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Write an anime plot.
Hardmode: No keitai
Hardermode: Plot twist within a plot twist
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>>160232353
>MC is a hikkomori
>Thrown out of his parent's home
>Almost gets hit by a truck
>Is saved by a cute reverse trap truck driver
>Joins an organization that sends heroes that parallel words need or deserve by using magical psychopomp trucks
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>>160232501
> Cute reverse trap truck driver
WHAT?
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>>160232353
A show about a serial killer, a detective and the victims all from pov of a lamp. Each episode is narrated by different lamp ranging from lamp post to bedroom lamp.
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>>160232904
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_kpVX11Hd0s
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>>160232353
Initial D but with trucks.
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>>160232353
A series set in a local gayborhood following the daily lives of it's residents, with the comedic style of nichijou/Danshi koukousei.
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>>160233090
Initial D with shopping carts.
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>generic fantasy "quest to kill the demon king"
>brief narration by small town boy chosen to wield the holy sword
>he dies in first episode. the rest of the series follows the sword, who is the actual narrator as it passes from hand to hand, trying to fulfill its purpose and turning would-be warriors, thieves and otherwise into true heroes.
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A fat kiddo open a youtube channel and then he can stop time and he saids "ora ora ora ora" and the name of the show is "JinJon's Autistic Fatass"
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>>160233149
Ben-to?
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A boy falls in love with a girl.
But the boy is actually a girl.
And the girl is actually a boy.
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>>160232353
A series that teases relationships with the main characters for 500+ chapters and goes nowhere
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>>160233149
Initial D with horses
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>>160233316
Initial D with stick horses.
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>>160233227
>trap/reverse trap
WHY ISN'T THIS A THING?!
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Try to post something "new" for once
A show about apathetic mc who goes around doing his things and gets into weird adventure without him wanting to be in
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>>160233444
Lurk more.
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Issei, Rias and Koneko from DxD re-enacting episodes of Aqua Teen Hunger Force.
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>>160233387
Initial D but with planes
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>>160233569
Initial D but with food delivery cars.
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>>160232353
>mc works at fast food resturaunt
>when he is young he meets a mentally disable person and becomes friends with him
>later on said person is his neighbor
>they go on all sorts of weird adventures to get away from the monotony of their daily lives
>Their neighbor is a failed musician and kind of fits the tsundere tropes although he doesnt like to admit it these two revitalized his life with a breath of positivity
Theres a lot more to this but I'll leave it at that
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Initial D but with RC cars
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Initial D but with follow-up E, H, S and M
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>>160233652
This?
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Guys I'm shilling my isekai story. There's until chapter 3. It's quite short so try reading it.

https://pastebin.com/EPpu5rZ4
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>>160233853
Digibro, go bathe in Karachay pls.
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>>160232353
SOL anime of the lives of sub-elementary particles in the LHC at CERN
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>>160232353
> MC goes to sleep
> wakes up in a world filled with magic
> MC always scared of everything and wants to go home
> MC goes to sleep and wakes up in his world
> It repeats everytime he goes to sleep which makes him question which is real and which isnt
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>>160233997
Space Dandy did something like that in one episode.
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Between worlds in the far up heavens, cosmic stability is ensured by a mysterious organization called the Administration. Led by a single alien race who have achieved the highest level of technology possible, the entire race has dedicated itself to safeguarding the universe from 'incosmic' horrors and other potential incosmic threats. Each world is assigned an Overseer duo, who are given the responsibility of steering intelligent life away from willingly or accidentally attracting incosmic influence.

In the Marathon Quadrant, an inexplicable phenomenon disrupts the reincarnation process, causing the souls of the dead to be directly transported to another sekai with the same corporeal form they had in the original world. However, because of the massive birth/death traffic in the Quadrant, the energy spent on creating and transporting fully grown corporeal forms is disproportionate to the energy gained of the dying, which is bound to create an energy well that attracts the incosmic.

A team of specialists is sent to the Marathon Quadrant, tasked with 'correcting' the misplaced souls, finding the cause of the 'Isekai' phenomenon and solving it with the help of the local overseers. However, soon the phenomenon starts to spread towards other quadrants, putting the entire (known) universe at risk. The team must make their way through several quadrants to pierce the pieces together, only to find out that the cause of the phenomenon seems to lead way up, as evidence starts to show that the Administration itself is about to a massive change from within...
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>>160233582
Initial D but with spaceships
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Battle Harem Academy, but the MC fucks the ara ara who gets him into her bedroom. Then he NTRs her for the Tsundere-who but actually a man who uses fire swords.
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>>160235469
This sound familiar...
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>>160232353
NEET MC lives in a magical apartment building after It's never explained, he doesn't even remember.
His next store neighbor is a chill demon dude who likes beer, baseball and practical jokes too much.
There's also a waifu paranormal investigator who never sees any ghosts/vampires/aliens/episode plot but is popular on the internet despite showing nothing paranormal because she accidently live streams her bedroom.
Episodes would revolve around the NEET wanting nothing to do with magical crap but being forced by a joke or something. Meanwhile the waifu will seek the same thing out but always fail.
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>>160237054
So kinda like Ugly Americans?
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A nerdy kid and meteorology freak somewhere in the times before the internet is the only one to realize that it rains more often than explainable when he goes home from school.

He uses scientific methods and statistical measurements around town to track down the path of an elusive and mysterious local rain source which turns out to be some kind of weather/fertility god girl his age that lets it rain wherever she goes.

But that was the easy part, the hard part is befriending her!

Nerdy love romance with a focus on moody weather effects and educational funfacts about meteorology.

ED by The Weepies: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1Gp1r2vGi18
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>>160237193
never heard of that until now
MC is a foul-mannered virgin with deprived but innocent ideas of sex.
I wrote a bit of one episode where he found a succubus and baked for her but put his cum in the batter.
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This is Mike Pence, a sixteen year-old Japanese high schooler living at home with his family and doing normal-ass boring teenager shit. But also he knows a bunch of otaku terminology because the author is fucking inept and can’t finish a sentence in his own mind without some kind of internet meme popping up, so just ignore that and pretend like this character is consistent or makes any fucking sense.

His little sister is Motoko Kusanagi, An inexplicably purple-haired cute little girl who goes to middle school, listens to like nothing but fucking My Chemical Romance, has a razor hidden in her bedside drawer so that she might cut her wrists but has never actually broken the skin, and hates everyone at her school. She and her brother haven’t really been talking for the last few years, but one day she has to come to him for help because of her waaacky secret! While pretending to cut herself, Motoko accidentally ACTUALLY slit her wrists!! What will she do if mom and dad find out?!

