Write your own plot

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I'll start:

Quallum: Butterfly Threat (蝶の脅威 クアラム)

In the near future, large flying quailed creatures with high-speed abilities approprietly named Quallum (クアラム) invades Earth at midnight as a result of a failed experimentation involving the fusion breeding of threatened butterfly species into female humans whose goal is to save the world from a potential weapon of destruction. The cross-shaped archipelago of Kamdo (四夢島) located in the central part of Pacific Sea situated between the two hemispheres comprises four islands and an titular academy city to the center. Female human students are raised to be superheroines combatting problems that plague society in general such as crime, arson and even enforced disappearances and are equipped with scantily-clad armed suits patterned after rare butterfly species. Aoi Seiten (晴天アオイ), a socially awkward freshman student with below average grades, save an helicopter hosting three pilots from a Quallum, unaware that she actually achieved superhuman skills after a dozen of failed missions. Following her first completed mission, Aoi meet a mysterious transfer student Kurenai Akatsuki (暁クレナイ) that gradually changes her life, and Kiino Hiruhoshi (昼星キイノ), her long forgotten childhood friend. Together they form a team that will gradually gain trust each other and as they befriend the bespectacled Midori Joryoku (常緑ミドリ) and the top-class student Murasaki Yuyami (夕闇ムラサキ), they unite a very difficult plan to investigate the surrounding mysteries of the archipel and faces numerous challenges against the impending Quallum apocalypse.

It will be released in late 2020 to commemorate Summer Olympics held in Tokyo.

>>157605273
The show will contain 12 episodes and will tell a linear plot that will slowly reveal things about Quallum and the girls wearing armors patterned after butterflies. First five episodes focus on the main five characters and around episode six will include a twist midway. The remainder will focus on the origins of Kamdo Island and the Quallum apocalypse is the story's version of the Walpurgis Night.

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The deus ex machina is aliens, so don't have to explain shit.

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Lost World Rhapsody (ロストワールドラプソディー)

200 years ago, several archeologists discovered a lost continent south of Earth in the aftermath of a paranormal phenomena that claimed millions of lives. Since then, haunting spirits that come out of nowhere can corrupt anyone who commits a sin considered as harmful at one point in his/her own life, eventually trapping them through material ways such as mirrors and books. A orphaned young boy named Heins (ハインス), who believes has lost most of his memories, works at a tavern run by a middle-aged man. Unable to remember anything regarding what happened to his past without feeling uneasy, he experiences daydreams everyday while imagining various theories over the memory loss. While going on a errand in downtown, Heins meets a flying spirit who looks like a little girl whom he mistakes her for a ghost. The spirit girl grow very close to the boy and almost always follow after him even when alone, eventually naming her Luna (ルナ). Unbeknownst to the forming of a contract by the spirit girl while coerced to go on a cave, Heins gains access to a sacred relic in the form of a oval hourglass that can act as time clock and travels the past to learn the biggest secret behind humankind's downfall only to find out he is entrapped in several parallel worlds that are essentially alternate versions of the same incident told by deceased different revisionist historians.

The plot's structure will be similar to Jules' Verne novels and it will be episodic in the first half (on the outside at least), however important plot points will be told subtly and it is through a major plot twist in the second half that things gets pubicly revealed to the viewer. Heins' memory loss and origins of Luna and other haunting spirits will are recurring themes in the story throughout. The anime will contain 24 episodes.

In a very far future after humanity has long been mostly exterminated in a old planet where they used to live, a brand new planet has been created to start things from zero while continuing things that are left off in the history of the previous planet. It hosts over hundreds of pocket-sized city-states, or "estates", with varying geographical, cultural and political features, all of which is run by a single leader, commonly known as "The Master" (界の運営者), enjoying immense personality cult whose supposed goal is to promote the new generation of humans through the renewal of natural breeding of living beings and material beings such as robots, cyborg and drones acts as guards to stabilize the whole planet. Amongst one of these is a seemingly rich estate known as Excessus (エグゼクザス): its unrealistic levels of political power favors everything that's right within the world. However because it possess such an heavenly aura that people of the estate visit for its utopian environment in contrast to their poorer places of residence, it's actually just a misleading ploy for the Master to use its own beliefs for the darkest of intentions. Excessus, like most estates of the new planet, are treated as client states for the Master and is run by a corrupt family loyal to the Master. Mashiro (真白), born to a family that lives below the poverty line, has already learned the truth behind Excessus that surrounds him at the age of 6. He leads a small secret vigilante organization that steals the assets of the rich and gives to the poor. Because Mashiro is severely despised as a human being, he wants to create a classless and stateless paradise where everyone and everything are equal and seeks to avenge the Master as he embarks on a long journey uncovering the truth of the world beyond Excessus.

