Attention S.T.A.L.K.E.R. !249JSUpBDk It looks like you forg

>>146405993
stop fucking pandering to tripfags you obnoxious cunt.

>>146405993
Kill yourself

How long is the bonus chapter?

>>146406253
Much longer than the normal chapters. I think it's actually a oneshot from before it was serialized.

>>146406419

Cool. I like it when volumes include the author's early works or prototypes.

I think the TL is in Japan, though, so he probably wont see this unless he checks /a/ first thing in the morning.

File: img000001.png (464KB, 1075x1525px) Image search: [Google]

464KB, 1075x1525px

What the hell guys, you lose the ambiguity that the joke was based off of with "sunny-side up eggs" on this page..

File: img000001.png (461KB, 1075x1525px) Image search: [Google]

461KB, 1075x1525px

>>146406541
>Is your older cousin a highschooler
Ah... I think you screwed up typesetting this.

>>146405993
Live TLing the omake here.

from the artist commentary:
>>146405993
>Starting from the next page on, this is [Walking Home from School], something I drew a year before [Tomorrow is Saturday] started serialization. If you'd read it while enjoying the differences, I would be happy.
>-Yamamoto Souichirou

File: i-0149.jpg (219KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

219KB, 847x1200px

>>146407302
>It's hot...
>It's too hot.
>I wonder how much longer we have to walk til we get home.
>We're still only halfway there.
>It's too far... to walk...

>>146407302

Thanks man.

File: i-0150.jpg (167KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

167KB, 847x1200px

>>146407394
>Walking Home from School

>>146407302
I don't get it. Why do people only translate things that are already getting done? Why not do being an attention whore and translate something that doesn't already have a bunch of people doing it so people can read more stuff?

File: i-0151.jpg (208KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

208KB, 847x1200px

>>146407508
>My butt's all hot
>Let's get some icecream on the way.
>Sanae, what are you doing? Let's go home already. It's hot.
>I have a flat.
>Eeehhh

>>146407578

Because the TL isn't here and forgot to TL it? People can translate whatever they want to.

File: i-0152.jpg (222KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

222KB, 847x1200px

>>146407600
>Let's go home, Mina-chan. Since it's hot...
>Eeh- That's so mean.
>I feel bad for
>Sanae-chan!
>Owowow- Why, Sanae-chan!?
>My pride won't allow me to get sympathy from you.
>Sanae!!
>I keep telling you to stop treating Mina roughly, don't I!?
>It hurts...

>>146407733
They've been releasing new chapters every few days, and in the dump thread stalker said the omake was next. Stop being stupid.

File: i-0153.jpg (216KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

216KB, 847x1200px

>>146407753
>It can't be helped
>Let's leave the broken bike at a bike shop and..
>Ride together.
>That's not something a class rep would say.
>Defective.
>What's with that!! Then how about you just walk home alone, then!?
>Bu-But Yukari-chan!! An honor student like you shouldn't suggest something like that!!
>If it were Sanae-chan, I wouldn't know though!
>Like I said, stop being rough with her.
>Anyways, we don't really have a choice other than that.
>I'm saying this now, but Sanae's going to be the one pedaling.

File: i-0154.jpg (196KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

196KB, 847x1200px

>>146408034
>'Kay
>AAah, that's my bike...
>I didn't mean you'd be riding on your own!!
>I'm joking, I'm joking.

File: i-0155.jpg (193KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

193KB, 847x1200px

>>146408113
>This has a flat.
>It got one just now!! Because of you!!!
>Really... Now what're we going to do? The bus doesn't come for another 2 hours.
>Then
>Let's walk home!!
>Ehh
>It's fine once in a while to walk home.
>Doesn't it seem fun?
>On top of that, it'd be faster to walk than to wait for the bus to come.
>What do we do?
>You know how once she brings up something she won't listen to us...

File: i-0156.jpg (227KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

227KB, 847x1200px

>>146408347
>Wait up~~~
>Even though she was the one who wanted to...
>It's hot~~~
>I want juice~~~
>You okay?
>The sun is bullying me~~~

>>146406541
It should be just eggs right? then say sunny side up and shit

File: i-0157.jpg (210KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

210KB, 847x1200px

>>146408419
>Sanae- don't go off on your own.
>Even if you're fine since you're in a sports club.
>Uu~~~
>ポカリスウェート
>J...Juice!! On top of that, one I like!! Did you buy one for me!?