After letting her bleed profusely all over his floor while exchanging fifteen minutes of pleasantries in the form of misunderstandings, pointless bickering, and at one point, Mike slipping on Motoko’s blood, causing him to faceplant into her hooch, to which she is none too pleased, Mike finally takes Motoko to the hospital. After taking one look at Mike’s completely dead sister, the doctor flicks his tongue against his teeth and announces that the only thing now is to turn her into a full-body cyborg. And so, after promptly removing Motoko’s human brain and throwing it directly into the garbage where it belongs, the doctor then spent the afternoon crafting a technological marvel of scientific ingenuity--a completely original cyborg which looked nothing like Mike’s sister Motoko Kusanagi, and everything like the main character of Ghost in the Shell, Motoko Kusanagi.
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>haruhi suzumiya except its bara fujoshit
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>>160232353
>The setting is a giant space station that functions as a self-sustainable city, holding up the remainder of humanity, as the Earth has been destroyed
>There's a serial killer
>The anime is about a space detective tracking him down, solving minor cases in the process
>The killer turns out to be a lovecraftian-style alien
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>>160238527
Finally a SS13 anime
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Setting
>Bunch of robot humanoids with memory problems they expierience reality as a mixture of the past and the present. They have been alive for millenia and the earth has become barren and desert like.

>There are very few remaining but they live out their days wandering the desert remembering their previous lives in an abstract incoherent pattern.

>One robo human receives a transmission from underground and decides to travel to invistigate it, as he gets closer there are more strange robots other than humanoid ones. Some are violent and deranged their past memories come through using dialogue of their pasts as they can't tell the present from the past.

I can continue but if its boring I'll stop
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>>160239152
Go on
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>>160232353
A boy falls in love
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>>160233853
It's pretty bad. Keep trying kiddo follow your dreams.
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>>160233853
Your first paragraph is important, like a opening page in a brand new manga you have to capture your reader's attention or they're going to just move on to a different work.
>Class is boring as fuck.
You're not easing the reader into your work, you just dropped a very bold statement without warning. That by itself isn't bad, sometimes it's great to start off with a bang. What you should be concerned with is how you follow up on this.
>Why can’t the world be more interesting?
You did a sudden transition between your character's disdain for his class to the world without first explaining what is it that makes him feel this way. Following your first sentence you can further explain just what is it that makes class boring for him. Otherwise it leaves the reader confused since you're assuming they'll know what is it the main character hates about the class.
>Maybe… maybe it’s just me. Maybe I just have to push myself and do something different for once…
You need to be more bold, using an adverb every once in a while isn't bad but in this passage there's five alone. Using the word maybe so much makes it repetitive to read as well. But at least now you're trying to establish some kind of character. He has some understanding that his miserable outlook on life is his own fault, which may frustrate him.
>Nah, too much work. When is the class going to end? I just want to go home.
But then you throw that buildup out the window. This can work in comedy where you can try and make people laugh due to unexpected outcomes. However if this is a serious story then you should consider saying it differently. Instead of something pathetic a middle school boy would say, make him sound hopeless again. "Whether I try to better myself or do nothing, the results are always the same." sounds better than "Nah, too much work," though your intended outcome doesn't change.
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>>160233853
>>160242589
I edit your first paragraph, since I don't know your character on the same level you do, you should make your revisions. Either way here's an example of what I was talking about:
>I hate going to class. From sunrise to noon I sit in this chair, scribbling away facts I never wanted to know. To pass tests that mean nothing to me. All for a job that I will never love. But I have to do this. Otherwise I'll become a failure. A parasite on society. Nothing more than a living corpse, going to class allows me to survive in a sense. But what's the point of living if you don't want to wake up in the morning? I know this is my fault. There's no unfulfilled dreams kept from me in this class. I have no drive to succeed any other way. All I can do is take this path laid out for me. And I hate everything about that.
There's some big assumptions in my paragraph, like how your main character thinks. But I assume his inner turmoils are similar to most of on /a/. Just a hunch though.
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>>160232353
The First Age of Middle Earth.
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uhhhh like an otaku that meets a cute girl which needs him in a fantasy world so he does and everyone falls in love with him
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[MANDATORY KYOTO ARC]
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Eh anime seems really easy to write, i'll try

>Gaijin hotel:double harem
>The main characters are a guy and a girl who secretly have feelings for eachother
>their job is to run a japanese hotel where a bunch of important people from all over the world come to rest for a while
>Both of them are really kind to all the clients
>this makes each one of them have their own unexpected harem
>the boy's harem has girls such as a french artist a chinese acrobat and an italian writer
>the girl's harem has a fit mexican boxer, a handsome german scientist, and a british fashion designer
>the plot is about the guy and the girl trying to get rid of their harems by making gaijin couples out of both harems so they can have free time and finally confess their feelings for eachother
>There is also a comic relief character who is american and it's named davido he looks and acts like this
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=d2FGgYp6mdk And he ends up alone because fuck americans they suck
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>>160233316
Steel Ball Run?
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>>160243764
KEK
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>>160239152
>>160240383
>alright

>eventually while searching for the signal he encounters ruins, hard to distinguish as structures but still there. Its still for the most part a desert but as he keeps going the envirement changes and the buildings grow larger and larger. While also any roads he encounters also grow in size. Eventually he reaches the center of the city.

In the middle there is an elevator but its sourounded by other dead humanoid like beings charred black. He cant see that there were ever modified like he had been.

As he walks up the elevator allows him to enter and for the first time his memories start to flow in a cohesive order but they are still fragmented and going backwards from the point he entered the elevator.

>its obv a memepocalypse probably a biological threat of some kind

He sees these memories and recognizes the purpose of the project to gurantee survival while destroying the bioagent in the process. But his personal details are still fuzzy. He does know his name and the people who was with who became half human half machine to preserve themselves.

He enters the underground and meets some of the diseased humans that had made it underground by tunneling wanting salvation. They are huge abnormal looking flesh growths some can move others just appear disgusting think boomers and that shit from parasite eve.

>anyways he clears that bullshit and proceeds through many layers of blast shields. Many where destroyed but the last few open by autosystem.

>que last memories of infection

essentially they were meant to wait it out by using partially synthetic bodies and when the airborne pathogen died they'd be able to return.

But most had more or less gone and insane and everyone else had turned. He by chance alone was able to retain his conscience enough to follow the signal back.

If there is interest I'll continue
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YuGiOh GX but they actually learn how to play the game in school and no supernatural elements. The goal for the new MC is just to win some tournament.
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Playground. Playground never changes.

The end of the headpats occurred pretty much as we had predicted. Too many lolis, not enough onii-sans to go around. The details are trivial and pointless, the reasons, as always, purely childish ones.

The playground was nearly wiped clean of cuteness. A great cleansing, a loud argument struck by cute lolis, quickly raged out of control. Spears of barbed insults rained from their mouths. Friendships were swallowed in flames and fell beneath the boiling tempers. Cuteness was almost extinguished, their temper tantrums becoming part of the background wailing that blanketed the playground.

