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Mousou Telepathy

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NTR happening!
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>>153626471
I like this guy a lot more than that tool Toda
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He better not ntr that cute tomboy girlfriend of his. Speaking of that when is she gonna make an appearance outside of flashbacks.
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>>153626664
This is a new character
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I was bored and tried to clean and translate one page.
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>>153626902
I'm a beginner and it reads more like a machine translation than anything. Understanding it is way more difficult than translating.
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>>153626961
here is the original
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>>153626961
Alright, I like this motherfucker.
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This nigga is way better than Toda, but we all know we can't have nice things
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>>153626961
Welp Im rooting for him
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In how many chapters does he get overly creepy and annoying with no self awareness so that Toda appears the better option again?
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>>153626902
>>153626961
>>153626991

Looks good!

You should apply at helvectia scans; maybe we would see more releases.
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>>153627200
he's going to be too stupid to make a move
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>>153627640
>he's going to be too stupid to make a move
But he already made a move >>153626961
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I like this guy much more than Toda. Hopefully this turns into toda and croissant hooking up. Also akira and his girlfriend chapter when?
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>>153626961
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>>153626961
You forgot to translate the title: A person who hides nothing.

2nd panel:
There's some garbage where you redrew his hair.
こういう人 means someone like this, not this person in particular. Also, are you ESL? That comma is unnecessary. Do you know the difference between could and would?
Better translation: If I were to get married, it would be nice to marry someone like her...!!!

Panel 3: "Exactly ideal my"
You also cleaned out the dedenn sound effect and didn't replace it.

I'm not exactly sure what she meant by まさかコレも and そちなんだ in panel 3 and 4. Maybe she thought he's going to think lewd thoughts of her but was surprised he had pure intention of dating with the intention of marriage.

Text placement: Text is to far down in last bubble of panel 3 and 4.

>understanding it is way more difficult than translating
How the fuck do you translate without first understanding it?

Anyway, good effect, with room for improvement.
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this should have been the main love interest right from the start, Toda fucking sucks

being a pervert is fine but that's all there is to him
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>>153626961
nice
i like him being the polar opposite of Toda
a guy who hides nothing vs a guy who can't show anything

who's gonna win the mind readerb owl?
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>>153626471
This guy is so much better already, rooting for him.
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This has false ead written allover it.

He's only made to contrast with Toda as the foil that has what he doesn't Toda gets development, improves himself, and becomes as true to himself on the outside as he is on the inside. Or failing that, Nakano falls in love with him anyway because she understands him better now or thinks of his good sides
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Anyone knows that a real woman wants to be seen as the personification of sex, not some sort of holy maiden
At the end of they day, they want to be dicked, not worshipped
Maybe both
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>>153626471
Finally a good mc, dump the other one.
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>
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>>153628686
Nakano is the mc
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>>153627200
Best boy never wins
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>>153628328
>understanding it is way more difficult than translating
>How the fuck do you translate without first understanding it?

I meant the opposite. Understanding is easier than translating.

I don't do this regularly and I'm not a professional. I saw it as an exercise. I'm not ESL.

I posted the "clean" page, thinking that the usual translator might want to use it.

Thank you for your input
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>>153628722
My bad, but you know what I mean.
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>>153628822
No problem. I hope I didn't appear too harsh. It is not my intention to shit on your work.

One more thing to add: 清楚
While its translation is neat and trim in the dictionary, using neat in this instance makes it seem like he means tidy / organized. If it doesn't fit, dig deeper.

Looking at the individual Kanji gives you more hints: http://jisho.org/word/%E6%B8%85%E6%A5%9A - pure
http://jisho.org/search/%E6%A5%9A%20%23kanji - graceful

You can also look at the japanese definition for the term by googling 清楚 意味
Top 2 results:
「清楚」(せいそ)とは、清らかですっきりとしたさまを指す。 外見上は控えめで清潔感がある容貌に、謙虚なふるまいをし、慎ましい美しい身のこなしの保守的な女性を表すことが多い
[名・形動]飾りけがなく、清らかなこと。また、そのさま。「清楚な身なり」「清楚な婦人」

For that, you can come up with a better translation that the direct dictionary translation. I'll leave that to you.
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>>153626471
I like this guy, he's honestly straightforward and straightforwardly honest.