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>>157605615
Pic related is what I envisioned the plot. The series will be split-cour with 12 episodes each, with the first half focusing on Mashiro's story and the latter half focusing on the Master's story. The anime is summarized as cyberpunk Robin the Hood meet 1984 with a touch of Blade Runner. Mashiro will ride a flying motorcycle to travel the world along with his vigilante group.

>>157605683
The title of the anime is 90°W. The first half will be subtitled -pure white hood- while the second half will be subtitled as -pitch black meister-.

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>>157605238
On the 29th Day of the 1260th Revolutionary Year, the world came to an end. From beneath the ground awakened the entity known only as the Root of Evil which traveled to the surface to plunge the world into ruin before returning from which it came.

The places from where the Root of Evil emerged is known as a Dungeon, deep underground paths filled with treasures of lost civilizations that became the Revolutionary Year that the Root of Evil has destroyed. Within the tunnels of the dungeons lies the Children of the Root, monsters which stalks its passages way and parts of the surface.

After the Root of Evil's emerged the world changed. Magic returned in the form known as an Emblem which granted certain people supernatural powers who became known as Emblem Carriers, and its presence of Magic altered the appearance of some people to be different from others, becoming dubbed Abnormals.

Wars erupted over the power of the Emblem Carriers, the conflict became dubbed the Emblem War and from it emerged 5 Emblem Carriers dubbed Kings who all except 1 crafted the new powers in the world: United Kingdoms of Allance, Brunherd Confederacy, Valdisian Empire, and Northern Isles.

Our story begins in a new era, the 15th Emblem Year following the daily life of an Emblem Carrier in service to their state as they work in the Military Police which holds the job of investigating the allegations of corrupt officers in the military and the actions of rogue Emblem Carriers which leads them to a conspiracy involving the return of the Root of Evil to the surface and one of the Kings who didn't craft a state in the recovering world...

>>157605238
Holy shit all these posts yet no Keit-Ai

>>157605931
A boy falls in love with a girl.
Unable to confess, he is gifted with by a deus ex machina with the girl’s phone number. Never minding the strange area code, he immediately calls her, and is overjoyed to find out that she has a crush on him as well.
But, the next day, when he recounts the previous day’s confessions to the girl, she only looks at him with a perplexed expression. After some investigation, he finds out that the girl he called is not the same girl he fell in love with. In fact, she doesn’t exist in this universe at all. She is the girl’s alternate universe counterpart, who has fallen in love with the MC’s own AU self, who too is blissfully unaware of her crush.
Hijinks ensue as the two strike up a deal to give each other their darkest, most private secrets in order to equip the other with the weapons they need to conquer the heart of their other selves. While the two chase their respective loved ones, DRAMA ensues as they begin to fall in love with each other instead and question the NATURE of LOVE.

>>157605931
Your thoughts on these following posts?
>>157605273
>>157605480
>>157605683

>>157605994
didnt read them lol

Hospitals around Japan is suddenly crowded with mental ward patients consisting of young girls. They had suffered what is to be known as "mind break"

The public reaction to this forces the animal looking alien "mascots" to start diplomatic ties with the government about magical girls and the monsters they fight everyday. Soon researchers around the world become curious about the mental breakdown of these girls, with a peculiar symptom of sexual addiction. They begin to work on a possible solution to rehabilitate these girls, while the military starts doing psycho tests to weed out girls who are prone to mind break.

Over the years the researchers manage to categorize the symptoms with physical attributes such as "heart shaped pupils" and "crotch tattoo" as the source of the mind break. After a lot of testing a method is developed to mitigate the effects with drugs and cosmetic surgery to enable magical girl veterans to return to normal life.

