Live Manga Translation - Hengoku no Schwester

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Chapter 2 - Separation
Angelica Kollwitz...
I will ask you one more time
Will you admit that you are a witch?
Ooh, it's starting
Yup
Look at the state of her
She's like a different person

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>>150242806
Mum...!!
By the way, what's with that stage?
Ah, that, it's amazing!
Even if it was on the way, I still can't believe that lady would come all the way here
Oi, the curtains are opening!
It's the Supreme Leader of the Claustrium Order
Edelgard-sama

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>>150242887
Wow, she's really pretty...!
Not just that
Apparently, the Pope once said
that she possesses a mysterious power
No matter who you are,
you can't say that white is black and black is white to her
A mysterious power?
Well, it's probably just a lie though...
That's the preparations for the stake...
Mum will eventually be placed onto that...
If I shoot the horse with an arrow so it runs rampant, it should distract everyone
I might be able to save Mum in the confusion
"When suffering, people look to God for salvation,"

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>>150243058
"but sometimes, they seek instead the Devil"
Do you know whose words these are?
Sorry to say I don't...
Heh, your education is lacking
Please forgive m...
That was a lie
I thought of them
just now
Eh
Right, that's good

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>>150243202
Angelica, I will ask you once more
You are a witch, right?
In those times, a "witch" was thought to have made a contract with a demon. As this was an act of heresy against God, if judged to be a witch, the punishment was...
instant death

I,
I'm
not...
a...
Good
Drop her

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>>150243351
This torture method was known as a "Hanging drop"
As her descent is halted, the impact from the sudden shock
could sometimes dislocate all the joints in the body
....

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>>150243574
Are you ready to confess?
Zasha
Yes?
At the top of that tree
there's a bird I've never seen before
Shall we shoot it down and observe it closer?

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>>150243814
...?
One more time...
No...
That will not be necessary
?
Blood...?
!!

>>150242806
Well we're off to a fucking depressing start.

>>150242887
>By the way, what's with that stage?
They're talking about the viewing tower on the stage, not the stage itself.

>>150243058
>Apparently, the Pope once said
>that she possesses a mysterious power
>No matter who you are,
>you can't say that white is black and black is white to her
>A mysterious power?
Nope. You've got the order mixed-up here. It should be more like "She possesses a mysterious power. The pope once said that nobody can tell her that is white is black and black is white." The quotation marks should have been a hint.

>Well, it's probably just a lie though...
噂 means "rumor", not "lie".

>If I shoot the horse with an arrow
You missed the "When they do, " at the start of this line.

>>150243351
>In those times, a "witch" was thought to have made a contract with a demon. As this was an act of heresy against God, if judged to be a witch, the punishment was...
>instant death
The meaning here is subtly different. The first part is more like "In those times, it was thought that a witch was one who made a contract with the devil."
In the second part, it seems like you're incorrectly combining 即 and 死 into 即死, when in this case they're separate. i.e.: "Any who admitted to being a witch were immediately put to death."

>>150243574
>sudden shock
Should technically be "sudden stop".

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>>150243868
Yes, she's down!
Grab her!
Look at this!!
The witch's girl was at the top of that tree!!
Inquisitor!!
I brought the arrow!!
Ella!!
I was supposed to hit the horse without anyone noticing...
To think I'd get caught...!!
PLEASE STOP!!
THAT GIRL DID NOTHING...
I remember that. It's the bow that was in your house?
That makes things interesting
In that case, we will have to investigate this girl as well
!!
However...

>>150244121
You're right about 噂 means "rumor", not "lie", my bad.
The rest are deliberate choices to make the English flow better. Feel free to write up some literal translations if you prefer.

