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How would you have fixed Akame ga Kill?

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How would you have fixed Akame ga Kill?
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Make it a generic sol school anime/manga with the same cast.
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>Add more depth to Wild Hunt.

The Wild Hunt Arc is usually agreed to be where the series went to complete shit. They should've been fleshed out more, instead of just being 'rape lmao' and they should've had some better fights. Seriously, they had some pretty good Teigu.

If we keep all the hype for Izou, actually have him deliver on it.

>Budo doesn't job

Nigga's the Grand General, doesn't even know how his damn Teigu works. Should've played up his opposition of Honest more, until eventually he and Esdeath fight.

>Keep Seryu alive after Kyorach

Not having Seryu during the Wild Hunt arc was such a massive waste.
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Feature the titular character.
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>>154886591
Make a completely different manga.
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>>154886941
all this, but also having tatsumi pork esdeath into a decent human being
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Simple; make an honest woman out of her.

There you go.
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Didn't they kinda drop the whole thing where if two Teigu users fight, one of them will die by the end of it?
That was one of the decent draws the series had for me, combined with allowing pretty much anyone in the cast to die meant the battles had real stakes. It's something a lot of series lack, there's no tension because you know the main characters will either win, or not die anyways.
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>>154887100
Remember when Akame and Kurome fought with teigu, but neither died?

Remember when Tatsumi and Wave fought with teigu, but neither died?
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>>154886591
Transform it into eroge.
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Lighthearted SOL featuring Dragon Tatsumi and Mine
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The kingdom and basically the entire world in Akame ga Kill always felt so ill-defined to me, they just made the settings anything they felt like at the time and had the level of technology be up in the air.
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>>154887335
That would be the best thing to happen to the series.
Not even joking, an Akame ga Kiru eroge would be an instant buy for me.
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>>154886591
Fix Esdeath's characterization. Her love for torture is stupid and unmotivated, while her lack of empathy is well done and well explained. Work more on that

Fix Seryu's characterization. The way she's now, it feels like it was designed by That DM who just loves to see Paladins falling. I think she was meant to be that character who tries to follow justice but only sees one side of the coin, and thus ends up having a flawed understanding of the situation. However that role was later taken over by Wave, so that's why her character become less of a character and more of a joke. Perhaps have her reflect on the meaning of justice a bit more, then?

Also absolutely fucking fix Wild Hunt, holy shit.

But the most important thing is that there are no trains. so add trains immediately.
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>>154887844
I think it was originally supposed to be one.
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>>154886591
>When Tatsumi gets captured he chooses to become a double agent..
>He gets trained by Esdese & has to commit horrible war crimes to maintain his cover.
>At some point he kills a member of Night Raid & they hate him for it.
>When the time is right he breaks himself out and returns to night raid who immediately attempt to kill him for being a traitor.
>Tats narrowly escapes and finds himself alone in a dangerous world with no allies.
>The story follows Akame from that point on while members of night raid slowly get picked off and the rebels being wiped out.
>The world is in a state of true misery, Night raid has been disbanded, and no one can hope to stand against the military might of the Empire.
>A great search for all teigu in the world has begun, the empire's power is growing more and more every day, it's only a matter of time before they become unbeatable.
>Akame decides to make one last ditch effort to save the world.
>She finds Tats mentally broken in his old village now ransacked, he resolves that he has nothing left to live for so he'll give her plan a shot.
>She attempts to recruit her sister but it goes horribly wrong and they end up fighting. Tats kills her to protect Akame.
>Naturally they go into hiding because they just killed an elite empire soldier
>Wave finds them before the rest of the empire and expresses how the empire has been breaking every last shred of humanity they had left, killing her was a mercy.
>Wave explains that the only way they'll have achance is if they have Esdese with them.
>Esdese has grown bored now that her enemies are all dead or broken, with a manly speech from Tats she too is convinced to join the coup
>final battle ensues, new Night Raid wins, everyone but Akame dies
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>>154887100
>>154887119
This
Author chickened out
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Make Akame the main girl so at least Esdesu goes more crazy.
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>>154888012
Sounds good
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>>154886591
Tatsumi gets tortured to death in the very beginning by the psycho rich loli
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>No tatsumi.
>Just NR against the empire without wasting time with Tatsumi's pointless romances.
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>>154888234
Tatsumi was needed to help introduce the leader to the series' world.
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Tatsumi doesn't turn into a dragon.
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>>154886591
More Akame rape torture mindbreak doujins
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>>154888379
And then kill him off after that's done
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>>154888091
He worked very closely with the anime and probably chickened out because his chickenshit fans threw a bitch fit about it, despite that he would've had more time to pull it off in the manga.

Then again, he was also the one who wanted Leone to live on for hours after she was shot by Honest (the anime crew wanted her to die right there), so he wasn't all that good.