>>146408421
Yup.

>>146408546
yeah putting it like that ruins the punchline

File: i-0158.jpg (202KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

202KB, 847x1200px

>>146408546
>Sanae-chan
>I'm so
>Happy
>Uu...
>Don't mess with her!!
>For some reason, when I see her I want to bully her.
>In what way!!
>Auuu

File: i-0159.jpg (265KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

265KB, 847x1200px

>>146408632
>PUHAAA
>Hey! Since we're already walking, let's walk by the riverside.
>Eehh..
>That's a long way around, you know?
>But at this rate we'll dry up--
>Let's go!! It'll be cool and feel great!
>River!!!
>Fine... Can't help it...

File: i-0160.jpg (225KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

225KB, 847x1200px

>>146408802
>Haaaah
>Feels goood
>It's cold
>I wonder why, but for some reason I'm expecting her to trip and get soaked.
>What a coincidence, me too.

File: i-0161.jpg (224KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

224KB, 847x1200px

>>146408908
>That was fun.
>What's wrong? Sanae-chan? Yukari-chan?
>Hold on... What're you finishing up normally for?
>You should have tripped and gotten wet there.
>Why!?
>If we'd just gone home directly, we'd have arrived already...
>It's fine
>It's cooler now, isn't it?

File: i-0162.jpg (235KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

235KB, 847x1200px

>>146409072
>Well, that's true.
>It was a pretty nice call [Actually "nice judgement"] from me, wasn't it?

File: i-0163.jpg (222KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

222KB, 847x1200px

>>146409121
>Aah really, now I'm soaked.
>What a relief it was just a shower.

File: 1.png (981KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

981KB, 847x1200px

>>146409283
should i stop? also wildwords is good?

File: i-0164.jpg (212KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

212KB, 847x1200px

>>146409181
>Why do you have a change of clothes?
>It's become a habit because of my club activities.
>Aggh... My clothes are sticking to me and it feels gross.
>Really
>If this was going to rain, we should have waited for the bus.
>Sorry... Because I suggested we walk home from school...
>Ah
>Cause I said I wanted to go to the river.
>I-It's fine!! Look! Since it was hot, isn't it a good thing that we got rained on...!!

File: i-0165.jpg (210KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

210KB, 847x1200px

>>146409338
Wild Words is good shit, but maybe not do the italics. I had a pretty good set up when I was typesetting stuff for a bit, but I don't remember what it was. I think it was 70% height and 90 width?

>That's a lie...
>I can't study well like Yukari-chan,
>Or exercise well like Sanae-chan.
>I can't do anything.
>I just annoy you guys, don't I.
>And Sanae-chan just teases me because she hates me, doesn't she.
>T...
>That's not true at all!
>Right?
>So that really is how it is!!!
>Wait, where are you going!?
>I'm going to buy some juice!!

File: i-0166.jpg (202KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

202KB, 847x1200px

>>146409635
Ah, Sanae says "Oh, really..." outside of the bubbles in the last frame, if you couldn't tell. Forgot that one.

>Hold it, Sanae!!
>What.
>What do you mean "What."!?
>Mina-chan's all depressed cause of you now!!
>You don't hate her right!!
>Yeah.
>Rather, you like her don't you!?
>Yeah.
>Then why didn't you say anything to her!?
>Cause I wanted to see her get depressed.
>Aaah, really, you're so annoying!
>Go tell Mina-chan your honest feelings. Right. Now.
>Eeh...

File: i-0167.jpg (219KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

219KB, 847x1200px

>>146409844
>No "Eeeh"ing! Just go! Come on!! If you don't I'm not showing you my notes anymore!
>...... Fine.
>Honest.... huh.
>What? Sanae-chan.
>Mina.

File: i-0168.jpg (190KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

190KB, 847x1200px

>>146409908
>I love you.
>Huh?
>Hah?

Fug

File: i-0169.jpg (209KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

209KB, 847x1200px

>>146409957
>Eh!? Eeeeeh!? Uh...Um...!?
>SaSa... Sanae-chan!? What're you so suddenly...!?
>Even if you say that I...
>Duwaaaaaaah!? I pressed something!?
>What a clutz.
>It's red bean soup!! It's because Sanae-chan said something weird!!
>But they say it's good for you if you drink hot stuff on a hot day, you know.
>That's a lie!!
>You're so mean!!

