Jitsu Wa Watashi Wa 140

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Catpire.

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EXTREME TRICYCLE ACTION!

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>>146553518

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Okay so... this page I actually want some feedback on. The original line for shima was "She's after my liiiiiiife", but life was written in kanji, and next to it in furigana is "balls".

There was no possible pun we could make here that would work. This was the only idea I had. Do you think it works? If it doesn't, do you have any suggestions of a different idea?

Fucking Japanese.

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This is a worried dumon.

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Next time...

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CASTLE ATTACK!

Thanks for reading, and let me know if I fucked anything up.

>>146553845
This arc was do fucking great

>>146553706
How about source of life?

>>146553888

...Maybe? Kinda not feeling it. The thing is, she's specifically going after balls.

Akane is stronger than Akari right? When she is being serious and all.

>>146553706
Usually in this case the best thing to do would be to just swap that phrase for a more relevant one. You can't always do a 1:1 translation, and preserving the spirit is more important than keeping the translation literal.

Like "watch out for collateral damage" or "you can take the balls, spare me!" or something like that. Trying to be too literal makes the translation awkward, though that is the point of QC I guess.

>>146553916
Well the balls makes the sperm, so I was thinking about something along those lines. What >>146553944 is saying is another way too

>>146553944
"I'm not a ball!" also works in that context. Since Akari is trying to get the balls and might hurt Shima in the process

>>146553970
Jitsu wa has never been QUITE that pervy, and most of the humor is absurdist rather than dirty. No reason to add that implication here.

>>146554014
I think I've just been working with that end of the spectrum too long

>>146553944

Both are literal.

>>146554047
How? I just made them up on the spot, they aren't literal translations.

>>146554130

I mean both balls and life.

I guess my main question is, does anyone object to the way I currently have it?

>>146554157
I think it's okay. The text behind is a nice touch honestly

>>146554157
It kinda ruins the joke, and its not really a funny line, but it isn't cringey or anything either, if thats what you mean.

>>146553127
> the bun on the run event... destroyed

not even danganronpa conveyed such despair

>>146553810
Add one more to the reaction faces.

>>146553883
Thanks Tarage.

>>146553883
thanks fer the weekly dose

>>146553127
>>146553167
>>146553208
Can no one stop the rampage of this enraged cake?

>>146554846

TUNE IN NEXT WEEK ON DRAGONS BALLS P.

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>>146553760
>>146553637
>>146553883
This truly is the only worthwhile arc in the entire series.

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>>146553396
Oh God, that caught me by surprise

>>146553111
Never know vs never knew? Which works?
>>146553706
Guess it works
>>146553883
Thanks tarage. Can't wait for the next three weeks

>>146555461

Bleh, should have caught that. Oh well.

>>146553883
as always, thanks, Tarage.

>>146553706
If you're trying to keep is as close to the actual translation as possible I can't think of a nice way to convey the double meaning of the words. There is the option to rewrite the line though, >>146554014 makes a good suggestion.

>>146553294
No wonder so many demons jump onto the S.S. Mortal, their courtship sucks.

>>146553358
That face in panel 2 is legitimately unnerving.

>>146553518
This good drama, this is a good chapter, this is a good series. Why is a romcom with a pseudo harem so good? I'd given up hope that it could be done well again.

>>146554868
I can sleep for a week.
I read ahead in the raws months ago and I'm excited for what happens next

>>146555715
what happens?

>>146555819
Best cake gets to ride out of castlevania on a white horse, prince charming included. Don't tell anyone though it's supposed to be a secret

>>146553208
Idiot down! She needs snacks!

>>146556115

Her run-for-the-bun was taken from her.

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>>146553760

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>>146553208
The cake has a cake

>>146553432
>Not that I care anyway
And further down the tier list she goes....

>>146553883
You have brought me joy in a time of shit.

Thank you, Tarage

>>146553883
Thanks Tarage.

>>146553706
"Livelyhood" maybe?

>>146553810
>The face of a 1/4th demon in heat

RAWS WHERE

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>>146553760
Has Sakurada the Buddha finally ascended?

>>146553883
Thanks.

>>146558991
yuncomics still only up to 173

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Thanks Tarage

>>146553883
>Literally holding hellfire pitch fork

>>146553249
What a fucking bwaka

>>146553883
Love you~~

>>146553518
>Hello anus

>>146553249
>this page

>Ah, she chose eating, it seems.
>She grew horns, and talking about assaulting all males on earth or something

>>146565835

Derp.

Oh well. Hopefully our QC will be back next week.

>>146553883
This is a mere "demon"stration

hah

>>146566467

Yeah I was amused by that when I typeset it. It was too perfect not to do.

>>146553883
I wonder how the normal students react to stuff like this.

>>146553883
this arc is just too good

>>146566798
At this point, this is normal for them.

>>146553883
Thanks Tarage for our weekly dose.

>>146553294
Dark Schneider?

>>146553396
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=phtfV4jUMQE

>>146553396
HAHAHHAHA

>>146553883
>akari's castle
my body is ready

>>146553883
>This is a mere demonstration, please do not worry.
Kek.

Anyone who can understand the raws here?
What kind of creature was the former principal?

>>146570296
A regular human wasn't it?

>>146570366
Yeah but she seems to know about Akane's past and sort of look likes her older form so I'm thinking a descendant

>>146553706
She's after my life, and smaller below, and my children

>>146553111
He had a hard start. ;-;

>>146553566
>That realization.
They are such best bros.

>>146571539
>They are such best bros.
Next chapter it gets better.

>>146553883
>That sweat drop

Now that's how you panic.

Thanks.

>>146570296
She's a yuki-onna

>>146553883
Thanks man

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For those who want to get spoiled, here's this week's Raw!
https://imgur.com/a/3q1Lx
http://www106.zippyshare.com/v/PhjnzxFT/file.html

>>146553566

Eromine is such a bro

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>>146575358
What the fuck is this face trying to convey?