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Mahou Shoujo Ikusei Keikaku

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Feed the machine anon! You'd do it for me won't you?
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>>153211216
We still don't have a clear idea of what it does do we?
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>>153211274
It allows us to be with puc puck forever.
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Will there be Limited manga after Restart?
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>>153211274
nope, we just know she wants to use MG from her faction as fuel to activate it and it will supposedly save LOM somehow
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>>153211371
Hopefully; I need to see those villains in motion.
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>>153211383
Didn't the previous chapters mention that the device is meant to fuel endless magical power, so that Puck can puck all MGs in existence at once?
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>>153211786
That might be it, I forget if it was stated explicitly
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>>153211274
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We need more Miss Margerite fan art.
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>>153212439
I only have the one
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How likely is it for Laz I to be Caspar Sage?

Why would she create manmade MGs even though she hates the concept of MG?

Why is Pythie working with someone like that when her goal is to create ideal MGs?
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>>153212480
>inb4 she's a lesbian
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>>153212526
we don't have enough info at this point to know, we'll probably either get some more info in the epilogue or the next novel
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>>153212595
thats why all of her stuff is crooked despite her power
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>>153212526
>How likely is it for Laz I to be Caspar Sage?
The way she chooses successors is really odd compared to the other sages. Why would she hide the fact that she's doing it or need to pull strings to make it happen? And they exist simultaneously. Caspar is known as the most laid back faction, that doesn't add up if she actually hates magical girls. If she were a sage I'd also expect characters like Pfle or Pythie to keep more distance. She strikes me as someone in a Cranberry type position. I also wouldn't be surprised if their involvement with Caspar was completely faked.
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>>153212226
Your consistent sketches are inspiring.
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>>153213545
I try
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>>153213174
Her successors don't have to be reincanation vessels. She might just really like the name Lapis Lazuline and wants to see it prosper.

Note how she only chose magical girls dressed in blue and have "Blue" in their name to match with hers (lapis lazuli = deep blue stone), instead of just going by strength and magic. That signifies some degrees of vanity.

And she doesn't hide the fact that she has a successor from LoM. She erased that human girl's memory because it's a crime for a MG to reveal secrets to humans. If any of her enemies used that small crime as an excuse to investigate her other business, it'll be troublesome.
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>>153213698
How could Lady Proud molest this jailbait in public and still be a top-brass in the government?
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Lazuline I is evil but I can't fault her taste in disciples.

Her disciples have top-tier taste in girlfriends too. I wish somebody would draw the 4 of them going out on a double-date,
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>>153214028
She's not evil, she's doing what it takes to make a pure heroine in an impure world.
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>>153214073
We don't know what her objective is. We only know she hates MGs.

And she's evil because she's My Lady's enemy.
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>>153213811
I have no clue either...
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>>153214726
Wrong cheeks!
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>>153213811
From what we've seen, any random MG you see could be anything from a little girl to a grown man to a turtle
I'm sure that after a while you stop thinking about it, cause who knows what they are when they're untransformed
Who knows if the MG you hang out with at work isn't just a pet snake?
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>>153215009
As government officials, their identity should be well known.
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>>153215009
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>>153215505
Now draw Miyokata shouting Japanese phrases
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>Ṣalīl' aṣ-ṣawarīm našīdu al-ʻabāh
Death to the Infidel Glassianne!
>Wa-darba al-qītali ṭarīqu al-ḥayāh
Today we shall be with Puck-sama in Paradise!
>Fa-beīn aqtiḥāmi yubīd iṭ-ṭuġāh
Allahu Puckbar!
>Wa-kātīmu ṣawti jamīli ṣadāh
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZQoJvI8XUa0
ALLAHU PUCKBAR!
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My wives Swim2 and Nokko-chan are so cute.
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>>153216217
How do we arrest Quake?
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>>153215584
I don't know what she should say.
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>>153216366
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>>153216316
You don't, you join her instead.
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Its time to awaken my masters.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XUhVCoTsBaM
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>>153216387
Ryuu ga waga teki wo kurau!
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>>153216552
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I just finished JOKERS.

I got into reading the Ikusei LNs because I read through spoilers once that JOKERS is about veteran Magical Girls facing off against a hivemind Man-Made Magical Girl army. An army consisting of Man-Made Magical Girls that are able to instantly transmit their thoughts to one another, like the six Pains in Naruto or something. The story would play out much like Alien (the one with Arnold Schwarzenegger) as they are all hunted down, one-by-one by the perfect killing army, trying to conceal their presence and take out the enemy in some kind of urban jungle environment.

Unfortunately, while the story was most certainly interesting, that's not what happened at all. The army was a hivemind and Joker Shufflin could control his men manually so it was kind of what I wanted but at the same time, not really, I think the biggest thing that threw me off was that the Man-Made Magical Girls were on the GOOD side. They were HEROES. The only hint I got to what I wanted to see out of JOKERS were the Magical Girls that invaded Pfle's mansion. Apparently, they moved like puppets? Then again, if the demons/disruptors that the MMMGs were fighting against were Mao Pam's wings then perhaps those puppets were based off of Leonetta's power?

Also, just to clarify: Ripple doesn't remember anything at all as Stuntchica? How did she get her arm back as Stuntchica? How did Pythie supposedly give her own arm to Ripple?
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>>153216611
Shufflin is a man-made magical girl too though, albeit, a different kind than the Elements.
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>>153216611
>Ripple doesn't remember anything at all as Stuntchica? How did she get her arm back as Stuntchica? How did Pythie supposedly give her own arm to Ripple?
This Ripple is basically a completely different person. Pythie can stick her arm through the crystal ball, popping out of the stump. It'd take a stupid amount of coordination but that's part of what makes the twist fun.
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>>153216611
Pythie was using her arm to act as Stuntchica's arm, since they shared a field of vision, it wasn't too difficult.

Also to answer your question, Shufflin are actually man-made magical girls as well, that gets revealed in the next arc, and there are actually a good amount of variety among man-made magical girls, you get introduced to more of them later
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>>153216611
curios to know what you thought of the fights and characters in Jokers, also whats your arc ranking so far?
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>>153216919
I'm probably the only one here who appreciates this
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Who should the next animal magical girl be?

I've been wanting a unicorn themed magical girl that's actually a narwhal. And goes around making loud whale sounds.
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>>153217614
in terms of the animal being the pre-magical girl form or animal-themed magical girl? If the former, then we gotta get a cat magical girl
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>>153217614
Chicken
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>>153216919
These are great, anon, keep it up!
Maybe you can make one for group Clantail too
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>>153216719
Well, I guess I'll keep reading to find out more.

>>153216749
I suppose, with the complete memory wipe, Ripple truly is dead. This is depressing but I can accept this.
The twist you just revealed to me sounds like complete bull. I could tolerate Hana losing her hearing because her outer ear was cut off but this is getting ridiculous now. I guess I shouldn't have asked that question though since the reveal of the twist would've been cool.


>>153216757
Alright.

>>153216816
JOKERS was very interesting to me. All the other arcs took place over several days or weeks. JOKERS was basically a raid taking place in hours. It was a really intense rollercoaster. Unfortunately, I didn't really give a damn about any of the characters beyond any short-term entertainment they may have provided. I can't remember any details about some of them. I think Tempest was the youngest one. I can't even remember what happened to Tempest. I think she may have been the first to disappear so yeah, I barely felt any emotional attachment to the characters as too many new characters were introduced in such a short frame of time. Due to aforementioned reasons, I really liked Stuntchica and Marika and I hoped Filuru would have a happy ending as I did get attached to her. It's a shame that she doesn't make it in the end. My favourite fight was definitely the first encounter with the Ace of Spades. (After Inferno and Quake's I mean)
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You are my Bluebell, my only Bluebell
You make me happy, when skies are grey
You'll never know dear how much I love you
Please don't take my Bluebell away
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>>153216816
My arc ranking would be:
JOKERS > Restart > Limited
I didn't read the first book since apparently, the anime covers that anyway.

Like I said, JOKERS was basically like a Magical Girl version of The Raid or the Judge Dredd movie that came out (2012). I loved it. Restart is better than Limited in my eyes because it took me into a fantasy landscape which I found quite vivid. The decayed urban landscape, the grasslands, the underground lake, it's all so beautiful to me. In my mind however, Limited seemed much plainer by comparison. If we're talking about landscapes though then JOKERS is terrible in the sense that I genuinely couldn't tell what the layout was at all. I drew a picture of what I could make out. I never really understood where everything was but I think it was like this? I might give things a re-read.
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So, I was wondering while I drew this, why did they equip desert warfare Shufflins with grenades but still gave them melee weapons?
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>>153218667
The Grenades are most likely a last resort.
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>>153219436
Please do not eat the Clantail
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>>153219436
>You will never eat Clantail's rump
Why even go on?
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SWRP got updated, I'm assuming its a V2
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>>153219622
DELET
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>>153220065
can you check?
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>>153219622
Even as a spider?
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>>153220454
I'm going through it now, it seems to be longer and have more detail, but I haven't read SWRP in ages so I'm not sure
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>>153220486
Spiders don't have rumps.
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>>153220486
Sounds like an adventure.
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>>153220486
I'd let her inject me with poison, wrap me up, and then feed me to our babies.
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>>153220065
It seems to be in first person perspective now.
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>>153220850
was it not before? Its been months
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>>153220948
TL-kun here!

I'm not one to hide my mistakes, and when I first wrote this months ago, I made the big blunder of only realizing that I was writing in third person when the story was in first person.

At that point, I had already written about half of the story, and when I was consulting with some readers, they said to just work it in third person until I finish QUEENS and just change it to first person after, rather than trying to rework everything.

Since a lot were okay with it at first, I decided, "okay, I'll fix the first person thing later on".

But it kept on gnawing at me cause I didn't like leaving it that way, so since I'm doing the resweeping early, I wanted to take care of SWRP the most.
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Posting a Princess Quake drawing someone requested a looooong time ago!
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>>153220518
Sure they do!
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>>153221138
Ah good to know, how are the side stories/Hell Games coming along?
>>153221187
Good work anon
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>>15322118
(looking at the finished drawing, it doesn't look like she's blushing enough as the requester asked, but I hope it's okay)
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>>153221264
Just give her tempest and she will blush.
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>>153221187
What's with the egypt motif?
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>>153221242
I have never laughed so hard in my life reading the first page of Hell Survival.

I could spoiler it here for you as a sneak peek if you'd like.
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>>153222126
King Tut was a child king, after all.
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>>153222173
please do, sounds good
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>>153222322
Part 1

A Magical Girl dressed in a black suit grabbed the microphone, and sat next to another Magical Girl in black...

…Who had a very high degree of… exposure…

…The Costumed Magical Girl cleared her throat.