>>157606644
I want to be a doctor when I grow up

>>157605332
FINDS

>>157605332
あなたはそれが存在するため、ということ書き込むのをやめるべきリマインダー。

https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3206139/1/

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>>157605332

It's 2002 and HikkiNEET Joe Tanaka is a veteran player of ForeverQuest, a super-popular MMORPG. Even though in real life he's a total loser, in the game he's well-liked and respected, and he even has a girlfriend... or so he thinks. His internet girlfriend steals his account one day, robbing him of his gear, ruining his reputation (by releasing cybersex chatlogs and nudes), and finally deleting his characters before revealing herself to be the (male) leader of a rival guild.

Joe begins a brand new account to seek revenge on those who wronged him and has new adventures in ForeverQuest along the way.

No sucked into the game bullshit and players would be shown only very rarely. Joe is a fat loser irl.

>>157610024
>It's 2002 and HikkiNEET Joe Tanaka is a veteran player of ForeverQuest, a super-popular MMORPG.
Sounds weird in term of setting: looks like a blend of modern retro (just for the year the story takes place) with modern pseudo isekai RPG premise.

A young man's daughter dies, unable to cope with her lost he receives an email asking him if he would like to bring her back from the dead.

Accepting this email the man finds himself in a place known as the River of Styx , a place of sword/sorcery/modern technology which is owned and operated by a man known as the Ferryman who has invited other people like him that have lost loved ones.

Their only goal is to descend deeper and deeper into the dungeon world in order to reach the bottom, Tartarus where they can have their wish granted. Within the halls of the Dungeon are the souls of many other fighters and monsters owned by the Ferryman. Any person who dies in the River of Styx doesn't die for real, but loses their memories starting with them self then the memories of the person most precious too them until they become a mindless somebody fighting for nothing in the halls.

As the MC descends deeper into Styx he begins to learn about other people and their losts. He also rescues other people and help cope them with their loss as he kills his way down to revive his daughteru Who becomes the incarnation of Death/Final Boss as the River of Styx was set up as a way to help humans move on in life by making them forget about their loss via mind wipe or moving on on their own decision

The standard for FTL in galactic civilization is the contrivance engine, which exploits the improbability field generated by unremarkable teenage protagonists that makes plot happen to them in order to warp spacetime. Earth is a corporate farm for these, they're collected and sold to ships who stage adventures and drama for them while conducting otherwise conventional business, until they complete their character arc, they grow as people and are used up as power sources, and are thrown out.
MC was one of these. He's hitchhiking from the backwaters of space back to Earth while putting together his plan to attack the company that mass-produces and is entirely staffed by the girl he was tricked into loving to power a starship.

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>>157605238
Show is an isekai about a vegan being sent into the future, where humanity has expanded into the stars in order to aliens. Along with his allies which would be animal and human fusions which escaped their fate of being food, they must fight the evil Human Dietary Empire.

>>157605332
ALWAYS

>>157605238


I had an idea for a netori-themed genre deconstruction. A guy (kendo team captain, or some other atheletic alpha-male type) is dating a girl who turns out to be a magical girl.

Unfortunately, she's crippled while battling monsters. Deliciously so, which means her legs don't work, but she's still pretty. As magical girls need to meet a certain quota to live (Like PMM or Raising) she grants the guy her powers, making him a magical knight, so he can make up her quota.

Unfortunately, other magical girls start getting interested in him. Since, you know, he's was already pretty badass before he was magically empowered. Increasingly, it becomes more and more tempting to kick the cripple to the curb.

Except all the power comes from her, and she can revoke her boon at any time. Drama, and much lying, ensures. Lots of heartbreak, backstabbing, and people fucking each other.

>>157614240

Does he sleep with any of the other girls?

>>157614337

Two, and it ruins everything forever. First half is buildup, second half is fallout.

Cute girls go to space and show their panties to the MC who unintentionally rejects them because he's a beta. Also the unique thing is that space niggers try to start a black lives matter movement by ruining the girls attempts to flirt with the MC

MCs dog gets hit by a truck and is reencarnated as a 12 year old human girl.

She then has to readjust to life as a human and her feeling forwards her master.

>>157605238
The Galiance Empire, a world power that has risen after the fall of many civilizations of yore wielding the power of the Lost Magic given to them by the Ancient Dragons. Following the victory over the Duchy of Lancia, the Emperor and Empress have perished from an unfortunate illness and the children of the Emperor have gone missing. With no formal heir to the throne, the Emperor's brother Anz, a loyal general who was choosen to continue the rule of the Emperor.