A quiet sulking fell across the playground, lasting many hours. Few survived the devastation. Some had been fortunate enough to reach safety, going home to their parents. When the great sulking passed, these homes opened, and their inhabitants emerged to begin their lives again.
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>>160244169
I'm reading it keep up
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>>160233853
>>160242589
>>160242744
And here's a revision on your prologue. I wanted to explain each sentence but the revisions should speak for itself.
Here you go anon: https://pastebin.com/79ZgsrvQ
Never give up on your dreams!
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It's a battle shounen where the characters battle through pelvic thrusts.
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A salesman in his mid twenties with an active but not too busy social life. He's not a paragon of intelligence, but decently smart.
But one day, people around him start vanishing - and he is the only one remembering them. Starting to question his own sanity, he begins looking for clues on what is happening. What awaits him as he is carefully led to the source of the phenomenon is a battle to maintain his sanity and a sinister plan to awaken a slumbering God.
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>>160232353
goblin slayer, but people have actual names and no anime greatswords
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>>160245123
>>160244169
This is becoming longer than expected.
So inside the room our protagonist is now lies a small terminal. He walks up to it the machine recognizes him and reads out unit 77 432. It follows up by bringing up a small screen which shows his body.
>Memory Fault detected
>Physical Propulsion unit faulty
>Internal Energy supply faulty
>Phsyical integrity failing

The more or less square table like fixture opens up and prompts him to enter. His body is opened up and the machine utilizing many arms repairs his body as well as memory. It also verifies him non corrupted and mentally sound.

The octagon like room opens up by that I mean a staircase emerges out of the floor seemingly out of nowhere.

He walks down for what seems like a long time. Eventually reaching a small door. Inside there is no light and its a place of pure darkness. As he enters he hears a familar warm voice. He can't quite place it.

A hologram woman walks up to him and the entire room lights up. He falls backward and
the floor effortlessly morphs into the chair. SHe sits down across from him and begins the exposition.

He learns here that he was one of her favorite android and that she hated having to send him out but she is happy he made it back.

They were two things. They acted as preservatiion of humanity as their bodies were exceptionally diffcult to destroy and could withstand time. But they were also sent out yearly to the surface to wander the earth for 100 years to survey it.

After that time they supposed that most would come back to the signal but he was the only one that had so far. His memory mechanism was one of the few that survived. They were sent out to figure out if the world was good enough to return to.
>Nice
She then politely asks to examine his memories. If I was formally writing this out as story this is where it would cut away for a while but for the sake of size I'll end here.
If there is interest I'll continue
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Our MC, Infinitium Deathbringer is the end boss of a poorly made video game. Some jackass transports him to the real world to defeat some ultra evil something or other. He did, and frankly doesn't remember. It wasn't important. The series starts after he saves the world and anonymously moves to the country. There he takes the name Guy and marries a lonely cake. But when Guy meets her family, they realize he's not only clueless about everything but thinks they are all from different anime!
>His wife is the MC of a comfy SoL and a mahou shoujo
>her twin nieces are from a fantasy comedy. Every week he gives them a new enchanted item to see how they exploit his poorly thought out magic. For instance one week their phones can store real objects so they decide to store themselves to be released on a timer and mail themselves to Kyoto to see their grandmother. After getting lost in luggage, they end up in France.
>Her little brother is the MC of a harem! Guy does everything he can to help him get close to any girl he meets - in every meaning of the word.
>Her mom and dad are secret agents, and the livestock are aliens! Guy doesn't have time to keep track of them but bits and pieces of their daily lives have him thinking they are spies, saving the world from the evil chicken menaces that threaten all life on earth.
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>>160234393
this may be entertaining, if the story would be good in both worlds
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>>160232353
>Op is the Mc
>Op is the Leader of cockless group of this thread
>Op and his Cockless team get teleported in Isekai
>there is no magic and nothing but dangerous creature there and we are all NAKED
>no humans in 400kms range


You may continue from there to add spicy to this plot:

Opは私たちを守るでしょうか? starts now
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>>160248261
>Op and Anons in Isekai Being Op and Anons.
I would actually watch this kind Isekai.
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>Kniggas in wonderland

After being gunned down by a rabid white supremacist, Trayvon Martin finds himself in another world called "Prizon".
Prizon has a single ghetto in the middle, run by two gangs (east vs west) and everyone is black.
Soon after arriving, Travyon gets into hijinks regarding the East gang, but is saved by a group of kniggas called, Jayshawn, Darius and Jerome. The four of them hit it off and smoke some dank stuff, which leads to some exposition where Trayvon learns that this world has video game rules.
Prizon is like an RPG, except all the classes are based on /tg/ Kniggas.
Beyond the ghetto, monsters called "poleese" make sure that nobody ever escapes Prizon, but Travyon and his new friends are eager to prove them wrong.
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>>160236986
I have no idea what you are talking about
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A boy falls in love with a girl, he tells her of his feelings and is rejected because she's not into him. An accident at a Japanese particle accelerator causes several tears in space-time across parallel universes. A few days after his rejection, as the boy sulks, the girl who rejected him finds him sitting in a park, walks up to him and gives him, gives him a kiss and behaves as if they're a couple. He's completely dumbfounded but rolls with it. The next day, when he recounts that park's events to the girl at school, she has no recollection of it. Turns out the girl he was with is an alternate universe version of the girl he likes. He goes back to the park and finds the girl he was with yesterday sitting there with an alternate universe version of himself. After he confronts himself, they get an inkling of an idea of whats going on.

You can fill in the blanks, basically this all leads to a love triangle between the MC, his alt universe self and the girl. Also they question the nature of love, of course.
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A Historical fiction anime contexted on the Bush Wars, featuring Not!Thomas Michael "Mad Mike" Hoare's 5th Commando
>Plot Twist:They have to end up fighting western backed rebels as well who were formerly allied with them because they're contract is with the government
>Plot Twist in a plot twist: The government they were under with turned out to be fully subverted politicians both by the KGB and CIA and they have to get out of the country fast
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>>160248266
Mods, the kind of control you're attempting simply is... it's not possible. If there is one thing the history of this board has taught us it's that Keit-ai will not be contained.

Keit-ai breaks free, it spams to new threads and crashes through topics, painfully, maybe even dangerously, but, uh... well, there it is.

I'm, I'm simply saying that Keit-ai, uh... finds a way.
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>>160250368
I'm sure any mod who doesn't have a few screws loose knows it's impossible to control a beloved meme.
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Unfunny phone spammers a shit
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>>160233582
Initial D but barefoot running.
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>>160233853
Man, I wish I had the balls to post my shitty fiction like that. I've written a full length novel without another human being reading it and every time I add onto it I want to kill myself for creating such garbage.
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>>160251145
>I've written a full length novel
I wish I had the motivation to get that far, best I've managed is half a novel.
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In a world where the vacuum tube and transistor were never invented, giant electromechanical computers direct the every move of a seemingly endless war. In secret, the side of our protagonists have built an even greater computer with the aim of paralysing the enemy governing computer through a precisely directed series of actions invoking mechanical failure (the correct events will cause all relays to cycle in a resonant sequence, physically breaking it).

Unbeknownst to them, their enemy is in the process of doing the same.
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>>160251145
I post my garbage every once in a while and no one notices.
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>Mecha Hitler and Mecha Stalin fight in downtown Paris for the fate of Europe.
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>>160251409
Try skipping forward to a part in the story that's more fun to write.

