Hinamatsuri

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Also, can somebody translate what it says on the right side of the page?

>>153428007
I was just going to do it OP Do you need help for typesetting?

>>153428055
I don't think you should bother with that side text.

>>153428786
>>153428360
>1.75 mb
>1.41 mb
How do you save that?

>>153428981
Grayscale, quick export as png.

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>>153429072
Use PNG-8 for format, adaptive for palette, diffusion for dither type, and dither at 100%. 17 Colors; interlaced off; transparency off, white matte, and 0% web Snap.

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>>153429300
How do you get to those options?
The original jpg images are already 8 bits per channel, and it's selected in photoshop, but the exported images are 32 bits per channel for some reason.

>>153429545
Files ---> Save for the web

Your strong AA is fucking disgusting and the font is bad. Also, your line breaks are terrible.

>>153428007
So are you doing or are you shitposting? Because I have someone else in line and I told them to start on 62 now.

>>153428055
It says
>Mao was using her telekinesis as an advertisement for Superhuman Fitness, but...

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>>153430272
No. I got tired of the shitposting so I started doing it myself.

>>153429545
Keep going

>>153431714
Is she OK?

>>153431852
Has she ever been OK?

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>>153430272
By the way, thank you for the translation, anon.

>>153432034
No problem. I'm working on it anyways.

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WHAT THE FUCK? I don't know what is going on anymore.

I am reading the chapter as I'm typesetting it, by the way.

>>153432714
They'll never believe her.

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I thought they were form an alternate dimension or something like that.

>>153433058
The rock'n'roll retard always make me laugh.

>>153432714
>Future
Is this some kid of development in my Hinamatsuri manga?

>>153433058
You're doing this live?

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Jesus christ. I hate redrawing. But I feel accomplished when I get an ok result, like this one.

>>153434171
Yes.

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I feel sorry for her.

>>153434757
kek

>>153431714
Oh god, she's lost it.

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>>153435991

>>153435633
>Woooow

Oh Hina, dickish as always. But that's why we love her.

>>153428007
You mind if I run some TL checks over this?

>>153436871
Sure. I'm not the original translator, so I don't know why you're asking me, though. Here you have the script:

https://desuarchive.org/a/thread/150120139/#150120235

>>153437019
Because I am the original translator. I need to ask since you're the one typesetting now

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>>153437088
I see. Go ahead.

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I don't really know what to do with this page. I guess I could redraw the sfx. What does it say? Something like "slide" or "open"?

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Same thing goes for this one.

>>153437223
It's the sound of his snoring, not the door sliding. See the second panel on >>153437265

>>153435633
>What have you been doing after they created us
Is this right? Sure it's not "after you created us (as dolls)"?

>>153437265
>>153437223
no, let it like this or just typeset it near it

>>153437411
Weren't espers created by an organization?

>>153435991

Fuuuuuuck I really want to be there for Mao, holy shit so pure!

This series lost a lot of it's charm when they got turned into highschoolers.

>>153437461
It's just the "What have you been doing" part at the beginning that's throwing me off. Since it's not like Mao went this crazy right after they were created as child soldiers and they knew each other even back then.

>>153435991
She's lost it.

>>153437769
it got much better you mean.

I agree with >>153437769
I liked it better before the timeskip.

>>153438875
>If the come back in secret
Minor typo here. 'the' should be 'they'.

>>153428007
whats the font used for the talk bubbles?

>>153438907
C'mon. C'MOOOOOOOON

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>>153438944
Astro City for normal talk. Zud Juice for shouts.

>>153439065
AAAAAAAAAAH

>>153439039
Thank you...i'm doing my own comic and all the font i used has been stupid.

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>>153438918
Thank you, anon.

>>153429545

>jpg

Are you using sen manga raws or something? There are better scans out.

>>153439429
I'm using the raws from >>153437019

>>153428007
This is cool.

>>153432714
So they did came from the future. I was never certain about that.

>>153435991
God damn i want to feel bad for Mao but this is hilarious.