But goddamn if Toda isn't a man after my own heart. He is a kindred spirit to us all minus being popular and good looking
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>>153626471
Dropped.
I don't get this trend with every fucking author trying to focre ntr in a series just to pander to cuckfags.

Same shit happened with Masamune-kun no Revenge.
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>>153629907
Is NTR now just the new term for "more than one possible love interest?"
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>ntr
Fuck that bitch. I knew this would happen after seeing that smoking air freshener bully.
I bet she get some sick kicks out of this.
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>>153630239
Jerking off to sex fantasies about a girl you barely approach doesn't give you ownership over her. It's not her fault if she goes on to date a guy that's better than you. You don't like that maybe you should have stopped fapping to her and actually asked her out instead.
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>>153630374
Why are you implying so hard mate?
I just want some cute developing comedy romance and not some shitty ntr story.
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>>153630178
Toda is the main male charatcer, so yes, Nakano being with another dude can be considered NTR.
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>>153630528
There's no NTR if he never dated her. Just an unrequited crush. And that shit is older than time.
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>>153630539
you're wrong
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>>153630539
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>>153630617
>>153630739
Get back to your MTSP threads back in /h/ you ntrfags. You're delusional.
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>>153631019
I'm not a NTR fag, I'm just telling you there's not NTR here. His liking her doesn't mean shit if he never does anything about it. She can date a guy she finds worth dating if she wants. Don't even know what MTSP is.
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>>153631019
You're the delusional if you think Toda and Nakano had a relationship.
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so cute.
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Chapter 300 spoiler
Title:
Confessing for the second time
Panel 1:
Senpai! || I had a lot of fun hanging out with just the two of us today.
!
You're so kind and mature. You really are my ideal woman!

Panel 2:
That's why, senpai,
Won't you go out with me?

Panel 3
How should I respond...?
What's the most optimal response...?
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>>153631626
What does it take to melt this cunt's frozen heart?
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>>153631626
Well, that's it. I'm done wit this series.
Was good while it lasted.
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>>153631626
Just say no and move on. We all know she's developong a crush on Toda anyway.
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>>153631684
Gangbanged by old men
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>>153631684
the D

>>153631740
It's okay, She just stayed silent without giving any kind of response. And as of the latest chapter (311), her main concern is to clear up the misunderstand with Toda. (He thinks they're going out.)
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>>153626961
Kid has guts. I'm changing teams, fuck Toda.
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>>153632382
>rooting for goodboy mcsaint
He is such a bland character.
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>>153631869
Does she even try to become more talkative and socialize with Toda's group or remains the same uptight frigid bitch that she's been up till the latest translated chapters?
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>>153632382
>fuck Toda
Yes please.
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Everyone cares about nakano bowl.
But the really important question is: who is gonna take the croissant bowl?
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>>153632444
>uptight frigid bitch
She is just shy
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>>153632444
She's able to make small talk / greetings.

>>153632382
>changing to a losing team.

MC is a terrible person.

Chapter 301 spoiler:
Title: The answer is...
1
[I can brush it off by saying, "Thank you."]
pink text: How about it, Senpai?
[But Shimizu-kun is waiting for my response.]
2
If Shimizu-kun suggests we go around in pairs, I'll go along with it.
[Even though I said something like that to mana-chan...]
3
If I just say "okay" and go along with the person who's pulling me forward, that'd be easiest.
4
But why am I...
Not able to say that?
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Why does she like Toda? He's a borderline rapist retard with literally no redeeming features other than being good at soccer. I guess Nanako is just another jock loving cocksleeve. 23PD4ME
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>>153632770
Because is "nice"
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>>153632559
Honestly, from the POV of any other person, Nakano is kind of a cunt. There really is no reason for Toda or Kouhai to fell for her.
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>>153632947
>reason
You don't reason with your dick anon.
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>>153632947
There are actually two big reasons to fall for her.
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Why do people like the new guy so much? Is it because "he's nice"?

Toda's a huge closet pervert but at least that's somewhat interesting
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>>153632770
He's actually a good kid, having a lewd imagination isn't anything bad.
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Best girl is sick of her shit too.

