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Critique my character models? 2016-11-04 12:43:44 Post No. 540159
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Critique my character models? 2016-11-04 12:43:44 Post No. 540159
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Hey there, just figured since 4chan is fantastic for critique I'm posting quick and dirty renders of some of my models for feedback. I'm by no means a professional 3D modeler in any kind of industry, so rendering techniques to me are basically just model+texture+material+camera=good enough. So feel free to have at it I guess.
I use Blender too, if anyone needs that info.
First up is some renders of Korra and Asami from LOK, Ruby Rose from RWBY and Garnet from Steven Universe. They'll be NSFW a few of them since I make full bodies under the outfits. I want to put them in Source Filmmaker and want to use them for animation myself.
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Ruby Rose. Just her Vol 4 gear.
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Garnet from Steven Universe.
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Garnet again with the face and the no clothes
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>>540159
You need to just learn zBrush or even Mudbox. in 6-12 months you would have an alright knowledge of sculpting and could create stylized characters in much better quality.
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>>540159
I kinda like them. They need planar eyelashes, imho. But these girls would do great in some games, though.
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>>540159
>since 4chan is fantastic for critique.
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>>540163
>>540162
>that bg
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>>540164
Where's the tits?
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not 100% terrible, but needs some more work
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>>540159
This is pointless unless you post wireframes.
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>>540188
Oh right, sorry.
Here's some wireframes of the RWBY base body shape. I use it for all the models. It's also the same model for my LOK and Steven Universe ones with different head styles.
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Wireframe of the first character model
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>>540178
It is, anons on /3/ always have an opinion on others work .
Be it something objectively wrong or a subjective taste they will tell you what they think.
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>>540195
That's an awful lot of redundant polygons for such a featureless model.
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Really like your Garnet. I think Asami's lipstick needs to be changed to cover her lower lip more.
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>>540196
>modeled pussy
Top priorities.
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