:
This is the story of how i befriended Hitler
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>>160990848
Could be fun, if it was done with the right amount of humor, ie lots of humor.
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I have one but it ain't isekai.
>We start the journey very early in MC's life, with his father teaching him values such as loyalty to the family, respect for the elders, integrity etc etc
>MC takes this to heart a little too much, and grows up to be a good son, but with a hell of a stubborn streak
>Later in his childhood, his parents learn he also has a vindictive personality after chasing a school bully for 10 hours and beating the life outta him for harming one of his mates.
>Fast foward to his 14th birthday, he learns his father was betraying his mother for about 2 years, causing a divorce to happen and his mom to kill herself outta grief, our MC snaps for the first time and in a fit of god's righteous fury breaks into the homewrecker's house ready to a fight to the death, only to be teazed by his father and dragged way by the police while cursing everyone.

>After the failed raid, MC moves outta the city, and goes on trying to live his life, joins a new school and the helper's club in order to put the godless fire that burns inside him to good use by helping his new classmates
>One day, a nerdy girl walks into the clubroom, asking for help with her love for a boy in her class, the MC gets assigned to her and in due time makes friend with the boy,learn what makes him tick and eventually pulls off a date between then, when the deed is done, they start a real relationship, making the MC happy for the first time in a good while.
>But fate wasn't done with our MC, a month later the nerdy girl rushes into his class crying her soul out, the reason: the boy cheated on her with another girl in their class, before MC has the time to go full rip and tear they got called over the school intercom to the teacher's room
>while barely holding his shit together, they made it to the room, when they arrive, the guilty are also there waiting for them, together with the girls's mother, the homewrecker that ruined the protag's family
pls no h8
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Okay, now do the same thing, but try making a good high-school harem show.
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Conjoined twins are born to the wife of a feudal lord in ancient Japan. They both contain the power of reading minds and borrowing minds. Since they were young, their father would have them fight to determine who would be the next leader. They are physically matched due to being twins and combat is almost always a stalemate due to the fact that they read each other's minds in battle. The fights are so precise because of this that the first person who blinks is the one who loses because even that small of a halt is enough to tip the balance between them. They are the same physically, but as they mature their philosophy could not be more averse. One believes he inherited his power from the course of nature and plans to use it to secure his rightful place in nature, as the alpha of society by becoming the leader. He wants to rearrange society in a genetic and darwinist way. The other believes that his power came from a higher being and should be used to better society for everyone.
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>>161005354
At the age of thirteen, the darwinist brother wins because the other brother blinked first and was swiftly taken advantage of. The loser secludes himself in nature and spends all of his time pondering how he should use his power. He believes a higher being gave him the power to do what’s best for others, but what is best for others? He nearly goes insane after continually pondering this question for years on end. He believes that if he is going to use a power as great as his, he should be 100% sure on how to use it, but he can’t be 100% sure when it comes to philosophy, no one can, he can’t find a definitive answer. He believes in a right and wrong, but can’t be certain on what it is.
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>>161005390
As the darwinist brother goes on militaristic journeys to conquer neighboring lands with no remorse, refugees start to come to the other brother for protection. People also join the Darwinist brother for protection. However, both groups of followers have their doubts. The people with the darwinist brother think they’re in some form of safety by being under such a powerful man, but also realize that they could be used as simple pawns in battle. The people following the other brother knows that they are also under a powerful man, but don’t know for sure if he would protect them because he can’t form simple philosophical principles on the morality of self-defense and therefore might not make an attempt to fight back with them and/or for them if attacked.
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>>160973908
An isekai that doesn't suck, huh? Norl promises but here we go...