Chapter 302 spoiler:
Title: Life is unfair
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So Shimizu asked you to go out with him? || WELL?
What did you say?
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I... couldn't give him a response.
Really. || And then what'd Shimizu say?
3
Maybe I rushed it too much...
...Shall we get going?
......
Seems like he was being considerate of me.
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Haaaaaaa...
pink text: I'm sick of this shit.
sfx: kaa-
Why is someone indecisive like you popular?
That's so true. I have no room to retort.
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>>153632770
I guess he's the first to have such strong feelings towards her.
And he's in her class, plenty of contact time.

>>153633061
At least give time to the nice guy so we know about him a bit more before branding him boring.
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>>153633061
This is the best page.
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>>153633061
Toda is a beta bitch boy
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DON'T SKIP CHAPTERS YOU FUCKERS
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>>153633061
I like the kouhai, he is straightforward and pure. Not that Toda is bad, but sometimes he pisses me off when he can't even muster courage to properly talk with Nakano.
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>>153628706
When I first saw that I though it was them and future babies.
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>>153633045
Her boobs and what else?
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>>153633101
>indecisive frumpy girl who's still really popular
Is this actually shoujo, or are japs really that tit-starved?
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>>153632947
>There really is no reason for Toda or Kouhai to fell for her.
i can see two pretty big "reasons" to like her
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>>153633101
You tell her Croissant.
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>>153633061
>but at least that's somewhat interesting
not when that's the only thing he has.
His friend is the best guy in the series but he's not even competing for the Nakanobowl because he already landed the best girl.
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>>153633570
Her ass.
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>>153633573
The author's asking the same question.

Title: Crude
1
Oh no! The most popular boy in school and the manly but friendly underclassman are in love with me~
Why a plain Jane like me? I... I can't choose~!!
2
Like, || Are you the heroine of a shoujo manga?!
This kind of shit pisses me off the most!
3
Um... Sorry. I didn't mean for it to be like this....
grey text: What was that personality...
I know.
4
He's not like that, right?
Shimizu I mean.[/spoiler]
//I have no idea what panel 4 means.
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>>153626961
NEW BEST BOY
E
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B
E
S
T

B
O
Y
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DROPPED
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>>153633755
Is this shoujo or not though? He's using the same shitty tropes, being self aware don't change shit.
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>>153634318
>He
You mean she. The author is a woman. She drew herself in manga format.
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title: Mana-san's extraordinary speech //はかく語りき
Panel 1
Things like annoying tasks,
orange text: I don't wanna stand...
blue text: I'll clean this up...
Or things that other people want to do.
orange text: Mana wants cafe au lait
Blue: I'll have the coffee.
You've been going along with them like you don't have a choice all this time right?
2
So, when a person tells you he wants to go out with you,
Red text: Senpai, go out with me 
Can you just go, "oh well" and fall in love with him?
3
One can't just simply give in and fall in love,
that's why everyone is troubled. Pink text: Mana got rejected...
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You're the one who said it's impossible to please everyone, right?
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>>153634375
Women make the most perverts mangas. This could be interesting.
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>>153633755
Just because the author points it out doesn't mean she's not following the plot beats to the letter.

Just like any cliche, it's only good when written properly. And this is written very blandly.
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>>153634318
It's certainly not shonen.
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>>153634609
I think you skipped the blue text in the second panel
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>>153634609
Mana, my love.

Her growth in the manga in wonderful. She's a real bro.

>>153633512
I know mini Toda looked like that, but did mini Nakano have an ahoge?

>>153632770
Because outside of his thoughts he actually does noce things for Nakano without any perverted intentions sometimes. And he's shown to worry for her without any lusty intentions sometimes.
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>>153633061
More or less because he's refreshing as of late. Toda's gimmick has gotten a bit stale.
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>>153635098
Toda is just a normal boy I do not understand the pervert part
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>>153634994
Yes I did. My apologies.
>Then I guess I'll just fall in love with Shimizu-kun.

I'm having trouble understanding her boring and bullshit monologue. So I'm not very confident about this translation:

Chapter 305
TItle: I exist too.
[It's true that it's not possible to please everyone.]
[If it's something that can be resolved by me going along with thing, I've always done so.]
2
[If I think about what I want to do, it'd just tire me out.]
3
But in order to form relationships with people,
I can't go on like that.
4
[I've... up to now...]
Saki-chan,
Class's about to start.
[have really been slacking off.][/spoiler]
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>>153633061
>Why do people like the new guy so much?

