Made in Abyss 17 (En_QC)

>>156378662
The text in the first bubble is a bit low

>>156378662
Thank you!

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>>156378662

>>156378789
Ok I'll correct the stuff as post

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>>156378890
On this one i'm not to sure about the Uwaaa bit if I should keep it or change it to something else

If you want to help us typeset and edit the chapters that have been translated, come to this discord:

https://discord.gg/ngwwUYx

>>156378890
>scince light from the
>protect that brat(Riko)
use either brat or riko
I would say use brat
it's pretty obvious she's talking about Riko here

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>>156378955

>>156378983
I like brat better so i'll stick with that

>>156378955
Use the healing brush tool to clear some of that white space around the "- Day 3 -"
I don't really have a good alternative, but it looks kinda weird too split up the "chan" in "Riko-chan"
>ri...Riko...
I would capitalize the first R too

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>>156379044


>>156379066
Oh I didn't even notice the white space.

>>156379044
>Ok ok...
text is a bit high
>We'll use this
Text looks a bit low
>What's this...?
text looks a bit high
>pig poop and tree barks
wouldn't it just be bark?
also the text looks a tad low
>y-yeah,
more the text a bit to the right
center it within the smaller part of the bubble

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>>156379200
I seem to have a lot of issues with positioning

>>156379201
In the Trans it said barks so I assume it was a plural thing

>>156378955
>Riko-chan's got good instincts."
>"However, her body can't keep up with her plans

You miss a line here.

Guys, I guess this is obvious, but do not post wip stuff to other sites. The chapters will be released when they're ready. Please have some patience. You have the Mega, a discord with a compilation of the links to the translated chapters, "mia toc" to search for in the archives, etc.
Somebody (probably a bot) has already uploaded unfinished chapters on Madokami, and it got it from the unfinished chapters that were posted on Batoto.

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>>156379362
Sorry this is going slow

>>156379603
No problem, anon. Take your time.

>>156379603
>"Well, it's mainly a problem for us(White Whistles) who tend to love living down below."
"Well, only weirdos (物好き) like white whistles would live down below.
>>155752668

>>156379200
>it feels like
raise it up a bit
>actully
>I immediately cried...
don't leave the I on it's own line
>behind the observation base
see if you can get the ellipsis on the same line as the black
>and master returned
same as the last bubble
It's probably better not to put those on it's own line if you can help it
>depressed when Riko
I kinda like what you did with the other parts of this bubble, but I'm not an expert
The last part of it looks kind of weird though
I'm not sure how I would split that up

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Might I suggest brightening the pages a little?
Feel free to ignore me if other anons think it's okay, but I think it makes the panels look clearer when it's closer to the brightness of the raw pages.

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>>156379603

>>156379692
I just darkened it seemed like it needed it but if there to dark I can change them back

>>156379362
>exhales
don't do this
I know that's what the translator said, but just saying "haa" or "hafuu" would be better
use a font like augie and maybe rotate it slightly
>fumu
move it to the left
>reparations
I'm pretty sure TLanon used the wrong word here
Repairs would probably be better, but I don't know japanese
>that pattern
I put a stroke on the text even if it is just close to the edge of the bubble
I think it looks a bit better

>>156379603
You were going kinda well, but what happened with this page's line breaks?
Remove the brackets from the first bubble. Fix the line breaks from panels 4, 6 and 7. Make the text more compact and not so... spaghetti.
The same thing goes for the first panel from this page >>156379836

>>156379901
Repair would be the right word.

>>156379692
I prefer the right one as well, the left one lose too much details in the darkened areas.

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>>156379836

>>156379901
Oh yeah, I think I copy/paste a lot of this.

>>156379836
Remove the brackets from "Sea of corpses" and don't use that font. Use blah blah instead. Ds marker is really bad at low heights but very good for titles and big text.

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>>156380017

>>156380017
I read in a guide that you should never just copy and paste
I forget which one it was, but you are pretty much always better off just typing it out yourself

>>156380239
>>156380017
That's bullshit, but the reasons behind it are not. You should copy paste and you should use text boxes, but you should also check what you've pasted and add line breaks manually for proper text shape and fluidity.

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>>156380231

>>156380239
Yeah, I read that as well I just read later than sooner.

>>156380355
The you put a space between the l and a of layers and they ended up not being on the same line

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>>156380355

>>156380614
We should chose one of the name,s not both of them. Either Blaze Rip or No Man's Land, like we have with Aubade and the other thing from the latest chapters.. What do you guys think?

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>>156380614
These captchas are retarded

>>156380614
>No Man's Land (無人)
It's a typo made by Japanese editor.
Should be Everlasting Hammer instead.(無盡)

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>>156380692

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>>156380747

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>>156380805

>>156380017
>Srajo/Sarajo
Should it be one or the other?

>>156380859
>"I don't know how I'll react"
This part is a mistranslation.
"I wish you can just say"It's impossible after all"
and come back here" should be break into two bubbles.