An amature wrestler who is just starting to make a name for himself and trying to go pro dies in a freak cage-match accident.
But all is not lost!
An ancient alien from the M99 Galaxy snags the young man's conciousness and offers him a chance to be the champion of a far away world.
The people there are beset by trouble and the alien will give him a new body if he will use his sweet moves to help them.
The man accepts and finds himself on a medieval planet.
He looks normal, but soon discovers he has superhuman strength and durability.
Which is good for him because it isn't long until the village is attacked by a giant sphinx monster-girl!
After trying and failing to fight her, our hero recieves a prompt from the ancient alien telling him to transform.
He does and becomes an Ultraman-like giant capable of wrestling the sphinx-girl into submission.
During the fight she proves to be invulnerable.
Our hero has to use his rudimentary knowledge of mythology to figure out that he must solve her riddle so she will loose her invincibility.
Then he lays the smackdown on her.
After he defeats her she promises to behave and becomes his ally.
It turns out there are seven legendary "kaijusume", or giant monster girls on this world.
Sphinx-chan is one of them, though she doesn't know much about the other ones since they all have their own territories.
It's up to our hero to travel the world and subdue them all.

This would naturally be a harem-comedy, tweaked by the fact that all the girls in his harem are basically cute medieval-fantasy kaiju and our hero can only spend a limited amount of time in his giant spandex superhero form.

Working title is:

怪獣娘と勇者の伝説 Kaiju Musume to Yūsha no Densetsu (The Legend of the Hero and the Giant Monster Girls)
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>>160973908
Core of the story: Family
>Three brothers and their father are killed in a car accident
>The father has lived enough lives to pass on forever, but the sons must be reborn one last time
>Father begs that the sons are given wisdom gained from him so that their last life is better than their previous one
>Each son is given the wisdom and grows up in different nations
>Each one interprets the wisdom differently and, with their early start, climb up ladders
>Each one rises to become national heros/leaders
>Their nations are forced into WAR and each brother slowly realizes that they are similar during a three pronged battle
>Become rivals/bitter rivals

>One dies in a way that inspires the other two to ensure that their people succeed
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>>161005435
There are instances when the philosophical brother doesn’t want his followers to act violently. Such as when refugees from a certain area here that that the people from their hometown are being hunted down and need help. Despite their leader saying no, they go to help anyway. Against orders, they go towards the enemy. Same happens with the other brother. Sometimes death is certain and they don’t want to fight back. Instead of listening to their leader and fighting for him, they run away. Against orders, they go away from the enemy. Also, the philosophically challenged brother wears gray and the darwinist brother wears white and black stripes as symbolism of their outlook on the world.
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>>161005469
In the end, the brothers have to fight. The darwinist realizes that the battles between their followers would eventually lead to him having a smaller and weaker army and the peaceful brother realized that the battles only lead to death, something even he understands on the most basic level to be bad. They both know where to go. As kids, they would practice their sparing on a certain hill next to the palace, that is where they will fight. As they slowly ascend the hill on different sides, the darwinist brother trembles and is afraid to go to the top because he doesn’t want to be killed while the other brother trembles and is afraid to go to the top because he doesn’t want to kill.
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>>160975202
I find this a better pleasing Final Countdown story, fund more
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>>161005505
As they suddenly reach the top, they realize that in the end nothing they thought meant anything. It was always about people wanting to live. The darwinist’s ideals about rearranged society in terms of genetic prowess ultimately meant nothing. The other brother secluding himself to learn right and wrong ultimately meant nothing. The want to live and have power was everything. It’s why their father only cared about the stronger brother, it’s why their followers followed them, not because of their ideals, but because of safety. It’s why the darwinist wanted to be the best, so he could be safe. It’s why the other brother isolated himself, so he could be safe. The only reason their power ever mattered, was for safety, not some decree by a creator, not some plea from nature to arrange humans in a darwinist way.
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>>160975832
what a waste of talent
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>>161005541
Before they fight the philosophical brother tells the other that he doesn’t know how he’ll defeat him, but he knows he will somehow. The other brother says he’d rather be dead than inferior to another person. The philosophical brother then say he hopes he can live in the future when he can remember everything about his life except the existence of his brother. With that they fight. They go at it for hours, only blinking when they are at a safe enough distance to not be hit. They are at a total stalemate. They both know what the other will do before they do it. Until, the philosophical brother gets an idea. He borrows the mind of a newborn baby born less than a mile away from them. The other brother tries to read his mind, but because he has a baby’s mind. It’s blank. He sees this a different way, he instead thinks that he simply can’t read his mind, not that it’s blank.
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>>161005569
He thinks that he has lost, that his brother has found a way to stop him from reading his mind. With this he admits defeat. He brought a knife with him. He didn’t use it in battle because that would be unfair and negate the part about him wanting to be the best and proving it by fighting fairly. Instead, he brought the knife in case one of them were to admit defeat, that someone was now him. He hands it to his brother and kneels on the ground with his face towards the ground and tells him to slit his neck. He’s staying true to what he said before the fight, he doesn’t want to live if someone, specifically his brother, is more powerful than him.
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>the story focuses not on the reincarnated, but on the true man of destiny
>the truck driver
>constantly haunted by dreams of weird fantasy lands
>they always contain the faces of kids he hit
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>>161005602
His brother doesn’t take the knife because he still has the mind of a baby and doesn’t even recognize speech, he just stares at him, but his brother thinks he won’t take it because he’s unwilling to kill him. Therefore, he slits his own throat. Although they realized that power meant everything before they fought, it turned out that the least powerful ended up winning, the one with the mind of a baby, the least powerful possible human. The brother was right too, he didn’t have any idea of how he killed him. However he was wrong in one area. He wanted to live the rest of his life without the memory of his brother. Now, however, because of the taking of the baby’s mind, his first ever memory is actually of his brother. The End
This is supposed to be a movie not a running show by the way.
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>>161005440
>Our hero has to use his rudimentary knowledge of mythology to figure out that he must solve her riddle so she will loose her invincibility.
>Then he lays the smackdown on her.
>solves riddle
>smackdowns the fuck out of her
kek
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>>161005662
Yeah, I figure each of the various monster types would have their own quirks that he would exploit to help take care of them.