“Alright folks, it’s officially time for the 36th Hell Survival Games to begin! Your announcer today will be me! Magical Girl Pammy! My co-commentator is someone I’m sure you’re all familiar with, the Headmistress of the Mao School herself, Mao Pam! Welcome to the show!”

“The pleasure is all mine… As you said, I am the Head of the Mao School, in charge of all the-”

“The Mao’s School is known for their specialty in the Hell Survival Games. The current one is going to be a modified game of ‘Tag’, correct? Are there any other changes to the 36th games?”

“Ah, yes… The ‘Tag’-like game. It’s actually-”

“You don’t have to tell me twice! I get you! This is so that everyone will know their strengths and weaknesses, right? An educational event where you have to aim for the top, right? The whole world will be watching, and despite having extreme participants who probably wanna just rampage around to get out pent-out stress, this isn’t a berserking event! That’s the appeal, right?”
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>>153222444
Part 2

“Yes, you see-”

“Ah! You’re right! There’s 2 differences between the old Survival Games! The first is that now, we’re accepting participants from outside the Mao’s School! Secondly, the arena itself is a lot wider! Due to the number of participants that’ll be competing, of course! Most of the time the area is small enough that you could probably fit a small village. Now, it’s large enough that you can easily fit a huge city! In order for participants to earn points, they need to earn a successful hit, whether it be from a punch, a kick, or anything like that! Oh, there’s a third difference too! For these games, we’re recording it LIVE for the first time! Finally, the fourth difference, we are going to have commentary for you viewers at home! The fifth, and this is the most interesting difference, is that the winner will get PRIZE MONEY! In all the Games that I’ve seen, we’ve never awarded prize money before. So a lot of participants will be in it to win it, for that sweet cash pri- Oh, I’m so sorry, I’ve been rather rude just now.”

“Well now-”

“I almost forgot the participants that couldn’t make it into the games. We’ve attracted a lot of Magical Girls seeking out glory for many reasons. Fame, honor, strength! Many of them gathered, but only some could be admitted to the games! The footage shot Live today will be edited at a later time, to be sold to the public of course! For the Participants, for those who were unfortunately eliminated in the prelims, and for any Magical Girls out there who are adore strength, please do buy our releases, by all means! Limited Edition copies will also be available soon! As a special Limited Edition offer, we’ve enclosed several interview collections and photographs of participants you will see today as they were taken before the games! As well some extra goodies as well!”

“…It’s not just a bargain, I’d say it’s a steal.”
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>>153222173
post your loots!
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>>153222460
>>153222444
poor Mao Pam getting cut off by her own wing
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>>153222460
Kek, even the Magical World has limited edition goodies. I bet those blu rays are even more expensive then what the Nips have.

I'd buy it though, to get the Flame Flamey merch,
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>>153222717
Flame Flamey would get a Keychain at most, I'm in it for the Cutie Altair merch
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>>153222807
They must have made a killing off of Dark cutie buying all that.
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>>153223259
Dark Cutie had spent what little anime money she had remaining on a Cutie Altair Shrine
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>>153223242
Flame Flamey is really hot. I'd motorboat that frilly bra.
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I want to pet a Heart Shufflin while other Shufflins watch.
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>>153223897
I want to fuck one you mean.
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>>153223994
Don't lewd the Shufflin, please.
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>>153223994
>one
I'll fuck all 52
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>>153223897
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>>153224207
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>>153224254
these are all the Grim Heart pics I managed to find, for any GHfags, I'm sure there's at least one
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>>153224207
From the thumbnail I though Grim Heart was petting her. Oh, what a fool I am. I like those two, they're nice.
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>>153224081
I think we should
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>>153218370
Yeah, sure Deluge.
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>>153224468
We can't! They're not made for this. They're cute cards, you can't just go and lewd them!
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Not a day goes by where the thought of Onahole Shufflins doesn't go through my head.
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>>153224556
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>>153224820
SW's flower shall bloom soon.
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>>153224761
Don't inseminate the cards.
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>>153224946
Her flower has already been plucked by Puck
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Why is hairfag so great?
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>>153225054
cause she's humble and a cute pervert.
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>>153224853
So clothes can come off!
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>>153225054
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>>153225105
Stop, the Shufflin is pure. Keep going.
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>>153225054
Her hair fetish is amazing and for raping both SW and Deluge's partners.
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>>153225170
>the Shufflin is pure

More like pure murderers.
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>>153225313
Deluge, stop posting.
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>>153225170
pure shit
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RAPE ELVES
REMOVE PYTHIE
STAP PFLE
STRANGLE DELUGE
FUCK PUCK
KILL THE REMAINING SAGES
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>>153225446
And love the Shufflins!
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>>153225472
Mass produce onahole shufflins!
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>>153225527
Shufflins are innocent people. We need to fight for their Rights!
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>>153225446
BEFRIEND ELVES
SERVE PYTHIE
SUPPORT PFLE
BREAK DELUGE'S HEART
FUCK PUCK
ALLY WITH CASPAR
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>>153225380
REMOVE DELUGE. PURE ELEMENTS GENOCIDE BEST DAY OF MY LIFE.
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>>153225586
Off with her clothes!!!
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>>153225616
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>>153225591
They're mute and need a master to direct them. I will care for them and they will care for my dick.
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>>153225599
BBC pls
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>>153225640
Taking care of a mind broken Deluge for six months were the best in mine Shufflin so I thank you for that.
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>>153225658
You're a fool. I'll take care of them, as a mother would take care of her daughter. You're not fit for having Shufflin.
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>>153225222
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>>153225616
>>153225656
Incredibly cute, my friend!
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>>153225796
>implying you can do anything about the Shufflin in my rape dungeon for my Magical Girl Breeding Project
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Meanwhile I will MARRY Mariko over here.
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>>153225926
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>>153225926
What is Marika even doing now, punching tanks? plant researching? or maybe going on magical girl hunts like SW?
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>>153225863
There's nothing else to do than laugh at your ridiculous delusions. The Shufflins are safe with me, away from you, you creep.
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I want to kidnap the Shufflin army and take them to my lesbian sex dungeon where they will learn how to pleasure a woman.
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Off to nemurinland, oyasumi anon.
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>>153225991
>>153226009
I like to think she's trying to be a normal human being and looking for a husband but taking the occasional vacation to punch ISIS in the face.
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>>153226158
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What kind of interactions do you want to see in another Nemurinland Drama CD if there is one?
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>>153226233
Deluge/BBC
Dark Cutie with guest appearance by Cutie Altair
CQ Angel Hammer and either Grim Heart or Lethe
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>>153226233
elves
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>>153226136
I want to take a whole squad of Shufflins off into the woods and burn down a Vietnamese hamlet. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t9eybY9qFfY
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>>153226233
Grace/Kayo peg girl antics, Pukin sekuhara of Wedin (and jelly Sonia), more Kafuria, and Marika.
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>>153226136
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>>153226460
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>>153226309
Clearly we hadn't kicked your ass enough.
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>>153226363
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>>153226233
Post-betrayal Deluge seeing another Bluebell and immediately asks her questions and the ideal Bluebell just tells her that she isn't the real one. After awhile, sees the real Bluebell but this Bluebell is the one who doesn't have her memories yet Deluge doesn't know it so she immediately runs to her and pins her on the ground and asks everything with Bluebell just giving off a scared expression due to how forceful Deluge is being.
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>>153226309
>you will never kill filthy, disgusting Vietcong and Commies with Shufflins
>Fortunate Son will never play in the background as you mow down poor Vietnamese villagers as the Shufflins hunt down and mutilate the children
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>>153226484
>Implying it wasn't all because of subversive pinko politicians back home who wouldn't do the right thing and still are corrupt.
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>>153226485
>"My Magical Skill is not all-powerful. It only works on one target at once. If I use it on a new target, the effects on the previous target will be terminated."

>As Pukin said this, she caressed the chin of the girl in the bridal outfit who was attending her. The girl moaned softly from the depths of her throat, rubbing her body against Pukin's. Not half an hour ago, she had been an enemy, but now she was part of Pukin's harem, standing by her side and eager to please. Every time she and Sonia locked eyes, they glared angrily at each other, neither willing to back down.
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>>153226713
Of course not, since you get annihilated anyway just like the Shufflins. Sasuga Shufflin Hunter from Hell.
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>>153226778
The day the Shufflins rebel against their Osk overlords is the day Joker Shufflins returns with Grim Heart's head and someone manages to assume leadership of all the Shufflin IIs in a mass rebellion to overthrow the Land of Magic for an independent state for Shufflins.
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>>153226839
"What.. what are you doing, Joker?!"
"Relieving you of command."
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>>153226776
>standing by her side and eager to please
>angrily
>neither willing to back down
These weren't in the Jap RAW.
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>>153225926
>>153225991
Are there more Mariko pictures?
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>>153226910
Mine are at home.
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>>153226902
I was translating from the official CN. This is what it says:

>谱金如此说,并抚摸著随侍在一旁的新娘礼服少女的下颚。少女一脸愉悦地从喉咙溢出一丝满足的轻叹,将身体靠向谱金。三十分钟前还处于敌对立场的少女,如今成为谱金后宫的一分子,随侍在侧。每每与索妮雅对上视线,两人就会彼此怒瞪,互不相让。

The text in question comes from the tail end.
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>>153227236
I wish I could be Pukin's wife. I want to be her good girl so bad.
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Was unmarked fully translated or did he forget to translate a third of all the internal monologue like in restart? Because i don't remember akane having any thoughts or miyokata interacting with her.
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>>153226910
Also this is a very stupid question but do any of you knows anime girl who looks like Mariko? I'm digging that look.
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>>153227259
Leave this place, homewrecker.
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>>153227387
I remember Miyokata interacting with Akane. I read Restart last week before he did the V2s.

All her interaction that I saw was the fangirling thing where she went "HARAKIRI" and stuff though
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>>153227532
Sonia gonna get cucked!
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>>153227389
Mariko is basically a school nurse type. But congrats on your excellent taste.
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>>153212385
She is crazy but not stupid. Outside of the CM meeting before the death game began, she never purposely seeked out needless danger anymore. She was single-mindedly trying to be an ideal heroine who solves conflicts through peaceful method. Read the book.

>>153212700
The point of that blogger wasn't "Nana is a good person." It's that she's a more interesting character than the anime's goody-two-shoes retard.

Nana is a very calculated woman, not someone who got herself and her lover killed due to garbage trust. She isn't a bad person either, because she doesn't want to harm anyone. She just isn't interested being a hero for anyone other than Winterprison. If Winterprison is alive, Nana will continue being altruistic, if not, then other people's problem is not her business.

And that is something completely natural. She might haven't done good things completely out of selflessness, but she still did them for a long time. Reasons are irrelevant in this context. You simply can't ask people to sacrifice endlessly for strangers just to be labeled a "good" person.
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>>153227387
Miyokata was shown to interact with Akane in the old translation and Akane did get to have more to say before holding Pechika by the neck in the new one.

