Want some ice cream?
>>150210553
So, he gave her the cold shoulder.
fuck off
I too want to lick Jun's ice-cream cone.
>>150210553
How many pages until he loses control of himself?
>>150212677
Jokes tend to come in threes, so Jun will probably spill his spaghetti in the next comic.
Everybody remain calm.
>>150210553
>original thread missed
FUCKlink?
Fuck off with your generalfag cancer
>>150213355
>all those edits
hnggggg
For Jun to cast meteor just for seeing tomo lick icecream show sthat he is very pure or one hell of a pervert. I mean, wat is he imagining.
>>150210553
>Jun literally giving Tomo the cold shoulder
Bravo Fumita.
>>150213355
To the guy that wanted to make a realistic drawing, I started it for you.
>>150216975
This is why second treads are god awful
Why a second thread?
>>150216975
Thanks. Just finished it. One question: should her hair be blood read or natural ginger?
>>150217361
The colour Fumita has it will do.
>>150217507
couldn't decide which style to use and most likely not so good, but here you are...
>>150217540
I like bottom left.
>>150217540
bottom left is great
>>150217582
Missed some spots.
>>150217582
>>150217601
Thought so.
>>150217540
>>150217646
Great bodies, but the faces look like she's half the cast from Lord of the Rings. If the bottom right were a little less angry looking around the eyes, she will be perfect.
>>150217743
Maybe, I will try to make her eyes a little rounder? I'm sorry, but this is the only way I can draw a face without reference. If you have a suggested face I can work with it too.
>>150210553
nice chapter
>>150217646
They look good, but what's with that white stuff? fully transparent would be better
>>150217934
I missed some parts of the white background since I accidentally merged layers so I have to do it with hand. Still working on it. I'm tired so, I'll repost later.
>>150210553
a meteor penetrating a barrier?
what does this mean?
Best chapter so far.
And I saying this as the guy who posts "I want to fuck Misuzu " everyday.
>>150218037
Previous chapter was a volcano, so hes upgrading.
Next is gonna be a supernova.
>>150217791
I don't know how easy it would be to make it work, but raising her eyebrows would be what to look at.
>>150218084
BUT WHAT DOES IT MEAN
>>150218106
Lust, heat, boner. shock...
>>150215684
pay attention, he's normally perverted. just dense with tomo.
>>150217791
Don't get me wrong, they are very good faces, just not Tomo's. I understand now what you mean when you said you had difficulty drawing the face in a realistic way, difficult when she was a manga character to begin with.
The perfect face would be of a Tomboy I know, she has these big, soft, sleepy eyes. But I am not a stalker so these images were the best I could think of.
>>150218212
>just not Tomo's
she asian, that's the idea with realistic fanart.
>>150218090 Tried to raise eyebrows a bit. Don't know if she looks less angry.
>>150218212 They look really young to begin with so I get what you mean, but Tomo is Asian or something like that. That was the look I was looking for. Will definitely practice on these too. If I think I did good enough maybe I'll share it here.
>>150218196
Not even dense, just denyal.
>>150218362
p good
>>150218212
>>150210553
reminds me of that one time a japanese dude shared an icecream cone with me.
that's just part of their culture, right?
>>150218436
cute story.
>>150218362
Bottom left is the best by far.Maybe make her blush a little.
>>150218796
I want to make a full body version. I'm a little sick so, maybe will post her alone next chapter if I can finish it.
>>150210553
Oh god.
>>150210553
That is the lewdest but still pure licking I have ever seen. And it's just ice cream.
>>150218251
>>150218362
I know. But the problem is too many characters are drawn like they are white.
I do like the bottom right, you can see a spark of that mischievous fiery energy that tomboys have in their eyes. Perhaps curl the end of the smile up a tiny bit more to give it a bit more of her smile?
>>150219707
Sure..
Couldn't resist. Here's full body version. Don't look at the feet (can't draw feet to save my life)
>>150210553
HOLY FUCK
>>150220423
>Dem meaty thighs and calves
Fumita always draws Tomo far too skinny for a sports chick.
>>150220823
doesn't make sense since she does Karate. Lots of leg work I presume.
>>150220423
The face is too realistic to go with a waist that small.
>>150221024
meh
>>150221024
1. She's Japanese, not American
2. She is doing that female technique where she is twisted slightly to make her waist appear smaller than it actually is.
I think it is quite proportioned, just slightly smaller than the hips to give it a nice hour-glass figure.
>>150221024
Have you ever been on Instagram?
>>150221317
Hell no. 4chan is cancerous enough for me.
>>150221426
well, I was referencing Instagram "models". They have waists even smaller than my Tomo.
>>150221482
What makes you think I would willingly look at 3DPD? What I was trying to say was realism and anime don't mix, in my opinion.If you're going to do tiny waists, might as well draw an anime face.
https://a.pomf.cat/apjmcl.png
merry christmas
>>150221661
My point is that small waists exist and the only think truly unrealistic here is her hair color. of course you have your own opinion and I respect it. I was simply pointing out a fact. Also, she doesn't look too realistic to me it's more my normal drawing style than "realism"
>>150221770
The only thing I think is truly unrealistic **
>>150221720
>>150221720
>eating ice cream while eating dick
unsanitary
>>150221720
L-lewd.
>>150222166
They're gonna jump back in the water soon anyway
>>150222166
>Not liking dick with your ice cream
What are you, gay?
>>150211309
bazinga
>>150210553
at this moment he discover his benis
>>150218362
Changing the bottom left did a massive improvement to the bottom right all on it's own since her expression was overall neutral before which defaulted it to the more angry tone of the left.
Now that the left tomo is less angry looking the right tomo has a less angry intensity and more of a neutral/smirky conveyance.
I think the right needs to soften up a little more somehow (like that blush another anon mentioned?) since while the construction of the face itself is a good tomo the emotion/personality/intensity conveyed to me is more Misuzu in quality. I could still say it's a tomo expression if she was in serious competition mode or something?
>>150226001
see you next thread. Maybe I'll fix it.