Hinamatsuri

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This still needs to be proofread, so let me know if you see any errors or if you have suggestions that could improve the chapter.

im here for my daily dose

>>153583473
its a miracle how this fucking manga never fails to make me laugh in any chapter, except the anzu crying ones

>>153584135
I want Hina's jacket.

>>153584247
That fucking guy. Always pissing me off.

I wonder if there's more raws. Also, rather empty thread, eh?

>>153584433
People usually comment after OP finished dumping them all.

>>153583473
AMAZING

>>153584611
There's no way his tongue wouldn't get cut the fuck up from that

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>>153584611
I never understood this, is this supposed to indicate blood thirst?

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Done.

New volume out on March 3, then next issue is mid March.

>>153584899
>Possiiiible
Is it just me or is that a really weird syllable to extend

>>153584972
Should I extend the E?

>>153585011
I think that would be better

All right, I changed the "possible" and I also made the "to be continued" font a bit bigger.

If you anons see any other things that could be improved, please let me know.

>>153584952
thanks a lot for the dump

>>153584135
Hina is the best, like always.

Thanks for the dump.

>>153584281
i know this is a comedy but what kinda shitty ambush involves waiting for your enemies to run out of bullets?

>>153584214
>If they run outta of bullets, I'll cut their little bullets.
What did he mean by this.

>>153585641
Their micropenii

>>153585641
I hope this is a joke, because I removed the TL's note explaining that he was referring to their balls since I thought it was way too obvious.

>>153585718
Joke

>>153583246
TL here, mind if I take a quick look and see if there's anything to rephrase?

>>153586138
Go ahead.

>>153584952
Is this an ESPer?

>>153586302
Probably. It's also probably a grill.

>>153583349
Pan 1 bub 1: The attacks on the offices of the Oudou Syndicate which began last month

>>153583379
Pan 7: What're you talking about?

>>153583421
Pan 1 bub 2: I wanna get through it without exposing [the fact I'm sick]

>>153583509
Pan 2 bub 2: Isn't it just a rumo...

>>153583552
Pan 5: [This might be] like that time he/she got targeted before. [Still not sure whether they're talking about the time Hina got kidnapped or the time when Nitta got a hit on him]

>>153583763
Pan 4 bub 1 part 1: Heh heh...

>>153583931
Pan 3 bub 2: This could work.
Pan 3 (TN note): The English name is actually 'Battles Without Honor and Humanity'

>>153583967
Pan 2: (Cellphone screen says 'Sab')

>>153584170
Pan 4: The Yakuza's movements are fuckin' flawless.

>>153584214
Pan 2: (I might replace 'underestimating' with 'looking down on', but that totally depends on you)
Pan 3 bub 1: Those guys are more armed than I thought!
Pan 3 bub 2: We can't make a move.

>>153584572
Pan 6 bub 1: Stop it! Our higher ups ordered us to do this!

>>153583646
>>153583552
I'm chuckling like such an asshole

>>153584789
Pan 3: How long are you gonna mock them!?

>>153584829
Pan 5 bub 1: Making fun of people...
Pan 5 bub 2: Can only go so far... [Dunno which phrasing sounds better. Lemme know]

>>153584866
Pan 2 bub 1: Old man, it seems like both parties pretty much destroyed themselves.
Pan 2 bub 2: Though there was one group who got away scot-free.

Pan 4: I got enough problems in dealing with syndicate restructuring.

>>153584952
Pan 3 bub 2: Knew it. Stiiill here. (Elongated it a bit like in original text)
Pan 7 bub 1: That's why I told him it was still too early!
Pan 7 bub 2: Couldn't help himself, bub.

All from me. I guess. You're free to incorporate it if you want. Or dispute them.

>>153584952
Aw shit, esper shota?

>>153589524
All the espers we've seen until now are female. I think that might also be a female.

>>153585718
I assumed it meant his penis, but it's obviously a body part

>>153587142
>fuckin'
WHO TAUGHT YOU THOSE WORDS, YOUNG LADY!?

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thanks op, that was good

>>153589769
Blame the Yakuza movies bub

>>153587664
>Pan 5 bub 1: Making fun of people...
>Pan 5 bub 2: Can only go so far... [Dunno which phrasing sounds better. Lemme know]
I think the first version sounds better, but English is my 4th language, so don't take my word too seriously.

>>153590341
No, I agree both are a touch awkward, but the "There's a limit to" is a bit better. "Can only go so far" makes it sound like Nitta isn't going all that far.

This is always quite the sides workout.

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I just realized, reading the previous chapter, that Nitta benches 2plaet.
NOICE

>>153590565
But that's just 40 kg + the bar, so around 50 kg, which is 100 pounds.

>>153590458
>>153590341
Alright then, we can stick to the original one then

>>153590619
Oh well, I assumed they were 20kg plates.
They are not as small as 5kg ones, so let's say they are 10kg ones. So he's benching 1 plate then.
Which is still better than what I would expect from a nip from a series that's not a fighting/fitness one.
Also, man, the standard bar is 20kg/45lbs.
Hence why 1 plate = 60kg or 135lbs.