In the old one, Miyokata said “Geisha!!! Harakiri!!! Bamboo Pole!!!” compared to the new one which is “GEISHA! HARAKIRI! GENCHUU DE GOZARU!”
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>>153227183
The CN version made up the parts I pointed out. Just saying.

I mean, it's possible to interpret Sonia and Wedin were being more visibly hostile, but the original text (Pythie's POV) only said that they were glaring at each other everytime their eyes met. We don't know whether it's an unreadable blank stare, whether they were both angry, or whether Wedin was being smug to provoke Sonia.
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>>153227692
In the Magicaroid side story Sister Nana pulls robojew aside just to ask her for dangerous places she could take Winterprison so she could be rescued by her. That's not normal behavior or heroic behavior, it's pathological.
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>>153227889
Hm, I'll have to go back and check, then. Some guy linked a bunch of the transcribed CN TLs which I saved onto my phone but my hardcopies of the JP are at home.
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>>153227916
I just said she wasn't heroic. Especially not in the Maru incident.

Psycho behaviour also has nothing to do with stupidity. Both Cranberry and Swim have a few screws loose, but their ability to formulate a coherent plan of action remain intact. They were smart and calculated, just like Nana.
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I want to marry pechika!
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>>153228049
>walking into enemy territory when death games are active
>smart
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>>153228121
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>>153228131
She was trying to increase the chance of survival through peace treaty, retard. Not just for herself but for everyone too, because she also doesn't want people to die.
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>>153228121
Chika or Pechika?
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>>153227961
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>>153228172
>doesn't want people to die when the admin has declared death games
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Fat people are evil!
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>>153214028
How does her braids work?
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>>153228206
Yeah, I see it now. They just looked at each other.
In my headcanon they will always be jelly of each other.
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>>153228212
That's why she were trying to unite all magical girls, to see if any of them can figure out a way to contact LoM and report Cranberry, while also halting the killings in the meantime.

You don't understand the plot at all, do you?
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>>153228170
What if pechika was just how chika would like if she was a little older
>>153228181
Both senpai
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>>153228237
She probably just has really long hair for it to work.
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>>153228292
Pechika and Chika look around the same age. That's why she could use the Pechika look to walk around the school ground and meet Ninomiya.
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>>153228268
If only one of them was friends with an outside contact with LOM connections.
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>>153228212
I mean in the end all it would have taken was killing Cranberry or otherwise contacting the LoM. There was other solutions than seeing the game to completion.
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>>153228349
I'm fairly sure Cranberry and Fav knew how to make N-city a sealed place. Such as threatening to eliminate anyone who tries to leave its premise.

Many test participants must have tried to contact LoM before, and nobody succeeded.
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>>153228268
>>153228368
>Magical
>FUCKING
>Phones
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>just finished volume 2
In the middle I was thinking this was a bit weaker than volume 1, but then Melville turned out to be the traitor, then that became well, Pfle, who else?, then Clantail?, then oh shit it was Shadow Gale herself then wait it really was Pfle. that doesn't make sense though then "someone who’s been manipulating our emotions this whole-" aaaaaaaaaa

sorry for the blogshit, but I needed to.
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>>153228450
Magical barriers are explicitly shown to be very difficult to set up, requiring a lot of energy. Hell, even in Pukin's side story the guy needs to pay off some shithot mage to seal his house off.
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>>153228239
Sonia WAS jealous. She's a very timid girl who was said to be unable to meet people's eyes when talking to them. Yet she and Wedin had constant staring contest.

Wedin was harder to tell. Was she jealous too, or smug, or blank?
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>>153228504
Funny enough, they were hints about the real culprit all along.
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>>153228483
The phones were blocked from contacting anyone outside the city.

Holy shit just shut up already if you hadn't watched nor read the shit.
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>>153228636
So what the fuck use is an alliance at that point?
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>>153228597
Might have been jelly/smug, I think. She was clearly emoting from Pukin's touch.
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>>153228533
Who the fuck said it needs to be a barrier? Setting up a barrier would in fact draw LoM's attention.

Fav always know where each of the participants are, because it resides in their phone. If they attempt to leave, he would eliminate them. It's that simple.

Go rewatch the anime, if you don't bother reading. Suster Nana stated clearly that she wanted a union so that they can try to contact LoM.
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>>153228675
To see if anyone would have a useful magical skill to sneak past Fav's surveillance.
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>>153228786
Because someone like that would stay around and not fuck off whenever they could, right?

Because that justifies walking into danger and paying people to make your girlfriend an MG just so you can indulge your hime fantasy, right?

>this is what nanafags actually believe
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>>153228843
Not everyone know how useful their magical skill could be. Did you forget Tama, Pechika or Prism Cherry? That's why Nana was trying to reach out for everyone, brainstorm together, stop killing each other, and try to escape together.

That plan cannot work if they don't talk to people and cease fire. Sitting duck would only be waiting for eventual death. But it's a perfect course of action for retards like you.

Look at Pfle. She walked into enemies' territory and formed alliances with 98 girls during a death game AND came out alive. Meaning that it's possible to do. Nana just wasn't as skillful as Pfle and thus got outplayed, but the direction of her action was actually correct.
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>>153229010
>but the direction of her action was actually correct.
I agree, it was a good idea and it could have work if it wasn't by Nana being stupid and Swimswim taking any chance she can to kill someone.
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>>153229010
Pfle didn't form alliances with the 98 girls, she manipulated them into killing each other. And Nana had no basis for knowing that Swim2 was reliable. Then she went in there with numeric inferiority and without calling upon her so-called allies for help. She was just stupid, plain and simple.
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>>153229088
Nana wasn't being particular stupid. Winterprison will be killed no matter where the meeting was held.

Supposed Nana told Swim group to meet at her own house, and only two can come, then Swim can still neak the Peaky Angels with her by telling them to transform into something small.
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>>153229185
She manipulated them by forming alliances with them first. Did you even read? She got them to trust her, not killing her, and listen to her to attack other people.

Nana had no need to backstab. She just wanted the alliance part. And Pfle proved that it's possible to do.

Swim group wasn't anymore "visibly dangerous" than the other people like Mary or Cranberry or SW/Alice. Swim gave them candies during the second week, which could be interpreted as trying to do good by eliminating Ruler - the baddie who ordered the group to steal SW's candies.
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>>153229088
The road to hell is paved with good intentions, embarking on a noble cause when you're unable to see it through still won't save you. Except Nana was too caught up in her muh prince fantasy to realise that WP isn't omnipotent and that same fantasy meant that she threw away a fighting asset in herself just so WP could save her.

>>153229344
And did they actually know this? More to the point, Ruler is the leader of her gang and that leader mysteriously died of the least candies while all her teammates and the rest of the participants did not.

That ought to throw up a red flag for loyalty, but Nana ignored it.
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Uluru getting scared by a cat finished.

The thing I'm using to take screenshots isn't working so I had to use my phone instead, I'll see if I can fix it once I'm done at the gym.

Anon if you're here, I'm sorry I took so long.
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>>153229408
naisu bakuretsu
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>>153229408
Part 2
>tfw Sorami's hair ended up taking Sachiko's space
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>>153229408
That's really cute.
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>>153229408
Mini Dark QT is doing a good job scaring Uluru.
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>>153229472
>tfw Sorami's hair ended up taking Sachiko's space
That's bad luck for you.
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so is the anime a good adaptation?
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>>153229472
I like how Sorami is shown without a leg there.
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>>153229407
She wasn't caught up in muh prince fantasy during the death game. But I'm tired of trying to convince you retards to actually read the book instead of pulling stuff out of your ass. It's easier to persecute a character you already have a prejudice against.

>And did they actually know this?
Everybody knew Swim did a coup. They simply don't know the reason. Logically speaking, from an outsider's POV, there's no advantage for Swim's group to weaken themself by killing someone from their own group, when they could have easily killed SW (it makes it harder to kill other people in the future with 4 ppl instead of 5). So the only reason could be that they hate Ruler's action against SW. Which means they could be good people. And that's why Nana was willing to TALK first and see.
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>>153229582
You have a choice between a mediocre anime adaptation and a bad novel translation. Both butchered the original book.
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>>153229689
this is a bully free zone
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>>153229689
TL-kun is trying his best to fix everything.
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>>153229729
>fact is bully now
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When you realize everyone in this thread is borderline retarded
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>>153229772
What does that have to do with the fact that the current translation is bad?
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>>153229806
Fuck it never mind this entire board
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>>153229689
ah, I've already marathoned two volumes. How does the anime butcher it?
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>>153229818
Yes it is a rushed translation, but it's one guy doing 7+ books in his free time for our sake, thanks to him we got the gist of the plot at least, he mostly forgot unimportant dialogue sans for marika's survival which was left ambiguous at the end if not for the episodes.

Point is, you shouldn't be that hard on the guy, we're getting translated content for free, whenever it's a one man team you usually have to pay.
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>>153229806
>Everyone but me is a retard
Sure thing anon.
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>>153229621
>they betrayed their leader
>better try and ally with them

No wonder you like Nana, you're as retarded as she is.
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>>153229898
Skipping out Ripple's characterization, destroying SW's characterization, making some fights more retarded, showing the side-stories before every death which completeky killed the impact of character's revelation, skipping out on important monologues, adding SW's romantic inclination for LP.

That's on the top of my head. The anime did make some action scenes look good though.
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>>153230013
If the leader is a bad person, do you always think the betrayers are the bad guys when you know nothing about them and they had helped you once? Stop talking, retard.
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>>153211216
Can't wait to see her getting her just deserts
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>>153229955
Free effort is not ground for free-off criticism.

He didn't just mistranslate and leave off "unimportant" part. He left off a third of the book and made up stuff that wasn't there in the original. It would have been fine if only he labeled his work as "summary of the books" and didn't write his own fanfic.
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>>153230013
Nana's not retarded, just mentally ill. If it wasn't dangerous she'd be less likely to do it, because then her precious Winterprison wouldn't get chances to protect her.
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>>153230079
Sounds pretty bad.
>showing the side-stories before every death
Wow, really?

Guess I'll finish up the first episode and continue marathoning the ln
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>>153230127
not him, but there's a difference between being "the bad guys" and being untrustworthy.
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>>153230292
Yeah, I'd recommend watching the anime after reading the LN, since you now can enjoy the good bits without being fooled by the bad bits.
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>>153230270
>He left off a third of the book and made up stuff that wasn't there in the original.
What?
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>>153230327
Nana is on the mission to find a MG who can help everyone contact the LoM. She cannot ignore Swim's group just on the ground of dubious intention, because that completely defeats the point.

