Chapter 64. Needs proofreading.
Is this like father x daughter incest?
>>154833055
"But I have to help prevent this family from falling apart" is more grammatically correct.
>>154832349
Alright gimme a minute
>>154833295
>>154833339
My sides. She's gonna have to punish him at work.
>>154832363
>second panel
Might sound better without "today".
>third, first bubble
"Have plans"
>>154832363
pan 2: You had to tell me in advance if it was today.
pan 6 bub 2: But your dad came home and the three of us are finally together
>>154832382
pan 4 bub 1: Like going out for some lessons.
>>154832421
pan 4: That was the first time in my life I got so pampered.
pan 5 bub 1: I was nervous before because I'm just an old housewife.
>>154832462
pan 1 bub 2: I feel kinda bad since I got a legendary item as a present.
pan 3: Maybe she's just jealous of me because I'm a young woman.
>>154833458
And then there's THIS bitch.
>>154832815
This fucking page.
Does Hitomi's mom know the truth about her?
>>154832492
pan 6: Everything's a mess.
>>154832552
pan 1 bub 2: I was the one doing the best I could and I was always all by myself!
pan 5 side: Heheh
>>154832585
pan 4 bub 1 part 2: He doesn't tell me anything.
pan 5: Everyone online is treating me so nicely.
>>154832627
pan 6 bub 1: I made your mom work so hard all by herself because of my constant business trips overseas.
pan 6 bub 2: So it's really hard to talk to her about this seriously...
>>154832671
pan 1 bub 2: But that's not the issue here...
>>154832746
pan 3 side: That's what we were talking about this morning!!
>>154832776
[I think the font should be a little bigger in panel 1]
pan 1 side 2: If you screw this up, this could end in a divorce...
pan 4 side: *Oolong tea
pan 5 bub 2: Do you talk about serious issues with your wife?
>>154833880
Yes. She went to her party in her hotel roomor whatever that wasafter all and met some of her bosses.
>>154832815
pan 1 bub 2: I can't say them because I get embarrassed, and that's all.
>>154832845
pan 1 bub 2: They won't just follow your shadow in silence.
pan 5 bub 1 part 2: So what is she suggesting here?
>>154832990
pan 8 bub 1: We're going on a trip tomorrow.
>>154833024
pan 3 bub 1: Hitomi, you're coming too.
pan 5: Thinking about it, I've never spent any time with my family.
pan 7: [You're alright with side 2 not being on the left side?]
>>154833055
pan 6: But I have to help prevent this family from falling apart...
>>154833085
pan 5: This place is...
>>154833121
pan 2: It's already been 16 years since then.
>>154833153
pan 1 bub 2: I forgot about what happened in the past.
>>154833182
pan 4 bub 1: Oh my, a parent and his child... that's cutting it way too close.
>>154833233
pan 3 bub 2: But it's still way too early for you guys to go through with this.
pan 4: But as for this hostess,
pan 5 side 2: You can only be so inconsiderate.
>>154833261
pan 5 bub 1: You actually like girls with big boobs and asses, don't you!
>>154833295
pan 3 bub 1: That day, I couldn't tell you what was important,
pan 3 bub 2: And you sat there silently in pain.
>>154833363
pans 1-2: [I feel like changing it to bad Japanese English since it was originally like that, but this is okay too I guess. Lemme know if you just wanna stick with that]
>>154833458
pan 4 bub 2: Wow, you deserted your wife in the blink of an eye.
>>154833528
pan 1 side 2: Now you can have your revenge against that fucking rude waitress!!
>>154833411
And this guy's suggestions for pan 3 bub 1 are fine too
Still there?
>>154835439
Who are you asking that to?
>>154836008
The typesetter
>>154836175
Yes, I'm still here. Why?
>>154836246
Oh no, just wondering if you're still working on it.
>>154832349
>Hitomi chapter
Oh yisss
>>154832349
Wait, I can't remember. What chapter she got back to live with her shitty family?
>>154833528
My sides have achieved orbit with the power of his incompetence.
>>154833085
Hitomi is a true boss, she still working even on a trip. Soon she will take over Japan
>>154832421
I love Hina so much.
Still has brown hair for me.
>>154833528
Oh it will continue, he can try to say something next chapter.
Hilarious as always, i dont think Hinamatsuri ever dissapointed me.
>>154833528
Great chapter. Thanks for the dump OP.
>>154837285
No, no. The series will be continued, not this particular story. That message is on every chapter.