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Storytime: Umbrella Sword 2017-02-08 04:39:46 Post No. 153208392
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Storytime: Umbrella Sword 2017-02-08 04:39:46 Post No. 153208392
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Hey, /a/, it's been a while. I'm not sure if you guys still do storytimes, but here's a web manga I just finished translating and I wanted to show it to you guys first. It'd be great if you guys could give it a read and tell me if there are any mistakes or typos.
The manga is an entry from the famous God series which are all about a creepy God messing with little girls' lives, but I don't want to spoil everything. So let's go.
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>>153208392
First chapter.
The art style is very sketchy, as it is an amateur web manga from the VIP manga "publisher" NEETsha, but it's good enough to enjoy the manga imo.
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>>153208688
This was the first chapter. I hope someone will bump the thread for me as I can't do it myself.
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>>153208647
god damnit god you can't just RPG people's life on a whim
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>>153208721
Second chapter.
>>153208739
Thanks for the bump.
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>>153208507
Her clock has a peculiar design. Perhaps it's supposed to be abbacchio's stand?
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>>153208825
>>153208831
Damn. I would have never gotten that. I'm sure there are a bunch of references I missed. 2ch manga is usually chock full of references.
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>>153209017
End of second chapter. 12 more to go.
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>>153209043
I liked it.
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>>153209282
>>153209270
Sorry, it's not over yet. I was just afk for a moment.
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>>153209303
I realized where this could escalate to, aaaaaaand I don't like it
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>>153208721
>luck: 1
>intelligence: 7
>courage: 0
wew
>panties
what is it with the japanese and their panties?
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>>153209354
>>153209345
No comment on that.
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>>153209380
>>153209374
It's important to know if she's wearing panties. I don't see anything wrong with that.
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>>153209425
hows that not a given? every normal person wears underwear. when I see a girl its not exactly the first thing that enters my mind, the question whether she wears underwear like every normal human being
anyway, thanks for the translation. I have zero moonrune skills but everything looks good to me
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>>153209493
>>153209491
Well, you're not from VIP, for starters. I'm sure it's one of the first things that enters their mind when they see a girl.
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>>153209567
Chapter 4.
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>>153210062
No, poor fish. Don't do it. The next step is to kill a cat or dog.
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>>153209671
third panel typo?
its 'anemia' btw
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>>153210188
>>153210191
Ah, thanks. It's a typo. The dump was already worth it.
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>>153210100
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>>153210261
Chapter 6
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if I had such an ability Id get as much out of it as possible
kinda is a shame to see how she squanders this gift
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>>153210558
oh dear god
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>>153208900
Cute.
>>153210100
I get the feeling this is actually about some psychotic who hears "God" telling her to kill shit.
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>>153210927
Chapter 8 now.
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>sfx: Dragon Quest level up jingle
But which Dragon Quest?
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n62AfTmbZ_E
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>>153210735
Fuck, dude.
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>>153211056
>>153211049
You tell me. It was テレテレテッテッテー in the original.
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>>153211342
Chapter 9.
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>>153211541
>>153211541
By the way, God uses the kanji counter for animals when he says two bosses, while Izuko uses the one for people. I'm still not sure how to integrate this. Maybe a T/L note.
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>>153211541
>loses 10K HP everyday
I was wondering why she kept losing HP even though it looked like nothing happened.
>level up or die
Man, this is just going to get worse and worse.
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>>153211541
AH SHIT I CAN SEE THE END
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>>153211660
Chapter 10 now.
>>153211642
Yeah, God probably "forgot" to mention that little detail. He's always a dick in this series.
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>>153211988
Chapter 11.
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>>153212129
herewego.jpg
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>>153212129
They're gonna catch her killing the rabbit, aren't they?
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>>153212164
OVERCONFIDENCE IS A SLOW AND INSIDIOUS KILLER
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>>153212243
>no gloves
you fucked up
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>>153212303
FUCK
FUCK
FUCK
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>>153212303
>not just taking the rabbit to a secluded place and killing it there
I feel like her intelligence stat should be a little bit lower than 7.
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>>153212340
Chapter 12.
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>>153212340
OH SHIT
H
S
H
I
T
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>>153212387
>>153212386
I don't think 7 is very high for an RPG stat. Plus, she got cocky. She's just a kid anyway.