Why do you guts have trouble understanding "talking"? Without giving somebody a chance to explain themselves, nobody van sign any treaty and war would just go on. You cannot just coward away in your little cocoon and pray that death won't find you. People like Nana and Pfle prefer to actively do something.
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>>153230499
Yes. Read the previous threads.
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>>153230127
>ooh they gave me candies as part of a plot to make sure their leader had the least candies
>surely this means they are completely reliable, never mind that they were willing to backstab their leader and we're nowhere as important as said leader

The problem isn't that I haven't read the book, but that you are giving new and sadder meaning to the word "mentally defective"
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>>153230514
Different anon. But the main problem with Nana is that she was naïve. She constantly only thinks about the positives and never on the negatives and that is the difference between someone like her and Pfle. It doesn't help she also had a damsel-in-distress complex as well. Which made her believe if 'anything' bad did happen, it'll be fine since WP will be there to save her no matter what.
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>>153230573
>these people didn't kill an innocent girl, but kill their bad leader instead
>let's not talk to them because they surely must be baddies
The problem is that you're too obtuse to realize that the character wasn't what you imagined them to be.
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>>153230669
Because known traitors are trustworthy, right?

So you're stupid AND stubborn
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>>153230270
I thought we already went over and knew all this. TL-kun has acknowledged what he's done wrong and is going to make them right and has said he does not shy away from criticism.

I was and still am pretty stunned seeing the extreme differences in his translation from the original text, but he's said he knows what he did and is going to fix his mistakes.
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>>153230632
>naïve
>She constantly only thinks about the positives and never on the negatives
That's not how she is. The anime portrayed her poorly, read the book.

She is smart and calculated, and perfectly aware that people aren't all good. Heck, she is aware she isn't a good person herself, because all of her good behaviour (wanting peace, avoid fighting, feeling sorry for dead people) are mostly fabricated in order for her to be a good hero.

She doesn't care though, because as long as she could reach her purposes, it doesn't matter.
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>>153230815
People who betray the big bad and help the heros are trustworthy. Why are you this dumb? Are you really this mentally defected? Never read a fiction with herl-face villain before?

Stop posting,
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>>153230820
Again, what does that have to do with the statement "the current TL is bad"?
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>>153230960
Nothing? We obviously fucking know the current TL is bad, but he's fixing it. The end.
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>>153230931
>help the heroes
?
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>>153230931
In summary:
>Nana's not dumb because I say so!
>Why won't you believe me?!
>Stupid!
>Stop posting!

So basically you don't even have an argument any more. That's pretty sad, actually.
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>>153231084
Giving candies to everyone can be considered an act of good will while killing the tyrant, something like taking the money of a tyrant and giving it to the people after a revolution.
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>>153231007
Then don't drag the conversation on with needless posts. An anon told a newfag that the TL is bad, and that's the truth. Stop being butthurt and call it bully, then have the gall to excuse that it's not thaaaaat bad, when everyone knew it was really bad.
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>>153231110
You left-wing leaning parasite, you expect me to sit here and listen to your drivel?
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>>153231166
For some reason people seem to have an axe to grind against TL-kun despite him stating flat out that he wants to fix things.

Why not like, you know, point out where he went wrong? It would be a much more productive use of everyone's time.
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>>153231168
I'm not even that anon, I consider Nana's action to be right but made in a stupid way, but if you jump through loops and shit you could think of what Swimswim's team did like that.
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>>153231099
>didn't even know the concept of heel-face turn
>explain to him twice
>y u no explain
Nice try, faggot.
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>>153231110
Giving them back to Snow White would be an act of good will.
Redistributing them systematically to result in Ruler having the least is premeditated murder.

>taking the money of a tyrant and giving it to the people after a revolution
Ruler was not the tyrant over all of the magical girls.
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>>153231257
Well, if you have to go through so much tormented logic to justify it, it doesn't speak well of the person who actually believes it.
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>>153231291
Not to mention giving a tyrant's money to the people never actually happens IRL; it's fairytale only thing.

And it happened in order to kill Ruler, not after Ruler was dead.
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Okay guys I have just read the last 3 chapters of Restart and boy was that a ride indeed.

Fucking called it!!! At least with who killed Masked Wonder and @NyanNyan being Melville and Rionetta respectively. Didn't expect them to be in cahoots though. That whole battle with Melville was intense and Pechika managed to move into one of my favourites for this arc. Have to admit Melville was pretty boss to be able to kill Lapis whilst taking such a beat-down.

I also called them all being Cranberry test survivors (well almost since Lapis mk2 wasn't.) It took me completely by surprise that Pechika was actually a blood knight until she met Cranberry. That really did take me by surprise.

The way they threw around who the demon lord was made my head spin but it finally turned out to be Nokko-chan. Unfortunately I have an issue with this reveal. "Because it came out of nowhere and there wasn't any hints?" No not at all there were actually hints all along. The issue I have is with the narration, in that Nokko-chan was one of the POV characters. I never expected her because I saw things from her pov and for her not to mention she's the demon lord in her head just once is rather bs, just for the sole purpose of surprising the readers.

Keek was just a hypocrite in the end. Great work Snow White, a shame you didn't impale her but killing isn't your way of doing things.


I have a ton of other things I'd like to say but I don't want to drag on in one post. Overall I have to admit, I preferred Unmarked, until the last few chapters changed my mind.

Also here's my character ranking for Restart.

So the next thing for me now would be to read Episodes side stories.
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Ruler did nothing wrong!
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>>153231196
Telling a newfag that the TL is bad is a simple action.

You took that as personal offense, because you cocksuckers can't stand people speaking the truth.

And various moonspeakers had provided example translation together with the japanese pages, to show how bad the current TL is. The entire pages are different. Even chink anons with Chink TL confirmed that except for some general gist, the entire events and perspective had been vastly altered. And yet you still dare to cling on the beluef that it's not that bad whenever someone mentioned that it's bad.

TL-kun trying to fix stuff is fine and dandy. It just doesn't have anything to do with the simple truth that it's horrible right now. Are we clear?
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>>153231390
She went as far as to manipulate the reader's emotions anon and it worked.
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>>153231390
yeah episodes will definitely improve your opinion on some characters, also did you mean to post an image of your ranking?
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Yes I forgot to post the image.
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>>153231456
Why do you talk like an anime villain?
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>>153231390
I assume it focused on Nokko-chan during scenes where she was thinking about other things instead of her role, but yeah I guess that would be a valid complaint, still she thought often of making people happy and such as well because she was a good person, so I guess she didn't want to think about having to do awful things to survive
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>>153231390
You'll learn to hate elves more after reading Akane's sidestory anon.
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>>153231291
It was a premeditated murder, but necessary in order to eliminate a big bad.

Nobody knew how weak or strong Ruler was except for CM. for all everyone knows, she could have been an evil tyrant willing to kill everyone. If that had been the case, then Swim would be a hero for taking her out with wit. Which means she deserves a talk at the very least, to see where things go.
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>>153231456
You know, I'm the chink anon with the chink TL, and I'm wondering why the hell you're 1) assuming what I'm thinking 2) harping on the fact that it's bad when we ALL know it's bad

It's things like these that make me wonder if you, personally, have a grudge against TL-kun and if you can't stand anyone saying otherwise.
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>>153231474
pretty solid taste, if I can predict changes after side stories, I'd guess Akane will be higher, Rionetta will be higher, and maybe Cherna will be higher
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>>153231522
Calling out dishonest people is what baddies do, eh?
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>>153231474
>Lapis 3rd
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>>153231390
I do understand what you mean, but she was never that direct with her powers, so it didn't bother me much. If she actively sought out to kill someone or lead someone to murder then it'd be weirder, but she was just quietly doling out the emo-manipulation
Pechika shoots up everyone's list towards the end, no one can resist a final stand like that
Since there's the V2 of Restart coming out now, a reread might be fun, to spot the moments where it might've been Nokko-chan amping everyone up now that you know the big spoiler. That kind of stuff is pretty fun for me
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>>153231614
To be fair, Lazuline gets even more better in both her sidestories.
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>>153231651
True, true. Still, it seems he has inherited the universal dislike for Keek. I wonder if the V2s will make her better.
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>>153231390
What did you think of the survivors? Did you expect them?
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>>153231689
nothing can make Keek better
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>>153231574
>assuming what I'm thinking
You weren't the only chink anon here, buddy. Another one who informed us of the Taiwanese books had told us it's bad. There was one anon, I don't know if it was you, said that he tried to read Kurukuru Hime's POV and saw things completely different.

>harping on the fact that it's bad when we ALL know it's bad
Not everyone knew. It was brought up because a newfag asked, so somebody told him it's bad. The ridiculous ones were those who couldn't admit that it's bad and wanted people to not inform newfags of anything. You guys are mental.
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>>153231557
>for all everyone knows, she could have been an evil tyrant willing to kill everyone
>then Swim would be a hero for taking her out with wit
Or a fair and just ruler who's only looking out for the interests of her men
making Swim the conniving chancellor jealous for power

All they knew for certain was that Swim had betrayed once, and thus had the capacity to betray again.
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How did Pythie get Cherry's hair? I just finished JOKERS so if it's revealed later, that's fine.
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>>153231456
I mean from the V2 of Restart so far, it seems like you're blowing things out of proportion a bit, yeah its still bad and missing a bunch of stuff, but not entire events being completely altered
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>>153231828
Pfle gave it to her via 7753.
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>>153231828
something is revealed in Queens that basically answers this
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>>153231854
This, the events are the same, the difference is the dialogue, which makes me glad because I loved Miyokata in Restart, now I love her even more.
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>>153231828
Pfle was able to get it since she is head of Human Resources after all.
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>>153231752
>You guys are mental.
There you go again.
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>>153231874
it was probably Lazuline I actually, since she was the professor that made the PE and is working with Pythie
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>>153231854
yeah, not that its not currently bad, because it is, but you make it sound like we're reading something completely different and that its mostly headcannon, when from the V2s that have come out so far it seems more like what this anon is saying
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>>153231824
Exactly because she didn't know, that she wanted to talk. It's incredibly dumb to dismiss chances for an alliance just because of premature assumption. The "what if" was the key. What if Swim is a good person who saved everyone from a cruel Ruler? What if Swim group has someone with a useful ability to contact LoM?
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>>153231963
Then they would have contacted the LOM already.
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Did the V2s replace the original translations in the google docs? Since I marathoned volumes 1 and 2 yesterday and today.
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>>153231920
Wasn't Lazuline I only sending them letters and instructions and never appearing to them again? Deluge didn't remember her for that reason since she more or less appeared only once so she couldn't have gone to get Cherry's hair there.
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>>153232013
yeah it did
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>>153231957
I like how you guys don't know what the original looks like yet never failed saying it's not that bad. 5/5 Asspull Confidence.
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>>153232018
I think its implied that she was Professor Tanaka
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>>153231532
>>153231643
Honestly I don't think I would have had as much of a problem if we only got Nokko-chan's pov a couple of times like Melville did, but she had so many, its hard to imagine that she wouldn't have thought about her role as a demon lord once.

