Parallel Paradise

I want to mating press not-Asuna.

>>155267099
so he's

>>155267099
wth. gushing like a flood merely by touching him, even if he's disguised as a trap

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I definitely would this new trap MC.

give the guy some gloves

>>155267099
Although I can read Chinese too, I prefer to translate from the original. I'm checking bzland regularly, but if anybody finds them somewhere else, link it in the thread.

Also, Mana Light and I are working together now. Chapter 2 went up on batoto yesterday, with some slight edits from my initial script.

>>155268457
Thanks for the translations!

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>>155267099
That was quick.

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>>155267099
>pussy juice/piss
>trap
>lolis

Diapers soon.

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>>155269565
>The guy can literally rape somebody by just touching someone.
>not wearing gloves or anything

>>155267099
How did she replace her underwear?

>>155267099
20 pages isn't long enough.

That sucks that it ended on a cliffhanger.

>>155270187
It's a weekly. 20 pages is a good amount for 7 days.

>>155267099
so after that whole brynhildr fiasco he is going straight to porn?

>>155270323
We'll see after a month or two.

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>>155269660
There're already the poop jokes.

>>155268457
RAWs will be out on Monday. Just wait.

>>155267099
Just as I thought, it's exposition chapter. But at least we meet few more girls.
So let me count:
>one kitsune girl
>pair of loli twins
>another short haired paladin
Great question is which of them, become part of main harem. Hard to recognize right now. And on top of that, short haired paladin is already wet. Next chapter will be either another "wild" action, or MC trying to figure out how save his cover. Chosen option then clearly suggest how much lewd direction Lynn plans with this series.

>>155268216
I must just admit, that I didn't realise that it was HIM, at first. It was pretty confusing. Damn chinese.

>>155270470
Holy...how can someone step into something THIS BIG?

>>155272692
She was too busy thinking of fertilization.

>>155272692
How do you do it without losing your balance and tripping? That's the question.

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This cities look nice at least, first male customer in millenniums.

>>155274731
Wait, why are there even civilizations? Why isnt everyone dead because nobody can breed? And if the females have some magic interbreeding system, why even need a fucking male or react to him?

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>>155270470

>>155275249
It doesn't seem to be explained in the chapter, I guess Okamoto keep the suspense. The god-bird disappeared too.

>>155275249
>Lynn mango
>expecting something to make sense
Wew

>>155275249
Your logic is all twisted up my dude. You should already assume that they have some magic interbreeding system since the god said that there's been no males around for a millenia or whatever. And no one said that they even a need a male, only that their female instincts are hypersensitive because their hasn't been any around, which is exactly why they're reacting to him, because he's a "new" type of stimulus.

>>155269565
Will she get eaten next chapter too?

>Chinese

>>155277700
Can't be helped. Better than korean and no raw until monday according to >>155271869.

>>155277700
The Chinese typically have their own folks in Japan who buy manga once it comes out. They scanlate it stupidly fast but never release the original raws.

>>155270039
I have no idea about that

>>155277818
RAWs are ripped from kindle version of magazine, which will be released on monday. So expect them either in late sunday or early monday.
>>155278322
Chinese are simply leaks.

>>155268216
Oh that just LOL

>>155268457
There is also alternate edit on sites like Mangatown, who did that version?
http://www.mangatown.com/manga/parallel_paradise/c002/
At very least he has better typesetting.

>>155279701
I posted my script on /a/ before I got together with Mana Light. Some anon saw it and did the typeset. I only knew after he posted it on /a/. I'd gladly welcome him onboard if he's up for it.

>>155279656
My initial thought was: "Kazumi?!"

>>155279863
Mana Light has better editing overall, it just that this dude used little more comfortable font for reading and did little better job with placing text in bubbles. But that's nothing that Mana can't improve in next chapter.

>>155280125
IMO, the more the merrier. Both are better than either.

>>155280269
Anyway some insights from new chapter? From that chinese, I know shit. I don't ask for translation now, just some interesting bits.

>>155279886
Give him pink hair and you got a Perfect Trap Kazumi

>>155270470
>thinks she's like asuna
>she's actually aqua

>>155267099
It was posted in yesterdays thread.
Crossdressing MC still making sluts leak all over the place.

>>155269660
>Diapers soon.
Are you saying we might get a Nozomi expy soon?

That would be interesting?

>>155280551
As others have said, MC needs to cross dress because showing up in town as a guy will cause a riot. MC wonders a bit about how to get back to his world. They go to this shady shop to buy stuff. It's covered in kanji and MC wonders why Lumi speaks Japanese. Lumi has no idea what Japanese is and wonders why MC can speak whatever-they-speak. The catgirl shopkeep has had isekai customers before, but never males. Karu/Kall/whatever are the "enemy" (no explanation given). He eats candy that gives him the voice of a girl for one day. Apparently his voice is really cute. Lumi says if MC reveals he's a male, it'll destroy the world's order and his life may be in danger.

That should be enough for now.

>>155280780
Which Aqua?

>>155280924
Alright thanks for the summary.

>>155280967
KonoSuba Aqua

>>155280875
Rather All girls will be forced wear them due excessive wetness.

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>>155280967
There is only one aqua

>>155267099
I'm just curious how long until Lumi starts be horny again. She acted pretty normal in this chapter. Hopefully that doesn't mean that all that heat was just one-turn thing and she has now full imunity.

>>155281115
>Rather All girls will be forced wear them due excessive wetness.
If that actually happen in the future chapters of Parallel Paradise? There be a lot of changing in the future

>>155280924
>The catgirl shopkeep has had isekai customers before, but never males.
Interesting, this pretty much strengthens probability that osananajimi soon or later reappears.
>Karu/Kall/whatever are the "enemy" (no explanation given).
It will be interesting what kind of monsters they turn out to be. Because beside having something to fight, they probably be also source for monster rape stuff, given by Lumi's previous words.
>Lumi says if MC reveals he's a male, it'll destroy the world's order and his life may be in danger.
That makes whole situation with short-haired paladin now even more tricky. It will be interesting how MC deals with that.