Basically, just allow the anime writers do their thing and it would've been at least decent.
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>>154890017
Well yeah the anime ending was a lot better
Also fans are fucking retards, why would you get mad at characters dying in AgK of all series?
It's really stupid
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>>154886941
>Add more depth to Wild Hunt.
remove wild hunt entirely, if the series was shorter people wouldn't have grown tired of it before it ended
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>>154887849
Add actually killing off Mine and you're good. I feel like the author chickened out of killing her and instead turned her into a vegetable. Honestly it would've made Tats turning into a dragon more sad if it was also fueled by her.
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>>154886591
Nothing can save this fucking trash manga.
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>>154890311
>Well yeah the anime ending was a lot better
If you have cancerous taste, sure.
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>>154890673
Shouldn't you be rearing dragon babies, Mine?
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>>154890833
?
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Is it me or did the author play it too safe for the manga? The anime killed everyone, he let some get out (sort of) scot free.
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>>154886591
Make Esdeath the main protagonist.
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>>154891713
That would make it even more trashy.
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>>154891735
Everything would make it even more trashy.
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>>154891625
see >>154887100 >>154887119 >>154890017
He went full pussy
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>>154891625
The author's problem was that he killed everyone off too early for shock value and when he got to the end there was nothing more he could do with the story.
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>>154887031
Say that again an see what happens.
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>>154891939
If you wanted to keep killing everyone then do not pussy out with certain characters or you will piss people off who expects a bloodbath or something at the end.
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>>154886591
remove the plot armor from akame
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At least in the manga more people lives.
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>>154886591
Have him join with Esdeath.
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>>154892816
I'm willing to continue the manga where I put it on-hold (somewhere around 50something) but which of them will survive? I don't care the spoilers.
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Remove male characters. Fucking harem elements ruin everythig
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>>154892893
For starters
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>>154892914
Just these two? Really? Then no, thanks.
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>>154892953
Some minor characters lives.
Oh and Kurome.
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>>154892816
I can't stand that the author pussied out in killing her off. If I recall, you die if you lose your teigu. Why did she of all characters defy that rule?
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>>154890311
>unrewarding and edgy end it's better
Nah.
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>>154893025
>Oh and Kurome.
That sounds good enough. Ok, I'll give it another go.
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>>154893036
Waifufags would have thrown a bitchfit, like they did when she died in the anime
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>>154893041
Yes it is
Watch Dragonball if you don't want consequences and forced happy endings
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>>154893155
We have a true mature edgelord here, ladies and gentlemen.
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>>154893132
Fuck waifufags. Why does she get to live after losing her teigu? What gave her a special pass from the rule?
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>>154894088
Again because waifufags
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Actually give Akame more focus and character development.
Kill off Mine instead of Sheele.
Have Esdeath die midway through the story and no more bullshit asspull powers from her.
No more retarded deaths that could've been prevented like Leone and Run.
Have Budo not job and don't kill off Lubbock.

There, fixed.
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>>154886591
Post the full image faggot
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>>154886591
Akame ga Kill the author
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>>154888234
>pointless romances.
In that case we don't need Wave and Lubbock too.
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>>154895093
You're right, we don't
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Fix esdeath portait
Fix the fuking teigu hero
Fix leone death
Fix last battle
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>>154894111
I actually wanted to see her killed off so I can see waifufags get angry.
>>154894397
I actually did like the idea of Esdeath being the last fight I guess.
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>>154892903
How?
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>>154886591
Actually having more than 1 arc and move on into actually explroing the world, this could have been the next HxH but it just started and ended in Yorkshin. Also this >>154887100
Basically author dropped his own premise.
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>>154886591
Made it solely about Akame
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>>154886591
Aniki end
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Lubbock doesn't die and Mine doesn't go in coma.

Baka trio a best.
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>>154886591

Less edgefaggotry for the sake of edgefaggotry.
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>>154888608
He looks happy with his wife now. At least he can control his own body later.
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>>154892816
This is a Married couple
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>>154886591
I would have made Tatsumi return Esdeath's feels
I would have had him change the government from the inside.
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>>154899713
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>>154898605
>Mine doesn't go in coma.
Or just full blown kill her off instead of pussying out.
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>>154900621
This thread is about fixing it, not ruining it.
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>>154900621
This. Her coma bullshit didn't make any sense on the first place, since after that she only appeared in the last chapter and got like 4 panels just for the sake of some forced happy ending.
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>>154900735
Try to explain why she went into a coma instead of dying.
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>>154900744
Well They both happy now
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>>154900744
Without her Tatsumi doesn't have any desire to live though, you have the mediocre anime ending to tell how it goes.
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>>154900878
Which is fucking stupid
Imagine if Romeo and Juliet changed the ending into a "they lived happily ever after" after audiences were sad because the protag dies they first time they showed it
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>>154900980
It's still retarded as fuck.
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>>154900980
Why is it mediocre?
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>>154901011
Terrible analogy, Tatsumi and Mine weren't from different factions that hated each other, they were together and everyone around supported their relationship.