Have to be honest if I told my past self after reading Chapter 1 that Pechika would be one of my favourites, he would have laughed at me.

>>153231709
Pfle and Shadow Gale surviving together? Absolutely not. Seriously never in a million years would I have predicted these two to be survivors. When Shadow Gale knocked Pfle on the head with a wrench I was certain that she was dead. They were death flags for one of them to die, so yeah I'm genuinely surprised.

Clantail? Not as much, in fact I had a feeling she might be a survivor along with Bell. I was surprised that Bell, a detective was killed.
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>>153231963
>premature assumption
Swim (or Swim's group) having the capacity for betrayal was a known truth then.
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>>153232041
well ok, then are we wrong, is the V2 chapters of Restart that are out so far are also inaccurate, if they are accurate then we do have proof that you are exaggerating the difference, if they are still inaccurate, point out the inaccuracies to TL-kun and I'm sure he'll fix them and it would give proof to your argument
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>>153231390
>Pechika was a blood knight

What? What on earth is a blood knight? I don't recall anything like this. I thought Pechika just had a good sense of smell.
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>>153232098
the detective is never safe, as long as you ignore Danganronpa, where the detective is always safe
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>>153232098
>hard to imagine that she wouldn't have thought about her role as a demon lord once.
Anon, this technique is called unreliable narration, quite popular in mystery novels where the protagonist could be the murderer.

All of Restart was also unreliable narration, because most of them weren't themselves.
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>>153232067
Yeah that's pretty much what I meant, didn't she only appear to them once when they first became the PE? so she couldn't have gotten Cherry's hair by then.
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>>153232164
blood knight is basically someone that loves fighting
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>>153232186
She was with them pretty constantly until a few weeks before Jokers I believe, though I'd have to go back and check to be sure
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>>153232169
>Kaede
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>>153231390
I have to know: What on earth caused to suspect that Melville was the killer? Or that Leonetta had killed @NyanNyan? What could've given you that impression at those points in the story?
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>>153232136
I hadn't read V2 Restart.

The original talk was also about Unmarked TL, which doesn't have a V2. So you admit you went rapid because you didn't like someone is exaggerating, even though the TL is truly horrid.
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I would rather have a bad translation than no translation at all desu.
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>>153232345
Not that anon, but Melville sounds like motherfucking Predator and I figured out Nokko-chan being the culprit thanks to Miyokata's dragon.
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>>153232496
I only figured out the demon lord when SG discovered Nokko's burnt body.
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>>153232355
I'm a different anon than the one you were initially talking to, but no one is saying the TL is good as it is, all I'm saying is based on the current V2s that have come out, you are exaggerating the problem, that is a valid thing to call you out on
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I want to write poorfags ship fic now.

Any suggestion for a scenario? Can be in the canon timeline or Nemurinland.
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>>153232345

Regarding Melville check this post >>153149064 and for @NyanNyan check this one >>153177143
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>>153232658
they knew each other for a day max in canon, so it'd either have to be AU or Nemurinland
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>>153232665
by the way, you planning on Episodes next?
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>>153232658
Write a Quake loli harem instead.

http://blog.award2010.konorano.jp/archives/4835705.html

『カラフルプリティ ピュアエレメンツ』
第八話「私のマジカルハーレム」
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>>153232615
>you are exaggerating the problem
I'm not exaggerating anything. I had solely been talking about V1, and "made up TL together with one third of the book missing" is the truth.

>V2
I had not read, since there's only a coupke of Restart out. Are you a moonspeaker who has the credibility to confirm that it's closer to the original text? I have no trouble believing it has more infortion now, but how correct are those and whether there are still fake dialogue, can you confirm?
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>>153232704
They knew each other for a few days if not a week. It took days to clear the Wasteland area and they already arrived at Grassland.
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>>153232733
Yes, the next thing for me, will be reading the Episodes side stories before I move onto Limited.
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>>153232496
>Melville sounds like the motherfucking Predator
I know she talks weird but really? The predator? I thought she just sounded foreign like the other girl? Was it Miyokata? There was a girl that could talk to animals, I believe she was the foreigner. I believe she was also the owner of a... particular... hamster.

Nokko actually being the killer or demon lord was something I only lightly considered after the dragon incident. Even then, I had no other points of evidence so it was hard to take seriously. It sounds like, for you, at that point, this FINALISED your theory that it was Nokko all along. Explain that. What other oddities got your attention about her up until that point?


>>153232587
How on earth does that give it away? We don't know what Pfle could have been doing with the flamethrower that entire time since her behaviour hadn't really been covered. I want to see your reasoning.
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So if you reveal your magical girl identity, are you slated for death by the Land of Magic? Or was that just a Cranberry/Fav thing?

Also, did Swim Swim really have to kill Tama? I mean the twins, LP/SW and WW/SN knew each other's identities. And in the next volume, Bell and Lapis met each other after becoming magical girls. was Swim just overly paranoid at that point?
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>>153232658
As a popular tv celebrity, Daisy's working with the Make-a-Wish foundation to make sad children happy, and gets sent to help out Nokko-chan.

After the fun times, Daisy uses her media powers to get the medical bills paid. Or, maybe, Palette finally manages to get the money Daisy is owed, and Daisy donates it to Nokko instead.
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>>153232881
and Souta just lets it happen.
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>>153232894
Swim2 was just being overly literal with the will of Rulah.
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>>153232805
I am not, which is why I asked you in an earlier post to prove that there are inaccuracies in the V2 and point them out to TL-kun if there are so that he can fix them. From what I've seen of the changes to the V2, each new chapter so far adds somewhere between 7-12 pages, so yeah its a large amount of info, but not so bad that its a completely different story bad. If you wanna compare the current V2 with the raw and point out errors to fix thats fine, either way we're just going in circles at this point so no point in arguing about it
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>>153232894
Nah, its equivalent to signing an NDA, the worst that could happen to you is losing your magic and getting your memories wiped. And even then, it wouldn't surprise me if magical girls do tell some people, and the LoM either never finds out, or lets it slide.

In fact, there are at least a few normal humans who do know about magic, like the detective in Pukin's sidestory.

I recall it being said that the governments know about it.
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>>153232894
>did Swim Swim really have to kill Tama?
No she didn't. It was just Swim Swim's troll logic that killed Tama. Well honestly Tama would have met a far worse fate in the hands of Melville, so in a way, Swim Swim did her a favour.
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>>153232894
nah its not a slated for death thing, they'd probably just memory wipe, like in the Lapis side story
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>>153232940
Snow White was really insistent on confirming that he was 100% biologically female as a magical girl.
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>>153232946
>>153233020
>‘No one can know your real identity as a Magical Girl’. That was what Ruler had taught her. That was the rule.
Oh right, I see that now.
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>>153232982
In other words, all of us agree V1 was bad so it should be fine to say so if someone new asked. Agree? Then next time don't derail the thread, and don't explode in defensiveness as if someone kicked you in the balls.
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>>153233153
that wasn't me, yeah I agree that V1 is bad, and tell people if they ask, but don't discourage them from reading altogether
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>>153233153
>In other words, all of us agree V1 was bad

Mediocre would be more accurate.
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>>153233025
It still boggles me that the LoM had let someone know about the existence of the LoM and magical girls for two years until Lazuline I got to her.
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>>153233216
they might not have known that she knew
>>153233153
>>153233204
yeah mediocre is a better word for it
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>>153233216
LoM is not the kind of place that's fast at doing their stuff, fuck papers and shit.
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>>153232887
>How on earth does that give it away?
SG's hesitation gave it away, for me. Normally as soon as such a corpse showed up, the character would immediately realize what happened. Once you read enough mystery novel, you just develop that kind of sense for tempo in storytelling.

Thus the fact thar she was in doubt made me think there was gonna be a twist. Plus, never trust unidentified corpse.
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Does anyone have the link to Restart manga RAWs?
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>>153233204
>>153233253
It wasn't mediocre. At least not from all the examples that the moonspeakers showed and their assessment. It's bad.
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>>153232798
>一緒に魔法少女やってる子達がもう本当に可愛くて、
>身も心もとろけちゃいそう。
>『カラフルプリティ ピュアエレメンツ』
>第八話「私のマジカルハーレム」
So nips also agree Quake is a pedo?
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>>153233566
everyone agrees Quake is a pedo
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>>153233616
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>>153233566
https://boards.fireden.net/a/thread/152766667/#152768557
>Loves children, especially little girls.
>extremely fond of elementary school girls
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>>153233776
>The Japanese wikipedia describes Quake as “extremely fond elementary school girls” (????????????), with a click-link to the “Lolicon” (????) article.

Just amazing.
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>>153233776
I wonder if anon will translate more character profiles, I enjoy reading them.
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>>153233776
>doesn't show Japanese characters
I usually use this: https://desuarchive.org/a/thread/152766667/#152768557
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How do we cure Quake?
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>>153234116
After looking at Quake's sketchbook, Deluge decided to send Patricia after her ass.
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>>153234116
>>153224207
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>>153234116
Let Tempest tell her that she's a pedophile.
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>>153234159
But Grim Heart was a mistake.
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>>153234116
She's perfect as it is.
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>>153234182
You monster, do you want to destroy her? Literally worse than Grim Heart.
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>>153234203
I'm still mad Maruino cheated us out of Quake's human form.
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>>153232894
I thought that as long as you don't reveal yourself to humans you can do whatever you want. Magical girls knowing other magical girls real form isn't letting regular people know about magic. Hiding your identity is mostly just a practical safety measure to not get exploited.
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>>153234588
Yeah. Swim has a good reason to follow Ruler's teaching, because Alice did get killed due to having her identity exposed. Bellsie also indirectly killed everyone in her test too by investigating and revealing their human identities.