>>153586464
>like that time he/she got targeted before
If you say "that time", isn't it redundant to also say "before"? Wouldn't something like this make more sense:

Like when she got targeted before.

>>153591088
Sure ok.

>>153583763
>Let those guys who dared to mock us recognize our fear!!
How about this:

Let those guys who dared to mock us tremble with fear!!

>>153591194
>>153587664
P-please respond. "Recognize our fear" means that they are fearful of the other guys, and that's not the case, but I'm not a translator, so I don't really know what it says there.

>>153591194
Uh sure. Okay. Sounds better anyways.

Done. I've submitted the chapter. Now we wait for it to get approved. Here you have it in a zip:

http://puu
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Don't save that link because I will delete that file after one or two days.

I'll keep working on the HQ version of chapter 61. I'll leave a download link in the scanlation thread when I'm done. I will also submit it to batoto and delete the LQ version.

Thanks for the chapter, OP.

Oh anon, if you want to do some omake, I have some scripts here

>>153593296
Sure. But I'll need both the scripts and the raws, unless the raws are in the mega folder.

>>153593350
https://mega.nz/#F!I4JlGAYA!5sSbMO6SajFI9YSHGLsSnw

40.5 is there, have 56.5 somewhere so I'll put it up then

>>153593587
>40.5
>56.5
Holy shit, son. How comes nobody has edited them? It's been a while since those chapters were released.

>>153593723
40.5 got skipped by Norway, my old TS's computer died before he could finish 56.5

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>>153583931
>you damn heretic

>>153583967
Where can I get a magic text-changing shirt like Hina's?

>>153594074
Are you sure you want one of those? People would know your feelings, anon. You won't be able to keep secrets.

>>153584135
Is this a jojo reference?

>>153584611
I hope nitta didn't get aids from this

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Please dont mind me, just posting best girl.

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Extra from chapter 45

I started posting this in the scanlation thread by mistake. Sorry.

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>But Mika likes it better than the ready made things too, right?
>ready made things
What? Precooked meals?

>>153596518
Nitta is such good housewaifu material.

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>>153596214
>satsugai

>>153596716
Where did he go so wrong?

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What does it say at the bottom of the page?

>>153596939
Are you implying that Nitta is not the embodiment of perfection?

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And this is the last page. Mr translator, if you're there, please go over the script one more time.

>>153596973
End

I'll go put up 56.5 now I guess.

>>153596145
Panel 2 bub 1: Shouldn't you be doing the cleaning?

>>153596214
Pan 6: (Yeah, you can replace 'ready made things' with 'precooked meals')

>>153596399
Pan 6 bub 1: Dad, you also managed to do this stuff while being on the job.

>>153596678
She kinda looks like Hina. Since the espers are from the future, it's possible that she's Nitta or Mika's decendent.

>>153596551
Panel 1 bub 1: Hey Nii-chan, can't we eat breakfast later?
Pan 2 bub 1: I want some time after we eat to do the laundry.
Pan 2 bub 2: If you're gonna complain, I won't make anything.
Pan 7 bub 2: That was close.

>>153596678
Pan 5 bub 2: With you and that dojo you go to.

>>153596716
Pan 6: By the time I noticed it, I was able to do everything.
Pan 7 bub 2: ...... I see.

>>153596766
Pan 6: I've already decided on this.

If there's something you don't get, run it by me.

>>153597590
Why is Anzu a miracle of the universe?

>>153597381
>>153596678
>yfw Hina is Mika's Grandgrandgranddaughter

>>153596399
Why does his late dad look so much like the mafia dumb badass dad guy

>>153597750
To make Nitta suffer for not picking her up when he had the chance. But the relationship he has with Hina is really nice too..

>>153597836
I was wondering the same thing. Maybe they're long lost brothers or something.

>>153596973
I guess I have to move out.

>>153597836
That was bugging me too.

>>153596214
What does the text on her shirt say?

>>153597959
Murder.

Done. It's waiting to be approved.

http://puu
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I'll go to sleep now since it's 4:50 AM. I'll edit the other omake tomorrow. I'll make a new Hinamatsuri thread if there isn't one already.

>>153598222
Okay. I'll try and put them up later. Have a good rest

>>153584433
I was here for the text trans. This is still great, though.

Well I lost my 56.5 script somewhere, so I could do it here later

>>153584789
like a fucking flute. hinamatsuri is truly a treasure.

>>153584676
It's a cultural reference to Violence Jack manga I think

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>>153589592
H-hawt.

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>>153589592
Hinamatsuri rape mindbreak doujin when?

Thank you for more Hinamatsuri!

>>153596973
Do these pages come naturally with this gray color outside the panels or did the cleaner not level outside them too?

>>153602068
They wouldn't be so smoothly/uniformly grey if the cleaner forgot about them.

>>153602068
It's what marks the omake from the actual chapters.

Not gonna lie, Nitta has inspired me to be more organized and cleaner at home.
He has his shit together, mostly.