Because he have guts.
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>>153635228
He's thought of as one by the MC, at least.
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Before I start thinking of ships and shit, does anyone here know why Toda likes her? Heard it's been revealed already but not translated.
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>>153635343
>>Then I guess I'll just fall in love with Shimizu-kun.
Oh boy, she's easy.
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Why is Toda the only character in this manga with a functioning libido?
It's gotten to the point where he's considered the weird one
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>>153634375
>She drew herself in manga format.
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>>153635570
It's not uncommon
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Chapter 306
Title: Exceptional infectiousness
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Yeah... I've always only thought about how to brush things off...
red text: She's thinking about something...
If I don't think about what I actually want to do, it'd be rude to Shimizu-kun...
2
But I don't really understand what it means to like someone...
To being with, what does dating someone entail? What do you do?
3
Hmm... According to manga and dramas, dating means... Going on dates? Holding hands?
And...
!!!!
4
What the heck am I imagining! small text: This has to be Ida-kun's fault!
sfx: pan (slap)
!?

Best boy is just a distraction and has no chance of winning.
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This is nobel. It's from her twitter.
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>>153635738
oh my god that face...
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>>153635436
apparently he would see her pass by every soccer practice and thought of her as a goddess, until the wind blew her skirt up revealing her pure white patsu, then he thought of her as an erotic goddess
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>>153633573
A girl having one guy like her and another who doesn't confess his feelings isn't far from real life. I've seen some of the most atrocious females have decent boyfriends back in highschool
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>>153636208
Oh no but I mean afterwards, aparently it's already been revealed why he thought of her as a goddess, but it hasn't been translated.

I mean from what I can see here he will win easily, but it'd be nice to know.
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>>153635767
Looks like a hobo desu
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>>153636208
>>153635436
Later on it's shown that Toda likes her because at the entrance exams for high-school Toda loses his entrance card for taking it but Nakano overhears this and goes out of her way to find and return it to him.
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Chapter 307

Title: Raku high 3rd year soccer player chat group //the pronunciation of the school name may be incorrect.
1
Anyway... I'll think about the how to respond later...
sfx: fuu... (sigh)
red bubble: Eh...?
[Seriously??? What's the sauce? lol]
sfx: boko-
2
[Yes, it's true!! Looks like the second years saw it happen. That Shimizu did good. [emoticons] I want a girlfriend too lol.
[Who's the girl? She from our school?]
[Dunno lol. here's a creepshot lol
3
Here lol
4
[Huh?! It's Nakano-san :O!]
[Literally who?]
[She was in my class last year. [emoticon] She's plain but when she smiles it's nice. [emoticons]
sfx: sound of turning off phone
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Chapter 308
Title: Even imaging...
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Senpai, I'm glad you're feeling better.
It's all thanks to you, Shimizu-kun.
...
Um... || Senpai, || would you mind if I say it properly one more time?
2
Um... I... || like you, senpai.
Won't you... go out with me?
3
... I'm so happy.
I, too, feel-
[No]
4
[That's not how it is.]
what's this...
white text: Haa... (sigh)
Feels tight...
[You've got the wrong idea, Ida-kun]
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>>153633061
Toda is a bitch, this guy's straight to the point
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>>153635343
Oops, got the heroine's name wrong. It's Aya-chan, not saki-chan.
>>153635738 >>153636927
Toda-kun, not ida-kun.

Chapter 309

Title: If this keeps up...
1
[If... Shimizu and Nakano-san start dating...]
Let's play-
Let's play-
Leaving aside Mana, Akira and I would just be in the way.
2
[I was relieved just because we ended up in the same class... || We couldn't even have a proper conversation.]
We can't even be considered friends like this.
3
That's not true...
!
Plus... Shimizku-kun and I aren't dating...
4
I can't just say something like that
Out of the blue...

Chapters are getting less and less interesting, but we're almost caught up! (ignoring everything before chapter 300)
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>>153637392
Forgot attachment. orz
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Chapter 310

Title: It's going to disappear.
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I've always liked Nakano-san since that time.
But that doesn't mean I want to get between Nakano-san and Shimizu
2
Summer break is going to start next week.
I'm going to need to start studying for the exams...
And if I keep focusing on other things...
In time, regarding Nakano-san and Shimizu...
Come to terms with it...
3
Cut-off background text: Will I be able to do that? I'll have to.
[Again, I...]
[Still don't know what I want to do. || But...]
4
[I don't want this.]
sfx: gyu... (squeeze)
[I want him to know the truth.]
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>>153637835
>I'll come to terms with it.