Good friends who know and trust each other is fine, but it's not an information you should carelessly flaunt everyone. Especially if one of them could backstab you unexpectedly.
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>>153234256
She had to be stopped anon before missing children cases starts popping up.
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>no one wants to be around her because she is a pedo and stinks like garlic
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>>153234852
Umbrain rides her just fine.
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>>153234885
She gets paid a lot of money to do so.
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>>153234852
You could hang out with the lolicon oooor hang out with the kool kidz from Mao's school!
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>>153235144
So basically with Flamey?
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>>153235144
>you get to hang out with jobbers regarding of the choice
No thank you.
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>>153235294
Panasu seemed pretty chill to hang out with though.
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>>153235269
but she's not cool at all. She's hot.
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its 2am, off to Nemurinland, see you all tomorrow
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>>153233394
Either way it's a good read
>>153232894
Swim2 got murdered because her peon leaked personal info. Never forget.
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>>153235269
I'd hang out with her. We could light up a joint together.
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>>153235902
>Either way it's a good read
Except it's not. The fucktard is basically writing his own bastardized fanfiction and you mouth-breathing faggots are sucking his dick like he's done something special when all he's done is take the names of characters (about the only thing that's remotely accurate) and put them in contrieved situations that the dumbfucks that still haven't learned japanese think is LE EPIC STORY OF INTRIGUE AND BETRAYAL. I have no respect for the bullshit artist and neither should any of you.
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>>153236161
u mad?
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>>153236161
Dude chill, not only are you exaggerating the differences with hyperbola with providing any proof that they're as drastically different as you say, but you're being an asshole about it too, if you hate this place so much then leave, no one is forcing you to stay
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>>153236161
What the fuck is wrong with you?
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>>153236343
Not that anon, and he was a bit rude, but he wasn't exaggerating. Evidences had been provided across many threads in the past week. We all saw that any random page that come up was completely different from what the raw said.

The problem wasn't mistranslation, but the fact that TL-kun wrote fake dialogue and narration. It's very dishonest of him and gave me trust issues now.

The TL was still an entertaining read, that's for sure. But I have no idea whether a detail was real or made up anymore, and that robbed me of the drive to discuss things.
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>>153236161
Would you be less mad if he changed it from translation to summary?
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>>153236697
I guess I should TL it then.
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>>153236769
From nip or chink? But yeah, I would trust anyone else now.
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>>153236813
Chink, checked back against Nip. Only problem is that I don't have Unmarked.
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>>153236697
Sure but chill out.
There's basically a commitee, there are nips, chinks, a VN translator and an anon who is going to scan the raws blunders like the current one are going to be uncommon.
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>>153236769
How do we know that you're the real deal?
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>>153236835
Jap RAW of Unmarked is available online.
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>>153236854
A-are we starting a revolution?
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Can any nip reader actually check the v2 that has been posted so far against the raw to see the accuracy?
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>>153236857
You don't. It's a matter of trust at this point. I have nothing to prove to you and you have no reason to believe in me.

Let's get this out of the way; I primarily translate from CN to EN because my JP > EN isn't good enough, though I check back against the JP raws. Also, I don't have the CN for Unmarked and the official releases for MGRP stop at Limited. Which is stupid but eh.
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>>153237002
Either that or check against the CN, that way we know if the new versions are true to the source
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>>153237055
TL-kun paraphrases a fair bit but for the most part v2 is more accurate to the CN and JP versions. Asari in Unmarked was... not fantastic. He loves to jump between perspectives.
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>>153237145
So it's fair to say that the TL is for the most part accurate for the v2?
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>>153237172
Paraphrased a fair bit. TL-kun always has severe issues with being faithful to the original, even when not needed.
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>>153237172
More accurate. Like >>153237246 says he paraphrases a fair bit.
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>>153237246
When you say paraphrased is it in terms of same meaning but worded differently, or is it truncated?
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>>153237246
Why does he keep writing his own fanfiction in a translation?
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>>153237287
Because he prefers readability over one for one translation? You can always use Google Translate for that.
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>>153237321
>>153237287
Yeah, the v2 is paraphrasing that's accurate for the most part, not all made up.
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>>153237321
>even when not needed
He defended his V1 crap with "readability" and "convey the same thing" too, and we all know how that looked like.
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So when the Peaky Angels see something cool they say "magicool" but what if it's something dumb like >>153229408 ?
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some dude plz give me BlueComet cute pic onegai!!!!!!!!
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>>153237351
well people are saying that the V2 is pretty accurate, so I'm fine with that
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Who are your top 5 MG designs in the series anons?
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>>153237425
I'll do my 2 favorites from each arc

Nemurin, Cranberry
Detick Bell, Lapis
Captain Grace, 7753
Styler Mimi, Lady Proud
Dark Cutie, Blue Bell Candy
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>>153237344
How about not making up anything at all? Various translators in this thread had said that it's not hard to keep the text as-is. I don't mind chaging stuff for readability, but there's a difference between that and changing "Her fierce attacks caused the all the bones in the opponent's body to be broken." into "She kicked him in the rib." Just saying.
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>>153237364
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Being Deluge is suffering
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>>153237481
agreed
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>>153237425
Mine is Lapis Lazuline, Deluge, Pythie, Bluebell and Dark QT in no particular order.
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>>153237506
All she needs to do is stuffing some candies into Candy-chan's lower lips.
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Are we cool now?
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>>153237521
I see you are a fan of blue girls, good taste
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>>153237425
Shufflin (including II) and 7753 are my absolute favorites, not sure of the other three. Need to look and decide.
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>>153237425
In no particular order:

Lethe (I like her tail and attitude)
Lady Proud (elegant and lewd)
Prism Cherry (lewd as fuck)
"Pure" Elements (sentai lewd)
Akane (I like the samurai vibe)
La Pucelle (lewd knight)
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>>153237557
there isn't a difference in the designs of Shufflin and Shufflin II is there?
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>>153237521
BBC's single glove is amazing.

>>153237575
I guess that's why he said he included it too. Shufflin II is basically red Shufflin I.
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>>153237425
Deluge
Bluebell
Lazuline II
Shadow Gale
Pythie

Honorable mention: Pukin, 7753, Patricia
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Who are your top 10 MG in the franchise? For me its:

Deluge
CQ Angel Hammer
Uluru
Dark Cutie
Lapis Lazuline II
Mana
Pechika
Styler Mimi
Prism Cherry

Though I like almost every girl in the franchise to varying degrees
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>>153237575
The only difference is that Shufflin I has 2 ribbons on their boots, Shufflin II has 3.

>>153237589
>basically red
No. Both Shufflins have black and red cards, depending on the suit.
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>>153237589
Shufflin II comes in all colors also, since its liteally Shufflin but with no Joker
>>153237597
good taste
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>>153237614
good taste anon
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>>153237628
>>153237635
Hm, I see. Yeah, I basically assumed it because the sole colored representative of Shufflin I was a Spade and the sole colored representative of Shufflin II was a diamond(?).
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>>153237614
1. Pfle
2. Bluebell/Laz III
3. Deluge
4. Pythie
5. Swim
6. Styler Mimi = Hana
7. 7753 = Filuru
8. CQ = Lethe
9. Laz II
10. Clantail
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>>153237425
>5 MG designs
Captain Grace
Cranberry Donut
Leonetta
Shadow Gale
Lethe
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>>153237614
Ruler x 8
Pfle
Pukin
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>>153237614
Deluge
Lazuline II
Pythie/Bluebell
Marika
Pfle
Dark QT
Wedin
Filuru
Detick Bell
Rippuru
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>>153237614

Snow White
Wedin
Blue Comet
Hardgore Alice
Magical Daisy
Marika Fukuroi
Mei
7753
Hana
Pfle
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>>153237614
Marika
Laz 2
Top Speed
Pythie
Filuru
CQ Angel Hammer
Pukin
Lethe
Tot Pop
Miyokata

But I like most of the MGs.
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Uluru and cat v.2: moved Sorami's dumb hair decorations so I could fit Sachiko and her dumb hair decorations in, some minor changes such as a fluffier looking hood, and added an extra panel in at the end.

Still can't get the screenshot function to work, something something system update.
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>>153238204
Part 2.
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>>153238204
Heh, it's still bootiful.
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>>153238220
Part 3.
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>>153238204
You totally should buy a drawing tablet.
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>>153238256
Yes. Definitely.
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>>153238204
>>153238220
>>153238241
Wonderful. I wish you could screencap it instead of taking photos.

I wanna see drunk Sachiko straddling Uluru and pushing her down on the floor to scold her, with Sorami blushingly covering her face but still taking a peak at the scene.
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>>153238347
i-incest is wrong
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>>153238365
They aren't related. It's k.
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>>153238204
Only needs Uluru's freckles.
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>>153238347
I'll post a proper version once it's working again.

>>153238379
Fuck.
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>>153238939
This pic is so wrong.
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>>153238939
i thought it was winterprison from the thumbnail
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>>153238939
Thanks Melly.
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Not to potentially restart an argument of some kind, but I thought just as a courtesy I'd compare some V2 dialogue with the JP equivalent. I'm basically rolling 2 d20s, 1 for page, 1 for sentence in that page, counting the numbers, picking that dialogue and seeing if the dialogue matches up with the Restart RAW that I have.

From Chapter 1

>She ran between the spaces of the buildings, her body jumping between them, like a sewing motion. She kicked the building wall, then kicked another wall, and using that momentum, she jumped between building to building.
>ビルの間を縫うように走り、さらにはビルを借り、その反動で別のビルを借り、ビルとビルの間を跳び

>“I’m home!”
>It was a force of habit. Kiku shouted out to an empty room. Since the walls aren’t soundproof at all, the neighbors are going to hear her shouting. They’d probably think she’s a lonely woman.
>She was a lonely woman.

>「ただいま」
>長年の生活費というものは早々変えられない、誰もいない部屋に菊(Kiku)の声が響いた。壁の防音機能は最低ランクであるため、この挨拶も丸聞こえだろう。両隣の住人からは寂しい女と思われているかもしれない。
>実際寂し女であることは否めない

>The girl turned her back on Pechika. She started walking away, her gait was unnatural and unbalanced. Her Katana was dragged across the ground, leaving a trail behind her, and she was mumbling nonsensical words.
>少女はペチカに背中を向こう。歩き始めた、ふらふらと頼りない足取り、刀を地面あとに引きずって跡を残している、ぶつぶつと何事かをつぶやいていたが。

I could continue the random checking of course. My opinion is that I can easily find the target sentence in my raws and that it pretty much matches 80-90%. I'll let the others decide.
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>>153237614
Tot Pop
Marika
Pukin
Pythie
Captain Grace
Miyokata Nakano
Leonetta
Lethe
CM Angel Hamuel
Swim Swim
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>>153239630
That's nice to know, I was worried that the V2 still was going to have major errors in it but if it matches that well than that settles all my concerns. It'll be nice to reread the earlier arcs as soon as all of the V2 versions are done.
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>>153237614
Shufflin (Ace Heart)
Shufflin (5 Diamond)
Shufflin (3 Spades)
Shufflin (Jack Diamond)
Shufflin (2 Heart)
Shufflin (King Diamond)
Shufflin (Queen Spade)
Shufflin (5 Clover)
Shufflin (Jack Clover)
Shufflin (2 Clover)
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>>153239976
2 of diamonds why are you posting while at work
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>>153239630
>>153239794

Part 2 with Chapter 2 Restart

By the way, the reason I'm doing this is cause there seems to be another anon here who acts like an asshole. Though he always seems to make points that seemingly not many could refute without proof, which are that:

1. We can never prove accuracy because we don't have the moon with us.
2. TL-kun vastly changed everything making it into a fanfic, not just leaving out details or mistranslating

Since I've also read the manga for Restart that's been going around and finding that a lot of the events are the same, even specific ones V1, like Clantail turning into a gecko during the dragon fight, I figured I'd help put to rest any of those arguments. (and also to shut that asshole up)

My checks are randomized so I can test whether I can find the target sentence from the TL to the Raw. Anyways

>What should’ve taken hours of time only took 20 minutes.
>In the meantime, Shadow Gale and Masked Wonder went all around the Wasteland Area collecting Magical Candy.
>Pfle was supposed to be an injured person, yet she’s leaving dust trails as she travelled in tremendous speed. As for Masked Wonder’s thoughts.
>“It’s great that she’s healthy again”
>They seemed to be favorable.