Getting through big blocks of dialogue and settings takes a lot more effort, but when I'm just flowing through action sequences I can write 2000+ words a day easy.

Or you could try writing about something that's not necessarily about the main story itself, but the universe its in. Mine's a fantasy setting so I like to write short snippets about magical artifacts, locations, battles, and wizards that may never even show up while I'm not feeling it.

Also I highly recommend writing even just 100 words a day if you're not feeling it, because the longer you go without writing the harder it is to get back into it.
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>>160252334
>Stalin and Hitler are cute girls doing cute things

Beat that, anons.
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>>160252404
Cute William T. Sherman burning the South to the ground
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>>160241389
>>160242589
>>160242744
>>160245254
>>160251145
Thank you guys for caring enough to actually read it. I'm really not good at writing good prose. But still I think I need to clear this up. I'm writing this intentionally short like a summary. I just want to get to the point of my story. But still thank you. Now I see how people that are actually good at writing stories write.
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>>160252334
>>SuperMecha Hitler and SuperMecha Stalin fight in Dark space by attacking each other with Big Bangs and destroying entire clusters of galaxies for the fate of Universe

Now thats sounds better
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>>160232353
a guy who keeps trying to commit suicide but keeps getting distracted/failing at the last moment

and everyone else is really happy except him and his plant, but he doesn't wanna kill the thing because its his soul brother who talks to him in dreams every night
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The Napoleonic Wars but with giant robots
They still use the same tactics and stuff
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>>160252693
>They still use the same tactics and stuff

Dear lord, why?
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> MC is a teen girl who has telepathy. With these powers, she has used these to ensure she is well-liked and popular, and has breezed through most of life's challenges. This has also left her massively cynical and two-faced towards others due to what she can read. She has also trained her powers so she can only see exact thoughts or visual thoughts people around her have.
> One day, she realizes one loner guy in her class thinks of bizarre scenarios that involve people in the class along with people she can't recognize. She sees these fantasies quite vividly through reading his mind and is confused, but also intrigued by them.
> She soon discovers that he's secretly an accomplished writer who has been writing short stories under a pen name and is working on his first novel, an anthology of high school stories. She also figures out that the visuals are him using real people as inserts for fictional characters.
> She begins to pay a lot of attention to these fantasies, which causes rumors to swirl that she's interested in him since she's always looking at him. Eventually, the guy confronts her to know what's up with her weird behavior and she admits to knowing he's a writer, which terrifies him since he keeps that secret.
> Not wanting to lose the one person she actually wants to know more about, she swears to be his confidant and help him with his book. The boy accepts, glad someone actually is interested in him.
> The series follows the girl trying to help the boy with his book, while also softening a bit and learning to not let her psychic powers prevent her from enjoying life and people.
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>>160232353
plot: guy trying to dig hole to china
plotwist: he finds some super amazing shit along the way
plotwist plotwist: he makes it to china but kills himself and the earth in the attempt
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Dieselpunk Mecha WW-2-esque post apocalyptic anime about guys who stalk wasteland in their mechas that look something like picrelated, but with more details and attention to them of course.

Complicated plot isnt needed, just bunch of cool guys in cool mechas roam in post apocalypse.
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>>160252767
At first it looked kinda ok, but it was ruined by
>> The series follows the girl trying to help the boy with his book, while also softening a bit and learning to not let her psychic powers prevent her from enjoying life and people.

Very anticlimatic.
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>>160252749
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>It's about a guy, but he's not a guy, he's a dog
>He's a Corgi, because bitches love corgis
>Everyone is some kind of animal, but the world is still made with humans in mind
>You've got a flock of birds working a car in tandem, an orangutan on a trike, and a Kangaroo pushing her joey in a carriage. cute shit like that
>Hammer it home that MC is stuck in a rut
>One day, he sees a human
>never seen one before, freaks out but no one else can see it
>gradually more and more animals turn into humans
>that flock of birds? A Carpool. The Orangutan? Some old balding guy. The Kangaroo and joey? Normal mother and child.
>tries to figure out whats wrong while juggling the fact everyone around him thinks he's going crazy
>eventually, even his GF turns human and he's left all alone
>still nobody realizes
>starts notcing how everything seems to be made with these human things in mind
>thinks he'll turn human soon, so he starts copying everyone else
>starts trying to walk on his hind legs, and using utensils when eating, cute shit like that
>Doesn't happen, he may very well be insane
>He wakes up
>He's an actual dog, it was all a dog dream
>His GF is actually his owner, ends with him humping her leg
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>>160252404
Plato's dialogues but everyoen is a trap and talk like moeblobs
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>>160252346
>Try skipping forward to a part in the story that's more fun to write.
Different writefag, the only thing I don't like about this bit of advice because it means still having to come back to it afterwards, especially because that's when you start realizing that's a "boring" part.
The universe expansion thing I really should do more of, along with the actual plot plan shit.
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>>160232635
I think he means a tomboy
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>>160253160
I only do that when I need to get through massive blocks of "boring" to inject some fun back into writing before it's back to the grind. Just don't overdo it by doing all the fun parts and leaving half a novel of nothing but boring bits you'll never want to slog through.

Though my preferred solution is to avoid needing to write boring passages in the first place.
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>>160253035
>animated by shaft
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>>160239152
>>160244169
>>160247469

a bit choppy but interesting premise.
i can see it be turned into a low budget scifi film if done right.
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>>160253112
There's a web novel series being shilled on Pixiv about this guy traveling back in time and hooking up with female versions of famous people and one of them is Aristotle if that's worth anything
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>New hyper advanced VR game comes out and MC is a master at it
>Eventually gets bored of the base game and decides to mod the shit out of it with power and sex mods
>Gets magic teleported into the game world as a new character
>However, the mods have caused a definite change in the way people act and the storyline is fucked up
>Previously serious events are replaced with butt sex jokes and spells that cause everyone's clothes to fly off
>Everyone's personality has also been changed to be sexually deviant and degenerate and MC must adapt
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>>160245649
Sounds lovecraftian actually. Post more, maybe you can make a short story of this.
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Cute girls are chosen by the Devil to be the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse and tasked with doing Apocalyptic, world-ending things
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>>160233853
Cringed the minute I opened the link and read the first line.
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>>160255639
Then read this one.

https://pastebin.com/YSGBjwdy

This one I replaced the prologue with the one the other anon fixed. I even added chapter 4.
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>>160232501
needs some work but solid concept

>needs title: Truck Kun: Operation Isekai, RE:Incarnators or something.
>If truck drivers screw up and hit a non target, that person becomes a powerful monster in the parallel world and they lose Isekai points.
>Girl needs to be a catgirl and also needs to be short so she can't be seen from street level, maintaining the illusion that the truck kills and not the driver.
>Girl gets wish granted if she gets the most isekai points. Wants to Wish to be taller so she can be a Basketball superstar leading to Sport focused 2nd Season.
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Set in the far distant reaches of space and time, humanity has advanced to the point where it is now the age of intergalactic colonization. One of these colonies is the "Growing City" of Londonium - a self-sufficient, ever-expanding colony seed city on a barren but habitable planet.