Fearing abuse of authority and increase in the power of the military and Anz not being a bearer of Lost Magic, the Nobles of the Grand Court outed General Anz in support of Duke Verdin, a great diplomat whose cunning words and mind help negotiate the end of the Galiance-Lancia War and recruited many other states to expand the empire, but he is favors the old system of nobility and royal blood. Angry the military started a rebellion against the ruling nobles splitting the country into two: General Anz who represents the military and new rising class of people and Duke Verdin who represents the nobility and old style of life beginning the Galiance Lost War...

The MC is a foreigner who wakes up on the shores of Galiance and is drafted into the war on the side of General Anz after being found by mercenaries working for him and learns the trade of the blade and the cost of war.

A classic fantasy war story.

>>157614830
Actually she was never a dog at she's just a girl that's obsessed with the MC and doesn't want him to feel sad that his dog has died

Japan opens its borders and let's in laborers from 1st world countries only. Knowing this Paco, a major weeaboo, packs his bags and moves to Japan at the age of 19. Paco was always a loser in the USA and thought Japan would be different , he'd finally be able to flourish. He was wrong. Paco was a Mexican-American, he faced racism immediately and was shunned by the Japanese. Paco did not care at first and found a job as a janitor at a game development company. He spent his days reading and learning Japanese and his nights working his job. His efforts change nothing and he is constantly being treated like dirt. He becomes depressed as he realizes he has no home too go back to in USA and Japan does not feel like a home. He regrets his decision everyday, slowly becoming more and more depressed. That is until he meets rin shibuya.

I don't know where I was going with this

>>157616475
>That is until he meets rin shibuya.
Did not see this one coming. Thought you were going for N.H.K ni youkusou except without the beautiful girl knocking at the door (and not saving pedro in the end).

>>157610157
1999 is when EverQuest came out so it's during the era before MMORPGs really used voice chat and where the time investment was large enough that losing an account might drive some autists to suicide or homicide or some kinda cide.

help me name this
>the american bill of rights as represented by a group of magical girls,they fight monster laws and people that endanger american freedom and burgers.
thier personas are similar to the laws they represent
I. Foul-mouthed, yankee girl constantly challenging authority
II. /k/ tier gun-nut who thinks more firepower is the answer to any problem
III. Soft-spoken healing type who doesn't like violence
IV. Hikkineet conspiracy theorist who just wants to be left alone to her imageboards
V. Honorable, chivalrous knight-type who takes her code very seriously
VI. Speedster scouting type who enjoys keeping an eye on everything
VII. Ojou who views the world entirely based on money
VIII. Two-faced sadist who puts on a kind and caring outward face while secretly enjoy the torment of others
IX. Caring onee-san who believes protecting others is the most important thing in the world
X. Very average, everyday high school girl still just getting used to her magical girl powers

Together, they manifest the American destiny
Their adventures involves:
>Smuggling and helping counter-revolutionaries/contras and religious right extremist
>Waging proxy war on asian country through agents and religious fanatic pawns
>Waging secret cold war against China and Russia by spreading hate, false accusations, and sinophobe/russophobe
>NSA robots trying to take lewd pictures of them at the beach
>D.A.R.P.A spending on white elephants
Their enemies include:
>Chinese magical girl that copies herself powered by collectivism and the spirit of state capitalism
>gun controll bill is an actuial troll summoned to grab guns
>civil fortfechure & budget gremlins stealing money
>Domestic spying see nsa robots
>antifa stand user powering hate speech law with human sacrifices
>ATF dogmen shooting people randomly

>>157605238

Monster girls are invading our world in massive numbers, bringing only chaos. Vigilante groups styled after Crusaders and fantasy paladins and clerics form due to lack of government response, seeking to purge the monster girls from the world in reprisal.

Our MC is a young man was preshred by a friend to join his local group known as the World Guard 404. Despite his outward appearance as loyal, skilled guardsman, his secret is that he feels that he was responsible for the friends death.


However a female paladin who has been tasked with hunting down traitors has already proposed marrage to the MC. He is also under threat from a magical ogre queen who was exiled to this new world. The pages of the ogre queen's spellbook have been scattered, leaving her weakened. She vows collect the magic pages and recruit local monsters to restore her kingdom.

due to hyjinks both have moved the apartmints on eitherside of him and wage gurillia warfare agianst eachother.