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>>156380859
>>156380736
Should I just stick with Blaz Rip or continue using (something)[Name]

>>156380614
>here
center that
I mentioned the way I make sure everything is centered in the discord
try that on your pages

>>156380747
>However
>isn't it
>cold of
>Ozen
try to line it up like this
>uinlike
>I've sent off
>Many people
>But today
>Is the
don't capitalize across different bubbles if it's the same sentence
also
>and come back here"
there is an extra "

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>>156381038

>>156381006
So should I remove the "I don't know" part and replace it with the split " I wish you can" bit?

>>156381139
Oh wow that was my bad I think it moved when I messed with the page itself

>>156381038
>I
>can
>do
try and get these onto the same line
at least the I can

>>156381038
also
>it if
>I
>didn't
I think having one letter words like that generally looks pretty bad

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>>156381293
Ignore the numbers there special

>>156381038
>How terrible
The typeset anon from past few chapters uses "irredeemable" for 度し難い,
perhaps it would be better if we can stick with it.

As for the terms I think having both of them would be better as object to completely removing them,
maybe you guys can do it in a less awkward way?

This author have some Chuuni naming for most of the weapon.

>>156381359
Remove the brackets
and make the font size a bit bigger

>>156381038
You should pick a name and stick with it. We're talking about it in the discord.

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>>156381359

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>>156381500
I'll post the spread after this for anyone that wants it

>>156381556
You should first join the spread and then typeset things. It'll make some stuff easier. Or maybe not.

>>156381556
Image was too big so here
http://i.imgur.com/VRAk77k.jpg

>>156381769
Well, that's it so I'll get to correcting if anyone else has any input I'll have this thread up till it 404's and then some so have at it.

>>156381556
>"cobs underneath the meat
close the quote

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>>156381038
Just put the other name in a smaller text font on the side,
like what they did in the raw.

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>>156382529
Something like this?

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Why is Riko so obsessed with Reg's penis? Why does Pruska know what Bondrewd's looks like?

>>156382767
I don't like the look of that
if anything it would probably look fine if you just said "The Everlasting Blaze Rip" all in the bold at once, but just call it "Blaze Rip" from then on

>>156382880
She's not obsessed, it's just scientific curiosity coupled with thinly veiled pubescent urges

As for Prusha, well there are two theories.
a) She saw him nekkid in an innocent context, like bathing or some shit
b) Bondrewd's idea of "family love" involves some twisted shit

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>>156382767
It should be the other way around.
The ever lasting hammer is the name and blaze rip is the pronunciation.

>>156382902
If this is how the author present it then we shouldn't change it.

Not to mention that the author give two names to most of the terms.

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>>156382880
Everyone is obsessed with Reg's penis.

>>156382767
Also It may look better if you put it on top instead of the side.

>>156383039
>Regu8.png

Anon, that might be unhealthy.

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>>156383092
What's wrong with giving your images simple and organized filenames?

>>156383266
Nothing, unless all these pics are of Reg in some lewd context, which I bet they are. How terrible!

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>>156383369
Do you take me for some degenerate?

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>>156383025
It's because the characters are supposed to be read a certain way
It's not an alternate name
It's name is Blaze Rip, but written with the characters for Everlasting Hammer
Like this logo
The character isn't usually read as "fuuka" but that's how it's pronounced here

>>156383438
Yes, after all, we do have someone in the threads that constantly shitposts about Reg's supposedly phimotic dick.

>>156383500
That sounds like Riko found her way onto /a/

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I'm nearly done with chapter 18
I'm finishing up the last few pages now, but I'll start posting for QC

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>>156383470
No it's different.
風夏 can still be read as Fuuka under different Kanji pronunciation.

In this case, the author give the terms a Kanji name, then come up with a complete different English name as it's pronunciation.
E.g. 枢機へ還す光 (Sparagmos)

If Blaze Rip is suppose to be the only name then the author wouldn't write both names whenever it shown up.

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>>156384325
13 is one of the two left to do, so I'm skipping it for now

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>>156383619
>>156383619
I for one am truly glad to have a heroine so incredibly passionate about her shota husbando's smooth, hairless phimotic cock. She's got her priorities straight.

>>156384119
>"You can use it if Riko's about to get killed, though."
You can use it if you want to get Riko killed
>"If the situation haven't necessitated using it, thoroughly attempt all reasonable plans you can think of."
"But if the situation comes down to it,
Don't hesitate to use it throughly."

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>>156384423

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>>156384440
Ah
thanks I missed that

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>>156384440
fixed

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>>156384589
18 and 19 are gonna be done in a few minutes
the last page is 20

>>156378662
Until has two lls there (first bubble).

Are these going to be put in to the Mega?

>>156384898
When they are finished yes
you can probably expect that they'll both be in there at some point tonight or tomorrow

>>156379200
>Behind the Observation Base was pitch black
This soudns weird, is something missing there?
The bubble after that has a typo, "guding".

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>>156384736
19

>>156384560
"You can use it if you want to get Riko killed, though"

Forgot the though here.

>>156385171
oops
thanks

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>>156385211
>>156385171

>>156385120
>"I don't mind too much thanks to the water, but..."
Thanks to it we don't need to worry about the water source, but...
>>155789899

Also you skipped page 18.