Or are you saying every romance should end with one or both dead for it to be good?
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>>154901045
Manga >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Anime
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>>154901077
I'm saying forcing a happy ending in a tragedy is really dumb, especially since it's done for fanservice reasons
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>>154901045
You're not going to find many people rating AgK anime as more than mediocre.

The manga as well to be fair, even if a better ending in my opinion, but if you want to fix why change it to something that is even more popularly criticized and by that also removing all what made the manga still interesting and not a 2 years long fully spoiled ride.
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>>154901184
No
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>>154901184
I really liked this chapter. Hell, this mini arc as a whole was surprisingly well-written.
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>>154901011
Romeo and Juliet WTF!!!!!!!!.
Worst comparison
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>>154901226
Manga Always better Animefag
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>>154901226
The anime's directing was one of the most horrible ones I've ever witnessed in any anime and that alone is enough to make the manga 20 times better. (Kurome × Wave helps a lot too.)

>>154901254
>WTF!!!!!!!!.
Kill yourself.
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>>154901192
Not forced though, Mine was never hit at all in that fight so she was perfectly fine. Only thing that might have been forced was Akame being able to aim at Tyrant.
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Akame lesbo end with Leone
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>>154901311
It was forced as hell. >>154900744
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>>154886591
Turn it into a Taimanin style defeated heroin hentai series with a shit load of rape, impregnation, monster sex, bestiality, gangbangs/gangrape, mind break, live birth, and a bad end for each heroin.
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>>154901300
>I will kill myself
fixed
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>>154901353
>doesn't know how green text works
Nice fix, buddy, you should really do it.
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>>154901347
Nope, not seeing it. Everyone clearly died by having her body destroyed. It was never established that Pumpkin kills it user before, and she wasn't hit. She could very well wake up immediately, which I'd prefer.
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>>154901325
Is a Mircacle Akame still virgin even with the yuri thing in zero.
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>>154901254
>>154901311
Fine
Imagine if Hamlet was changed and now ended with Hamlet and Ophelia, who didn't really die, loving happily forever, because people were sad that the MC and his waifu died
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>>154901385
Stop bullying the Akame thread
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>>154901415
seriously?
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>>154901415
If Shakespeare could write that setting well enough, maybe it could work. But AgK never built up to a romantic tragedy, and instead as a shounen battle in which the heroes defeat the villain. Mine and Tatsumi plus Kurome and Wave are side elements that didn't affect the overall trajectory as seen by the anime which has the same end but with no extra that made the story more interesting.
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I though the reason Mine didn't die because she is the autor's favourite character.
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>>154901615
Hamlet wasn't a romance, it was a political tragedy
AgK is an action-tragedy, making a happy ending, especially one that conflicts with the lore is bad
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>>154901667
Probably just speculation, like every character that seems favored by the story. The romance between Tatsumi and Mine was decided before the story even started. Anime cut all romance for time constraints.
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>>154900621
She wasn't even wounded during the whole fight.
Why would she die?
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>>154901742
Well, I can't make a good analysis since I've never read it or read it for school long ago and forgot it already.

You're confusing theme with lore though. Nothing on the lore prevents happy endings, but the theme was tragedy and dying pointlessly. Takahiro ended up mixing two themes at the end maybe thanks to yuuki yuuna though, he came to conclusion that kids that didn't choose this life should be spared because they are innocent. Which is why those got the best endings while adults still died pointlessly like Leone.
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>>154886941
>Nigga's the Grand General, doesn't even know how his damn Teigu works
Nah man, that's like saying you don't know how you car works if it runs out of gas.

It kinda made sense for his character, he's this absurd powerhouse that no-one could really stand up to, so he's usually probably twat-ed most opponents within a few minutes. In the collesium punch-up, he suddenly finds himself facing someone on his level and a bunch of other, tricky opponents, and he over-exerted himself.
Going back to the car analogy, it's kinda like having a car you only used for short journies, then one day you've got to make a long trip with it and you misjudge when you'll run out of fuel.

Having said all that, it was a totally underwhelming way for him to die, and the whole fight was badly misjudged, and I don't think Budo came across the way takahiro intended him to
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>>154901351
I can really get behind this idea
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I finished the anime a few days ago, is the manga better? I kind of liked the unhappy ending the anime gave instead of the main character living and being happy.
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>>154902630
It is, but it's certainly happier, Anime and manga start deviating in chapter 39, right after the seryu and mine fight.
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>>154902250
Pinchi is the Strongest
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