The city is presided over by an AI that evaluates its citizens and directs their growth towards optimal results. From childhood to maturity, the city provides for and nurtures young talent so they may choose whatever future they please, so long as they have been determined to have the capability for it.

By the age of 16, the city will have determined a human's major prospects and potential and thereby assign their rights and priveleges to them as per their evaluation. Those with great potentials will be given access to the resources within the city whether it be in the form of knowledge, technology or materials but conversely those lacking in it will only see basic provisions supplied to them. The city is not unkind to them though as these basic provisions are plentiful by today's standards and even physical disabilities will be accomodated for to add to their value. However, they simply cannot be allowed to pursue futures they are unfit for.
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>>160257395 CONT
If they have been determined incapable of achieving a role's standard proficiencies then they cannot pursue it. If they have an undesirable genetic mutation then they will be made sterile. If the city does not want what they have to offer, they will not be allowed to offer at all. All they are allowed is to live within their limits.

The majority of the population will find their roles but a small subset will find themselves lacking in future prospects. They can either find a way to live with that or not at all. Out of those that do are those who would surrender their lives to those with bright prospects in hopes that doing so will allow them some measure of fulfillment.

This story centers around a young girl who lacked too much and the prodigious man she begs to take her in. The man himself stands opposed to idea of volunteer slavery but couldn't bring himself to refuse her desperate plea. The value of a single life brings them together but it'll also take them apart in the end.

I call this one "A World Without".

The plot twist is that the girl was previously a boy and the plot twist in that one is the city provided her the means to change herself to make her more appealing as a slave.
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Cute girls doing cute things in a hot springs town.
It's reveled it's actually a group of dudes.
But then, in the last episode, it's shown it's a group of 6 year old lolis pretending to be teenage girls who are actually guys.
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>>160257395
>>160257440
You started at Krypton, then you ruined with discarded generations, all for a slave fetish with traps.

Also
>Londonium
Nice try though, you are the people who keeps these threads alive. Keep going
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>>160257740
I was listening to https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OLVtqVxZgYI and figured it was as good a name as any.

>all for a slave fetish with traps.
Actually it's really about how people aren't made equal and that at times nothing can close the gap and you have to find a way to live with that. The trap bit just highlights that aspect even more and the story would have their growing closeness and consideration for each other only cause more pain between them..
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>>160247985
Sounds kind of funny, but why would a video game end boss assume people are from different anime?
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>>160232353
neet loser gets involved with occult shit. finds an obscure website that has information on it about paranormal stuff. creates a summoning circle found on the website not thinking anything will come of it. summons a demon that possesses him. neet is able to bind the demon and curb its power but he has to keep feeding it spirits so the demon wont go after his own. now he has to find reports of supernatural activities to feed the demon which puts an end to his neet way of life.
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When MC thinks of something random (i.e. no premeditation), it manifests sooner or later.
Genre: Dark SoL
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RomCom set in middle school between a Gay Faggot and a Lesbian Dyke that starts off hating each other and eventually becomes straight for each other and by the end of the show we learn that homosexuality is phase in their teen life
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Cute Girls Doing Home Improvement Cutely.

>girls arrive late to their new boarding school
>the 4 of them get assigned to the old run down dorm building, by themselves.
>school maintenance can never seem to get around to fixing their dorm
>so they learn how to fix things and fix things
>each episode teaches actual construction skills.
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>>160232353
Series starts with MC, a bullied student getting ready to commit suicide by jumping off the school roof. He is stopped by one of the schools idol female students who says if he has no use for his life if he would give it to her. Not understanding she leads him to an underground gambling den that is situated in another world where beings from other worlds can gamble using their life essence instead of currency. MC finds his life essence being used by idol in a card game but as she is losing badly until he only has a small portion of his life seesnce left and learns if he runs out he dies. Idol is about to gamble his life essence on a bad hand and, unwilling to die, MC instead buys in with his life essence and wins the hand. Idol is a little annoyed she lost but glad MC decided to gamble on life rather then settle with death.

MC discovers as he often kept his head down and observed people he has a talent for noticing tells in people. He also learns the more life essence he earns the better he is; healthier, able to focus more, stronger, heals faster etc (not super power levels but above what an average person could achieve). The downside is once someone has entered the den their life force is constantly ticking down bit by bit, the old saying 'the house always wins' quite literal here, the only way to stay alive is to keep coming back and gamble.

Series follows MC and idol as the gamble in the den learning different games and interacting with different beings and humans while enduring lows and enjoying highs (low life force leading to depression and negative traits, excess leading to hyper positive). Art style would be similar to Death Parade. Series climax is MC gambling his life entire life force to save idol who lost it all and free them from the den's life drain.

op would hopefully be https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TbsBEb1ZxWA
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>>160255623
Add ecchi to that and I would watch it.

>MC gets superpowers
>But instead of simply using them to combat criminals the plot revolves around the morality of said superpowers
>Eventually the media finds out and he's stalked constantly by reporters
>Some people start complaining believing the MC to be dangerous for the country
>Nation-wide conflicts arise from this
>The government finally cedes to the pressure from those who want the MC to be isolated, his powers removed somehow
>The MC's friends help him to escape

Would you watch it /a/?
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>>160260253
Nah
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>>160233853
>https://pastebin.com/EPpu5rZ4
Prologue is shit, too many things happen within few paragraphs.
Dialogue part is better with pacing but your dialogue is unrealistic and cringy.
Think about the reasons why people talk to each other in real life and base on that.
There are small grammar errors.
Description of genie is just badly written
Basically when you try to convey anything in way other than dialogues it just reads like combat log from fallout 2, it's too simple and too fast
There is also nothing interesting about the world or MC
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I guess I'll just easy mode and use an isekai
An old military general in the year 2020 reincarnates into a fantasy-medieval world. Armed with knowledge about technology that otherwise does not exist in this world, he seeks to topple the current ruler and claim the throne himself by inciting civil war and leading the army.
In the final episode, upon reaching the throne room, the MC reveals that he was the previous King that was killed by the current King, and is making good on his promise 30 years ago to reclaim the throne. In his dying breath, the current King claims that he too, will return eventually, as part of a curse that has plagued the Kings of this world since man discovered fire.
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>>160233853
Would also like to shill my isekai.
Before you shit on me for the simple prose, it's because I can't be assed with detailed prose. Also, the italics don't show up but I'm sure you can figure it out.
https://pastebin.com/9D90KU03
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an anime about the psychology of attraction

In this universe, all people have what is called "propinquity", which is essentially a score of how attractive someone finds you. propinquity is gained passively by just being around someone. interacting with them actively increases propinquity. the higher your propinquity, the more likely you are to become friends with a person up to a hard cap, were the second half of attraction comes in; physical attraction. physical attraction is the baseline of propinquity that people when they first meet. you are attracted to them this much, if your propinquity reaches 100% you either become sexual partners or best friends. (propinquity score*attraction score)/10=your current propinquity with a person.