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>>150244365
if she was just being manipulated by a witch's curse
than things would be different
That... that girl
did no...
Angelica
I'm the one asking the questions here
Answer before I count to seven
1
2
3
4
....
5
6
I...
7
I admit

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>>150244673
I admit
to being a witch
Aah...
aaaah...!!
Then, Angelica the witch
I have one more question

>>150244459
>The rest are deliberate choices to make the English flow better. Feel free to write up some literal translations if you prefer.
You know, it is possible to have a translation that's both accurate and flows well.
But if you're aiming for a more liberal and natural translation, instead of the hilariously unnatural "Do you know whose words these are?", might I suggest "Do you know who said that?"


>>150244365
>I brought the arrow!!
I'm not sure how you're going to argue that you changed this one to make it "flow better".
It should be "She had a bow and arrow!"

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>>150244735
Do you, perhaps in this audience,
know of any other witches?
Other...
witches...?
I never opposed the church!
I just thought that people needed medicine which actually worked...
Angelica
You seem to think like this
The disease even the Church's hospital is helpless against, Saint Anthony's flames
is actually just
the black mold that sticks to rye
Ergot fungus...

You may want to hold off on this and restart it later. You're going to get JIBUN WOOO'd out right now.

>>150245199
disregard this continue

>>150245199
Holy shit
HYPE

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>>150245133
"Saint Anthony's flames" was, alongside the plague and leprosy, one of the 3 great diseases of the Middle Ages
It brings a pain like being burned, swelling of the limbs and necrosis, causing hallucinations and convulsions, and often leads to death
At that time, the cause was unknown, and people had no alternative but to visit holy ground and pray to be cured
Well, well
Angelica
You figured it out
Congratulations
That's. Exactly. Right
You people
Now you know that
try and think

>>150245270
Okay, continuing since you told me to

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>>150245957
If we were to announce this to the public
Do you think people would accept it logically?
Even though people die of hunger in the winter already
What would you have them eat instead of rye?
We should...
Just take from the riches of the churches and nobles
and give it to everyone
....
Hahaha
That's impossible
We could never distribute it to everyone
(know your place!)
If you give but a single slice of cake to a poor child, fights will immediately begin
Worry not
Our Supreme Leader has no intention of doing so
We are approaching the "Time of Salvation"
What do you mean?
However, the problem is that there are people who seek to prevent this

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>>150246374
Those talkative people like you
And those who oppose the teachings of the true church, the Lutherans
Of course, the church does not spill blood...
but,
if it's a witch, things are different...
This man... This is how he makes up an accusation...!!
Well, how is it?
Have you started to remember yet?

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>>150246636
Listen well, Angelica
We are doing this for you
If you reveal the names of the other witches
You can die as a repented soul
What will you do?
I would think this doesn't compare to the heat of the flames of hell
(MUM)
Say it...
It doesn't matter who!!
Say a name!!
Mum...!

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>>150246764
Uuh...
uuuh...
Aah...
Mum...
...!
N...no
It wasn't
It wasn't me!!
I didn't do anything to your daughter!!

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>>150246955

>>150247005
(Hmm)
(We're not making any progress)
Girl
Although it is in the name of the righteous faith
This must seem quite ruthless to you
Come
(This girl)
(Let's use her...)
Take this cloth
and wipe your mother's face
....?
What is it?
Even if she's a witch,
is she not your mother?

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>>150247173

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>>150247226
No...
No...
I was...
just taken in
That person is...
not my
mother

>>150244459
>>150246016

Sorry if I came across as an asshole.
Please don't deprive everyone of an English translation just because I have no tact.

I'm more than happy to continue accuracy-checking what you're doing—if you want me to.
If you're doing this at least partly for practice, you can learn a lot more when you know where you're going wrong.

There's no shame in making mistakes. Everyone starts somewhere.