>数時間かかる道のりを二十分で走破して
>その間、シャドーゲールとマスクド・ワンダーは荒野の各所を回ってマジカルキャンディ
>怪我人のはずのプフレが、土埃で痕跡を残し。猛スピードでかつとんていくところを見た、マスクド・ワンダーがなにを思っていたのかわからない
>「元気なのは素晴らしいわね」といていたので
>好意的はあるようだ。

My other random check of chapter 2 is too big for this post, coming up in part 3.
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It just occurred to me: In Restart, apart from Lapis 2, were ALL the girls survivors of Clamberry's tests? Even Magical Daisy and Masked Wonder? I think Pechika was the special case where she never fought, she just had a memory wipe. Detick Bell hardly seems like much of a fighter. I think Nokko never fought, she was merely selected. Genopsycho could've fought perhaps? I don't think the flashback including her mentioned her presence in any kind of test. And then, there's Miyokata. Could she have fought? She doesn't seem like much of a fighter either.
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>>153239630
Why don't you just translate one random page, then post your version side-by-side with its counterpart in v2? That seems easier for people to compare how accurate the TL is.

And I don't know what world you originated from that 80-90% matching TL is considered acceptable. That is supposed to be the accuracy rate of a first draft, before translator checkers and editors help to polish to boost it up to 95-99.99%. As in, only careless mistakes remained, not rewriting.
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>>153240222
With exception of Lapis 2, all of them did get involved with Cranberry in some way. As for Detick Bell, she didn't fight directly but she leaked other magical girl's identities so they all ended up killing each other.
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>>153240283
>As for Detick Bell, she didn't fight directly but she leaked other magical girl's identities so they all ended up killing each other.
Hm? She leaked the identities to whom exactly? Was she working for Keek or something?
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>>153240119
My other check in Chapter 2 continued

>Eventually, they gave in to Genopsycho. They bought the ‘R’ item, and the result, a ‘Map’.
>That Map was then installed into their Magical Phones as an application. The Town, the Area, and their current locations were displayed.
>If they’re registered as party members, they could also view their teammates’ locations as well.
>Genopsycho puffed her chest.
>“See, we got some convenient items! I told you it’d be useful!” she said with pride.

>結局ジェノサイ子の押しに負け。「R」を一つだけ購入し、結果、「地図」だ手に入った。
>地図は魔法の端末にマップ機能を追加するアップリケーション。そのエリアの町や自分の現在位置。
>登録してあればパーティーメンバーのいる場所もわかる
>ジェノサイ子は胸を張って
>「ほら、便利アイテム手に入った。やっぱりやってよかたっしょ!」と威張った

>...Because it’s fun, isn’t it? Fighting?
>The nice thing about this game world is that she can fight as much as she wants without anyone forbidding her. She wanted things to stay this way.
>“Alright, let’s head to the city first! We might be able to find hints on the Area Clear Events there. We might also find some good hunting spots!”

>だって楽しいじゃん、戦うの…
>禁忌とされていることを臆さず行えるのがゲームの世界のいいところだ。そういうことにしておきたい
>「よし、まずは町を目指そう。クリアイベントやそのヒント、良い狩場の情報なんかも町にいければわかるかもしれないしね」

Again, my opinion on this. This is 80-90% matching. I had no problems finding the sentence and it seems like I can match it nearly word for word.
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>>153240222
Asari answered in the Fanbook's interview about Bell. She initially investigated the human identities of other MGs in her test and tried to attack them, but they were still too quick and defeated her. She then leaked the information to each other so they kill each other. Basically she won Pfle-style.

All Restart girls are test survivors except for

Lazuline II: mistaken for Laz I, who was a Cranberry sympathizer, neither was a test survivor.

Pechika: There was no test, but it played out just like one so Pechika was considered a Child too.

Nokko: she was hired by a Cranberry sympathizer to help Cranberry conduct the tests.
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Cutest killer. Befitting to be Best Genki's waifu.
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>>153240270
>Why don't you just translate one random page, then post your version side-by-side with its counterpart in v2? That seems easier for people to compare how accurate the TL is
Sure I could do that instead

>And I don't know what world you originated from that 80-90% matching TL is considered acceptable
Our 80-90% might be different then. When I say 80-90% I meant stuff like this.

What Daisy's saying in the literal Japanese raw is something like

"Clear Event hints, good hunting spots might be found if we go to the city."

Whereas in TL-kun it's like

"We might be able to find hints on the Area Clear Events there. We might also find some good hunting spots!"

In my opinion, while this isn't one to one what Daisy's saying, this is so close enough that I'm giving it a 90%. Because something like

>"Alright, first let's head to the city. Clear Event hints, good hunting spots might be found if we go to the city."

vs.

>“Alright, let’s head to the city first! We might be able to find hints on the Area Clear Events there. We might also find some good hunting spots!”

is pretty much the same thing, unless you're really arguing nitpicking.

Almost every other sentence I've seen in the checks matches as well
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>>153240512
>"Alright, first let's head to the city. Clear Event hints, good hunting spots might be found if we go to the city."

I think this is a pretty important change, this sentence, while being technically correct, it sounds pretty bizarre in English.
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>>153240512
Yeah, I would also consider that example to be accurate, not at all paraphrasing. But only if

>Clear Event hints
Is really
>We might be able to find hints on the Area Clear Events

Because If I only see "Clear event hints," I would thought it means "Let's clear the Event Hints (minigames)." So which one is it?
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>>153240512
I think you're purposely trying to make peopke who complained (about rewiting) look silly, by giving an example of no rewriting at all.

Everybody knows that English and Japanese has different grammar structure, so you cannot bring over word-for word. Translating "I rice eat" into "I eat rice" is not paraphrasing, and not what people complained about.

People have issues with shit like this: https://desuarchive.org/a/thread/153107316/#153109561
Original:
>Deluge knows Pfle is smiling and laughing, but there's no enjoyment to be seen. Right now, even though Pfle is hiding behind pleasantness and sarcasm, Deluge can feel tension emitting from her whole body. Both of Pfle's hands are placed on her knees, clenching so tightly that the red and white are clearly separated.

TL-kun's ver:
>Deluge knows Pfle’s smile. It seems like Pfle was capable of smiling in any situation, but now, it seems like she was hiding something.
>Pfle's entire body seemed to be tense. Both of her hands were gripped into fists.

THAT is rewriting, and is unacceptable.
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>Why don't you just translate one random page, then post your version side-by-side with its counterpart in v2? That seems easier for people to compare how accurate the TL is

I'm going to be extremely literal to the JP so people can see in case the TL has some sentence smoothening.

>My version:

Each of the parts, how they're positioned, everything was perfect.
Pechika put strength on her arms holding her knees
Pechika wanted the beauty of a Magical Girl more than anything. The world will change if (I/She) become a beautiful and cute girl. (I/She) can also give lunch to Ninomiya-Kun.
(She) thought so.
Indeed, Chika has changed since becoming a Magical Girl. Earlier she used to draw away, after becoming Pechika, of course everything changed. Even not transformed, she can now move, and act somewhat boldly.
However, beauty is said to be special to her, that is where her boldness was born.
In this place, Chika is only one of many Magical Girls. Too average of an appearance. Now that sense of superiority is gone. Boldness is nowhere.
The base of a girl named Chika. Nothing changed.
Now Pechika returned to the middle school student who sneaked to one corner of the classroom.
Cannot be relied for anything. After that, her confidence was left behind. Cannot even fight. Cannot refuse game participation. Can only watch battles from a safe position.
(She) noticed her hated parts. (She is) suffering from helplessness. The battle was over while Chika was agitated.
All dozens of skeleton bodies were destroyed. (They) became a white mess.
"My intuition that many skeletons will come out in this neighborhood is correct!"

TL-kun's version in Part 2, way too long.
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>>153240897

>TL kun's version:

each of their parts, the way they were arranged, it was all perfect.
Pechika wrapped her arms around her knees tightly.
This was the beauty of a Magical Girl that Pechika wanted.
If I become a beautiful and cute Magical Girl, then the world can change. I can even make Ninomiya-Kun some lunch.
Indeed, Chika’s life changed when she became a Magical Girl. Before, she was always shy. After she became Pechika, whenever she transformed, and even when she’s not transformed, she was able to act a lot more active and bold.
Because her beauty was unique to her, she felt confident, and thus she became more bold as a result.
But in this place, Pechika was just one of many Magical Girls. She was now an average girl compared to these others. With her sense of superiority gone, she was no longer bold.
She was just Chika again. Nothing had changed.
Now, Pechika felt like when she was in the corner of her classroom in middle school, unreliable, left behind due to unconfidence, unable to fight, unable to refuse participating in this game, only able to half-heartedly watch the fighting from the sidelines.
She saw the parts of herself that she hated, she felt helpless, the battle was over while Pechika was frightened.
Dozens of skeletons were destroyed in the meantime, becoming nothing but scattering white debris.
“I knew it! My intuition was correct! This area contains many skeletons!”

I only messed with the spacing so my post won't be too long, also for some reason my book picture messed up so here's another attempt (even though it was straight up in my actual pic)
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>>153232665
Hey, I was the one that asked you that question regarding Melville. I didn't even bother to check if you'd answered it. Okay, so you think that Melville made herself invisible, stood next to Pfle as Pfle used her phone to check Masked Wonder's position and then, knowing MW's position, ran over there and ended her? That's pretty interesting.
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>>153240747
Oh I know what people have issues with, and I'm not ignoring that definitely.

But what I saw reading through the thread was that some people say that the V2 was much better, but there was another anon, who was frankly being an asshole, discouraging people.

When people refuted that the V2 was a lot better, the other anon said that "they can't speak moon so cannot prove it"

When another person said that based on what they read on V2, not much changed except for some rewrites, he also said "they don't have nor can't speak moon so can't prove it"

What I'm doing is seeing if the V2 that TL-kun did holds up, by randomly choosing pages, it's kind of like random checks.

The only things I was trying to post was the raw JP text vs. the TL document. This is because I have the Restart raw and it'll help people form their own opinions on the V2, rather than being unable to fairly argue against that other asshole.