File: i-0170.jpg (219KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

219KB, 847x1200px

>>146410124
>Sanae... I told you to go apologize to her, didn't I?
>What're you screwing around for?
>You're the one who told me to be honest.
>Really, you're so...
>........
>Haah!?
>Ah, look, look!

File: i-0171.jpg (177KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

177KB, 847x1200px

>>146410214
>If we hadn't taken the long way around, we wouldn't have seen that, huh.
>Was it a nice call!?
>Yeah. Nice call.

File: i-0172.jpg (187KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

187KB, 847x1200px

>>146410258
>Ehhehee
>Ah, speaking of which, Yukari. How're you getting to school tomorrow?
>Huh?
>I mean, you left your bicycle at school, didn't you?
>Mina and I left ours at the bike shop and are going to get them back later today, you know.
>OH CRAAAAP [Not literally, but you get the point]
>Sanae, let me on the back of your bike tomorrow!!
>Eh.. that's a pain..
>Eh- Yukari-chan... It's bad if you do something like that as the class rep...
>Aaah!! Really, I shouldn't have walked home!!!

So Takagi-san is a spinoff of this? Strikes me as weird that its that way around.

File: i-0173.jpg (41KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

41KB, 847x1200px

>>146410516
End.

Now, to explain why I did this. I was curious as to how the Korean translations and the Japanese raws compare as the JPN>KR>EN threads from before were way too different from the finalized Habanero scans that I've seen on readers and here.

So I compared the Korean translation and what was in the Japanese raws while doing this as I didn't previously have Japanese raws to compare to before, and it really confirmed what I had a bad feeling about earlier. The Korean translations are much closer to the original than what Habanero's been pushing out with the exception of a couple speech bubbles being switched to account for better grammar.

Not sure how I feel about that, but at least I know now that, I personally will probably be reading off of marumaru instead of waiting on english translation teams. They're much faster too, anyways.

I figured I may as well push out my translation from the Japanese RAW that I was writing to compare to the Korean translation here while I was reading.

Hope you guys enjoyed a quick look at what S.T.A.L.K.E.R. will likely put out in completed form later, even if the translation will likely be really different.

>>146410797
Good lord, I can't parse a sentence worth shit right now.

File: 4.png (902KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

902KB, 847x1200px

>>146410875
good job with the translation dude

>>146410797
Thanks, anon.

>>146409957
>>146410214
Is this /u/ now?

>>146410962
Good job with the typesetting bro. Looks much better now.

>>146411134
I don't mind it when best girls are in
>>146411301
thanks dude, newbie at this, and the form of the bubble in the first page didn't help me much

File: 5.png (831KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

831KB, 847x1200px

>>146411500

>>146406781
So the 2 kids from the tunnel & omake chapters are her siblings? and it looks like her cousin is the class-rep from the shitty vampire manga.

File: p095.jpg (315KB, 1075x1525px) Image search: [Google]

315KB, 1075x1525px

>>146408421
>>146408546
>>146408589
What the fuck are you idiots talking about? She literally says 目玉焼き on the first page. Why do idiots always insist on pretending they know anything about reading Japanese and translating it into English?

>>146411612
Yeah, that's how it is.

>>146410797
>The Korean translations are much closer to the original than what Habanero's been pushing out
What are you talking about? Do you think doing shit like translating さすが、それはちょっと。。。 as "As expected, doing that is a little..." is acceptable? Do you understand that translating 1:1 is a horrible way to translate?

>>146411767
Why are you so butthurt?

>>146411831
The same reason I'm angry about this
>>146411679
I can actually read moon and write in English, and idiots who write greentext translations in broken English keep pretending they know how to translate "faithfully" when in reality they have no idea how to translate properly.

File: 6.png (827KB, 847x1200px) Image search: [Google]

827KB, 847x1200px

>>146411888
Help a nigga out then

>>146411888
When Habanero mistakes Johnny as Joannie and roleplay of a wife asking her husband to eat together with her once in a while as two friends fighting, I don't think there's much of an excuse.

That said, some people prefer a closer translation to the source, others prefer a localization, if you will.

No one's stopping Habanero from putting out their version, there's nothing to get upset about.