The narrative follows 4 couples who all exist tangentially to eachother as they find love/friendship. First couple is very straight forward, short girl has very big crush on the big guy. while her propinquity is closed to maxed out on him, he doesn't know she likes him. he's interested but doesn't know her that well. venting to her teacher about this, she pairs them up and you see his Propinquity score of her go up. this 3 episode arc represents physical attraction in "types", lots of people like a certain type of person that shares alot of physical characteristics. second 3 ep arc is about the teacher who helped the first couple and her colleague, as well as a new teacher starting, this represents work friendships. 3rd arch is about best friendship, and how not all attraction is sexual. last one is about family friendship or "like family" levels of propinquity.

such things like scores are portrayed above the character's heads. while the characters can't see them, the viewer can and understand how much different actions affect the relationship.

thats it really, besides that the relationships continue outside of the maint narrative. the first couple by the end are both very much in love and can be seen in the background doing shit
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>>160237505
Shit, I'd watch it
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A highschool school girl with white hair named Megumi has the perfect school life. She is super popular and excellent grades. But she has a terrible secret. She is in love with her best friend, who is also a girl! She tries to keep her feelings hidden as to not hurt her friendship or loose her status at school.

But one fateful day while she is walking home, she sees a magic wand that is being chased by a monster! The wand explains to her that she must wield the power inside the want and defeat the monster! Megumi decides to take the want and she begins to transform, but after her transformation she did not get what she was expecting.

Instead of being an adorable magical girl, she was now a 6ft 7" man weighing in about 250lb of pure muscle, and her magic want had turned into a giant chain sword!

Now megumi must use the powers of masculinity and violence to protect the town from evil while balancing her ordinary school life!
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>>160263346
make em black and i'd watch it. i'd buy the Dakimakura
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>>160232353
a show where an incubus who wants to get out of hell and stop being a demon for some resewn and goes through satin's 13 trials he gets visited by succubi and shit
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男の子は女の子と恋に落ちます。

告白することができません、彼は女の子の電話番号にデウスエクスマキナによって才能れます。奇妙なエリアコードを気にすることはありません、彼はすぐに彼女を呼び出し、彼女は同様に彼に片思いを持っていることを見つけるために大喜びされています。

彼は女の子に前日の自白を語るときには、次の日には、彼女は唯一の当惑した表情で彼を見ます。いくつかの調査の後、彼はと呼ばれる少女は、彼が恋に落ちた同じ女の子ではないことを知ります。実際には、彼女がすべてでこの宇宙に存在しません。彼女はあまりにも彼女のクラッシュの穏やか気づかない主人公自身の分身、と恋に落ちた女の子のもうひとつの世界の対応、です。

彼らは彼らが他の自己の心を征服する必要が武器で他を装備するために彼らの最も暗い、最もプライベートな秘密お互いを与えるために取り引きを打つように、多くのことが起こります。彼らはそれぞれの愛する人を追いかけながら、彼らが代わりにお互いに恋に落ちると愛の性質に疑問を始めると、ドラマが続きます。
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>>160263801
This is Keit-Ai isn't it?
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>>160232353
In the beginning, there was only the primal universe and the Wurms. The Wurms were beings of pure Mana who created the galaxies and the planets and stars that filled them with the unlimited power of Mana. Ethereal and eternal, they could not interact physically with the universe, so they created constructs to do their work and gather Mana for its subsistence. Immortal machines called Titans were those constructs and they were incredibly efficient. This did not last however, as after millions of years of exposure to Mana the Titans began to become sentient and rebelled.

Hopelessly outmatched however, they only resistance they could muster was swiftly and brutally put down by the Wurms until only a few Titans remained. In a last ditch effort to survive, they fled to the distant reaches and secretly created their last galaxy, The Milky Way and created the Magicite, crystals that would absorb Mana until nothing remained and placed them around the universe to distract the Wurms until they had completed their task. Lastly, they then sealed themselves of planet Earth and deactivated, awaiting till their time comes.

Flash forward millions of years to where our story begins. Jack Thomson, a 23 year old Australian grad student is working on an archeological dig in Egypt when he hears a plea for help deep within a the ruined city. When he arrives he finds a lost legacy that will being him into conflict with the stars....


Amature hour here but was feeling creative
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>>160262380
I agree with everything you say anon. The world so far is not interesting because I haven't describe a lot about it yet. Just where it is in space time. And also anon, can you give me an example of good dialogue. I can't seem to do it.
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>>160232353
>girl is reborn in a videogame world after the apocalypse that killed her and destroyed her world
>girl is one of those innocent, happy-go-lucky types; doesn't know that she died and that her home no longer exists
>the god of the world - henceforth known as "Kureiji" - is a crazy bastard with a penchant for bullshit
>Kureiji tasks the girl with saving the world from Kureiji and restoring peace alongside her fated partner
>her fated partner is the undead skeleton of a teenage boy who died protecting his sister in a freak accident
>the two are expected to do "traditional" hero shit, like helping random strangers they meet along the way (happy to do), discover mystical treasures (uninterested), and find love together (girl had a lover in her past life and boy is asexual due to no longer possessing flesh, a dick, or whatever else would power his sex drive)
>the two set out on their wacky adventure to figure out how to become successful enough in the world to defeat Kureiji
>tone ranges from light-hearted adventuring shenanigans to sad backstory shit to existential crises
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>>160250421
>Kei-Tai
>beloved meme
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>>160263801
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>>160263801
あなたはそれが存在するため、ということ書き込むのをやめるべきリマインダー。

https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3206139/1/
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>>160263801
一人の少年がとある少女に恋をします。

直接告白することはできず、なんとか彼女の電話番号を手にした彼は、変な電話番号にもあまり気にせず電話をかけるのですが、実は彼女も彼のことが大好きで、両思いだったのです。このことに気づいた彼は大喜びするのでした。

しかし翌日、彼が昨日のことについて話そうとすると彼女は困った顔をします。昨日彼が電話で話した相手は今彼の前にいるその女の子ではなかったのでした。実は、電話機の向こうの彼女はこの宇宙には存在していませんでした。彼女は並行世界の者だったのです。その並行世界では、逆に彼女が彼に片思いをしていたのですが、並行世界の自分は彼女のその思いに気づいていなかったのです。

何だかんだで、電話で知り合った二人はある取り引きをします。自分のもっとも深く、プライベートな秘密を分け合うことで、相手にいわゆる「並行世界の自分の必勝攻略法」を教え合うのです。

その作戦をもってそれぞれ好きな人を追いかけまわる間に、彼らは自分の世界よりも電話機の向こうの相手のことがもっと好きになってしまいます。お話はそういう恋の本質について問いかけます。
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>>160263801
ケイト愛方法を見つける
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>>160263801
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XHfyLv6t5to
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>>160263801
>>160264622
Straight to the important question, have the nips read this?
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>>160265095
Does the nip side even give half of a fuck about 4chan or the other chans?
Fuck you mods
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>cyberpunk setting
>MC is high schooler boy
>parent divorced, lives with mom
>mom dies
>MC want to build custom android for replacement
>join a gang and sell illegal drugs to collect money
>on the run from keisatsu
>finally collect the money
>done building the momdroid
>later the momdroid fucks MC because he use sexbot as base to customize
I have yet to figure out the conclusion.
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Japan opens its borders to first world immigrants.
My self-insert, a fat Mexican from USA gets accepted into Japan.
Fat Mexican is leaving everything behind with no plans for the future.
Meets a dark skin black from Detroit on boat to Japan.
Decide to move in together once they arrive in Japan.
Rent a cheap apartment in some small town by the country.
Both get manual labor jobs since jap millennials mostly work office jobs.
Pay isn't great barely getting by.
Black guy tells me he smuggled in marijuana seeds and wants to start growing them to sell.
Do japs like weed?
Decide to plant them in a forest.