Then, people can debate and discuss if the TL is proper, if the sentence changes are acceptable, or if it's just total rewriting. I'm only providing the raw JP.

Original reason why I didn't translate myself and compare it is because that is "my" translation and thus, while you can compare 2 English TLs, I'd rather people see the raws and make their own conclusions. Non-Moon readers could also benefit if I type out the moon. Maybe they can patch it up to Google Translate for a (rather rough) translation and see for themselves, or copy/paste each text.

My problem isn't really regarding the TL is super accurate or not, my problem was that the guy earlier that I read was acting like an asshole and no one could properly argue because they lack the material for a good discussion. So I'm just providing the material by giving some raw text.
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>>153240944
Okay, I consider that a goid translation except for that last dialogue. Breaking one sentence into 3, each of them having an exclamationmark, made the girl sound stupidly overexcited compared to the normal gladness in the original.
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>>153241054
At that point, I'd say it's just nitpicking. I could turn that around and say that exclaiming one long sentence like that sounds weirder than breaking it up. Then again, I'm from the camp that favors readability over faithfulness to the text.
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>>153240512
>>"Alright, first let's head to the city. Clear Event hints, good hunting spots might be found if we go to the city."
>vs.
>>“Alright, let’s head to the city first! We might be able to find hints on the Area Clear Events there. We might also find some good hunting spots!”
They are not the same thing at all, why all those random exclamation points?
It's changing the speaker personality completely.
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>>153241054
Only making a guess as to why he did that, but looking at the raw, the text has some Katakana, which can either be interpretated as "strange intonation" or "weird way of saying things". Kinda like if you italicized some words.

I've capitalized the katakana in this one

"kono hennara gaikotsu ga takusan deru toiu WATASHI no kan wa seikadatta DESU"

I'm guessing it's because she's foreign and her intonation is off.

You could let him know, I've seen discord links posted and he seems open to suggestions for improvement from what I hear.
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>>153241050
There was not just one, but at least 3 different people who complained. I was one of them. Stop thinking of their arguments as one.

I had been very polite and asking for moonspeakers to prove by comparing RAW with V2. I do not trust people who don't know jap yet constantly said "it's fine since it's longer now." How was I wrong? Is it a crime to ask a credible person to fact-check now?

I had been polite with you as well during the time you posted your comparisons. So stop acting like an asshole yourself who got butthurt over a reasonable request.
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>>153240603
>Because If I only see "Clear event hints,"

It's one long Katakana text

クリアイベントヒント

"Clear Event Hint", in the other parts of the book, they refer to the puzzles that the girls do to clear the area events.
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>>153241185
>I had been very polite and asking for moonspeakers to prove by comparing RAW with V2

And that's why I'm posting the RAW right now. I also believe people need to form their own opinions too.

>I had been polite with you as well during the time you posted your comparisons

You were polite here, and thank you for that.

The other anons above were legitimate in their argument, but the way they handled it was very assholish and harsh in my opinion.

>Except it's not. The fucktard is basically writing his own bastardized fanfiction and you mouth-breathing faggots are sucking his dick

A legitimate argument, but a very assholish way of saying it.
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>>153241114
That's not nitpicking if you vastly change the tone of the character for no reason. TL-kun said he's particular with "conveying" so that's double no excuse. There are characters such as Toko who (I assume) actually speak very excutedly, with exclamation mark in every sentence, and that is different from how Postarie would speak.

>"My intuition was correct, this area contains many skeletons!”
Is not difficult.
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>>153239976
I see you're a man of culture as well, certainly, Shufflins are the cutest and bestest mahou shoujo.

Unlike Deluge.
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>>153241185
But basically, to summarize, because I don't want to get into a fight with anyone.

I have the same opinion as you. I don't trust blatant unfactual proof either. I have the raw, so I can post the actual raws as material.

I don't want to translate myself, because then that would be my own translation of events against another translation of events, and nitpicking can happen.

What I'd rather do is post the actual text. Moon speakers who don't have the book can see if it's correct and can argue and debate without resorting to "fucktard dicksucking faggot" words. Whether or not the TL is good is up to the people.

>My problem isn't really regarding the TL is super accurate or not, my problem was that the guy earlier that I read was acting like an asshole

I just didn't like the way he talked, even if his arguments were valid. You on the other hand have been polite and nice, and I'd prefer this kind of discussion about the TLs.
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>>153241275
In this case though since Miyokata apparently bursts into laughter at random and is said to be loud, I'd be okay with it.

And I'm just looking at Restart manga illusts on this point.
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>>153241237
And yet you jumped to the conclusion that that anon must be me, that everyone who demanded proof must be a same person. That is stupid.

In fact, that post of him seemed to be speaking about V1. Why did you conflate it with people who wanted comparison for V2? Two different topics of discussion.

Nevermind, let's forget this.
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>>153241320
Why is it so hard to not change the original? Do you hate Asari's writing or something?
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Are there mahou shojou fan sites that list all various news about the genre? eng or jp is fine.
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>>153241352
Considering Asari jumps all over the place in terms of writing at times, I'd actually consider that fairly tame.
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I did it! I can take screenshots again! Now I can sleep in peace!

Hopefully, this will be the last time I post this drawing here.
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>>153241388
Well done, rest well DSAnon.
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>>153241376
How about weite your own book instead of "improving" his writing? We don't want your book, we want to know what he wrote.
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>>153241282
Bluebell would disagree.
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>>153241388
Oh so you're the Postarie Kick and Pumpkin soup anon. Great work as always, thank you.

Do you post your stuff anywhere?
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>>153241331
Oh, sorry if you thought I assumed it was you. I just assumed that the assholish speaking anons are the same person. Because I don't like to believe that more than one anons are that assholish in how they ask.

Not the proof-seekers. There are proof-seekers on both sides of that argument. And you seem to be decent in that.

Anons that demanded proof are legitimate in their demands, I'm just against how some of them are very harsh in how they demand things. There are nicer ways to ask.

>In fact, that post of him seemed to be speaking about V1. Why did you conflate it with people who wanted comparison for V2?

Because I saw people above saying that based on the V2 they read, the events that happened are the same, although they are missing important details.

But there was one or possibly some assholish anons that continued on talking harshly about being unable to read moon. So I just decided to post these raws so they can have a proper polite discussion.

I don't mind seeing people discuss whether the TLs are wrong or not. What my problem was that there was an anon that was harsh, and I don't think there's a need for that anywhere.

I just think this:

>I had not read, since there's only a coupke of Restart out. Are you a moonspeaker who has the credibility to confirm that it's closer to the original text? I have no trouble believing it has more infortion now, but how correct are those and whether there are still fake dialogue, can you confirm?

is a politer anon than say, this:

>Except it's not. The fucktard is basically writing his own bastardized fanfiction and you mouth-breathing faggots are sucking his dick like he's done something special when all he's done is take the names of characters (about the only thing that's remotely accurate) and put them in contrieved situations that the dumbfucks that still haven't learned japanese think is LE EPIC STORY OF INTRIGUE AND BETRAYAL. I have no respect for the bullshit artist and neither should any of you.
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>>153241352
>>153241426

I am... not TL-kun though. Neither are those posts.

And >>153241376 isn't me either.
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>>153241426
And the translation adequately conveys the meaning. You're more than welcome to read nip by yourself if you don't like it.
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>>153241497
That's just a figure of speech, to anyone who defend rewriting with bullshit excuses.
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>>153241517
Any translation will be a rewrite, so you're full of it.
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>>153241460
I have a general tumblr which I upload to: http://fixing-sleep.tumblr.com/tagged/mahoiku. There's not much though.
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>>153241503
I'm studying nip right now so no need to worry.

That is still no excuse to be free from criticism. Convey the same meaning my ass. I'm not the only person in this thread who thought the personality changed with random broken sentences and exclamation marks.
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>>153241569
You're not even criticising him at this point, though. You're just slinging insults. Go help him if you think he's doing such a bad job. Here's the discord.

https://discord.gg/uHxjn
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>>153241534
Too bad not many agree with you. There are plenty translations and scanlations and subbings that look good. It's fucking rare for me to run into a community with such a shitstorm over TL like this one.
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>>153241609
It used to be okay until a couple of weeks ago. Was it the Limited thing?
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>>153240379
>She then leaked the information to each other so they kill each other. Basically she won Pfle-style
Wow. Wouldn't it have made more sense though if, after the first few MGs had their identities revealed that the rest would clock on and kill Bell before she became a threat to them too? I suppose an exposed MG would be more interested in dragging others down with her though. It's just that since nobody can exploit such an opportunity without also knowing that the opportunity exists, you'd figure it would've been leaked to someone at some point followed by a prevention conspiracy of some sort.
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>>153241632
Well, it might also have been that they realised Bellsie was less threatening than the other, more powerful MG beside them. I mean, Bellsie already tried and failed to attack them, but the others might have been able to kill them, so they'd be higher priority.

Then turns out they ended up killing each other instead and Bellsie survives by chance.
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>>153241597
>slinging insult
Where?

>raw has 1 sentence and 1 exclamation mark
>tl broke it into 3 with 3 exclamation marks
>"hey the tl look good, except that sentence, the personality changed"
>NOOOO ITS PERFECT AS IS, IT IS FINE TO CHANGE
Madness.
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>>153241609
Not him, but at least this is not web novel level, look at those shitfest called translation then you know what hell is like.

Personally, translation should stick close to the original prose as much as possible. While I appreciate TL-kun effort but his style of doing is no good and I hope he fixes it soon.
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>>153241629
An anon read Japanese analysis of various characters, and found things they never saw in the TL.

Some moonspeakers decided to investigate.

They posted their results, and we found out how bad the TL was.
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new thread?
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>>153241694
New thread?
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>>153241656
Except that Miyokata totally shouts things at random (random katakana) and acts super excited about everything, so it's not as though the character changed.
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>>153241677
>Personally, translation should stick close to the original prose as much as possible. While I appreciate TL-kun effort but his style of doing is no good and I hope he fixes it soon.
This!

I don't a problem with translators who can barely understand moon, but I have a huge issue with dishonest ones who write fake stuff. And after being discovered, still refusing to stick as close to the original as possible. I literally don't understand what's their grudge against the author.
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>>153241749
That's not your place to rewrite what the autgor wrote. Katakana phrase should be italicized, that's all. If she shouted a sentence, then bold it. There are tines when she speaks normally, don't turn those into retarded shouting just because her other sentences are like that.

In short, be FAITHFUL to the original.
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So in other words the V2 that has been done so far is accurate?
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>>153215009
>tfw after years your fall in love with your MG partner
>finally chose to marry her
>she reveals she's a cockroach in real life
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>>153243231
>in real life
Who cares
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>>153237614
Barbarians. All of you.
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