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Chapter 2
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>>146422411
As always, needs Proofreading, all help is appreciated.
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Sweet, been waiting for this!
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>>146423614
I'm fixing some thing on the fly that I notice
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>>146423837
Halfway through
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>>146423779
>we have already send plenty of relics
Should be "sent", since you're asking for proofreading.
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>>146423885
>>146423892
thanks, exactly for little things like these
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>>146423837
>expaining
>>146423885
>Gods arm
Should be God's arm
>>146423930
>recieving
is receiving
I didn't actually pay close attention to the pages before, I'll give them another look through.
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>>146424066
>>146424001
thanks, appreciate it
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>>146423079
>safe rear lines
>>146423283
I can't help but think of "I identify as an assault heli" with that page, haha.
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>>146424241
bunch of double pages coming up
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>>146424311
closeup for this chapter
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>>146424356
>hey kid, wanna hear 'bout goats?
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>>146422411
>courtain
curtain
>>146422613
>mayor powers
I'm assuming this should say "major"
>>146423230
>lieutnant
lieutenant
>>146423283
>manoeuvrability
manoeuverability (I believe that's the correct English spelling, American spelling doesn't use the o)
>>146423385
>lieutnant
again
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>>146424604
I failed at redrawing the magic orb, hope it isn't too bad
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>>146423980
>lieutnant
again, lieutenant
>>146424066
I might have been wrong about the "manoeuvring" thing. Seems like both spellings are used? Anyway there's one on this page too so if you change one, change both.
>>146424146
>rpetty
pretty
>>146424192
>insigation
instigation
>>146424311
>natures
nature's
>>146424425
>recieve
receive
>>146424536 >>146424604
>lords
lord's
>>146424562
>gods
>god's
>>146424714
>unterstand
understand
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>>146424830
done, getting on fixing now
>>146424782
thanks again
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>>146424790
>declatation
declaration
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That should be everything I've spotted. There's still some strange grammar and sentence structure, but but I'm too tired to do more than just correct typos.
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>>146424971
no problem, it still helps a lot
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>>146424868
the link to all files, .psd's and cleaned pages are on the /ak/ wiki
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10/10 cuties, would become an apostle for.
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>tfw expected super tough loli
>get cute loli works
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>>146425696
we still have the next chapter
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>>146424660
This is way too cute. Goddammit, she's the enemy but she's way too cute.
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>>146422485
>And then he was SENT to the battlefield
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Somebody help me, I can't stop reading isekai shit!
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>>146425883
Go read some western books. Maybe that might help you with your sever case of Isekaitis.
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>>146425883
Oh thanks for the list.
Also
>only 39
God I want more.
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>>146425969
There's plenty more, but most of it's shit. It's like panning for gold.
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>>146424660
I still don't understand what this page meant. Thought that the loli was a fedorian.
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>>146426411
he is, but the orb basically forces him to spread the word of god
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This is shit but at least the steely salaryman occasionally ACTS like a child sometimes, even if it's tinged with lolicon pandering. Also I can tell the manga is severely compressing the LN plot because dear god these exposition boxes are out of control.i'll still pop in if i see more TL threads because god help me i love the aesthetic
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>>146425883
There is no salvation.
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>>146424562
>>146424604
>>146424660
>>146424714
>>146424747
I can't follow this. Is she thankful for being allowed to live?
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>>146426411
>>146426644
Seems like an incantation or something that basically forces her to preach so it doesn't blow up.
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Let me Explain
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>>146423779
>>146423837
The "Divines" or what they're called decide that in order to bring faith to humanity, they need a relic that teaches "Words of Prayer". Then they decide that the Type 95 Elinium Orb should become that Relic and contact the Doktor.
then in
>>146424425
>>146424462
the Divine basically tells Tanya that the Orb forces her to recite these "Words of Prayer" when she's using its "Miracle".
So she's using it to get through the war, because it is powerful, but she is forced to pray to use it.
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>>146426878
wwwwoooooooooowwwwww
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>>146423180
>cate of misfire
Case, also that font is so hard to read
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>>146427215
I think it's actually rate, as in failure rate.
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>>146427215
>cate
it's rate, but that only cements your argument
I can read that font just fine, but many people seem to have problems with it
I was already thinking of changing the font to something more readable if more people complain, so I'll look into it
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I really like it tho
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How's this?
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>>146427344
It's fine if it's only a one or two short lines of text, but if it's a paragraph explaining things, I'd rather see an easily readable font
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>>146427576
Looks okay
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>>146422708
Type "95" Elinium Operation Orb. Previous page talks about Type 95.
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>>146427858
fixed, thanks for pointing it out
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Changed it for the Info box about the wright bros., too
Going to Wageslave for a few hours now, will occasionaly reply if I have the time.
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>>146425228
Thanks for the update!
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>>146428124
Wageslaving is bad!I feel you, man! Thanks for the typesetting.
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>>146422411
Yes, finally!
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>>146422485
Jesus, she's literally torn apart.
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>>146423033
Oh boy, misunderstandings, they're both pretty moe too.
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>>146424830
>Good Appetite
Bon appetit
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>>146424016
I don't think a sandbag wall can protect you from something that's basically a nuke.
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>>146426644
It's automatic, every time you use it the thing turns you into a preachy pastor. God and his budds are being cheeky bastards is what I'm saying.
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>>146425696
Oh she's a hardass, you'll see.
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>>146425883
>only 39
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>>146426589
BooBoo is best boy.
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>>146429991
Since it's NotGermany I should make it Guten Appetit.
Doesn't sound so smooth though.
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>>146430236He's alright, but so far that series has been the least interesting of Kamachi's works. Hayabusa and Illness Magic User are tied for best boy.
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>>146422411
Finally.
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>>146422485
>>146422850
>>146422952
TANYA IS CUTE
A CUTEWhen the fuck does the anime air, its almost been a year since announcement
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>>146430363
Do it!
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>>146430221
You gotta separate the wheat from the chaff. Don't tell me you enjoyed reading every single one of those novels. Even on my listwhich is merely the favoriteshas a few series that I've suspended reading because they got kind of boring/retarded.
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>>146422485
>both arms almost blown off and are barely hanging together
>part of her torso blown off and her guts was showing
>>146422850
>good as new to receive her Sliver Wing Assault Medal
That's one hell of a recovery magic
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>>146430428
I know, right?
>>146430439
I think the date is still TBA
I wonder how popular the manga is in japan
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I'm going to pretend this is the generic isekai thread. Look what just updated.
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>>146431000
It's confirm madhouse gonna animate this
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>>146431000
Do you have an estimate on when the next chapter will be translated? I know it's hard work because of all the text but I need my dose of middle-aged lolis.
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>>146431031
source?
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>>146431031
Well Madhouse can do a good job if they want to
>>146431045
Not really, since our TL has other projects and a chapter has 62 pages, with lots of pretty difficult text, I can only say it's done when it's done.
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>>146423230
>Altitute
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>>146431030
Nice!
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>>146431355
Thanks, will be fixed.
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>>146433653
Thanks, m8!
>>146424868
One quick thing here, but you could compact the lines "The future subordinate is- a pretty girl?" by putting the word "girl?" on the next line down.
>toast with an entire sunny-side up egg
Mmmh, looks tasty.
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>>146425862
>We still have 3 more chapters
Fixed
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>>146426878
And later on it's evident that she also loses memories/details of the moments he has to rely on the miracles.
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