Chapter 311 (latest)

Title: It's different from that time.
[I want them to know. I want them to understand me.]
The truth is you've always been laughing at me, right?
[I'm already familiar with this feeling.]
2
[But if you don't say anything, I can't even deny it.]
3
I wish Toda-kun could hear my thoughts too.
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>>153636927
>>153637392
>>153637450
>>153637835
Why would you do this to me anon.
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>>153634318
Author is a woman who is self-inserting as Nakano most likely
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In conclusion:

Best girl: Lost
Best boy: pretty much lost
Worst boy: perverted, cowardly, quitter.
Worst girl: indecisive, cowardly, doesn't know what she wants.

I'm gonna go translate immortal hounds now. Do whatever with my 300-311 scripts.
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>I'm gonna go translate immortal hounds now.
Thanks and God bless you anon.
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>>153638409
I want to self insert in Nakano's self insert.
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>>153638138
When does the hiatus end?
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>>153638558
>Worst boy end with worst girl
moral of the story is like goes with like.
>I'm gonna go translate immortal hounds now. Do whatever with my 300-311 scripts.
I would type set them but I don't want to step in the turf of those doing it.
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>>153636514
Most mangakas look like hobos while working, won't even clean themselves for an interview. Except Ken Akamatsu, his qtπ waifu takes care of him.
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>>153638804
Just don't upload it.
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>>153638558
How many raw chapters how IH are there
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>>153638751
>【お知らせ】『妄想テレパシー』は単行本作業のため明日(2/13)から休載させていただきます。連載再開は3月上旬予定です。そして、描き下ろし満載のコミックス3巻は3/11発売!(予約受付中です→https://www.amazon.co.jp/dp/4063695662/ )
Within the first 10 days of march.
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>>153638919
Volume 5 tank raws is out. It goes up to chapter 33.
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>>153626961
Man fuck Toda. New boy best boy.

Though he'd make for a much less interesting story.
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>>153636339
You see qts with boyfriends much uglier than them, and some fit guys with good looks dating goblins next to them, all the time.
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>>153638920
Thanks a ton.
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>>153636592
Ohhhhhhhhhhh
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>>153638558
Thank you for you hard work
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>>153638804
I would say just don't upload them, but even if you only post them here and ask not to upload to other sites, some fag is going to upload them to bato.to or some shit.
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>>153632947
She's hot. The glasses give off a cute, quiet/shy type of girl which is a bonus point and fetish for many. Such as myself.

It's me. I am the Toda and Shimizu.
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>>153638845
>>153639934
Well, I'll just post here, don't blame me if it happens. Maybe I should use a godawful font to dissuade from that.
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>>153635098
>Because outside of his thoughts he actually does noce things for Nakano without any perverted intentions sometimes.

Like literally what
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oh shit, I can't actually redraw. never mind.
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>>153640653
The shirt thing and the incident where he spoke up for Nakano come to mind.
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>>153641118
>without any perverted intentions
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>>153640638
Make it intentionally shitty
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>>153638804
>I would type set them but I don't want to step in the turf of those doing it.
It's been dropped by FwPA.
Immortal Hound thread >>153641164

>>153641039
Yes, redraws in this series is a huge pain in the ass. Heads off to Helvatica scans for doing such a good job of it.
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>>153640638
>It's an NTR story
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>>153629907
Dude, Nakano has been doing her best not to be in a relationship with Toda. It's like you don't know what NTR means (how can she cheat on someone she isn't going out with).
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>>153636592
>>153636927
>>153637450
>>153637835
>>153638138
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Killing two birds with one stone. Avoid redraws and ensure there's no way this gets uploaded anywhere.
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>>153641206
He only got the thought after he gave the shirt to her. The deed had already been done.
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>>153638138
This is the largest load of bullshit. She owes Toda nothing. Why not just go out with the guy who makes an effort and doesnt just ogle her all day?
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>>153642525
Oh GOD why?

I'm sure it'll get uploaded anyway.

>>153642653
Because she doesn't love him and she isn't a slut. If i were a grill I'd totally date him though. Plus they're a perfect match. She can read minds and he hides nothing.
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>>153642722
I was just joking with that one, I gave up, I'll let the pros handle it. I can wait till the story gets there.
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>>153642722
>Because she doesn't love him and she isn't a slut. If i were a grill I'd totally date him though.