>>155281707
>implying they would ever change them, and they not just get larger and larger as the chapters go on

>>155282131
>Something like that
Although I like to see a Nozomi expy in Parallel Paradise someday in the future

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>>155280875
If so, they're going to be wearing cloth diapers, according to an old interview where Okamoto mentioned that he had gotten feedback that those are better. Japanese people have horrible taste in diapers.

>>155281828
>interesting
>interesting
>interesting
the only interesting part about this manga are the lewds, dont kid yourself.

>>155282488
It's better to know the background of those lewd situations as they would be more ridiculous.

>>155282429
>cloth diapers
What would cloth diaper look like in Manga or Anime Art Style?

>>155274731
Look like one of those traditional Fantasy City or Town in Video Game or Manga

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>>155282899
Something like this.

>>155283020
Fucking diaperfags, I swear to god.

>>155283103
>inb4 takes a ban for the team and posts the tails diaper comic

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>>155283103
Fun fact: That girl is from a currently running ecchi manga about girls wearing diapers.

>>155269565
That can't be good

>>155282971
Yeah but they are mixed with a greco-roman style, I like it.

>>155283516
What next a school of Wizard/Mages or a Castle of Paladin and Knights?

>>155282617
This. Also given situation will also directly influencing what kind of lewd stuff we will get. For example, right now I highly doubt that there will be penetration for next few chapters. Simply it's not good mood and characters are not in good situation for that right now. If MC doesn't want his cover be blown up, he definitely can't pull dick out. So right now if he does something with short haired girl, it will be either another cunnilingus or he fingers her. Unless he decides do something completely rapid as running away or throw away his cover.

>>155270187
Having 20 pages weekly is better than a 30-60 pages monthly manga

>>155270323
>brynhildr fiasco
?

>>155285590
The shitty useless harem and the nonsense final arc.

>>155285590
Brynhildr was axed.
>>155270323
Well, when your last two series ends axed, then there is not too much options where to go.

>>155270323
no idea

>>155270323
Not sure how Okamoto managed to convince his editors that this is anything but hentai.

Well, at least the mc beats 99.9% of other harem protagonists by scoring in the first chapter.

>>155287400
He actually don't scored yet, but is true, that him don't refusing sex offer and actually be able do something (even if just cunnilingus for now), pulls him above most of traditional harem MCs.

>>155287400
>>155287612
>Well this girl is begging for it, so might as well
That was so refreshing

>>155285908
Seems he pulled five years lots of the time.

Wouldn't they consider this and his overall sales?

>>155274731
This has potential to have tentacle rapes everywhere in the whole town

Ok, let's compare
>Chapter 1:
>Kimi wa Midara
- Story is introduced.
- Heroine ask for impregnation.
- Lewd kiss happens, but that's all.
>Parallel Paradise
- Story is introduced.
- Heroine ask for mating.
- Lewd kiss happens, but chapter ends with cliffhanger.

>Chapter 2:
>Kimi wa Midara
- Blowjob occurs.
- Level of lewdness is essentially established.
>Parallel Paradise
- Cunnilingus occurs.
- Level of lewdness is essentially established.

Chapter 3:
>Kimi wa Midara
- Cunnilingus occurs.
- Story starts elaborating.
- Blowjob occurs.
>Parallel Paradise
- No lewd in this chapter
- Story starts elaborating.
- More characters are introduced.
- Chapter ends with lewd promising cliffhanger

While differences are clear, similarities as well.
Thus if we will going like this, next chapter will be about relationships issues. And fifth chapter finally brings actual sex. Unless Okamoto stretches/shortens few things.

>>155275398
Pretty much. This manga is really stupid. The fact the MC isn't allergic to pussy doesn't make it good.

>>155289176
Kimi wa Midara was one chapter every two months for the first five, then whenever the fuck they feel like it. This is weekly, there's obviously going to be some differences in pacing.

>>155290835
I agree, it just that some key points of storytelling as similar. Which gives pretty good insight, about what expect next.

How long till the suffering starts?

Why are all of his manga so twisted and full of shitty writing (while having somewhat coherent twists)?

>>155291215
He's a twisted guy with a very twisted sense of humor.

>>155293240
still, shitty writing degrades it a bit

>>155268216
muh

Did MC put it in already?

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>>155294550
Actually he licked it like a complete beta.

>>155295007
>tfw it tasted sweet as fuck
What the fuck, shouldn't it tasted salty coins?

>>155295142
Author probably has never had a direct contact with a girl in his whole life.

>>155295301
Welcome to the world of 2D

>>155295142
>>155295301
It's not supposed to have a narcotic effect either. Neither is a girl supposed to express breast milk without pregnancy.

It's almost, just maybe, like these girls have been altered in some way and that will be a future plot point.

>>155295301
Picked up, this is my kind of guy

>>155295301
Are you just realizing this now

>>155295142
She ate lots of fruit and sweets.

>>155295142
That's a false assumption, there isn't sodium chloride in love juices, it can't taste salty per say, it's confused with sourness.

>>155296482
I thought that like other body secretions alimentation can change the taste, but I can't see the difference for my own semen.

>>155267612

Really? She's more like Emilia from Re zero.

>>155300729
She's Aqua

>>155295142
With that, anon just demonstrated he have zero sexual experience with females.
Believing dumb memes made to highlight retards truly make you stand out.

>>155300993
Fuck off, normalfag.