Took me a while, but I finally finished typesetting chapter 22
feel free to point out my mistakes or things you think would look better
For part of this chapter Nanachi uses a radio transmitter type thing to communicate with Reg
I used CreatorCredits as the font
Not so sure if I love it, but I don't have any ideas for alternatives so that's something I'd like suggestions on
page 8 again since I made a small change
Check the archive
I have no idea how this happened, but it looks normal once you expand it
thought you said upload for a second there
yeah once I finish polishing this off the mega will be updated
he's just grunting from getting hit
those are all i's by the way
maybe I should just make the first one lowercase?
ohh I see what you're saying now
Would you just put in an "ooohhh" or "owwww"?
That makes more sense
to be honest I feel like it doesn't really have as much impact as I wanted it to
I don't know if just making the last two bubbles bigger would help, but let me know what you think I should do
Yeah the translation is kinda weird for this part, but if you look at the next page see what he does
he looks straight up and then jumps in a different direction when nanachi says to
I guess the Abyss creatures kind of sense an "intent" to do something, which is why he had put look up with all he had in order to fool Tama-chan
Why can't you guys just upload it to a mangawebsite so everyone can read it ?
So from this chapter, I understand how the "curse" triggers, but does it explain why the danger increase as you go deeper ? Is it simply just because it's thicker down there.
In the end there's still many stuff unexplained huh.
Yeah, but that's part of the mystery of it all
The first thing that came into my head when they described the curse was like people in submarines having to depressurize or whatever when they come back to the surface
doesn't seem like there is a way to do that here though
>"The Tamaugachi don't predict your next move. It knows."
Either "don't" should be changed to "doesn't" if it is that single Tamaugachi being mentioned, or "It knows" should be changed to "They know" to refer to the Tamaugachi species as a whole.
>"The stronger the force field, the stronger and stronger it also becomes."
You probably only need one stronger in the second part of that sentence: "The stronger the force field, the stronger it also becomes."
Thanks for your hard work anon. Some of the problems I noticed are things like periods and capitalization so just watch out for those. I have already posted all my QC in this thread.