>>157605238
unamed DIYkes show

Our MC is a girl who has no interest in making friends in her new class. She is very rude, narcissistic, and also flat-chested. As a result, she often ends up breaking people's cherished possessions.

She stores damaged objects all throughout her home. These pieces of damaged furniture and other items scare her, emitting a strange aura due to their damages. She can see this aura due to the teachings of of her grandparents. They taught her that each piece of furniture and houseware should be respected.
One day the spirits guide her to an old magazine that features her grandparenents repair shop,now she desires to repair these items to honor her grandparents. she has no skills or tools.

then, she hears a loud hammering and the whirring of power tools coming from her neighbor's backyard. When she goes to look, she sees her classmates cutting wood and building furniture. Inspired by their skills (and big boobs) she asks the other girls if they could give her guidance in the art of furniture repair.

Every day she learns the ins and outs of DIY construction and repair, and uses these skills to restore her possessions, healing the objects' auras, and as her skills grow so too does her chest.

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>>157618053
>preshred
>hyjinks
>apartmints
>gurilla
>agianst

>>157618202
WHY DOES HER CHEST GROW
STOP THAT

>>157605238

Year 2040 is just the same as 2020. Science has stagnated except for the fact that people can travel out into space now. Humanity started building colonies orbiting the Earth or the Moon and even on Mars but the days pass by just as they did before.

40 year old Kamina just lost his job when his company closed down after the CEO died. Worrying about his bills, debt and pension, he started looking for work but with no success. While fooling around a certain western image board the other day, he came across a thread that asks to write anime plots. Suddenly inspired to write his own, Kamiya drew a tale of an exiled princess with blonde hair and red and brown eyes who came to a country ruled by a tyrant and, after a series of events, was able to bring liberty to its people. The post got thousands of replies telling how good his work was.

6 months later, while on board a supply ship to Mars on a supply run job, space terrorists attacked and the ship was destroyed. Only he was able to escape among the crew by escaping to an escape pod. But as luck would have it, the pirates captured his pod and, in their ship, sent him to the brig. After hours of waiting he got bored and tried to think how his life ended like that. Then he suddenly remembered the story he wrote.

After hours of waiting he was taken to meet the captain and was struck with disbelief. A young girl with blonde hair like wheat in summer. One ruby red eye, the other a very hazel brown. She stretched out her hand and welcomed him.

"Welcome to Mars Freedom Corps."

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>>157618656
>40 year old Kamina just lost his job when his company closed down after the CEO died. Worrying about his bills, debt and pension, he started looking for work but with no success.

>Kamiya drew a tale of an exiled princess with blonde hair and red and brown eyes who came to a country ruled by a tyrant and, after a series of events, was able to bring liberty to its people. The post got thousands of replies telling how good his work was.
>he was taken to meet the captain and was struck with disbelief. A young girl with blonde hair like wheat in summer. One ruby red eye, the other a very hazel brown. She stretched out her hand and welcomed him

Was there any need to digress on just how much shit Kamina-san was wading through in the synopsis for Kamiya-kun's fantastical adventures

>>157618202
>as her skills grow so too does her chest.
Milk is the only solution. Either way fantasy elements needs to be introduced so that her breasts growing would be such a plot device.

Hiroyuki is the very definition of a NEET that spends time immersing himself with the anime, manga and game culture. One day as he buys a bunch of goods and foods in preparation of watching a new anime that will air soon, he get involved in a traffic collision. As he is resurrected in an alternate fantasy world, he watches humanity being driven by fear as they are continuously threatened by monstrous creatures from yet another parallel world, which is the reason why they live in sheltered cities. As Hiroyuki enters the capital at the indirect request of a guild, he gets enrolled in a magic school that is scattered with uniform-clad students from various races typical of high fantasy genre. While using his own knowledge and wit of solving the humanity problems' as a magician-in-training, the chief director of the school announces a very important announcement that he is chosen to defeat the Demon King through hard work and dignity in addition to the world saving scenario.

>>157619145
Yes.
Because these will be plot points for some very cliche events later on.

Oh and by the way, this is comedy.

>>157619517
>a completely unrelated dude will somehow make for cliche events later on
>Kamina
>Kamiya
Is this comedy too?