>>153439823
I am not sure about that, anon. Maybe she made that part up. It doesn't make sense for future earthlings to send back espers. And then there's the paradoxes... Maybe it's from the future, but from another dimension...

>>153437769
On the contrary for me, them being older made it open to more possibilities.

>>153439354
the fucking faces

>>153428360
Pan 3 bub 2: No matter what circumstances we're in, this is just...

>>153429545
Pan 1 bub 1: All the recent TV coverage...
Pan 1 bub 2: ...doesn't have anything to do with fitness, right?

Pan 3: Mao-sama, these will be very useful to us for advertising purposes.

>>153431218
Panel 5 bub 2: It's gotten much more severe.

Panel 6 bub 1: We should remonstrate the normal Mao-sama about her speech and conduct from now on.
Panel 6 bub 2: Sounds fair.

>>153431714
Panel 1 bub 2: But it can't get any better because I haven't told them the truth...

>>153432470
Pan 4 bub 1: I'm not sure if you'll believe me.

>>153434381
Pan 4 side 2: This will definitely turn out well!

>>153435633
Pan 3 bub 2 part 2: It may be irrelevant now, but you should try to keep this a secret anyways.

>>153435991
Pan 4 bub 1: Every night, they listen to all the things I did that day,
Pan 4 bub 2: And they're always kindly supporting me.

>>153440114
What possibilities?

>>153440166
The old guy shipping Hina.

>>153440166
Like that one part with Mao meeting the woman and all the babies and being all "What" wouldnt be as funny if she was still a child, for example. Or that one last chapter with the guy who wants to confess to Hina.

>>153440234
And Hina working in the cafe.

>>153437146
Pan 3: Nobody ever understands me.

Pan 6: Now you two are the only people who understand me!!

>>153438127
Pan 2 bub 1: We need your decision here too, Mao-sama!

>>153438875
Panel 3 side 1: If they come back in secret while Baldy is sleeping,

>>153440234
Well Hinamatsuri ultimately isn't a static manga. It moves with time. And the author closes some doors to open others. The personalities we all loved before also changed, so it was bound to happen eventually.

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>>153440234

That was golden.

>>153439993
They were trying to dispose of Hina. It's just that she got sent to the wrong time period.

Once they found this out, they sent back Anzu and Mao to try and retrieve her.

>>153440513
Pan 4: Baldy-san is going insane because of me!!

>>153440755
I wonder if Mao mastered ventriloquism after doing this all these years.

>>153440897
Maybe she could make money doing that

>>153441232
Brofist of powah

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And this is the last page.

Thank you >>153440119 >>153440271 for the corrections.
It's 3:50 AM so I'm going to bed. I'll make the changes tomorrow and I will make another Hinamatsuri thread at around 12 PM New York time with the corrected pages. I will also try to clean them a bit more.

I've heard that the raws of chapter 62 are already out. If you link me to them and pass me the script, I'll edit the chapter and post it here like I've done with this one.

Good night, and thank you for your patience.

>>153441754
You're the best man. Thanks.

>>153441754
Thanks.

>>153441754
That's all corrections from me.

As for 62, dancefag says he wants to do it, so I let him. If he doesn't get to it, I'll let you know in the next thread. But you're free to take over from 63 onwards.

You want sen raws or scanned raws?

>>153441232
E. T.?

>>153441754

Domo

>>153441754
Thanks dude.

I wonder if the organization they were a part of just considered them all dead since they haven't sent anyone else in 3 years.

>>153442040
Well, they have that baby mama lady who's supposed to send them reports. She, at least, was still capable of returning to her time. Not sure if she sent them reports, though, or if when she told Hina that she had to return back to the future, she did it on her own initiative after completing her examination of Hina's mental and emotional state.

>>153442092
Well she helped Anzu and Mao get rid of their collars before, so I assume she doesn't wanna leave either

>>153442141
I mean, that was like after she settled on staying in this time period.

>>153441754
Thanks a lot for your work anon, i love this series.

>>153441754
Thanks anon.

Waiit... the espers came from the future??

>>153443422
They escaped from the reign of the Dark Lord Nitta.