We do well for our first crop and decide to celebrate by smoking some of the product. Little did we know we grew the weed on some ancient spiritual jap site. After the first puff we immediately start seeing shit but play it off thinking we're just tripping.Multiple spirits start popping out one by one, including a group of 4 highschool kids that were murdered. They ask us to help them, but we can't understand them. Hilarity ensues

Yukuza find our stash . A bunch of shit happens with ghosts, gangsters, ganja and all that jizz jazz. Too lazy to flesh out the story.

Fat Mexican gets put down a lot by japs including spirits. He's a big giant fat idiot with a heart of gold

Nigger is seen as dangerous by the japs. Can switch his personalities between a shounen shit weeaboo, Chris Tucker archetype, and the classic dindu nuffin. Yukuza thinks he's a hardcore gangster
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I already used this as my idea for a decent Isekai and I'd like to see what you folks think of it so heres my idea.

>Story stars two MC's I don't have names but we'll call Guy and Roger for the sake of ease

>Story starts on a foggy eve Guy is talking with Roger about hearing voices when he sleeps asking him about "leaving this world behind"

>Roger tells him he is just having nutty dreams and not to worry about it Guy shrugs and leaves heading home for the night but disappears

>Three years after Guy went missing Roger has no idea what happened but reminisces about his missing best friend suddenly he blacks out and wakes up in a fort

>Roger has been called to a weird fantasy world and is asked to pilot a combat robot called a Soruga Frame the reason why is "out worlders" generate higher levels of spiritual power than people of this world who instead produce magic power

>Magic based Soruga's are like basic military hardware while Spirit Soruga's are more akin to super machines

>Roger is tasked with helping the resistance and as he goes town to town he hears the curious story of a soldier from the previous war

>We now start to learn that Guy was summoned three years prior and fought in the big war the episodes now split between Guy's adventure and Rogers

>Guy stories give us a look at the land Guy is fighting for some perspective on the people and he is apart of a cool team of pilots mixed between Natives and out worlders he also gets a plucky mechanic/ witch woman love interest (With fluffy 80's anime hair) we see him struggle with loss the horror of war and grow to be a real hero

>Roger's story focuses on the resistance and the mystery of what happened to guy as well as Roger's own small scale heroics

>Roger must also deal with the authorities of the land trying to quell the resistance including an Ace known only as "The peoples champion"

>The story plays a set up that the champion is actually Guy but here the story can go two ways
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>>160266304
The last few lines are a bit predictable, but I like the overall premise. I like the mecha and how they work with the premise.
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>>160266304
(This is where I really would like some opinions)

>Way one has a build up to the revelation that Guy is the peoples champion, however it's revealed Guy died years ago

>In Guy's own story he is revealed as the Champion but died at the wars end stopping a doomsday Soruga

>We also learn that Guy being the champion was his way of boosting moral by giving the people an "invincible super hero" the idea being the best pilot gets the mask and the color scheme so they can go full El Santo

>The modern Champions are all former Squadmates working together to keep Guy's legacy alive Guy also had a kid with his love interest who reveals he named the kid after Roger

>The resistance also turn out to be butt hurt war losers and ousted nobles who want their cushy power bases back now Roger joins the Champions to quell the evil of the resistance

>After the conflict Roger decides to stay and forge a new life here having seen so much he's found it would be near impossible to return to life in his old world

>The alternate path has Guy alive but retired he has some serious PTSD but mostly lives a quiet life with his love interest and their child

>While still being a better Ace his squad mates hope to keep him out of the resistance fight as he's "Done enough" Roger also decides to work with the people's champions to atone for helping the resistance get as much headway as it has

>Eventually due to the threat getting to much and it threatening his best friend and his family Guy returns to the battlefield one last time and he and Roger finish things together

>Roger decides to go home but asks that if needed they just give him a call, Guy decides to stay but promises to visit with his family one day
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>>160266418
Thanks sorry I ran out of space cause the story has two paths I think I know the one most would enjoy but both have their merits
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>>160266583
I think both options would work well, although I personally prefer option 1. Maybe 2 would be my favourite if Guy and Roger partnered up earlier, but that would probably detract from the story in all honesty.
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Edgy dystopian shounen where the MC is a pussy who gets powers after a traumatic incident, lots of blood and gore for the edgyness and characters are named after philosophical and literature based names and allegories to appear as an "intellectual" show.

Also there is a shy titcow, a tsundere loli, and a sexually aggressive medium sized girl with pigtails.
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>>160266679
Well in option two part of his characterization has Guy's big reason for staying out be a mix of PTSD and his old team telling him "they got this", as such seeing him return to the battle field is supposed to be the "big moment". Also a note I forgot to mention as an Anime Roger's story and Guy's story would likely have different OP songs that would be two halfs of a larger whole
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>>160232353
Anime about Caribbean pirates.
It's not a happy go lucky style adventure show like one piece but more original berserk like dark and gritty tale of thieves, murderers, extortionists, money launderers and rogues on a ship, who kidnap, pillage, ravage and even hijack for money.
Ending is them getting caught and being sent to the gallows.

But, before they get hanged one of them manages to tell their story to prison guard who in his boredom writes some of it down and makes doodles, then years later said guards descendant finds the notes, cleans them up a bit, comes up with tons of shit and writes a book.

Then many years later an anime series is made of their exploits
THEN through some magic a Japanese highschool girl raises the pirates ghosts from the dead.
She is horrified by the fact that the pirates are actually cutthroat rogues who would like to get back to pillaging and raping but are physically incapable of doing that.
They instead start watching anime and like to laugh at the shit they have written on the show about them.
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>>160233516
what's this called
>>160233241
so fairy tale?
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An anime about a cooking competition. The host (guy fieri lookalike) turns out to be an evil villain that travels around to restaurants and brainwashes the cooks to put mindcontrol chips in the food that take control of the people there.
First season is the cooking competition and at the end they find out the host is a villain and Second Season they try to stop him. On the way they rescure towns from bizarre curses and shit, solving murders, exposing corrupt officials, etc. It would be a long runner like DBZ or JoJo but will never end because they can never stop the main villain because he can freeze, erase, rewind, fast forward, and reset time so he's always 10 steps ahead of him. Also lots of references to other anime and western influences.
Also MC a lazy hikkikomori named Rando who learned how to cook from anime. There's also a cute girl who just wants to be a housewife. More major characters are a buff fat dude who loves to cook, a smol loli who possesses a special herb that makes everything taste good (it turns out to be just water), and a fancy schmancy guy with curly hair named Nancy. The other contestants are not that important but they're really bizarre. Main villain is named Guy.
Title is Guy's Bizarre Grocery Games.
Also I wrote this without sleeping for a couple of days.
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A girl falls in a love with a boy.