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>>150247342
Ah
She got away!
The witch's girl ran away
Well, this was unexpected
You've been abandoned, Angelica
Or, maybe not
After all, no matter how much you try
people are always alone...
The only person standing alongside you
is none other than God himself
Ella

>>150247416
It's fine, everyone makes mistakes, working for this long it'd be surprising if there weren't a few, that's why we have editors. Thanks

welcome to speed translation

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>>150247625
Ella... thank you
You/
If I just hadn't been taken hostage
Mum would definitely never have given in...!!/
Understood/
We can live free
with a clear heart alone/
What was in my heart/
That's right
Despite getting trampled down
laughed at
even our very lives taken away

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>>150247990
They can never take our heart
That is how
God created us
What's that?
The soldier that was behind the Order's leader...!?

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>>150248105

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>>150248147
Girl
"Go back"
she says

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>>150248185
This is the lady's command
Angelica, this will be the last time I ask
Do you know
any other witches?
....
Oi, what are you looking at?

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>>150248239
(Wherever I look
there is no God
But,
Ella is here
My cute little daughter...
That's right)
I
One night a month ago
(Have to protect this girl)
At our witches' meeting...

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>>150248406
(Who will blame me for it?)
Saw the maid from the mansion on the hill
Marlene
Well said, Angelica
Oi
Roger that
Ah...
Marlene, right?
Get over here!!
It's...
It's a lie!
Some kind of mistake!!

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>>150248666
Take it back, Angelica!!
Please!!
It was then that a small wind blew past
I saw it
It was a moment's trick of the light It was truth

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>>150248757
Ah...

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>>150248796
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH
AAAAAAAAAAH
AAAAAAAAAAH

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>>150248869
The 5th of March, 1549
The "witch", Angelica Kollwitz
After being hanged, was sentenced to be burned at the stake

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>>150248922
Supreme Leader,
What shall we do with that girl?
It is standard to have witch's daughters enter the "Abbey of the Water Divide"...
However, she seems rather defiant...
It would be optimal if she didn't have an issue with execution of our duty, however
There is no problem
The love of God gives meaning to all people
In any case, there's no need to worry
A human's body and mind is remarkably resilient
And also

>It's a "the Church is evil" manga
bueno

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>>150249220
that girl's mind
no longer really lives
Take her with us
To the "Water Divide"
Understood

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>>150249295
Is there some problem?
No...
None whatsoever

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>>150249331

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>>150249371
I will not repent
Even if I did, Mum would not come back
All the pain and suffering she endured would not go away
That's why I...

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>>150249416
will kill them all
For no reason,
like swatting flies
like they did to Mum,
I will crush
each and every one of their lives

>>150249371
Kill them all, Ella.

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>>150249494
- Fin -

I was so sure I recognised this art from somewhere but according to MU this guy hasn't done anything else.

>>150249671
Sometimes mangaka publish under different names for whatever reason.

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>>150248147
>>150248185
chosen undead did it again!

Is this DJT's bribe to /a/ so they can go back?

>>150249860
no it's just some guy

>>150249498
High chance we get a return to the village and her stabbing them all to death?
I hope so

>>150249891
I've read the raws 2 volumes ahead
It seems like we're going to get all the action when she enters the monastery

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>>150249891
Ella is pretty hardcore.

>Those who prayed closed their eyes.
>But at the same time, those were thinking opened their eyes.

>>150242732
>DJT
I can't trust the accuracy of your translations anon.

>>150249860
I mean it's worth a try, right?

>>150249860
Yes, same retarded thing as last time.

>>150249860
DJT is already /a/ related topic. It's just some mod jealous about how he can't moonspeak, or so what I've heard of.

Fun read. Thanks.

>>150250382
They are terrible.

>>150250559
Kinomod used to translste, you fuckwit.

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>>150250823
You're welcome

>>150250878
>>150247849

>>150251995
Don't bother next time.
You are never going to make DJT look favorable to mods by doing this.

>>150252168
what

>>150252197
Everyone thinks DJT is sucking moddick to let them return to /a/.

So /a/ still has a grudge against Donald J Trump?

>>150250559
>or so what I've heard of.
I don't know what's worse, that you actually believe this or that you're mindlessly parroting shit pulled out of your DJT buddies' asses.

>>150253206
s-sorry