>>146411953
This. Instead of just complaining and getting upset for nothing, you could be doing something useful like error checking the greentext translation here.

>>146411953
Ok, stop listening to idiots who can't write in proper, natural English and thinking their memetext translations are any good. The Habanero translations are fine, I read them. Proper translations take the original verbiage and tone and write lines an actual English speaker would say. Translating 1:1 is wrong, and inserting shitty jokes or ideas that aren't in the original text is also wrong (see: commie). See shit like this?
>>146408347
>It got one just now!! Because of you!!!
Literally translations like that are bad. So is stuff like
>>146408546
>J...Juice!! On top of that, one I like!! Did you buy one for me!?
and
>>146409353
>It's become a habit because of my club activities.
That should be something like "I'm used to carrying them for track." this is just bad.

>>146412124
Yup, that chapter mixed up the soap opera drama, I'll give you that.

>That said, some people prefer a closer translation to the source, others prefer a localization, if you will.
No, fuck off. A 1:1 translation isn't faithful or accurate. You may think it is because you're just copying the words over and swapping languages, but you're completely butchering the author's tone, prose and delivery which is in no way an accurate translation.

>Instead of just complaining and getting upset for nothing
I'm not complaining for nothing. You're spreading incorrect information to people who don't know better and propagating the idea that ESL-tier translations are more accurate.

>>146411767
Your assumption that I meant the KR>EN part when I mentioned Korean translations is dead wrong.

I meant that the Koreans have a closer translation to the Japanese than Habanero are doing JP to EN, and that's what I prefer. It might help that they're also culturally similar. If you don't prefer translations to be closer to what the author wrote, that's on you.

>>146412124
>you could be doing something useful like error checking the greentext translation here.
You mean like he did here
>>146411679

>>146412364
Yup, I have no problem with that. In fact I'm glad he did it.

>>146412333
>If you don't prefer translations to be closer to what the author wrote
Coming from the guy that rapes the characters lines by making them talk in completely unnatural ways in English, and then can't read a Japanese word as simple as 目玉焼き？ Yes, I'm sure plenty of idiots prefer incorrect translations.

File: eh.jpg (106KB, 554x439px) Image search: [Google]

106KB, 554x439px

>>146412423

>>146412383
So how can you read Japanese and make that mistake? That's not even remotely ambiguous.

>>146412485
Didn't have the actual raws.

I mean i can't get mad at you because i know you are in the right >>146412265
I work with a vietnamese translator living in japan since a couple of years, the translations he passes me are in broken english, and i need to see the raws, look at what he gave me and try to do the best translation i can. Its a pain in the ass

>>146412383
>>146412485
>>146412520
Rather, that also makes his point that localizing the dialogue makes the translated finished product better in some ways.

The punchline is better if it's left ambiguous as to what the girls are talking about in that chapter.

Also, shit like this>>146412423
is why editors are a thing.

>>146412520
This is my problem right here. The second anyone picks something up and does a real "group" translation, you get a bunch of idiots here who can barely read Japanese and who can't write in English who go out of their way to go on and on about how the "anon translations" are better, when in reality they're crap, and in this case you tried making a point without even reading the damn page. Sure, plenty of scanlations groups are shit, and sure plenty of anons can translate well, but I've been following all these threads and the guy who does this on habanero is literally an anon who's been posting in threads forever asking someone here to typeset it for him. People are just too eager to assert their (lack of) knowledge about language, and as someone with an actual education who can write in English, seeing people say "Well he didn't translate そんなこと言われても as "Even if you were to say such a thing to me" so it's inaccurate is fucking annoying. No, a 1:1 translation is not preserving the author's intention. It destroys it by creating unnatural speech patterns that don't fit the characters at all.

>>146412595
>localizing the dialogue
It's not even localizing shit like changing onigiri into jelly donuts, it's just writing lines in English that an English speaker would actually say.

So all the works are from the same world?
that means that karakai world has vampires and esp powers?

>>146412795
Yup. That's one reason why I like this quite a bit.

It's actually possible that Takagi-san is a fucking mind reader just because that ESP girl oneshot happened and how Yamamoto tends to write everything in the same setting.

>>146412771
It should be:
1:1 -> see what sounds akward-> make it sound natural
And not localize shit

>>146412771
That's literally what localization is.

Also, you're getting upset for nothing, seriously. Go eat a popsicle and cool down.