Unable to confess, she is gifted with a deus ex machina in the form of a new cell phone that allows her track any form of digital communication coming from the one she loves. This leads her to find him in a series of posts in a certain type of thread that pops up on a certain anonymous image board that she could never reach from any other terminal in her universe.

With no way for her to see him in person and the utmost desire to avoid inflicting the same pain she feels from the distance between them, she vows to never ever let him know the truth of her one remaining connection to him. Nevertheless she still longed for dialogue with him and so she participates in the threads he was so very fond of.

Often times she would write up new ideas for him to mull over and enjoy. Some times she would repeat them if he had not shown up to review it. And in her most desperate moments, she would employ the meme born out of those threads in hopes that he would answer it back in the usual fashion he always did. Having discovered the nature of true love and been cursed by its revelation, the girl continues to pursue that little solace their little exchanges bring her.

However, she knows that can only go on for so long. One day, regardless of however far it may stray from its inspiration, the boy will finish recounting their tale and his thoughts for her will end with it. Can she welcome that ending with her own? Or will her feelings for him stay painfully unresolved?
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>>160270722
I heard a plot similar but its with a guy who finds a phone and he can talk to the girl he likes on it but it's in a seperate universe. With no way for him to see her in person they try to help each other fall in love with their counterparts. They end up falling in love with each other. I don't remember the rest
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>>160263801

Always find a way, silly Keit-Ai
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>>160263922
Isn't this just transformers?
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>>160262697
Well written but not interesting at all, because isekai is shit.
Drop isekai shit and write real stuff
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>>160263801
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A middle-ranking Yakuza member enjoys his "job" and often does it with more-than-needed brutal violence.

After finishing what seems to be an exotic (yet not outlandish) job where the MC and his team blew up and looted an European ship, the entire Yakuza leadership and officers were slowly being picked off one by one. The MC is outwardly scared of this mystic force, but deep down is envious of their arts of being silent.

The silent assassinations reached an ending peak when the MC happens to be in the main branch office that the Yakuza's leader happens to be in at the same time, and managed to discover the mystic forces that was killing off the Yakuza all this time: A 4-man mercenary squad donning masks that were hired by a contractor (who happens to own the European cargo ship). However he was a moment too late when the Yakuza's head was shot fatally.

In an ensuing battle where the MC was soon defeated by the 4 man squad, the leader of the squad points a pistol at the MC's head and fires it.

A hole was made in the ground exactly 5 mm away from the MC's head, when the leader decided to communicate with the MC, and tried to "recruit" him, with coercion. Without a central body to lead him as well as reasons to stay in Japan (Yakuza is his life), he reluctantly agrees to join the squad.

When offered a traditional / Oriental mask with the character "Honor" on it as well as Yakuza-centric weaponry, the MC refuses them as he decided that "he was killed in the past".

Donning a black, transparent mask on his face whiling putting a silencer on, the MC looks at the squad leader's face.

"From now on I'm a ghost"

And so begins the MC's journey to being one of the most deadliest mercenary the world has ever seen.
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>>160265041
kek
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a group of girls in all-girls christian school forms an idol group aimed at promoting purity, decency and feminity among school girls, and they are also growing their hair out
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ReI:www (ReverseIsekai:WaifuWorldWar)

>MC1 is leaving a shop in Akiba, happy about the new merchandise of his waifu he just bought. Not realizing the red light, he faces an approaching truck. Slipping on a dropped Takoyaki, he somehow evades the truck but all his new stuff gets crushed instead (including the new scale figure). While watching the new anime episode, his waifu gets killed by a truck. While MC1 is trashing his television, he realizes that his waifu appeared in his room.

>MC2 is a NEET who is currently fighting Japanese cold. He sneezes on his monitor while reading the current chapter of his waifu’s manga. A week later, MC2 somehow survived the cold but his waifu died completely unexpected because of the Japanese cold in the next chapter although she was one of the main characters. In his blind rage he vandalizes the room, when a young girl suddenly stands behind him.
– “I am your waifu?”

>MC3 is a European kid trying to be an otaku. While he is at school, his mother takes the opportunity and trashes all his anime and manga stuff. She uses all the posters and doujin pages to wrap up minced meat in her butchery. MC3, shocked and angry, shuts in his room. While reading the new manga chapter with tears in his eyes, he realizes that his waifu died because of salmonella intoxication. However, next morning his waifu is lying next to him in his bed! When his mother entered the room, she can’t believe what is happening and totally freaks out before getting killed by his waifu with a sword. MC3 panics, takes all the money and flees to Japan with his waifu.
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>>160272889
>Meanwhile MC3’s mother gets isekaied in a popular cooking manga as the new character (foreign, crazy yandere butcher), and slowly becomes best girl and maybe even the new waifu of some guys. When a reader accidently burned one of the pages with her, she gets transported back into the real world and makes the reader her new son.

>All the characters and their waifus get involved in a battle royal like war and have to prevent their waifu becoming shit, because only the best waifu can stay in the real world at the end. But when a guy with multiple waifus appears, they have to overcome their difficulties and fight him together.
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>>160260047
This sounds neat, id read/watch it
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In this story, the cold war ended on much friendlier and agreeable terms between the east and the west, somewhere in the early 80s.
The leaders of the world all come together, sincere in their wish to create a better future for all of humanity.

The only problem is, what are the block powers to do with their secret arsenal of weaponry and surveillance equipment, not to mention the army of spies, terrorists, black ops, courtesans, torturers, and assassins, most trained from a young age to deeply hate the ideological opposition and being extremely distrustful, paranoid and scheming by nature of their job?

The answer is, to not disturb the peace preparations, they are all sent undercover to a small-medium italy/croatia-esque fictional mediterran island with very unclear (some say entirely made up) instructions and the strict order that leaving the island before the end of their (most non-existant) mission is punishable by death. Were they just disposed of here to rot? Is this whole peace project a sham? Is there a much deeper secret to be uncovered?

Focuses on a mix of classic Frederik Forsyth-esque spy techniques with stylish mediterran SoL about a bunch of dangerous and paranoid people, many ideological arch enemies, having to live in close vicinity to each other - as well as the individual coping or deny strategies about their situation.
Featuring MKULTRA, Gladio, the RAF, the japanese red army, all kinds of three letter agencies, various LSD and mind control experiments and a cameo appearance by Carlos the jackal.
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