>>156385330 see >>156384560

>>156379836
Wonder if there are any White Whistles below the fifth layer who just don't want to return anymore.
Depending on how slow time is down there they could be 100 (surface) years old.

>>156385353
Wasn't that page 8?

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>>156385330
I know I skipped 18
I'm finishing it up right now, and then the last page I have to do is 13

>>156383841
Make the title a bit bigger. Center the text in the second bubble. It's too high right now.

>>156383912
>Alright
Use "All right." and write it in two lines. That will allow you to keep the text inside the bubble.

>>156384224
>Natto
Natt.
>Alright!!!
All right!!! (and write it in two lines)

>>156384493
Write "The smell" on two lines and center the text better. It needs to be a bit to the right and then down.

>>156385248
>hesitate to
>use it
Split it like this:
hesitate
to use it

Write "killed, though." in two separate lines.

>>156384589
Try to hyphenate "hatches". Maybe it'll take less horizontal space and you'll be able to center it better in the bubble.

>>156385470
Put the punctuation in the first bubble in its own line.
Write "The umbrella" in two separate lines.

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>>156384461
You forgot this.

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>>156382880

>>156380614
>spilled many blood
Much blood.

>>156382902
If you do it like this nobody will remember that it is also called the Everlasting hammer.

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>>156385785
I don't that little bit got translated
unless I'm misreading the TL or something
anyway here's 18
I was having some trouble splitting up the last bubble, so if anyone has a suggestion let me know

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>>156385518

>>156385973
I don't think is what I meant to type

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>>156385518
here is page 3

>>156385973
>So these are supposed to look like tablewares
That's what Reg says in that panel. Look at >>155788372 it even has the ellipsis.

>>156385973
panel 3
>What is
>it?
Split it like this: What / is it?

Try to hyphenate creature and see if you can center it better.

White whistle should not be capitalized. Also put the punctuation in its own line for that bubble.

>>156386425
oops
so I did misread it
I thought that line was a little weird

page 13

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>>156386800

>>156386845
Hyphenate scenery.

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>>156385518
page 16

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>>156385518
page 8

>>156385518
page 17

>>156383874
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>>156387451
meant to attach

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>>156387404
also meant to attach

>>156387519
What happened to the text under "third layer"?

>>156387563
That's not how "hatches" is hyphenated, but I'm ok with it.

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>>156385518

https://www.reddit.com/r/manga/comments/677nfb/disc_made_in_abyss_chapters_5_16/
try to not post on reddit or other places please

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>>156387701
how would you have done it
it's no problem for me to change it again
also I have no idea where the text went in page 2 that's weird as hell

>>156387746
The only places I care about are Batoto and Madokami tbqh senpai

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>>156387870
I just don't want reddit getting the "incomplete" versions and then circlejerking that its a shit series and make shitty forced memes out of it, because thats all they know how to do over there.

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last page I think
I'll zip them up to put on the mega now
let me know if you see any other problems though

>>156387969
>It's got terrifyingly
Write that in two lines.
It's got
terrifyingly
good ears...
etc.

>>156388054
Got it
thanks
zipping up now

>>156379362
Don't be self conscious about your muscles Reg, you're perfect as is.

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>>156380017
Even Ozen thinks Bondrewd is a twisted motherfucker, there's yet another accomplishment for the still growing mountain.

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>>156390175
Good news is that the other white whistles the meet will only be better! Until they also try to molest Reg.

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>>156390847
These translations are shedding light on a great deal, I'd thought for certain the white whistles were all going to be major boss fights but Ozen pointing out that Big Daddy is the nastiest of the bunch makes me think he was just a special case. Wakuna looks like a beasty knight Templar motherfucker and is apparently the Lord of Guidance, he might end up being cool as fuck. He's also apparently the chosen one, but for what exactly is anyone's guess. Then there's Sarajo, who true to his name is mysterious as fuck and we have absolutely no idea what direction that one's going to go in. He could be relatively benign, he might end up being even worse than Bondrewd. Hell, he might even be dead by the time we get to him, thus permanently preserving the mystery of his existence. We just don't know but damn it I am eager as hell to find out.

>>156391151
There's also a thing where wakuna went to the 6th floor not through the normal way, but used one of his relics, so maybe he has some sort of teleport relic?
*Teleports Behind You* Nothing Personal, Kid

>>156391255
>teleports behind you
>show me your dick, kid

>>156382880
>Drawing penises on the indestructible note artifact from her mother.

>>156391414
Her mother had an unquenchable thirst for hard shota cock that was clearly passed down to her daughter so I doubt she'd mind all that much.

>>156391455
>Riko is exploring the seventh layer
>loses the letter and it goes flying off somewhere
>someone picks it up
>I know that shota cock

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>>156391255
So he's Zelgius then.

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>>156391494
For fuck's sake could we have possibly failed to protect this shota's innocence any harder? I feel literally anyone could identify Reg just by his penis at this point.

>>156391616
don't worry he gets molested lvl 6

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>just like daddy's rod

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>>156393646
I did not think he was going to be this lewd. Why is he so fucking lewd.