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>>153212387
>fuck it, i'll just leave it here
Intelligence: 7 -> 0
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>>153212488
You dullard.
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>>153212488
[sweating profusely]
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>>153212522
I'll bet it turns out that she's insane.
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>>153212422
miss izumi? sounds a bit formal , probably lighten it a little?
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>>153212586
Obvious solution: kill Hiiragi
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>>153212586
>>153212570
Hiiragi is always very polite and formal to her though. I know it sounds weird in English, but I don't want to include honorifics.
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>final boss isherself
Wouldnt that be some shit
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>>153212620
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>>153208721
>luck: 1
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>>153212684
Chapter 13.
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>>153212620
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>>153212684
Love how it gets grainier. So edgy.
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>>153212764
is she really gonna do it?
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>>153212910
>DON'T STAB SELF
>DON'T STAB SELF
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>>153212944
>Courage: 0
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>>153212640
>>153212944
pls no. I was just joking around.
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>>153212974
>she actually stabbed him
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>>153212974
I HAVE SEEN THE END
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>>153213049
Final chapter.
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>>153213082
And then she went to prison.
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>>153213049
I know this is supposed to be a serious moment, but I can't stop laughing at bloody panties.
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>>153213133
KILL GOD
I
L
L
G
O
D
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>>153213160
>I'll just have to stab mself 100 times
shit
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>>153213186
>past self
steins;gate shenanigans?
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>>153213160
>courage: 0
>"I'll just have to stab myself 100 times"
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>>153213233
Maybe it'll loop back to the beginning andshe'll make the same mistakes.
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>>153213289
you forgot the part where she killed a rabbit, a person, and was ready to kill her only 2 friends
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>>153213186
I thought there were only five bosses, so why didn't she win the game already?
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>>153213310
more like the second change was beginning the game itself >>153213349
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>>153213349
>>153213341
The way I understand it, she didn't recognize Hiiragi as a boss anymore before he died.
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>>153213523
c-cute
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>>153213523
>>153213289
>>153213335
Killing is easy, living is harder.
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>>153213597
And we're done.
I'll post some fanart made by 2ch drawfags next.
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>>153213625
Here you see God and some of the other protagonists. There's a girl who gets the ability to stop time and a girl who is turned into a magical girl etc.
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>>153213625
Thanks for the dump, that was an entertaining story. With the way things were going, I was honestly expecting more suffering by the end.
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>>153213625
>equipped with nothing
>courage stat up
How lewd.
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>>153213676
The artist is known for more suffering which is why this ending was surprising for everyone familiar with his works. I might translate the rest of his stuff.
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>>153213625
thanks for the ride, anon
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Thanks for the story time. What a great way to start the day
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>>153213349
>>153213353
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>>153213709
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>>153213625
Thanks for the dump, OP. It gave me some courage too!
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>>153213751
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>>153213709
Definitely make a thread on /a/ if you do. From the sounds of the other girls (time stop and magical girl), it sounds like they're equally as interesting and everyone enjoys watching cute girls suffering.
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>>153213785
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>>153213744
What a way to cut he tension itt
Anon I love you
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>>153213814
VIP QUALITY fanart.
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>>153213843
That's all, folks.
I'll come back when I've translated something else. Probably another from of the God series. See you around.
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>>153210558
Come the fuck on author
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>>153213709
I'll be watching for it
This was a cool comic
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>>153210994
GODDAMMIT
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>>153211306
>>153211375
Serves you right
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>>153211598
>>153211631
No, come one don't you fucking dare
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>>153212303
Fucking God I swear
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>>153213160
FUCK
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>>153213568
>>153213597
>>153213625
YAY! it didn't end on a depressing note for once. thanks for your hard work anon you're doing G O D work.
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Thanks for translating this OP, it was a good read. Amateur-like 2ch manga like these are always full of smart ideas.
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>>153208647
God, what a fuckass.
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Everyone in this thread:
Read Semi-Eternal Happy End.
I can't dump it now, but do it. Or dump it.
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>>153209877
>those background signs
WORRY
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What the actual fuck I'm reading
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>>153208392
Reminds me of bokura no fushidara, but without all the fingering and with a less depressing story.
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>>153213625
>Not wishingfor God to tell your past self the rules of boss selection so you can level grind until you're strong enough to kill God and take revenge
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