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>>157619670
typo

>>157617992
Starstripe Girls. Sequel is Starstripe Girls Forever.

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Mobile Suit Gundam White Wolf

300 years ago near the end of the Sol Age where the various human factions united after years of constant wars, humanity managed for the first time go beyond the boundaries of the Solar System and discover new worlds. The Celestial Age began and the Terran Federation came into being, resulting in a new era of peace, prosperity and progress.

However, with time, the Federation grew more and more corrupt. This resulted in heavy taxation and oppression of the colonies furthest on the edges of Federation space. Thus 300 years since humans traveled beyond their home system, war has come back and the War of Stars begun. The colonies tried to fight the Federation and their Mobile Suits, yet they could barely fight them...that was until an unexpected turn of events occurred.

The Deaths-Head Legion, once the most loyal, brutal and battle-lusting soldiers of the Federation, turned against it and fought on behalf of the colonies after witnessing how rotten and atrocious it became. The Deaths-Head soldiers cut bloody swathes of Federation forces, yet ultimately perished due to attrition and traitors in their midst. Their sacrifice however, gave the colonies the time to develop their own weapons and win their independence, forming thus a unified front and dividing the Terran Federation into the Inner Sphere Federation and Outer Sphere Alliance.

30 years passed since the end of the war. Ragnarr Radulf is a simple farmer living with his adopted son Rand and daughter Alf on the colony of Silf. The three simply want to live a quiet life, yet their peace is shattered when the colony is attacked by an unknown force. Little did anyone know that Ragnarr is in fact not human, but a gynoid who is a extension of a machine that was one of the Mobile Suits of the Deaths-Head Legion's Honor Guard. The legendary Gundam White Wolf. And this sentient Mobile Suit will fight so that he and his family can live peacefully.

>>157605238
Basic premise: The Protagonist wants to go to mech school however due to "health reasons" he is determined unfit to pilot the schools and latter on the military's mechs and such his application is denied. But instead of giving up or waiting around for a super special awesome mech to be handed to him on a silver platter, he gets to work. If he can't get in the normal, he'll just build a way in by designing a mech that he will be able to pilot yet be capable enough to go toe to toe with the schools models.

Further Detail
>Why he wants to go to mecha school so badly
Could be a variety of reasons but the main one I'm thinking of is his parents (diseased) where in the military and he somewhat feels like he's completely letting them down if he can't even make an attempt to follow in their footsteps.

>what are the "health reasons"
The mechs in this universe require a huge amount of physical effort to be able to use due to the amount of power needed, so it could come down to MC is just a weak kid who can't build the much muscle or could be some issue with a weak internal organ such as the heart or lungs (tempted to say because of asthma but that would be really retarded). Which brings up the main issue our protagonist is trying to solve: How to build a mech able to match or even exceed the power output of the current models yet be less taxing on the pilots body.

>>157622921
I...kinda remember this post from years ago.

Nice one to boot.

>>157622921
You could just say that mechs in the lore have ridiculous acceleration and only modified pilots can handle them, but the protagonist due to health reason was unable to handle the treatment needed. Or mechs for proper control require sort of brain implant and the MC has no luck again so he has to use manual controls/older mechs.

The Elves left their magic behind and embraced the machines the humans made.
The Orcs left their brutish ways behind and embraced progress, democracy, civilised society.
The dwarves, tirelessly working together with the bright minds of the humans for the ever-advancing technologies and ever-demanding society.
A harmony of the races.
Untill it's all drowned in nuclear fire.
Several years after the war that destroyed civilisation, the elves are returning to their old ways of magic, the orcs to their old brutish ways of tribalism, slavery and rule of might, and the dwarves secluding themselves in their mountains. All the while, the humans are too busy fighting amongst themselves over the few scraps of civilisation left.
Enter our MC, an infamous scavenger and mercenary. Wether it's elven magic artifacts, old technology or just something rare you're looking for, he's the man for job.

>>157622096
Why are you saying Ragnarr is a gynoid but also saying that Rand is "his" son. Don't gynoids have a female appearance? I think it'd be more interesting if it was a female anyway.

>>157605238
STOP TRYING STEAL IDEAS

>>157624647
Fuck. Thought gynoid is simply a term for very realistic android.

My mistake. Need to change it.