Funny you should mention that.
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>>153642525
Beautiful, I love it.
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>>153642815
This is fantastic.
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Toda is the male incarnation of your typical harem heroine. No personality. Never does anything. Has no real emotional connection with the MC. But the MC will still love them despite any character development or plot developments. It's disgusting and boring. This is why Japanese are 5ever alone.
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>>153642815
'Too' as in the feeling is mutual, or that Toda alter is just as popular with girls and she's one of many?
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>>153642815
Why is Nakano still half-naked in her own fantasies instead of Toda?
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>>153646308
She likes to be seen.
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>>153646183
They like each other. I thought that much obvious.
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>>153637450
>orz
it's been so long since i've actually seen someone type that
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>>153647040
took me a moment, but i like that.
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>>153640638
>>153626961
>>153642525
Legit, you dudes should apply for helv. They've been talking about looking for more people to work on Mousou.
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>>153633101
Mana is such a fucking hero.
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>>153642815
I always thought this was about a world where Toda thinks he has telepathy and is just projecting his thoughts on others.
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>>153633061
You're on a board of self-loathing assholes.

Toda is who they were back in High School. New Guy is who they wish they were.

(This is excluding the fact that Toda is popular which has only been brought up a few times. Outside of those small instances he's shown to be shy, introverted, and perverted).

I'll always cheer for Toda. He's a madman.
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>>153650153
Akira is who I wish I was, New guy is who I was in high school, Toda is who I am today.
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>>153635738
>The west
"Hey wanna go on a date? Get a drink?"
"Yeah sure"

>The East
'I-I-I can't ask senpai out on a date!!'
'Oh no he wants to date me... what does that meeeeeean???!'
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>>153642722
My comment was anti-Toda/pro-Shimuzu. If you're trying to disagree with me, its not very clear.
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>>153646128
You just described Nakano perfectly.
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>>153650733
I was half agreeing with you I guess. She should date Shimizu, even if she doesn't love him right now as they're compatible. And he's a good catch.

But shoujo logic dictates that you either love someone or you don't. And dating someone you don't love makes you a slut. Or something.
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>All these people abandoning /ourguy/ on such a small whim

Get the fuck out. All of you.
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>>153631019
There's a difference between a love triangle and NTR.
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well thanks you fucking assholes
now I lose interest in the series
I hope you are happy
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>>153653367
It's exactly what happened to Tomo-chan. You have that honeymoon phase where the idea of the manga is fresh and enticing, then 300 chapters in the authors ran it into the ground and is trying to throw some semblance of a story in there to keep people reading.
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>>153653460
Tomo-chan is great. 4 volumes is not that long of a story. It only seems so because it's spread one page a day. MT needs to make their other characters catch up to Croissant in the engagement department. Hopefully NewGuy will force Toda and Nakano to get interesting.
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You know what I love, people on /a/ talking about how Toda can't muster up the courage to talk to Nakano..... While everyone on /a/ is a basement dweller neet who can't even imagine being in a group of friends with a girl.
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>>153654410
If I wanted to read about myself I'd start a diary.
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>>153653251
What kind of a love triangle is it when the first guy has been built up for 160 chapters and then gets dropped immediatly in favor of a new dude, and the chick is practically ready to marry the new dude after only 40 chapters? This is heading for a trainwreck.
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>>153636592

fuck, this page hurt.
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>>153654974
Did we read the same fucking manga? Nakano has zero feelings for the new guy despite him being pretty awesome and has confessed TWICE.

ALL Nakano can think about is kidding Toda and making it clear to Toda that she and Shimize aren't dating.
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>>153636592
>>153636927
>>153637450
>>153637835
>>153638138
How can anyone read this and, even if you still hate Toda, at least acknowledge he's a better person than Nakano?

When Nakano was in this situation he stepped up and helped her in the student council, went looking for her in the subway, gave her his shirt, and probably more at this rate.

When Toda is in distress she sits there awkwardly with her mouth shut, when all she really has to do is dream up a bit of small talk that would let Toda know she's not dating Shimizu.
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>>153655525
I, too, am sick of her "I'm so helpless" bullshit.

Besides being a shy pervert, Toda is a pretty cool guy. He doesn't even antagonise his love rival.
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