>>146412928
>It should be literally replace words like a dictionary and then try to have an editor "smooth" it out
No. No it absolutely should not.

>>146412959
>That's literally what localization is.
In the actual sense of the word, yes. The problem is that people associate the word with commie and 4kids style "localizations".

>Also, you're getting upset for nothing, seriously
No fuck off. Idiots who can't read moon or write English need to stop pretending they have any business commenting on how translations works and what constitutes a "faithful" translation.

>>146413019
i meant
-read the translated line
-interpret it
-rephrase it in a way that sounds ok

>>146413019
Yeah, that's YOU associating the word to 4kids, I meant it in the proper sense.

And yeah, you really are getting upset over nothing here. Nothing's stopping Habanero from putting out their version and commentary on their work isn't hurting them either. Unless they're oversensitive about their work and unable to take or ignore the comments at stride. In which case, that's their problem.

Also, all this entire thread, I've been talking about how I prefer the JP>KR translation by qazqaz over the JP>EN by Habanero. The KR>EN I did is pretty irrelevant to what I was talking about. Sorry if you've been misunderstanding me on all this.

>>146413246
No. You should never translate by taking a shitty 1:1 translation and then trying to rewrite it correctly. You should translate by actually knowing both languages, reading or hearing a line, and then knowing what the equivalent thought and line would be in the target languages.

>>146413420
Editors exist. Did you not know this?

>>146413401
>you really are getting upset over nothing here
No I'm not. You're spreading bullshit and ESLs here eat it up and then shitpost about raws they can't read.

>Also, all this entire thread, I've been talking about how I prefer the JP>KR translation by qazqaz over the JP>EN by Habanero. The KR>EN I did is pretty irrelevant to what I was talking about. Sorry if you've been misunderstanding me on all this.
So you think a translation between 2 similar south eastern asian languages is closer than a translation between 2 completely different languages? Setting aside how stupid that is, given how you write English translations, why would anyone listen to your opinion on proper wording and keeping author intent?

>>146413490
An editors job is to clean up grammar, not take a garbage 1:1 "translation" and try to turn it into English. Stop promoting shitty ESL translations.

File: 1468108214331.jpg (42KB, 463x311px) Image search: [Google]

42KB, 463x311px

>>146413585
OH, you're that guy who kept spamming "fuck you translator" in the takagi threads, aren't you?

>>146413696
What the fuck is wrong with you? I just said that the translator who actually knows Japanese and English is doing a good job and that your ESL translations are shit. The idiot spamming image macros and shitposting the threads is some stupid ESL who's made that the anon translating didn't include magazine text because he was too stupid to get the joke.

Your translating skills suck, and you should stop pretending you're in any way qualified to comment on the quality of a translation if you can't actually write in the target language.

>>146413805
Yeah, I'm aware you switched to calling people ESL after the gook in that thread called you out for being a massive retard.

>>146413891
Anon I can tell you're really stupid based on your willingness to provide commentary on a topic you know nothing about, but stop and think for a minute. If that shitposter hates the guy who translates those series' and makes it his life's mission to shitpost his threads to death, and that guy doesn't know Japanese or proper English, then how could I be him given that I know Japanese and English and am saying that the translator's translation was good?

>>146414010
to change the topic, who is best girl?
i would say sanae

>>146414070
>Anyone other than Mina
Oh look, you're wrong about something else.

File: 1468454690766.png (2MB, 1214x1109px) Image search: [Google]

2MB, 1214x1109px

>>146414108
>Implying that's me

>>146414108
I was the guy typesetting the translation dude chill

>>146414144
Also you're>>146414070
>>146414108
both wrong.

They're all best girls. You can't get one without the other two.

>>146414177
But who is the bestest of the best?

>>146414339
Johnny the cat.

Hardest worker in the neighborhood.

>>146413401
>The KR>EN I did
Wait a second, is the anon who did the gook translations also the one who just did a live translation here from Japanese?

>>146414743
Looks like it.

>>146414788
Then how did he read the Korean translations, see the line about the egg (which presumably just said egg instead of sunny side up eggs on the first page of that chapter), claim the habanero guy did the joke wrong, find out he was completely wrong because the Korean translation tried to create a joke that wasn't there by leaving it ambiguous, and then have the balls to say that the K->E translations was more faithful than the J->E one?