Dragons love gold, etc...
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Chink Nuke Training.webm
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>Early Cold War
>Proxy wars starting to go hot
>African and Asian rebels attempt rituals and summoning magic to empower themselves and their weapons
>several 2nd world and 1st world back groups ends up opening portals from the other world by mistake instead, which summons demon lords, monsters monstergirls included and a whole new set of factions
>This changes everything
>Some groups get their asses beat, some colonies get conquered by demon lords due to the three way conflict
>Super powers try to negotiate with them
>New alliances form and the cold war and demon war is mutually exchanged between the two groups with cold war tech and magic based technologies
>Cultural differences tense up
>Mid cold war goes hot as magic incorporated defense tech barriers can reduce the radioactive effects of nukes on people, the environment, etc (Thus increasing confidence in using them) while scandal after scandal and multiple crisises happen dimensionally
>Earth and the other dimension falls into a great state of war and proxy wars
>Some portals get destroyed or cut off due to instability or disturbances of a region
>This can damage supply lines and decimate the movement and support of troops
Basically stuff like .webm related but on massive scales
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>>160997581
Finally finished writing this shitty prologue of mine, so I'm gonna leave it here
https://pastebin.com/TYEvLKMP

Criticisms encouraged, it may be shit but I had a good time writing this short piece
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>>161006435
the little sister joke didn´t play out really well.
it could be more like:
"anon´s little sister is doing so great while he..."
ah yeah, my cute little sister who is always watching up to me.
"...he didn´t even attend her celebration for the acceptance at the best high school"
WHAT! MY LITTLE SISTER HAS ALREADY GROWN UP

stale writing, but nothing really happened in the first site since it was just an introduction. really depends on how you would deliver the jokes and the characters.
t. i did respond earlier as well
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>>161007502
Maybe I'll fix it up and post it next time we have one of these threads

Thanks for your critique anon
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